Comments received on poems by dusk arising
eyebrows
orchidee said:
Christian women are instructed in The Good Book not to wear much gold, among other things. \'Chance would be a fine thing to even have any gold\', they may say!
March 12th, 2020 10:15
orchidee said:
Christian women are instructed in The Good Book not to wear much gold, among other things. \'Chance would be a fine thing to even have any gold\', they may say!
March 12th, 2020 10:15
eyebrows
Neville said:
I agree with every word... oh yes, my word .. they do look so absurd ..
March 12th, 2020 09:18
Neville said:
I agree with every word... oh yes, my word .. they do look so absurd ..
March 12th, 2020 09:18
eyebrows
Saxon Crow said:
Here! Here! My favourite look is the bert and ernie eyebrows!
March 12th, 2020 07:31
Saxon Crow said:
Here! Here! My favourite look is the bert and ernie eyebrows!
March 12th, 2020 07:31
when the world was flat
Poetic Dan said:
I don\'t know what\'s made me laugh more your poem or the comments...
My Preaching Site, I thought my world of dogs is difficult. I should remind myself of this, although it can be the same chatting to some people!
Love it!
Hope you are well my friend?
March 11th, 2020 09:11
Poetic Dan said:
I don\'t know what\'s made me laugh more your poem or the comments...
My Preaching Site, I thought my world of dogs is difficult. I should remind myself of this, although it can be the same chatting to some people!
Love it!
Hope you are well my friend?
March 11th, 2020 09:11
when the world was flat
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, I am with you all the way.
In the historical maps when it was thought the world was flat at the edge of the world they always put \"Beware, here be dragons!\"
Andy
March 9th, 2020 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, I am with you all the way.
In the historical maps when it was thought the world was flat at the edge of the world they always put \"Beware, here be dragons!\"
Andy
March 9th, 2020 01:26
when the world was flat
dusk arising said:
I don\'t know why you think you have to regurgitate all this well known stuff like a junior school teacher.
Are you disputing that the man made writings the biblical tales were selected from were written in the days when man thought the earth was flat of something?
You seem stuck in the rut of telling people what to do which you do both here in your comments and in your preaching post elsewhere.
For some obscure reason you bring up the subject of evolution (I didn\'t mention it anywhere) which you state is just a theory. I would remind you that nobody has been able to prove the existence of the christian god or that jesus was the son of god or that jesus was the son of a virgin.... all those too are just a theory based upon ancient writings.
For some reason you also bring up the subject of sunrise and sunset (again not mentioned by me) and ask me a ridiculous question about writing to the met office.... the mind boggles as to where you are coming from.
May I suggest you concentrate on writing poetry on MPS and stop the second rate preaching.
March 8th, 2020 10:47
dusk arising said:
I don\'t know why you think you have to regurgitate all this well known stuff like a junior school teacher.
Are you disputing that the man made writings the biblical tales were selected from were written in the days when man thought the earth was flat of something?
You seem stuck in the rut of telling people what to do which you do both here in your comments and in your preaching post elsewhere.
For some obscure reason you bring up the subject of evolution (I didn\'t mention it anywhere) which you state is just a theory. I would remind you that nobody has been able to prove the existence of the christian god or that jesus was the son of god or that jesus was the son of a virgin.... all those too are just a theory based upon ancient writings.
For some reason you also bring up the subject of sunrise and sunset (again not mentioned by me) and ask me a ridiculous question about writing to the met office.... the mind boggles as to where you are coming from.
May I suggest you concentrate on writing poetry on MPS and stop the second rate preaching.
March 8th, 2020 10:47
when the world was flat
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon DA - Thanks for a poem which has made Brian & I LOL just as our poem also gave you a Good Laugh ! Doctors have confirmed that a *Belly Laugh* is good for YOU ! I presume you are talking about the BIBLE - The Inspired Word of GOD.
Firstly the BIBLE is not a Scientific Text Book because no one would have understood it Thousands of Years ago and the majority still would not understand it today ! It is writen from a PHENOMONISTIC point of view. So from a TERRESTRIAL ASPECT the Sun does appear to Rise each Morning & Set each evening. Have you written to the Met Office complaining about them using the terms SUNRISE & SUNSET ?
In 1475 Corpinicus proved the Earth was in fact suspended in Space and that it and the other Planets revolved round the Sun and that the Sun was the centre f the Solar System. The great Astronermer Keplar stated that Experimental Scientists sare *Only thinking Gods thoughts after Him* We see Beauty - Purpose - Order & Design in the Natural World - not just Blind Chance !
