Comments received on poems by Neville
The Look
arqios said:
Quasi flirtations appear to humanise us in a sterile and anonymous existence.
November 15th, 2024 08:00
arqios said:
Quasi flirtations appear to humanise us in a sterile and anonymous existence.
November 15th, 2024 08:00
The Look
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, flirtation is too tantalizing in myriad instances, the coy half turn but natural, yet how you render it so exquisitely with a delicious delicacy which haunts the deeply poignant moment. Thank you for sharing.
November 15th, 2024 06:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, flirtation is too tantalizing in myriad instances, the coy half turn but natural, yet how you render it so exquisitely with a delicious delicacy which haunts the deeply poignant moment. Thank you for sharing.
November 15th, 2024 06:03
The Look
sorenbarrett said:
A new watch or clock that may be more accurate than those now available on the market. Sad and in that all too human.
November 15th, 2024 05:49
sorenbarrett said:
A new watch or clock that may be more accurate than those now available on the market. Sad and in that all too human.
November 15th, 2024 05:49
The Look
Doggerel Dave said:
A smile - everything, access, a chance...or nothing. Little doubt which this was. Insight here to something hard to express, even if I wanted or needed to.
Thanks, Neville.
November 15th, 2024 05:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A smile - everything, access, a chance...or nothing. Little doubt which this was. Insight here to something hard to express, even if I wanted or needed to.
Thanks, Neville.
November 15th, 2024 05:25
The Look
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens so often Neville, that look can bring many memories from many people.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
It happens so often Neville, that look can bring many memories from many people.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:57
Essence
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville, she will always be with you in your mind.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Neville, she will always be with you in your mind.
Andy
November 15th, 2024 02:45
The Look
Bobby O said:
The elicit that is scant hope can disproportionately intoxicate such that no matter our prep or resolve it still will win next Time, an emotion oft deemed worst only because dislike of prolonged torment is deemed definitive. I vociferously reject that supposition offering the logic of an argument that requires one to look past lewd content. I just chickened out so I’m leaving it there!
November 15th, 2024 02:44
Bobby O said:
The elicit that is scant hope can disproportionately intoxicate such that no matter our prep or resolve it still will win next Time, an emotion oft deemed worst only because dislike of prolonged torment is deemed definitive. I vociferously reject that supposition offering the logic of an argument that requires one to look past lewd content. I just chickened out so I’m leaving it there!
November 15th, 2024 02:44
Essence
MendedFences27 said:
Something always remains of a lover no longer with us. I suppose that the longer and deeper the relationship the more the depth of remembrance. The detail of this poem, seems to mean a treasured love. You have painted her picture for all of us to enjoy. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:35
MendedFences27 said:
Something always remains of a lover no longer with us. I suppose that the longer and deeper the relationship the more the depth of remembrance. The detail of this poem, seems to mean a treasured love. You have painted her picture for all of us to enjoy. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:35
Essence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully descriptive and beautiful written poem! I am now filled with its essence! Thank you for sharing, kind sir! 🙏
November 14th, 2024 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully descriptive and beautiful written poem! I am now filled with its essence! Thank you for sharing, kind sir! 🙏
November 14th, 2024 07:55
Essence
Cassie58 said:
Your poem Neville stimulates the senses as well as being brimful of fine architectural and shore line imagery. I was reminded of a visit to the Ashmoleum museum in Oxford, and a display case which held the mummy of a young woman, far from where she originated. That experience, stirred up many emotions seeing her there. This is a beautiful piece of writing. You should be proud of it.
November 14th, 2024 07:41
Cassie58 said:
Your poem Neville stimulates the senses as well as being brimful of fine architectural and shore line imagery. I was reminded of a visit to the Ashmoleum museum in Oxford, and a display case which held the mummy of a young woman, far from where she originated. That experience, stirred up many emotions seeing her there. This is a beautiful piece of writing. You should be proud of it.
November 14th, 2024 07:41
Essence
Cheeky Missy said:
Well. If only sonnets such as suitors were wont in the day to proffer to their ladies could come off as effectively, they might have stayed in style. This pretty piece romps and frolics with such vigor I couldn\'t help whistling in concluding as seemed required. Beautifully rendered with near exquisite imagery and lively poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Well. If only sonnets such as suitors were wont in the day to proffer to their ladies could come off as effectively, they might have stayed in style. This pretty piece romps and frolics with such vigor I couldn\'t help whistling in concluding as seemed required. Beautifully rendered with near exquisite imagery and lively poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 05:25
Essence
sorenbarrett said:
Are Neville this poem carries so many senses and leaves a feeling imprinted as if it were a fossil in the brain. They poetic an archaeological find the raises primitive emotions.
November 14th, 2024 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Are Neville this poem carries so many senses and leaves a feeling imprinted as if it were a fossil in the brain. They poetic an archaeological find the raises primitive emotions.
November 14th, 2024 05:15
Essence
Bobby O said:
Wow. This is instructional for a cad like me that stumbles to impress w color and metaphor when addressing that certain woman . I’m
Admitting now that when the occasion arises I will borrow many a phrase hoping to genuinely create the mood and allure of this masterpiece.
November 14th, 2024 04:38
Bobby O said:
Wow. This is instructional for a cad like me that stumbles to impress w color and metaphor when addressing that certain woman . I’m
Admitting now that when the occasion arises I will borrow many a phrase hoping to genuinely create the mood and allure of this masterpiece.
November 14th, 2024 04:38
Essence
orchidee said:
A pleasant essence N. More than can be said for KP, but I buy her \'Essence of Rotting Fish\' perfume! lol.
