Comments received on poems by Neville
Listen Loud Just One More Time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Layers this poem has…and the more one peels away, the more one gets the sense that what was once a source of hope and love has be one a source of strain. Relationships…in them, aren’t we all. Wonderful poem my friend!
March 2nd, 2025 12:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Layers this poem has…and the more one peels away, the more one gets the sense that what was once a source of hope and love has be one a source of strain. Relationships…in them, aren’t we all. Wonderful poem my friend!
March 2nd, 2025 12:14
Listen Loud Just One More Time
Cheeky Missy said:
Lemme guess, those shells were as calcified as the reference to conch suggested, right?! But he HAD to tell her because nothing was too good for whom he adored. Ah, but I\'m well-nigh overcome until I can hardly breathe. Oh you and your skill! Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a captivating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 2nd, 2025 12:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Lemme guess, those shells were as calcified as the reference to conch suggested, right?! But he HAD to tell her because nothing was too good for whom he adored. Ah, but I\'m well-nigh overcome until I can hardly breathe. Oh you and your skill! Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a captivating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 2nd, 2025 12:04
Listen Loud Just One More Time
Christina8 said:
\"listen loud\", sometimes when you are conveying love, its so loud yet so quiet you can hear a pin drop. I think this is a wonderful piece, enjoyed reading!
March 2nd, 2025 09:48
Christina8 said:
\"listen loud\", sometimes when you are conveying love, its so loud yet so quiet you can hear a pin drop. I think this is a wonderful piece, enjoyed reading!
March 2nd, 2025 09:48
Listen Loud Just One More Time
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes whispers are louded than shouts and vica versa, but that depend of who the war drums for, yourself or someone else, very interesting, relatable and enjoyable read
March 2nd, 2025 06:57
Poetic Licence said:
Sometimes whispers are louded than shouts and vica versa, but that depend of who the war drums for, yourself or someone else, very interesting, relatable and enjoyable read
March 2nd, 2025 06:57
Listen Loud Just One More Time
arqios said:
Sometimes being subtle needs a bit of loud listening 🙏🏻🕊
March 2nd, 2025 06:15
arqios said:
Sometimes being subtle needs a bit of loud listening 🙏🏻🕊
March 2nd, 2025 06:15
Listen Loud Just One More Time
sorenbarrett said:
The subtlety in this piece nearly slipped past me. If he needs to shout and argue then he is not being heard and is that a cue war drums? Is the war with a competitor, her or himself? Often a whisper is heard more easily than a shout and peace talks might be in order. Another lovely subtle piece with so much packed within it. Like all good art it changes with ones mood.
March 2nd, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
The subtlety in this piece nearly slipped past me. If he needs to shout and argue then he is not being heard and is that a cue war drums? Is the war with a competitor, her or himself? Often a whisper is heard more easily than a shout and peace talks might be in order. Another lovely subtle piece with so much packed within it. Like all good art it changes with ones mood.
March 2nd, 2025 05:04
Once I Felt Like a Sky Hungry Kite
NafisaSB said:
the phoenix will rise, and you will survive - after every fall, one is able to spring back, and fly high if the determination is there
a touching masterpiece - liked it
March 1st, 2025 00:06
NafisaSB said:
the phoenix will rise, and you will survive - after every fall, one is able to spring back, and fly high if the determination is there
a touching masterpiece - liked it
March 1st, 2025 00:06
Some Things She Once Said
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a regular riot, I declare! My word! If I\'d one of your many volumes for my own, I might not be so satisfied, but oh me! Whew. How charmingly rendered with gorgeous imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. [Are you on fb? I like never hang out there but mebbe I\'ll hunt you up...]
February 28th, 2025 14:23
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a regular riot, I declare! My word! If I\'d one of your many volumes for my own, I might not be so satisfied, but oh me! Whew. How charmingly rendered with gorgeous imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. [Are you on fb? I like never hang out there but mebbe I\'ll hunt you up...]
