Comments received on poems by dusk arising
bruises
PoeticBiscuit said:
Wonderful write Dusk. It’s unfortunate how often these situations arise. A decision is often a lot harder than it seems to be.
March 24th, 2020 14:30
PoeticBiscuit said:
Wonderful write Dusk. It’s unfortunate how often these situations arise. A decision is often a lot harder than it seems to be.
March 24th, 2020 14:30
bruises
Laura🌻 said:
Dusk,
So very true!
As a very dear friend of mine once said to me, “You’ll have to walk a mile in my shoes before you can understand.”
I understood what she said and supported her the best I could.
Take care!
~Laura~🌻
March 24th, 2020 13:40
Laura🌻 said:
Dusk,
So very true!
As a very dear friend of mine once said to me, “You’ll have to walk a mile in my shoes before you can understand.”
I understood what she said and supported her the best I could.
Take care!
~Laura~🌻
March 24th, 2020 13:40
bruises
Neville said:
Although very sad, I am sure that many of us will recognise the situation I suspect you more than adequately allude to here... I know I do... a truly poignant post today DA.... Go well and stay safe... N
March 24th, 2020 13:35
Neville said:
Although very sad, I am sure that many of us will recognise the situation I suspect you more than adequately allude to here... I know I do... a truly poignant post today DA.... Go well and stay safe... N
March 24th, 2020 13:35
bruises
orchidee said:
A sensitive write dusk.
With this crisis, it\'s two-way. Don\'t you come near me, and I won\'t come near you - best for both of us.
This is one sort of angle on this poem maybe.
March 24th, 2020 03:06
orchidee said:
A sensitive write dusk.
With this crisis, it\'s two-way. Don\'t you come near me, and I won\'t come near you - best for both of us.
This is one sort of angle on this poem maybe.
March 24th, 2020 03:06
dear reader
Poetic Dan said:
The music can after but I must say I found a spirit in my while reading that will not sway, it plays the fight for endless days!
Great read my friend!
March 22nd, 2020 02:53
Poetic Dan said:
The music can after but I must say I found a spirit in my while reading that will not sway, it plays the fight for endless days!
Great read my friend!
March 22nd, 2020 02:53
dear reader
Neville said:
thoroughly enjoyed and for some of us, I am quite sure understandable.. You should see inside my head in the early hours... mildly abstract but wholly congruent, just the way I like em…. Stay safe and well.... Neville
March 21st, 2020 14:48
Neville said:
thoroughly enjoyed and for some of us, I am quite sure understandable.. You should see inside my head in the early hours... mildly abstract but wholly congruent, just the way I like em…. Stay safe and well.... Neville
March 21st, 2020 14:48
dear reader
Goldfinch60 said:
Dear writer
Your words
Will dispel
The sadness
That Pervades
Your darkness
From shadows
Into light.
March 21st, 2020 04:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Dear writer
Your words
Will dispel
The sadness
That Pervades
Your darkness
From shadows
Into light.
March 21st, 2020 04:13
the greyhound
queer-with-a-pen said:
Couldn’t get the video to play on my phone. Will have to try again later on laptop. The imagery in this poem is fantastic. A haunted past and a beckoning ocean are two very powerful things, indeed. If this poem were a full-length novel, I’d buy a signed copy!
March 21st, 2020 02:03
queer-with-a-pen said:
Couldn’t get the video to play on my phone. Will have to try again later on laptop. The imagery in this poem is fantastic. A haunted past and a beckoning ocean are two very powerful things, indeed. If this poem were a full-length novel, I’d buy a signed copy!
March 21st, 2020 02:03
the greyhound
Michael Edwards said:
A real gem of a read - must look at it again later. great work Dusk.
March 19th, 2020 14:02
Michael Edwards said:
A real gem of a read - must look at it again later. great work Dusk.
March 19th, 2020 14:02
the greyhound
Fay Slimm. said:
Mystical Columbian music so apt to illustrate the wreck of Greyhound and the haunting memories of one survivor - - - you tell it so well dusk - -- a lament indeed.
