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just an oak bench
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write d a, I too have written about a bench in the past, I wonder what they have seen in their long lives.
October 30th, 2019 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write d a, I too have written about a bench in the past, I wonder what they have seen in their long lives.
October 30th, 2019 02:24
Sunday Reverence
Suresh said:
Everybody is for sale, even the messenger......
October 28th, 2019 18:28
Suresh said:
Everybody is for sale, even the messenger......
October 28th, 2019 18:28
no big shakes
Neville said:
I love the way this reads, the way it trips off the tongue and I love the fact you articulate a need that I think many of us both want and need.... nicely poemed DA....N
October 28th, 2019 11:11
Neville said:
I love the way this reads, the way it trips off the tongue and I love the fact you articulate a need that I think many of us both want and need.... nicely poemed DA....N
October 28th, 2019 11:11
come on in
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A super lovely poem, cool and sensational. The lyrical refrain gives it a fine song like touch. Kudos for the poetry.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 11:53
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A super lovely poem, cool and sensational. The lyrical refrain gives it a fine song like touch. Kudos for the poetry.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 11:53
come on in
Neville said:
this is awesome....
and no explanation is considered necessary...
October 16th, 2019 16:46
Neville said:
this is awesome....
and no explanation is considered necessary...
October 16th, 2019 16:46
come on in
Goldfinch60 said:
That evening star will forever shine on you d a.
October 16th, 2019 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
That evening star will forever shine on you d a.
October 16th, 2019 01:17
no big shakes
Suresh said:
Yes,
(at the other end of the country)
Is the only way one can remain
(just friends)
but that\'s how it rarely play out.
October 15th, 2019 11:49
Suresh said:
Yes,
(at the other end of the country)
Is the only way one can remain
(just friends)
but that\'s how it rarely play out.
October 15th, 2019 11:49
no big shakes
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'bolt holes\' are so important in our lives. While I was looking after Joyce my \'bolt hole\' was writing words - now it seems to be croquet!
October 15th, 2019 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Those \'bolt holes\' are so important in our lives. While I was looking after Joyce my \'bolt hole\' was writing words - now it seems to be croquet!
October 15th, 2019 00:39
no big shakes
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve got my own bolt hole - a studio remote from the house where I can listen to real music with the fire on and paint to my hearts content in a \'Strictly-Come-Dncing freee zone\' - heaven.
October 14th, 2019 10:24
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve got my own bolt hole - a studio remote from the house where I can listen to real music with the fire on and paint to my hearts content in a \'Strictly-Come-Dncing freee zone\' - heaven.
October 14th, 2019 10:24
Sunday Reverence
FineB said:
Hi Dusk Arising
A good write and very interesting.
Sunday reverence must be deep and meaningful and not just skin deep.
Keep writing FineB
October 14th, 2019 09:31
FineB said:
Hi Dusk Arising
A good write and very interesting.
Sunday reverence must be deep and meaningful and not just skin deep.
Keep writing FineB
October 14th, 2019 09:31
no big shakes
orchidee said:
No use asking me to sing from the same sheet! lol.
October 14th, 2019 06:16
orchidee said:
No use asking me to sing from the same sheet! lol.
October 14th, 2019 06:16
Sunday Reverence
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words d a.
Back in my teens I used to go to a church and very soon realised that many of the people went there so they could be \'seen to be going to church\' nothing to do with belief.
October 14th, 2019 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words d a.
Back in my teens I used to go to a church and very soon realised that many of the people went there so they could be \'seen to be going to church\' nothing to do with belief.
October 14th, 2019 00:29
Sunday Reverence
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (FROM NZ 11am MONDAY !) We did have a Problem especially on a Tuesay for MUMS & TOTS (best attended Service of the week over 100 !) Only Parking for about 20 cars and a busy ROAD. Behind the Church was a Tennis Court ( belonging to a Neighbour) overgrown & never used ! We made an offer (£35k) which was accepted built a Car Park for 50 more cars (£65k) We raised the £100k (we dont have to Pay our Leadership Team) and our Parking Problem has been solved. Our membership has increased (to 100+) because we have good parking ! People used to walk to Church 100 years ago so many older Churches were built without Car Parks and still dont have them ! Posh people have to be reminded that \"God does not look on the outer trappings but on the HEART ~ AMEN
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Yours B & A 💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 13th, 2019 18:44
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (FROM NZ 11am MONDAY !) We did have a Problem especially on a Tuesay for MUMS & TOTS (best attended Service of the week over 100 !) Only Parking for about 20 cars and a busy ROAD. Behind the Church was a Tennis Court ( belonging to a Neighbour) overgrown & never used ! We made an offer (£35k) which was accepted built a Car Park for 50 more cars (£65k) We raised the £100k (we dont have to Pay our Leadership Team) and our Parking Problem has been solved. Our membership has increased (to 100+) because we have good parking ! People used to walk to Church 100 years ago so many older Churches were built without Car Parks and still dont have them ! Posh people have to be reminded that \"God does not look on the outer trappings but on the HEART ~ AMEN
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Yours B & A 💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 13th, 2019 18:44
Sunday Reverence
Michael Edwards said:
We have a 12th century church in the village. I can\'t say those who attend are \'posh\' but they are very possesive - there\'s only a few and woe betide if you open the gate and sit in one of their enclosed pews.
