Comments received on poems by dusk arising
Lockdowntown
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow what a descriptive piece of work on this lockdown where streets become ghost towns of emptiness........ so atmospheric and goes to my favourites.
April 9th, 2020 16:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow what a descriptive piece of work on this lockdown where streets become ghost towns of emptiness........ so atmospheric and goes to my favourites.
April 9th, 2020 16:06
Lockdowntown
Neville said:
An absolutely amazing bit o 21st century poetry.. gonna leave it at that, because so many have said it all before I got here.....
Neville
April 9th, 2020 13:51
Neville said:
An absolutely amazing bit o 21st century poetry.. gonna leave it at that, because so many have said it all before I got here.....
Neville
April 9th, 2020 13:51
Lockdowntown
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well captured DA
A moment in time we hope is never repeated
April 9th, 2020 05:48
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Well captured DA
A moment in time we hope is never repeated
April 9th, 2020 05:48
Lockdowntown
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING DA ~ A very apt description of the lonliness of those Shutin at this depressing time. Im off work but being under 70 I am involved in providing some over 70s with needed food etc but the town is eerily empty. This is even more poignant considering the good weather we are experiencing. Loved the visual ~ Empty Chairs ~ Loved the Video mournful ~ but very apt.
Yours BRIAN.
April 9th, 2020 02:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING DA ~ A very apt description of the lonliness of those Shutin at this depressing time. Im off work but being under 70 I am involved in providing some over 70s with needed food etc but the town is eerily empty. This is even more poignant considering the good weather we are experiencing. Loved the visual ~ Empty Chairs ~ Loved the Video mournful ~ but very apt.
Yours BRIAN.
April 9th, 2020 02:27
Lockdowntown
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Well observed DA. Where I live you don\'t see too many people at any time but I can imagine that it is extraordinary for those who live in towns. I notice the reduction in traffic though when I drive anywhere (not very often now ~ shopping once per week).
Well done,
Kind regards, Alan
April 9th, 2020 02:19
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Well observed DA. Where I live you don\'t see too many people at any time but I can imagine that it is extraordinary for those who live in towns. I notice the reduction in traffic though when I drive anywhere (not very often now ~ shopping once per week).
Well done,
Kind regards, Alan
April 9th, 2020 02:19
Lockdowntown
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, the streets are so quiet and peopleless (sic) as is the park where I walk with My River.
Aah, Weather Report.
Andy
April 9th, 2020 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, the streets are so quiet and peopleless (sic) as is the park where I walk with My River.
Aah, Weather Report.
Andy
April 9th, 2020 01:43
Lockdowntown
orchidee said:
A true write dusk, and we wait, and work towards, more glimmers of light through the valley. I prefer to call it that, rather than a tunnel.
April 9th, 2020 01:43
orchidee said:
A true write dusk, and we wait, and work towards, more glimmers of light through the valley. I prefer to call it that, rather than a tunnel.
April 9th, 2020 01:43
Lockdowntown
Michael Edwards said:
A gem of a write which reflects the new reality.
April 9th, 2020 00:40
Michael Edwards said:
A gem of a write which reflects the new reality.
April 9th, 2020 00:40
come the Covid day
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful heroes these ones who are facing the effects of this virus - - hospitals country-wide are seeing care shared by volunteer myriads - - - yes real heroes every single one.
April 8th, 2020 16:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful heroes these ones who are facing the effects of this virus - - hospitals country-wide are seeing care shared by volunteer myriads - - - yes real heroes every single one.
April 8th, 2020 16:24
come the Covid day
Neville said:
absolutely spot on my friend....
My daughter is presently working on the front line having been told to work in intensive care because of the demand being made upon the unit.... just one of many..
Neville
April 8th, 2020 12:01
Neville said:
absolutely spot on my friend....
My daughter is presently working on the front line having been told to work in intensive care because of the demand being made upon the unit.... just one of many..
Neville
April 8th, 2020 12:01
come the Covid day
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI DA ~ BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for a very apt & moving presentation. Love the visual .very dramatic & the video ~ haunting ! Your poem expresses how we all feel at this very depressing time. Places - Faces - Memories & Grief through our Lockdown & Isolation. The Medics are HEROES beyond adulation ! Angela works at the Hospital (Orhopedic & Physio) but comes home each evening haunted by what they are facing 24/7 on ICU ~ When will it ever end ? Thanks for caring.
