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opposites attract
heatherbee said:
So true attraction a powerful thing no stopping it opposites or not. Be way to boring if we were all the same in couples.
January 24th, 2021 05:28
heatherbee said:
So true attraction a powerful thing no stopping it opposites or not. Be way to boring if we were all the same in couples.
January 24th, 2021 05:28
opposites attract
Doggerel Dave said:
Their magnet like attraction kept them both out of trouble, I believe, dusk. Stanzas swung along nicely.
Punk, pogo Wot? Reggae forever!
January 24th, 2021 05:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Their magnet like attraction kept them both out of trouble, I believe, dusk. Stanzas swung along nicely.
Punk, pogo Wot? Reggae forever!
January 24th, 2021 05:13
opposites attract
Michael Edwards said:
Wasn\'t into the Sex Pistols - too down market don\'t you know. But, yes, it is odd how opposites can attract - we have some very odd couples here in the village - hope none of them read this.
January 24th, 2021 04:05
Michael Edwards said:
Wasn\'t into the Sex Pistols - too down market don\'t you know. But, yes, it is odd how opposites can attract - we have some very odd couples here in the village - hope none of them read this.
January 24th, 2021 04:05
opposites attract
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words d a, yes opposites do attract, I have seen it in some of our friends thinking how can that work but it does. Life is so strange but we wouldn\'t be without it.
Andy
January 24th, 2021 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words d a, yes opposites do attract, I have seen it in some of our friends thinking how can that work but it does. Life is so strange but we wouldn\'t be without it.
Andy
January 24th, 2021 02:09
fishing rod
Goldfinch60 said:
Super story d a, wonderfully told. Those brothers could be a pain in the proverbial sometimes.
Andy
January 24th, 2021 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Super story d a, wonderfully told. Those brothers could be a pain in the proverbial sometimes.
Andy
January 24th, 2021 01:34
fishing rod
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely kept me reading to the reveal. Creeped me out for a while.
BTW lived in a place not dissimilar to your picture at one time - luckily without a brother. Happy to have moved on.
January 23rd, 2021 17:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely kept me reading to the reveal. Creeped me out for a while.
BTW lived in a place not dissimilar to your picture at one time - luckily without a brother. Happy to have moved on.
January 23rd, 2021 17:52
meaningfulness
Poetic Dan said:
....wow an honour to know you and read from your soul to keep giving mine... on the only way we know!
Much respect and thanks again for the inspirational push ;)
January 23rd, 2021 16:05
Poetic Dan said:
....wow an honour to know you and read from your soul to keep giving mine... on the only way we know!
Much respect and thanks again for the inspirational push ;)
January 23rd, 2021 16:05
fishing rod
heatherbee said:
I feel after that I will be checking my wardrobe and under my bed tonight lol.
January 23rd, 2021 15:43
heatherbee said:
I feel after that I will be checking my wardrobe and under my bed tonight lol.
January 23rd, 2021 15:43
fishing rod
Fay Slimm. said:
What a scary tale that took me along with that ghostly sound Dusk - - such a fright for a youngster and hope that brother got a right telling off - but couldnt help smiling at the idea of hangers and fishing line - - will look into my cupboards tonight however after reading your story.
January 23rd, 2021 14:14
Fay Slimm. said:
What a scary tale that took me along with that ghostly sound Dusk - - such a fright for a youngster and hope that brother got a right telling off - but couldnt help smiling at the idea of hangers and fishing line - - will look into my cupboards tonight however after reading your story.
January 23rd, 2021 14:14
The owl and the faerie craic
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, d a! In Hawaii we don\'t have faeries, but we have Menehune!
These are little people who live in the forest. Never saw one though!
January 22nd, 2021 16:05
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, d a! In Hawaii we don\'t have faeries, but we have Menehune!
These are little people who live in the forest. Never saw one though!
January 22nd, 2021 16:05
The owl and the faerie craic
Jerry Reynolds said:
The \"Watcher at the gates\" can be ruthless.
Love the poem.
January 22nd, 2021 10:49
Jerry Reynolds said:
The \"Watcher at the gates\" can be ruthless.
Love the poem.
January 22nd, 2021 10:49
The owl and the faerie craic
Neville said:
this is nothing less than magick .. and in my book .. a whole lot more ....
January 22nd, 2021 06:37
Neville said:
this is nothing less than magick .. and in my book .. a whole lot more ....
January 22nd, 2021 06:37
The owl and the faerie craic
L. B. Mek said:
\'All to the trill of a piper\'s whistle, as multi faceted wings,
. in romance to the light of moon, cast a myriad of rythmic
. rainbow reflected jewels upon.....
