Comments received on poems by Neville
There is A Crease in Everything
NafisaSB said:
your comments resonate with me though the poem is short , sweet and tells the tale you wish to convey
August 20th, 2025 00:10
NafisaSB said:
your comments resonate with me though the poem is short , sweet and tells the tale you wish to convey
August 20th, 2025 00:10
Marching on Bone Spurs
orchidee said:
I dunno what I\'m on about really - bone spurs? All I know is, I did not march wearing any spurs, but I did sit on one - ouch! lol.
August 19th, 2025 11:38
orchidee said:
I dunno what I\'m on about really - bone spurs? All I know is, I did not march wearing any spurs, but I did sit on one - ouch! lol.
August 19th, 2025 11:38
Marching on Bone Spurs
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I do so dearly LOVE how you make me whistle low in concluding, this pretty number with such a weighty poignancy it leaves me breathless in dread anticipation, poised on the verge of the unknown like some puddy tat about to spring. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and, yes. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love this.
August 19th, 2025 10:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I do so dearly LOVE how you make me whistle low in concluding, this pretty number with such a weighty poignancy it leaves me breathless in dread anticipation, poised on the verge of the unknown like some puddy tat about to spring. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and, yes. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love this.
August 19th, 2025 10:52
Marching on Bone Spurs
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, I have to get this out out of the way: OUCH! LOL! That aside...the line about honor, justice, truth, and morality…that’s the one that echoes loudest here for me. It’s not just critique...it’s lament for what’s been squandered. The whole poem is very strongly written, Neville. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done...and extra 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛...that\'s six crows total...not quite a murder because, well, I love you! 🤣 Seriously, though, great job!
August 19th, 2025 07:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, I have to get this out out of the way: OUCH! LOL! That aside...the line about honor, justice, truth, and morality…that’s the one that echoes loudest here for me. It’s not just critique...it’s lament for what’s been squandered. The whole poem is very strongly written, Neville. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done...and extra 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛...that\'s six crows total...not quite a murder because, well, I love you! 🤣 Seriously, though, great job!
August 19th, 2025 07:31
Marching on Bone Spurs
Doggerel Dave said:
Got it in me fingers... and yes. perhaps foreshortened responses here might make, if not the world, then some contributors here less unhappy....but then... perhaps not...
But back to your original proposition - I do get your drift, Neville.
August 19th, 2025 06:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Got it in me fingers... and yes. perhaps foreshortened responses here might make, if not the world, then some contributors here less unhappy....but then... perhaps not...
But back to your original proposition - I do get your drift, Neville.
August 19th, 2025 06:09
Marching on Bone Spurs
Poetic Dan said:
I felt this to my bone, for the marching I have done. Forever building on being one of the decent folk!
Great poem
August 19th, 2025 05:09
Poetic Dan said:
I felt this to my bone, for the marching I have done. Forever building on being one of the decent folk!
Great poem
August 19th, 2025 05:09
Marching on Bone Spurs
sorenbarrett said:
Although the individual does not come to mind the message seeps through and indeed there seems to be no greatness without adversity and there is no honor in ease. It is in the hottest fire that the best steel is tempered. Loved this one Neville a fave
August 19th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
Although the individual does not come to mind the message seeps through and indeed there seems to be no greatness without adversity and there is no honor in ease. It is in the hottest fire that the best steel is tempered. Loved this one Neville a fave
August 19th, 2025 04:27
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good Haiku Neville.
Andy
August 19th, 2025 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good Haiku Neville.
Andy
August 19th, 2025 00:55
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lovely haiku with beautiful imagery. Sorry, I am so late in dropping by, my dear friend…crazy day. Well done! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2025 21:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lovely haiku with beautiful imagery. Sorry, I am so late in dropping by, my dear friend…crazy day. Well done! A fave! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 18th, 2025 21:34
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
arqios said:
Bird migration is both awe inspiring and reassuring, like all will be wells and warm promises.
August 18th, 2025 16:13
arqios said:
Bird migration is both awe inspiring and reassuring, like all will be wells and warm promises.
August 18th, 2025 16:13
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful picture, perhaps a \"watercolor\"? All three lines relate to create the scene. The \"migrating birds\" set the time of year. Nicely done. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2025 11:47
MendedFences27 said:
A beautiful picture, perhaps a \"watercolor\"? All three lines relate to create the scene. The \"migrating birds\" set the time of year. Nicely done. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2025 11:47
Falling for Icarus #2
Cheeky Missy said:
He stands as a lesson to countless, and yet what half makes me shiver is how spot on your entire discussion on the topic and poor soul is. We reach for heights not ours to obtain, give all we have, only to find the odds stacked against us are beyond imagination thereby. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a killer poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
August 18th, 2025 11:37
Cheeky Missy said:
He stands as a lesson to countless, and yet what half makes me shiver is how spot on your entire discussion on the topic and poor soul is. We reach for heights not ours to obtain, give all we have, only to find the odds stacked against us are beyond imagination thereby. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a killer poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
August 18th, 2025 11:37
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but how adroitly is it? you pack such delicious imagery into this itty bitty form until I go half wonky trying to make something of it. Charming, very charming, but of course. Superbly rendered with exquisite imagery and an undefined poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 18th, 2025 10:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but how adroitly is it? you pack such delicious imagery into this itty bitty form until I go half wonky trying to make something of it. Charming, very charming, but of course. Superbly rendered with exquisite imagery and an undefined poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 18th, 2025 10:21
Falling for Icarus #2
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Neville, please laugh your head off, but your style always evokes a kind of listening to jazz music in me. This poem being no exception. I simply love the transition from grandeur, to almost speech, and juxtaposition of ironic expressions.
