Comments received on poems by Neville
Maybe To Be Continued
Cassie58 said:
Another poem from The Making of a Broken Man which is still my current reading. An intriguing little write. How do you cure yourself of someone I ask? Maybe like a light switch, turning them off, obliterating all memory. Why would you do that unless there is a great deal of pain. Happy Friday dear Neville. Weekend’s nearly arrived.
August 9th, 2024 01:53
Cassie58 said:
Another poem from The Making of a Broken Man which is still my current reading. An intriguing little write. How do you cure yourself of someone I ask? Maybe like a light switch, turning them off, obliterating all memory. Why would you do that unless there is a great deal of pain. Happy Friday dear Neville. Weekend’s nearly arrived.
August 9th, 2024 01:53
Maybe To Be Continued
Doggerel Dave said:
This is becoming a habit, Neville.
This is me showing concern:
Are you on a \'Six months left\' schedule?
If not, then carry on remorseless.
August 9th, 2024 01:26
Doggerel Dave said:
This is becoming a habit, Neville.
This is me showing concern:
Are you on a \'Six months left\' schedule?
If not, then carry on remorseless.
August 9th, 2024 01:26
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful.
August 8th, 2024 19:35
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful.
August 8th, 2024 19:35
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
MendedFences27 said:
At 80 I look forward to an unlimited number of years ahead, and why not,
I don\'t get to choose when, so why not look forward to forever.
Your poem highlights the different perspectives of the aged. It\'s purely a numbers game. You will live until you die. Make the most of it. - Phil A
August 8th, 2024 12:51
MendedFences27 said:
At 80 I look forward to an unlimited number of years ahead, and why not,
I don\'t get to choose when, so why not look forward to forever.
Your poem highlights the different perspectives of the aged. It\'s purely a numbers game. You will live until you die. Make the most of it. - Phil A
August 8th, 2024 12:51
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
orchidee said:
I ate a green cooking apple - urrghh - sour! Why did you not COOK it first, asks Fido? lol.
August 8th, 2024 12:03
orchidee said:
I ate a green cooking apple - urrghh - sour! Why did you not COOK it first, asks Fido? lol.
August 8th, 2024 12:03
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Jerry Reynolds said:
I wonder what I will be next sometimes. Is that waiting or wanting? Odds are I\'ll be Chinese or Indian. There are so many more of them than White Dudes.
August 8th, 2024 09:19
Jerry Reynolds said:
I wonder what I will be next sometimes. Is that waiting or wanting? Odds are I\'ll be Chinese or Indian. There are so many more of them than White Dudes.
August 8th, 2024 09:19
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me of my mum who told me on several occasions she wanted to die. Distressing to hear that , knowing there is nothing you can do to ease her mind . Your poem raises many issues Neville. Much to consider and ponder here. No easy answer.
August 8th, 2024 08:30
Cassie58 said:
Reminds me of my mum who told me on several occasions she wanted to die. Distressing to hear that , knowing there is nothing you can do to ease her mind . Your poem raises many issues Neville. Much to consider and ponder here. No easy answer.
August 8th, 2024 08:30
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there is Neville. Those with a purpose and those without at any age. Short but full of meaning this poem reminds one to keep busy while waiting.
August 8th, 2024 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed there is Neville. Those with a purpose and those without at any age. Short but full of meaning this poem reminds one to keep busy while waiting.
August 8th, 2024 06:46
I Think I Like You But ..
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. The last line just nailed it.
August 8th, 2024 06:18
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. The last line just nailed it.
August 8th, 2024 06:18
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Doggerel Dave said:
Talking legislation here: Right to die? Dying with dignity.
So for everyone reading/contributing – are you able to make the request?
In New South Wales we now have the very limited right.
Thanks for raising this issue Neville.
August 8th, 2024 03:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Talking legislation here: Right to die? Dying with dignity.
So for everyone reading/contributing – are you able to make the request?
In New South Wales we now have the very limited right.
Thanks for raising this issue Neville.
August 8th, 2024 03:55
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
jarcher54 said:
Oh my... at 70 I think I am way too young to understand this! Will I be this morose someday? (-:
August 8th, 2024 03:34
jarcher54 said:
Oh my... at 70 I think I am way too young to understand this! Will I be this morose someday? (-:
August 8th, 2024 03:34
As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples
Goldfinch60 said:
Tue words Neville, I don\'t want to go yet but I know there will come that day and that is OK too.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Tue words Neville, I don\'t want to go yet but I know there will come that day and that is OK too.
Andy
August 8th, 2024 01:52
I Think I Like You But ..
Bella Shepard said:
It was an interesting word she chose to use, interactable. And a very interesting exchanage which I presume ended by signing on the dotted line. All was well I hope.
August 7th, 2024 15:38
Bella Shepard said:
It was an interesting word she chose to use, interactable. And a very interesting exchanage which I presume ended by signing on the dotted line. All was well I hope.
