Comments received on poems by Neville
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
Friendship said:
You painted a beautiful painting this morning. Resplendent Skies, a Haiku in Flight Mode, radiant arcs elevate watercolour puddle skies, migrating bird skeins soar with promise
August 18th, 2025 07:55
Friendship said:
You painted a beautiful painting this morning. Resplendent Skies, a Haiku in Flight Mode, radiant arcs elevate watercolour puddle skies, migrating bird skeins soar with promise
August 18th, 2025 07:55
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture that seems like I\'ve seen before in my life. Nicely crafted Neville
August 18th, 2025 03:30
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture that seems like I\'ve seen before in my life. Nicely crafted Neville
August 18th, 2025 03:30
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful image for a Monday morning, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 02:54
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful image for a Monday morning, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 02:54
Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode
orchidee said:
A fine write N. here\'s my Haiku, or ditty, as a gloom-and -doom merchant. It\'s probably not strictly a Haiku, but it is 5.7.5.
Feeling gloomy - rain?
Cheer up, all will soon be good
More rain tomorrow!
August 18th, 2025 02:19
orchidee said:
A fine write N. here\'s my Haiku, or ditty, as a gloom-and -doom merchant. It\'s probably not strictly a Haiku, but it is 5.7.5.
Feeling gloomy - rain?
Cheer up, all will soon be good
More rain tomorrow!
August 18th, 2025 02:19
There is A Crease in Everything
Goldfinch60 said:
Those creases can be so time consuming Neville.
Andy
August 18th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Those creases can be so time consuming Neville.
Andy
August 18th, 2025 01:46
There is A Crease in Everything
Dan Williams said:
Solid observation simply stated. Nice.
August 17th, 2025 19:47
Dan Williams said:
Solid observation simply stated. Nice.
August 17th, 2025 19:47
There is A Crease in Everything
Friendship said:
I could very well be off on this,,, To me, your poem serves to inspire readers to embrace their imperfections and consider acts of kindness—such as sharing literature—as a means of fostering love and support in their lives.
August 17th, 2025 13:56
Friendship said:
I could very well be off on this,,, To me, your poem serves to inspire readers to embrace their imperfections and consider acts of kindness—such as sharing literature—as a means of fostering love and support in their lives.
August 17th, 2025 13:56
There is A Crease in Everything
orchidee said:
Now KP got several creases cos her botox melted! lol.
August 17th, 2025 11:54
orchidee said:
Now KP got several creases cos her botox melted! lol.
August 17th, 2025 11:54
There is A Crease in Everything
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Somewhere it leaves us suspended...zipped thoughts, yet not tangential. Enjoyed it very much 🙏
August 17th, 2025 09:32
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Somewhere it leaves us suspended...zipped thoughts, yet not tangential. Enjoyed it very much 🙏
August 17th, 2025 09:32
There is A Crease in Everything
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Proof that one need not be wordy to convey truth as it is. This poem does that. Powerful and precise. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Proof that one need not be wordy to convey truth as it is. This poem does that. Powerful and precise. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:25
There is A Crease in Everything
Poetic Licence said:
The connations and interpretations of this write could be vast, I will just say Genius, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:51
Poetic Licence said:
The connations and interpretations of this write could be vast, I will just say Genius, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:51
There is A Crease in Everything
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how a wrinkle can put a kink in everything from plans to actions. In this world outside of inflation there is little increase.
August 17th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how a wrinkle can put a kink in everything from plans to actions. In this world outside of inflation there is little increase.
