Comments received on poems by Neville
Inprismed
Distant View said:
A clever title, and a clever write! Nicely penned, sir! I have been away from MPS for several years, but I\'m now back. I don\'t know how often I\'ll be posting poems, but I\'ll do my best! ~ Robert
February 9th, 2025 16:24
Distant View said:
A clever title, and a clever write! Nicely penned, sir! I have been away from MPS for several years, but I\'m now back. I don\'t know how often I\'ll be posting poems, but I\'ll do my best! ~ Robert
February 9th, 2025 16:24
Inprismed
Cassie58 said:
This poem is beautifully penned with the finest description of multi coloured light. A bird of paradise. The imagery is truly magnificent. A Goddess no less and then how she then descends into a mere mortal with all the imperfections normal women have. And no doubt there are many. Rose tinted glasses come to mind. That ‘s women for you. Very much enjoyed Neville.
February 9th, 2025 13:29
Cassie58 said:
This poem is beautifully penned with the finest description of multi coloured light. A bird of paradise. The imagery is truly magnificent. A Goddess no less and then how she then descends into a mere mortal with all the imperfections normal women have. And no doubt there are many. Rose tinted glasses come to mind. That ‘s women for you. Very much enjoyed Neville.
February 9th, 2025 13:29
Inprismed
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, but she was merely admiring the view, lost in thoughts of \"What if?\" 🌹😉👍
February 9th, 2025 10:35
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, but she was merely admiring the view, lost in thoughts of \"What if?\" 🌹😉👍
February 9th, 2025 10:35
Inprismed
sorenbarrett said:
We are imprisoned by our memories that fade and distort with time. Sometimes with embellishments and brighter colors than were ever there and sometimes with deletions and faded undesirable aspects now forgotten. Experiences of the past become what we want them to be good or bad. A really wonderful representation of what the mind is.
February 9th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
We are imprisoned by our memories that fade and distort with time. Sometimes with embellishments and brighter colors than were ever there and sometimes with deletions and faded undesirable aspects now forgotten. Experiences of the past become what we want them to be good or bad. A really wonderful representation of what the mind is.
February 9th, 2025 08:59
Inprismed
orchidee said:
Good write N. I thought the title had a typo at first - I would think that! lol.
February 9th, 2025 08:56
orchidee said:
Good write N. I thought the title had a typo at first - I would think that! lol.
February 9th, 2025 08:56
Inprismed
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but elusivity is half the key to ecstasies, which apparently \"she\" was bent on conjuring, until the characteristic lament from the male species merely piles up to heaven. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delectable poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 06:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but elusivity is half the key to ecstasies, which apparently \"she\" was bent on conjuring, until the characteristic lament from the male species merely piles up to heaven. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delectable poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 06:55
Inprismed
teardrop said:
I read this twice, Love your metaphors and the illusions you put forth. Always a pleasure to read you.
February 9th, 2025 06:38
teardrop said:
I read this twice, Love your metaphors and the illusions you put forth. Always a pleasure to read you.
February 9th, 2025 06:38
Inprismed
arqios said:
Ah, there ye be! Seems like smokes and mirrors are afoot somewhere. Mysterious they be, the ladies are, that is 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 06:22
arqios said:
Ah, there ye be! Seems like smokes and mirrors are afoot somewhere. Mysterious they be, the ladies are, that is 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 06:22
Afterwards #2
Cassie58 said:
This is beautiful poetry. I have read all your responses. You know Thomasina said it best.
February 7th, 2025 08:13
Cassie58 said:
This is beautiful poetry. I have read all your responses. You know Thomasina said it best.
February 7th, 2025 08:13
Implications of Doing Nothing
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm, the eternal poet sees beauty in the ashes, eh? From exquisite imagery tricking out a macabre reality, to the lurid poignancy haunting your lines, whither am I to turn, eh? Thank you for sharing.
February 6th, 2025 11:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm, the eternal poet sees beauty in the ashes, eh? From exquisite imagery tricking out a macabre reality, to the lurid poignancy haunting your lines, whither am I to turn, eh? Thank you for sharing.
February 6th, 2025 11:34
Implications of Doing Nothing
Goldfinch60 said:
In this day ad age caring to others is no concern for those in power yet they could solve the crises in the world if they really cared.
Andy
February 6th, 2025 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
In this day ad age caring to others is no concern for those in power yet they could solve the crises in the world if they really cared.
Andy
February 6th, 2025 02:51
Implications of Doing Nothing
Tom Dylan said:
Intriguing words, mate. Nicely done.
February 5th, 2025 11:08
Tom Dylan said:
Intriguing words, mate. Nicely done.
