Comments received on poems by Neville
Essence
Bobby O said:
Wow. This is instructional for a cad like me that stumbles to impress w color and metaphor when addressing that certain woman . I’m
Admitting now that when the occasion arises I will borrow many a phrase hoping to genuinely create the mood and allure of this masterpiece.
November 14th, 2024 04:38
Bobby O said:
Wow. This is instructional for a cad like me that stumbles to impress w color and metaphor when addressing that certain woman . I’m
Admitting now that when the occasion arises I will borrow many a phrase hoping to genuinely create the mood and allure of this masterpiece.
November 14th, 2024 04:38
Essence
orchidee said:
A pleasant essence N. More than can be said for KP, but I buy her \'Essence of Rotting Fish\' perfume! lol.
November 14th, 2024 03:38
orchidee said:
A pleasant essence N. More than can be said for KP, but I buy her \'Essence of Rotting Fish\' perfume! lol.
November 14th, 2024 03:38
Another November
Cheeky Missy said:
What kills my ability to participate is the fury such a holiday stirs in a heartbeat until I\'m seething. I mean, every time I must go on patrol I cannot miss this rude stone wall built by my distant relatives under most cruel oppression and causing me pain every single time by dint of the same.
Your tribute, by contrast, is delightfully apropos and tendered with such excellent humor I could yield a wry smile, if only I wasn\'t still infuriated at the mere mention. Thank you very, very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:35
Cheeky Missy said:
What kills my ability to participate is the fury such a holiday stirs in a heartbeat until I\'m seething. I mean, every time I must go on patrol I cannot miss this rude stone wall built by my distant relatives under most cruel oppression and causing me pain every single time by dint of the same.
Your tribute, by contrast, is delightfully apropos and tendered with such excellent humor I could yield a wry smile, if only I wasn\'t still infuriated at the mere mention. Thank you very, very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:35
Superfluous Twists
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, the dear fence! Didn\'t Samuel Clemens prove how excellently dear Tom managed to accomplish its painting while practically sitting on the same? Nothing like taking the brunt of it for being such a comparative fool. Reminds me of someone I cherish but there\'s too many pretty numbers which have no effect on him. Excellently rendered with grand imagery and a niggling poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, the dear fence! Didn\'t Samuel Clemens prove how excellently dear Tom managed to accomplish its painting while practically sitting on the same? Nothing like taking the brunt of it for being such a comparative fool. Reminds me of someone I cherish but there\'s too many pretty numbers which have no effect on him. Excellently rendered with grand imagery and a niggling poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:25
Letting Go of Your Ghost
Cheeky Missy said:
I prefer it thus, myself. The ghost of whomever I cherished seems to flit off like the vapor it was before I catch my fill of whom I couldn\'t release, had I the ability. Excellently rendered with an exquisite poignancy and grand imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 01:56
Cheeky Missy said:
I prefer it thus, myself. The ghost of whomever I cherished seems to flit off like the vapor it was before I catch my fill of whom I couldn\'t release, had I the ability. Excellently rendered with an exquisite poignancy and grand imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 01:56
Superfluous Twists
MendedFences27 said:
I guess this means that men being strung along, to the point of embarrassment, is an ordinary occurrence. The use of common phrases amplifies the mediocrity of the situation. Just your average Joe being made into a fool. I\'d venture to say many have traveled this road, probably a superfluity of travelers. - Phul A.
November 13th, 2024 21:05
MendedFences27 said:
I guess this means that men being strung along, to the point of embarrassment, is an ordinary occurrence. The use of common phrases amplifies the mediocrity of the situation. Just your average Joe being made into a fool. I\'d venture to say many have traveled this road, probably a superfluity of travelers. - Phul A.
November 13th, 2024 21:05
Letting Go of Your Ghost
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully expressed! It is indeed so hard to let go of the one\'s we love, whether when they\'ve passed on...or if they\'ve let us go for some reason or another. Either way, loss is loss and these \"reminders\" can be very painful. Excellent poetic expression, my friend! 👏
November 13th, 2024 17:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully expressed! It is indeed so hard to let go of the one\'s we love, whether when they\'ve passed on...or if they\'ve let us go for some reason or another. Either way, loss is loss and these \"reminders\" can be very painful. Excellent poetic expression, my friend! 👏
November 13th, 2024 17:59
Letting Go of Your Ghost
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. The feeling comes through.
November 13th, 2024 10:45
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. The feeling comes through.
November 13th, 2024 10:45
Superfluous Twists
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem Neville. I can think of a simile or two that would describe the feelings I picked up here. Not a pleasant situation to encounter. Emotionally challenging I would say.
paupers twine is such an original description
No one wants to be a laughing stock or clown.
Painfully penned I would say.
November 13th, 2024 06:12
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem Neville. I can think of a simile or two that would describe the feelings I picked up here. Not a pleasant situation to encounter. Emotionally challenging I would say.
paupers twine is such an original description
No one wants to be a laughing stock or clown.
