Comments received on poems by dusk arising
dear reader
Goldfinch60 said:
Dear writer
Your words
Will dispel
The sadness
That Pervades
Your darkness
From shadows
Into light.
March 21st, 2020 04:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Dear writer
Your words
Will dispel
The sadness
That Pervades
Your darkness
From shadows
Into light.
March 21st, 2020 04:13
the greyhound
queer-with-a-pen said:
Couldn’t get the video to play on my phone. Will have to try again later on laptop. The imagery in this poem is fantastic. A haunted past and a beckoning ocean are two very powerful things, indeed. If this poem were a full-length novel, I’d buy a signed copy!
March 21st, 2020 02:03
queer-with-a-pen said:
Couldn’t get the video to play on my phone. Will have to try again later on laptop. The imagery in this poem is fantastic. A haunted past and a beckoning ocean are two very powerful things, indeed. If this poem were a full-length novel, I’d buy a signed copy!
March 21st, 2020 02:03
the greyhound
Michael Edwards said:
A real gem of a read - must look at it again later. great work Dusk.
March 19th, 2020 14:02
Michael Edwards said:
A real gem of a read - must look at it again later. great work Dusk.
March 19th, 2020 14:02
the greyhound
Fay Slimm. said:
Mystical Columbian music so apt to illustrate the wreck of Greyhound and the haunting memories of one survivor - - - you tell it so well dusk - -- a lament indeed.
March 19th, 2020 13:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Mystical Columbian music so apt to illustrate the wreck of Greyhound and the haunting memories of one survivor - - - you tell it so well dusk - -- a lament indeed.
March 19th, 2020 13:45
the greyhound
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea has many secrets that become profound journeys for people. Wonderful write d a.
Andy
March 19th, 2020 10:18
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea has many secrets that become profound journeys for people. Wonderful write d a.
Andy
March 19th, 2020 10:18
the greyhound
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI DA ~ Brian here. Thanks for sharing an epic Poem replete with History & Mystery ! It has two of our criteria Rhythm & Reason ! It is excellent to recite and (if thats OK) I will use it at one of our Poetry Recitals. I like the fact that ~ rescuing the Kids ~ broughit it starkly into present time.
It was just our luck today today for our Poem to be sandwhiched between the two best lyrical Poets on MPS ~ Yourself & FAY ~ C\'est la Vie ! Had I been aware of the juxtaposition ~ I would not have posted a Boring - Unemotional - Factual - lament on Education but a mystical & lyrical Poem on A Castle instead ! Thanks again for sharing an excellent & enjoyable ODE ! Loved the visual & video too !
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
March 19th, 2020 09:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI DA ~ Brian here. Thanks for sharing an epic Poem replete with History & Mystery ! It has two of our criteria Rhythm & Reason ! It is excellent to recite and (if thats OK) I will use it at one of our Poetry Recitals. I like the fact that ~ rescuing the Kids ~ broughit it starkly into present time.
It was just our luck today today for our Poem to be sandwhiched between the two best lyrical Poets on MPS ~ Yourself & FAY ~ C\'est la Vie ! Had I been aware of the juxtaposition ~ I would not have posted a Boring - Unemotional - Factual - lament on Education but a mystical & lyrical Poem on A Castle instead ! Thanks again for sharing an excellent & enjoyable ODE ! Loved the visual & video too !
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
March 19th, 2020 09:31
what castle
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sad read but written with real passion and a real \'must\' read.
March 18th, 2020 05:48
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sad read but written with real passion and a real \'must\' read.
March 18th, 2020 05:48
still waters
Fay Slimm. said:
The verse describes well how much a smile may cover my friend. -- loneliness inside is such a great challenge.
March 16th, 2020 17:41
Fay Slimm. said:
The verse describes well how much a smile may cover my friend. -- loneliness inside is such a great challenge.
March 16th, 2020 17:41
still waters
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with natural pathos this taste of growing older and missing what was and is now in the memory...... love and its results brings many a tear behind ageing smiles. Impressive lines my friend.
March 16th, 2020 03:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with natural pathos this taste of growing older and missing what was and is now in the memory...... love and its results brings many a tear behind ageing smiles. Impressive lines my friend.
March 16th, 2020 03:21
still waters
Michael Edwards said:
My grandkids are all growing up now and I do miss the younger years when they were so dependant and cuddly - thankfully they are all turning into young sensible people - all 6 of them. Great write dusk.
