Comments received on poems by Neville
Some Things She Once Said
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of distance is healthy also consideration of the child taken into account, but more than anything i get the sense of one wanting it to be more than the other was willing to give, probably wrong, but a very enjoyable and interesting read
February 16th, 2025 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
I get a sense of distance is healthy also consideration of the child taken into account, but more than anything i get the sense of one wanting it to be more than the other was willing to give, probably wrong, but a very enjoyable and interesting read
February 16th, 2025 05:59
Some Things She Once Said
arqios said:
Life’s complications! Somehow we manage to live and move on. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 05:14
arqios said:
Life’s complications! Somehow we manage to live and move on. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 16th, 2025 05:14
Some Things She Once Said
sorenbarrett said:
Neville forgive me but this took me as personification of Id meets Ego. Never the less the casual wording and first person dialogue makes for so intimate of a read. I sill love your pacing and the use of it to hold the reader back until just the right moment. This metaphor leaves a powerful message that distance in a relationship is necessary for its health. A deep and lovely write or maybe I am one of those lateral thinkers.
February 16th, 2025 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Neville forgive me but this took me as personification of Id meets Ego. Never the less the casual wording and first person dialogue makes for so intimate of a read. I sill love your pacing and the use of it to hold the reader back until just the right moment. This metaphor leaves a powerful message that distance in a relationship is necessary for its health. A deep and lovely write or maybe I am one of those lateral thinkers.
February 16th, 2025 05:10
Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Vibrant And Nice Rhythms
My Friend
February 14th, 2025 04:10
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Vibrant And Nice Rhythms
My Friend
February 14th, 2025 04:10
Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lovelorn words Neville, may that dream become reality.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lovelorn words Neville, may that dream become reality.
Andy
February 14th, 2025 02:45
Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day
Doggerel Dave said:
Need the light breezes right now, Neville - as for the rest...anytime will do... without being present she and the space feel just what I\'d ...
February 13th, 2025 16:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Need the light breezes right now, Neville - as for the rest...anytime will do... without being present she and the space feel just what I\'d ...
February 13th, 2025 16:52
Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day
Thomas W Case said:
You bring this to vivid life.
February 13th, 2025 16:40
Thomas W Case said:
You bring this to vivid life.
February 13th, 2025 16:40
Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem is well done, my dear friend. I love how this appears visually on the page/screen! No to mention how image-rich your writing always is, my friend. Really enjoyed this. 🤘
February 13th, 2025 15:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This poem is well done, my dear friend. I love how this appears visually on the page/screen! No to mention how image-rich your writing always is, my friend. Really enjoyed this. 🤘
February 13th, 2025 15:08
Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day
Poetic Licence said:
If only my dreams were like that, really enjoyed the read
February 13th, 2025 12:03
Poetic Licence said:
If only my dreams were like that, really enjoyed the read
February 13th, 2025 12:03
Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day
sorenbarrett said:
With a sigh of relief I knew this poem was not about me because I don\'t have much hair and certainly not enough to wrap in a towel. Never the less this seems a poem about how things are seen, be it in dreams or wishes. A brighter, fresher, more colorful world. A world seen in reflection from reality that sits infront of you. Another stab in the dark. What always amazes me is your precison in meter as measured by the perfect length of each line. A most unique geometric design on the page. Lovely Neville
February 13th, 2025 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
With a sigh of relief I knew this poem was not about me because I don\'t have much hair and certainly not enough to wrap in a towel. Never the less this seems a poem about how things are seen, be it in dreams or wishes. A brighter, fresher, more colorful world. A world seen in reflection from reality that sits infront of you. Another stab in the dark. What always amazes me is your precison in meter as measured by the perfect length of each line. A most unique geometric design on the page. Lovely Neville
February 13th, 2025 11:58
Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day
orchidee said:
Good write N. KP has an old sack for a dressing gown. I bought it specially for her from a second hand shop. Dunno why she complains! lol. I will buy her something equally cheap and nasty for Valentines.
February 13th, 2025 11:53
orchidee said:
Good write N. KP has an old sack for a dressing gown. I bought it specially for her from a second hand shop. Dunno why she complains! lol. I will buy her something equally cheap and nasty for Valentines.
February 13th, 2025 11:53
Just a Few Things That Made Up a Day
Cheeky Missy said:
My word! Leave a man to his musings, and what a dish he cooks up in a relative heartbeat! I mean, for perspective, I\'m on my second bowlful of steamy breakfast hash loaded with cabbage, onions, potatoes, and sausage, and you\'ve served up as steamy a dream which sits here now shouldering on the front page as if to leave no brow but perspiring as women faint. Good grief. Why do I want to giggle? Excellently rendered with delicious imagery and a humid poignancy which grapples for the soul. Thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 11:29
Cheeky Missy said:
My word! Leave a man to his musings, and what a dish he cooks up in a relative heartbeat! I mean, for perspective, I\'m on my second bowlful of steamy breakfast hash loaded with cabbage, onions, potatoes, and sausage, and you\'ve served up as steamy a dream which sits here now shouldering on the front page as if to leave no brow but perspiring as women faint. Good grief. Why do I want to giggle? Excellently rendered with delicious imagery and a humid poignancy which grapples for the soul. Thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 11:29
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
Christina8 said:
A very erotic poem and a pleasure to read! A throw of the dice sounds like a lot of fun!