March 19th, 2020 13:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Mystical Columbian music so apt to illustrate the wreck of Greyhound and the haunting memories of one survivor - - - you tell it so well dusk - -- a lament indeed.
March 19th, 2020 13:45
the greyhound
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea has many secrets that become profound journeys for people. Wonderful write d a.
Andy
March 19th, 2020 10:18
Goldfinch60 said:
The sea has many secrets that become profound journeys for people. Wonderful write d a.
Andy
March 19th, 2020 10:18
the greyhound
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI DA ~ Brian here. Thanks for sharing an epic Poem replete with History & Mystery ! It has two of our criteria Rhythm & Reason ! It is excellent to recite and (if thats OK) I will use it at one of our Poetry Recitals. I like the fact that ~ rescuing the Kids ~ broughit it starkly into present time.
It was just our luck today today for our Poem to be sandwhiched between the two best lyrical Poets on MPS ~ Yourself & FAY ~ C\'est la Vie ! Had I been aware of the juxtaposition ~ I would not have posted a Boring - Unemotional - Factual - lament on Education but a mystical & lyrical Poem on A Castle instead ! Thanks again for sharing an excellent & enjoyable ODE ! Loved the visual & video too !
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
March 19th, 2020 09:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI DA ~ Brian here. Thanks for sharing an epic Poem replete with History & Mystery ! It has two of our criteria Rhythm & Reason ! It is excellent to recite and (if thats OK) I will use it at one of our Poetry Recitals. I like the fact that ~ rescuing the Kids ~ broughit it starkly into present time.
It was just our luck today today for our Poem to be sandwhiched between the two best lyrical Poets on MPS ~ Yourself & FAY ~ C\'est la Vie ! Had I been aware of the juxtaposition ~ I would not have posted a Boring - Unemotional - Factual - lament on Education but a mystical & lyrical Poem on A Castle instead ! Thanks again for sharing an excellent & enjoyable ODE ! Loved the visual & video too !
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
March 19th, 2020 09:31
what castle
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sad read but written with real passion and a real \'must\' read.
March 18th, 2020 05:48
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sad read but written with real passion and a real \'must\' read.
March 18th, 2020 05:48
still waters
Fay Slimm. said:
The verse describes well how much a smile may cover my friend. -- loneliness inside is such a great challenge.
March 16th, 2020 17:41
Fay Slimm. said:
The verse describes well how much a smile may cover my friend. -- loneliness inside is such a great challenge.
March 16th, 2020 17:41
still waters
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with natural pathos this taste of growing older and missing what was and is now in the memory...... love and its results brings many a tear behind ageing smiles. Impressive lines my friend.
March 16th, 2020 03:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Filled with natural pathos this taste of growing older and missing what was and is now in the memory...... love and its results brings many a tear behind ageing smiles. Impressive lines my friend.
March 16th, 2020 03:21
still waters
Michael Edwards said:
My grandkids are all growing up now and I do miss the younger years when they were so dependant and cuddly - thankfully they are all turning into young sensible people - all 6 of them. Great write dusk.
March 16th, 2020 03:05
Michael Edwards said:
My grandkids are all growing up now and I do miss the younger years when they were so dependant and cuddly - thankfully they are all turning into young sensible people - all 6 of them. Great write dusk.
March 16th, 2020 03:05
eyebrows
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Lol..bery true..when rhey tattoo them on thats even crazier
March 16th, 2020 02:12
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Lol..bery true..when rhey tattoo them on thats even crazier
March 16th, 2020 02:12
still waters
Saxon Crow said:
Life always go on my friend. Thats why raspberry ripple was invented
March 16th, 2020 02:01
Saxon Crow said:
Life always go on my friend. Thats why raspberry ripple was invented
March 16th, 2020 02:01
still waters
Goldfinch60 said:
Our lives can have bad times thrust upon us but we can survive and eating an ice cream with grandchildren at the seaside is a wonderful bonus in our lives.