August 17th, 2025 04:14
There is A Crease in Everything
arqios said:
I like how this folds the flaw into the fabric of experience; that “crease” as both imperfection and barrier. It reads like an unfinished riddle, inviting you to lean in and imagine what lies beyond the snag. The spareness leaves the echo doing the work. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 17th, 2025 03:57
arqios said:
I like how this folds the flaw into the fabric of experience; that “crease” as both imperfection and barrier. It reads like an unfinished riddle, inviting you to lean in and imagine what lies beyond the snag. The spareness leaves the echo doing the work. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 17th, 2025 03:57
There is A Crease in Everything
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, good Sir. La dee. How beautifully you\'ve taken a provocative topic and addressed it generously in brevity. Charming. After that, I\'ll feign giving up since the breadth of that topic is too large. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 17th, 2025 03:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth, good Sir. La dee. How beautifully you\'ve taken a provocative topic and addressed it generously in brevity. Charming. After that, I\'ll feign giving up since the breadth of that topic is too large. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 17th, 2025 03:40
Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know
Demar Desu said:
Don’t let the vegans hear this one LOL GREAT POEM
August 16th, 2025 20:21
Demar Desu said:
Don’t let the vegans hear this one LOL GREAT POEM
August 16th, 2025 20:21
Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know
Doggerel Dave said:
Well talk to them proper then... say \'hello me old fruit ....\'
Made me think............................ \'delicious\'!
August 16th, 2025 15:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Well talk to them proper then... say \'hello me old fruit ....\'
Made me think............................ \'delicious\'!
August 16th, 2025 15:54
Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know
Bella Shepard said:
Kudos to you for standing up for the fungi. Great imagery and imagination in this one. I\'ll never take a mushroom for granted again, but stop and have a chat.
August 16th, 2025 11:03
Bella Shepard said:
Kudos to you for standing up for the fungi. Great imagery and imagination in this one. I\'ll never take a mushroom for granted again, but stop and have a chat.
August 16th, 2025 11:03
Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know
Poetic Licence said:
I got two things out of this write, firstly I believe if it is alive then why can\'t it feel in some way. Secondly I got a sense this could be an off beat description of us scrambling around in the world, and the chlorophyll is needed to put us back to sleep. However it is meant to be it certainly is an interesting and entertaining read
August 16th, 2025 10:54
Poetic Licence said:
I got two things out of this write, firstly I believe if it is alive then why can\'t it feel in some way. Secondly I got a sense this could be an off beat description of us scrambling around in the world, and the chlorophyll is needed to put us back to sleep. However it is meant to be it certainly is an interesting and entertaining read
August 16th, 2025 10:54
Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know
Cheeky Missy said:
What on earth?! You\'re downright hilarious and cleverly suggestive in a trice, the very idea laughable. Good grief! I love, love, love it!!! Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 10:36
Cheeky Missy said:
What on earth?! You\'re downright hilarious and cleverly suggestive in a trice, the very idea laughable. Good grief! I love, love, love it!!! Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 10:36
Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now the very old corny joke: \'He was a fungi / fun guy, the life and soul of the party!\' lol.
August 16th, 2025 09:51
orchidee said:
Good write N. And now the very old corny joke: \'He was a fungi / fun guy, the life and soul of the party!\' lol.
August 16th, 2025 09:51
Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know
arqios said:
This is wonderfully unsettling, with the pairing of “crab eye stalks” and “fancy koi out of water” turns the humble fungi into strange, half‑animal seekers. I could almost feel the damp mulch and that blind, urgent reach for nourishment. The way you render their fragility makes the scene oddly tender as well as alien. It lingers like the smell of rain on soil.
August 16th, 2025 08:44
arqios said:
This is wonderfully unsettling, with the pairing of “crab eye stalks” and “fancy koi out of water” turns the humble fungi into strange, half‑animal seekers. I could almost feel the damp mulch and that blind, urgent reach for nourishment. The way you render their fragility makes the scene oddly tender as well as alien. It lingers like the smell of rain on soil.
