Comments received on poems by dusk arising
those years
Thoughts In Time said:
Just beautiful...I love it when you ask..’who haunts these bones’..is it us ..the me...I believe the spirit is free to connect where it needs to be...wonderful words 🌹
October 11th, 2019 01:12
Thoughts In Time said:
Just beautiful...I love it when you ask..’who haunts these bones’..is it us ..the me...I believe the spirit is free to connect where it needs to be...wonderful words 🌹
October 11th, 2019 01:12
Mr Freedom
Goldfinch60 said:
Great piece, I have only just got up and this makes me want to lay back and enjoy the freedom once more.
October 8th, 2019 23:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Great piece, I have only just got up and this makes me want to lay back and enjoy the freedom once more.
October 8th, 2019 23:35
Mr Freedom
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, d a! There are days when all of us who are in a relationship dream of Mr Freedom, even if it is only for a few hours!
To me it feels more like a country music tune.
October 8th, 2019 11:45
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, d a! There are days when all of us who are in a relationship dream of Mr Freedom, even if it is only for a few hours!
To me it feels more like a country music tune.
October 8th, 2019 11:45
Mr Freedom
Poetic Dan said:
Loved it! Great tune in my head, definitely with jazz music!
Always appreciated much peace and respect
October 8th, 2019 04:34
Poetic Dan said:
Loved it! Great tune in my head, definitely with jazz music!
Always appreciated much peace and respect
October 8th, 2019 04:34
Shriek
Goldfinch60 said:
That second stanza is so powerful, gone are the days of the fishermen of old bringing home the catch.
We were walking along a beach once and saw two gulls go to a bag on the beach, the owners were swimming in the sea, pull out a bag of breadsticks and eat the lot.
October 8th, 2019 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That second stanza is so powerful, gone are the days of the fishermen of old bringing home the catch.
We were walking along a beach once and saw two gulls go to a bag on the beach, the owners were swimming in the sea, pull out a bag of breadsticks and eat the lot.
October 8th, 2019 00:49
Shriek
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - -- never knew gulls could shout for entrails - a great surprise ending for this intriguingly clever write - - love the powerful flow of the piece - - shall think of your words dear dusk the next time I walk round the harbour and hear the birds shriek.
October 7th, 2019 13:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - -- never knew gulls could shout for entrails - a great surprise ending for this intriguingly clever write - - love the powerful flow of the piece - - shall think of your words dear dusk the next time I walk round the harbour and hear the birds shriek.
October 7th, 2019 13:57
Shriek
Michael Edwards said:
Love it - keeps you guessing till the last line.
October 7th, 2019 10:11
Michael Edwards said:
Love it - keeps you guessing till the last line.
October 7th, 2019 10:11
Shriek
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
The seaside gulls have progressed to chips nowadays, I understand. Evolution at it\'s worst! This piece is megga-good so will make it a fave\' if I may. ~ if I can hit the correct box.
Kind regards, Alan
October 7th, 2019 07:27
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
The seaside gulls have progressed to chips nowadays, I understand. Evolution at it\'s worst! This piece is megga-good so will make it a fave\' if I may. ~ if I can hit the correct box.
Kind regards, Alan
October 7th, 2019 07:27
just a half written song
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad you decided to post this bit of blues - I reckon it would go as well as Cohen\'s if broadcast further than this little site..........
October 3rd, 2019 11:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad you decided to post this bit of blues - I reckon it would go as well as Cohen\'s if broadcast further than this little site..........
October 3rd, 2019 11:05
just a half written song
Neville said:
Sounds good in my head mate and dont look bad on the page either...
Love the blues..... N
October 3rd, 2019 11:02
Neville said:
Sounds good in my head mate and dont look bad on the page either...
Love the blues..... N
October 3rd, 2019 11:02
just a half written song
Christina8 said:
I think this was a very catchy tune (in my mind anyway) and a lovely write. Wonderful, DA!
October 3rd, 2019 06:28
Christina8 said:
I think this was a very catchy tune (in my mind anyway) and a lovely write. Wonderful, DA!
October 3rd, 2019 06:28
just a half written song
Goldfinch60 said:
Those broken hearts can be fixed as the future is there for you.
Good song - do you have the tune?
October 3rd, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those broken hearts can be fixed as the future is there for you.
Good song - do you have the tune?
October 3rd, 2019 01:42
just a half written song
orchidee said:
I want to read the other half too! lol.
October 3rd, 2019 01:08
orchidee said:
I want to read the other half too! lol.
October 3rd, 2019 01:08
just a half written song
kevin browne said:
You got a hit and run and now it\'s time to be #1..Sounds like a catchy tune DA...
October 2nd, 2019 20:34
kevin browne said:
You got a hit and run and now it\'s time to be #1..Sounds like a catchy tune DA...