In 3000 BC The Book of Job (wtitten about 3000 BC) states (26 v 7) *God hangs the earth on Nothing* i.e It was floating in space and a priori its shape (and that of the Moon) would be spherical. Nowhere in the Bible does it state *THE EARTH IS FLAT* All other *Religions^ considered the Earth was supported by mythical creatures ! HINDU - Four Elephants on the back of a giant Turtle ! THE GREEKS - The GOD Atlas held the EARTH on his back ! NORSE - The Earth and the other Planets were held up by a Giant Ash Tree ! etc etc. Brian & I are both Scientists and have found NOTHING in the Bible that contradicts the TRUTH of SCIENCE. Evolution is still a THEORY ! When you have spent 5 Years studying the Bible (with an open Mind) come back to us with another peom ! Brian and I accept by FAITH that the Bible is *The Inspired Word of God* ! For us 1. It claims to be 2. It seems to be (when we read it) 3. In its Global Influence and in our Personal Lives it proves to be - AMEN. Thanks for you Poem it made us think - but in the end it strengthened our Faith !
Peace & Joy & Love to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 8th, 2020 10:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon DA - Thanks for a poem which has made Brian & I LOL just as our poem also gave you a Good Laugh ! Doctors have confirmed that a *Belly Laugh* is good for YOU ! I presume you are talking about the BIBLE - The Inspired Word of GOD.
Firstly the BIBLE is not a Scientific Text Book because no one would have understood it Thousands of Years ago and the majority still would not understand it today ! It is writen from a PHENOMONISTIC point of view. So from a TERRESTRIAL ASPECT the Sun does appear to Rise each Morning & Set each evening. Have you written to the Met Office complaining about them using the terms SUNRISE & SUNSET ?
In 1475 Corpinicus proved the Earth was in fact suspended in Space and that it and the other Planets revolved round the Sun and that the Sun was the centre f the Solar System. The great Astronermer Keplar stated that Experimental Scientists sare *Only thinking Gods thoughts after Him* We see Beauty - Purpose - Order & Design in the Natural World - not just Blind Chance !
In 3000 BC The Book of Job (wtitten about 3000 BC) states (26 v 7) *God hangs the earth on Nothing* i.e It was floating in space and a priori its shape (and that of the Moon) would be spherical. Nowhere in the Bible does it state *THE EARTH IS FLAT* All other *Religions^ considered the Earth was supported by mythical creatures ! HINDU - Four Elephants on the back of a giant Turtle ! THE GREEKS - The GOD Atlas held the EARTH on his back ! NORSE - The Earth and the other Planets were held up by a Giant Ash Tree ! etc etc. Brian & I are both Scientists and have found NOTHING in the Bible that contradicts the TRUTH of SCIENCE. Evolution is still a THEORY ! When you have spent 5 Years studying the Bible (with an open Mind) come back to us with another peom ! Brian and I accept by FAITH that the Bible is *The Inspired Word of God* ! For us 1. It claims to be 2. It seems to be (when we read it) 3. In its Global Influence and in our Personal Lives it proves to be - AMEN. Thanks for you Poem it made us think - but in the end it strengthened our Faith !
Peace & Joy & Love to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 8th, 2020 10:09
when the world was flat
orchidee said:
Yep, course the world is flat - I\'m on this walk to the end of the world. Hope I don\'t fall over the eeddddggggeeee! Goodbye! Good acting, innit?!
March 8th, 2020 08:16
orchidee said:
Yep, course the world is flat - I\'m on this walk to the end of the world. Hope I don\'t fall over the eeddddggggeeee! Goodbye! Good acting, innit?!
March 8th, 2020 08:16
when the world was flat
Michael Edwards said:
I read a lot of fiction but I don\'t believe it. Nice one dusk.
March 8th, 2020 06:20
Michael Edwards said:
I read a lot of fiction but I don\'t believe it. Nice one dusk.
March 8th, 2020 06:20
when the world was flat
tundrol said:
Nice, concise, precise. Clever idea. Good punch line. Ouch!
March 8th, 2020 05:55
tundrol said:
Nice, concise, precise. Clever idea. Good punch line. Ouch!
March 8th, 2020 05:55
when the world was flat
Neville said:
Once upon a time, not that many years ago, on the very edge of town and largely cloaked in secrecy, I worked in a place.. rather like a large self contained village, or small town.... There the officers went about their daily chores dressed in white uniforms and tried tirelessly to convince many of the local inhabitants that the earth was shaped like a pyramid and spun in the air like a green and blue triangle.....
tis true I tell ya......it all happened not long after they proved the earth was indeed flat….
You tell a fine tale in so few words DA....
Neville
March 8th, 2020 04:56
Neville said:
Once upon a time, not that many years ago, on the very edge of town and largely cloaked in secrecy, I worked in a place.. rather like a large self contained village, or small town.... There the officers went about their daily chores dressed in white uniforms and tried tirelessly to convince many of the local inhabitants that the earth was shaped like a pyramid and spun in the air like a green and blue triangle.....
tis true I tell ya......it all happened not long after they proved the earth was indeed flat….