March 16th, 2020 03:05
Michael Edwards said:
My grandkids are all growing up now and I do miss the younger years when they were so dependant and cuddly - thankfully they are all turning into young sensible people - all 6 of them. Great write dusk.
March 16th, 2020 03:05
eyebrows
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Lol..bery true..when rhey tattoo them on thats even crazier
March 16th, 2020 02:12
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Lol..bery true..when rhey tattoo them on thats even crazier
March 16th, 2020 02:12
still waters
Saxon Crow said:
Life always go on my friend. Thats why raspberry ripple was invented
March 16th, 2020 02:01
Saxon Crow said:
Life always go on my friend. Thats why raspberry ripple was invented
March 16th, 2020 02:01
still waters
Goldfinch60 said:
Our lives can have bad times thrust upon us but we can survive and eating an ice cream with grandchildren at the seaside is a wonderful bonus in our lives.
Andy
March 16th, 2020 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Our lives can have bad times thrust upon us but we can survive and eating an ice cream with grandchildren at the seaside is a wonderful bonus in our lives.
Andy
March 16th, 2020 01:02
eyebrows
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you da for my first laugh of the day. It is so true, be who you are not hidden by artwork.
Andy
March 13th, 2020 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you da for my first laugh of the day. It is so true, be who you are not hidden by artwork.
Andy
March 13th, 2020 01:49
eyebrows
Fay Slimm. said:
Eyebrows today and yesteryear the beauty spot was considered a must-have - -- queer how ladies vote for phases of changing their face or shape -- good to know though how males really think about following fashion.
March 12th, 2020 17:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Eyebrows today and yesteryear the beauty spot was considered a must-have - -- queer how ladies vote for phases of changing their face or shape -- good to know though how males really think about following fashion.
March 12th, 2020 17:04
eyebrows
tundrol said:
I always wondered what that was all about, pulling out eyebrows to paint them in again in a different place. I guess somewhere in that impulse there must be something artistic or creative, and everyone is at liberty to do what they want with their own face, I guess, whether there is a God, god, gods or no gods at all.
March 12th, 2020 16:09
tundrol said:
I always wondered what that was all about, pulling out eyebrows to paint them in again in a different place. I guess somewhere in that impulse there must be something artistic or creative, and everyone is at liberty to do what they want with their own face, I guess, whether there is a God, god, gods or no gods at all.
March 12th, 2020 16:09
eyebrows
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE DA - In defence of all my Sisters ! It is true that Ladies tend to be *dedicated folowers of fashion* more so than Men. It can be Hair (style & colour) - skirt lengths - heel height & now Eyebrows ! As you know I am a committed Christian and I accept the Spanish genetic look in my genes. Olive skin - Black hair & Eyebrows etc. I am neat & trim but do not spend much on cosmetics ! PHYSIOS need to look neat & authorative but not Glamorous ! In my experience Christian Ladies spend far less on cosmetics than Secular Ladies - We are happy in the skin we*re in ! In my Work I am concerned with Health - Mobility & Fitness which is more to do with the Inner Man & Woman although my exercise Plans & Diets do tone the Figure & the Skin & Hair etc. I want my Clients (Yin & Yang) to be Fit & Healthy & look good in the Buff. Who we are is Gods Gift to us - What we make of ourselves (and that includes Face - Figure - Faculties) is our Gift back to God. Physiotherapists and Educationalists (like Brian) have a big part to play in maintaining *Healthy Minds in Healthy Bodies* The Cosmetic Industry in the UK is worth about £30 billion ! Mostly unnecessary icing on an already good cake - the Peaches & Cream UK Ladies ! Thanks for sharing it made me think !
