Comments received on poems by Lorna



The Hungry Shadows
Lorna said:

Thanks Terthas - it got a littler heavier than I intended..... sort of meant who would we be without the past.........

April 17th, 2018 05:56

The Hungry Shadows
Nicholas Browning said:

The darkness vows to consume us all. A very true thing indeed. I enjoyed this. Quite right! Well done.

April 17th, 2018 05:55

Riding Pegasus
Goldfinch60 said:

Flying on a horse must be wonderful. My daughter in law is a \'horse person\' so I can thoroughly understand your own feelings.

April 17th, 2018 00:41

Riding Pegasus
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh Lorna what a wonderful experience to fly on a horse - your husband \'s great way with riding and riders has peppered this poem with beautiful reality - thanks so much for the share.

April 16th, 2018 10:13

Riding Pegasus
Daveyboyz said:

I like this one very much.

April 16th, 2018 09:10

Riding Pegasus
orchidee said:

A fine write - written while riding a horse?! lol.

April 16th, 2018 09:04

Riding Pegasus
Michael Edwards said:

I agree with Terthas - this a beautiful poem Lorna.

April 16th, 2018 06:47

Much Ado About Anything
Goldfinch60 said:

Those tears do run together and become indistinguishable but the joy will always outlast the pain. Good write.

April 14th, 2018 00:59

Much Ado About Anything
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LORNA ~ for reminding us that LIFE is an equilibrium of Little & Large ~ Joy & Pain ~ Tears and Laughter and generally it all comes right in the end !

So don\'t worry ~ keep happy
don\'t frown ~ keep smiling !
At the end of the day
I put all my angst in the garbage
And wake refreshed and trouble free
Til I get to work ! Then the
Cycle of ups & downs etc
Starts again ~ BUT Yesterday\'s
problems are dead & forgotten !

Yours BRIAN ~ Thanks for sharing


April 13th, 2018 17:38

The Shade Garden
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
This is an awesome posting! Your garden and home look amazing! When all is in bloom...one big happy family as your poem implies!
I enjoyed the Mamas & the Papas clip! Thank you for posting it!

~Laura~

April 13th, 2018 13:32

Much Ado About Anything
Michael Edwards said:

A lovely little \'un Lorna

April 13th, 2018 12:35

Much Ado About Anything
orchidee said:

Aww don\'t cry - you\'ll make it rain more! oohh heehee.

April 13th, 2018 10:24

Much Ado About Anything
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - such good poetry with its terse lines and clear message - - a really clever fusion of picture and verse - - so well done Lorna.

April 13th, 2018 09:35

Much Ado About Anything
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
Perfect poem and pic!
I love the last two lines! I’m stealing them because they make perfect sense and I’ll be quoting them quite often!

~Laura~


April 13th, 2018 09:19

Much Ado About Anything
onepauly said:

the rain in spain goes merrily down the drain.

April 13th, 2018 07:20

Lamb\'s Ears in the Garden
Goldfinch60 said:

Those warmer silver mornings will soon be here Lorna. Good write.

April 13th, 2018 00:23

Lamb\'s Ears in the Garden
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks LORNA ~ Loved the Picture & Poem & Song ! My MUM has Lambs Tongues in her beautiful garden ~ delicate & delightful ~ Please check my Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN !

April 12th, 2018 17:58

Lamb\'s Ears in the Garden
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
A great write! Love this pic of your garden! My mom would probably eat those lamb’s ears! Lol

An appropriate and great garden song to accentuate your poem! Never heard it before. I enjoyed it very much!

~Laura~



April 12th, 2018 14:09

Lamb\'s Ears in the Garden
onepauly said:

better days are coming.

April 12th, 2018 09:28

Lamb\'s Ears in the Garden
orchidee said:

Silver mornings soon for you hopefully! Aww, I\'m not seeing the videos clip. it says \'Not available\'. lol.

April 12th, 2018 08:39

Lamb\'s Ears in the Garden
Michael Edwards said:

I used to grow them in previous gardens but I haven\'t got any in my current patch - pity you can\'t send me a root - love the write Lorna and the photo of your garden.

April 12th, 2018 04:44

The Shade Garden
Aislinn Wilson said:

Wonderful

April 11th, 2018 14:23

The Shade Garden
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. You is waiting for that Spring sunshine to be warm enough for you to dash to that shade! I bet you won\'t complain if it\'s 100 degrees - Fahrenheit that is!

April 11th, 2018 10:02

The Shade Garden
Goldfinch60 said:

Very happy family indeed.

April 11th, 2018 08:23

The Shade Garden
Michael Edwards said:

Skilfully drafted and what an idyllic looking spot - may it soon welcome you again

April 11th, 2018 07:38

The Shade Garden
Fay Slimm. said:

You make that garden so inviting dear Lorna -shade in high heat is your little glade - - love the number too that you chose to illustrate the verse.

April 11th, 2018 07:12

The Shade Garden
onepauly said:

springtime!

April 11th, 2018 05:11

Beauty of the Soul
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Lorna.

April 11th, 2018 00:59

Beauty of the Soul
kevin browne said:

bursting with intrigue at the depth of any soul. I like these few words a lot because it has a great deal of beauty set between the pages we flick over as we learn our instructions. you smashed it with this one. great thoughts and thanks for your written word about the core of human life.

April 10th, 2018 19:31

Beauty of the Soul
David.A-J said:

Very deep, and very clear.

April 10th, 2018 16:23



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