November 14th, 2024 03:38
orchidee said:
A pleasant essence N. More than can be said for KP, but I buy her \'Essence of Rotting Fish\' perfume! lol.
November 14th, 2024 03:38
Another November
Cheeky Missy said:
What kills my ability to participate is the fury such a holiday stirs in a heartbeat until I\'m seething. I mean, every time I must go on patrol I cannot miss this rude stone wall built by my distant relatives under most cruel oppression and causing me pain every single time by dint of the same.
Your tribute, by contrast, is delightfully apropos and tendered with such excellent humor I could yield a wry smile, if only I wasn\'t still infuriated at the mere mention. Thank you very, very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:35
Cheeky Missy said:
What kills my ability to participate is the fury such a holiday stirs in a heartbeat until I\'m seething. I mean, every time I must go on patrol I cannot miss this rude stone wall built by my distant relatives under most cruel oppression and causing me pain every single time by dint of the same.
Your tribute, by contrast, is delightfully apropos and tendered with such excellent humor I could yield a wry smile, if only I wasn\'t still infuriated at the mere mention. Thank you very, very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:35
Superfluous Twists
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, the dear fence! Didn\'t Samuel Clemens prove how excellently dear Tom managed to accomplish its painting while practically sitting on the same? Nothing like taking the brunt of it for being such a comparative fool. Reminds me of someone I cherish but there\'s too many pretty numbers which have no effect on him. Excellently rendered with grand imagery and a niggling poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, the dear fence! Didn\'t Samuel Clemens prove how excellently dear Tom managed to accomplish its painting while practically sitting on the same? Nothing like taking the brunt of it for being such a comparative fool. Reminds me of someone I cherish but there\'s too many pretty numbers which have no effect on him. Excellently rendered with grand imagery and a niggling poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:25
Letting Go of Your Ghost
Cheeky Missy said:
I prefer it thus, myself. The ghost of whomever I cherished seems to flit off like the vapor it was before I catch my fill of whom I couldn\'t release, had I the ability. Excellently rendered with an exquisite poignancy and grand imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 01:56
Cheeky Missy said:
I prefer it thus, myself. The ghost of whomever I cherished seems to flit off like the vapor it was before I catch my fill of whom I couldn\'t release, had I the ability. Excellently rendered with an exquisite poignancy and grand imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 01:56
Superfluous Twists
MendedFences27 said:
I guess this means that men being strung along, to the point of embarrassment, is an ordinary occurrence. The use of common phrases amplifies the mediocrity of the situation. Just your average Joe being made into a fool. I\'d venture to say many have traveled this road, probably a superfluity of travelers. - Phul A.
November 13th, 2024 21:05
MendedFences27 said:
I guess this means that men being strung along, to the point of embarrassment, is an ordinary occurrence. The use of common phrases amplifies the mediocrity of the situation. Just your average Joe being made into a fool. I\'d venture to say many have traveled this road, probably a superfluity of travelers. - Phul A.
November 13th, 2024 21:05
Letting Go of Your Ghost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully expressed! It is indeed so hard to let go of the one\'s we love, whether when they\'ve passed on...or if they\'ve let us go for some reason or another. Either way, loss is loss and these \"reminders\" can be very painful. Excellent poetic expression, my friend! 👏
November 13th, 2024 17:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully expressed! It is indeed so hard to let go of the one\'s we love, whether when they\'ve passed on...or if they\'ve let us go for some reason or another. Either way, loss is loss and these \"reminders\" can be very painful. Excellent poetic expression, my friend! 👏
November 13th, 2024 17:59
Letting Go of Your Ghost
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. The feeling comes through.
November 13th, 2024 10:45
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. The feeling comes through.
November 13th, 2024 10:45
Superfluous Twists
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem Neville. I can think of a simile or two that would describe the feelings I picked up here. Not a pleasant situation to encounter. Emotionally challenging I would say.
paupers twine is such an original description
No one wants to be a laughing stock or clown.
Painfully penned I would say.
November 13th, 2024 06:12
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem Neville. I can think of a simile or two that would describe the feelings I picked up here. Not a pleasant situation to encounter. Emotionally challenging I would say.
paupers twine is such an original description
No one wants to be a laughing stock or clown.
Painfully penned I would say.
November 13th, 2024 06:12
Superfluous Twists
arqios said:
I might do with a super floss but my teeth get a dunking every night so it’s kinda superfluous- and I’ve derailed and gone off topic… yet again! Sorry mate.
November 13th, 2024 05:19
arqios said:
I might do with a super floss but my teeth get a dunking every night so it’s kinda superfluous- and I’ve derailed and gone off topic… yet again! Sorry mate.
November 13th, 2024 05:19
Superfluous Twists
sorenbarrett said:
Great wordplay in this poem Neville. The meaning may be multiple, but the initial one for me was that fall comes to those who fall to lust in general. I love the wording in this one
November 13th, 2024 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Great wordplay in this poem Neville. The meaning may be multiple, but the initial one for me was that fall comes to those who fall to lust in general. I love the wording in this one
November 13th, 2024 05:16
Superfluous Twists
orchidee said:
Can one beat a bit of superfluous?! I dunno what I\'m on about. lol. As for the s***, stand away from the fan then! heehee.
November 13th, 2024 03:35
orchidee said:
Can one beat a bit of superfluous?! I dunno what I\'m on about. lol. As for the s***, stand away from the fan then! heehee.
November 13th, 2024 03:35
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