Comments received on poems by Angela1711
Left me here to Die
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, it is such a shame that there are people out there who are like this.
Andy
April 26th, 2020 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, it is such a shame that there are people out there who are like this.
Andy
April 26th, 2020 00:25
For you
AlitaOpal said:
How beautiful and sweetly put together, lovely read 🌹🌹🌹
January 9th, 2020 20:03
AlitaOpal said:
How beautiful and sweetly put together, lovely read 🌹🌹🌹
January 9th, 2020 20:03
For you
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI ANGELA 1711 - Angela here ! I share this site with my Fiance BRIAN ! Love the PATHOS and sincerity in Your elegant Love Poem straight from your HEART - As all love Poems should be ! Your POEM has great RHYTHM and I love the *Free Verse* style because you are not restricted by Rhyme ! I love your POEM because it expresses how I feel about BRIAN ! We are getting married in April we are 31 & 36 ! It takes time to find the right person ! We dont cohabit (We are Youth Leaders in our Church) - but every now & again - we unlock a little more of ourselves for each other ! So far we love all of each other ! We were 11,500 miles apart for 15 months (I was on *Work Exchange* in Auckland NZ as a Physiotherapist) and now we are back together (Essex UK) we want to be together forever - like in Your Beautiful Poem ! We KNOW we are a *Match made in Heaven* !
Every Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please check our SITE ~ Thanks ~ A & B !
January 9th, 2020 17:38
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI ANGELA 1711 - Angela here ! I share this site with my Fiance BRIAN ! Love the PATHOS and sincerity in Your elegant Love Poem straight from your HEART - As all love Poems should be ! Your POEM has great RHYTHM and I love the *Free Verse* style because you are not restricted by Rhyme ! I love your POEM because it expresses how I feel about BRIAN ! We are getting married in April we are 31 & 36 ! It takes time to find the right person ! We dont cohabit (We are Youth Leaders in our Church) - but every now & again - we unlock a little more of ourselves for each other ! So far we love all of each other ! We were 11,500 miles apart for 15 months (I was on *Work Exchange* in Auckland NZ as a Physiotherapist) and now we are back together (Essex UK) we want to be together forever - like in Your Beautiful Poem ! We KNOW we are a *Match made in Heaven* !
Every Blessing & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please check our SITE ~ Thanks ~ A & B !
January 9th, 2020 17:38
Wilted body
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write. When you find those happy thoughts grasp them with all your heart and as they get nearer to your heart they will find the light and once the light is found your happiness will return.
July 5th, 2019 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write. When you find those happy thoughts grasp them with all your heart and as they get nearer to your heart they will find the light and once the light is found your happiness will return.
July 5th, 2019 00:39
Dancing With The Devil
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
This is creatively dark and intense, with metaphoric poetic use of Devils and demons , you express so very awesomely, proving you are no novice. Kudos!
Plz pls do comment my newest poem too.
May 4th, 2019 15:05
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
This is creatively dark and intense, with metaphoric poetic use of Devils and demons , you express so very awesomely, proving you are no novice. Kudos!
Plz pls do comment my newest poem too.
May 4th, 2019 15:05
Dancing With The Devil
moordykspot2 said:
A Dark Poem Very well composed and explicit. An interesting read I do hope my friend it is somewhat imaginary but I fear it is written from the heart which indicates I troubled mind. I hope I am wrong. I did enjoy the read though. Take Care
April 7th, 2019 15:18
moordykspot2 said:
A Dark Poem Very well composed and explicit. An interesting read I do hope my friend it is somewhat imaginary but I fear it is written from the heart which indicates I troubled mind. I hope I am wrong. I did enjoy the read though. Take Care
April 7th, 2019 15:18
Dancing With The Devil
Yorelzinala said:
Articulating your struggle is already going towards that light. Wonderful writ!
April 7th, 2019 02:34
Yorelzinala said:
Articulating your struggle is already going towards that light. Wonderful writ!
April 7th, 2019 02:34
Oh Little Humming Bird
Goldfinch60 said:
The humming bird can see the light, let us hope that homo sapiens starts to see it as well.
March 17th, 2019 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
The humming bird can see the light, let us hope that homo sapiens starts to see it as well.
March 17th, 2019 01:49
Oh Little Humming Bird
Nicholas Browning said:
The bird will fly and fly freely unto the sky: at least I hope so, anyway.
