Comments received on poems by Neville
Why Nothing Falls Together
orchidee said:
Of course, my life fell apart the day I married KP! lol. But you knew that - yes?
October 21st, 2025 14:05
orchidee said:
Of course, my life fell apart the day I married KP! lol. But you knew that - yes?
October 21st, 2025 14:05
Why Nothing Falls Together
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That phrase...“a union occurs somewhere between my memories, perceptions and our collective unconscious”...is stunning. You blur philosophy and emotion until they fuse. I loved every bit of this, my dear Neville! Well done and a fave, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 21st, 2025 07:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That phrase...“a union occurs somewhere between my memories, perceptions and our collective unconscious”...is stunning. You blur philosophy and emotion until they fuse. I loved every bit of this, my dear Neville! Well done and a fave, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 21st, 2025 07:22
Why Nothing Falls Together
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so charged with quiet feeling for any that have experienced it that it can not help but be poetic and a fave. Well written my friend
October 21st, 2025 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so charged with quiet feeling for any that have experienced it that it can not help but be poetic and a fave. Well written my friend
October 21st, 2025 06:56
With No Hint of An End
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful romantic words Neville, may they have some truth in them.
Andy
October 18th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful romantic words Neville, may they have some truth in them.
Andy
October 18th, 2025 01:48
With No Hint of An End
Doggerel Dave said:
Sweet nothings (them words - I\'ll have \'em, please!) pleasant afternoon, no hint of Sturm und Drang . Yet after the final line you are (your comments) getting rather cagey....
Enjoyed the trip though, Neville.
October 17th, 2025 17:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Sweet nothings (them words - I\'ll have \'em, please!) pleasant afternoon, no hint of Sturm und Drang . Yet after the final line you are (your comments) getting rather cagey....
Enjoyed the trip though, Neville.
October 17th, 2025 17:02
With No Hint of An End
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this reads like seafoam…each image drifting, circling, refusing an end. “Be light as green lacewings wings”...that’s poetry at its most tactile. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ In fact. 🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐦⬛ and I had to throw a crow in too! 🤷♂️🤣
October 17th, 2025 10:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this reads like seafoam…each image drifting, circling, refusing an end. “Be light as green lacewings wings”...that’s poetry at its most tactile. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ In fact. 🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐦⬛ and I had to throw a crow in too! 🤷♂️🤣
October 17th, 2025 10:55
With No Hint of An End
Poetic Licence said:
Wow that is simply a beautiful write, has such an intimate, tender and calming feel to it, a real pleasure to read
October 17th, 2025 09:55
Poetic Licence said:
Wow that is simply a beautiful write, has such an intimate, tender and calming feel to it, a real pleasure to read
October 17th, 2025 09:55
With No Hint of An End
arqios said:
Amazing how this poem loops back on itself, Neville. How the imagery of sea, wind, and harbour makes the intimacy feel timeless, like words and love circling forever with no beginning or end. It’s lush, sensual, and dreamlike. 🙏🕊️
October 17th, 2025 08:13
arqios said:
Amazing how this poem loops back on itself, Neville. How the imagery of sea, wind, and harbour makes the intimacy feel timeless, like words and love circling forever with no beginning or end. It’s lush, sensual, and dreamlike. 🙏🕊️
October 17th, 2025 08:13
With No Hint of An End
sorenbarrett said:
Romance tis grand and love grander still. As in the poem there is no beginning, middle or end to love that bounces within and out its shell nor are there words that do it justice. With any good fortune we will all live within that harbor of peace with the sea and the breezes on lacewings forever green and young for love has no age and with it time has no effect. A lovely poem Neville
October 17th, 2025 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
Romance tis grand and love grander still. As in the poem there is no beginning, middle or end to love that bounces within and out its shell nor are there words that do it justice. With any good fortune we will all live within that harbor of peace with the sea and the breezes on lacewings forever green and young for love has no age and with it time has no effect. A lovely poem Neville
October 17th, 2025 07:34
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
Neil Higgins said:
Neville.Great poem my friend.And,er,yes.I am back 😱
October 16th, 2025 05:58
Neil Higgins said:
Neville.Great poem my friend.And,er,yes.I am back 😱
October 16th, 2025 05:58
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is smart, intimate writing…wordplay and desire folding into one rhythm. You turn misunderstanding into connection, and that’s its own kind of poetry. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is smart, intimate writing…wordplay and desire folding into one rhythm. You turn misunderstanding into connection, and that’s its own kind of poetry. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:00
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a juxta like ya can beat an egg? And what am I on about? You\'re rambling again, says Fido to me! lol.
October 14th, 2025 01:59
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a juxta like ya can beat an egg? And what am I on about? You\'re rambling again, says Fido to me! lol.
October 14th, 2025 01:59
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
Doggerel Dave said:
Connotations mean a lot.......... cor, fergit poetry, that could almost be the start of a song.... did use the term \'almost\'....
Advice to get out more duly noted, Neville.....
October 13th, 2025 17:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Connotations mean a lot.......... cor, fergit poetry, that could almost be the start of a song.... did use the term \'almost\'....
Advice to get out more duly noted, Neville.....
October 13th, 2025 17:02
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a certain charm that speaks to the realities of life and how things as simple as a different word can create a wedge. Such a perfect title and term. Lovely my friend and a fave
October 13th, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a certain charm that speaks to the realities of life and how things as simple as a different word can create a wedge. Such a perfect title and term. Lovely my friend and a fave
October 13th, 2025 13:30
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
Friendship said:
Your poem illustrates how language and perception can create a distance between people, leading to misunderstandings and a sense of loss in translation.