October 2nd, 2019 20:34
alighted
Neville said:
and why not I might ask....
sometimes one needs to grab the bull by its horns.... really got me salivating did these words DA.....N
October 1st, 2019 16:36
Neville said:
and why not I might ask....
sometimes one needs to grab the bull by its horns.... really got me salivating did these words DA.....N
October 1st, 2019 16:36
a taste to forget
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful emotive write d a, I do hope that soon you will feel better.
https://youtu.be/WRuY3_4BxhE
October 1st, 2019 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very powerful emotive write d a, I do hope that soon you will feel better.
https://youtu.be/WRuY3_4BxhE
October 1st, 2019 00:54
a taste to forget
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DA a very emotive piece about the SIDE EFFECTS of Chemo. I (BRIAN) am a Biochemist so I can understand the effects of Drugs on Human Physiology to combat C*N*E* And some of Angelas Clients are on Chemo - so to a degree we can emphasise without the experience - OK
Every Blessing - Thinkng & Praying for YOU
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
September 30th, 2019 17:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing DA a very emotive piece about the SIDE EFFECTS of Chemo. I (BRIAN) am a Biochemist so I can understand the effects of Drugs on Human Physiology to combat C*N*E* And some of Angelas Clients are on Chemo - so to a degree we can emphasise without the experience - OK
Every Blessing - Thinkng & Praying for YOU
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
September 30th, 2019 17:51
a taste to forget
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... I can\'t begin to know what the right thing is but what an ending. That burden to be a burden, thank you for sharing!
Much peace and respect
September 30th, 2019 15:54
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... I can\'t begin to know what the right thing is but what an ending. That burden to be a burden, thank you for sharing!
Much peace and respect
September 30th, 2019 15:54
a taste to forget
Bragee said:
very emotional piece that many ppl can relate to.
maybe we have it all wrong. Misery does not just love company but rather needs company
September 30th, 2019 14:50
Bragee said:
very emotional piece that many ppl can relate to.
maybe we have it all wrong. Misery does not just love company but rather needs company
September 30th, 2019 14:50
a taste to forget
Neville said:
what an incredibly powerful and emotive post today..... and one I think I can relate to......truly..
September 30th, 2019 14:32
Neville said:
what an incredibly powerful and emotive post today..... and one I think I can relate to......truly..
September 30th, 2019 14:32
worth it?
Christina8 said:
My future grandchildren and this planet are definitely worth it. Awesome writing and plea. It is frightening what is happening to the planet.
September 27th, 2019 06:45
Christina8 said:
My future grandchildren and this planet are definitely worth it. Awesome writing and plea. It is frightening what is happening to the planet.
September 27th, 2019 06:45
guilty
Suresh said:
Our thoughts, our actions, our sensibility, have all been hi-jacked by the ignorant and the arrogant - the cries, at best, leave us momentarily ashamed.
September 27th, 2019 00:05
Suresh said:
Our thoughts, our actions, our sensibility, have all been hi-jacked by the ignorant and the arrogant - the cries, at best, leave us momentarily ashamed.
September 27th, 2019 00:05
worth it?
Michael Edwards said:
They are - and it\'s our duty to do all we can. We take our own paper bags (made out of newspaper) with us when we visit the supermarket for vegetables. No way will we use the plastic bags provided.
September 26th, 2019 15:19
Michael Edwards said:
They are - and it\'s our duty to do all we can. We take our own paper bags (made out of newspaper) with us when we visit the supermarket for vegetables. No way will we use the plastic bags provided.
September 26th, 2019 15:19
worth it?
Fay Slimm. said:
The young one are quite rightly worth every move we make to force change my friend. Excellent points made in question form and thank you for making them dusk.
September 26th, 2019 07:44
Fay Slimm. said:
The young one are quite rightly worth every move we make to force change my friend. Excellent points made in question form and thank you for making them dusk.
September 26th, 2019 07:44
worth it?
Clara said:
What is happening to the Earth right now is certainly frightening. I\'ve often thought whether I actually want to bring a child into this world. To face the consequences. Great write showing stark reality.
September 26th, 2019 05:48
Clara said:
What is happening to the Earth right now is certainly frightening. I\'ve often thought whether I actually want to bring a child into this world. To face the consequences. Great write showing stark reality.
September 26th, 2019 05:48
guilty
marijoy said:
Well said. We are all guilty but we need to begin cleaning the universe and not just earth but it is getting rid of all the negativity including guilty. Guilty is one of the garbage that needs to be cleaned. Remember that we are all connected and what I do affects you and me. And vice versa. We need to begin cleaning our mind and heart. If we do so the rest will fall into place.
September 25th, 2019 21:50
marijoy said:
Well said. We are all guilty but we need to begin cleaning the universe and not just earth but it is getting rid of all the negativity including guilty. Guilty is one of the garbage that needs to be cleaned. Remember that we are all connected and what I do affects you and me. And vice versa. We need to begin cleaning our mind and heart. If we do so the rest will fall into place.
September 25th, 2019 21:50
guilty
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (9pm Wednesday in NZ) HI DA - Thanks for Caring and sharing about GRETA she deserves our support ! Brian - who is a Conservation Scientist - is at Work ! Your POEM complements our Poem Today *Out of the Mouths of BABES !* Thanks for your comment !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
September 25th, 2019 03:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (9pm Wednesday in NZ) HI DA - Thanks for Caring and sharing about GRETA she deserves our support ! Brian - who is a Conservation Scientist - is at Work ! Your POEM complements our Poem Today *Out of the Mouths of BABES !* Thanks for your comment !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
September 25th, 2019 03:55
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