Comments received on poems by Neville
Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day
orchidee said:
Good write N. KP has an old sack for a dressing gown. I bought it specially for her from a second hand shop. Dunno why she complains! lol. I will buy her something equally cheap and nasty for Valentines.
February 13th, 2025 11:53
orchidee said:
Good write N. KP has an old sack for a dressing gown. I bought it specially for her from a second hand shop. Dunno why she complains! lol. I will buy her something equally cheap and nasty for Valentines.
February 13th, 2025 11:53
Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day
Cheeky Missy said:
My word! Leave a man to his musings, and what a dish he cooks up in a relative heartbeat! I mean, for perspective, I\'m on my second bowlful of steamy breakfast hash loaded with cabbage, onions, potatoes, and sausage, and you\'ve served up as steamy a dream which sits here now shouldering on the front page as if to leave no brow but perspiring as women faint. Good grief. Why do I want to giggle? Excellently rendered with delicious imagery and a humid poignancy which grapples for the soul. Thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 11:29
Cheeky Missy said:
My word! Leave a man to his musings, and what a dish he cooks up in a relative heartbeat! I mean, for perspective, I\'m on my second bowlful of steamy breakfast hash loaded with cabbage, onions, potatoes, and sausage, and you\'ve served up as steamy a dream which sits here now shouldering on the front page as if to leave no brow but perspiring as women faint. Good grief. Why do I want to giggle? Excellently rendered with delicious imagery and a humid poignancy which grapples for the soul. Thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 11:29
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
Christina8 said:
A very erotic poem and a pleasure to read! A throw of the dice sounds like a lot of fun!
February 11th, 2025 12:47
Christina8 said:
A very erotic poem and a pleasure to read! A throw of the dice sounds like a lot of fun!
February 11th, 2025 12:47
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
Goldfinch60 said:
Just climb that alphabet and reach the heights of love and wonder Neville.
Andy
February 11th, 2025 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Just climb that alphabet and reach the heights of love and wonder Neville.
Andy
February 11th, 2025 02:45
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
sorenbarrett said:
I think we have totally missed the point here. If we have gone through the alphabet and numbers in a single day we best check for chafing, blisters, general rawness and total exhaustion. I thought four times a night was doing well.
February 10th, 2025 15:28
sorenbarrett said:
I think we have totally missed the point here. If we have gone through the alphabet and numbers in a single day we best check for chafing, blisters, general rawness and total exhaustion. I thought four times a night was doing well.
February 10th, 2025 15:28
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
Cheeky Missy said:
So, then the seeming question is whether the twain like spooning, and etc, eh? Saucily rendered with the right touch of tasteful imagery and a flirtatious poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 10th, 2025 13:11
Cheeky Missy said:
So, then the seeming question is whether the twain like spooning, and etc, eh? Saucily rendered with the right touch of tasteful imagery and a flirtatious poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 10th, 2025 13:11
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
orchidee said:
Yes, I was reciting the alphabet backwards to try to get to sleep. I got as far as Zzzzzzzzzzz. lol. If these jokes get much cornier.....
February 10th, 2025 11:29
orchidee said:
Yes, I was reciting the alphabet backwards to try to get to sleep. I got as far as Zzzzzzzzzzz. lol. If these jokes get much cornier.....
February 10th, 2025 11:29
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
Poetic Licence said:
It is a science, but when we occasionally get it right how often do we remember the formula, enjoyed the read.
February 10th, 2025 10:05
Poetic Licence said:
It is a science, but when we occasionally get it right how often do we remember the formula, enjoyed the read.
February 10th, 2025 10:05
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
arqios said:
Negotiating is both an art and a dance👍🏻🙏🏻
February 10th, 2025 09:51
arqios said:
Negotiating is both an art and a dance👍🏻🙏🏻
February 10th, 2025 09:51
Inprismed
Poetic Licence said:
What we think we see and wish to see quite often is a mile away from the reality, really enjoyed this write (Poetically)
February 10th, 2025 05:41
Poetic Licence said:
What we think we see and wish to see quite often is a mile away from the reality, really enjoyed this write (Poetically)
February 10th, 2025 05:41
Inprismed
Goldfinch60 said:
Those prisms of life are so beautiful but so difficult to interpret Neville.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Those prisms of life are so beautiful but so difficult to interpret Neville.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:02
Inprismed
Distant View said:
A clever title, and a clever write! Nicely penned, sir! I have been away from MPS for several years, but I\'m now back. I don\'t know how often I\'ll be posting poems, but I\'ll do my best! ~ Robert
February 9th, 2025 16:24
Distant View said:
A clever title, and a clever write! Nicely penned, sir! I have been away from MPS for several years, but I\'m now back. I don\'t know how often I\'ll be posting poems, but I\'ll do my best! ~ Robert
February 9th, 2025 16:24
Inprismed
Cassie58 said:
This poem is beautifully penned with the finest description of multi coloured light. A bird of paradise. The imagery is truly magnificent. A Goddess no less and then how she then descends into a mere mortal with all the imperfections normal women have. And no doubt there are many. Rose tinted glasses come to mind. That ‘s women for you. Very much enjoyed Neville.