August 7th, 2024 15:38
I Think I Like You But ..
MendedFences27 said:
Quite the encounter. The less said the better. Best not to engage in questioning, just make statements.
The directness of your poem gives it the sense of honesty, and her final remark a sense of guilt. Loved it. - Phil A
August 7th, 2024 09:56
MendedFences27 said:
Quite the encounter. The less said the better. Best not to engage in questioning, just make statements.
The directness of your poem gives it the sense of honesty, and her final remark a sense of guilt. Loved it. - Phil A
August 7th, 2024 09:56
I Think I Like You But ..
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. I don\'t question strange.
August 7th, 2024 09:43
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. I don\'t question strange.
August 7th, 2024 09:43
I Think I Like You But ..
Doggerel Dave said:
I woulda asked how you spell \'intracitable\' and then the definition and then pursued the conversation (closed questions) in that direction.... I\'m not fond of evasion generally, just save it for special occasions….
August 7th, 2024 09:01
Doggerel Dave said:
I woulda asked how you spell \'intracitable\' and then the definition and then pursued the conversation (closed questions) in that direction.... I\'m not fond of evasion generally, just save it for special occasions….
August 7th, 2024 09:01
I Think I Like You But ..
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we ask for more than we want to know, or should I say ignorance is bliss. Great build up in this clever write.
August 7th, 2024 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes we ask for more than we want to know, or should I say ignorance is bliss. Great build up in this clever write.
August 7th, 2024 04:29
I Think I Like You But ..
orchidee said:
Should I admit having a trout-wife? KP. lol.
August 7th, 2024 01:41
orchidee said:
Should I admit having a trout-wife? KP. lol.
August 7th, 2024 01:41
All Along the Watchtower
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, who indeed holds responsibility for the chaos in our world.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, who indeed holds responsibility for the chaos in our world.
Andy
August 7th, 2024 01:25
All Along the Watchtower
Cassie58 said:
Your words made me think of the phrase, the lunatics are running the asylum. The brakes have well and truly gone in our messed up country at the mo. I like both versions of your title, but it’s the JH one I recall most. Written by Dylan. Was it about Vietnam. Lucky you in November. Have a good Wednesday Neville.
August 6th, 2024 23:59
Cassie58 said:
Your words made me think of the phrase, the lunatics are running the asylum. The brakes have well and truly gone in our messed up country at the mo. I like both versions of your title, but it’s the JH one I recall most. Written by Dylan. Was it about Vietnam. Lucky you in November. Have a good Wednesday Neville.
August 6th, 2024 23:59
Letting Go of The Light
Cassie58 said:
Not a subject we want to dwell on, but one we do think about and talk about on occasions. After 45 years of togetherness, the separation would be excruciating for me, but I know I would cope somehow, because my nans, my mum and my sister all coped. I would be walking in their footsteps. My husband John feels much the same way you do. There is a lot of love and togetherness in your words Neville. A beautiful poem to sum up a long relationship with many memories.
August 6th, 2024 23:45
Cassie58 said:
Not a subject we want to dwell on, but one we do think about and talk about on occasions. After 45 years of togetherness, the separation would be excruciating for me, but I know I would cope somehow, because my nans, my mum and my sister all coped. I would be walking in their footsteps. My husband John feels much the same way you do. There is a lot of love and togetherness in your words Neville. A beautiful poem to sum up a long relationship with many memories.
August 6th, 2024 23:45
Letting Go of The Light
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve often thought of such loss, and you have put into words the very feeling. This poem runs deep in emotion that touches the soul. Beautiful!
August 6th, 2024 13:26
Bella Shepard said:
I\'ve often thought of such loss, and you have put into words the very feeling. This poem runs deep in emotion that touches the soul. Beautiful!
August 6th, 2024 13:26
All Along the Watchtower
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, mate, and a good point. And love the Bob Dylan reference too.
August 6th, 2024 06:54
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, mate, and a good point. And love the Bob Dylan reference too.
August 6th, 2024 06:54
Letting Go of The Light
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to Dylan Thomas here Neville,. Unlike he though this is romantic and most touching. Loved it.
August 6th, 2024 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute to Dylan Thomas here Neville,. Unlike he though this is romantic and most touching. Loved it.
August 6th, 2024 05:15
Letting Go of The Light
orchidee said:
But now I\'m in the dark - I let go of the light - me lamp, or candle, or torch, or whatever gives light! lol.
August 6th, 2024 01:55
orchidee said:
But now I\'m in the dark - I let go of the light - me lamp, or candle, or torch, or whatever gives light! lol.
August 6th, 2024 01:55
All Along the Watchtower
Dan Williams said:
Very astute observation. Nice work.
August 5th, 2024 22:59
Dan Williams said:
Very astute observation. Nice work.
August 5th, 2024 22:59
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