Comments received on poems by dusk arising



capt. Sir Tom
heatherbee said:

So sad too hear your words so true.

February 1st, 2021 08:46

capt. Sir Tom
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!

February 1st, 2021 07:12

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Fay Slimm. said:

What a sad piece of news Dusk - - most prayerful thoughts are with dear Sir Tom and his carers...........

February 1st, 2021 05:42

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orchidee said:

A true write Dusk, and for many other \'innocent\' souls.

February 1st, 2021 05:15

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willow tree said:

Ah yes I agree .Really well written

February 1st, 2021 04:51

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Goldfinch60 said:

Very true d a and so sad, my heart goes out to him and his carers as well.

Andy

February 1st, 2021 04:11

a new beginning....
willow tree said:

Yes agree and now we can look after our home .

January 31st, 2021 18:59

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Fay Slimm. said:

Such emotive words that make us at this troublesome time realize the richness of nature and dream of soon seeing its beauty again. A beautiful read Dusk.

January 31st, 2021 17:11

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Neville said:


these words are a good example of one of those facts that surely need to be shouted from one hilltop to another .......... very much enjoyed sir ...

January 31st, 2021 12:08

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FredPeyer said:

d a, you said it beautifully. Why is it that something always needs to be taken away before we can appreciate it? And I do hope there will be a fresh start.

January 31st, 2021 11:54

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Suresh said:

Now it would be wonderful to lie down amongst those bluebells, and appreciate nature.
Beautiful words and image.

January 31st, 2021 08:48

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Doggerel Dave said:

You are a wordsmith, dusk.
One can only hope...

January 31st, 2021 05:01

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orchidee said:

Good write Dusk.
You converted?! But seriously, I can\'t help noticing the \'river\' of the Holy Spirit. I\'m often on about Him living within Christian believers in my poems.
That picture looks like one that an artist does, that I know.

January 31st, 2021 03:05

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Goldfinch60 said:

True words d a, the beauty of nature will be there when we arise from this awful time.
My River is non existent at the moment, cannot even see the surrounding fields through the water.

Andy

January 31st, 2021 02:00

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Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words d a. That last stanza should be engraved on the hearts of everyone. Another into my favourites.

Andy

January 31st, 2021 01:51

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FredPeyer said:

you got it, man! Little children got all the love, no malice, no lying. If we as adults could only retain 50% of it life would be a better place. Well written!

January 30th, 2021 21:45

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orchidee said:

Good write Dusk.

January 30th, 2021 10:17

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Fay Slimm. said:

What could be better than learning about love and the pleasant joy of service to others my friend .......... a beautiful and very uplifting read.

January 30th, 2021 07:22

i found love
Goldfinch60 said:

That \'sweet old love\' never fails.

You\'ve done it again d a, another singer I had never heard of, another one to look into.

Andy

January 30th, 2021 01:43

i found love
FredPeyer said:

d a, I think it is all of the above, with the exception maybe of no.3
Bonnie Raitt is great and so is your poem!

January 29th, 2021 11:44

i found love
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well done dusk. Sweet Bonnie “Don’t treat me with kid gloves
I’m not a porcupine”


January 29th, 2021 09:56

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Fay Slimm. said:

I choose number four - but then after hearing Bonnie I guess it could be number five - whatever the reason the write was real food for thought Dusk - - great number too.

January 29th, 2021 09:19

walking
Suresh said:

Me thinks, I had a pint too many last night.

Really enjoyable

January 28th, 2021 12:46

walking
FredPeyer said:

Great Poem d a, reminds me of that one time when I spent all my money on her, then had to walk five hours to get home. The things we do as teens!

January 25th, 2021 18:57

walking
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read dusk. Girls have a way of lingering in the sweet spots of the heart.

January 25th, 2021 16:19

opposites attract
L. B. Mek said:

brilliant! worth reading a few times
as that melodic tone and natural rhythm makes us read a little quick and we slip - past, some wonderful linguistic acrobatics that you\'ve crafted easily relatable, even for someone without an ounce of music \'culture\' to call upon,
great execution and a fun read, definitely agree, worth reposting once in a while

January 25th, 2021 05:18

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orchidee said:

Good write Dusk.

January 25th, 2021 02:49

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Poetic Dan said:

Great morning read as I sit in my car and trying not to freeze lol

January 25th, 2021 02:32

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Goldfinch60 said:

Walkin\' and dancin\' around the town eh? Sounds like you had a good night.

Andy

January 25th, 2021 02:09

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Doggerel Dave said:

Sounds like you, awake during the wee early hours has persisted, now you write about it...
Looks polished enough to me - when are you going to play it?

January 25th, 2021 00:31



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