March 16th, 2019 14:36
Nicholas Browning said:
The bird will fly and fly freely unto the sky: at least I hope so, anyway.
March 16th, 2019 14:36
The hate Today I Must Keep Locked Away
Nicholas Browning said:
So many people hating their fathers today. Well, men aren\'t always role models of excellence. Best of luck in your endeavor to mask your hatred.
March 16th, 2019 01:34
Nicholas Browning said:
So many people hating their fathers today. Well, men aren\'t always role models of excellence. Best of luck in your endeavor to mask your hatred.
March 16th, 2019 01:34
The hate Today I Must Keep Locked Away
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write Angela, i hope that you can move forward in peace and love.
March 16th, 2019 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful write Angela, i hope that you can move forward in peace and love.
March 16th, 2019 01:13
I Died That Night
JaydeVictoria said:
Wow, this is a very descriptive dark write. It \'s good to go out of our comfort zone sometimes and you did it really well. I too, usually write dark poetry but have been going out of my way to write things about love and other soppy stuff! But poems like this are much more grabbing and scarily inviting. Great write liked the format also!
March 10th, 2019 15:56
JaydeVictoria said:
Wow, this is a very descriptive dark write. It \'s good to go out of our comfort zone sometimes and you did it really well. I too, usually write dark poetry but have been going out of my way to write things about love and other soppy stuff! But poems like this are much more grabbing and scarily inviting. Great write liked the format also!
March 10th, 2019 15:56
I Died That Night
EliDagger said:
I typically write dark poetry and this really grabbed me. Great piece of writing!
March 10th, 2019 03:04
EliDagger said:
I typically write dark poetry and this really grabbed me. Great piece of writing!
March 10th, 2019 03:04
My Pregnancy Journey
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write, she will always bring you pleasure and love.
March 1st, 2019 15:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write, she will always bring you pleasure and love.
March 1st, 2019 15:56
Stranded
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
You\'ll find your way A
and sometimes where we think we want to be is not where we want to at all...
Greatw write
February 28th, 2019 09:19
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
You\'ll find your way A
and sometimes where we think we want to be is not where we want to at all...
Greatw write
February 28th, 2019 09:19
Her Hardest Goodbye
vanabba3 said:
Another triumph! Liked the twist in the that you will see her soon...
February 24th, 2019 23:39
vanabba3 said:
Another triumph! Liked the twist in the that you will see her soon...
February 24th, 2019 23:39
The devil in disguise
vanabba3 said:
I couldn\'t resist the title... Wow! very personable, well written and heartfelt. Nice work!
February 24th, 2019 23:35
vanabba3 said:
I couldn\'t resist the title... Wow! very personable, well written and heartfelt. Nice work!
February 24th, 2019 23:35
Her Hardest Goodbye
Goldfinch60 said:
Your message is so strong in these emotive words Angela.
February 24th, 2019 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Your message is so strong in these emotive words Angela.
February 24th, 2019 01:17
No Longer Admired
Neville said:
I note you tend to write more when you are feeling sad or down... you have more than adequately emphasized your mixed emotions of doubt, confusion and sadness here... I hope the New Year brings more joy to you... N
December 30th, 2018 06:24
Neville said:
I note you tend to write more when you are feeling sad or down... you have more than adequately emphasized your mixed emotions of doubt, confusion and sadness here... I hope the New Year brings more joy to you... N
December 30th, 2018 06:24
The devil in disguise
Angela1711 said:
Thank you for the reply. Yes i agree sometimes people around us influence how we behave
December 20th, 2018 16:03
Angela1711 said:
Thank you for the reply. Yes i agree sometimes people around us influence how we behave
December 20th, 2018 16:03
The devil in disguise
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Aren\'t they ALL, ONCE EVERYTHING IS SAID AND DONE.?What I believe it is is NOT THE PERSON THEMSELVES..when two people are in fleeting love, they are extremely vulnerable to outside influences..especially when all they can see is each other...but when others who notice this start feeling left out or what have you, it releases a darkness from within them ...then it grows as more and more become aware of your bliss..so, then there is this black cloud created by human envy, jealousy, sometimes just down right evil that takes over one of them or BOTH OF THEM AND THEY ARE HURT AND SO, THAT IS THAT...be very wary of your surroundings when love comes to you next time..I would be willing to bet that your ex lover was influenced by something outside of herself to end up treating you the way that she did...anyway, very nice writing ...enjoyed
December 16th, 2018 19:18
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Aren\'t they ALL, ONCE EVERYTHING IS SAID AND DONE.?What I believe it is is NOT THE PERSON THEMSELVES..when two people are in fleeting love, they are extremely vulnerable to outside influences..especially when all they can see is each other...but when others who notice this start feeling left out or what have you, it releases a darkness from within them ...then it grows as more and more become aware of your bliss..so, then there is this black cloud created by human envy, jealousy, sometimes just down right evil that takes over one of them or BOTH OF THEM AND THEY ARE HURT AND SO, THAT IS THAT...be very wary of your surroundings when love comes to you next time..I would be willing to bet that your ex lover was influenced by something outside of herself to end up treating you the way that she did...anyway, very nice writing ...enjoyed
December 16th, 2018 19:18
The devil in disguise
Laura🌻 said:
Angela1711,
An excellent write!