You tell a fine tale in so few words DA....
Neville
March 8th, 2020 04:56
majestic monument
Neville said:
Excellent DA.. I do so hope this is another newly penned one of yours .. I also love the way you have made it sit on the page...
Neville
March 7th, 2020 11:55
Neville said:
Excellent DA.. I do so hope this is another newly penned one of yours .. I also love the way you have made it sit on the page...
Neville
March 7th, 2020 11:55
all in a dream
tundrol said:
OVER hill, over dale,
Thorough bush, thorough brier,
Over park, over pale,
Thorough flood, thorough fire,
I do wander everywhere,
Swifter than the moonè\'s sphere;
And I serve the fairy queen,
To dew her orbs upon the green:
The cowslips tall her pensioners be;
In their gold coats spots you see;
Those be rubies, fairy favours,
In those freckles live their savours:
I must go seek some dew-drops here,
And hang a pearl in every cowslip\'s ear.
Farewell thou lob of spirits: I\'ll be gone
Our queen and all our elves come here anon.
March 7th, 2020 10:21
tundrol said:
OVER hill, over dale,
Thorough bush, thorough brier,
Over park, over pale,
Thorough flood, thorough fire,
I do wander everywhere,
Swifter than the moonè\'s sphere;
And I serve the fairy queen,
To dew her orbs upon the green:
The cowslips tall her pensioners be;
In their gold coats spots you see;
Those be rubies, fairy favours,
In those freckles live their savours:
I must go seek some dew-drops here,
And hang a pearl in every cowslip\'s ear.
Farewell thou lob of spirits: I\'ll be gone
Our queen and all our elves come here anon.
March 7th, 2020 10:21
all in a dream
Neville said:
Have no fear oh\' gallant scribe, ye doth pen magnificently and then some... By Jove sir this is simply splendid... No kiddin, full marks ….
Neville
March 6th, 2020 11:17
Neville said:
Have no fear oh\' gallant scribe, ye doth pen magnificently and then some... By Jove sir this is simply splendid... No kiddin, full marks ….
Neville
March 6th, 2020 11:17
all in a dream
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write d a, it is so beautiful to read .
It is more than \'up to scratch\'.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write d a, it is so beautiful to read .
It is more than \'up to scratch\'.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 01:17
all in a dream
Clara said:
Oh wow, this is like a lyrical visual splendour of pure delight and magic! The skill on this site, blows me away sometimes. Brilliantly done.
March 5th, 2020 14:35
Clara said:
Oh wow, this is like a lyrical visual splendour of pure delight and magic! The skill on this site, blows me away sometimes. Brilliantly done.
March 5th, 2020 14:35
all in a dream
Fay Slimm. said:
An impressive poem D.A. The flow and feel of this ballad to dreams has woven a web to teach hearts of romance. A truly delightful and soothing read.
March 5th, 2020 11:42
Fay Slimm. said:
An impressive poem D.A. The flow and feel of this ballad to dreams has woven a web to teach hearts of romance. A truly delightful and soothing read.
March 5th, 2020 11:42
all in a dream
Saxon Crow said:
Quite frankly, I hate you. I am really, really, enjoying these poems DA, they\'re practically shakespearean!
March 5th, 2020 04:44
Saxon Crow said:
Quite frankly, I hate you. I am really, really, enjoying these poems DA, they\'re practically shakespearean!
March 5th, 2020 04:44
tower
orchidee said:
Should I meet her? The evil hag? What - she lives next door?! heehee.
March 5th, 2020 02:40
orchidee said:
Should I meet her? The evil hag? What - she lives next door?! heehee.
March 5th, 2020 02:40
tower
Fay Slimm. said:
The tale held me spellbound with its first rate imagery - - - another gem of a write my friend.
March 5th, 2020 02:27
Fay Slimm. said:
The tale held me spellbound with its first rate imagery - - - another gem of a write my friend.
March 5th, 2020 02:27
tower
Neville said:
Quite simply splendid.. held me spellbound so ya did sire...
(there are no spelling errors or typos here) my liege
March 4th, 2020 18:19
Neville said:
Quite simply splendid.. held me spellbound so ya did sire...
(there are no spelling errors or typos here) my liege
March 4th, 2020 18:19
tower
FredPeyer said:
d a, you treated this subject well. I like too many lines to mention them all, but the moon casting a silver spell across \'pools of yesterday\' blew me away.
March 4th, 2020 17:54
FredPeyer said:
d a, you treated this subject well. I like too many lines to mention them all, but the moon casting a silver spell across \'pools of yesterday\' blew me away.
March 4th, 2020 17:54
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