Comments received on poems by Lorna
Old Clock
dusk arising said:
Or ask, how much more can i fit into every minute, every hour, day, week year......
August 22nd, 2021 13:55
dusk arising said:
Or ask, how much more can i fit into every minute, every hour, day, week year......
August 22nd, 2021 13:55
Old Clock
Doggerel Dave said:
Ignore it, Lorna, ignore it. Agree with the sentiment embodied in your well penned piece, but still I ignore it.
August 22nd, 2021 04:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Ignore it, Lorna, ignore it. Agree with the sentiment embodied in your well penned piece, but still I ignore it.
August 22nd, 2021 04:30
Lands Sake!
Eugene S. said:
😁 I know your poetic family prepping for the storm. 👍 Great poem!
August 22nd, 2021 03:01
Eugene S. said:
😁 I know your poetic family prepping for the storm. 👍 Great poem!
August 22nd, 2021 03:01
Lands Sake!
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh lordy - love the vernacular, Lorna. Are You hunkered down OK? Roof bolted to mainframe?
August 21st, 2021 22:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh lordy - love the vernacular, Lorna. Are You hunkered down OK? Roof bolted to mainframe?
August 21st, 2021 22:34
Ennui
cosmacpan said:
if you want...
Uncle Vania sold his garden
and bought a cherry orchard
knowing that the spring
will dress in white just for him
the clouds are crying
without giving up the blue of the sky
as for boredom
it\'s not an obligation.
it\'s a state of affairs
which urges to
introspection
August 21st, 2021 14:39
cosmacpan said:
if you want...
Uncle Vania sold his garden
and bought a cherry orchard
knowing that the spring
will dress in white just for him
the clouds are crying
without giving up the blue of the sky
as for boredom
it\'s not an obligation.
it\'s a state of affairs
which urges to
introspection
August 21st, 2021 14:39
Never No More
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Lorna, these days we know how to deal with bullies.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Lorna, these days we know how to deal with bullies.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:40
Never No More
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Lorna precisely right - takes time to learn that uninformed opinion directed towards self means SFA. Well put.
As a rider though, more generally, uninformed opinion can be dangerous....
August 20th, 2021 21:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Lorna precisely right - takes time to learn that uninformed opinion directed towards self means SFA. Well put.
As a rider though, more generally, uninformed opinion can be dangerous....
August 20th, 2021 21:36
Never No More
Neville said:
If it needs to be said it needs to be sad properly .. loud enough and with sufficient emphasis to scare the pants off of whomsoever it is aimed at ..................... this is great by the way ...................N
August 20th, 2021 08:42
Neville said:
If it needs to be said it needs to be sad properly .. loud enough and with sufficient emphasis to scare the pants off of whomsoever it is aimed at ..................... this is great by the way ...................N
August 20th, 2021 08:42
Fury
dusk arising said:
I had to put my rubber boots on to read your poem. Well theres sure plenty of inspiration falling from the skies where I live for a poem like this to be written.
Strong powerful words.
August 19th, 2021 13:02
dusk arising said:
I had to put my rubber boots on to read your poem. Well theres sure plenty of inspiration falling from the skies where I live for a poem like this to be written.
Strong powerful words.
August 19th, 2021 13:02
Fury
Coyote said:
Nice use of metaphore in this superb poem Lorna. Love the symphony as well.
August 19th, 2021 11:20
Coyote said:
Nice use of metaphore in this superb poem Lorna. Love the symphony as well.
August 19th, 2021 11:20
Fury
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Thank you for sharing a spot on description of last night’s storm…trees are down strewn in the middle of the street others resting on some cars. Ironically they were going to be pruned today and tomorrow.
I like the contrast between your choice of the pic and Beethoven’s symphony.
Laura 🌻
August 19th, 2021 09:47
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
Thank you for sharing a spot on description of last night’s storm…trees are down strewn in the middle of the street others resting on some cars. Ironically they were going to be pruned today and tomorrow.
I like the contrast between your choice of the pic and Beethoven’s symphony.
Laura 🌻
August 19th, 2021 09:47
Fury
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Lorna – that ‘s a very vivid account of a thunder storm…in the morning? For me they seem to occur late afternoon or evening here.
I suppose you don’t want to hear my interpretation of such an event? No? Thought not…too late:
The heavy booted fellas upstairs are shifting the furniture again. They’ve knocked the water tank in the process and it is pouring out. The water has short circuited the electricity supply and there are flashes everywhere…
August 19th, 2021 07:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Lorna – that ‘s a very vivid account of a thunder storm…in the morning? For me they seem to occur late afternoon or evening here.
