Comments received on poems by Lorna
Fury
Coyote said:
Nice use of metaphore in this superb poem Lorna. Love the symphony as well.
August 19th, 2021 11:20
Coyote said:
Nice use of metaphore in this superb poem Lorna. Love the symphony as well.
August 19th, 2021 11:20
Fury
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Thank you for sharing a spot on description of last night’s storm…trees are down strewn in the middle of the street others resting on some cars. Ironically they were going to be pruned today and tomorrow.
I like the contrast between your choice of the pic and Beethoven’s symphony.
Laura 🌻
August 19th, 2021 09:47
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Thank you for sharing a spot on description of last night’s storm…trees are down strewn in the middle of the street others resting on some cars. Ironically they were going to be pruned today and tomorrow.
I like the contrast between your choice of the pic and Beethoven’s symphony.
Laura 🌻
August 19th, 2021 09:47
Fury
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Lorna – that ‘s a very vivid account of a thunder storm…in the morning? For me they seem to occur late afternoon or evening here.
I suppose you don’t want to hear my interpretation of such an event? No? Thought not…too late:
The heavy booted fellas upstairs are shifting the furniture again. They’ve knocked the water tank in the process and it is pouring out. The water has short circuited the electricity supply and there are flashes everywhere…
August 19th, 2021 07:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Lorna – that ‘s a very vivid account of a thunder storm…in the morning? For me they seem to occur late afternoon or evening here.
I suppose you don’t want to hear my interpretation of such an event? No? Thought not…too late:
The heavy booted fellas upstairs are shifting the furniture again. They’ve knocked the water tank in the process and it is pouring out. The water has short circuited the electricity supply and there are flashes everywhere…
August 19th, 2021 07:31
Fury
Poetic Dan said:
Love this and the energy you gave the beauty of nature we could write endless about.
Thank you
August 19th, 2021 07:02
Poetic Dan said:
Love this and the energy you gave the beauty of nature we could write endless about.
Thank you
August 19th, 2021 07:02
Ennui
Doggerel Dave said:
But Lorna , I\'m still not sure if Uncle Vanya flogged off the estate or not.. ..
A bit attention seeking with that vial, wasn\'t he?
August 17th, 2021 06:26
Doggerel Dave said:
But Lorna , I\'m still not sure if Uncle Vanya flogged off the estate or not.. ..
A bit attention seeking with that vial, wasn\'t he?
August 17th, 2021 06:26
Ennui
L. B. Mek said:
simply, Awesome!
\'The heat of summer
Dragging at one\'s feet
Supine beneath the willow
Hand on forehead
Springing turf to rest on as a pillow\'
(a beautifully vivid depiction
and such an immersive read
despite its melancholic feel,
thank you dear poet)
Ennui: Indeed, 😉
August 17th, 2021 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
simply, Awesome!
\'The heat of summer
Dragging at one\'s feet
Supine beneath the willow
Hand on forehead
Springing turf to rest on as a pillow\'
(a beautifully vivid depiction
and such an immersive read
despite its melancholic feel,
thank you dear poet)
Ennui: Indeed, 😉
August 17th, 2021 05:58
Ennui
Classicmister said:
Lovely evocative words Lorna - Sadly not much summer weather here in UK!
August 17th, 2021 05:18
Classicmister said:
Lovely evocative words Lorna - Sadly not much summer weather here in UK!
August 17th, 2021 05:18
Sunday Shivers
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alone does not necessarily lead to loneliness, there is so much in life to appreciate even if we are lone.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alone does not necessarily lead to loneliness, there is so much in life to appreciate even if we are lone.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:48
Sunday Shivers
Neville said:
there is something vaguely sinister about this .. maybe you drew my attention to my own mortality .. whatever the case, you did it without me moving my lips and just a little shiver .......................most enjoyably tho\' I might just add N :)
August 16th, 2021 13:45
Neville said:
there is something vaguely sinister about this .. maybe you drew my attention to my own mortality .. whatever the case, you did it without me moving my lips and just a little shiver .......................most enjoyably tho\' I might just add N :)
August 16th, 2021 13:45
Sunday Shivers
The elder poet said:
A dark poem. one expressing sad feelings. Is it of age ? I think of being alone . Well written. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:32
The elder poet said:
A dark poem. one expressing sad feelings. Is it of age ? I think of being alone . Well written. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:32
Sunday Shivers
Fay Slimm. said:
An hypnotic feel to this disclosure of what shivers a Sunday can deliver to those who hear time ticking on through Sunday quiet. A really evocative read dear Lorna.
August 16th, 2021 08:35
Fay Slimm. said:
An hypnotic feel to this disclosure of what shivers a Sunday can deliver to those who hear time ticking on through Sunday quiet. A really evocative read dear Lorna.
