Comments received on poems by Roselyn
If You Leave
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The words touch so gently, and the honesty is so vulnerable. Written from the heart. An endearing write. Kudos to you. ❤
July 2nd, 2023 03:09
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The words touch so gently, and the honesty is so vulnerable. Written from the heart. An endearing write. Kudos to you. ❤
July 2nd, 2023 03:09
If You Leave
peto said:
Emotional read
Very powerful content
Beautifully written
Word choice and flow are exceptional
July 1st, 2023 05:17
peto said:
Emotional read
Very powerful content
Beautifully written
Word choice and flow are exceptional
July 1st, 2023 05:17
Days In The Sun
HangingbyaHalo said:
The joy is that the sun will come, and slowly but surely the darkness will fade. 💙 wonderful write! Thank you for sharing.
March 24th, 2023 12:10
HangingbyaHalo said:
The joy is that the sun will come, and slowly but surely the darkness will fade. 💙 wonderful write! Thank you for sharing.
March 24th, 2023 12:10
Days In The Sun
L. B. Mek said:
such an empowering poetic voice
thanks for sharing
March 24th, 2023 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
such an empowering poetic voice
thanks for sharing
March 24th, 2023 06:03
Days In The Sun
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
The sun... giver of all life... when it doesn\'t burn... or scorch.
However... a bit of night is necessary.
And I\'m not saying complete darkness... no.
But without... the night...
Difficult to sleep... or dream.
Anyway... good poem.
Sorry... for commenting.
Hope you don\'t mind.
March 23rd, 2023 19:58
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
The sun... giver of all life... when it doesn\'t burn... or scorch.
However... a bit of night is necessary.
And I\'m not saying complete darkness... no.
But without... the night...
Difficult to sleep... or dream.
Anyway... good poem.
Sorry... for commenting.
Hope you don\'t mind.
March 23rd, 2023 19:58
Unrecognizable
L. B. Mek said:
I champion the bravery of these words
and, laud
the empathy and dignity in this poem..
stay Beautiful, stay Strong
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet
July 4th, 2022 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
I champion the bravery of these words
and, laud
the empathy and dignity in this poem..
stay Beautiful, stay Strong
thank you!
for choosing to share, dear Poet
July 4th, 2022 04:08
Unrecognizable
tallisman said:
This is powerful, raw, emotive… really descriptive and inspired, thanks for sharing!
July 4th, 2022 00:31
tallisman said:
This is powerful, raw, emotive… really descriptive and inspired, thanks for sharing!
July 4th, 2022 00:31
Words Unspoken
Jay-Lee Jane said:
Ughhh i felt the hairs on my neck stand up! Well written, a glorious, emotive write!
November 22nd, 2021 06:00
Jay-Lee Jane said:
Ughhh i felt the hairs on my neck stand up! Well written, a glorious, emotive write!
November 22nd, 2021 06:00
Lost at Sea
DianeKey6 said:
i love going to the coast of cold wintery days, i can sit for hours especially if it is raining too. i like sitting under an umbrella listebning to the rain as i watch the world pass me by. you have written this so well i want to find a cold beach right now0 Diane
July 16th, 2020 04:08
DianeKey6 said:
i love going to the coast of cold wintery days, i can sit for hours especially if it is raining too. i like sitting under an umbrella listebning to the rain as i watch the world pass me by. you have written this so well i want to find a cold beach right now0 Diane
July 16th, 2020 04:08
Lost at Sea
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking beside water can bring such calming effects within you.
Andy
July 16th, 2020 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking beside water can bring such calming effects within you.
Andy
July 16th, 2020 00:11
Finis
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace will come to us all in time but not yet.
We can always find silence within ourselves and still breathe.
Andy
July 2nd, 2020 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace will come to us all in time but not yet.
We can always find silence within ourselves and still breathe.
Andy
July 2nd, 2020 00:35
Finis
Bragee said:
Very interesting reflection piece.
The storms seem like they’ll never end but ultimately peace comes regardless.
July 1st, 2020 22:56
Bragee said:
Very interesting reflection piece.
The storms seem like they’ll never end but ultimately peace comes regardless.
July 1st, 2020 22:56
Pieces of Me
Imaginative dreamer said:
I feel it You’re a great writer I love this
June 30th, 2020 09:53
Imaginative dreamer said:
I feel it You’re a great writer I love this
June 30th, 2020 09:53
Dimittere
dusk arising said:
A relationship which is not comfortable can be traumatic and when it ends you are released to be yourself again. Comfortable with your own wants, desires, hopes and enjoyments.
