Comments received on poems by Neville
Fear of Falling
Kevin Hulme said:
I like this. Well Said. It\'s Winter and his Bully Boy tactics I detest. Like a Motorcycle Gang riding into town.
September 1st, 2025 12:32
Kevin Hulme said:
I like this. Well Said. It\'s Winter and his Bully Boy tactics I detest. Like a Motorcycle Gang riding into town.
September 1st, 2025 12:32
Fear of Falling
NinjaGirl said:
We\'ll either fall or fly, might as well dance during the process!
September 1st, 2025 11:20
NinjaGirl said:
We\'ll either fall or fly, might as well dance during the process!
September 1st, 2025 11:20
Fear of Falling
Doggerel Dave said:
Well if you don\'t want it, send it down here....
(I have a terrible feeling I should be careful what I ask for...)
September 1st, 2025 10:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Well if you don\'t want it, send it down here....
(I have a terrible feeling I should be careful what I ask for...)
September 1st, 2025 10:33
Fear of Falling
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed seasons come and go and so do our seasons. Although some seem sad with the passing it is just as easy to be glad with the coming or better yet just observe the beauty of it all. Lovely Neville so fitting any time of year or age.
September 1st, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed seasons come and go and so do our seasons. Although some seem sad with the passing it is just as easy to be glad with the coming or better yet just observe the beauty of it all. Lovely Neville so fitting any time of year or age.
September 1st, 2025 08:43
When to Listen Lightly
orchidee said:
Good write N. Whip, heavy breathing,... swoon! it\'s too much for me in my sheltered life. lol.
Meanwhile - I listen lightly to KP - with my ear plugs in! heehee. So I never listen to a word she says.
September 1st, 2025 02:17
orchidee said:
Good write N. Whip, heavy breathing,... swoon! it\'s too much for me in my sheltered life. lol.
Meanwhile - I listen lightly to KP - with my ear plugs in! heehee. So I never listen to a word she says.
September 1st, 2025 02:17
When to Listen Lightly
Goldfinch60 said:
Breath on Neville with these wonderful words written.
Andy
September 1st, 2025 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Breath on Neville with these wonderful words written.
Andy
September 1st, 2025 01:16
When to Listen Lightly
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this hit me straight on…tenderness and brutality braided together in one breath. The hum to the whip, the bee to the battlefield …it lands with force, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2025 17:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this hit me straight on…tenderness and brutality braided together in one breath. The hum to the whip, the bee to the battlefield …it lands with force, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 31st, 2025 17:15
When to Listen Lightly
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville. Love the line between naughty and profound.
August 31st, 2025 17:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Neville. Love the line between naughty and profound.
August 31st, 2025 17:03
When to Listen Lightly
arqios said:
Listening lightly when breathing heavily; got it!
August 31st, 2025 16:44
arqios said:
Listening lightly when breathing heavily; got it!
August 31st, 2025 16:44
When to Listen Lightly
sorenbarrett said:
Wow now! This could be seen as a little kinky Neville. A romantic and most naturally oriented poem. Lovely Neville
August 31st, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
Wow now! This could be seen as a little kinky Neville. A romantic and most naturally oriented poem. Lovely Neville
August 31st, 2025 14:26
Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It\'s amazing how you use words to draw picture.... again and again.
August 29th, 2025 01:07
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It\'s amazing how you use words to draw picture.... again and again.
August 29th, 2025 01:07
Fake Nudes
Poetic Dan said:
The truth doesn\'t need many words, how comfortably can decay us quicker. At least we smell nice.
Nicely done mate
August 28th, 2025 19:40
Poetic Dan said:
The truth doesn\'t need many words, how comfortably can decay us quicker. At least we smell nice.
Nicely done mate
August 28th, 2025 19:40
Fake Nudes
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. I can relate. Can I add a full head of hair to my wish list please? :-) Nicely done. Cheers.
August 28th, 2025 08:37
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. I can relate. Can I add a full head of hair to my wish list please? :-) Nicely done. Cheers.
August 28th, 2025 08:37
Fake Nudes
Kevin Hulme said:
I used to lift Weights when younger.
Never forget the Sweat, Strain, Aches, Pulled Muscles. But eventually got them out the Box.
Good Write.
August 27th, 2025 12:24
Kevin Hulme said:
I used to lift Weights when younger.
Never forget the Sweat, Strain, Aches, Pulled Muscles. But eventually got them out the Box.
Good Write.
August 27th, 2025 12:24
Fake Nudes
Cassie58 said:
I think many of us would like to be a few pounds lighter as we reflect on the passing of time and the wear and tear we suffer with every day living. But hey if you are wearing oud, that is unmistakeable and is quite intoxicating. The fragrance drew me in. Hope all is improving in your world Neville. Have a great Wednesday.
August 27th, 2025 03:57
Cassie58 said:
I think many of us would like to be a few pounds lighter as we reflect on the passing of time and the wear and tear we suffer with every day living. But hey if you are wearing oud, that is unmistakeable and is quite intoxicating. The fragrance drew me in. Hope all is improving in your world Neville. Have a great Wednesday.
August 27th, 2025 03:57
All Items Numbered 204
NafisaSB said:
yes, some things are unforgettable - store them deep in the recesses of your memory and take out and relive them whenever you need some lifting up of the spirits
August 27th, 2025 00:14
NafisaSB said:
yes, some things are unforgettable - store them deep in the recesses of your memory and take out and relive them whenever you need some lifting up of the spirits
August 27th, 2025 00:14
Fake Nudes
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tell ya what - I\'ll supply the bandages, and if you could send over that almost finished bottle of oud by express post for me to sniff, I\'ll do the best I can.....
