Comments received on poems by Lorna
Separate Skins
Poetic Dan said:
Three in a row, what beautiful flow to what we only know!
Thank you my friend
August 11th, 2021 00:44
Poetic Dan said:
Three in a row, what beautiful flow to what we only know!
Thank you my friend
August 11th, 2021 00:44
Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Lorna, the Sun my be home but the moon is love.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Lorna, the Sun my be home but the moon is love.
Andy
August 11th, 2021 00:39
Shadows
Fay Slimm. said:
ou share a familiar experience for many dear Lorna and you word it so clearly - - a heart-wrench of a read and thank you for sharing it.
August 10th, 2021 16:04
Fay Slimm. said:
ou share a familiar experience for many dear Lorna and you word it so clearly - - a heart-wrench of a read and thank you for sharing it.
August 10th, 2021 16:04
Shadows
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
What a beautifully penned poem. I love it in its entirety…
especially the ending.
So glad you’re back!
Laura🌻
August 10th, 2021 15:08
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
What a beautifully penned poem. I love it in its entirety…
especially the ending.
So glad you’re back!
Laura🌻
August 10th, 2021 15:08
Shadows
L. B. Mek said:
heart-breaking, knowing
that although this may at a glance
seem, just like some words of haunting poetry
to some
its a searing - inked depiction
of their everyday: reality...
(a necessary write!
thanks for sharing dear poet)
August 10th, 2021 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
heart-breaking, knowing
that although this may at a glance
seem, just like some words of haunting poetry
to some
its a searing - inked depiction
of their everyday: reality...
(a necessary write!
thanks for sharing dear poet)
August 10th, 2021 06:23
Days Like This
Neville said:
there are some very memorable lines here my friend ...
and you got me chillin too so everything is good ... just want my grass to take a leaf outa your grasses book ............................ N :)
August 9th, 2021 07:47
Neville said:
there are some very memorable lines here my friend ...
and you got me chillin too so everything is good ... just want my grass to take a leaf outa your grasses book ............................ N :)
August 9th, 2021 07:47
Days Like This
L. B. Mek said:
I see mellow be thy theme
and versed ease, be thy ink\'s
gifted: serene...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 9th, 2021 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
I see mellow be thy theme
and versed ease, be thy ink\'s
gifted: serene...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 9th, 2021 06:38
Separate Skins
L. B. Mek said:
how to disseminate wisdom
when we\'re, still
busily: trying to grasp-it, ourselves..
beautifully paced
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing dear poet
August 9th, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
how to disseminate wisdom
when we\'re, still
busily: trying to grasp-it, ourselves..
beautifully paced
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing dear poet
August 9th, 2021 05:00
Separate Skins
Goldfinch60 said:
But they will learn there own way from their wonderful teacher Lorna.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
But they will learn there own way from their wonderful teacher Lorna.
Andy
August 9th, 2021 00:43
Separate Skins
Neville said:
this is something else ... and I love it
thank you so much for sharing ....
Neville :)
August 8th, 2021 16:57
Neville said:
this is something else ... and I love it
thank you so much for sharing ....
Neville :)
August 8th, 2021 16:57
Quarantine Senryu
jarcher54 said:
I don\'t order pizza as much as I\'d like, must watch my girlish figure! I bike to the food trailers for Thai soup, saag paneer, and Columbian plaintain and yucca sandwiches on flatbread from the nice lady who speaks no English and does not seem to follow my own Tex-Mex Spanish. They don\'t come out and I don\'t go in! But now I\'m thinking pizza tonight! Thanks for the idea!
October 17th, 2020 13:06
jarcher54 said:
I don\'t order pizza as much as I\'d like, must watch my girlish figure! I bike to the food trailers for Thai soup, saag paneer, and Columbian plaintain and yucca sandwiches on flatbread from the nice lady who speaks no English and does not seem to follow my own Tex-Mex Spanish. They don\'t come out and I don\'t go in! But now I\'m thinking pizza tonight! Thanks for the idea!
