Comments received on poems by Lorna
Ennui
Classicmister said:
Lovely evocative words Lorna - Sadly not much summer weather here in UK!
August 17th, 2021 05:18
Classicmister said:
Lovely evocative words Lorna - Sadly not much summer weather here in UK!
August 17th, 2021 05:18
Sunday Shivers
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alone does not necessarily lead to loneliness, there is so much in life to appreciate even if we are lone.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Being alone does not necessarily lead to loneliness, there is so much in life to appreciate even if we are lone.
Andy
August 16th, 2021 23:48
Sunday Shivers
Neville said:
there is something vaguely sinister about this .. maybe you drew my attention to my own mortality .. whatever the case, you did it without me moving my lips and just a little shiver .......................most enjoyably tho\' I might just add N :)
August 16th, 2021 13:45
Neville said:
there is something vaguely sinister about this .. maybe you drew my attention to my own mortality .. whatever the case, you did it without me moving my lips and just a little shiver .......................most enjoyably tho\' I might just add N :)
August 16th, 2021 13:45
Sunday Shivers
The elder poet said:
A dark poem. one expressing sad feelings. Is it of age ? I think of being alone . Well written. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:32
The elder poet said:
A dark poem. one expressing sad feelings. Is it of age ? I think of being alone . Well written. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2021 11:32
Sunday Shivers
Fay Slimm. said:
An hypnotic feel to this disclosure of what shivers a Sunday can deliver to those who hear time ticking on through Sunday quiet. A really evocative read dear Lorna.
August 16th, 2021 08:35
Fay Slimm. said:
An hypnotic feel to this disclosure of what shivers a Sunday can deliver to those who hear time ticking on through Sunday quiet. A really evocative read dear Lorna.
August 16th, 2021 08:35
Sunday Shivers
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I’m so happy it’s Monday morning!
Phew 😮💨
An intriguing and hypnotizing feeling came over me when listening to your excellent choice of video for your poem. The uneasiness of being alone on a Sunday night can be daunting.
Laura🌻
August 16th, 2021 07:57
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
I’m so happy it’s Monday morning!
Phew 😮💨
An intriguing and hypnotizing feeling came over me when listening to your excellent choice of video for your poem. The uneasiness of being alone on a Sunday night can be daunting.
Laura🌻
August 16th, 2021 07:57
Sunday Shivers
Doggerel Dave said:
Sunday? used to be a bugger once.. now? Long time retired, Sunday just like every other day - especially during Covid lockdown....which looks like a long one...I just like my own company.. plus a visit to MPS... however I do know what yer mean...because you did it so neatly.
August 16th, 2021 07:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Sunday? used to be a bugger once.. now? Long time retired, Sunday just like every other day - especially during Covid lockdown....which looks like a long one...I just like my own company.. plus a visit to MPS... however I do know what yer mean...because you did it so neatly.
August 16th, 2021 07:46
Sunday Shivers
dusk arising said:
The eerie knowledge that one, alone, is heading passively toward the end of... end of what... end of control of ones faculties, end of freedom as a \'home\' beckons, health as susceptability to some gross illness?
I enjoyed the art and skill of your poem today and it\'s haunting tone.
August 16th, 2021 05:34
dusk arising said:
The eerie knowledge that one, alone, is heading passively toward the end of... end of what... end of control of ones faculties, end of freedom as a \'home\' beckons, health as susceptability to some gross illness?
I enjoyed the art and skill of your poem today and it\'s haunting tone.
August 16th, 2021 05:34
Sunday Shivers
L. B. Mek said:
wanna know something funny
the brilliant French vocabulary
put everything you\'re expressing/feeling
in this write, in-to just one word
\'Ennui\'
(literal definition of Sunday afternoon
sudden lacklustre mood)
lol, thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
wanna know something funny
the brilliant French vocabulary
put everything you\'re expressing/feeling
in this write, in-to just one word
\'Ennui\'
(literal definition of Sunday afternoon
sudden lacklustre mood)
lol, thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 05:24
The Great 20th Annual....... For Charity
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read,
a good deed,
thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read,
a good deed,
thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 04:01
The Great 20th Annual....... For Charity
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m with Neil here, Lorna I respectfully suggest you leave their thingamajig strictly alone . While your overflowing inbox might make you feel very wanted, these relationships are superficial and can only lead to successive blows to your self esteem when they turn out to be devoid of depth...... or something., blah blah...Your very own Agony Uncle.
August 16th, 2021 01:37
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m with Neil here, Lorna I respectfully suggest you leave their thingamajig strictly alone . While your overflowing inbox might make you feel very wanted, these relationships are superficial and can only lead to successive blows to your self esteem when they turn out to be devoid of depth...... or something., blah blah...Your very own Agony Uncle.
