Comments received on poems by dusk arising
this special springtime
Michael Edwards said:
Makes me realise I am blessed - I have this on my doorstep and take an hours walk every day enjoying nature at its best. What a fine write dusk.
April 22nd, 2020 13:29
Michael Edwards said:
Makes me realise I am blessed - I have this on my doorstep and take an hours walk every day enjoying nature at its best. What a fine write dusk.
April 22nd, 2020 13:29
this special springtime
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (Home Alone !) Thanks for sharing the Video - Awesome. I play folk guitar and that Performer is amazing. Such technique in both hands and a mature Voice & choice of Song - Beautiful ! Angela & I are blessed. At weekends we have a Wood close by and the bluebells are taking avantage of an open leaf canopy and less competition from other *wild flowers* early in the season ! There is also a lake & a stream and NO GATES !
Your POEM paints a beautiful Pastoral Spring Scene - Areas (like BEACHES & Open Air Swimming Pools - Golf Courses - Playgrounds) - no longer available to the majority - many of whom must view them dejectedly from the 18th Floor of *Grenfell Type Towers*. August ? Come she must ! Thanks for caring & sharing.
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
April 22nd, 2020 11:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (Home Alone !) Thanks for sharing the Video - Awesome. I play folk guitar and that Performer is amazing. Such technique in both hands and a mature Voice & choice of Song - Beautiful ! Angela & I are blessed. At weekends we have a Wood close by and the bluebells are taking avantage of an open leaf canopy and less competition from other *wild flowers* early in the season ! There is also a lake & a stream and NO GATES !
Your POEM paints a beautiful Pastoral Spring Scene - Areas (like BEACHES & Open Air Swimming Pools - Golf Courses - Playgrounds) - no longer available to the majority - many of whom must view them dejectedly from the 18th Floor of *Grenfell Type Towers*. August ? Come she must ! Thanks for caring & sharing.
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
April 22nd, 2020 11:09
this special springtime
orchidee said:
Or hopefully, late Summer fetes this year - in the Autumn?! A fine Spring write Dusk.
April 22nd, 2020 10:21
orchidee said:
Or hopefully, late Summer fetes this year - in the Autumn?! A fine Spring write Dusk.
April 22nd, 2020 10:21
this special springtime
daisychain said:
What beautiful words, and such a lovely song from the little girl. Thanks.
April 22nd, 2020 10:07
daisychain said:
What beautiful words, and such a lovely song from the little girl. Thanks.
April 22nd, 2020 10:07
covid-19 solidarity
Poetic Dan said:
Powerful vibration my friend, love it!
Much peace and respect
April 21st, 2020 15:12
Poetic Dan said:
Powerful vibration my friend, love it!
Much peace and respect
April 21st, 2020 15:12
covid-19 solidarity
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write, if we follow the rules we should stay safe but many do not and the idea of lifting the isolation is quite frightening at the moment.
Stay safe d a.
Andy
April 21st, 2020 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write, if we follow the rules we should stay safe but many do not and the idea of lifting the isolation is quite frightening at the moment.
Stay safe d a.
Andy
April 21st, 2020 01:02
covid-19 solidarity
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful and very poetic reminder that this virus needs fighting with all we\'ve got - I second your slaking of such a coward.......... and a big thank you for the lovely number by one of my favourite singers.
April 20th, 2020 16:06
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful and very poetic reminder that this virus needs fighting with all we\'ve got - I second your slaking of such a coward.......... and a big thank you for the lovely number by one of my favourite singers.
April 20th, 2020 16:06
covid-19 solidarity
Michael Edwards said:
Ditto, ditto, ditto. Can\'t say more!!
April 20th, 2020 12:55
Michael Edwards said:
Ditto, ditto, ditto. Can\'t say more!!
April 20th, 2020 12:55
covid-19 solidarity
orchidee said:
It\'s enough to make us write something like this also, to the greedy people around, and those who are doing their worst at this time, e.g. spitting at front-line workers.
I\'m busy ya know - collecting funds for Branson\'s private island upkeep. He says his airline may go bust. If it does, I feel for the staff, but not for him.
Have to help him all we can, ya know. Doh!
April 20th, 2020 11:51
orchidee said:
It\'s enough to make us write something like this also, to the greedy people around, and those who are doing their worst at this time, e.g. spitting at front-line workers.
I\'m busy ya know - collecting funds for Branson\'s private island upkeep. He says his airline may go bust. If it does, I feel for the staff, but not for him.
Have to help him all we can, ya know. Doh!
April 20th, 2020 11:51
covid-19 solidarity
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Afternoon DA. Your very powerful Poem expresses the way how most of us in *statutory* LOCKDOWN really feel about COVID 19. Thanks for sharing the Poem & the Video.
