Comments received on poems by dusk arising
they never leave you
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write d a. Those torn bodies will be remembered by those who were there but not be those who sent them.
Andy
January 26th, 2020 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful write d a. Those torn bodies will be remembered by those who were there but not be those who sent them.
Andy
January 26th, 2020 01:12
they never leave you
Michael Edwards said:
Publish it again you must - fine write da.
January 25th, 2020 13:57
Michael Edwards said:
Publish it again you must - fine write da.
January 25th, 2020 13:57
they never leave you
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m admit I was taken back from the title, well expressed my friend!
Although I am never out of biscuits, so I do thank them with my next dunk!
January 25th, 2020 08:50
Poetic Dan said:
I\'m admit I was taken back from the title, well expressed my friend!
Although I am never out of biscuits, so I do thank them with my next dunk!
January 25th, 2020 08:50
torn but not forgotten
Neville said:
Excellent my friend... for a moment, I imagined you might have penned these words for yours truly..... N
January 22nd, 2020 06:26
Neville said:
Excellent my friend... for a moment, I imagined you might have penned these words for yours truly..... N
January 22nd, 2020 06:26
torn but not forgotten
Poetic Dan said:
Yes I do, if it ment every word was true. I don\'t want to hold them down, I am brave but my triggers are real. If we all opened our hearts completely, we could all truly begin to feel...
Inspirational stuff my friend and always well penned!
January 22nd, 2020 03:27
Poetic Dan said:
Yes I do, if it ment every word was true. I don\'t want to hold them down, I am brave but my triggers are real. If we all opened our hearts completely, we could all truly begin to feel...
Inspirational stuff my friend and always well penned!
January 22nd, 2020 03:27
torn but not forgotten
orchidee said:
We do say the casual \'I\'m OK\' if some ask us \'How are you?\'
Then we wonder, if we said we\'re not OK, would they stop to listen to our needs, etc, or would they think \'Oh no, he\'s not OK again?!\'
January 22nd, 2020 02:51
orchidee said:
We do say the casual \'I\'m OK\' if some ask us \'How are you?\'
Then we wonder, if we said we\'re not OK, would they stop to listen to our needs, etc, or would they think \'Oh no, he\'s not OK again?!\'
January 22nd, 2020 02:51
torn but not forgotten
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write d a. There is pain within us all but if you chose who to share it with that pain can be dispersed, all it needs is somebody to listen - I am a listener and I am listening.
Andy
January 22nd, 2020 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write d a. There is pain within us all but if you chose who to share it with that pain can be dispersed, all it needs is somebody to listen - I am a listener and I am listening.
Andy
January 22nd, 2020 02:12
torn but not forgotten
_Aquarius_ said:
I really loved this, even though every word was very chilling and heart wrenching, but sadly I can very much understand and relate to this.. This really resonated with me and I could feel the pain and the vulnerability in every word.
January 21st, 2020 18:35
_Aquarius_ said:
I really loved this, even though every word was very chilling and heart wrenching, but sadly I can very much understand and relate to this.. This really resonated with me and I could feel the pain and the vulnerability in every word.
January 21st, 2020 18:35
torn but not forgotten
PhilPoet said:
Interesting; the conflict between feeling pain and having to live with it, without a screwed up face.
I found interesting the line:
(because when i hide it
i can begin to live without it...)... food for thought, but I know I\'m not there.
Liked the poem and the difficulty it so clearly portrays.
January 21st, 2020 16:40
PhilPoet said:
Interesting; the conflict between feeling pain and having to live with it, without a screwed up face.
I found interesting the line:
(because when i hide it
i can begin to live without it...)... food for thought, but I know I\'m not there.
Liked the poem and the difficulty it so clearly portrays.
January 21st, 2020 16:40
anguish and despair
PotbellyPleb said:
I resonated with this a little bit, obviously not in the way you have, as your experience is just a physically taxing as it is emotionally. But it does express despair very well. Especially the term sleepwalking, where at times in your despair you\'re already glassy-eyed but wish you could just fall into a coma completely and wake up when everything\'s over. A very raw write.
January 21st, 2020 16:34
PotbellyPleb said:
I resonated with this a little bit, obviously not in the way you have, as your experience is just a physically taxing as it is emotionally. But it does express despair very well. Especially the term sleepwalking, where at times in your despair you\'re already glassy-eyed but wish you could just fall into a coma completely and wake up when everything\'s over. A very raw write.
January 21st, 2020 16:34
torn but not forgotten
Nemo said:
Oh, this was a painful read, we all hide our pain to live with out revealing our vanurability,
Very well portrayed 🌹
January 21st, 2020 12:52
Nemo said:
Oh, this was a painful read, we all hide our pain to live with out revealing our vanurability,
Very well portrayed 🌹
January 21st, 2020 12:52
circle of trees
Fay Slimm. said:
Great use of the words which although almost the same spelling mean so differently from each other - I love this one D.A. - saved of course.
January 20th, 2020 06:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Great use of the words which although almost the same spelling mean so differently from each other - I love this one D.A. - saved of course.
January 20th, 2020 06:28
circle of trees
Goldfinch60 said:
Inside that circle of trees I wander,
Into the words of your wonder.
January 20th, 2020 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Inside that circle of trees I wander,
Into the words of your wonder.