I find all this in your words today.
June 29th, 2020 11:39
dusk arising said:
A relationship which is not comfortable can be traumatic and when it ends you are released to be yourself again. Comfortable with your own wants, desires, hopes and enjoyments.
I find all this in your words today.
June 29th, 2020 11:39
In The Depths Of My Haze
dusk arising said:
Such an awakening. Striking at the myths we are given to believe as children and hang onto in later years.
Is this human form a trasitory stage in our lives like the pupa anf the butterfly? ... what follows?
June 26th, 2020 09:17
dusk arising said:
Such an awakening. Striking at the myths we are given to believe as children and hang onto in later years.
Is this human form a trasitory stage in our lives like the pupa anf the butterfly? ... what follows?
June 26th, 2020 09:17
A Longing
A.H. Browning said:
I found “A Longing” today and I like what you wrote here. Your writing here is very honest and I feel your words. I really like reading your words, “And it seems as if everyone around me is moving forward, but I am as still as the water before a rocks disturbed its peace. “ I know that feeling and it is very moving to see someone else write that. A number of years ago I was drowning in that feeling.
I’m a slow learner, but I’m trying to learn to accept the pain of loss. When I’ve tried to numb that pain, to forget that pain, ignore it or rip it out of me, I ended up losing a lot of time living self destructively. I have also discovered that when I try to steer away from that pain, it robs me of so much. In my experience, losing someone through death or the changing seasons and circumstances of life can be unbearably painful. Death causes the most intense feelings of loss for me. However, a friend or someone I love can take different path in life, a path without me. The people that are very dear to me may move on to a future that does not include me or that makes relationships hard to maintain. That hurts. But when I try to steer from that pain, it always robs me of the good memories and good feelings I want to hold on to. It also seems to blind me in varying ways to new opportunities that might come my way.
Thank you for writing this.
Kindest Regards.
June 16th, 2018 17:47
A.H. Browning said:
I found “A Longing” today and I like what you wrote here. Your writing here is very honest and I feel your words. I really like reading your words, “And it seems as if everyone around me is moving forward, but I am as still as the water before a rocks disturbed its peace. “ I know that feeling and it is very moving to see someone else write that. A number of years ago I was drowning in that feeling.
I’m a slow learner, but I’m trying to learn to accept the pain of loss. When I’ve tried to numb that pain, to forget that pain, ignore it or rip it out of me, I ended up losing a lot of time living self destructively. I have also discovered that when I try to steer away from that pain, it robs me of so much. In my experience, losing someone through death or the changing seasons and circumstances of life can be unbearably painful. Death causes the most intense feelings of loss for me. However, a friend or someone I love can take different path in life, a path without me. The people that are very dear to me may move on to a future that does not include me or that makes relationships hard to maintain. That hurts. But when I try to steer from that pain, it always robs me of the good memories and good feelings I want to hold on to. It also seems to blind me in varying ways to new opportunities that might come my way.
Thank you for writing this.
Kindest Regards.
June 16th, 2018 17:47
Hold On
Maura said:
I love this !! exactly what I needed to read at this point in my life x
June 6th, 2018 08:29
Maura said:
I love this !! exactly what I needed to read at this point in my life x
June 6th, 2018 08:29
Waves
Poetic Dan said:
I know of that wave so well
My second ever post called \"emotions\" (if you get time, pg 13)you just took me back too, thank you for the reminder of balance.
I believe you\'re finding yours too.
May 28th, 2018 17:45
Poetic Dan said:
I know of that wave so well
My second ever post called \"emotions\" (if you get time, pg 13)you just took me back too, thank you for the reminder of balance.
I believe you\'re finding yours too.
May 28th, 2018 17:45
A Longing
willyweed said:
Welcome to MPS good write for first post hope to see more. ww
May 20th, 2018 21:37
willyweed said:
Welcome to MPS good write for first post hope to see more. ww
May 20th, 2018 21:37
A Longing
Yorelzinala said:
Allow your feelings or unfeelings to guide your writing. Thank you for sharing.
May 20th, 2018 21:34
Yorelzinala said:
Allow your feelings or unfeelings to guide your writing. Thank you for sharing.
May 20th, 2018 21:34
