Comments received on poems by Neville
Requiem For A Refugee
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and sad write around the destruction around us and the destruction we cause and are part of, great write
March 7th, 2025 05:08
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and sad write around the destruction around us and the destruction we cause and are part of, great write
March 7th, 2025 05:08
Requiem For A Refugee
orchidee said:
Good write N. I of course go through life paying no attention to the destruction around me - cos I married KP! lol.
March 7th, 2025 05:04
orchidee said:
Good write N. I of course go through life paying no attention to the destruction around me - cos I married KP! lol.
March 7th, 2025 05:04
Requiem For A Refugee
sorenbarrett said:
An east wind, that of destruction, or so it is believed from Bible to present comes. You paint such a picture of devastation and need yet how easily we are diverted from help. Now the question that remains in my mind is that that gust that blows us away while working on our alibis, was that a wind of diversion or one of destruction. Either way this poem draws attention to the fact that we go through our lives not paying attention to the destruction around us. Very nice Neville
March 7th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
An east wind, that of destruction, or so it is believed from Bible to present comes. You paint such a picture of devastation and need yet how easily we are diverted from help. Now the question that remains in my mind is that that gust that blows us away while working on our alibis, was that a wind of diversion or one of destruction. Either way this poem draws attention to the fact that we go through our lives not paying attention to the destruction around us. Very nice Neville
March 7th, 2025 04:47
Requiem For A Refugee
arqios said:
There is a sadness running across with the lines. Most moving. 🙏🏻🕊
March 7th, 2025 04:22
arqios said:
There is a sadness running across with the lines. Most moving. 🙏🏻🕊
March 7th, 2025 04:22
Corporal B and Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Bullies do get their comeuppance in time Neville.
Andy
March 6th, 2025 02:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Bullies do get their comeuppance in time Neville.
Andy
March 6th, 2025 02:58
Corporal B and Me
Cassie58 said:
What a satisfying and positive outcome here Neville. Corporal B was a right mean bar steward. You though, deserved all the cheers and salutes you got from your mates. Did you ever see the 1965 version of The Hill? When I read your poem, my
mind drifted to that film, it also drifted to events earlier this week, well covered in the media. I smiled at your account of his car being wired up. Naughty, but very nicely done.
March 5th, 2025 18:23
Cassie58 said:
What a satisfying and positive outcome here Neville. Corporal B was a right mean bar steward. You though, deserved all the cheers and salutes you got from your mates. Did you ever see the 1965 version of The Hill? When I read your poem, my
mind drifted to that film, it also drifted to events earlier this week, well covered in the media. I smiled at your account of his car being wired up. Naughty, but very nicely done.
March 5th, 2025 18:23
Corporal B and Me
Doggerel Dave said:
You survived....
Carry on Sir!
Very much enjoyed, Neville.
March 5th, 2025 17:53
Doggerel Dave said:
You survived....
Carry on Sir!
Very much enjoyed, Neville.
March 5th, 2025 17:53
Corporal B and Me
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in poem format Neville. As a child from 6 to 12 was bullied by a neighbor. Until finally fought him in front of a school crowd and lost. But following this he came to me and asked to be my friend, He came to me for help with homework through high school. The standing up not the winning seems to be the issue in this poem as well. Although not at all the same the standing up is the key to how one feels about themselves and that is to me the key. When you feel good about yourself others will follow. A poem of raw openness
March 5th, 2025 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in poem format Neville. As a child from 6 to 12 was bullied by a neighbor. Until finally fought him in front of a school crowd and lost. But following this he came to me and asked to be my friend, He came to me for help with homework through high school. The standing up not the winning seems to be the issue in this poem as well. Although not at all the same the standing up is the key to how one feels about themselves and that is to me the key. When you feel good about yourself others will follow. A poem of raw openness
March 5th, 2025 11:28
Corporal B and Me
Poetic Licence said:
There are bullies in every walk of society but give them a uniform and it takes it to a different level, and this the worst kind of bullying, a captive audiance no escape, twenty four/seven, he probably got off likely with just the car stunt, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 10:26
Poetic Licence said:
There are bullies in every walk of society but give them a uniform and it takes it to a different level, and this the worst kind of bullying, a captive audiance no escape, twenty four/seven, he probably got off likely with just the car stunt, enjoyed the read
March 5th, 2025 10:26
Corporal B and Me
Accidental Poet said:
Some bullies need bullying more than those they bullied. Chalk one up for the good guys. 😁👍
March 5th, 2025 09:45
Accidental Poet said:
Some bullies need bullying more than those they bullied. Chalk one up for the good guys. 😁👍
March 5th, 2025 09:45
Corporal B and Me
orchidee said:
Good write N. I too began to crack at 12 - minutes after marrying KP, that is! lol.