October 13th, 2025 12:57
Friendship said:
Your poem illustrates how language and perception can create a distance between people, leading to misunderstandings and a sense of loss in translation.
October 13th, 2025 12:57
Sometimes She Just Cries
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I would love to know how you thought of “when she really means
don’t let go ..\"? Devastatingly simple yet conveying a wagon full payload. The magic touch of a magician
October 12th, 2025 06:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I would love to know how you thought of “when she really means
don’t let go ..\"? Devastatingly simple yet conveying a wagon full payload. The magic touch of a magician
October 12th, 2025 06:39
Sometimes She Just Cries
NafisaSB said:
Many a time a lady has been known to do just this🤐you have wrapped it up well
October 11th, 2025 03:50
NafisaSB said:
Many a time a lady has been known to do just this🤐you have wrapped it up well
October 11th, 2025 03:50
Sometimes She Just Cries
Poetic Licence said:
I think this hits a nerve for more people then they would care to admit, it certainly has many elements that i have encountered in a relationship coming from both sides. A write that makes you have a think and that is a good thing.
October 10th, 2025 13:35
Poetic Licence said:
I think this hits a nerve for more people then they would care to admit, it certainly has many elements that i have encountered in a relationship coming from both sides. A write that makes you have a think and that is a good thing.
October 10th, 2025 13:35
Breakfast in Krakow
Poetic Licence said:
Hi , Neville first to say i hope all is well with you?. i enjoyed the read, sitting in beautiful places surrounded by beautiful woman does trigger the memory to days gone by.
I have sat in Krakow and admired the views myself, especially the beautiful church, take care
October 10th, 2025 13:29
Poetic Licence said:
Hi , Neville first to say i hope all is well with you?. i enjoyed the read, sitting in beautiful places surrounded by beautiful woman does trigger the memory to days gone by.
I have sat in Krakow and admired the views myself, especially the beautiful church, take care
October 10th, 2025 13:29
Sometimes She Just Cries
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps Neville but not in my case.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps Neville but not in my case.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:48
Sometimes She Just Cries
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, that closing line...“hey babe now wasn’t that fun”...lands like a sigh. Equal parts irony and ache. Very well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, that closing line...“hey babe now wasn’t that fun”...lands like a sigh. Equal parts irony and ache. Very well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:58
Sometimes She Just Cries
Doggerel Dave said:
Happily well in the past Neville, your quick poetic sketch reminded me too much of…..
Your comments were particularly relevant: I must commit the three ‘C’s to memory as an analytical aid to future (unlikely) engagements from which I might find it difficult to extricate myself….
October 9th, 2025 16:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Happily well in the past Neville, your quick poetic sketch reminded me too much of…..
Your comments were particularly relevant: I must commit the three ‘C’s to memory as an analytical aid to future (unlikely) engagements from which I might find it difficult to extricate myself….
October 9th, 2025 16:29
Sometimes She Just Cries
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Sometimes She Just Cries\" explores the complex emotional landscape of relationships, particularly focusing on the interplay between vulnerability and strength. The speaker reflects on moments of conflict and intimacy, revealing how words can often mask deeper feelings. The subject matter centers around the emotional states of a woman who oscillates between anger, longing, and sadness, ultimately highlighting the paradox of love where moments of tension can coexist with joy.
October 9th, 2025 13:59
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Sometimes She Just Cries\" explores the complex emotional landscape of relationships, particularly focusing on the interplay between vulnerability and strength. The speaker reflects on moments of conflict and intimacy, revealing how words can often mask deeper feelings. The subject matter centers around the emotional states of a woman who oscillates between anger, longing, and sadness, ultimately highlighting the paradox of love where moments of tension can coexist with joy.
October 9th, 2025 13:59
Sometimes She Just Cries
sorenbarrett said:
Neville you have captured in verse a tempered spring where push and pull are responded to with corresponding opposite reaction. A wonderful write that keeps meter short and near rhyme intriguing. Well crafted it is a fave
October 9th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Neville you have captured in verse a tempered spring where push and pull are responded to with corresponding opposite reaction. A wonderful write that keeps meter short and near rhyme intriguing. Well crafted it is a fave
October 9th, 2025 03:52
Sometimes She Just Cries
orchidee said:
Sounds like KP and the way I treat her. lol.
October 9th, 2025 02:11
orchidee said:
Sounds like KP and the way I treat her. lol.
October 9th, 2025 02:11
Breakfast in Krakow
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope you enjoyed your eggs benedict, I always do Neville. LOL
Andy
October 6th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope you enjoyed your eggs benedict, I always do Neville. LOL
Andy
October 6th, 2025 01:18
Breakfast in Krakow
Friendship said:
The poem \"Breakfast in Krakow\" explores themes of nostalgia, memory, and the fleeting nature of moments that evoke strong emotions. It presents a moment of reflection where a simple breakfast leads to the recollection of a past connection with a woman who symbolizes warmth and happiness.
October 5th, 2025 13:51
Friendship said:
The poem \"Breakfast in Krakow\" explores themes of nostalgia, memory, and the fleeting nature of moments that evoke strong emotions. It presents a moment of reflection where a simple breakfast leads to the recollection of a past connection with a woman who symbolizes warmth and happiness.
October 5th, 2025 13:51
Breakfast in Krakow
Doggerel Dave said:
The essence in a woman that many share.....I know...
More than glad to know you haven\'t given up on this meeting place, Neville.
October 5th, 2025 07:54
Doggerel Dave said:
The essence in a woman that many share.....I know...
More than glad to know you haven\'t given up on this meeting place, Neville.
October 5th, 2025 07:54
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