I suppose you don’t want to hear my interpretation of such an event? No? Thought not…too late:
The heavy booted fellas upstairs are shifting the furniture again. They’ve knocked the water tank in the process and it is pouring out. The water has short circuited the electricity supply and there are flashes everywhere…
August 19th, 2021 07:31
Fury
Poetic Dan said:
Love this and the energy you gave the beauty of nature we could write endless about.
Thank you
August 19th, 2021 07:02
Poetic Dan said:
Love this and the energy you gave the beauty of nature we could write endless about.
Thank you
August 19th, 2021 07:02
Ennui
Doggerel Dave said:
But Lorna , I\'m still not sure if Uncle Vanya flogged off the estate or not.. ..
A bit attention seeking with that vial, wasn\'t he?
August 17th, 2021 06:26
Doggerel Dave said:
But Lorna , I\'m still not sure if Uncle Vanya flogged off the estate or not.. ..
A bit attention seeking with that vial, wasn\'t he?
August 17th, 2021 06:26
Ennui
L. B. Mek said:
simply, Awesome!
\'The heat of summer
Dragging at one\'s feet
Supine beneath the willow
Hand on forehead
Springing turf to rest on as a pillow\'
(a beautifully vivid depiction
and such an immersive read
despite its melancholic feel,
thank you dear poet)
Ennui: Indeed, 😉
August 17th, 2021 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
simply, Awesome!
\'The heat of summer
Dragging at one\'s feet
Supine beneath the willow
Hand on forehead
Springing turf to rest on as a pillow\'
(a beautifully vivid depiction
and such an immersive read
despite its melancholic feel,
thank you dear poet)
Ennui: Indeed, 😉
August 17th, 2021 05:58
Ennui
Classicmister said:
Lovely evocative words Lorna - Sadly not much summer weather here in UK!
August 17th, 2021 05:18
Classicmister said:
Lovely evocative words Lorna - Sadly not much summer weather here in UK!
August 17th, 2021 05:18
Sunday Shivers
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alone does not necessarily lead to loneliness, there is so much in life to appreciate even if we are lone.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alone does not necessarily lead to loneliness, there is so much in life to appreciate even if we are lone.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:48
Sunday Shivers
Neville said:
there is something vaguely sinister about this .. maybe you drew my attention to my own mortality .. whatever the case, you did it without me moving my lips and just a little shiver .......................most enjoyably tho\' I might just add N :)
August 16th, 2021 13:45
Neville said:
there is something vaguely sinister about this .. maybe you drew my attention to my own mortality .. whatever the case, you did it without me moving my lips and just a little shiver .......................most enjoyably tho\' I might just add N :)
August 16th, 2021 13:45
Sunday Shivers
The elder poet said:
A dark poem. one expressing sad feelings. Is it of age ? I think of being alone . Well written. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:32
The elder poet said:
A dark poem. one expressing sad feelings. Is it of age ? I think of being alone . Well written. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:32
Sunday Shivers
Fay Slimm. said:
An hypnotic feel to this disclosure of what shivers a Sunday can deliver to those who hear time ticking on through Sunday quiet. A really evocative read dear Lorna.
August 16th, 2021 08:35
Fay Slimm. said:
An hypnotic feel to this disclosure of what shivers a Sunday can deliver to those who hear time ticking on through Sunday quiet. A really evocative read dear Lorna.
August 16th, 2021 08:35
Sunday Shivers
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I’m so happy it’s Monday morning!
Phew 😮💨
An intriguing and hypnotizing feeling came over me when listening to your excellent choice of video for your poem. The uneasiness of being alone on a Sunday night can be daunting.
Laura🌻
August 16th, 2021 07:57
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I’m so happy it’s Monday morning!
Phew 😮💨
An intriguing and hypnotizing feeling came over me when listening to your excellent choice of video for your poem. The uneasiness of being alone on a Sunday night can be daunting.
Laura🌻
August 16th, 2021 07:57
Sunday Shivers
Doggerel Dave said:
Sunday? used to be a bugger once.. now? Long time retired, Sunday just like every other day - especially during Covid lockdown....which looks like a long one...I just like my own company.. plus a visit to MPS... however I do know what yer mean...because you did it so neatly.
August 16th, 2021 07:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Sunday? used to be a bugger once.. now? Long time retired, Sunday just like every other day - especially during Covid lockdown....which looks like a long one...I just like my own company.. plus a visit to MPS... however I do know what yer mean...because you did it so neatly.
August 16th, 2021 07:46
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