Comments received on poems by dusk arising
stealer
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - such an original piece of work - You\'ve got a real gift dusk.
April 2nd, 2020 04:03
Michael Edwards said:
Love this - such an original piece of work - You\'ve got a real gift dusk.
April 2nd, 2020 04:03
waiting
Fay Slimm. said:
Great imagery in your verse and oh that gorgeous voice and number - - thanks for the delightful interlude when I read and listened twice before adding this to my faves.
April 2nd, 2020 02:16
Fay Slimm. said:
Great imagery in your verse and oh that gorgeous voice and number - - thanks for the delightful interlude when I read and listened twice before adding this to my faves.
April 2nd, 2020 02:16
waiting
Goldfinch60 said:
Times of a distant past brought to life by your words.
You\'ve done it again d a, yet another wonderful musician of whom I had never heard. Great track.
Andy
April 2nd, 2020 00:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Times of a distant past brought to life by your words.
You\'ve done it again d a, yet another wonderful musician of whom I had never heard. Great track.
Andy
April 2nd, 2020 00:01
waiting
MendedFences27 said:
This is either a love poem or a poem of hope, or, maybe both. It depends on the emphasis one puts on \"his.\"
it\'s also a beautiful recollection of the start of one\'s musical journey. Reading this we can see that \"piano\" and sense the excitement or tension felt in anticipation of playing it. Thoroughly enjoyed this. - Phil A.
April 1st, 2020 18:56
MendedFences27 said:
This is either a love poem or a poem of hope, or, maybe both. It depends on the emphasis one puts on \"his.\"
it\'s also a beautiful recollection of the start of one\'s musical journey. Reading this we can see that \"piano\" and sense the excitement or tension felt in anticipation of playing it. Thoroughly enjoyed this. - Phil A.
April 1st, 2020 18:56
waiting
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. A piano is waiting to be played in a town centre mall here. It has a notice: \'Bang out of order at present\' Due to the virus - don\'t touch?!
Unless someone has broken it.
April 1st, 2020 14:02
orchidee said:
A fine write dusk. A piano is waiting to be played in a town centre mall here. It has a notice: \'Bang out of order at present\' Due to the virus - don\'t touch?!
Unless someone has broken it.
April 1st, 2020 14:02
limericks of isolation
orchidee said:
Oh lol - some made me swoon!
Meanwhile - No need to be permanently downcast - they\'re cutting back on EastEnders. Pity they didn\'t do it when there was no crisis.
Thinking of you and others - thankfully I\'m not one who is advised to stay in 12 weeks. Enjoy the garden I said to someone. They lived in a flat. Doh!
March 31st, 2020 02:30
orchidee said:
Oh lol - some made me swoon!
Meanwhile - No need to be permanently downcast - they\'re cutting back on EastEnders. Pity they didn\'t do it when there was no crisis.
Thinking of you and others - thankfully I\'m not one who is advised to stay in 12 weeks. Enjoy the garden I said to someone. They lived in a flat. Doh!
March 31st, 2020 02:30
limericks of isolation
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic - - every bloomin one of em............. ha ha
March 31st, 2020 02:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Fantastic - - every bloomin one of em............. ha ha
March 31st, 2020 02:06
limericks of isolation
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - and a big smile from me - love \'em all.
March 31st, 2020 01:50
Michael Edwards said:
Great work - and a big smile from me - love \'em all.
March 31st, 2020 01:50
limericks of isolation
Goldfinch60 said:
I\'ll buy one of your ranches and see if I can bury our limericks on it.
Keep well
Andy
March 31st, 2020 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
I\'ll buy one of your ranches and see if I can bury our limericks on it.
Keep well
Andy
March 31st, 2020 01:09
reasons to be..... (part one)
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there with him as your words took me to that place. We shall go onwards.
Andy
March 31st, 2020 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there with him as your words took me to that place. We shall go onwards.
Andy
March 31st, 2020 00:52
reasons to be..... (part one)
Fay Slimm. said:
An exciting opening and am up there with the climber and sheep waiting for part two on the adventure - -- great stuff D.A. and oh what a perfect jazz quartet.
March 30th, 2020 16:01
Fay Slimm. said:
An exciting opening and am up there with the climber and sheep waiting for part two on the adventure - -- great stuff D.A. and oh what a perfect jazz quartet.
March 30th, 2020 16:01
covid city morning
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. Knocked me off my feet a bit here...
After that video I\'m lost for words, keep safe my friend!
Always appreciate the craftmanship of your pen, things definitely won\'t be the same again!
March 29th, 2020 04:52
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. Knocked me off my feet a bit here...
After that video I\'m lost for words, keep safe my friend!
Always appreciate the craftmanship of your pen, things definitely won\'t be the same again!
March 29th, 2020 04:52
covid city morning
Fay Slimm. said:
I missed this post yesterday but now having read it my heart skips beats as my head nods in agreement - -your words epitomize conditions in so many places D.A. - -- and written so clearly the scenery speaks in pure poetry the truths of a fearful world right now - -- am keeping this remarkable piece of prose as a perfectly penned reminder my friend.
March 29th, 2020 02:51
Fay Slimm. said:
I missed this post yesterday but now having read it my heart skips beats as my head nods in agreement - -your words epitomize conditions in so many places D.A. - -- and written so clearly the scenery speaks in pure poetry the truths of a fearful world right now - -- am keeping this remarkable piece of prose as a perfectly penned reminder my friend.
