Comments received on poems by Lorna
Handful of Biscuits
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure I like soggy biscuits like Orchi - just hard and crunchy - English biscuits of course.
Seriously Lorna this is a fine work.
March 14th, 2018 10:52
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure I like soggy biscuits like Orchi - just hard and crunchy - English biscuits of course.
Seriously Lorna this is a fine work.
March 14th, 2018 10:52
Handful of Biscuits
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You got those biccies and a nice pot of tea with them?! Soggy biccies, yummy! heehee.
March 14th, 2018 09:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. You got those biccies and a nice pot of tea with them?! Soggy biccies, yummy! heehee.
March 14th, 2018 09:52
Handful of Biscuits
willyweed said:
this is sad but beautiful work, I salute your pain and talent. ww
March 14th, 2018 07:16
willyweed said:
this is sad but beautiful work, I salute your pain and talent. ww
March 14th, 2018 07:16
Handful of Biscuits
Fay Slimm. said:
A poem to send the heart into weep mode dear Lorna - - tenderly appealing and thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2018 06:36
Fay Slimm. said:
A poem to send the heart into weep mode dear Lorna - - tenderly appealing and thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2018 06:36
Handful of Biscuits
Nicholas Browning said:
Sent shivers down my spine. I like poems like these, some melancholic remembrance of a tale I don\'t know yet, but may yet come to know later on. It\'s like the color red trapped in grey. Overwhelmingly simplistic, but overwhelming nonetheless. Well done.
March 14th, 2018 06:26
Nicholas Browning said:
Sent shivers down my spine. I like poems like these, some melancholic remembrance of a tale I don\'t know yet, but may yet come to know later on. It\'s like the color red trapped in grey. Overwhelmingly simplistic, but overwhelming nonetheless. Well done.
March 14th, 2018 06:26
Butter Side Down
Resa71 said:
A wonderful way to begin my day!
I smiled as I read this.
Thank you!
Resa :)
March 13th, 2018 14:39
Resa71 said:
A wonderful way to begin my day!
I smiled as I read this.
Thank you!
Resa :)
March 13th, 2018 14:39
Butter Side Down
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, the toasty cat scenario is one of life’s humourous images.
March 13th, 2018 08:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, the toasty cat scenario is one of life’s humourous images.
March 13th, 2018 08:54
Butter Side Down
RiverJordan said:
I\'m nocturnal, I still haven\'t slept haha, toast for dinner..
March 13th, 2018 04:42
RiverJordan said:
I\'m nocturnal, I still haven\'t slept haha, toast for dinner..
March 13th, 2018 04:42
Butter Side Down
Fay Slimm. said:
Am smiling at that vision of cats with buttered toast on their backs - -thanks for this fun write to brighten my morning dear Lorna.
March 13th, 2018 04:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Am smiling at that vision of cats with buttered toast on their backs - -thanks for this fun write to brighten my morning dear Lorna.
March 13th, 2018 04:29
Butter Side Down
Michael Edwards said:
Oh a good laugh this am - it begs many questions like when I retrieve my underwear from the washing why is it always inside out\'
March 13th, 2018 03:33
Michael Edwards said:
Oh a good laugh this am - it begs many questions like when I retrieve my underwear from the washing why is it always inside out\'
March 13th, 2018 03:33
Butter Side Down
Lorna said:
Yes the cat toast has burned itself into my mind.........
March 13th, 2018 03:28
Lorna said:
Yes the cat toast has burned itself into my mind.........
March 13th, 2018 03:28
Butter Side Down
Laura🌻 said:
Love your comment, Lorna!
I guess the toast will be safe and good enough to eat! I’m envisioning that cat with buttered toast strapped on its back!🤣
I predict it willl land on its feet! Have a fun loving day!
~Laura~
March 13th, 2018 03:22
Laura🌻 said:
Love your comment, Lorna!
I guess the toast will be safe and good enough to eat! I’m envisioning that cat with buttered toast strapped on its back!🤣
I predict it willl land on its feet! Have a fun loving day!
~Laura~
March 13th, 2018 03:22
Measurements of Life
Goldfinch60 said:
May that contentment go on for miles. Good write.
