Comments received on poems by Lorna



Butter Side Down
Laura🌻 said:

Love your comment, Lorna!
I guess the toast will be safe and good enough to eat! I’m envisioning that cat with buttered toast strapped on its back!🤣
I predict it willl land on its feet! Have a fun loving day!

~Laura~

March 13th, 2018 03:22

Measurements of Life
Goldfinch60 said:

May that contentment go on for miles. Good write.

March 13th, 2018 02:11

Measurements of Life
Fay Slimm. said:

Lovely to read these well-written comparisons with life\'s journey and our attitude to its true meaning - a fine piece with much food for thought about how our yards of contentment are measured with smiles - -
- -- thanks for this read dear Lorna.

March 12th, 2018 17:36

Measurements of Life
Michael J. Schaeffer said:

Interesting Poem. Safe Distances Between Sunrise and Sunsets. Life is Fragile. Being Careful is Important to See Another Day and Night. Life can be Simple and Always Not Being Hard.

March 12th, 2018 09:40

Measurements of Life
Michael Edwards said:

Love the concept - love the poem - great work Lorna

March 12th, 2018 08:05

Measurements of Life
Poetic25 said:

Lorna
you certainly \'measured\' this piece well indeed, great little write
Michael :)

March 12th, 2018 06:56

Measurements of Life
Laura🌻 said:

Lorna,
That is an absolutely beautiful write with a great visual!
ā€œyards of contentmentā€...
l love this phrase!

~Laura~

March 12th, 2018 06:23

Hanging Rock
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, but you are still here.

March 11th, 2018 14:38

Aquarius Lost
Noah said:

I love the throwback feeling the second stanza gives me :)

March 11th, 2018 10:32

Hanging Rock
Michael Edwards said:

Great - I\'m a lover of shorties and this a good \'un.

March 11th, 2018 09:53

Hanging Rock
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. My singing stifles anyone slowly! Aww, why they want to drop a rock on me?! heehee.

March 11th, 2018 09:49

Hanging Rock
Poetic25 said:

Lorna,
Very true, its all part of life sadly.
short and to the point
Michael :)


March 11th, 2018 09:28

The Dark That Never Leaves
Goldfinch60 said:

That light will always be there to take away the dark of the night.

March 11th, 2018 02:00

The Dark That Never Leaves
rrodriguez said:

We\'re going through this prehistoric dawn right now in Puerto Rico. Thanks for the fine write.

March 10th, 2018 17:03

The Dark That Never Leaves
Poetic25 said:

Lorna,
Great piece, and I love candle-light, if a power-cut occurs. :)

Michael

March 10th, 2018 16:27

The Dark That Never Leaves
Resa71 said:

Nice write:)

March 10th, 2018 14:03

The Dark That Never Leaves
orchidee said:

We got \'dark dawns\' in UK in 2 weeks time!

March 10th, 2018 12:37

The Sound of You
smallest_stars said:

You created a beautiful little gem that speaks to me and many others! A lovely write!

March 10th, 2018 11:01

The Dark That Never Leaves
Michael Edwards said:

Still a few prehistoric dawns in our house 0 fine work Lorna.

March 10th, 2018 10:17

Aquarius Lost
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Lorna, I remember the sixties and that time of freedom and interaction with each other was beautiful. The hippies had it right - Make love, not war.

March 10th, 2018 01:24

Aquarius Lost
Michael Edwards said:

Spot on and well expressed Lorna

March 10th, 2018 00:56

Aquarius Lost
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

\"O YES ~ I remember it well ~ I think !\" Today it\'s \"The Age of Mysterious\" and alas no ending Sight ! Yours BRIAN !

March 9th, 2018 15:29

Aquarius Lost
Kurt Philip Behm said:

I particularly like these lines....

\"Youths whose youth is gone
But not so far as youth of now
All corporate gagged and bound\"

Is that \'Newtown\' Bucks County?

March 9th, 2018 10:21

Aquarius Lost
orchidee said:

A fine write Lorna. I don\'t go along with \'The Age of.......\' thingys though!
Meanwhile - you don\'t want no Age of Aquarius. It will be torment, cos I shall sing the song of that title! \'Sing\' being the dreaded word! heehee.

March 9th, 2018 09:32

Aquarius Lost
Lorna said:

Thanks Laura - but like Kurt\'s message today, it just make you feel so sad and helpless.........

March 9th, 2018 07:30

Aquarius Lost
Laura🌻 said:

Wow, Lorna!
Spot on, my friend!
An awesome commentary delivered by your poem and by your ā€œpoet’s commentsā€!
A Brilliant Write! That pic is precious!


~Laura~


March 9th, 2018 07:26

The Sound of You
antonparker8 said:

this is amazing

March 8th, 2018 16:02

Still I Am Walking
Jeremy Cohen said:

Goosebumps. Magnificent!

March 8th, 2018 15:49

The Sound of You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

She speaks and the sound of her voice
Is so sweet the Birds hush their singing
And the voice I hear falling on my ear
Within my Heart is ringing ...........

Love the sentiment in your Poem Lorna and it mirrors what I feel when I hear Angela\'s voice on the phone etc when we are separated ~ I melt ! And it is reciprocated whenever he hears mine ! That\'s the Story of ~ That\'s the Glory of LOVE ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN @@@

March 8th, 2018 11:43

The Sound of You
Poetic25 said:

Lorna,
A lovely little piece of writing.
\" Your voice is my heart\"
beautiful

Michael :)


March 8th, 2018 11:30



« Return to the profile of Lorna