Comments received on poems by Lorna



Cross Purposes
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Lorna but your friend will always be within your heart.

Andy

August 14th, 2021 00:39

Cross Purposes
The elder poet said:

We all have to deal with the loss of our friends . More so when we get older. It\'s hard . But you have to keep that friend or loved one in your heart . And in your mind. Think of them often . Think of the good times. Speak of them often. Keep pictures around . It\'s those things that keep them alive. You know their pain is gone. And that is a good thing. Keep your memories. so sorry for youe loss.

August 13th, 2021 17:32

Cross Purposes
PoeticBiscuit said:

A feeling we all know too well. Splendid write.

August 13th, 2021 14:15

Brave (For Laura)
Coyote said:

Love this! The final three lines tie everything together beautifully.

August 13th, 2021 11:34

Cross Purposes
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!


August 13th, 2021 05:11

Cross Purposes
orchidee said:

A sensitive write Lorna.

August 13th, 2021 04:09

Cross Purposes
Classicmister said:

Lorna - Such sad and heartfelt words. Let\'s hope that we may all meet up again with our lost ones. I once wrote some lines following the death of a close friend - \"Think well of me now I am gone. The world now dark where once the sun had shone\" Go well John


August 13th, 2021 03:24

Brave (For Laura)
Laura🌻 said:

My Dear Lorna,

Ahh…worries, worries, and more worries…
Life hands us many of them that tend to emanate negative emotions. I believe to let those worries we worry about motivate us to do something positive about them.


Thank you my dear poetess for sharing your beautiful poem and your choice of song. They’ve warmed my heart.

Deseo que “esta Laura” (a quien le has dedicado tu poema) sea la mejor guerrera valiente que pueda ser.

I wish you a wonderful day, dear Lorna.🤗

Laura🌻






August 12th, 2021 11:52

Brave (For Laura)
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.

August 12th, 2021 05:36

Brave (For Laura)
Fay Slimm. said:

Comforting words which will Laura will treasure and the number you chose to augment your posting is so excitingly Irish and beautifully sung. A fine verse of caring dear Lorna..

August 12th, 2021 05:27

Brave (For Laura)
dusk arising said:

Faith sees us through.

August 12th, 2021 04:52

Quarantine Senryu
Quijote said:

Donna that song really encapsulates these lock down great post 👍

August 12th, 2021 01:13

The Course
Goldfinch60 said:

May that cup of peace be forever with you Lorna.

Andy

August 12th, 2021 00:38

The Course
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

Loved your poem, especially the last line… “Peace is the last cup they’ll win” complemented with a great choice of lyrics.

Laura🌻

August 11th, 2021 20:24

The Course
Accidental Poet said:

Many trails in life\'s lessons Lorna. May you always be on the trail of happiness and love. 😊

August 11th, 2021 19:07

The Course
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.

August 11th, 2021 05:39

The Course
Classicmister said:

Loved this Lorna - It must be wonderful to horse ride in the open country - I envy you. Last time I rode a horse it was in France on a trek organised by the campsite. The horse in front of me held everybody up by stopping to eat the hedge and the French rider couldn\'t pull him away - So I attempted to say in French \"Give me the reins\" Not knowing the word for reins I risked that it would be the same word in French so I said \"Donney moi les reins\" ... The rider looked confused as what I was saying was \"Give me the Queens\" !!

August 11th, 2021 03:27

The Course
Arvy said:

\"Wading through streams of salt tears Fallen from love sick hearts\" that hit so close to my heart. Thank you for sharing, Lorna!

August 11th, 2021 02:47

Separate Skins
Poetic Dan said:

Three in a row, what beautiful flow to what we only know!
Thank you my friend

August 11th, 2021 00:44

Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Lorna, the Sun my be home but the moon is love.

Andy

August 11th, 2021 00:39

Shadows
Accidental Poet said:

We both penned a write of shadows. Well penned Lorna. 👍

August 10th, 2021 19:09

Shadows
Fay Slimm. said:

ou share a familiar experience for many dear Lorna and you word it so clearly - - a heart-wrench of a read and thank you for sharing it.

August 10th, 2021 16:04

Shadows
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,

What a beautifully penned poem. I love it in its entirety…
especially the ending.

So glad you’re back!

Laura🌻

August 10th, 2021 15:08

Shadows
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.
You lit that candle?!

August 10th, 2021 12:04

Shadows
dusk arising said:

Love it.

August 10th, 2021 09:35

Shadows
L. B. Mek said:

heart-breaking, knowing
that although this may at a glance
seem, just like some words of haunting poetry
to some
its a searing - inked depiction
of their everyday: reality...
(a necessary write!
thanks for sharing dear poet)

August 10th, 2021 06:23

Days Like This
Quijote said:

Contentment flows on these lines Lorna…..

August 10th, 2021 00:30

Days Like This
Accidental Poet said:

May you have many a day like this Lorna. 😉

August 9th, 2021 19:05

Days Like This
orchidee said:

Good write Lorna.

August 9th, 2021 14:12

Days Like This
Neville said:


there are some very memorable lines here my friend ...

and you got me chillin too so everything is good ... just want my grass to take a leaf outa your grasses book ............................ N :)


August 9th, 2021 07:47



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