Comments received on poems by Lorna



The Laughing Dormouse
ForeverJesus7 said:

That was very enjoyable. It gave me a quick laugh.
Persistence is key

April 9th, 2018 07:40

The Laughing Dormouse
Daveyboyz said:

What a cute picture, and charming prose.

April 9th, 2018 05:47

The Warp and the Weft
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Lorna, time is endless.

April 9th, 2018 02:10

The Warp and the Weft
RiverJordan said:

delicately stupendous!

April 8th, 2018 17:17

The Warp and the Weft
Michael Edwards said:

There is no unpicking of time - great line in a super write Lorna.

April 8th, 2018 09:11

The Warp and the Weft
Fay Slimm. said:

A gem of a read about time allotted for weaving what we ourselves turn out to be - - expertly formed and woven Lorna.

April 8th, 2018 08:37

The Warp and the Weft
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. You warping or wefting just now?!

April 8th, 2018 07:40

The Warp and the Weft
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
You’ve beautifully woven this piece of writing! It will withstand till the end of time! Awesome...I like it a lot! I agree with AP...a great write, quote, and song choice!

~Laura~

April 8th, 2018 07:27

The Warp and the Weft
Accidental Poet said:

Time, a favorite subject among all poets. And an especially favorite of this accidental poet. Great write, quote and song choice.

April 8th, 2018 06:41

The Warp and the Weft
Eugene S. said:

Well said and profound. Love it. I can see that as the beginning of a truly epic story.

April 8th, 2018 06:37

Mary and the Little Snake
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Lorna, kids can be fearless.

April 8th, 2018 00:24

Mary and the Little Snake
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
A great write and pic...but I can’t look at it more than once! Snakes are definitely NOT my thing...some day I’ll tell you you why!

~Laura~

April 7th, 2018 20:38

Mary and the Little Snake
Michael Edwards said:

Having a 6 year old grandson who also likes snakes I can see where this is coming from - brill write Lorna.-

April 7th, 2018 12:59

Mary and the Little Snake
FineB said:

Thank you Lorna.

A wonderful poem.

There\'s nothing like a bit of character in a child.

Keep writing
FineB

April 7th, 2018 09:00

Mary and the Little Snake
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna, I s-s-s-s-say. Good snake impersonation there, innit?! lol. A potential few moments away from being strangled. Arrggh!

April 7th, 2018 06:48

Birds
marlenawood said:

I really enjoyed this piece Lorna as I love birds an yes it\'s sad but everyone has to feel their emotions

April 7th, 2018 06:30

Mary and the Little Snake
marlenawood said:

Oh wow great writing love!!! I absolutely enjoyed this!!! I love snakes nature etc. epic

April 7th, 2018 06:22

Snowdrops in the Morning
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, those snowdrops are very determined plants.

April 7th, 2018 00:23

Snowdrops in the Morning
w c said:

Very nice. Grow snowdrops grow.

April 6th, 2018 19:28

Snowdrops in the Morning
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a beautiful name for a wondrous flower and reading this verse is a reminder to me that this year our little patch of creamy-white snowdrops have taken a break - not one nodding face have I seen - -- a charming write and picture dear Lorna.

April 6th, 2018 11:19

Snowdrops in the Morning
orchidee said:

Hope your Spring comes to stay soon!

April 6th, 2018 09:58

Snowdrops in the Morning
Lorna said:

The snow will just make the summer that much more welcome Laura! They came and planted my new little tree one hour before the snow started - so how\'s that for hopeful............

April 6th, 2018 09:56

Snowdrops in the Morning
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
Snow again!! Hooray for the snowdrops! I’ll bet their favorite tune is...🎶I 🎶WILL 🎶SURVIVE 🎶 😉

Although I did enjoy Dany Rosevear’s “Snowdrops, Snowdrops,...”

I enjoyed reading your poem and the pic is perfect for the poem!

~Laura~



April 6th, 2018 09:31

Snowdrops in the Morning
marlenawood said:

I love the snow an beautiful writing love

April 6th, 2018 07:21

Snowdrops in the Morning
Michael Edwards said:

Delightful write Lorna - ours are long since over and the next to look forward to are the tulips.

April 6th, 2018 05:57

Winnie and Roo
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, if only the innocence of childhood could remain with us all our days life would be wonderful. Just milk in my tea please.

April 5th, 2018 00:30

Winnie and Roo
Fay Slimm. said:

Count me in that adorable stage of delighting in games with you and Winnie the Pooh dear Lorna - a fun write which will send me to bed tonight with a smile.

April 4th, 2018 16:07

Winnie and Roo
Michael Edwards said:

Love it - and can I join you - but don\'t tell Orchi - he might swoon.

April 4th, 2018 11:07

Winnie and Roo
orchidee said:

Lovely write and clips Lorna - the \'ahh\' factor! heehee.

April 4th, 2018 09:39

Winnie and Roo
Lorna said:

Score 1! I thought I\'d lose everyone with this! Very whumsical.......I\'ve read that so many things in Australia that look fascinating or adorable can kill you........ but how cute are roos!

April 4th, 2018 06:48



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