August 16th, 2021 08:35
Sunday Shivers
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I’m so happy it’s Monday morning!
Phew 😮💨
An intriguing and hypnotizing feeling came over me when listening to your excellent choice of video for your poem. The uneasiness of being alone on a Sunday night can be daunting.
Laura🌻
August 16th, 2021 07:57
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I’m so happy it’s Monday morning!
Phew 😮💨
An intriguing and hypnotizing feeling came over me when listening to your excellent choice of video for your poem. The uneasiness of being alone on a Sunday night can be daunting.
Laura🌻
August 16th, 2021 07:57
Sunday Shivers
Doggerel Dave said:
Sunday? used to be a bugger once.. now? Long time retired, Sunday just like every other day - especially during Covid lockdown....which looks like a long one...I just like my own company.. plus a visit to MPS... however I do know what yer mean...because you did it so neatly.
August 16th, 2021 07:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Sunday? used to be a bugger once.. now? Long time retired, Sunday just like every other day - especially during Covid lockdown....which looks like a long one...I just like my own company.. plus a visit to MPS... however I do know what yer mean...because you did it so neatly.
August 16th, 2021 07:46
Sunday Shivers
dusk arising said:
The eerie knowledge that one, alone, is heading passively toward the end of... end of what... end of control of ones faculties, end of freedom as a \'home\' beckons, health as susceptability to some gross illness?
I enjoyed the art and skill of your poem today and it\'s haunting tone.
August 16th, 2021 05:34
dusk arising said:
The eerie knowledge that one, alone, is heading passively toward the end of... end of what... end of control of ones faculties, end of freedom as a \'home\' beckons, health as susceptability to some gross illness?
I enjoyed the art and skill of your poem today and it\'s haunting tone.
August 16th, 2021 05:34
Sunday Shivers
L. B. Mek said:
wanna know something funny
the brilliant French vocabulary
put everything you\'re expressing/feeling
in this write, in-to just one word
\'Ennui\'
(literal definition of Sunday afternoon
sudden lacklustre mood)
lol, thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
wanna know something funny
the brilliant French vocabulary
put everything you\'re expressing/feeling
in this write, in-to just one word
\'Ennui\'
(literal definition of Sunday afternoon
sudden lacklustre mood)
lol, thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 05:24
The Great 20th Annual....... For Charity
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read,
a good deed,
thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read,
a good deed,
thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 04:01
The Great 20th Annual....... For Charity
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m with Neil here, Lorna I respectfully suggest you leave their thingamajig strictly alone . While your overflowing inbox might make you feel very wanted, these relationships are superficial and can only lead to successive blows to your self esteem when they turn out to be devoid of depth...... or something., blah blah...Your very own Agony Uncle.
August 16th, 2021 01:37
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m with Neil here, Lorna I respectfully suggest you leave their thingamajig strictly alone . While your overflowing inbox might make you feel very wanted, these relationships are superficial and can only lead to successive blows to your self esteem when they turn out to be devoid of depth...... or something., blah blah...Your very own Agony Uncle.
August 16th, 2021 01:37
The Great 20th Annual....... For Charity
Coyote said:
Next time Lorna...lol
Great poem and I\'m still laughing at the Duck Songs😂
August 15th, 2021 19:00
Coyote said:
Next time Lorna...lol
Great poem and I\'m still laughing at the Duck Songs😂
August 15th, 2021 19:00
Garden Art
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant and in so many ways .... a multi faceted little gem ma\'am .......................................... N :)
August 15th, 2021 11:45
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant and in so many ways .... a multi faceted little gem ma\'am .......................................... N :)
August 15th, 2021 11:45
Days Like This
Coyote said:
A poem not only good for the soul but mouses as well. A very smile inducing write Lorna🙂
August 15th, 2021 11:16
Coyote said:
A poem not only good for the soul but mouses as well. A very smile inducing write Lorna🙂
August 15th, 2021 11:16
Garden Art
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely imagery here Lorna. Most enjoyable
PS do you happen to know the artist of the picture?
August 15th, 2021 00:13
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely imagery here Lorna. Most enjoyable
PS do you happen to know the artist of the picture?
August 15th, 2021 00:13
Garden Art
Goldfinch60 said:
May that festival always be full of colour Lorna.
Andy
August 15th, 2021 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
May that festival always be full of colour Lorna.
Andy
August 15th, 2021 00:10
Garden Art
Coyote said:
Yes, this very descriptive piece paints a beautiful picture. Nice write and tfs🙂
August 14th, 2021 15:25
Coyote said:
Yes, this very descriptive piece paints a beautiful picture. Nice write and tfs🙂
August 14th, 2021 15:25
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