Comments received on poems by Neville



When it All Seemed to Fit
NafisaSB said:

well i hope that the time returns soon, wishing you all the happiness you deserve

December 30th, 2024 23:59

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
Bobby O said:

I was enjoying and was wondering but the answer was timed so perfectly. FREEDOM
you do good with such a unique style.
Inimitable

December 30th, 2024 04:40

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
Goldfinch60 said:

May your freedom always be with you Neville.

Andy

December 30th, 2024 02:45

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work, my friend.

December 29th, 2024 20:09

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
Bella Shepard said:

Hope all will be well with your wife and your time off.

December 29th, 2024 16:59

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I am glad your wife has been discharged from hospital, that is good news indeed! Also glad you two are going on what sounds to be a much needed vacay. I will also try to enjoy 2025 but, with that said, I do hope you are not away the ENTIRE year! 🤣 I will miss reading you, but wish you both well on your time away together, my friend! 🙏❤️

December 29th, 2024 16:09

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Neville Don\'t look back something might be gaining.

December 29th, 2024 15:40

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
Bella Shepard said:

I love the title, and for some reason felt compelled to google it. What I found was a delightful little history of the teashop with the same name. It seems to speak of the constancy of a place, contrasted with the inconsistancy of people. I love the way you have framed this, beautifully done.

December 29th, 2024 14:50

Masterpieces
Bella Shepard said:

Your poem speaks to the dedication and often the lifetime of work that went into creating the masterpiece, it is earned and deserved. Beautifully said dear friend!

December 29th, 2024 12:00

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

December 29th, 2024 10:55

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
sorenbarrett said:

A note of sweet sadness, but that is not the proper word, it also contains a feel of satisfaction and reluctant completion. Complex as all relationships are it paints the picture well. Have a great trip and I will anxiously await your return

December 29th, 2024 05:21

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
arqios said:

Ah, such a farewell and by and by…

December 29th, 2024 05:11

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
TobaniNataiella said:

And to you too Neville, enjoyed the read

December 29th, 2024 04:29

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
Michael Edwards said:

Enjoy your trip Neville.

December 29th, 2024 03:01

The Horse With the Red Umbrella
orchidee said:

Good write N.

December 29th, 2024 02:57

Masterpieces
Goldfinch60 said:

It all depends on how you think of them within yourself Neville, there is still some mastery artwork and music being produced out there for each to enjoy.

Andy

December 29th, 2024 02:45

The Joy of Silence
Dan Williams said:

Silence, like in classical music, says just as much or more than the sounds can. Nice.

December 28th, 2024 20:00

Masterpieces
arqios said:

Oh but wow! Glaring canines and all… what was it called back in the day: a donks smile? I know exact what you mean. And it saddens me to no end; being of friendly mien.

December 28th, 2024 18:54

Masterpieces
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

December 28th, 2024 12:03

Masterpieces
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Enjoy the masterpieces that one rarely gets to behold and, rather than stealing someone else\'s light, produce enough of one\'s own and shine that outward. Who knows when one\'s light produces another masterpiece. And, as is oft said, art is always in the eye of the beholder. A masterpiece to one is a garage sale special to another. All the same, well done, my friend! Well done! Love this! 🙏❤️

December 28th, 2024 09:07

Masterpieces
sorenbarrett said:

A poem with a twist a play in the words that reverses the initial take and meaning. I always loved these things and this is another. Like an iceberg the body of the work lies beneath the surface. Lovely

December 28th, 2024 04:44

Masterpieces
TobaniNataiella said:

Very rare to find one these days, we should try and precure our own light in order to be best seen. Enjoyed the read, Thank you

December 28th, 2024 03:40

Masterpieces
orchidee said:

...procure someone else\'s light...... In poetry, it\'s that plaguey thingy - plagiarise! lol.

December 28th, 2024 03:10

The Joy of Silence
Goldfinch60 said:

May that peacefulness always bring wonderful times Neville.

Andy

December 28th, 2024 02:53

The Joy of Silence
Alan R said:

It paints a picture of a slender lady with messy long hair in a white linen gown and smokey eyes… for some reason… beautiful!

December 27th, 2024 23:55

The Joy of Silence
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Agree with what has been said about the pattern and flow to this poem, my friend. It is wonderful, each line carefully thought out, each word carefully placed. The stuff that makes free verse my home and go to form (despite all of my formal shenanigans 🤣 as I do like to play). Seriously, Neville, from the title through the poem, this had me all the way my friend. One of my faves of yours! 🌹👏 And that is saying a lot, because I love all of yours and I am not just blowing smoke 💨. Well done.

December 27th, 2024 17:43

The Joy of Silence
orchidee said:

Good write N.

December 27th, 2024 11:39

The Joy of Silence
TobaniNataiella said:

You can activate your imagination with this one, softly written

December 27th, 2024 10:30

The Joy of Silence
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

December 27th, 2024 10:20

The Joy of Silence
sorenbarrett said:

A most lovely pattern and rhythm to this poem takes me down a thought as if drifting down a stream it pulls as a current that quietly draws me onward.

December 27th, 2024 08:43

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