January 20th, 2020 01:56
across the stars
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds like a sweet place to be
January 11th, 2020 13:23
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds like a sweet place to be
January 11th, 2020 13:23
across the stars
orchidee said:
A fine write DA. Did ya see me? I\'m a blue-eyed-boy, ya know - as they say!
January 11th, 2020 12:42
orchidee said:
A fine write DA. Did ya see me? I\'m a blue-eyed-boy, ya know - as they say!
January 11th, 2020 12:42
anguish and despair
myself and me said:
It is OK to be anguish and despair. You are fighting a hard battle in your life. I admire your courage and your strength. Big hug from me. You will be the winner.
January 8th, 2020 18:07
myself and me said:
It is OK to be anguish and despair. You are fighting a hard battle in your life. I admire your courage and your strength. Big hug from me. You will be the winner.
January 8th, 2020 18:07
anguish and despair
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good morning DA - Thnaks for sharing dome of the debilitating effects of CHEMOTHERAPY ! It will be helpful for others in similar circumstances - to know they are not alone - and I trust it is CATHARTIC for YOU. As a PHYSIO I have clients who are Cancers Patients and AQUATHERAPY and AROMATHERAPY Masage can be beneficial in maintaing quality of LIFE.
Every Blessing for the FUTURE for YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 8th, 2020 07:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good morning DA - Thnaks for sharing dome of the debilitating effects of CHEMOTHERAPY ! It will be helpful for others in similar circumstances - to know they are not alone - and I trust it is CATHARTIC for YOU. As a PHYSIO I have clients who are Cancers Patients and AQUATHERAPY and AROMATHERAPY Masage can be beneficial in maintaing quality of LIFE.
Every Blessing for the FUTURE for YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
January 8th, 2020 07:09
anguish and despair
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-wrenching read my dear brave friend - -with you as you fight for your better health - may you keep looking forward to lighter tomorrows - - -comforting hugs meanwhile.
January 8th, 2020 05:07
Fay Slimm. said:
A heart-wrenching read my dear brave friend - -with you as you fight for your better health - may you keep looking forward to lighter tomorrows - - -comforting hugs meanwhile.
January 8th, 2020 05:07
anguish and despair
orchidee said:
A sensitive write DA.
You\'re not on theme of religion - but whether of any religion or none, we can all share compassionately with you in this.
A church interestingly has advertised: \'Meditation Group, for those of any faith or none\'.
January 8th, 2020 02:42
orchidee said:
A sensitive write DA.
You\'re not on theme of religion - but whether of any religion or none, we can all share compassionately with you in this.
A church interestingly has advertised: \'Meditation Group, for those of any faith or none\'.
January 8th, 2020 02:42
birth of a poet (No 1)
Fay Slimm. said:
A poet\'s poem indeed - this has to be one of your best D.A. - into my faves it goes.
January 7th, 2020 03:37
Fay Slimm. said:
A poet\'s poem indeed - this has to be one of your best D.A. - into my faves it goes.
January 7th, 2020 03:37
birth of a poet (No 1)
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write d a, writing is unique to each one of us, it is possibly the only way we can express our thoughts.
We just need to express ourselves in the words we can find in our minds.
Andy
January 7th, 2020 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Great write d a, writing is unique to each one of us, it is possibly the only way we can express our thoughts.
We just need to express ourselves in the words we can find in our minds.
Andy
January 7th, 2020 01:38
birth of a poet (No 1)
Poetic Dan said:
You are probably right on cheating but it happens most of the time. If it gets going in my mind before I hit the keyboard, it feels sublime, like lucidity until I type....
Great stuff, as ever my friend!
January 6th, 2020 14:41
Poetic Dan said:
You are probably right on cheating but it happens most of the time. If it gets going in my mind before I hit the keyboard, it feels sublime, like lucidity until I type....
Great stuff, as ever my friend!
January 6th, 2020 14:41
birth of a poet (No 1)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing DA ~ you touch on some intersting points about Poetry in your elegant Poem ! In our experience ~ when the muse moves ~ the first Draft is often the most poignant ~ adding verse of often dilutes the impact ! At School we were taught *Poetry does not have to RHYME and should not be RHYME LED !* Even though this site is called *MY POETIC SIDE* many contributions are PROSE and ours today could be construed as a LIST but many Poems are LISTS and *Modern Poetry* just has to be a Statement ~ without Rhyme or Rhythm (and often without reason !) Thanks for all your contributions & comments !
Peace & Joy & Contentment for 2020
Yours Brian & Angela 💙🧡💙
January 6th, 2020 04:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing DA ~ you touch on some intersting points about Poetry in your elegant Poem ! In our experience ~ when the muse moves ~ the first Draft is often the most poignant ~ adding verse of often dilutes the impact ! At School we were taught *Poetry does not have to RHYME and should not be RHYME LED !* Even though this site is called *MY POETIC SIDE* many contributions are PROSE and ours today could be construed as a LIST but many Poems are LISTS and *Modern Poetry* just has to be a Statement ~ without Rhyme or Rhythm (and often without reason !) Thanks for all your contributions & comments !
Peace & Joy & Contentment for 2020
Yours Brian & Angela 💙🧡💙
January 6th, 2020 04:36
birth of a poet (No 1)
Michael Edwards said:
Great language and metre - a superb write - my first fav for several months.
January 6th, 2020 03:40
Michael Edwards said:
Great language and metre - a superb write - my first fav for several months.
January 6th, 2020 03:40
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