October 13th, 2019 11:40
Michael Edwards said:
We have a 12th century church in the village. I can\'t say those who attend are \'posh\' but they are very possesive - there\'s only a few and woe betide if you open the gate and sit in one of their enclosed pews.
October 13th, 2019 11:40
Sunday Reverence
Laura🌻 said:
D A,
Thank you for sharing
your beautiful poem!
Happy Sunday to you as well!
~Laura~🌻
October 13th, 2019 07:33
Laura🌻 said:
D A,
Thank you for sharing
your beautiful poem!
Happy Sunday to you as well!
~Laura~🌻
October 13th, 2019 07:33
those years
Poetic Dan said:
.... Now that was a supercalifragilisticexpialidocious read indeed my friend! Through my skin, past my bones to my core your words always sit!
Thank you
October 13th, 2019 02:00
Poetic Dan said:
.... Now that was a supercalifragilisticexpialidocious read indeed my friend! Through my skin, past my bones to my core your words always sit!
Thank you
October 13th, 2019 02:00
those years
Fay Slimm. said:
An unforgettable read which recounts time\'s ability - we need those meadows in which to dream after bones have grown weary my friend.......... saved this one to read again...........and again........... Fay
October 11th, 2019 02:56
Fay Slimm. said:
An unforgettable read which recounts time\'s ability - we need those meadows in which to dream after bones have grown weary my friend.......... saved this one to read again...........and again........... Fay
October 11th, 2019 02:56
those years
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams will always be with you and you will meet them in eternity.
October 11th, 2019 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Those dreams will always be with you and you will meet them in eternity.
October 11th, 2019 01:47
a taste to forget
Thoughts In Time said:
All shall be well..remember the power within...you’ve got this and I believe you are capable of overcoming all..intense write..don’t give up the fight 🌹
October 11th, 2019 01:15
Thoughts In Time said:
All shall be well..remember the power within...you’ve got this and I believe you are capable of overcoming all..intense write..don’t give up the fight 🌹
October 11th, 2019 01:15
those years
Thoughts In Time said:
Just beautiful...I love it when you ask..’who haunts these bones’..is it us ..the me...I believe the spirit is free to connect where it needs to be...wonderful words 🌹
October 11th, 2019 01:12
Thoughts In Time said:
Just beautiful...I love it when you ask..’who haunts these bones’..is it us ..the me...I believe the spirit is free to connect where it needs to be...wonderful words 🌹
October 11th, 2019 01:12
Mr Freedom
Goldfinch60 said:
Great piece, I have only just got up and this makes me want to lay back and enjoy the freedom once more.
October 8th, 2019 23:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Great piece, I have only just got up and this makes me want to lay back and enjoy the freedom once more.
October 8th, 2019 23:35
Mr Freedom
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, d a! There are days when all of us who are in a relationship dream of Mr Freedom, even if it is only for a few hours!
To me it feels more like a country music tune.
October 8th, 2019 11:45
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, d a! There are days when all of us who are in a relationship dream of Mr Freedom, even if it is only for a few hours!
To me it feels more like a country music tune.
October 8th, 2019 11:45
Mr Freedom
Poetic Dan said:
Loved it! Great tune in my head, definitely with jazz music!
Always appreciated much peace and respect
October 8th, 2019 04:34
Poetic Dan said:
Loved it! Great tune in my head, definitely with jazz music!
Always appreciated much peace and respect
October 8th, 2019 04:34
Shriek
Goldfinch60 said:
That second stanza is so powerful, gone are the days of the fishermen of old bringing home the catch.
We were walking along a beach once and saw two gulls go to a bag on the beach, the owners were swimming in the sea, pull out a bag of breadsticks and eat the lot.
October 8th, 2019 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That second stanza is so powerful, gone are the days of the fishermen of old bringing home the catch.
We were walking along a beach once and saw two gulls go to a bag on the beach, the owners were swimming in the sea, pull out a bag of breadsticks and eat the lot.
October 8th, 2019 00:49
Shriek
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - -- never knew gulls could shout for entrails - a great surprise ending for this intriguingly clever write - - love the powerful flow of the piece - - shall think of your words dear dusk the next time I walk round the harbour and hear the birds shriek.
October 7th, 2019 13:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - -- never knew gulls could shout for entrails - a great surprise ending for this intriguingly clever write - - love the powerful flow of the piece - - shall think of your words dear dusk the next time I walk round the harbour and hear the birds shriek.
October 7th, 2019 13:57
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