March 5th, 2025 09:43
orchidee said:
Good write N. I too began to crack at 12 - minutes after marrying KP, that is! lol.
March 5th, 2025 09:43
Hold the Sugar
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, how heartbreaking! Time has a subtle way of thieving so very much, as if the wealth not measured by gold is much easier to steal, I guess. Gorgeous and beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 4th, 2025 14:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, how heartbreaking! Time has a subtle way of thieving so very much, as if the wealth not measured by gold is much easier to steal, I guess. Gorgeous and beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 4th, 2025 14:40
This is Where Spring Begins – Haru Ga Hajimaru
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your life Neville, Spring brings joy.
Andy
March 4th, 2025 03:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your life Neville, Spring brings joy.
Andy
March 4th, 2025 03:04
This is Where Spring Begins – Haru Ga Hajimaru
Cassie58 said:
Love that image. His index finger tracing her name through a film of thin ice on window glass. There are contrasts here between cold and heat, which work so well. Plenty of symbolism and spring is a time for new beginnings and growth. A perfectly lovely poem Neville.
March 4th, 2025 02:44
Cassie58 said:
Love that image. His index finger tracing her name through a film of thin ice on window glass. There are contrasts here between cold and heat, which work so well. Plenty of symbolism and spring is a time for new beginnings and growth. A perfectly lovely poem Neville.
March 4th, 2025 02:44
Aide-Mémoire’s
NafisaSB said:
so very true - you have nailed it my friend
keep them coming..
March 4th, 2025 00:21
NafisaSB said:
so very true - you have nailed it my friend
keep them coming..
March 4th, 2025 00:21
This is Where Spring Begins – Haru Ga Hajimaru
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this and the formatting...brilliant. The opening is the title. Then the poem leads back to the opening. Love it! An easy fave for me, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 17:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this and the formatting...brilliant. The opening is the title. Then the poem leads back to the opening. Love it! An easy fave for me, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
March 3rd, 2025 17:12
This is Where Spring Begins – Haru Ga Hajimaru
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! On Hina Matsuri no less...! Exquisite and seductive, rendered charmingly with gorgeous imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
March 3rd, 2025 16:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! On Hina Matsuri no less...! Exquisite and seductive, rendered charmingly with gorgeous imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
March 3rd, 2025 16:06
Culled
spilleronsheet said:
Could feel the pain in those words…culling indeed in whatever rationale defined is painful
March 3rd, 2025 13:17
spilleronsheet said:
Could feel the pain in those words…culling indeed in whatever rationale defined is painful
March 3rd, 2025 13:17
This is Where Spring Begins – Haru Ga Hajimaru
orchidee said:
I whisper Hari Kiri - or summat like that, the Japanese thing, being married to KP, and that\'s a fact! (is it? lol).
March 3rd, 2025 11:48
orchidee said:
I whisper Hari Kiri - or summat like that, the Japanese thing, being married to KP, and that\'s a fact! (is it? lol).