February 28th, 2025 14:23
Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times)
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm, intrigue is verily a siren herein, complete with shades, a deep, dark trenchcoat, and I fear nothing else after excepting those long, slender legs elongated further by spike heels. La dee! She\'s smoking too. Whew. Ahem. Exquisitely rendered with haunting imagery and a rather erotic poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 28th, 2025 14:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm, intrigue is verily a siren herein, complete with shades, a deep, dark trenchcoat, and I fear nothing else after excepting those long, slender legs elongated further by spike heels. La dee! She\'s smoking too. Whew. Ahem. Exquisitely rendered with haunting imagery and a rather erotic poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 28th, 2025 14:18
Aide-Mémoire’s
MendedFences27 said:
Big or small, some things are never forgotten, but it is the little things that bring it all back again. There is much wisdom in what you have written, and it comes from life\'s experiences. This is a heart-felt poem about memories and remembering. Each will read it and interpret it as they see fit. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2025 20:25
MendedFences27 said:
Big or small, some things are never forgotten, but it is the little things that bring it all back again. There is much wisdom in what you have written, and it comes from life\'s experiences. This is a heart-felt poem about memories and remembering. Each will read it and interpret it as they see fit. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2025 20:25
Aide-Mémoire’s
Distant View said:
Witty! ... and oh so true! Sometimes very few words can say a hell of a lot -- just like your poem here!
February 26th, 2025 16:26
Distant View said:
Witty! ... and oh so true! Sometimes very few words can say a hell of a lot -- just like your poem here!
February 26th, 2025 16:26
Aide-Mémoire’s
Cheeky Missy said:
Only for a little while, though, you know? What gets under our skin can be put aside for the higher priorities, yet must be addressed at length. Rendered to effect with a tantalizing poignancy and a touch of imagery, thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 13:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Only for a little while, though, you know? What gets under our skin can be put aside for the higher priorities, yet must be addressed at length. Rendered to effect with a tantalizing poignancy and a touch of imagery, thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 13:53
Aide-Mémoire’s
orchidee said:
Yes, I carry a mini-trout toy key-ring to remind me of KP! lol.
February 26th, 2025 11:33
orchidee said:
Yes, I carry a mini-trout toy key-ring to remind me of KP! lol.
February 26th, 2025 11:33
Aide-Mémoire’s
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, there you go, Neville. Taking simplicity and wrapping it up into a mind-blowing statement that unravels the very fabric of all holding my chaotic inner world together. 🤣 This is so true, I had to attempt at being more witty than saying how true this is. Hope you don\' t mind the feeble attempt! Wonderful write my friend. An easy fave! ❤️🌹👏
February 26th, 2025 11:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well, there you go, Neville. Taking simplicity and wrapping it up into a mind-blowing statement that unravels the very fabric of all holding my chaotic inner world together. 🤣 This is so true, I had to attempt at being more witty than saying how true this is. Hope you don\' t mind the feeble attempt! Wonderful write my friend. An easy fave! ❤️🌹👏
February 26th, 2025 11:19
Aide-Mémoire’s
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful twist in this logic that seems so true for many. This one is short or should I say little and therefore easy to remember. Loved the simplicity in this Neville.
February 26th, 2025 09:27
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful twist in this logic that seems so true for many. This one is short or should I say little and therefore easy to remember. Loved the simplicity in this Neville.
February 26th, 2025 09:27
Aide-Mémoire’s
Poetic Licence said:
Amazing how the simplest and smallest of things can mean the most, enjoyed today\'s read
February 26th, 2025 08:58
Poetic Licence said:
Amazing how the simplest and smallest of things can mean the most, enjoyed today\'s read
February 26th, 2025 08:58
Some Kind of Curious Something
Goldfinch60 said:
That always happens when you mean so much to each other Neville.
Andy
February 26th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
That always happens when you mean so much to each other Neville.
