Comments received on poems by Lorna



Brave (For Laura)
dusk arising said:

Faith sees us through.

August 12th, 2021 04:52

Quarantine Senryu
Quijote said:

Donna that song really encapsulates these lock down great post 👍

August 12th, 2021 01:13

The Course
Goldfinch60 said:

May that cup of peace be forever with you Lorna.

Andy

August 12th, 2021 00:38

The Course
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Loved your poem, especially the last line… “Peace is the last cup they’ll win” complemented with a great choice of lyrics.

Laura🌻

August 11th, 2021 20:24

The Course
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.

August 11th, 2021 05:39

The Course
Classicmister said:

Loved this Lorna - It must be wonderful to horse ride in the open country - I envy you. Last time I rode a horse it was in France on a trek organised by the campsite. The horse in front of me held everybody up by stopping to eat the hedge and the French rider couldn\'t pull him away - So I attempted to say in French \"Give me the reins\" Not knowing the word for reins I risked that it would be the same word in French so I said \"Donney moi les reins\" ... The rider looked confused as what I was saying was \"Give me the Queens\" !!

August 11th, 2021 03:27

The Course
Arvy said:

\"Wading through streams of salt tears Fallen from love sick hearts\" that hit so close to my heart. Thank you for sharing, Lorna!

August 11th, 2021 02:47

Separate Skins
Poetic Dan said:

Three in a row, what beautiful flow to what we only know!
Thank you my friend

August 11th, 2021 00:44

Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Lorna, the Sun my be home but the moon is love.

Andy

August 11th, 2021 00:39

Shadows
Fay Slimm. said:

ou share a familiar experience for many dear Lorna and you word it so clearly - - a heart-wrench of a read and thank you for sharing it.

August 10th, 2021 16:04

Shadows
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

What a beautifully penned poem. I love it in its entirety…
especially the ending.

So glad you’re back!

Laura🌻

August 10th, 2021 15:08

Shadows
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.
You lit that candle?!

August 10th, 2021 12:04

Shadows
dusk arising said:

Love it.

August 10th, 2021 09:35

Shadows
L. B. Mek said:

heart-breaking, knowing
that although this may at a glance
seem, just like some words of haunting poetry
to some
its a searing - inked depiction
of their everyday: reality...
(a necessary write!
thanks for sharing dear poet)

August 10th, 2021 06:23

Days Like This
Quijote said:

Contentment flows on these lines Lorna…..

August 10th, 2021 00:30

Days Like This
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.

August 9th, 2021 14:12

Days Like This
Neville said:


there are some very memorable lines here my friend ...

and you got me chillin too so everything is good ... just want my grass to take a leaf outa your grasses book ............................ N :)


August 9th, 2021 07:47

Days Like This
L. B. Mek said:

I see mellow be thy theme
and versed ease, be thy ink\'s
gifted: serene...
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 9th, 2021 06:38

Separate Skins
L. B. Mek said:

how to disseminate wisdom
when we\'re, still
busily: trying to grasp-it, ourselves..
beautifully paced
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing dear poet

August 9th, 2021 05:00

Separate Skins
Goldfinch60 said:

But they will learn there own way from their wonderful teacher Lorna.

Andy

August 9th, 2021 00:43

Separate Skins
Eugene S. said:

Beautiful.

August 8th, 2021 17:36

Separate Skins
Neville said:


this is something else ... and I love it

thank you so much for sharing ....

Neville :)


August 8th, 2021 16:57

Quarantine Senryu
Suresh said:

I NEEDED THIS.

Thanks Lorna

November 30th, 2020 06:32

Autumn Rain
BoxMyHeart said:

Lovely and picturesque!

October 25th, 2020 02:47

Quarantine Senryu
jarcher54 said:

I don\'t order pizza as much as I\'d like, must watch my girlish figure! I bike to the food trailers for Thai soup, saag paneer, and Columbian plaintain and yucca sandwiches on flatbread from the nice lady who speaks no English and does not seem to follow my own Tex-Mex Spanish. They don\'t come out and I don\'t go in! But now I\'m thinking pizza tonight! Thanks for the idea!

October 17th, 2020 13:06

Quarantine Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:

I do not think that I have ever ordered a pizza to be brought to the door. Fun words though Lorna

Andy

October 17th, 2020 00:26

Quarantine Senryu
Fay Slimm. said:

Hilarious song and loved the Sen......

October 16th, 2020 04:43

Staying Alive
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful,
I would think such a write would have a healing effect on the author (assuming the source inspiration be authentic), which is shared through its meditative qualities by the reader

October 16th, 2020 04:29

Quarantine Senryu
orchidee said:

Yes, not many more things more important that getting the pizzas in! heehee.

October 16th, 2020 02:22

Staying Alive
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Lorna, that safe place of Peace is there for you and you can just be yourself and do what YOU want to do within that place called HOME.

Andy

October 15th, 2020 22:44



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