Comments received on poems by Lorna
The Sound of You
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You mean the voice of my singing. Erm, it can apply here, if adjusted:
* You hear it (you hear me singing) and it causes you to lose the will to live
* You hear it screeching, and it torments you from within
* Yep, it channels itself into your brain-box, and you\'re cursed cos ya can\'t get rid of the sound of it! heehheehee.
March 8th, 2018 11:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You mean the voice of my singing. Erm, it can apply here, if adjusted:
* You hear it (you hear me singing) and it causes you to lose the will to live
* You hear it screeching, and it torments you from within
* Yep, it channels itself into your brain-box, and you\'re cursed cos ya can\'t get rid of the sound of it! heehheehee.
March 8th, 2018 11:00
The Sound of You
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Lorna!
So powerful and
heartfelt! The words
demand to be heard
and the visual enhances
the plea! A great write!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 08:24
Lauraš» said:
Wow, Lorna!
So powerful and
heartfelt! The words
demand to be heard
and the visual enhances
the plea! A great write!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 08:24
The Five Senses
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write I could smell the bacon - three rashers please.
March 7th, 2018 13:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write I could smell the bacon - three rashers please.
March 7th, 2018 13:57
The Five Senses
themerrypapist said:
Thank you for taking me back to the Sunday brunches of childhood.
March 7th, 2018 13:06
themerrypapist said:
Thank you for taking me back to the Sunday brunches of childhood.
March 7th, 2018 13:06
The Five Senses
orchidee said:
Thanks Lorna. Argghh - would me singing drive the senses crazy, send them into a torment, some hideous downward spiral, etc?! Dunno - depends if ya got ear plugs in. lol.
March 7th, 2018 09:30
orchidee said:
Thanks Lorna. Argghh - would me singing drive the senses crazy, send them into a torment, some hideous downward spiral, etc?! Dunno - depends if ya got ear plugs in. lol.
March 7th, 2018 09:30
The Five Senses
Ivory said:
What delicious piece of writing.
I enjoyed reading this with my morning coffee š
March 7th, 2018 08:27
Ivory said:
What delicious piece of writing.
I enjoyed reading this with my morning coffee š
March 7th, 2018 08:27
The Five Senses
FineB said:
Hi Lorna,
A lovely poem expressing the joy of home comforts and the power of our senses!
Thanks
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 07:51
FineB said:
Hi Lorna,
A lovely poem expressing the joy of home comforts and the power of our senses!
Thanks
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 07:51
The Five Senses
Lauraš» said:
Youāve made me so
hungry, Lorna!
Iāve got to go to get
myself some breakfast
for lunch...pronto!
I enjoyed your clean
and tasty poem with
all the fixings!
~Laura~
March 7th, 2018 06:44
Lauraš» said:
Youāve made me so
hungry, Lorna!
Iāve got to go to get
myself some breakfast
for lunch...pronto!
I enjoyed your clean
and tasty poem with
all the fixings!
~Laura~
March 7th, 2018 06:44
The Five Senses
Michael Edwards said:
Takes me back to my childhood - formica worktops, aluminium saucepans, an old stove - thanks for the memories Lorna - a really enjoyable read.
March 7th, 2018 06:33
Michael Edwards said:
Takes me back to my childhood - formica worktops, aluminium saucepans, an old stove - thanks for the memories Lorna - a really enjoyable read.
March 7th, 2018 06:33
Too Cold For Anything
w c said:
I too long for spring. I thank God it\'s springing!
March 6th, 2018 20:08
w c said:
I too long for spring. I thank God it\'s springing!
March 6th, 2018 20:08
Too Cold For Anything
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - an apt finalƩ to your your expressive outcry against this wintery interlude Lorna. A warm read to take the edge off the cold temperature here.
March 6th, 2018 09:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - an apt finalƩ to your your expressive outcry against this wintery interlude Lorna. A warm read to take the edge off the cold temperature here.
March 6th, 2018 09:57
Too Cold For Anything
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
a wonderful reflection of how you feel with winter!
I think I speak many of us, let the spring unfold quickly:)
MIchael
March 6th, 2018 07:50
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
a wonderful reflection of how you feel with winter!
I think I speak many of us, let the spring unfold quickly:)
MIchael
March 6th, 2018 07:50
Too Cold For Anything
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. The UK had a taste last week, but not as severe as yours.
March 6th, 2018 06:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. The UK had a taste last week, but not as severe as yours.
March 6th, 2018 06:49
A Touch of Frost
Lauraš» said:
Hindsight is 20/20, Lorna!
A fine reflective write!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 6th, 2018 05:16
Lauraš» said:
Hindsight is 20/20, Lorna!
A fine reflective write!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 6th, 2018 05:16
Too Cold For Anything
Lauraš» said:
Love that ending, Lorna!
Iām with you...
āLetās choke The seasonal visiting villainā. Enough is enough already!
Stay warm!
~Laura~
March 6th, 2018 04:24
Lauraš» said:
Love that ending, Lorna!
Iām with you...
āLetās choke The seasonal visiting villainā. Enough is enough already!
Stay warm!
