Comments received on poems by Lorna
Sweetie Baby\'s Invitation (Death)
Goldfinch60 said:
That video is so funny. Good write as well Lorna.
April 21st, 2018 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That video is so funny. Good write as well Lorna.
April 21st, 2018 00:50
Sweetie Baby\'s Invitation (Death)
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A super write! I enjoyed the read! That last line was great!
The video is awesome! It really made me laugh hard! You’re something else. Love your work and sense of humor!
~Love~
April 20th, 2018 19:07
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A super write! I enjoyed the read! That last line was great!
The video is awesome! It really made me laugh hard! You’re something else. Love your work and sense of humor!
~Love~
April 20th, 2018 19:07
Sweetie Baby\'s Invitation (Death)
Michael Edwards said:
The video is a treasure - and so is your poem Lorna.
April 20th, 2018 12:33
Michael Edwards said:
The video is a treasure - and so is your poem Lorna.
April 20th, 2018 12:33
Sweetie Baby\'s Invitation (Death)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O DEATH ~ where is thy sting
O GRAVE ~ thy Victory ?
I triumph still
If THOU abide with ME ~ AMEN
Christ has conquered SIN
and DEATH and HELL
SO for me ~ When I\'m hanging
by my finger tips and an 800 foot
drop on an ICE CLIMB in GLENCOE
In SCOTLAND ~ I think ~ Sudden
Death ~ Sudden GLORY ~ AMEN !
That\'s my take in your Poem LORNA
Thanks for posting ~ Love as always
BRIAN ~ Not scared of DEATH ! XOX
Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B
April 20th, 2018 09:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
O DEATH ~ where is thy sting
O GRAVE ~ thy Victory ?
I triumph still
If THOU abide with ME ~ AMEN
Christ has conquered SIN
and DEATH and HELL
SO for me ~ When I\'m hanging
by my finger tips and an 800 foot
drop on an ICE CLIMB in GLENCOE
In SCOTLAND ~ I think ~ Sudden
Death ~ Sudden GLORY ~ AMEN !
That\'s my take in your Poem LORNA
Thanks for posting ~ Love as always
BRIAN ~ Not scared of DEATH ! XOX
Please check my Poem ~ Thanks B
April 20th, 2018 09:54
Sweetie Baby\'s Invitation (Death)
onepauly said:
you should have called first.
magnificent!
April 20th, 2018 08:29
onepauly said:
you should have called first.
magnificent!
April 20th, 2018 08:29
Riding Pegasus
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A superb poem with a great pic! Horses are magnificent! What a wonderful feeling it must’ve been to ride your horse !
~Laura~
April 20th, 2018 01:15
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A superb poem with a great pic! Horses are magnificent! What a wonderful feeling it must’ve been to ride your horse !
~Laura~
April 20th, 2018 01:15
The Cremation Playground
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Lorna, I too want my body to stay with the earth, preferably at the top of Pen-y-Ghent, one of the peaks in the Yorkshire Dales National Park, but I will not be there as My Spirit will be in the ether going on for eternity.
April 20th, 2018 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Lorna, I too want my body to stay with the earth, preferably at the top of Pen-y-Ghent, one of the peaks in the Yorkshire Dales National Park, but I will not be there as My Spirit will be in the ether going on for eternity.
April 20th, 2018 00:38
The Cremation Playground
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
It sounds like you want to be cremated when your time is up and let that rich, wise , and golden dust fly free! Sounds great...but not yet! Stay a while...we need you on this site...
A super write! I enjoyed the song by Kansas! Thank you for sharing and bringing back some of the best memories that resonate and some of them very relatable!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 12:22
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
It sounds like you want to be cremated when your time is up and let that rich, wise , and golden dust fly free! Sounds great...but not yet! Stay a while...we need you on this site...
A super write! I enjoyed the song by Kansas! Thank you for sharing and bringing back some of the best memories that resonate and some of them very relatable!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 12:22
The Cremation Playground
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Lorna - I especially like the words: We\'ll ride the winds\' and \'No cold earth\'
April 19th, 2018 06:02
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Lorna - I especially like the words: We\'ll ride the winds\' and \'No cold earth\'
April 19th, 2018 06:02
The Black Flower
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A great write and the song you picked to accentuate the poem is perfect! I remember the story of the great duo Joey and Rory! That was a sad one!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 04:21
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
A great write and the song you picked to accentuate the poem is perfect! I remember the story of the great duo Joey and Rory! That was a sad one!
~Laura~
April 19th, 2018 04:21
The Black Flower
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Lorna. The flower is found in Mexico and called \"The Flower of Death\" Lisianthius nigrescens var. chiapensis
April 19th, 2018 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write Lorna. The flower is found in Mexico and called \"The Flower of Death\" Lisianthius nigrescens var. chiapensis
April 19th, 2018 00:40
The Black Flower
Angel Of Incidence said:
Just really like this! My first time read of your work. Will remember
to stop again!
April 18th, 2018 11:24
Angel Of Incidence said:
Just really like this! My first time read of your work. Will remember
to stop again!
April 18th, 2018 11:24
The Black Flower
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing Lorna - the picture and number adorn the words which flow with poetic expressions of facing the one place everyone\'s fated for. A great read and this one goes to my favourites.
