Comments received on poems by dusk arising
was it fear or something else
rrodriguez said:
D, I enjoy reading your poem. I can relate to the third stanza. I\'m in a stage of my where what matters is to enjoy the life God has given me with my wife, grandchildren, and my kids.
March 13th, 2021 14:55
rrodriguez said:
D, I enjoy reading your poem. I can relate to the third stanza. I\'m in a stage of my where what matters is to enjoy the life God has given me with my wife, grandchildren, and my kids.
March 13th, 2021 14:55
was it fear or something else
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wish my thoughts were that organized. Mine are scatterbrained. Good write, Dusk.
March 13th, 2021 14:38
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wish my thoughts were that organized. Mine are scatterbrained. Good write, Dusk.
March 13th, 2021 14:38
lustfully, greedily
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been there with my \'head swimming in sheer delight\' but in my case it was a fine Rioja.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been there with my \'head swimming in sheer delight\' but in my case it was a fine Rioja.
Andy
March 12th, 2021 01:47
lustfully, greedily
L. B. Mek said:
well, with each evaporating hint
of nuanced heat, emanating
from these winking lines
of innuendo\'s: delights
we can only assume,
you really enjoyed that bottle last night eh Dusk?.. lol
another fun read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 11th, 2021 06:48
L. B. Mek said:
well, with each evaporating hint
of nuanced heat, emanating
from these winking lines
of innuendo\'s: delights
we can only assume,
you really enjoyed that bottle last night eh Dusk?.. lol
another fun read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 11th, 2021 06:48
thoughts on time (revisited)
L. B. Mek said:
insightful questions and in a sense, they\'re all timeless..
hopefully that may also mean, when we find their answers, we can cultivate that endless peace, we all crave..
a good read Dusk, wonderful flow
March 11th, 2021 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
insightful questions and in a sense, they\'re all timeless..
hopefully that may also mean, when we find their answers, we can cultivate that endless peace, we all crave..
a good read Dusk, wonderful flow
March 11th, 2021 05:50
lustfully, greedily
orchidee said:
Fido\'s good, but a pest at times. I will put him out in the garden for a while. lol.
March 11th, 2021 05:32
orchidee said:
Fido\'s good, but a pest at times. I will put him out in the garden for a while. lol.
March 11th, 2021 05:32
lustfully, greedily
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m glad someone\'s having fun here! Fido won\'t let me have any \'excitement\' - well, not much! heehee.
March 11th, 2021 03:12
orchidee said:
Well, I\'m glad someone\'s having fun here! Fido won\'t let me have any \'excitement\' - well, not much! heehee.
March 11th, 2021 03:12
thoughts on time (revisited)
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace will come to us all in time d a, we just have to remain patient.
Andy
March 11th, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace will come to us all in time d a, we just have to remain patient.
Andy
March 11th, 2021 01:36
thoughts on time (revisited)
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an apt question on time in that final line Dusk - - peace is needed more each day for this troubled world and you make your case clear - - loved the notion that your Muse takes a bath - - mine I swear must do the same sometimes.
March 10th, 2021 17:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an apt question on time in that final line Dusk - - peace is needed more each day for this troubled world and you make your case clear - - loved the notion that your Muse takes a bath - - mine I swear must do the same sometimes.
March 10th, 2021 17:19
thoughts on time (revisited)
Michael Edwards said:
I thought you\'d be there with her in the bath.
March 10th, 2021 16:37
Michael Edwards said:
I thought you\'d be there with her in the bath.
March 10th, 2021 16:37
Jerry the fox terrier
Goldfinch60 said:
Of course poets are barking, why would they sit for so many hours putting letters on the paper.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Of course poets are barking, why would they sit for so many hours putting letters on the paper.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:22
Jerry the fox terrier
jarcher54 said:
If your next poem is about a fox, we\'ll know who\'s channeling whom. Watching a dog dream and listening to it mutter certainly reminds me of a couple of barking characters I\'ve known, some of them mumbling poems for all I can tell.
March 9th, 2021 23:40
jarcher54 said:
If your next poem is about a fox, we\'ll know who\'s channeling whom. Watching a dog dream and listening to it mutter certainly reminds me of a couple of barking characters I\'ve known, some of them mumbling poems for all I can tell.
March 9th, 2021 23:40
Jerry the fox terrier
MendedFences27 said:
Cute dog. A poem about said dog, or more about the poet? Liked the dual meaning. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2021 20:39
MendedFences27 said:
Cute dog. A poem about said dog, or more about the poet? Liked the dual meaning. - Phil A.
March 9th, 2021 20:39
Jerry the fox terrier
L. B. Mek said:
yup, you guessed right, gota have this in my fav\'s!
(how depressingly predictable you must find my overzealous nature) lol
thanks for the fun read Dusk
March 9th, 2021 07:36
L. B. Mek said:
yup, you guessed right, gota have this in my fav\'s!
(how depressingly predictable you must find my overzealous nature) lol
thanks for the fun read Dusk
March 9th, 2021 07:36
Jerry the fox terrier
orchidee said:
Oh lol, one of Fido\'s relatives! Good write Dusk.
March 9th, 2021 06:56
orchidee said:
Oh lol, one of Fido\'s relatives! Good write Dusk.
March 9th, 2021 06:56
sluggish
MendedFences27 said:
Made me laugh DA. What more can one ask? - Phil A.
March 8th, 2021 23:08
MendedFences27 said:
Made me laugh DA. What more can one ask? - Phil A.
March 8th, 2021 23:08
sluggish
FredPeyer said:
Truly enjoyed reading your \'slow motion\' poem. Wouldn\'t it be nice if we could slow down our busy lives once in a while to be beaten by a snail, even if that would make us \'sluggish\'?
March 8th, 2021 10:57
FredPeyer said:
Truly enjoyed reading your \'slow motion\' poem. Wouldn\'t it be nice if we could slow down our busy lives once in a while to be beaten by a snail, even if that would make us \'sluggish\'?
March 8th, 2021 10:57
sluggish
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read
with a layer of insightful commentary tucked away (to keep those literal busybody\'s like me, sated), lol
nice change of pace to the diverse buffet platter, that is our beloved MPS
March 8th, 2021 06:08
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read
with a layer of insightful commentary tucked away (to keep those literal busybody\'s like me, sated), lol
nice change of pace to the diverse buffet platter, that is our beloved MPS
March 8th, 2021 06:08
sluggish
Goldfinch60 said:
That happens when you take the protection off, you get sluggish.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 03:55
Goldfinch60 said:
That happens when you take the protection off, you get sluggish.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 03:55
sluggish
Poetic Dan said:
Fine little rhythm... hope you have a good week in your mind!
March 8th, 2021 02:28
Poetic Dan said:
Fine little rhythm... hope you have a good week in your mind!
March 8th, 2021 02:28
historys enemy
MendedFences27 said:
Can a person ever, truly go home. We are a product not of our birth, but of our life experiences. A warm place in one\'s heart? Yes. But always altered by time spent elsewhere. - Phil a.
March 7th, 2021 21:44
MendedFences27 said:
Can a person ever, truly go home. We are a product not of our birth, but of our life experiences. A warm place in one\'s heart? Yes. But always altered by time spent elsewhere. - Phil a.
March 7th, 2021 21:44
historys enemy
FredPeyer said:
The last time I visited my birth country I felt like a foreigner. Your poem reminded me of that.
March 7th, 2021 16:26
FredPeyer said:
The last time I visited my birth country I felt like a foreigner. Your poem reminded me of that.
March 7th, 2021 16:26
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