~Laura~
March 6th, 2018 04:24
A Touch of Frost
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, going back can sometimes be frightening but it can also be wonderful.
March 6th, 2018 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, going back can sometimes be frightening but it can also be wonderful.
March 6th, 2018 01:45
A Touch of Frost
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A short piece of reflection, but written with so much said
Well done
Michael :)
March 5th, 2018 12:09
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
A short piece of reflection, but written with so much said
Well done
Michael :)
March 5th, 2018 12:09
A Touch of Frost
Michael Edwards said:
Always scary revisiting the past - great write Lorna
March 5th, 2018 07:38
Michael Edwards said:
Always scary revisiting the past - great write Lorna
March 5th, 2018 07:38
A Touch of Frost
Lorna said:
Thanks LG...... the past can be both wonderful and sad at the same time can\'t it...........
March 5th, 2018 05:40
Lorna said:
Thanks LG...... the past can be both wonderful and sad at the same time can\'t it...........
March 5th, 2018 05:40
If They Dare!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Lorna, sounds like he is a good brother in spite of his \'gravitas\'.
March 5th, 2018 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Lorna, sounds like he is a good brother in spite of his \'gravitas\'.
March 5th, 2018 02:10
If They Dare!
Lauraš» said:
This is a great one, Lorna!
I didnāt read the comment
before I read your verse!
I thought it was about you
or some other individual
buying some sort of blade
at a local store for protection!
Then I read your comments.
You certainly surprised me!
Anacondas!!! I canāt even
watch the movie ANACONDA!
Your brother is very brave!
More power to him!
~Laura~
March 4th, 2018 10:49
Lauraš» said:
This is a great one, Lorna!
I didnāt read the comment
before I read your verse!
I thought it was about you
or some other individual
buying some sort of blade
at a local store for protection!
Then I read your comments.
You certainly surprised me!
Anacondas!!! I canāt even
watch the movie ANACONDA!
Your brother is very brave!
More power to him!
~Laura~
March 4th, 2018 10:49
If They Dare!
Michael Edwards said:
And if you were my sister I\'d laugh with you as I\'m sure he would too - such a fun write.
March 4th, 2018 06:54
Michael Edwards said:
And if you were my sister I\'d laugh with you as I\'m sure he would too - such a fun write.
March 4th, 2018 06:54
If They Dare!
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
I would forgive you if you were my sister haha, a lovely little poem with a touch of humour
Michael :)
March 4th, 2018 06:16
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
I would forgive you if you were my sister haha, a lovely little poem with a touch of humour
Michael :)
March 4th, 2018 06:16
Phoenix from the Ashes
Goldfinch60 said:
I can understand exactly where you are coming from Lorna, my wife has dementia and it is progressing very swiftly.
You are so right that writing poetry does help a great deal.
March 4th, 2018 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
I can understand exactly where you are coming from Lorna, my wife has dementia and it is progressing very swiftly.
You are so right that writing poetry does help a great deal.
March 4th, 2018 01:15
Phoenix from the Ashes
kevin browne said:
your writing has raised a lot of memories. I frequent my local hospital on a regular basis because I have chronic pancreatitis and I have met plenty of elderly people beside me who were suffering with altimeters disease and the story they used to tell me were truly inspirational. through the day they didn\'t appear so stressed but during the night they became really active and mischievous. I\'m sorry to read your situation though. my heart goes out to you.
March 3rd, 2018 08:56
kevin browne said:
your writing has raised a lot of memories. I frequent my local hospital on a regular basis because I have chronic pancreatitis and I have met plenty of elderly people beside me who were suffering with altimeters disease and the story they used to tell me were truly inspirational. through the day they didn\'t appear so stressed but during the night they became really active and mischievous. I\'m sorry to read your situation though. my heart goes out to you.
March 3rd, 2018 08:56
Phoenix from the Ashes
Lauraš» said:
Oh my dear Lorna...
This is a sad one! I can empathize with you! My aunt was afflicted with that debilitating disease! Itās horrible for the afflicted and for those of us that witness it and are helpless in the sense that we cannot make them better! We witness and suffer along with the afflicted! Seeing your mom and now your husband with the disease is a lot to bear! Stay strong my friend! Prayers and love are on your way!
~Laura~
P.S.-A great pic to illustrate your write!
March 3rd, 2018 07:53
Lauraš» said:
Oh my dear Lorna...
This is a sad one! I can empathize with you! My aunt was afflicted with that debilitating disease! Itās horrible for the afflicted and for those of us that witness it and are helpless in the sense that we cannot make them better! We witness and suffer along with the afflicted! Seeing your mom and now your husband with the disease is a lot to bear! Stay strong my friend! Prayers and love are on your way!
~Laura~
P.S.-A great pic to illustrate your write!
March 3rd, 2018 07:53
Phoenix from the Ashes
Michael Edwards said:
My heart goes out to you Lorna - a dreadful problem - And a super write.
March 3rd, 2018 07:17
Michael Edwards said:
My heart goes out to you Lorna - a dreadful problem - And a super write.
March 3rd, 2018 07:17
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