Most of us can easily be snared into a situation so aptly penned by you!
It’s painful...even to remember...once out of it!
Thank you for sharing this poignant glimpse of an unfortunate situation!
~Laura~
December 16th, 2018 08:52
Laura🌻 said:
Angela1711,
An excellent write!
Most of us can easily be snared into a situation so aptly penned by you!
It’s painful...even to remember...once out of it!
Thank you for sharing this poignant glimpse of an unfortunate situation!
~Laura~
December 16th, 2018 08:52
Tick Tock
Angela1711 said:
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment 😊 xx
December 15th, 2018 18:08
Angela1711 said:
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment 😊 xx
December 15th, 2018 18:08
Tick Tock
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks ANGELA for Sharing a very intriguing Poem ! Every Human on planet Earth gets the same Daily Time Allocation : 24 hours ! Its what we do with it that really counts ! Because we are all 24 hours older !
We all have recurring Circumstances & People (some good : some bad) in our lives ! Every Blessing & Love in all you do !
ANGELA (NZ) & BRIAN (UK) 🧡
December 15th, 2018 14:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks ANGELA for Sharing a very intriguing Poem ! Every Human on planet Earth gets the same Daily Time Allocation : 24 hours ! Its what we do with it that really counts ! Because we are all 24 hours older !
We all have recurring Circumstances & People (some good : some bad) in our lives ! Every Blessing & Love in all you do !
ANGELA (NZ) & BRIAN (UK) 🧡
December 15th, 2018 14:34
Bitter goodbye
Netashi said:
Any goodbye hurts and it varies. The loss of a hero, loved one, and a father must hurt even though how little you were connected by blood and maybe something else but was taken to early from you to see it. Beautifully written and somber poem. Keep up the great work. And also welcome to MPS.
-Theta
December 13th, 2018 13:46
Netashi said:
Any goodbye hurts and it varies. The loss of a hero, loved one, and a father must hurt even though how little you were connected by blood and maybe something else but was taken to early from you to see it. Beautifully written and somber poem. Keep up the great work. And also welcome to MPS.
-Theta
December 13th, 2018 13:46
Bitter goodbye
Angela1711 said:
Thank you for the kind message. Much love x
December 13th, 2018 13:19
Angela1711 said:
Thank you for the kind message. Much love x
December 13th, 2018 13:19
Bitter goodbye
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome ANGELA ~ Thanks for sharing your first Poem. MPS is an EMPATHETIC site so you will get some supportive replies.
Your POEM is very elegantly penned ~ BUT with a tragic message. My parents are very important to ME and ANGELA\'S (my Fiancee) to Her. However the scenario you describe is not uncommon for a variety of reasons. Im 35 and I have Friends who did not even bother to attend their Father\'s funeral. Thinking of YOU.
Love & Blessings BRIAN & ANGELA
MPS is an empathetic site and works by reading & commenting on each others POEMS. You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ OK. Please visit our site ~ Thanks B & A !
December 13th, 2018 11:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome ANGELA ~ Thanks for sharing your first Poem. MPS is an EMPATHETIC site so you will get some supportive replies.
Your POEM is very elegantly penned ~ BUT with a tragic message. My parents are very important to ME and ANGELA\'S (my Fiancee) to Her. However the scenario you describe is not uncommon for a variety of reasons. Im 35 and I have Friends who did not even bother to attend their Father\'s funeral. Thinking of YOU.
Love & Blessings BRIAN & ANGELA
MPS is an empathetic site and works by reading & commenting on each others POEMS. You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ OK. Please visit our site ~ Thanks B & A !
December 13th, 2018 11:16