March 13th, 2018 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
May that contentment go on for miles. Good write.
March 13th, 2018 02:11
Measurements of Life
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely to read these well-written comparisons with life\'s journey and our attitude to its true meaning - a fine piece with much food for thought about how our yards of contentment are measured with smiles - -
- -- thanks for this read dear Lorna.
March 12th, 2018 17:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely to read these well-written comparisons with life\'s journey and our attitude to its true meaning - a fine piece with much food for thought about how our yards of contentment are measured with smiles - -
- -- thanks for this read dear Lorna.
March 12th, 2018 17:36
Measurements of Life
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Interesting Poem. Safe Distances Between Sunrise and Sunsets. Life is Fragile. Being Careful is Important to See Another Day and Night. Life can be Simple and Always Not Being Hard.
March 12th, 2018 09:40
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Interesting Poem. Safe Distances Between Sunrise and Sunsets. Life is Fragile. Being Careful is Important to See Another Day and Night. Life can be Simple and Always Not Being Hard.
March 12th, 2018 09:40
Measurements of Life
Michael Edwards said:
Love the concept - love the poem - great work Lorna
March 12th, 2018 08:05
Michael Edwards said:
Love the concept - love the poem - great work Lorna
March 12th, 2018 08:05
Measurements of Life
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
you certainly \'measured\' this piece well indeed, great little write
Michael :)
March 12th, 2018 06:56
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
you certainly \'measured\' this piece well indeed, great little write
Michael :)
March 12th, 2018 06:56
Measurements of Life
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
That is an absolutely beautiful write with a great visual!
“yards of contentment”...
l love this phrase!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 06:23
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
That is an absolutely beautiful write with a great visual!
“yards of contentment”...
l love this phrase!
~Laura~
March 12th, 2018 06:23
Aquarius Lost
Noah said:
I love the throwback feeling the second stanza gives me :)
March 11th, 2018 10:32
Noah said:
I love the throwback feeling the second stanza gives me :)
March 11th, 2018 10:32
Hanging Rock
Michael Edwards said:
Great - I\'m a lover of shorties and this a good \'un.
March 11th, 2018 09:53
Michael Edwards said:
Great - I\'m a lover of shorties and this a good \'un.
March 11th, 2018 09:53
Hanging Rock
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. My singing stifles anyone slowly! Aww, why they want to drop a rock on me?! heehee.
March 11th, 2018 09:49
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. My singing stifles anyone slowly! Aww, why they want to drop a rock on me?! heehee.
March 11th, 2018 09:49
Hanging Rock
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
Very true, its all part of life sadly.
short and to the point
Michael :)
March 11th, 2018 09:28
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
Very true, its all part of life sadly.
short and to the point
Michael :)
March 11th, 2018 09:28
Hanging Rock
Accidental Poet said:
And you\'re still here, so thank God for that. We\'d miss you here @ MPS.
March 11th, 2018 08:49
Accidental Poet said:
And you\'re still here, so thank God for that. We\'d miss you here @ MPS.
March 11th, 2018 08:49
The Dark That Never Leaves
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there to take away the dark of the night.
March 11th, 2018 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
That light will always be there to take away the dark of the night.
March 11th, 2018 02:00
The Dark That Never Leaves
rrodriguez said:
We\'re going through this prehistoric dawn right now in Puerto Rico. Thanks for the fine write.
March 10th, 2018 17:03
rrodriguez said:
We\'re going through this prehistoric dawn right now in Puerto Rico. Thanks for the fine write.
March 10th, 2018 17:03
The Dark That Never Leaves
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
Great piece, and I love candle-light, if a power-cut occurs. :)
Michael
March 10th, 2018 16:27
Poetic25 said:
Lorna,
Great piece, and I love candle-light, if a power-cut occurs. :)
Michael
March 10th, 2018 16:27
The Dark That Never Leaves
orchidee said:
We got \'dark dawns\' in UK in 2 weeks time!
March 10th, 2018 12:37
orchidee said:
We got \'dark dawns\' in UK in 2 weeks time!
March 10th, 2018 12:37
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