Comments received on poems by dusk arising
historys enemy
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good, write Dusk. There is some link to you and where you were born.
March 7th, 2021 12:52
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good, write Dusk. There is some link to you and where you were born.
March 7th, 2021 12:52
and so.....
Neville said:
full of feeling and very much loved ...
Told ya .............................................N
March 7th, 2021 03:28
Neville said:
full of feeling and very much loved ...
Told ya .............................................N
March 7th, 2021 03:28
and so.....
Neville said:
I may be mistaken .. if you aint yet be taken .. you got a long way to go ye to be a poet forsaken .. I\'ll take two eggs and three bacon ..
hold the sausage for the time being ... I\'ll be back later to tell ya how much I liked todays little offering ... N
March 7th, 2021 03:27
Neville said:
I may be mistaken .. if you aint yet be taken .. you got a long way to go ye to be a poet forsaken .. I\'ll take two eggs and three bacon ..
hold the sausage for the time being ... I\'ll be back later to tell ya how much I liked todays little offering ... N
March 7th, 2021 03:27
historys enemy
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write d a, now living in the Midlands but still occasionally being asked if I was a cockney having come from Medway in Kent.
Andy
March 7th, 2021 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write d a, now living in the Midlands but still occasionally being asked if I was a cockney having come from Medway in Kent.
Andy
March 7th, 2021 02:43
historys enemy
jarcher54 said:
Wonderful conceit here... I was taken from the state of Indiana as a small child and raised as a Texan, so I too am a foreigner in my home state. The incredible green rugged woods, isolated small towns, narrow winding roads, covered bridges and lush cornfields and wild streams of southern Indiana always seem like a home I was denied but delight to rediscover as an adult. Thanks for sparking my own little reverie of going back.
March 7th, 2021 01:06
jarcher54 said:
Wonderful conceit here... I was taken from the state of Indiana as a small child and raised as a Texan, so I too am a foreigner in my home state. The incredible green rugged woods, isolated small towns, narrow winding roads, covered bridges and lush cornfields and wild streams of southern Indiana always seem like a home I was denied but delight to rediscover as an adult. Thanks for sparking my own little reverie of going back.
March 7th, 2021 01:06
shared beauty
Goldfinch60 said:
May that beauty always be there for you d a.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 15:22
Goldfinch60 said:
May that beauty always be there for you d a.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 15:22
shared beauty
FredPeyer said:
Well done dusk, I especially like that last stanza!
March 6th, 2021 10:51
FredPeyer said:
Well done dusk, I especially like that last stanza!
March 6th, 2021 10:51
and so.....
FredPeyer said:
And that love you hope for DOES live out there for you!
March 5th, 2021 23:41
FredPeyer said:
And that love you hope for DOES live out there for you!
March 5th, 2021 23:41
mind bend
Jerry Reynolds said:
Tragic Write, Dusk.
That’s a bell you can’t un-ring.
March 4th, 2021 14:41
Jerry Reynolds said:
Tragic Write, Dusk.
That’s a bell you can’t un-ring.
March 4th, 2021 14:41
mind bend
L. B. Mek said:
impactful image to match your insightfully moving words, a raw reminder that we exist in a world where such abstract depictions of alternate fate\'s, are in actuality someone\'s reality, pigeon-holed under \'divers life experience\' headings: for our sanity\'s comprehensions ease..
great read Dusk!
reminds me of those first few lines to sylvia plath\'s: \'Cut\'
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22437
March 4th, 2021 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
impactful image to match your insightfully moving words, a raw reminder that we exist in a world where such abstract depictions of alternate fate\'s, are in actuality someone\'s reality, pigeon-holed under \'divers life experience\' headings: for our sanity\'s comprehensions ease..
great read Dusk!
reminds me of those first few lines to sylvia plath\'s: \'Cut\'
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-22437
March 4th, 2021 06:31
the edge of your fist
L. B. Mek said:
a fun twist Dusk..
though metaphorically we all have the potential to portray the staple machine or the force applying the punishment, in our lives..
maybe I\'m being too literal - (as frustratingly usual), but let me apologise for ever exemplifying such forceful trait\'s, within my feeble words..
a great read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 4th, 2021 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
a fun twist Dusk..
though metaphorically we all have the potential to portray the staple machine or the force applying the punishment, in our lives..
maybe I\'m being too literal - (as frustratingly usual), but let me apologise for ever exemplifying such forceful trait\'s, within my feeble words..
a great read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 4th, 2021 05:32
mind bend
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive words d a.
