Comments received on poems by dusk arising
valentines that never came
Saxon Crow said:
Very good lyrics and I can relate, especially the basketball bit!
February 14th, 2020 04:20
Saxon Crow said:
Very good lyrics and I can relate, especially the basketball bit!
February 14th, 2020 04:20
windy
Neville said:
Very timely and apt … we have another on the way methinks...
the older I get it seems the more I love these childhood reminisces.. keep em coming .. they brighten the windiest of days.... N
February 13th, 2020 18:10
Neville said:
Very timely and apt … we have another on the way methinks...
the older I get it seems the more I love these childhood reminisces.. keep em coming .. they brighten the windiest of days.... N
February 13th, 2020 18:10
The only love she held onto
Saxon Crow said:
I love this poem DA it touched my heart.
February 13th, 2020 05:31
Saxon Crow said:
I love this poem DA it touched my heart.
February 13th, 2020 05:31
The only love she held onto
MendedFences27 said:
Loved the seasonal comparisons and the descriptive phrases to describe each. \"damp breeze which shuddered across her bones,\" and \"wrap up warm.\" Let\'s not forget the enchanting title phrase as well, \"the only love she held onto\"\". Just great stuff. Brilliant! - Phil A.
February 12th, 2020 23:18
MendedFences27 said:
Loved the seasonal comparisons and the descriptive phrases to describe each. \"damp breeze which shuddered across her bones,\" and \"wrap up warm.\" Let\'s not forget the enchanting title phrase as well, \"the only love she held onto\"\". Just great stuff. Brilliant! - Phil A.
February 12th, 2020 23:18
The only love she held onto
FredPeyer said:
Intriguing with a surprise ending. Well done, d.a.!
February 12th, 2020 13:06
FredPeyer said:
Intriguing with a surprise ending. Well done, d.a.!
February 12th, 2020 13:06
the curse of the apostrophe
Neville said:
Tis a curse of pandemic proportion & may well be the death of me.... thanks for the reminder... I believe incorrect spelling is one way around it tho… sez I....
February 12th, 2020 06:21
Neville said:
Tis a curse of pandemic proportion & may well be the death of me.... thanks for the reminder... I believe incorrect spelling is one way around it tho… sez I....
February 12th, 2020 06:21
The only love she held onto
Fay Slimm. said:
Sper write D.A. - the surprise ending was a lovely reminder of how special those sunsets are to those getting along in years. A tale needing to be read again - Saved to the fave list and thank you for sharing it.
February 12th, 2020 05:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Sper write D.A. - the surprise ending was a lovely reminder of how special those sunsets are to those getting along in years. A tale needing to be read again - Saved to the fave list and thank you for sharing it.
February 12th, 2020 05:41
The only love she held onto
Neville said:
this is one of those comfortable and warming one looks forward to any time of year.... N
February 12th, 2020 05:21
Neville said:
this is one of those comfortable and warming one looks forward to any time of year.... N
February 12th, 2020 05:21
The only love she held onto
Poetic Dan said:
Perfect for my mood today....
Thank you!
Careful of my post today my friend!
Hopefully see you in the spring ;)
February 12th, 2020 03:08
Poetic Dan said:
Perfect for my mood today....
Thank you!
Careful of my post today my friend!
Hopefully see you in the spring ;)
February 12th, 2020 03:08
The only love she held onto
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Excellently composed DA. I really enjoyed reading this today.
Kind regards, Alan
February 12th, 2020 02:07
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Excellently composed DA. I really enjoyed reading this today.
Kind regards, Alan
February 12th, 2020 02:07
The only love she held onto
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sunset be forever in your heart.
Andy
February 12th, 2020 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sunset be forever in your heart.
Andy
February 12th, 2020 02:07
limericks etc
Neville said:
delightfully up close and dirty... skilfully penned my poetic friend....
made me chuckle .. no end..
Neville
February 10th, 2020 12:06
Neville said:
delightfully up close and dirty... skilfully penned my poetic friend....
made me chuckle .. no end..
Neville
February 10th, 2020 12:06
the fogs of Jayne
Neville said:
A wicked woman written into the world of poetry wonderfully well indeed....
Best Regards,
Neville
February 9th, 2020 04:38
Neville said:
A wicked woman written into the world of poetry wonderfully well indeed....
Best Regards,
Neville
February 9th, 2020 04:38
the fogs of Jayne
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale d a, there are many tales of the sea about the good and the bad ghosts that are there to help or hinder people in boats.
Andy
February 9th, 2020 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale d a, there are many tales of the sea about the good and the bad ghosts that are there to help or hinder people in boats.
Andy
February 9th, 2020 01:30
the fogs of Jayne
Michael Edwards said:
Now she seems a spirited lass - super write Dusk.
February 8th, 2020 05:17
Michael Edwards said:
Now she seems a spirited lass - super write Dusk.
February 8th, 2020 05:17
limericks etc
Poetic Dan said:
Ha ha! Love it my friend
Great laugh before my M25 drive back Home!
February 7th, 2020 14:31
Poetic Dan said:
Ha ha! Love it my friend
Great laugh before my M25 drive back Home!
February 7th, 2020 14:31
the curse of the apostrophe
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good afternoon DA - I agree in Classic Poetry it*s very important. Brian & I use * instead of \' because the MPS ////// (added obliques) spoil the appearance of the Poem. Poets on MPS who post Modern Poetry - Post it sans grammar sans rhyme - sans rhythm & sans reason ! Thanks for caring - about the oft castigated apostrophes.