August 16th, 2025 08:44
Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know
sorenbarrett said:
This may have more meaning to me than most. I believe that all life forms have feelings, maybe not as you and I, but in their own way. I respect each piece of grass and weed, the microbes and the fungi they belong here as much as well just distant relatives. A wonderful read that may seem absurd to some but not to me. A fave
August 16th, 2025 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
This may have more meaning to me than most. I believe that all life forms have feelings, maybe not as you and I, but in their own way. I respect each piece of grass and weed, the microbes and the fungi they belong here as much as well just distant relatives. A wonderful read that may seem absurd to some but not to me. A fave
August 16th, 2025 08:30
Fungi Have Feelings Too You Know
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tell me about it! I literally got ID\'d for buying a trippy mushroom T-shirt that said \"Great Dayz Ahead\"...ooh the psychedelic horror! 🍄😱 Mean while, kids are walking around with 20 proof mouthwash in their hands. \'Merica! 🤦♂️ Leave the fungi alone! 🤣 That aside out of the way, my dear friend Neville, you’ve made the fungi writhe with such strange, vivid life here…oddly tender yet a little unsettling too (the only way to have it, lol). That blend of humor and unease is perfection in my book. Great poem. A fave from this fungi lover. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 16th, 2025 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Tell me about it! I literally got ID\'d for buying a trippy mushroom T-shirt that said \"Great Dayz Ahead\"...ooh the psychedelic horror! 🍄😱 Mean while, kids are walking around with 20 proof mouthwash in their hands. \'Merica! 🤦♂️ Leave the fungi alone! 🤣 That aside out of the way, my dear friend Neville, you’ve made the fungi writhe with such strange, vivid life here…oddly tender yet a little unsettling too (the only way to have it, lol). That blend of humor and unease is perfection in my book. Great poem. A fave from this fungi lover. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 16th, 2025 08:08
The Sweet Track
Poetic Dan said:
I do love Somerset, Devon and Cornwall! And the peace I find while there. Hopefully take a trip soon, as really I\'m not far.
Thanks for the reminder and always a pleasure to see you are still flowing well.
Take care my friend
August 15th, 2025 07:21
Poetic Dan said:
I do love Somerset, Devon and Cornwall! And the peace I find while there. Hopefully take a trip soon, as really I\'m not far.
Thanks for the reminder and always a pleasure to see you are still flowing well.
Take care my friend
August 15th, 2025 07:21
Well Inclined
rebellion_in_sanity said:
David Gilmour was hitting the first notes of Sorrow when I started reading the poem. Well, it was magical the undercurrent of loss in the midst of vibrant picture. Apologies, I may have missed the point entirely; just wrote whatever came to mind - unfiltered.
August 15th, 2025 06:33
rebellion_in_sanity said:
David Gilmour was hitting the first notes of Sorrow when I started reading the poem. Well, it was magical the undercurrent of loss in the midst of vibrant picture. Apologies, I may have missed the point entirely; just wrote whatever came to mind - unfiltered.
August 15th, 2025 06:33
Falling for Icarus #2
Goldfinch60 said:
Many miscalculations are made Neville.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Many miscalculations are made Neville.
Andy
August 15th, 2025 01:05
Falling for Icarus #2
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, I love your wry, knowing touch…turning myth into a moment we can almost feel in the wind and salt spray. Even in the fall, there’s a grin in the telling. Cheers! 🍻 Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 11:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, I love your wry, knowing touch…turning myth into a moment we can almost feel in the wind and salt spray. Even in the fall, there’s a grin in the telling. Cheers! 🍻 Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 11:43
Falling for Icarus #2
orchidee said:
Should he have gone to Specsavers to see his directions more clearly?!
August 14th, 2025 10:47
orchidee said:
Should he have gone to Specsavers to see his directions more clearly?!
August 14th, 2025 10:47
Falling for Icarus #2
arqios said:
What are the chances of a similar theme! It’s one of those myths that etched my formative years so it’s a repeat destination over the years. Glad to share in your takes and I am more enriched 🕊️🙏🏻
August 14th, 2025 06:10
arqios said:
What are the chances of a similar theme! It’s one of those myths that etched my formative years so it’s a repeat destination over the years. Glad to share in your takes and I am more enriched 🕊️🙏🏻
August 14th, 2025 06:10
Falling for Icarus #2
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely and cleverly crafted write of well known myth and a dangerous lover, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:40
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely and cleverly crafted write of well known myth and a dangerous lover, enjoyed the read
August 14th, 2025 05:40
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