March 3rd, 2025 11:48
This is Where Spring Begins – Haru Ga Hajimaru
sorenbarrett said:
Once again Neville you invoke your mastery of symbolism and metaphor to enchant a poem. This one even feels oriental before one reaches the line. You have taken past and present, warm and cold, the foggy aspect of what is normally clear glass, ice and spring and tied them into a relationship with implied sensuality. A lovely magic trick conjuring up many a fanciful vision. Lovely
March 3rd, 2025 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
Once again Neville you invoke your mastery of symbolism and metaphor to enchant a poem. This one even feels oriental before one reaches the line. You have taken past and present, warm and cold, the foggy aspect of what is normally clear glass, ice and spring and tied them into a relationship with implied sensuality. A lovely magic trick conjuring up many a fanciful vision. Lovely
March 3rd, 2025 09:56
This is Where Spring Begins – Haru Ga Hajimaru
Poetic Licence said:
Ivvocatative, sensual and beautiful, love this one
March 3rd, 2025 09:51
Poetic Licence said:
Ivvocatative, sensual and beautiful, love this one
March 3rd, 2025 09:51
Listen Loud Just One More Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes they just do not hear Neville but in true love they know.
Andy
March 3rd, 2025 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes they just do not hear Neville but in true love they know.
Andy
March 3rd, 2025 02:45
Listen Loud Just One More Time
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I didn\'t even want to whisper to KP. I generally ignore her. lol.
March 2nd, 2025 13:27
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I didn\'t even want to whisper to KP. I generally ignore her. lol.
March 2nd, 2025 13:27
Listen Loud Just One More Time
Cassie58 said:
So very beautifully rendered Neville, all the way down until those final two lines summoned the war drums. Purchased book number twelve recently, pleased to support your chosen charities. I have the full set now.
March 2nd, 2025 12:59
Cassie58 said:
So very beautifully rendered Neville, all the way down until those final two lines summoned the war drums. Purchased book number twelve recently, pleased to support your chosen charities. I have the full set now.
March 2nd, 2025 12:59
Listen Loud Just One More Time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Layers this poem has…and the more one peels away, the more one gets the sense that what was once a source of hope and love has be one a source of strain. Relationships…in them, aren’t we all. Wonderful poem my friend!
March 2nd, 2025 12:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Layers this poem has…and the more one peels away, the more one gets the sense that what was once a source of hope and love has be one a source of strain. Relationships…in them, aren’t we all. Wonderful poem my friend!
March 2nd, 2025 12:14
Listen Loud Just One More Time
Cheeky Missy said:
Lemme guess, those shells were as calcified as the reference to conch suggested, right?! But he HAD to tell her because nothing was too good for whom he adored. Ah, but I\'m well-nigh overcome until I can hardly breathe. Oh you and your skill! Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a captivating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 2nd, 2025 12:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Lemme guess, those shells were as calcified as the reference to conch suggested, right?! But he HAD to tell her because nothing was too good for whom he adored. Ah, but I\'m well-nigh overcome until I can hardly breathe. Oh you and your skill! Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a captivating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 2nd, 2025 12:04
Listen Loud Just One More Time
Christina8 said:
\"listen loud\", sometimes when you are conveying love, its so loud yet so quiet you can hear a pin drop. I think this is a wonderful piece, enjoyed reading!
March 2nd, 2025 09:48
Christina8 said:
\"listen loud\", sometimes when you are conveying love, its so loud yet so quiet you can hear a pin drop. I think this is a wonderful piece, enjoyed reading!
March 2nd, 2025 09:48
Listen Loud Just One More Time
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes whispers are louded than shouts and vica versa, but that depend of who the war drums for, yourself or someone else, very interesting, relatable and enjoyable read
March 2nd, 2025 06:57
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes whispers are louded than shouts and vica versa, but that depend of who the war drums for, yourself or someone else, very interesting, relatable and enjoyable read
March 2nd, 2025 06:57
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