February 9th, 2025 13:29
Cassie58 said:
This poem is beautifully penned with the finest description of multi coloured light. A bird of paradise. The imagery is truly magnificent. A Goddess no less and then how she then descends into a mere mortal with all the imperfections normal women have. And no doubt there are many. Rose tinted glasses come to mind. That ‘s women for you. Very much enjoyed Neville.
February 9th, 2025 13:29
Inprismed
sorenbarrett said:
We are imprisoned by our memories that fade and distort with time. Sometimes with embellishments and brighter colors than were ever there and sometimes with deletions and faded undesirable aspects now forgotten. Experiences of the past become what we want them to be good or bad. A really wonderful representation of what the mind is.
February 9th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
We are imprisoned by our memories that fade and distort with time. Sometimes with embellishments and brighter colors than were ever there and sometimes with deletions and faded undesirable aspects now forgotten. Experiences of the past become what we want them to be good or bad. A really wonderful representation of what the mind is.
February 9th, 2025 08:59
Inprismed
orchidee said:
Good write N. I thought the title had a typo at first - I would think that! lol.
February 9th, 2025 08:56
orchidee said:
Good write N. I thought the title had a typo at first - I would think that! lol.
February 9th, 2025 08:56
Inprismed
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but elusivity is half the key to ecstasies, which apparently \"she\" was bent on conjuring, until the characteristic lament from the male species merely piles up to heaven. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delectable poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 06:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but elusivity is half the key to ecstasies, which apparently \"she\" was bent on conjuring, until the characteristic lament from the male species merely piles up to heaven. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delectable poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 06:55
Inprismed
teardrop said:
I read this twice, Love your metaphors and the illusions you put forth. Always a pleasure to read you.
February 9th, 2025 06:38
teardrop said:
I read this twice, Love your metaphors and the illusions you put forth. Always a pleasure to read you.
February 9th, 2025 06:38
Inprismed
arqios said:
Ah, there ye be! Seems like smokes and mirrors are afoot somewhere. Mysterious they be, the ladies are, that is 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 06:22
arqios said:
Ah, there ye be! Seems like smokes and mirrors are afoot somewhere. Mysterious they be, the ladies are, that is 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 06:22
Afterwards #2
Cassie58 said:
This is beautiful poetry. I have read all your responses. You know Thomasina said it best.
February 7th, 2025 08:13
Cassie58 said:
This is beautiful poetry. I have read all your responses. You know Thomasina said it best.
February 7th, 2025 08:13
Implications of Doing Nothing
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm, the eternal poet sees beauty in the ashes, eh? From exquisite imagery tricking out a macabre reality, to the lurid poignancy haunting your lines, whither am I to turn, eh? Thank you for sharing.
February 6th, 2025 11:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm, the eternal poet sees beauty in the ashes, eh? From exquisite imagery tricking out a macabre reality, to the lurid poignancy haunting your lines, whither am I to turn, eh? Thank you for sharing.
February 6th, 2025 11:34
Implications of Doing Nothing
Goldfinch60 said:
In this day ad age caring to others is no concern for those in power yet they could solve the crises in the world if they really cared.
Andy
February 6th, 2025 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
In this day ad age caring to others is no concern for those in power yet they could solve the crises in the world if they really cared.
Andy
February 6th, 2025 02:51
Implications of Doing Nothing
Tom Dylan said:
Intriguing words, mate. Nicely done.
February 5th, 2025 11:08
Tom Dylan said:
Intriguing words, mate. Nicely done.
February 5th, 2025 11:08
Implications of Doing Nothing
arqios said:
Apathy that feeds the decomposition of sensibility and common sense, such a vicious cycle…sloping ever downward… the descent of humanity all the while deluded of its ascent…
February 5th, 2025 07:05
arqios said:
Apathy that feeds the decomposition of sensibility and common sense, such a vicious cycle…sloping ever downward… the descent of humanity all the while deluded of its ascent…
February 5th, 2025 07:05
Implications of Doing Nothing
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for todays enjoyable read, enjoy the rest off your day.
February 5th, 2025 05:06
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for todays enjoyable read, enjoy the rest off your day.
February 5th, 2025 05:06
Implications of Doing Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
It seems clear on the surface that documentaries do little but sensationalize and that innocent beauty left behind is the viewer\'s eye candy stuffing themselves without getting up from the couch. There we sit intrigued with attrocities hypnotized, desensitized, driven insane and blinded by too many hours spent watching. May be way off base with this one but then I\'ll blame it on the documentary
February 5th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
It seems clear on the surface that documentaries do little but sensationalize and that innocent beauty left behind is the viewer\'s eye candy stuffing themselves without getting up from the couch. There we sit intrigued with attrocities hypnotized, desensitized, driven insane and blinded by too many hours spent watching. May be way off base with this one but then I\'ll blame it on the documentary
February 5th, 2025 04:57
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