August 16th, 2021 01:37
The Great 20th Annual....... For Charity
Coyote said:
Next time Lorna...lol
Great poem and I\'m still laughing at the Duck Songs😂
August 15th, 2021 19:00
Coyote said:
Next time Lorna...lol
Great poem and I\'m still laughing at the Duck Songs😂
August 15th, 2021 19:00
Garden Art
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant and in so many ways .... a multi faceted little gem ma\'am .......................................... N :)
August 15th, 2021 11:45
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant and in so many ways .... a multi faceted little gem ma\'am .......................................... N :)
August 15th, 2021 11:45
Days Like This
Coyote said:
A poem not only good for the soul but mouses as well. A very smile inducing write Lorna🙂
August 15th, 2021 11:16
Coyote said:
A poem not only good for the soul but mouses as well. A very smile inducing write Lorna🙂
August 15th, 2021 11:16
Garden Art
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely imagery here Lorna. Most enjoyable
PS do you happen to know the artist of the picture?
August 15th, 2021 00:13
Saxon Crow said:
Lovely imagery here Lorna. Most enjoyable
PS do you happen to know the artist of the picture?
August 15th, 2021 00:13
Garden Art
Goldfinch60 said:
May that festival always be full of colour Lorna.
Andy
August 15th, 2021 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
May that festival always be full of colour Lorna.
Andy
August 15th, 2021 00:10
Garden Art
Coyote said:
Yes, this very descriptive piece paints a beautiful picture. Nice write and tfs🙂
August 14th, 2021 15:25
Coyote said:
Yes, this very descriptive piece paints a beautiful picture. Nice write and tfs🙂
August 14th, 2021 15:25
Cross Purposes
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Lorna but your friend will always be within your heart.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Lorna but your friend will always be within your heart.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 00:39
Cross Purposes
The elder poet said:
We all have to deal with the loss of our friends . More so when we get older. It\'s hard . But you have to keep that friend or loved one in your heart . And in your mind. Think of them often . Think of the good times. Speak of them often. Keep pictures around . It\'s those things that keep them alive. You know their pain is gone. And that is a good thing. Keep your memories. so sorry for youe loss.
August 13th, 2021 17:32
The elder poet said:
We all have to deal with the loss of our friends . More so when we get older. It\'s hard . But you have to keep that friend or loved one in your heart . And in your mind. Think of them often . Think of the good times. Speak of them often. Keep pictures around . It\'s those things that keep them alive. You know their pain is gone. And that is a good thing. Keep your memories. so sorry for youe loss.
August 13th, 2021 17:32
Cross Purposes
PoeticBiscuit said:
A feeling we all know too well. Splendid write.
August 13th, 2021 14:15
PoeticBiscuit said:
A feeling we all know too well. Splendid write.
August 13th, 2021 14:15
Brave (For Laura)
Coyote said:
Love this! The final three lines tie everything together beautifully.
August 13th, 2021 11:34
Coyote said:
Love this! The final three lines tie everything together beautifully.
August 13th, 2021 11:34
Cross Purposes
Classicmister said:
Lorna - Such sad and heartfelt words. Let\'s hope that we may all meet up again with our lost ones. I once wrote some lines following the death of a close friend - \"Think well of me now I am gone. The world now dark where once the sun had shone\" Go well John
August 13th, 2021 03:24
Classicmister said:
Lorna - Such sad and heartfelt words. Let\'s hope that we may all meet up again with our lost ones. I once wrote some lines following the death of a close friend - \"Think well of me now I am gone. The world now dark where once the sun had shone\" Go well John
August 13th, 2021 03:24
Brave (For Laura)
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Lorna,
Ahh…worries, worries, and more worries…
Life hands us many of them that tend to emanate negative emotions. I believe to let those worries we worry about motivate us to do something positive about them.
Thank you my dear poetess for sharing your beautiful poem and your choice of song. They’ve warmed my heart.
Deseo que “esta Laura” (a quien le has dedicado tu poema) sea la mejor guerrera valiente que pueda ser.
I wish you a wonderful day, dear Lorna.🤗
Laura🌻
August 12th, 2021 11:52
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Lorna,
Ahh…worries, worries, and more worries…
Life hands us many of them that tend to emanate negative emotions. I believe to let those worries we worry about motivate us to do something positive about them.
Thank you my dear poetess for sharing your beautiful poem and your choice of song. They’ve warmed my heart.
Deseo que “esta Laura” (a quien le has dedicado tu poema) sea la mejor guerrera valiente que pueda ser.
I wish you a wonderful day, dear Lorna.🤗
Laura🌻
August 12th, 2021 11:52
Brave (For Laura)
Fay Slimm. said:
Comforting words which will Laura will treasure and the number you chose to augment your posting is so excitingly Irish and beautifully sung. A fine verse of caring dear Lorna..
August 12th, 2021 05:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Comforting words which will Laura will treasure and the number you chose to augment your posting is so excitingly Irish and beautifully sung. A fine verse of caring dear Lorna..
August 12th, 2021 05:27
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