Such an awful thing to see at such a young age.
Andy
March 4th, 2021 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive words d a.
Such an awful thing to see at such a young age.
Andy
March 4th, 2021 02:19
the edge of your fist
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write d a, my stapler and hole punch both take a lot of punishment.
Andy
March 4th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write d a, my stapler and hole punch both take a lot of punishment.
Andy
March 4th, 2021 01:23
the edge of your fist
AwHec8 said:
Please Forgive me ahead of Time dusk arising. But I had to comment, You make me feel like I am conversing with my older brother all the time when commenting. Yes you are more talented than I am. And no that is not a judgement, just a realization of Talent I see, is all. In other words Great Write there dusk arising. Don
March 3rd, 2021 19:58
AwHec8 said:
Please Forgive me ahead of Time dusk arising. But I had to comment, You make me feel like I am conversing with my older brother all the time when commenting. Yes you are more talented than I am. And no that is not a judgement, just a realization of Talent I see, is all. In other words Great Write there dusk arising. Don
March 3rd, 2021 19:58
the edge of your fist
Poetic Dan said:
And within that punishment is holding many of us together!
Great twist my friend
March 3rd, 2021 15:52
Poetic Dan said:
And within that punishment is holding many of us together!
Great twist my friend
March 3rd, 2021 15:52
the edge of your fist
orchidee said:
I told people to say nice things to a photocopier. It tended to play up otherwise! I used an electronic double-stapling machine. Oohh, fancy! lol. But mind your fingers - it bites.
March 3rd, 2021 10:14
orchidee said:
I told people to say nice things to a photocopier. It tended to play up otherwise! I used an electronic double-stapling machine. Oohh, fancy! lol. But mind your fingers - it bites.
March 3rd, 2021 10:14
there
L. B. Mek said:
no rhyme or reason, to unfolding these twisted string\'s to our collective fates,
so \'why\' waste time
in futile contemplation, when we are better served reacting and beginning: our path to overcoming..
a meaningfully poignant write Dusk
March 1st, 2021 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
no rhyme or reason, to unfolding these twisted string\'s to our collective fates,
so \'why\' waste time
in futile contemplation, when we are better served reacting and beginning: our path to overcoming..
a meaningfully poignant write Dusk
March 1st, 2021 05:35
there
Poetic Dan said:
Thanks for the reminder. No ifs.
, No but no coconuts. Leave the why\'s to the clouds and let them drift on by!
March 1st, 2021 01:58
Poetic Dan said:
Thanks for the reminder. No ifs.
, No but no coconuts. Leave the why\'s to the clouds and let them drift on by!
March 1st, 2021 01:58
there
Goldfinch60 said:
There certainly is no why, the ongoing unanswerable question in our lives.
Andy
March 1st, 2021 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
There certainly is no why, the ongoing unanswerable question in our lives.
Andy
March 1st, 2021 01:53
Thursdays body clock
Neville said:
what\'s not to like about these words apart from the realness of it .. if ya get what I mean ...
true, of the moment and has got more than its fair share of ouch factor ......
February 27th, 2021 13:41
Neville said:
what\'s not to like about these words apart from the realness of it .. if ya get what I mean ...
true, of the moment and has got more than its fair share of ouch factor ......
February 27th, 2021 13:41
Thursdays body clock
AuburnScribbler said:
I like the malicious tone that you have used here dusk arising, certainly underlines the tone of the times.
I do hope that you\'ve blocked those numbers for both your sanity, and security, or perhaps when a certain unknown number calls again, answer them with a chilling tone of voice, to ensure they never ring again. Haha!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
February 27th, 2021 03:07
AuburnScribbler said:
I like the malicious tone that you have used here dusk arising, certainly underlines the tone of the times.
I do hope that you\'ve blocked those numbers for both your sanity, and security, or perhaps when a certain unknown number calls again, answer them with a chilling tone of voice, to ensure they never ring again. Haha!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
February 27th, 2021 03:07
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