April 18th, 2018 06:33
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing Lorna - the picture and number adorn the words which flow with poetic expressions of facing the one place everyone\'s fated for. A great read and this one goes to my favourites.
April 18th, 2018 06:33
The Black Flower
Michael Edwards said:
A super read which I must save. A bit frustrated as I can\'t name the flower - it has the characteristics of a lily but only has 5 petals and not six - must do a search.
April 18th, 2018 05:48
Michael Edwards said:
A super read which I must save. A bit frustrated as I can\'t name the flower - it has the characteristics of a lily but only has 5 petals and not six - must do a search.
April 18th, 2018 05:48
The Hungry Shadows
Fay Slimm. said:
The effect of shadows brought out so clearly and even a bit scary in this deep little verse - - well done Lorna for writing on what we all feel at times - weighed down by shadowy pasts. A most interesting read.
April 17th, 2018 13:58
Fay Slimm. said:
The effect of shadows brought out so clearly and even a bit scary in this deep little verse - - well done Lorna for writing on what we all feel at times - weighed down by shadowy pasts. A most interesting read.
April 17th, 2018 13:58
The Hungry Shadows
Michael Edwards said:
Wow and did you crack it - superb Lorna. I also wrote something which went off on a tangent and not sure if it\'s that good but I\'ll post it tomorrow nonetheless.
April 17th, 2018 10:39
Michael Edwards said:
Wow and did you crack it - superb Lorna. I also wrote something which went off on a tangent and not sure if it\'s that good but I\'ll post it tomorrow nonetheless.
April 17th, 2018 10:39
The Hungry Shadows
orchidee said:
Oohh a psychological write - I can\'t usually say words as long as that! A fine write Lorna. Sometimes we want to hold on to things. We may not know, or may not want, any alternatives. Now I\'ve started being psychol-wotsit! (what\'s the word? lol)
April 17th, 2018 08:30
orchidee said:
Oohh a psychological write - I can\'t usually say words as long as that! A fine write Lorna. Sometimes we want to hold on to things. We may not know, or may not want, any alternatives. Now I\'ve started being psychol-wotsit! (what\'s the word? lol)
April 17th, 2018 08:30
The Hungry Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Lorna, but always remember if you just look forward into the light you will never see the shadows.
April 17th, 2018 08:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Lorna, but always remember if you just look forward into the light you will never see the shadows.
April 17th, 2018 08:04
The Hungry Shadows
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome wordplay and metaphor created. Sublime dreary poem.. We all can relate to the wry feel sometimes it u expressed it so poetically. Kudos.
Pleez do write your thoughts too under my newest Poem here.
April 17th, 2018 06:49
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Awesome wordplay and metaphor created. Sublime dreary poem.. We all can relate to the wry feel sometimes it u expressed it so poetically. Kudos.
Pleez do write your thoughts too under my newest Poem here.
April 17th, 2018 06:49
Lamb\'s Ears in the Garden
Nicholas Browning said:
If that is your garden then it is wonderful. The poetry pays an homage to it.
April 17th, 2018 05:56
Nicholas Browning said:
If that is your garden then it is wonderful. The poetry pays an homage to it.
April 17th, 2018 05:56
The Hungry Shadows
Lorna said:
Thanks Terthas - it got a littler heavier than I intended..... sort of meant who would we be without the past.........
April 17th, 2018 05:56
Lorna said:
Thanks Terthas - it got a littler heavier than I intended..... sort of meant who would we be without the past.........
April 17th, 2018 05:56
The Hungry Shadows
Nicholas Browning said:
The darkness vows to consume us all. A very true thing indeed. I enjoyed this. Quite right! Well done.
April 17th, 2018 05:55
Nicholas Browning said:
The darkness vows to consume us all. A very true thing indeed. I enjoyed this. Quite right! Well done.
April 17th, 2018 05:55
Riding Pegasus
Goldfinch60 said:
Flying on a horse must be wonderful. My daughter in law is a \'horse person\' so I can thoroughly understand your own feelings.
April 17th, 2018 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Flying on a horse must be wonderful. My daughter in law is a \'horse person\' so I can thoroughly understand your own feelings.
April 17th, 2018 00:41
Riding Pegasus
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Lorna what a wonderful experience to fly on a horse - your husband \'s great way with riding and riders has peppered this poem with beautiful reality - thanks so much for the share.
April 16th, 2018 10:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Lorna what a wonderful experience to fly on a horse - your husband \'s great way with riding and riders has peppered this poem with beautiful reality - thanks so much for the share.
April 16th, 2018 10:13
Riding Pegasus
orchidee said:
A fine write - written while riding a horse?! lol.
April 16th, 2018 09:04
orchidee said:
A fine write - written while riding a horse?! lol.
April 16th, 2018 09:04
Riding Pegasus
Michael Edwards said:
I agree with Terthas - this a beautiful poem Lorna.
April 16th, 2018 06:47
Michael Edwards said:
I agree with Terthas - this a beautiful poem Lorna.
April 16th, 2018 06:47
Much Ado About Anything
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears do run together and become indistinguishable but the joy will always outlast the pain. Good write.
April 14th, 2018 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Those tears do run together and become indistinguishable but the joy will always outlast the pain. Good write.
April 14th, 2018 00:59
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