Comments received on poems by dusk arising
Jerry the fox terrier
Seek said:
A delightful write. I suppose it\'s about the poet\'s temperament, our triumphs and travails. But please try to shoo us away from our madness and see what gives!
February 24th, 2020 09:08
Seek said:
A delightful write. I suppose it\'s about the poet\'s temperament, our triumphs and travails. But please try to shoo us away from our madness and see what gives!
February 24th, 2020 09:08
Jerry the fox terrier
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done to my delight!
Always appreciate your wonderful light!
February 23rd, 2020 05:19
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done to my delight!
Always appreciate your wonderful light!
February 23rd, 2020 05:19
Jerry the fox terrier
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Very Droll DA we both loved it PIC & POEM ! Are you vying with STEVES (Orchidees) FIDO for the cutest Canine on MPS ? My (BRIAN) Sister has a Fox Terrier and (when active) they are of all Dogs most cute ! Thanks for caring ~ hope Jerry stops decomposing (shedding hair) and keeps on composing for *MY PAWETIC SIGHS* ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛💛💛
February 22nd, 2020 06:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Very Droll DA we both loved it PIC & POEM ! Are you vying with STEVES (Orchidees) FIDO for the cutest Canine on MPS ? My (BRIAN) Sister has a Fox Terrier and (when active) they are of all Dogs most cute ! Thanks for caring ~ hope Jerry stops decomposing (shedding hair) and keeps on composing for *MY PAWETIC SIGHS* ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛💛💛
February 22nd, 2020 06:58
Jerry the fox terrier
Saxon Crow said:
Haha. Great poem. Thanks DA for sharing.
February 22nd, 2020 01:43
Saxon Crow said:
Haha. Great poem. Thanks DA for sharing.
February 22nd, 2020 01:43
Jerry the fox terrier
FoolishHeart said:
Wonderful poem and quite the enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing your poem!
February 22nd, 2020 01:24
FoolishHeart said:
Wonderful poem and quite the enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing your poem!
February 22nd, 2020 01:24
the receptionist mumbles
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write, thank you for my first laugh of the day.
Andy
February 19th, 2020 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write, thank you for my first laugh of the day.
Andy
February 19th, 2020 02:44
the receptionist mumbles
SureshG said:
Oxymoronic ending - something that sounds so bad can be written in a way that forces a wide smile and a guilty laughter.
Thanks for sharing
February 19th, 2020 01:09
SureshG said:
Oxymoronic ending - something that sounds so bad can be written in a way that forces a wide smile and a guilty laughter.
Thanks for sharing
February 19th, 2020 01:09
the receptionist mumbles
Michael Edwards said:
Lips that look like inflated sausages I do know but i\'ve yet to see eyebrows fashioned in the Epping Forest cut. Great finish to this - gave me an inflated grin..
February 18th, 2020 14:33
Michael Edwards said:
Lips that look like inflated sausages I do know but i\'ve yet to see eyebrows fashioned in the Epping Forest cut. Great finish to this - gave me an inflated grin..
February 18th, 2020 14:33
the receptionist mumbles
Fay Slimm. said:
Still blushing at my naughty mind and when I read the last line had to burst out laughing........ my dentist never does this for me !!
February 18th, 2020 11:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Still blushing at my naughty mind and when I read the last line had to burst out laughing........ my dentist never does this for me !!
February 18th, 2020 11:51
Ocean
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, thanks for sharing and I think you brought the sun!
February 17th, 2020 04:04
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, thanks for sharing and I think you brought the sun!
February 17th, 2020 04:04
Ocean
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
A great write!
Watching out for that ‘maelstrom’...
it can cause such pandemonium!
I enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 17th, 2020 02:39
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
A great write!
Watching out for that ‘maelstrom’...
it can cause such pandemonium!
I enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
February 17th, 2020 02:39
Ocean
Michael Edwards said:
A great work with some super lines - much enjoyed.
February 17th, 2020 01:37
Michael Edwards said:
A great work with some super lines - much enjoyed.
February 17th, 2020 01:37
Ocean
Goldfinch60 said:
I though it was Dennis back in town. LOL.
Terrific write d a, I can see Ocean within your words attracting those poor souls to their doom.
Andy
February 17th, 2020 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
I though it was Dennis back in town. LOL.
Terrific write d a, I can see Ocean within your words attracting those poor souls to their doom.
Andy
February 17th, 2020 01:12
torn but not forgotten
Neville said:
a brilliant title and a great narrative poem
with some classic exchanges throughout the conversation
…. Neville
February 15th, 2020 14:04
Neville said:
a brilliant title and a great narrative poem
with some classic exchanges throughout the conversation
…. Neville
February 15th, 2020 14:04
valentines that never came
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in my life at present.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
So true in my life at present.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:27
valentines that never came
Neville said:
Blimey mate, I am so glad I read your authors note... coz I was playing Janis Ian earlier and for a micro-second thought... Nah.. it can\'t be....