Peace & joy to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 12th, 2020 10:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE DA - In defence of all my Sisters ! It is true that Ladies tend to be *dedicated folowers of fashion* more so than Men. It can be Hair (style & colour) - skirt lengths - heel height & now Eyebrows ! As you know I am a committed Christian and I accept the Spanish genetic look in my genes. Olive skin - Black hair & Eyebrows etc. I am neat & trim but do not spend much on cosmetics ! PHYSIOS need to look neat & authorative but not Glamorous ! In my experience Christian Ladies spend far less on cosmetics than Secular Ladies - We are happy in the skin we*re in ! In my Work I am concerned with Health - Mobility & Fitness which is more to do with the Inner Man & Woman although my exercise Plans & Diets do tone the Figure & the Skin & Hair etc. I want my Clients (Yin & Yang) to be Fit & Healthy & look good in the Buff. Who we are is Gods Gift to us - What we make of ourselves (and that includes Face - Figure - Faculties) is our Gift back to God. Physiotherapists and Educationalists (like Brian) have a big part to play in maintaining *Healthy Minds in Healthy Bodies* The Cosmetic Industry in the UK is worth about £30 billion ! Mostly unnecessary icing on an already good cake - the Peaches & Cream UK Ladies ! Thanks for sharing it made me think !
Peace & joy to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 12th, 2020 10:32
eyebrows
orchidee said:
Christian women are instructed in The Good Book not to wear much gold, among other things. \'Chance would be a fine thing to even have any gold\', they may say!
March 12th, 2020 10:15
orchidee said:
Christian women are instructed in The Good Book not to wear much gold, among other things. \'Chance would be a fine thing to even have any gold\', they may say!
March 12th, 2020 10:15
eyebrows
Neville said:
I agree with every word... oh yes, my word .. they do look so absurd ..
March 12th, 2020 09:18
Neville said:
I agree with every word... oh yes, my word .. they do look so absurd ..
March 12th, 2020 09:18
eyebrows
Saxon Crow said:
Here! Here! My favourite look is the bert and ernie eyebrows!
March 12th, 2020 07:31
Saxon Crow said:
Here! Here! My favourite look is the bert and ernie eyebrows!
March 12th, 2020 07:31
when the world was flat
Poetic Dan said:
I don\'t know what\'s made me laugh more your poem or the comments...
My Preaching Site, I thought my world of dogs is difficult. I should remind myself of this, although it can be the same chatting to some people!
Love it!
Hope you are well my friend?
March 11th, 2020 09:11
Poetic Dan said:
I don\'t know what\'s made me laugh more your poem or the comments...
My Preaching Site, I thought my world of dogs is difficult. I should remind myself of this, although it can be the same chatting to some people!
Love it!
Hope you are well my friend?
March 11th, 2020 09:11
when the world was flat
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, I am with you all the way.
In the historical maps when it was thought the world was flat at the edge of the world they always put \"Beware, here be dragons!\"
Andy
March 9th, 2020 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, I am with you all the way.
In the historical maps when it was thought the world was flat at the edge of the world they always put \"Beware, here be dragons!\"
Andy
March 9th, 2020 01:26
when the world was flat
dusk arising said:
I don\'t know why you think you have to regurgitate all this well known stuff like a junior school teacher.
Are you disputing that the man made writings the biblical tales were selected from were written in the days when man thought the earth was flat of something?
You seem stuck in the rut of telling people what to do which you do both here in your comments and in your preaching post elsewhere.
For some obscure reason you bring up the subject of evolution (I didn\'t mention it anywhere) which you state is just a theory. I would remind you that nobody has been able to prove the existence of the christian god or that jesus was the son of god or that jesus was the son of a virgin.... all those too are just a theory based upon ancient writings.
For some reason you also bring up the subject of sunrise and sunset (again not mentioned by me) and ask me a ridiculous question about writing to the met office.... the mind boggles as to where you are coming from.
May I suggest you concentrate on writing poetry on MPS and stop the second rate preaching.
March 8th, 2020 10:47
dusk arising said:
I don\'t know why you think you have to regurgitate all this well known stuff like a junior school teacher.
Are you disputing that the man made writings the biblical tales were selected from were written in the days when man thought the earth was flat of something?
You seem stuck in the rut of telling people what to do which you do both here in your comments and in your preaching post elsewhere.
For some obscure reason you bring up the subject of evolution (I didn\'t mention it anywhere) which you state is just a theory. I would remind you that nobody has been able to prove the existence of the christian god or that jesus was the son of god or that jesus was the son of a virgin.... all those too are just a theory based upon ancient writings.
For some reason you also bring up the subject of sunrise and sunset (again not mentioned by me) and ask me a ridiculous question about writing to the met office.... the mind boggles as to where you are coming from.
May I suggest you concentrate on writing poetry on MPS and stop the second rate preaching.
March 8th, 2020 10:47
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