Comments received on poems by Lorna
Death Blows
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Oddly enough this write
of yours made me smile!
It made me remember my
favorite cousin. He was
always smiling no matter
what! Iāll always remember
him as when I saw him the
last time! Whenever we saw
each other, we would
reminisce about the good
old days! We would laugh
so hard and always enjoyed
each otherās company! He
never did let me know he
was diseased with cancer!
When he died, I was unable
th attend his funeral!
I am glad I didnāt because
Iāll always remember him
smiling, laughing, talking...
AND NOT IN A COFFIN!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 05:44
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Oddly enough this write
of yours made me smile!
It made me remember my
favorite cousin. He was
always smiling no matter
what! Iāll always remember
him as when I saw him the
last time! Whenever we saw
each other, we would
reminisce about the good
old days! We would laugh
so hard and always enjoyed
each otherās company! He
never did let me know he
was diseased with cancer!
When he died, I was unable
th attend his funeral!
I am glad I didnāt because
Iāll always remember him
smiling, laughing, talking...
AND NOT IN A COFFIN!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 05:44
Demons of Stupidity
Caring dove said:
lol ! great poem , lorna ! don\'t let anything ruin your lovely cup of tea, those politicians don\'t deserve our time and attention , don\'t let anything stress you , especially not them , just drink your tea and enjoy it . x
March 21st, 2018 04:37
Caring dove said:
lol ! great poem , lorna ! don\'t let anything ruin your lovely cup of tea, those politicians don\'t deserve our time and attention , don\'t let anything stress you , especially not them , just drink your tea and enjoy it . x
March 21st, 2018 04:37
Death Blows
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ This made me cry because I attended the funeral of a dear Friend yesterday and when I saw his coffin disappear through the curtains I realised we would never sit and put the World to Right again over a glass of Chianti ~ some we miss more than others ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Big Cyber Hugs from your Faithful Friend BRIAN @@@
March 21st, 2018 04:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LORNA ~ This made me cry because I attended the funeral of a dear Friend yesterday and when I saw his coffin disappear through the curtains I realised we would never sit and put the World to Right again over a glass of Chianti ~ some we miss more than others ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Big Cyber Hugs from your Faithful Friend BRIAN @@@
March 21st, 2018 04:27
Death Blows
Michael Edwards said:
Oh this is just so lovely - what a great tribute Lorna
March 21st, 2018 04:25
Michael Edwards said:
Oh this is just so lovely - what a great tribute Lorna
March 21st, 2018 04:25
Death Blows
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write,so glad they hugged you and you will remember that highlight.
March 21st, 2018 03:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write,so glad they hugged you and you will remember that highlight.
March 21st, 2018 03:47
Showing Off for the Equinox
Lauraš» said:
Love Rupert!
I still have some Rupert
books around! My children
loved Rupert!
A great write, Lorna!
I enjoyed the music!
I hope there wonāt be
a lot of snow coming
your way!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2018 18:14
Lauraš» said:
Love Rupert!
I still have some Rupert
books around! My children
loved Rupert!
A great write, Lorna!
I enjoyed the music!
I hope there wonāt be
a lot of snow coming
your way!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2018 18:14
Showing Off for the Equinox
Michael Edwards said:
Now that is a super shortie and great music to go with it.
March 20th, 2018 14:30
Michael Edwards said:
Now that is a super shortie and great music to go with it.
March 20th, 2018 14:30
Showing Off for the Equinox
willyweed said:
ahh spring is a beautiful thing. ww
March 20th, 2018 09:08
willyweed said:
ahh spring is a beautiful thing. ww
March 20th, 2018 09:08
Showing Off for the Equinox
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write and a great piece of music.
March 20th, 2018 09:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Good positive write and a great piece of music.
March 20th, 2018 09:02
Showing Off for the Equinox
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. Oh dear - Spring\'s imp - and limping in?! There\'ll be better days!
March 20th, 2018 06:23
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. Oh dear - Spring\'s imp - and limping in?! There\'ll be better days!
March 20th, 2018 06:23
Silence and Me
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
A truly wonderful poem, reflecting images of nature
M:)
March 19th, 2018 13:10
Poetic25 said:
Lorna
A truly wonderful poem, reflecting images of nature
M:)
March 19th, 2018 13:10
Silence and Me
Poetic Dan said:
Thanks for warming up my day with a beautiful picture we painted together ;)
March 19th, 2018 07:48
Poetic Dan said:
Thanks for warming up my day with a beautiful picture we painted together ;)
March 19th, 2018 07:48
Silence and Me
orchidee said:
Will that be 35F or 35C, or even -35 Lorna? I would prefer it be \'plus\' and \'C\'. lol.
March 19th, 2018 05:56
orchidee said:
Will that be 35F or 35C, or even -35 Lorna? I would prefer it be \'plus\' and \'C\'. lol.
March 19th, 2018 05:56
Silence and Me
Fay Slimm. said:
A well-deserved winner of any poetic competition to express the feel of Spring in the air - - I love the title and subject dear Lorna and could see you and Silence walking those pine-woods.
