Comments received on poems by dusk arising
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orchidee said:
Good write Dusk.
Some are in a fog still, when they wakes up. A fog that never clears, as in \'I haven\'t the foggiest idea!\'
You won the lottery then? (Verse 4)!
April 18th, 2021 08:53
orchidee said:
Good write Dusk.
Some are in a fog still, when they wakes up. A fog that never clears, as in \'I haven\'t the foggiest idea!\'
You won the lottery then? (Verse 4)!
April 18th, 2021 08:53
my dream
Fay Slimm. said:
Romance is every line of this compellingly lovely appeal - great read Dusk.
April 17th, 2021 05:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Romance is every line of this compellingly lovely appeal - great read Dusk.
April 17th, 2021 05:21
the needy boot
L. B. Mek said:
accessibly worded, yet inked with that eloquence of a poet\'s transformative voice!
I found this poems character portrait so relatable, doubt I\'ll be the only one
a great write Dusk
April 16th, 2021 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
accessibly worded, yet inked with that eloquence of a poet\'s transformative voice!
I found this poems character portrait so relatable, doubt I\'ll be the only one
a great write Dusk
April 16th, 2021 04:43
conjurors game
L. B. Mek said:
(great write Dusk, wonderful flow!
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply)..
\'trite? maybe, but reads relatable and true to me
distance is a tool of progression, as much as effort
it allows us that landscape perspective we lack, at times
so lament that short-lived streak of stolen spontaneity
for in our complaining, we are calling - out
to poetry\'s merciful deities
once more: let those floodgates of creativity
burst this momentary lull
and let our Poetic mind\'s, ink
free and without restraint, knowing
like all things, this too
will one day, be taken away\'..
April 16th, 2021 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
(great write Dusk, wonderful flow!
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply)..
\'trite? maybe, but reads relatable and true to me
distance is a tool of progression, as much as effort
it allows us that landscape perspective we lack, at times
so lament that short-lived streak of stolen spontaneity
for in our complaining, we are calling - out
to poetry\'s merciful deities
once more: let those floodgates of creativity
burst this momentary lull
and let our Poetic mind\'s, ink
free and without restraint, knowing
like all things, this too
will one day, be taken away\'..
April 16th, 2021 03:45
the needy boot
Fay Slimm. said:
An impressive reminder of how habits can stay long enough to smear the present - a memorable last line where old boots are an apt example of yesterday shadowing steps into \"the light of promise\" Food for much thought here Dusk.
April 16th, 2021 02:33
Fay Slimm. said:
An impressive reminder of how habits can stay long enough to smear the present - a memorable last line where old boots are an apt example of yesterday shadowing steps into \"the light of promise\" Food for much thought here Dusk.
April 16th, 2021 02:33
the needy boot
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words d a, that light of promise is always there for us.
Andy
April 16th, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words d a, that light of promise is always there for us.
Andy
April 16th, 2021 01:35
conjurors game
Goldfinch60 said:
There seems to be a word missing
At the end of this rhyme
Was it lost in the night
Or did you run out of time
Or could you not fine the word
That could rhyme with this site.
Andy
April 16th, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
There seems to be a word missing
At the end of this rhyme
Was it lost in the night
Or did you run out of time
Or could you not fine the word
That could rhyme with this site.
Andy
April 16th, 2021 00:35
conjurors game
orchidee said:
Spot of writer\'s block?! Erm, good write though dusk.
April 15th, 2021 09:40
orchidee said:
Spot of writer\'s block?! Erm, good write though dusk.
April 15th, 2021 09:40
another mile
L. B. Mek said:
wise words, utilised to ink a wonderful read
I like the drop-down framing/format, adds to that mile by mile theme (or step by step, as in line by line), or maybe I\'m just misinterpreting..
thanks for sharing my friend, I have been reading your old posts while waiting, hope all is well
April 12th, 2021 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
wise words, utilised to ink a wonderful read
I like the drop-down framing/format, adds to that mile by mile theme (or step by step, as in line by line), or maybe I\'m just misinterpreting..
thanks for sharing my friend, I have been reading your old posts while waiting, hope all is well
April 12th, 2021 04:31
another mile
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true d a, but as ever we can still see the real person through their eyes that we can still see.
Andy
April 12th, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true d a, but as ever we can still see the real person through their eyes that we can still see.
Andy
April 12th, 2021 00:20
hope
jarcher54 said:
A nice thought for spring time... like the old is new again! Maybe we won\'t take it all for granted this time.
