Comments received on poems by Neville
Entres
Cloie said:
Your poem paints a vivid picture of the sky and its slow, deliberate movements. The imagery of monsters emerging at midnight is striking and adds depth to the piece. The connection between these images and the hunger by midday is thought-provoking. It is such a great piece with a unique perspective!
March 3rd, 2024 05:34
Cloie said:
Your poem paints a vivid picture of the sky and its slow, deliberate movements. The imagery of monsters emerging at midnight is striking and adds depth to the piece. The connection between these images and the hunger by midday is thought-provoking. It is such a great piece with a unique perspective!
March 3rd, 2024 05:34
Where Truth Lies
Goldfinch60 said:
We seem not to be able to hear much truth in the world today Neville.
Andy
March 3rd, 2024 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
We seem not to be able to hear much truth in the world today Neville.
Andy
March 3rd, 2024 02:13
Almost Famous Last Words
Dove said:
So sad, I wondered who passed away... Perhaps it was just time hitting the hay.š
March 2nd, 2024 17:22
Dove said:
So sad, I wondered who passed away... Perhaps it was just time hitting the hay.š
March 2nd, 2024 17:22
My Very Dearest Sigmund
Dove said:
I read Sig in High School. The keyboard music definitely more soothing
March 2nd, 2024 17:19
Dove said:
I read Sig in High School. The keyboard music definitely more soothing
March 2nd, 2024 17:19
Where Truth Lies
Parisab said:
I think that I found a treasure in your poem : in the last line: thereās not a lot of it to hide
There isnāt much absolute truth left Iām afraidā¦
March 2nd, 2024 11:46
Parisab said:
I think that I found a treasure in your poem : in the last line: thereās not a lot of it to hide
There isnāt much absolute truth left Iām afraidā¦
March 2nd, 2024 11:46
Arc
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the elegance of a smile! It\'s so warm and positive. Great job!
March 2nd, 2024 11:01
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the elegance of a smile! It\'s so warm and positive. Great job!
March 2nd, 2024 11:01
Where Truth Lies
Cassie58 said:
Whose truth. Mine , yours, theirs? Truth is so subjective. Just read an article across different newspapers. Everyone has their own version of the truth. As for being eaten from the inside, oh no no no. I donāt carry guilt well, better to be honest. Such a good quality. Nice bit of thought provoking brevity for a Saturday afternoon Neville. Make sure yours is a good one.
March 2nd, 2024 09:03
Cassie58 said:
Whose truth. Mine , yours, theirs? Truth is so subjective. Just read an article across different newspapers. Everyone has their own version of the truth. As for being eaten from the inside, oh no no no. I donāt carry guilt well, better to be honest. Such a good quality. Nice bit of thought provoking brevity for a Saturday afternoon Neville. Make sure yours is a good one.
March 2nd, 2024 09:03
Where Truth Lies
Teddy.15 said:
Well as I am a woman who has always believed in justice and honesty I say there\'s a lot of dishonesty and lack of morals right now in our world. Great subject. š¹
March 2nd, 2024 06:42
Teddy.15 said:
Well as I am a woman who has always believed in justice and honesty I say there\'s a lot of dishonesty and lack of morals right now in our world. Great subject. š¹
March 2nd, 2024 06:42
Where Truth Lies
Doggerel Dave said:
But (good start) all truth inside would be subjective, and thus oftimes not worth outing anyway.....unless, of course, I\'ve got something to say....
I\'m enjoying these shorties, Neville (but that\'s very subjective...so don\'t let it influence you.)...........
March 2nd, 2024 06:07
Doggerel Dave said:
But (good start) all truth inside would be subjective, and thus oftimes not worth outing anyway.....unless, of course, I\'ve got something to say....
I\'m enjoying these shorties, Neville (but that\'s very subjective...so don\'t let it influence you.)...........
March 2nd, 2024 06:07
Where Truth Lies
orchidee said:
You know I will say this - it eats KP\'s botox from inside. That\'s a lot of truth! lol.