Peace &Joy to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
April 20th, 2020 09:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Afternoon DA. Your very powerful Poem expresses the way how most of us in *statutory* LOCKDOWN really feel about COVID 19. Thanks for sharing the Poem & the Video.
Peace &Joy to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🤍💙
April 20th, 2020 09:03
grace
FredPeyer said:
A very tender ode to all the victims of this virus. Thank you d.a.!
April 18th, 2020 11:09
FredPeyer said:
A very tender ode to all the victims of this virus. Thank you d.a.!
April 18th, 2020 11:09
grace
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emeotive write d a, may we remember all who fade from our lives.
Andy
April 18th, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emeotive write d a, may we remember all who fade from our lives.
Andy
April 18th, 2020 01:41
perfumed rose
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good sensual write.
One more you have introduced me to a musician of whom I have never heard, I will have to explore Shankar Tucker further.
Andy
April 18th, 2020 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good sensual write.
One more you have introduced me to a musician of whom I have never heard, I will have to explore Shankar Tucker further.
Andy
April 18th, 2020 01:38
what love will do
Neville said:
This is summat just a little bit extra special...
because it does exactly what it say\'s on the label ….
April 16th, 2020 05:44
Neville said:
This is summat just a little bit extra special...
because it does exactly what it say\'s on the label ….
April 16th, 2020 05:44
what love will do
dusk arising said:
Those 105e anglias were something... the doors were so heavy that they drooped, you had to lift them up to shut them.
April 15th, 2020 07:39
dusk arising said:
Those 105e anglias were something... the doors were so heavy that they drooped, you had to lift them up to shut them.
April 15th, 2020 07:39
what love will do
Michael Edwards said:
Had to make do in an old Ford Anglia - nice one dusk
April 15th, 2020 07:05
Michael Edwards said:
Had to make do in an old Ford Anglia - nice one dusk
April 15th, 2020 07:05
what love will do
Fay Slimm. said:
Describer to a tee this feeling of second-time round according to memory being the best - - nought like like a teenager in an ol\' cortina love nest. - - great read D.A.
April 15th, 2020 05:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Describer to a tee this feeling of second-time round according to memory being the best - - nought like like a teenager in an ol\' cortina love nest. - - great read D.A.
April 15th, 2020 05:07
what love will do
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will always be there in our lives and may the good ones always come to the fore.
Andy
April 15th, 2020 00:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will always be there in our lives and may the good ones always come to the fore.
Andy
April 15th, 2020 00:46
Persistence is..... what?
Goldfinch60 said:
My \'madness\' left me when prayers were not answered.
Andy
April 14th, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
My \'madness\' left me when prayers were not answered.
Andy
April 14th, 2020 01:41
Persistence is..... what?
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - light-heartedly - persistence is me trying to improve me singing - impossible! heehee.
April 14th, 2020 01:40
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - light-heartedly - persistence is me trying to improve me singing - impossible! heehee.
April 14th, 2020 01:40
easter celebrations
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree with Neville - tis odd indeed
- -- and questions raised here would require answers that would mean the breaking of many rules of religion.
April 13th, 2020 06:03
Fay Slimm. said:
Agree with Neville - tis odd indeed
- -- and questions raised here would require answers that would mean the breaking of many rules of religion.
April 13th, 2020 06:03
easter celebrations
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, as you know I was a christian, I was even a Chaplain and led services but that all changed and a weight was lifted from me. Those dual standards are there all the time, the only belief that is important is your own that is within you, as mine now is. Cbristianity is a farce!
Andy
April 13th, 2020 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, as you know I was a christian, I was even a Chaplain and led services but that all changed and a weight was lifted from me. Those dual standards are there all the time, the only belief that is important is your own that is within you, as mine now is. Cbristianity is a farce!
Andy
April 13th, 2020 01:06
easter celebrations
FineB said:
Thanks Dusk Arising,
A good write and thought provoking poem.
Well, Corvid 19 is certainly challenging people of faith around the world.
May God bless you and keep you safe through this pandemic.
Keep writing FineB
April 12th, 2020 11:42
FineB said:
Thanks Dusk Arising,
A good write and thought provoking poem.
Well, Corvid 19 is certainly challenging people of faith around the world.
May God bless you and keep you safe through this pandemic.
Keep writing FineB
April 12th, 2020 11:42
easter celebrations
Neville said:
Tis odd, an observation and subsequent opinion shared by many I imagine.......
April 12th, 2020 11:30
Neville said:
Tis odd, an observation and subsequent opinion shared by many I imagine.......
April 12th, 2020 11:30
covid city morning
Neville said:
Say it like it truly is....
starkly surreal mid
such emptiness and beauty..
a beautifully dark.. ragged and real poem of the moment....
Neville
April 10th, 2020 08:01
Neville said:
Say it like it truly is....
starkly surreal mid
such emptiness and beauty..
a beautifully dark.. ragged and real poem of the moment....
Neville
April 10th, 2020 08:01
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