Andy
February 26th, 2025 02:52
Some Kind of Curious Something
Tristan Robert Lange said:
For some reason, I envision this scene being followed by a German Shepherd named, Jerry Lee, frolicking in grass after a limousine hookup with a French Poodle. Not sure if you get the reference, but if so, I hope it makes you laugh as much as I did thinking of it. Well done, my friend. Sated indeed. Beautiful! 🌹👏
February 25th, 2025 15:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
For some reason, I envision this scene being followed by a German Shepherd named, Jerry Lee, frolicking in grass after a limousine hookup with a French Poodle. Not sure if you get the reference, but if so, I hope it makes you laugh as much as I did thinking of it. Well done, my friend. Sated indeed. Beautiful! 🌹👏
February 25th, 2025 15:01
Playing With Words
Cheeky Missy said:
She blushed when he finished, wishing he\'d seal it with a kiss, but as I\'m the proverbial fly in the wall, and lost interest, guess I\'ll never know. Beautifully rendered with an erotic poignancy and tasteful imagery. Thank you for sharing, Sir.
February 25th, 2025 15:01
Cheeky Missy said:
She blushed when he finished, wishing he\'d seal it with a kiss, but as I\'m the proverbial fly in the wall, and lost interest, guess I\'ll never know. Beautifully rendered with an erotic poignancy and tasteful imagery. Thank you for sharing, Sir.
February 25th, 2025 15:01
No More Mr. Blue Skies
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess I didn\'t bother blaming the big boys for the oceanside birds haunting the Midwest, crying ever and anon over naked parking lots whose trash, littered everywhere, seemed to charge mankind with a fault because their cries were here in the heartland, far, far from the seas. You\'ve capably drawn up a vision and charged the few where I\'ll blame every last one of us. Excellently rendered with haunting imagery and a resonating poignancy.
February 25th, 2025 14:55
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess I didn\'t bother blaming the big boys for the oceanside birds haunting the Midwest, crying ever and anon over naked parking lots whose trash, littered everywhere, seemed to charge mankind with a fault because their cries were here in the heartland, far, far from the seas. You\'ve capably drawn up a vision and charged the few where I\'ll blame every last one of us. Excellently rendered with haunting imagery and a resonating poignancy.
February 25th, 2025 14:55
Some Kind of Curious Something
Cheeky Missy said:
Really?! You\'re certain of that? Pardon my inherent cheekiness, but I\'ll beg to differ, unless that is, you concur with the vanity plate my father bought reading: \"2 R 1\" or something like that. Nothing like a hot coal to burn one\'s fingertips for eagerness, but this pretty number sassily winks and flirts so much I fear I\'m hard pressed to feel like I\'ve not been rather naughty. Excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a deliciously haunting imagery. Thank you for sharing.
February 25th, 2025 14:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Really?! You\'re certain of that? Pardon my inherent cheekiness, but I\'ll beg to differ, unless that is, you concur with the vanity plate my father bought reading: \"2 R 1\" or something like that. Nothing like a hot coal to burn one\'s fingertips for eagerness, but this pretty number sassily winks and flirts so much I fear I\'m hard pressed to feel like I\'ve not been rather naughty. Excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a deliciously haunting imagery. Thank you for sharing.
February 25th, 2025 14:33
Some Kind of Curious Something
orchidee said:
KP and my marriage - something and nothing - mainly nothing! lol.
February 25th, 2025 09:56
orchidee said:
KP and my marriage - something and nothing - mainly nothing! lol.
February 25th, 2025 09:56
Some Kind of Curious Something
Poetic Licence said:
The contemplating after the exileraration, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 06:46
Poetic Licence said:
The contemplating after the exileraration, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 06:46
Some Kind of Curious Something
sorenbarrett said:
What appears simple in this poem is far deeper hidden under sheets and blankets, maybe under the bed itself. A realization of what is the meaning of life. A complexity in a simplicity and isn\'t nature always so? Lovely Neville
February 25th, 2025 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
What appears simple in this poem is far deeper hidden under sheets and blankets, maybe under the bed itself. A realization of what is the meaning of life. A complexity in a simplicity and isn\'t nature always so? Lovely Neville
February 25th, 2025 06:08
No More Mr. Blue Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville, will our world ever get better.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville, will our world ever get better.
Andy
February 24th, 2025 02:49
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