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
April 8th, 2020 10:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI DA ~ BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for a very apt & moving presentation. Love the visual .very dramatic & the video ~ haunting ! Your poem expresses how we all feel at this very depressing time. Places - Faces - Memories & Grief through our Lockdown & Isolation. The Medics are HEROES beyond adulation ! Angela works at the Hospital (Orhopedic & Physio) but comes home each evening haunted by what they are facing 24/7 on ICU ~ When will it ever end ? Thanks for caring.
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
April 8th, 2020 10:27
come the Covid day
Fay Slimm. said:
So meaningful your words at this time of troubles not seen before and heartfelt the reference you make to the heroes we may never meet but who will live in our memory. Putting this your emotive tribute into my favourites D.A.
April 8th, 2020 04:18
Fay Slimm. said:
So meaningful your words at this time of troubles not seen before and heartfelt the reference you make to the heroes we may never meet but who will live in our memory. Putting this your emotive tribute into my favourites D.A.
April 8th, 2020 04:18
come the Covid day
orchidee said:
A fine tribute dusk - for the living and the departed.
April 8th, 2020 01:47
orchidee said:
A fine tribute dusk - for the living and the departed.
April 8th, 2020 01:47
come the Covid day
Michael Edwards said:
I am with you all the way dusk. They are more than mere heroes - never forget them.
April 8th, 2020 01:17
Michael Edwards said:
I am with you all the way dusk. They are more than mere heroes - never forget them.
April 8th, 2020 01:17
come the Covid day
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write d a. We MUST revere the heroes who gave there lives for us in fighting this awful time, they are more than worth there weight in gold they must be shown our love.
Andy
April 8th, 2020 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write d a. We MUST revere the heroes who gave there lives for us in fighting this awful time, they are more than worth there weight in gold they must be shown our love.
Andy
April 8th, 2020 01:02
where once was
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful theme in image, music and words,.
Andy
April 8th, 2020 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful theme in image, music and words,.
Andy
April 8th, 2020 00:53
where once was
ron parrish aka wordman said:
loved the poem,the image and the music
April 7th, 2020 18:43
ron parrish aka wordman said:
loved the poem,the image and the music
April 7th, 2020 18:43
where once was
Laura🌻 said:
Dusk,
I was totally engrossed reading your poem...
and listening to the recording! I wasn’t aware of the Clannad-Magical Ring Album. Today I shall listen to the rest of the album. Thank you for sharing.
Stay safe.
~Laura~🌻
April 7th, 2020 10:57
Laura🌻 said:
Dusk,
I was totally engrossed reading your poem...
and listening to the recording! I wasn’t aware of the Clannad-Magical Ring Album. Today I shall listen to the rest of the album. Thank you for sharing.
Stay safe.
~Laura~🌻
April 7th, 2020 10:57
lies
Neville said:
sounds write in my head... looks good on the page....
Neville
April 6th, 2020 07:22
Neville said:
sounds write in my head... looks good on the page....
Neville
April 6th, 2020 07:22
stealer
Neville said:
My imagination is running wild..... Without doubt, now one of my faves DA... and so bloomin true... 👍
April 5th, 2020 09:02
Neville said:
My imagination is running wild..... Without doubt, now one of my faves DA... and so bloomin true... 👍
April 5th, 2020 09:02
stealer
Poetic Dan said:
Oooo, I shall play that again in a mo! Alot better on the big stereo, my phone sounds like a wet fat... Yo!
I\'m apparently living my dream, just need to open my eyes better!
Have a great day my friend
April 5th, 2020 04:06
Poetic Dan said:
Oooo, I shall play that again in a mo! Alot better on the big stereo, my phone sounds like a wet fat... Yo!
I\'m apparently living my dream, just need to open my eyes better!
Have a great day my friend
April 5th, 2020 04:06
stealer
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words d a, that dreamspace is so important to us and it get ruined on some occasions by unwelcome intruders.
Andy
April 3rd, 2020 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words d a, that dreamspace is so important to us and it get ruined on some occasions by unwelcome intruders.
Andy
April 3rd, 2020 00:10
stealer
Fay Slimm. said:
A beguiling read dusk - - more please and I LURVE that tenor sax...........
April 2nd, 2020 16:23
Fay Slimm. said:
A beguiling read dusk - - more please and I LURVE that tenor sax...........
April 2nd, 2020 16:23
reasons to be..... (part one)
Sanjana Varma said:
Your words are very visual . Keep writing.
April 2nd, 2020 11:13
Sanjana Varma said:
Your words are very visual . Keep writing.
April 2nd, 2020 11:13
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