October 17th, 2020 13:06
Quarantine Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:
I do not think that I have ever ordered a pizza to be brought to the door. Fun words though Lorna
Andy
October 17th, 2020 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
I do not think that I have ever ordered a pizza to be brought to the door. Fun words though Lorna
Andy
October 17th, 2020 00:26
Staying Alive
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful,
I would think such a write would have a healing effect on the author (assuming the source inspiration be authentic), which is shared through its meditative qualities by the reader
October 16th, 2020 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful,
I would think such a write would have a healing effect on the author (assuming the source inspiration be authentic), which is shared through its meditative qualities by the reader
October 16th, 2020 04:29
Quarantine Senryu
orchidee said:
Yes, not many more things more important that getting the pizzas in! heehee.
October 16th, 2020 02:22
orchidee said:
Yes, not many more things more important that getting the pizzas in! heehee.
October 16th, 2020 02:22
Staying Alive
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Lorna, that safe place of Peace is there for you and you can just be yourself and do what YOU want to do within that place called HOME.
Andy
October 15th, 2020 22:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Lorna, that safe place of Peace is there for you and you can just be yourself and do what YOU want to do within that place called HOME.
Andy
October 15th, 2020 22:44
Staying Alive
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful poem and I just love Enya - always listening to her.
October 15th, 2020 14:48
Michael Edwards said:
A beautiful poem and I just love Enya - always listening to her.
October 15th, 2020 14:48
Staying Alive
dusk arising said:
It is necessary to have a sanctum, a place to be self without pressures of \'outside\' and society.
When you are ready, whats is \'outside\' will be there for you. We are created to be sociable beings quite naturally......
....... time will do it\'s healing thing.
Keep safe and well.
October 15th, 2020 10:36
dusk arising said:
It is necessary to have a sanctum, a place to be self without pressures of \'outside\' and society.
When you are ready, whats is \'outside\' will be there for you. We are created to be sociable beings quite naturally......
....... time will do it\'s healing thing.
Keep safe and well.
October 15th, 2020 10:36
Staying Alive
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna.
I shouldn\'t be alive. I tried holding my breath for 24 hours. I didn\'t feel well afterwards. lol. (Do shut up Orchi. lol)
October 15th, 2020 08:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna.
I shouldn\'t be alive. I tried holding my breath for 24 hours. I didn\'t feel well afterwards. lol. (Do shut up Orchi. lol)
October 15th, 2020 08:59
The Sheets and Time
L. B. Mek said:
I like the metaphor, there is an off-kilter and quirky quality to the angles in the lenses you use to give us these observations on life
October 15th, 2020 04:11
L. B. Mek said:
I like the metaphor, there is an off-kilter and quirky quality to the angles in the lenses you use to give us these observations on life
October 15th, 2020 04:11
The Sheets and Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is such a strange thing we have events that make time fly by and others where we can dwell in the slowness of it. We must always look ahead as time will lead us to a new and unexplored path that will give us joy and wonder.
Andy
October 14th, 2020 23:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is such a strange thing we have events that make time fly by and others where we can dwell in the slowness of it. We must always look ahead as time will lead us to a new and unexplored path that will give us joy and wonder.
Andy
October 14th, 2020 23:55
The Sheets and Time
dusk arising said:
Many of us, of all ages, for all reasons, are living life at a low pace and the feeling of time passing purposelessly is present with these sort of regular events you describe.
Last year i survived a cancer and told myself i should live life to the full now as being a survivor, i am one of the lucky ones. Along came shielding (chemotherapy damages your immune system) and how i hate keeping myself hidden away watching these time markers pass.
But inside me at my late years there is hope for better days ahead.
I hope you too find better times ahead Lorna when life will gain a zest which you perhaps feel is out of reach at the moment.
Life has it\'s way with us, but it\'s not always bad.
October 14th, 2020 12:57
dusk arising said:
Many of us, of all ages, for all reasons, are living life at a low pace and the feeling of time passing purposelessly is present with these sort of regular events you describe.
Last year i survived a cancer and told myself i should live life to the full now as being a survivor, i am one of the lucky ones. Along came shielding (chemotherapy damages your immune system) and how i hate keeping myself hidden away watching these time markers pass.
But inside me at my late years there is hope for better days ahead.
I hope you too find better times ahead Lorna when life will gain a zest which you perhaps feel is out of reach at the moment.
Life has it\'s way with us, but it\'s not always bad.
October 14th, 2020 12:57
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