Comments received on poems by Lorna



Wanderlust
dusk arising said:

Reminded me of a feeling which comes over me in waves now and again. Parts of me belong all over the place maybe because i have no solid aged roots. But through it all, I am rooted to my surrounds and what is dear to me.

August 29th, 2021 12:59

Wanderlust
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

His departure might have left you bereft, but his ‘wanderlust’ may have been satisfied…and in that I’m sure you’ll find some solace.
A great read of your beautifully penned words.
Thank you for sharing.

Laura🌻



August 29th, 2021 11:56

Wanderlust
Accidental Poet said:

The urge to be free and explore many places has always fascinated mankind, and so beautifully penned here by you Lorna. I totally enjoyed this. 😉

August 29th, 2021 11:21

Worry
Coyote said:

Very nice Lorna.

August 23rd, 2021 11:13

Worry
L. B. Mek said:

\'That you are not lonely for me
As I am for you
That time stretches hands
To us both\'..
a little prayer, leaking from your heart\'s: purpled ink
in the hopes, that special someone will read
reflect and find a way, back into your forgiving arms...
thanks for sharing, such a wonderfully relatable read

August 23rd, 2021 05:44

Worry
Doggerel Dave said:

I never knew you cared, Lorna.....

A polished write that speaks of emptiness and longing.

August 23rd, 2021 04:02

Worry
dusk arising said:

Fine poetry which bridges the void.

August 23rd, 2021 02:44

Worry
Neville said:


it would be impossible not to love this incredibly sad & desperate plea ..
I know I do .. Neville

August 23rd, 2021 02:07

Garden Art
Caring dove said:

Sometimes I like to take pictures and use them as inspiration for a poem

August 23rd, 2021 01:59

Garden Art
Caring dove said:

Lovely picture and lovely poem )

August 23rd, 2021 01:59

Worry
Caring dove said:

Lovely words , Lorna )

August 23rd, 2021 01:56

Worry
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna.

August 23rd, 2021 01:43

Old Clock
Coyote said:

Time moves steadily on and all we can do is live one tick at a time. Great write Lorna.

August 22nd, 2021 16:31

Old Clock
dusk arising said:

Or ask, how much more can i fit into every minute, every hour, day, week year......

August 22nd, 2021 13:55

Old Clock
ron parrish aka wordman said:

thoughts to ponder

August 22nd, 2021 12:58

Old Clock
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.

August 22nd, 2021 10:11

Old Clock
Doggerel Dave said:

Ignore it, Lorna, ignore it. Agree with the sentiment embodied in your well penned piece, but still I ignore it.

August 22nd, 2021 04:30

Lands Sake!
Eugene S. said:

😁 I know your poetic family prepping for the storm. 👍 Great poem!

August 22nd, 2021 03:01

Lands Sake!
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.

August 22nd, 2021 01:45

Lands Sake!
Goldfinch60 said:

Great words Lorna, all will be safe.

Andy

August 22nd, 2021 00:39

Lands Sake!
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh lordy - love the vernacular, Lorna. Are You hunkered down OK? Roof bolted to mainframe?

August 21st, 2021 22:34

Lands Sake!
Accidental Poet said:

Standing ovation here Lorna. 👏 I could even hear Dylan singing this in my head. And I think he\'d love it too. 👍

August 21st, 2021 19:58

Ennui
cosmacpan said:

if you want...

Uncle Vania sold his garden
and bought a cherry orchard
knowing that the spring
will dress in white just for him
the clouds are crying
without giving up the blue of the sky
as for boredom
it\'s not an obligation.
it\'s a state of affairs
which urges to
introspection

August 21st, 2021 14:39

Never No More
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Lorna, these days we know how to deal with bullies.

Andy

August 21st, 2021 00:40

Never No More
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes Lorna precisely right - takes time to learn that uninformed opinion directed towards self means SFA. Well put.
As a rider though, more generally, uninformed opinion can be dangerous....

August 20th, 2021 21:36

Never No More
Accidental Poet said:

I\'ve seen those trolls pop up from time to time Lorna. Even here in MPS believe it or not. I just smile and ignore them. 😉 Excellent write.

August 20th, 2021 20:21

Never No More
Trenz Pruca said:

Good one Lorna. Thank you.

August 20th, 2021 16:23

Never No More
Neville said:

If it needs to be said it needs to be sad properly .. loud enough and with sufficient emphasis to scare the pants off of whomsoever it is aimed at ..................... this is great by the way ...................N

August 20th, 2021 08:42

Fury
Accidental Poet said:

Stormy here today too, but not as scary as your poem describes. Love the video, especially the laughing baby at the end. 😉

August 19th, 2021 19:02

Fury
dusk arising said:

I had to put my rubber boots on to read your poem. Well theres sure plenty of inspiration falling from the skies where I live for a poem like this to be written.
Strong powerful words.

August 19th, 2021 13:02



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