Well, in short, loved the poem.
Thanks
August 18th, 2025 08:58
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Neville, please laugh your head off, but your style always evokes a kind of listening to jazz music in me. This poem being no exception. I simply love the transition from grandeur, to almost speech, and juxtaposition of ironic expressions.
Well, in short, loved the poem.
Thanks
August 18th, 2025 08:58
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
Friendship said:
You painted a beautiful painting this morning. Resplendent Skies, a Haiku in Flight Mode, radiant arcs elevate watercolour puddle skies, migrating bird skeins soar with promise
August 18th, 2025 07:55
Friendship said:
You painted a beautiful painting this morning. Resplendent Skies, a Haiku in Flight Mode, radiant arcs elevate watercolour puddle skies, migrating bird skeins soar with promise
August 18th, 2025 07:55
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture that seems like I\'ve seen before in my life. Nicely crafted Neville
August 18th, 2025 03:30
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture that seems like I\'ve seen before in my life. Nicely crafted Neville
August 18th, 2025 03:30
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful image for a Monday morning, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 02:54
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful image for a Monday morning, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 02:54
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
orchidee said:
A fine write N. here\'s my Haiku, or ditty, as a gloom-and -doom merchant. It\'s probably not strictly a Haiku, but it is 5.7.5.
Feeling gloomy - rain?
Cheer up, all will soon be good
More rain tomorrow!
August 18th, 2025 02:19
orchidee said:
A fine write N. here\'s my Haiku, or ditty, as a gloom-and -doom merchant. It\'s probably not strictly a Haiku, but it is 5.7.5.
Feeling gloomy - rain?
Cheer up, all will soon be good
More rain tomorrow!
August 18th, 2025 02:19
There is A Crease in Everything
Goldfinch60 said:
Those creases can be so time consuming Neville.
Andy
August 18th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Those creases can be so time consuming Neville.
Andy
August 18th, 2025 01:46
There is A Crease in Everything
Dan Williams said:
Solid observation simply stated. Nice.
August 17th, 2025 19:47
Dan Williams said:
Solid observation simply stated. Nice.
August 17th, 2025 19:47
There is A Crease in Everything
Friendship said:
I could very well be off on this,,, To me, your poem serves to inspire readers to embrace their imperfections and consider acts of kindness—such as sharing literature—as a means of fostering love and support in their lives.
August 17th, 2025 13:56
Friendship said:
I could very well be off on this,,, To me, your poem serves to inspire readers to embrace their imperfections and consider acts of kindness—such as sharing literature—as a means of fostering love and support in their lives.
August 17th, 2025 13:56
There is A Crease in Everything
orchidee said:
Now KP got several creases cos her botox melted! lol.
August 17th, 2025 11:54
orchidee said:
Now KP got several creases cos her botox melted! lol.
August 17th, 2025 11:54
There is A Crease in Everything
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Somewhere it leaves us suspended...zipped thoughts, yet not tangential. Enjoyed it very much 🙏
August 17th, 2025 09:32
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Somewhere it leaves us suspended...zipped thoughts, yet not tangential. Enjoyed it very much 🙏
August 17th, 2025 09:32
There is A Crease in Everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Proof that one need not be wordy to convey truth as it is. This poem does that. Powerful and precise. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Proof that one need not be wordy to convey truth as it is. This poem does that. Powerful and precise. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:25
There is A Crease in Everything
Poetic Licence said:
The connations and interpretations of this write could be vast, I will just say Genius, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:51
Poetic Licence said:
The connations and interpretations of this write could be vast, I will just say Genius, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:51
There is A Crease in Everything
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how a wrinkle can put a kink in everything from plans to actions. In this world outside of inflation there is little increase.
August 17th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how a wrinkle can put a kink in everything from plans to actions. In this world outside of inflation there is little increase.
August 17th, 2025 04:14
There is A Crease in Everything
arqios said:
I like how this folds the flaw into the fabric of experience; that “crease” as both imperfection and barrier. It reads like an unfinished riddle, inviting you to lean in and imagine what lies beyond the snag. The spareness leaves the echo doing the work. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 17th, 2025 03:57
arqios said:
I like how this folds the flaw into the fabric of experience; that “crease” as both imperfection and barrier. It reads like an unfinished riddle, inviting you to lean in and imagine what lies beyond the snag. The spareness leaves the echo doing the work. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 17th, 2025 03:57
There is A Crease in Everything
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, good Sir. La dee. How beautifully you\'ve taken a provocative topic and addressed it generously in brevity. Charming. After that, I\'ll feign giving up since the breadth of that topic is too large. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 17th, 2025 03:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, good Sir. La dee. How beautifully you\'ve taken a provocative topic and addressed it generously in brevity. Charming. After that, I\'ll feign giving up since the breadth of that topic is too large. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 17th, 2025 03:40
Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know
Demar Desu said:
Don’t let the vegans hear this one LOL GREAT POEM
August 16th, 2025 20:21
Demar Desu said:
Don’t let the vegans hear this one LOL GREAT POEM
August 16th, 2025 20:21
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