February 5th, 2025 11:08
Implications of Doing Nothing
arqios said:
Apathy that feeds the decomposition of sensibility and common sense, such a vicious cycle…sloping ever downward… the descent of humanity all the while deluded of its ascent…
February 5th, 2025 07:05
arqios said:
Apathy that feeds the decomposition of sensibility and common sense, such a vicious cycle…sloping ever downward… the descent of humanity all the while deluded of its ascent…
February 5th, 2025 07:05
Implications of Doing Nothing
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for todays enjoyable read, enjoy the rest off your day.
February 5th, 2025 05:06
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for todays enjoyable read, enjoy the rest off your day.
February 5th, 2025 05:06
Implications of Doing Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
It seems clear on the surface that documentaries do little but sensationalize and that innocent beauty left behind is the viewer\'s eye candy stuffing themselves without getting up from the couch. There we sit intrigued with attrocities hypnotized, desensitized, driven insane and blinded by too many hours spent watching. May be way off base with this one but then I\'ll blame it on the documentary
February 5th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
It seems clear on the surface that documentaries do little but sensationalize and that innocent beauty left behind is the viewer\'s eye candy stuffing themselves without getting up from the couch. There we sit intrigued with attrocities hypnotized, desensitized, driven insane and blinded by too many hours spent watching. May be way off base with this one but then I\'ll blame it on the documentary
February 5th, 2025 04:57
Implications of Doing Nothing
orchidee said:
I don\'t suppose I will get any hidden meanings intended by poets - I rarely do! lol.
February 5th, 2025 03:30
orchidee said:
I don\'t suppose I will get any hidden meanings intended by poets - I rarely do! lol.
February 5th, 2025 03:30
Ways of Falling Out of Love
SJSangeetha said:
Manifestations of love. Different pathways merging to define love. Good read..SJS
February 4th, 2025 04:37
SJSangeetha said:
Manifestations of love. Different pathways merging to define love. Good read..SJS
February 4th, 2025 04:37
Repression and The Senegambia Highway Man
orchidee said:
Good write N. I\'ve a book with two pictures side by side - but sickening. Some Colonel-type and his wife with a dead tiger they shot as a trophy in one picture; and some starving people in India in the other picture.
February 4th, 2025 03:19
orchidee said:
Good write N. I\'ve a book with two pictures side by side - but sickening. Some Colonel-type and his wife with a dead tiger they shot as a trophy in one picture; and some starving people in India in the other picture.
February 4th, 2025 03:19
Repression and The Senegambia Highway Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Helping others can have its advantages and disadvantages Neville . Fine words.
Andy
February 4th, 2025 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Helping others can have its advantages and disadvantages Neville . Fine words.
Andy
February 4th, 2025 02:57
Repression and The Senegambia Highway Man
arqios said:
A distinct moment that comes back just as randomly as it happens, I’ve begun having those and must remember to document them as you have here. It’s a beautiful anecdotal piece. 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
February 4th, 2025 02:02
arqios said:
A distinct moment that comes back just as randomly as it happens, I’ve begun having those and must remember to document them as you have here. It’s a beautiful anecdotal piece. 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
February 4th, 2025 02:02
Echoes Dont Tell Lies 🤍
SJSangeetha said:
NEVILLE,
CAN I GET THE AMAZON LINK ..I LOVED THE TITLE OF YOUR BOOK.
February 4th, 2025 01:18
SJSangeetha said:
NEVILLE,
CAN I GET THE AMAZON LINK ..I LOVED THE TITLE OF YOUR BOOK.
February 4th, 2025 01:18
Repression and The Senegambia Highway Man
Poetic Licence said:
A fantastic piece of work with cleverly chosen and crafted words, clearly giving imagery to all feelings and emotions, and to top it off it is true and so very sad. I loved the Neville, great read
February 3rd, 2025 16:08
Poetic Licence said:
A fantastic piece of work with cleverly chosen and crafted words, clearly giving imagery to all feelings and emotions, and to top it off it is true and so very sad. I loved the Neville, great read
February 3rd, 2025 16:08
Repression and The Senegambia Highway Man
sorenbarrett said:
True or not it\'s a great metaphor just the same. Repression, denial, projection, displacement, regression, sublimation all seem to have a part in this story. Love the little lines fit such as the back of the old refigerator.. Several carefully chosen words helped the whole process such as totally blinded. Hardly thought about the guy again. Poetry is a wonderful sublimation I use it all the time. A great story Neville
February 3rd, 2025 15:35
sorenbarrett said:
True or not it\'s a great metaphor just the same. Repression, denial, projection, displacement, regression, sublimation all seem to have a part in this story. Love the little lines fit such as the back of the old refigerator.. Several carefully chosen words helped the whole process such as totally blinded. Hardly thought about the guy again. Poetry is a wonderful sublimation I use it all the time. A great story Neville
February 3rd, 2025 15:35
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