March 19th, 2018 05:30
Fay Slimm. said:
A well-deserved winner of any poetic competition to express the feel of Spring in the air - - I love the title and subject dear Lorna and could see you and Silence walking those pine-woods.
March 19th, 2018 05:30
Silence and Me
Lauraš» said:
No worries, Lorna,
weāll bail you out!š
Seriously, as all the
others have commented,
an EXCELLENT piece!
I enjoyed it very much!
Congrats!šš»
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 04:29
Lauraš» said:
No worries, Lorna,
weāll bail you out!š
Seriously, as all the
others have commented,
an EXCELLENT piece!
I enjoyed it very much!
Congrats!šš»
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 04:29
Silence and Me
Michael Edwards said:
Yes copyright laws can get a bit \'deep\' in both the States and here in the UK. On another site I am always contributing to any queries raised having lectured in copyright in my working life. It would appear that transfer of copyright appeared in the terms of the competition which you effectively accepted when entering. I doubt if they\'ll pursue you for posting it here - it would be churlish of them if they did especially as you have acknowledged their rights. Anyway that aside I can see why it won - a superb work Lorna
March 19th, 2018 03:18
Michael Edwards said:
Yes copyright laws can get a bit \'deep\' in both the States and here in the UK. On another site I am always contributing to any queries raised having lectured in copyright in my working life. It would appear that transfer of copyright appeared in the terms of the competition which you effectively accepted when entering. I doubt if they\'ll pursue you for posting it here - it would be churlish of them if they did especially as you have acknowledged their rights. Anyway that aside I can see why it won - a superb work Lorna
March 19th, 2018 03:18
Silence and Me
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Don\'t mind.... your work is so pure!it touches my heart.....keep it up ....your writing style explores your simplicity and strength.
March 19th, 2018 02:30
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Don\'t mind.... your work is so pure!it touches my heart.....keep it up ....your writing style explores your simplicity and strength.
March 19th, 2018 02:30
Silence and Me
Caring dove said:
hi lorna , seems a bit strange to me, that they own your poem lol how random i wouldnt post work to them again . a beautiful piece of writing lorna,
March 19th, 2018 02:18
Caring dove said:
hi lorna , seems a bit strange to me, that they own your poem lol how random i wouldnt post work to them again . a beautiful piece of writing lorna,
March 19th, 2018 02:18
Silence and Me
orchidee said:
A lovely write Lorna. That\'s a bit much, that the competition organisers now OWN your poem.
Surely you can\'t pinch your own poem?! You know, that big word, if we nick anyone else\'s work - plagi-wotsit. Plagiarising! It sends poets into a mad fury, and rightly so I think. Elsewhere they \'outed\' a poet who was pinching other\'s work. He got hellfire and damnation comments. But that\'s YOUR work!
March 19th, 2018 02:06
orchidee said:
A lovely write Lorna. That\'s a bit much, that the competition organisers now OWN your poem.
Surely you can\'t pinch your own poem?! You know, that big word, if we nick anyone else\'s work - plagi-wotsit. Plagiarising! It sends poets into a mad fury, and rightly so I think. Elsewhere they \'outed\' a poet who was pinching other\'s work. He got hellfire and damnation comments. But that\'s YOUR work!
March 19th, 2018 02:06
Silence and Me
Resa71 said:
Such a wonderful piece.
I donāt think theyāll notice:)
Resa
March 19th, 2018 02:03
Resa71 said:
Such a wonderful piece.
I donāt think theyāll notice:)
Resa
March 19th, 2018 02:03
Butterfly Mornings
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Beautiful poetry and the video was amazing! I enjoyed seeing and listen to Stella Stevens sing, āButterfly Mornings and Wildflowers Afternoonsā! She and Jason Robards were great in āThe Ballad of Cable Hogueā! Fantastic movie!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 18th, 2018 16:10
Lauraš» said:
Lorna,
Beautiful poetry and the video was amazing! I enjoyed seeing and listen to Stella Stevens sing, āButterfly Mornings and Wildflowers Afternoonsā! She and Jason Robards were great in āThe Ballad of Cable Hogueā! Fantastic movie!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 18th, 2018 16:10
Butterfly Mornings
willyweed said:
Magical poem it takes flight and makes me happy. ww
March 18th, 2018 07:58
willyweed said:
Magical poem it takes flight and makes me happy. ww
March 18th, 2018 07:58
Butterfly Mornings
Michael Edwards said:
Two days ago we had large brimstone butterflies in the garden - today it\'s covered in snow - the worlds gone mad - super write Lorna
March 18th, 2018 07:33
Michael Edwards said:
Two days ago we had large brimstone butterflies in the garden - today it\'s covered in snow - the worlds gone mad - super write Lorna
March 18th, 2018 07:33
Butterfly Mornings
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. Those butterflies flutter by, and are gone! Where did the flit to?!
March 18th, 2018 05:47
orchidee said:
A fine write Lorna. Those butterflies flutter by, and are gone! Where did the flit to?!
March 18th, 2018 05:47
Demons of Stupidity
Goldfinch60 said:
As I have said so many times before
\"How do you know when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Good strong write.
March 18th, 2018 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
As I have said so many times before
\"How do you know when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Good strong write.
March 18th, 2018 01:39
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