March 29th, 2020 02:51
covid city morning
orchidee said:
Well, we\'ll all be in bed and get up an hour later tomorrow morning - will we?!
March 28th, 2020 08:06
orchidee said:
Well, we\'ll all be in bed and get up an hour later tomorrow morning - will we?!
March 28th, 2020 08:06
covid city morning
Goldfinch60 said:
Sweet angel of mercy indeed d a.
That new life is out there, I m fortunate to be able to have my hour with Nature and see its glory.
Keep well
Andy
March 28th, 2020 05:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Sweet angel of mercy indeed d a.
That new life is out there, I m fortunate to be able to have my hour with Nature and see its glory.
Keep well
Andy
March 28th, 2020 05:31
global warning
Goldfinch60 said:
What a powerful write d a, that last verse is so true.
Love the music I will have to listen to more Abdullah Ibrahim.
Andy
March 27th, 2020 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
What a powerful write d a, that last verse is so true.
Love the music I will have to listen to more Abdullah Ibrahim.
Andy
March 27th, 2020 01:03
global warning
PoeticBiscuit said:
So many lines throughout this write that sends chills down your spine. Even more so when you realize the possibility of reality in it.
Great write with a thought provoking message Dusk. Splendid work.
-PB
March 26th, 2020 16:09
PoeticBiscuit said:
So many lines throughout this write that sends chills down your spine. Even more so when you realize the possibility of reality in it.
Great write with a thought provoking message Dusk. Splendid work.
-PB
March 26th, 2020 16:09
Charlie
CharlieFanning said:
A see a lot of charlie in myself to be fair think others would say the same, beautiful poem.
March 26th, 2020 13:13
CharlieFanning said:
A see a lot of charlie in myself to be fair think others would say the same, beautiful poem.
March 26th, 2020 13:13
global warning
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a clever title to this outcry against the \"artificial\" as opposed to the real .A shiver runs through me on reading your last words in this truly powerful poem .
March 26th, 2020 12:22
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a clever title to this outcry against the \"artificial\" as opposed to the real .A shiver runs through me on reading your last words in this truly powerful poem .
March 26th, 2020 12:22
global warning
Neville said:
There are a lot of people out here who hope to their GOD your middle name aint Nostradamus …
DA is fine.. but DNA would just be way too heavy...… A brilliant poem sir and hopefully not a prophesy …
Take care and stay well, Neville
March 26th, 2020 04:38
Neville said:
There are a lot of people out here who hope to their GOD your middle name aint Nostradamus …
DA is fine.. but DNA would just be way too heavy...… A brilliant poem sir and hopefully not a prophesy …
Take care and stay well, Neville
March 26th, 2020 04:38
bruises
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write d a, as others have said all you can do is support her in her hours of need.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write d a, as others have said all you can do is support her in her hours of need.
Andy
March 25th, 2020 02:58
bruises
PoeticBiscuit said:
Wonderful write Dusk. It’s unfortunate how often these situations arise. A decision is often a lot harder than it seems to be.
March 24th, 2020 14:30
PoeticBiscuit said:
Wonderful write Dusk. It’s unfortunate how often these situations arise. A decision is often a lot harder than it seems to be.
March 24th, 2020 14:30
bruises
Laura🌻 said:
Dusk,
So very true!
As a very dear friend of mine once said to me, “You’ll have to walk a mile in my shoes before you can understand.”
I understood what she said and supported her the best I could.
Take care!
~Laura~🌻
March 24th, 2020 13:40
Laura🌻 said:
Dusk,
So very true!
As a very dear friend of mine once said to me, “You’ll have to walk a mile in my shoes before you can understand.”
I understood what she said and supported her the best I could.
Take care!
~Laura~🌻
March 24th, 2020 13:40
bruises
Neville said:
Although very sad, I am sure that many of us will recognise the situation I suspect you more than adequately allude to here... I know I do... a truly poignant post today DA.... Go well and stay safe... N
March 24th, 2020 13:35
Neville said:
Although very sad, I am sure that many of us will recognise the situation I suspect you more than adequately allude to here... I know I do... a truly poignant post today DA.... Go well and stay safe... N
March 24th, 2020 13:35
bruises
orchidee said:
A sensitive write dusk.
With this crisis, it\'s two-way. Don\'t you come near me, and I won\'t come near you - best for both of us.
This is one sort of angle on this poem maybe.
March 24th, 2020 03:06
orchidee said:
A sensitive write dusk.
With this crisis, it\'s two-way. Don\'t you come near me, and I won\'t come near you - best for both of us.
This is one sort of angle on this poem maybe.
March 24th, 2020 03:06
dear reader
Poetic Dan said:
The music can after but I must say I found a spirit in my while reading that will not sway, it plays the fight for endless days!
Great read my friend!
March 22nd, 2020 02:53
Poetic Dan said:
The music can after but I must say I found a spirit in my while reading that will not sway, it plays the fight for endless days!
Great read my friend!
March 22nd, 2020 02:53
dear reader
Neville said:
thoroughly enjoyed and for some of us, I am quite sure understandable.. You should see inside my head in the early hours... mildly abstract but wholly congruent, just the way I like em…. Stay safe and well.... Neville
March 21st, 2020 14:48
Neville said:
thoroughly enjoyed and for some of us, I am quite sure understandable.. You should see inside my head in the early hours... mildly abstract but wholly congruent, just the way I like em…. Stay safe and well.... Neville
March 21st, 2020 14:48
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