Nice of you to post my friend and what a song eh...
February 14th, 2020 10:02
Neville said:
Blimey mate, I am so glad I read your authors note... coz I was playing Janis Ian earlier and for a micro-second thought... Nah.. it can\'t be....
Nice of you to post my friend and what a song eh...
February 14th, 2020 10:02
windy
rrodriguez said:
I remembered when I was a child in the hill flying kites. Excellent!
February 14th, 2020 09:55
rrodriguez said:
I remembered when I was a child in the hill flying kites. Excellent!
February 14th, 2020 09:55
valentines that never came
Poetic Dan said:
I teach mine to close their eyes get in the Groves, music is here just for you!
Very sad but beautiful writing my friend
February 14th, 2020 08:23
Poetic Dan said:
I teach mine to close their eyes get in the Groves, music is here just for you!
Very sad but beautiful writing my friend
February 14th, 2020 08:23
valentines that never came
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks DA for sharing the negative side of VALENTINES DAY which some endure Year after Year. SAXON CROW & I have been accentuating the POSITIVE TODAY because thats how it is for us - OK. Janis Joplins 17 year old lament is straight from the Heart ! I know Girls (and some are in our Yourh Club !) who will get NO CARD TODAY and will have NO ONE to send a CARD TO ! Brian & I have had our HEARTACHES in the past but the last three Years have been perfect (apart for a separation of 15 months while I was in NZ on Work Exchange) but the ABSENCE really did make our Hearts grow Fonder ! BRIAN & I will be at the Catholic Dinner Dance to night ! Although we will dance TOGETHER we will also take time to Dance with the lonely Singles. Thats what Shared True Love is all about - AMEN. For many life is not *Coming up Roses* Thanks for the reminder !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
February 14th, 2020 05:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks DA for sharing the negative side of VALENTINES DAY which some endure Year after Year. SAXON CROW & I have been accentuating the POSITIVE TODAY because thats how it is for us - OK. Janis Joplins 17 year old lament is straight from the Heart ! I know Girls (and some are in our Yourh Club !) who will get NO CARD TODAY and will have NO ONE to send a CARD TO ! Brian & I have had our HEARTACHES in the past but the last three Years have been perfect (apart for a separation of 15 months while I was in NZ on Work Exchange) but the ABSENCE really did make our Hearts grow Fonder ! BRIAN & I will be at the Catholic Dinner Dance to night ! Although we will dance TOGETHER we will also take time to Dance with the lonely Singles. Thats what Shared True Love is all about - AMEN. For many life is not *Coming up Roses* Thanks for the reminder !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛💛💛
February 14th, 2020 05:24
valentines that never came
Saxon Crow said:
Very good lyrics and I can relate, especially the basketball bit!
February 14th, 2020 04:20
Saxon Crow said:
Very good lyrics and I can relate, especially the basketball bit!
February 14th, 2020 04:20
windy
Neville said:
Very timely and apt … we have another on the way methinks...
the older I get it seems the more I love these childhood reminisces.. keep em coming .. they brighten the windiest of days.... N
February 13th, 2020 18:10
Neville said:
Very timely and apt … we have another on the way methinks...
the older I get it seems the more I love these childhood reminisces.. keep em coming .. they brighten the windiest of days.... N
February 13th, 2020 18:10
The only love she held onto
Saxon Crow said:
I love this poem DA it touched my heart.
February 13th, 2020 05:31
Saxon Crow said:
I love this poem DA it touched my heart.
February 13th, 2020 05:31
The only love she held onto
MendedFences27 said:
Loved the seasonal comparisons and the descriptive phrases to describe each. \"damp breeze which shuddered across her bones,\" and \"wrap up warm.\" Let\'s not forget the enchanting title phrase as well, \"the only love she held onto\"\". Just great stuff. Brilliant! - Phil A.
February 12th, 2020 23:18
MendedFences27 said:
Loved the seasonal comparisons and the descriptive phrases to describe each. \"damp breeze which shuddered across her bones,\" and \"wrap up warm.\" Let\'s not forget the enchanting title phrase as well, \"the only love she held onto\"\". Just great stuff. Brilliant! - Phil A.
February 12th, 2020 23:18
The only love she held onto
FredPeyer said:
Intriguing with a surprise ending. Well done, d.a.!
February 12th, 2020 13:06
FredPeyer said:
Intriguing with a surprise ending. Well done, d.a.!
February 12th, 2020 13:06
the curse of the apostrophe
Neville said:
Tis a curse of pandemic proportion & may well be the death of me.... thanks for the reminder... I believe incorrect spelling is one way around it tho… sez I....
February 12th, 2020 06:21
Neville said:
Tis a curse of pandemic proportion & may well be the death of me.... thanks for the reminder... I believe incorrect spelling is one way around it tho… sez I....
February 12th, 2020 06:21
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