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 💛💛💛
February 7th, 2020 11:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good afternoon DA - I agree in Classic Poetry it*s very important. Brian & I use * instead of \' because the MPS ////// (added obliques) spoil the appearance of the Poem. Poets on MPS who post Modern Poetry - Post it sans grammar sans rhyme - sans rhythm & sans reason ! Thanks for caring - about the oft castigated apostrophes.
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours ANGELA 💛💛💛
February 7th, 2020 11:30
after the lovestruck\'s audition
Poetic Dan said:
Every time I close my eyes and hear the jazz play!
February 7th, 2020 08:39
Poetic Dan said:
Every time I close my eyes and hear the jazz play!
February 7th, 2020 08:39
the curse of the apostrophe
Goldfinch60 said:
a\'postophe eh; but, surely the ///, must be meaning\'ful in some instance\'s?
February 7th, 2020 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
a\'postophe eh; but, surely the ///, must be meaning\'ful in some instance\'s?
February 7th, 2020 02:14
the curse of the apostrophe
orchidee said:
Yes, the //// horror seems to happen if we edit our own comments on other poets, or our own works. Should there be an apostrophe in \"poet\'s\"?
February 6th, 2020 11:36
orchidee said:
Yes, the //// horror seems to happen if we edit our own comments on other poets, or our own works. Should there be an apostrophe in \"poet\'s\"?
February 6th, 2020 11:36
the curse of the apostrophe
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The degradation of the nation and it\'s /////misuse of Punctuation\'s
Love it DA
February 6th, 2020 09:42
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
The degradation of the nation and it\'s /////misuse of Punctuation\'s
Love it DA
February 6th, 2020 09:42
the curse of the apostrophe
Michael Edwards said:
Ah punctuation in total. I get hot under the collar when it\'s used incorrectly but poetry can, at a stretch, be regarded as an exception as can bad grammar. Now the Oxford comma is another matter - will post something about it tomorrow.
February 6th, 2020 08:05
Michael Edwards said:
Ah punctuation in total. I get hot under the collar when it\'s used incorrectly but poetry can, at a stretch, be regarded as an exception as can bad grammar. Now the Oxford comma is another matter - will post something about it tomorrow.
February 6th, 2020 08:05
after the lovestruck\'s audition
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but beautifully phrased this lament for love lost - - \"I sang from my heart\" is such a touching line D.A that shows depth now missed.
February 6th, 2020 02:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but beautifully phrased this lament for love lost - - \"I sang from my heart\" is such a touching line D.A that shows depth now missed.
February 6th, 2020 02:00
after the lovestruck\'s audition
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive few words d a, that song will be forever in her heart.
Andy
February 6th, 2020 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive few words d a, that song will be forever in her heart.
Andy
February 6th, 2020 01:18
windy
Goldfinch60 said:
Those windy days can be so wondrous.
We used to go up to the Yorkshire Dales, God\'s country, many times. One day Joyce had down some washing and hung it out and it poured hard but the wind was so strong the washing was horizontal and to this do I cannot explain it bu the washing dried in the rain.
Andy
February 3rd, 2020 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Those windy days can be so wondrous.
We used to go up to the Yorkshire Dales, God\'s country, many times. One day Joyce had down some washing and hung it out and it poured hard but the wind was so strong the washing was horizontal and to this do I cannot explain it bu the washing dried in the rain.
Andy
February 3rd, 2020 01:22
windy
Fay Slimm. said:
Happy memories you versed here my friend when younger long legs conquered both wind and high climbs - Malvern heights I too know well as I lived near that area for a while and found such adventure hiking those hills Love the illustrative picture you chose to raise a smile D.A. - - how great to be free on windy days to feel fresh with energy after tackling those hills whatever the season.
February 2nd, 2020 15:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Happy memories you versed here my friend when younger long legs conquered both wind and high climbs - Malvern heights I too know well as I lived near that area for a while and found such adventure hiking those hills Love the illustrative picture you chose to raise a smile D.A. - - how great to be free on windy days to feel fresh with energy after tackling those hills whatever the season.
February 2nd, 2020 15:17
windy
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing DA. Much more windy in Lancashire (where I was born) than
Essex. Especially when one got past Lancaster and into the Lake District. In my experience I always think the wind refreshes the Earth moreso than the rain. In our poem today We mention the Sun driving the Water Cycle ~ it also of course drives the Atmospheric (Wind) Cycle ! When we have Odes about Nature (even at Her fiercest !) Im so pleased We live on Planet Earth ~ never a dull day !
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
Love the visual ~ is that a windblown gamp ?
February 2nd, 2020 12:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing DA. Much more windy in Lancashire (where I was born) than
Essex. Especially when one got past Lancaster and into the Lake District. In my experience I always think the wind refreshes the Earth moreso than the rain. In our poem today We mention the Sun driving the Water Cycle ~ it also of course drives the Atmospheric (Wind) Cycle ! When we have Odes about Nature (even at Her fiercest !) Im so pleased We live on Planet Earth ~ never a dull day !
Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
Love the visual ~ is that a windblown gamp ?
February 2nd, 2020 12:05
windy
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I enjoyed this DA, a very nice piece.
Kind regards, Alan
February 2nd, 2020 09:35
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I enjoyed this DA, a very nice piece.
Kind regards, Alan
February 2nd, 2020 09:35
circle of trees
markziff said:
Says so much, with no more than needed. Brilliant.
February 2nd, 2020 09:19
markziff said:
Says so much, with no more than needed. Brilliant.
February 2nd, 2020 09:19
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