February 11th, 2025 12:47
Christina8 said:
A very erotic poem and a pleasure to read! A throw of the dice sounds like a lot of fun!
February 11th, 2025 12:47
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
Goldfinch60 said:
Just climb that alphabet and reach the heights of love and wonder Neville.
Andy
February 11th, 2025 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Just climb that alphabet and reach the heights of love and wonder Neville.
Andy
February 11th, 2025 02:45
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
sorenbarrett said:
I think we have totally missed the point here. If we have gone through the alphabet and numbers in a single day we best check for chafing, blisters, general rawness and total exhaustion. I thought four times a night was doing well.
February 10th, 2025 15:28
sorenbarrett said:
I think we have totally missed the point here. If we have gone through the alphabet and numbers in a single day we best check for chafing, blisters, general rawness and total exhaustion. I thought four times a night was doing well.
February 10th, 2025 15:28
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
Cheeky Missy said:
So, then the seeming question is whether the twain like spooning, and etc, eh? Saucily rendered with the right touch of tasteful imagery and a flirtatious poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 10th, 2025 13:11
Cheeky Missy said:
So, then the seeming question is whether the twain like spooning, and etc, eh? Saucily rendered with the right touch of tasteful imagery and a flirtatious poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 10th, 2025 13:11
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
orchidee said:
Yes, I was reciting the alphabet backwards to try to get to sleep. I got as far as Zzzzzzzzzzz. lol. If these jokes get much cornier.....
February 10th, 2025 11:29
orchidee said:
Yes, I was reciting the alphabet backwards to try to get to sleep. I got as far as Zzzzzzzzzzz. lol. If these jokes get much cornier.....
February 10th, 2025 11:29
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
Poetic Licence said:
It is a science, but when we occasionally get it right how often do we remember the formula, enjoyed the read.
February 10th, 2025 10:05
Poetic Licence said:
It is a science, but when we occasionally get it right how often do we remember the formula, enjoyed the read.
February 10th, 2025 10:05
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
arqios said:
Negotiating is both an art and a dance👍🏻🙏🏻
February 10th, 2025 09:51
arqios said:
Negotiating is both an art and a dance👍🏻🙏🏻
February 10th, 2025 09:51
Inprismed
Poetic Licence said:
What we think we see and wish to see quite often is a mile away from the reality, really enjoyed this write (Poetically)
February 10th, 2025 05:41
Poetic Licence said:
What we think we see and wish to see quite often is a mile away from the reality, really enjoyed this write (Poetically)
February 10th, 2025 05:41
Inprismed
Goldfinch60 said:
Those prisms of life are so beautiful but so difficult to interpret Neville.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Those prisms of life are so beautiful but so difficult to interpret Neville.
Andy
February 10th, 2025 03:02
Inprismed
Distant View said:
A clever title, and a clever write! Nicely penned, sir! I have been away from MPS for several years, but I\'m now back. I don\'t know how often I\'ll be posting poems, but I\'ll do my best! ~ Robert
February 9th, 2025 16:24
Distant View said:
A clever title, and a clever write! Nicely penned, sir! I have been away from MPS for several years, but I\'m now back. I don\'t know how often I\'ll be posting poems, but I\'ll do my best! ~ Robert
February 9th, 2025 16:24
Inprismed
Cassie58 said:
This poem is beautifully penned with the finest description of multi coloured light. A bird of paradise. The imagery is truly magnificent. A Goddess no less and then how she then descends into a mere mortal with all the imperfections normal women have. And no doubt there are many. Rose tinted glasses come to mind. That ‘s women for you. Very much enjoyed Neville.
February 9th, 2025 13:29
Cassie58 said:
This poem is beautifully penned with the finest description of multi coloured light. A bird of paradise. The imagery is truly magnificent. A Goddess no less and then how she then descends into a mere mortal with all the imperfections normal women have. And no doubt there are many. Rose tinted glasses come to mind. That ‘s women for you. Very much enjoyed Neville.
February 9th, 2025 13:29
Inprismed
sorenbarrett said:
We are imprisoned by our memories that fade and distort with time. Sometimes with embellishments and brighter colors than were ever there and sometimes with deletions and faded undesirable aspects now forgotten. Experiences of the past become what we want them to be good or bad. A really wonderful representation of what the mind is.
February 9th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
We are imprisoned by our memories that fade and distort with time. Sometimes with embellishments and brighter colors than were ever there and sometimes with deletions and faded undesirable aspects now forgotten. Experiences of the past become what we want them to be good or bad. A really wonderful representation of what the mind is.
February 9th, 2025 08:59
Inprismed
orchidee said:
Good write N. I thought the title had a typo at first - I would think that! lol.
February 9th, 2025 08:56
orchidee said:
Good write N. I thought the title had a typo at first - I would think that! lol.
February 9th, 2025 08:56
Inprismed
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but elusivity is half the key to ecstasies, which apparently \"she\" was bent on conjuring, until the characteristic lament from the male species merely piles up to heaven. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delectable poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 06:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but elusivity is half the key to ecstasies, which apparently \"she\" was bent on conjuring, until the characteristic lament from the male species merely piles up to heaven. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delectable poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 06:55
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