April 10th, 2021 01:35
jarcher54 said:
A nice thought for spring time... like the old is new again! Maybe we won\'t take it all for granted this time.
April 10th, 2021 01:35
hope
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank good ness that we are slowly crawling back to the old life - although somewhat changed.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank good ness that we are slowly crawling back to the old life - although somewhat changed.
Andy
April 10th, 2021 00:29
light of hope
SureshG said:
At this late stage in our life, all one can do is to take solace in living those dreams of being a hero and playing all those roles.
Your poetic words have jarred to surface the preponderance of those happy endings
April 4th, 2021 07:12
SureshG said:
At this late stage in our life, all one can do is to take solace in living those dreams of being a hero and playing all those roles.
Your poetic words have jarred to surface the preponderance of those happy endings
April 4th, 2021 07:12
light of hope
Goldfinch60 said:
Those failures may be there d a but we are still here after surviving them and ready to go into the wonder that is ahead of us.
Andy
March 27th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Those failures may be there d a but we are still here after surviving them and ready to go into the wonder that is ahead of us.
Andy
March 27th, 2021 01:28
light of hope
jarcher54 said:
You seldom get gut-punched this hard by mere words... I don\'t know whether to praise you for the poignant walk down dreary lane, or to curse you for it.
March 26th, 2021 22:50
jarcher54 said:
You seldom get gut-punched this hard by mere words... I don\'t know whether to praise you for the poignant walk down dreary lane, or to curse you for it.
March 26th, 2021 22:50
light of hope
Fay Slimm. said:
A poignant array of seeming failures listed in this set of impressive metaphors Dusk - - - some of the scene I can relate to re. those childhood stories - may the light of hope in the last line shine on despite any regrets. An insightful write.
March 26th, 2021 12:28
Fay Slimm. said:
A poignant array of seeming failures listed in this set of impressive metaphors Dusk - - - some of the scene I can relate to re. those childhood stories - may the light of hope in the last line shine on despite any regrets. An insightful write.
March 26th, 2021 12:28
Sometimes
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes, its worth excavating older pages
so we don\'t miss out on their greatest writes..
wonderfully relatable words Dusk
March 25th, 2021 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
sometimes, its worth excavating older pages
so we don\'t miss out on their greatest writes..
wonderfully relatable words Dusk
March 25th, 2021 03:45
was it fear or something else
SureshG said:
Me becomes we, that finally transforms into thee - and that’s what your poetic post teaches us today
March 22nd, 2021 21:00
SureshG said:
Me becomes we, that finally transforms into thee - and that’s what your poetic post teaches us today
March 22nd, 2021 21:00
was it fear or something else
Mizgeen Berzinari said:
Enjoyed reading your poem.
March 16th, 2021 05:51
Mizgeen Berzinari said:
Enjoyed reading your poem.
March 16th, 2021 05:51
was it fear or something else
orchidee said:
A poignant write dusk.
Yes, sometimes we may keep things from others, so that it does not trouble THEM or add to their own troubles. I suppose there can be a time when we DO tell them.
I don\'t think we shall respond well to \'preachy\' type advice to be \'more humble\' though.
March 14th, 2021 03:26
orchidee said:
A poignant write dusk.
Yes, sometimes we may keep things from others, so that it does not trouble THEM or add to their own troubles. I suppose there can be a time when we DO tell them.
I don\'t think we shall respond well to \'preachy\' type advice to be \'more humble\' though.
March 14th, 2021 03:26
was it fear or something else
Goldfinch60 said:
Life certainly does teach us d a and we must be grateful for anything it provides for us, especially kids and grandkids, they are so very special in our lives and one day we will be able to hug them again.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Life certainly does teach us d a and we must be grateful for anything it provides for us, especially kids and grandkids, they are so very special in our lives and one day we will be able to hug them again.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 01:58
was it fear or something else
Fay Slimm. said:
Life certainly does teach us my friend as this honest verse aptly states. Humbling that time flies and we who accept can see a bit clearer that fear need not control us again.
March 13th, 2021 17:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Life certainly does teach us my friend as this honest verse aptly states. Humbling that time flies and we who accept can see a bit clearer that fear need not control us again.
March 13th, 2021 17:01
was it fear or something else
Neville said:
These words say a great deal more about the man than many might imagine ...
I had something of an inkling before I came upon them this eve
... Funny what life teaches us .. and how ...
March 13th, 2021 16:58
Neville said:
These words say a great deal more about the man than many might imagine ...
I had something of an inkling before I came upon them this eve
... Funny what life teaches us .. and how ...
March 13th, 2021 16:58
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