. the mystey meadow greene.\'
brilliantly vivid, a great read my friend
January 22nd, 2021 06:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'All to the trill of a piper\'s whistle, as multi faceted wings,
. in romance to the light of moon, cast a myriad of rythmic
. rainbow reflected jewels upon.....
. the mystey meadow greene.\'
brilliantly vivid, a great read my friend
January 22nd, 2021 06:00
meaningfulness
L. B. Mek said:
I like the tone and style, reads like a very private letter, yet is full of such revealing and vivid details,
really well executed, a great write
January 22nd, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
I like the tone and style, reads like a very private letter, yet is full of such revealing and vivid details,
really well executed, a great write
January 22nd, 2021 05:27
The owl and the faerie craic
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - a murmuration of frolicking faeries - not that is sight to behold my friend. Love the tin whistle and am smiling big here.
January 22nd, 2021 03:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - a murmuration of frolicking faeries - not that is sight to behold my friend. Love the tin whistle and am smiling big here.
January 22nd, 2021 03:38
belong
Nancy Rdz LL said:
I know so much has changed and I seen it change too. If I could have a chance to see the oldie days like the 50\'s I would, I imagine it was great time to see but I know their we\'re problems too just like now days with the Covid-19 that without a doubt change so much and perhaps will stay with us for good our future might not be pretty but our goals and dreams will always be beautiful. Great write hun and keep inspiring 🙂
January 22nd, 2021 02:42
Nancy Rdz LL said:
I know so much has changed and I seen it change too. If I could have a chance to see the oldie days like the 50\'s I would, I imagine it was great time to see but I know their we\'re problems too just like now days with the Covid-19 that without a doubt change so much and perhaps will stay with us for good our future might not be pretty but our goals and dreams will always be beautiful. Great write hun and keep inspiring 🙂
January 22nd, 2021 02:42
The owl and the faerie craic
Goldfinch60 said:
Those faeries dancing can bring such delight to us all but if we look away they are gone.
Andy
January 22nd, 2021 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Those faeries dancing can bring such delight to us all but if we look away they are gone.
Andy
January 22nd, 2021 02:06
meaningfulness
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write d a, that respect for parted parents is so important.
My respect for you increases.
Andy
January 22nd, 2021 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write d a, that respect for parted parents is so important.
My respect for you increases.
Andy
January 22nd, 2021 01:56
good things to come
Nancy Rdz LL said:
Nice and happy new year.....
Whatever comes, comes in Gods wishes and blessings for all :)
January 22nd, 2021 01:45
Nancy Rdz LL said:
Nice and happy new year.....
Whatever comes, comes in Gods wishes and blessings for all :)
January 22nd, 2021 01:45
The owl and the faerie craic
Doggerel Dave said:
Olde worlde fairey fun. Got me in.
Owls, supposedly wise, can be a pain in the buttocks at times....might be a moral there somewhere....
Dave
January 22nd, 2021 01:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Olde worlde fairey fun. Got me in.
Owls, supposedly wise, can be a pain in the buttocks at times....might be a moral there somewhere....
Dave
January 22nd, 2021 01:00
meaningfulness
jarcher54 said:
Real art shows courage. It was pretty brave of you to be so candid. Bittersweet little piece.
January 21st, 2021 22:41
jarcher54 said:
Real art shows courage. It was pretty brave of you to be so candid. Bittersweet little piece.
January 21st, 2021 22:41
meaningfulness
FredPeyer said:
While separation of mom and dad are very hard for kids, you show how it should be done! Well written, d a.
January 21st, 2021 22:09
FredPeyer said:
While separation of mom and dad are very hard for kids, you show how it should be done! Well written, d a.
January 21st, 2021 22:09
meaningfulness
Doggerel Dave said:
A model every disengaged/separated couple should attempt to follow. Unfortunately....
January 21st, 2021 18:16
Doggerel Dave said:
A model every disengaged/separated couple should attempt to follow. Unfortunately....
January 21st, 2021 18:16
without a sound
Neville said:
even after all this time two years all but five days to be exact, your words ... these very words in fact, make this old scribe smile ....
Neville
January 20th, 2021 08:22
Neville said:
even after all this time two years all but five days to be exact, your words ... these very words in fact, make this old scribe smile ....
Neville
January 20th, 2021 08:22
careful silence
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write d a giving me much to think about.
Andy
January 20th, 2021 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write d a giving me much to think about.
Andy
January 20th, 2021 01:23
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