Andy
March 16th, 2020 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Our lives can have bad times thrust upon us but we can survive and eating an ice cream with grandchildren at the seaside is a wonderful bonus in our lives.
Andy
March 16th, 2020 01:02
eyebrows
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you da for my first laugh of the day. It is so true, be who you are not hidden by artwork.
Andy
March 13th, 2020 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you da for my first laugh of the day. It is so true, be who you are not hidden by artwork.
Andy
March 13th, 2020 01:49
eyebrows
Fay Slimm. said:
Eyebrows today and yesteryear the beauty spot was considered a must-have - -- queer how ladies vote for phases of changing their face or shape -- good to know though how males really think about following fashion.
March 12th, 2020 17:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Eyebrows today and yesteryear the beauty spot was considered a must-have - -- queer how ladies vote for phases of changing their face or shape -- good to know though how males really think about following fashion.
March 12th, 2020 17:04
eyebrows
tundrol said:
I always wondered what that was all about, pulling out eyebrows to paint them in again in a different place. I guess somewhere in that impulse there must be something artistic or creative, and everyone is at liberty to do what they want with their own face, I guess, whether there is a God, god, gods or no gods at all.
March 12th, 2020 16:09
tundrol said:
I always wondered what that was all about, pulling out eyebrows to paint them in again in a different place. I guess somewhere in that impulse there must be something artistic or creative, and everyone is at liberty to do what they want with their own face, I guess, whether there is a God, god, gods or no gods at all.
March 12th, 2020 16:09
eyebrows
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE DA - In defence of all my Sisters ! It is true that Ladies tend to be *dedicated folowers of fashion* more so than Men. It can be Hair (style & colour) - skirt lengths - heel height & now Eyebrows ! As you know I am a committed Christian and I accept the Spanish genetic look in my genes. Olive skin - Black hair & Eyebrows etc. I am neat & trim but do not spend much on cosmetics ! PHYSIOS need to look neat & authorative but not Glamorous ! In my experience Christian Ladies spend far less on cosmetics than Secular Ladies - We are happy in the skin we*re in ! In my Work I am concerned with Health - Mobility & Fitness which is more to do with the Inner Man & Woman although my exercise Plans & Diets do tone the Figure & the Skin & Hair etc. I want my Clients (Yin & Yang) to be Fit & Healthy & look good in the Buff. Who we are is Gods Gift to us - What we make of ourselves (and that includes Face - Figure - Faculties) is our Gift back to God. Physiotherapists and Educationalists (like Brian) have a big part to play in maintaining *Healthy Minds in Healthy Bodies* The Cosmetic Industry in the UK is worth about £30 billion ! Mostly unnecessary icing on an already good cake - the Peaches & Cream UK Ladies ! Thanks for sharing it made me think !
Peace & joy to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 12th, 2020 10:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE DA - In defence of all my Sisters ! It is true that Ladies tend to be *dedicated folowers of fashion* more so than Men. It can be Hair (style & colour) - skirt lengths - heel height & now Eyebrows ! As you know I am a committed Christian and I accept the Spanish genetic look in my genes. Olive skin - Black hair & Eyebrows etc. I am neat & trim but do not spend much on cosmetics ! PHYSIOS need to look neat & authorative but not Glamorous ! In my experience Christian Ladies spend far less on cosmetics than Secular Ladies - We are happy in the skin we*re in ! In my Work I am concerned with Health - Mobility & Fitness which is more to do with the Inner Man & Woman although my exercise Plans & Diets do tone the Figure & the Skin & Hair etc. I want my Clients (Yin & Yang) to be Fit & Healthy & look good in the Buff. Who we are is Gods Gift to us - What we make of ourselves (and that includes Face - Figure - Faculties) is our Gift back to God. Physiotherapists and Educationalists (like Brian) have a big part to play in maintaining *Healthy Minds in Healthy Bodies* The Cosmetic Industry in the UK is worth about £30 billion ! Mostly unnecessary icing on an already good cake - the Peaches & Cream UK Ladies ! Thanks for sharing it made me think !
Peace & joy to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 12th, 2020 10:32
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