August 26th, 2025 20:38
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tell ya what - I\'ll supply the bandages, and if you could send over that almost finished bottle of oud by express post for me to sniff, I\'ll do the best I can.....
August 26th, 2025 20:38
Fake Nudes
Cheeky Missy said:
Well aren\'t you a riot! Lemme see, with thy bandages on thou shalt look like the mummy from Dracula or the like, or correct me. I\'ll just hafta watch one of my all time favorite flicks The Wedding Date and imagine you\'re my beloved Dermot Mulroney, how\'s that? Excellently rendered with a tasteful smidgen of imagery, is that? and a tantalizing poignancy. Charming. Thank you for sharing.
August 26th, 2025 14:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Well aren\'t you a riot! Lemme see, with thy bandages on thou shalt look like the mummy from Dracula or the like, or correct me. I\'ll just hafta watch one of my all time favorite flicks The Wedding Date and imagine you\'re my beloved Dermot Mulroney, how\'s that? Excellently rendered with a tasteful smidgen of imagery, is that? and a tantalizing poignancy. Charming. Thank you for sharing.
August 26th, 2025 14:40
Fake Nudes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is raw and striking…brief but full of longing, memory, and vulnerability. Powerful in its sparseness. A wonderful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2025 14:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is raw and striking…brief but full of longing, memory, and vulnerability. Powerful in its sparseness. A wonderful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2025 14:34
Fake Nudes
sorenbarrett said:
We all want to turn the clock back. A fun read my friend gives me nostalgia
August 26th, 2025 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
We all want to turn the clock back. A fun read my friend gives me nostalgia
August 26th, 2025 14:13
Madagascan Girls
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Again, you with a brush- another picture emerges. In beauty, perhaps with touch of nostalgia. Beautiful work 👏
August 26th, 2025 09:23
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Again, you with a brush- another picture emerges. In beauty, perhaps with touch of nostalgia. Beautiful work 👏
August 26th, 2025 09:23
All Items Numbered 204
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville and the older you get the more you forget.
Andy
August 25th, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville and the older you get the more you forget.
Andy
August 25th, 2025 01:21
All Items Numbered 204
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Neville, reading this felt like being handed keepsakes...smells, textures, fragments of gold. You remind us that memory is in the details we usually pass by. So very true and a fave from me. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2025 18:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Neville, reading this felt like being handed keepsakes...smells, textures, fragments of gold. You remind us that memory is in the details we usually pass by. So very true and a fave from me. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2025 18:28
All Items Numbered 204
orchidee said:
I thought the answer was always 42, as I read somewhere? Maybe the answer is 204? lol.
August 24th, 2025 12:04
orchidee said:
I thought the answer was always 42, as I read somewhere? Maybe the answer is 204? lol.
August 24th, 2025 12:04
All Items Numbered 204
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I kept on going back to \"the smells,
textures and taste
of already
cold ash, from well
spent fires\". Reading the poem was something like watching a painter casually making marks on tbe canvas..but in no time something emerges, quite unexpected perhaps, which makes one gasp.
August 24th, 2025 10:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I kept on going back to \"the smells,
textures and taste
of already
cold ash, from well
spent fires\". Reading the poem was something like watching a painter casually making marks on tbe canvas..but in no time something emerges, quite unexpected perhaps, which makes one gasp.
August 24th, 2025 10:16
All Items Numbered 204
Cheeky Missy said:
Tis, forsooth. Yet what half causes me to tremble is that my post for today, planned too long ago, yet has echoes here quite baldly. There\'s gold, fool\'s gold, and what is so far beyond gold that there\'s no comparison [see Proverbs 8 for starters] and how deliciously you\'ve woven the deceit in these seemingly innocuous lines, the allusion and reality winking at who may see. La dee! Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. I love, love, love it! Thank you for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 08:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Tis, forsooth. Yet what half causes me to tremble is that my post for today, planned too long ago, yet has echoes here quite baldly. There\'s gold, fool\'s gold, and what is so far beyond gold that there\'s no comparison [see Proverbs 8 for starters] and how deliciously you\'ve woven the deceit in these seemingly innocuous lines, the allusion and reality winking at who may see. La dee! Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. I love, love, love it! Thank you for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 08:43
All Items Numbered 204
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, Neville. I have so many of those. Sparks, I call them. Founders of many verses.
August 24th, 2025 08:04
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, Neville. I have so many of those. Sparks, I call them. Founders of many verses.
August 24th, 2025 08:04
All Items Numbered 204
sorenbarrett said:
Simple small natural treasures often overlooked and so well imaged in poets ink. I couldn\'t agree more my friend so many little things that may not be that little at all overlooked and forgotten. This poem a reminder that remembering little good things is what brings pleasure and meaning to life.
August 24th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Simple small natural treasures often overlooked and so well imaged in poets ink. I couldn\'t agree more my friend so many little things that may not be that little at all overlooked and forgotten. This poem a reminder that remembering little good things is what brings pleasure and meaning to life.
August 24th, 2025 04:30
Marching on Bone Spurs
NinjaGirl said:
Making decent folk proud... I like that line, and beautiful poem
August 24th, 2025 01:40
NinjaGirl said:
Making decent folk proud... I like that line, and beautiful poem
August 24th, 2025 01:40
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