March 2nd, 2024 05:52
orchidee said:
You know I will say this - it eats KP\'s botox from inside. That\'s a lot of truth! lol.
March 2nd, 2024 05:52
Arc
Accidental Poet said:
A description I\'m very familiar with and lives within me. Beautifully put N. š¹
March 2nd, 2024 01:47
Accidental Poet said:
A description I\'m very familiar with and lives within me. Beautifully put N. š¹
March 2nd, 2024 01:47
Arc
Doggerel Dave said:
Garn - the air\'s just misdirection, \'twas the smile wot got you going....
The gentlest of poems.
March 2nd, 2024 00:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Garn - the air\'s just misdirection, \'twas the smile wot got you going....
The gentlest of poems.
March 2nd, 2024 00:06
Arc
Parisab said:
Your descriptions have their uniques touch on every image, including a simple smile! Beauty does not escape you, my poetic friendā¦
March 1st, 2024 11:22
Parisab said:
Your descriptions have their uniques touch on every image, including a simple smile! Beauty does not escape you, my poetic friendā¦
March 1st, 2024 11:22
Arc
Cassie58 said:
Wonāt cost you a dime but can be priceless. A little gem here Neville . Brevity can say so much. Wishing you a grand weekend:)
March 1st, 2024 11:21
Cassie58 said:
Wonāt cost you a dime but can be priceless. A little gem here Neville . Brevity can say so much. Wishing you a grand weekend:)
March 1st, 2024 11:21
Arc
orchidee said:
In KP\'s case, the portion of air is a cavern - a trout-mouth!
She\'ll serve me up for lunch soon - squeak squeak!
March 1st, 2024 06:45
orchidee said:
In KP\'s case, the portion of air is a cavern - a trout-mouth!
She\'ll serve me up for lunch soon - squeak squeak!
March 1st, 2024 06:45
My Very Dearest Sigmund
Bobby O said:
You describe happenstance? Or perhaps inevitability like knowing water finds its path but even that is A v B , knowing or projecting where that landing spot will be ? Or the B side where wonder , faith, and goodwill await that landing spot and greet be surprise. OR IS IT ALL just for taking another shot at Ziggu under some plaudible veiled Device tantamount to shaking a rivals hand in public , smiling and gripping tightly with purpose,? the part that makes you so good is it works in Austin scenarios? Youāre the man now youāre the man.
February 29th, 2024 22:06
Bobby O said:
You describe happenstance? Or perhaps inevitability like knowing water finds its path but even that is A v B , knowing or projecting where that landing spot will be ? Or the B side where wonder , faith, and goodwill await that landing spot and greet be surprise. OR IS IT ALL just for taking another shot at Ziggu under some plaudible veiled Device tantamount to shaking a rivals hand in public , smiling and gripping tightly with purpose,? the part that makes you so good is it works in Austin scenarios? Youāre the man now youāre the man.
February 29th, 2024 22:06
Fleeced
Tom C Dylan said:
A compelling read, Neville. I get the feeling of optimism, yet melancholy at the same time. Very intriguing piece.
February 29th, 2024 04:08
Tom C Dylan said:
A compelling read, Neville. I get the feeling of optimism, yet melancholy at the same time. Very intriguing piece.
February 29th, 2024 04:08
Fleeced
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Neville, how very sad and so not true ā¤ļø however the emotion written in this is extraordinary along with the profound imagery. š¹
February 29th, 2024 03:56
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Neville, how very sad and so not true ā¤ļø however the emotion written in this is extraordinary along with the profound imagery. š¹
February 29th, 2024 03:56
Fleeced
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP\'s fleeced me for money for botox, I know that much! lol.
February 29th, 2024 03:11
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP\'s fleeced me for money for botox, I know that much! lol.
February 29th, 2024 03:11
Fleeced
Goldfinch60 said:
May that positivity be with you at all times Neville.
Andy
February 29th, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
May that positivity be with you at all times Neville.
Andy
February 29th, 2024 02:48
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