Painfully penned I would say.
November 13th, 2024 06:12
Superfluous Twists
arqios said:
I might do with a super floss but my teeth get a dunking every night so it’s kinda superfluous- and I’ve derailed and gone off topic… yet again! Sorry mate.
November 13th, 2024 05:19
arqios said:
I might do with a super floss but my teeth get a dunking every night so it’s kinda superfluous- and I’ve derailed and gone off topic… yet again! Sorry mate.
November 13th, 2024 05:19
Superfluous Twists
sorenbarrett said:
Great wordplay in this poem Neville. The meaning may be multiple, but the initial one for me was that fall comes to those who fall to lust in general. I love the wording in this one
November 13th, 2024 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Great wordplay in this poem Neville. The meaning may be multiple, but the initial one for me was that fall comes to those who fall to lust in general. I love the wording in this one
November 13th, 2024 05:16
Superfluous Twists
orchidee said:
Can one beat a bit of superfluous?! I dunno what I\'m on about. lol. As for the s***, stand away from the fan then! heehee.
November 13th, 2024 03:35
orchidee said:
Can one beat a bit of superfluous?! I dunno what I\'m on about. lol. As for the s***, stand away from the fan then! heehee.
November 13th, 2024 03:35
Superfluous Twists
Goldfinch60 said:
Those superfluous twist in life can be a right pain in the proverbial Neville.
Andy
November 13th, 2024 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Those superfluous twist in life can be a right pain in the proverbial Neville.
Andy
November 13th, 2024 02:42
Letting Go of Your Ghost
Cassie58 said:
Poignantly conveyed lines of loss where the wound still remains deep. Not easy to forget those memories, they can return at any time. A touching poem Neville. Haunting even.
November 12th, 2024 11:08
Cassie58 said:
Poignantly conveyed lines of loss where the wound still remains deep. Not easy to forget those memories, they can return at any time. A touching poem Neville. Haunting even.
November 12th, 2024 11:08
Another November
Tom Dylan said:
A moving write and a fitting tribute, Neville.
November 12th, 2024 10:41
Tom Dylan said:
A moving write and a fitting tribute, Neville.
November 12th, 2024 10:41
Letting Go of Your Ghost
MendedFences27 said:
You can let go of the \"Ghost.\" but the \"Ghost\" may not let go of you. \"Ghosts\" can hide in your closet, in your bed, behind your sofa, or the back seat of your car. There is no escape, only making a gentle arrangement. Honestly, we all have fond memories of someone we loved and lost, and who\'s memory we cannot shake. It\'s best to cherish the memory and endure the longing. Your poem captures the essence of this dilemma beautifully. Loved it. - Phil A.
November 12th, 2024 10:37
MendedFences27 said:
You can let go of the \"Ghost.\" but the \"Ghost\" may not let go of you. \"Ghosts\" can hide in your closet, in your bed, behind your sofa, or the back seat of your car. There is no escape, only making a gentle arrangement. Honestly, we all have fond memories of someone we loved and lost, and who\'s memory we cannot shake. It\'s best to cherish the memory and endure the longing. Your poem captures the essence of this dilemma beautifully. Loved it. - Phil A.
November 12th, 2024 10:37
Letting Go of Your Ghost
arqios said:
Ah… there it is… something that I know about and sometimes wish I didn’t for some past connection that hasn’t really passed… you got that one nailed in poetry…. Yet ghosts go right through walls…
November 12th, 2024 05:29
arqios said:
Ah… there it is… something that I know about and sometimes wish I didn’t for some past connection that hasn’t really passed… you got that one nailed in poetry…. Yet ghosts go right through walls…
November 12th, 2024 05:29
Letting Go of Your Ghost
sorenbarrett said:
A poem felt from the heart were passed laceration so reopened by small reminders. A touching piece of work.
November 12th, 2024 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem felt from the heart were passed laceration so reopened by small reminders. A touching piece of work.
November 12th, 2024 04:38
Letting Go of Your Ghost
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so hard to let go of those we have loved Neville.
Andy
November 12th, 2024 03:24
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so hard to let go of those we have loved Neville.
Andy
November 12th, 2024 03:24
Another November
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving words Neville, we must never forget.
Andy
November 12th, 2024 03:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very moving words Neville, we must never forget.
Andy
November 12th, 2024 03:12
Letting Go of Your Ghost
thinkerbell said:
Letting go of someone\'s memories is really hard...loved the way you called it \'letting go of your ghost\'..Great write..🥰😍
November 12th, 2024 01:28
thinkerbell said:
Letting go of someone\'s memories is really hard...loved the way you called it \'letting go of your ghost\'..Great write..🥰😍
November 12th, 2024 01:28
Another November
Doggerel Dave said:
LEST WE FORGET all subsequent wars, the casualties on all sides, (both civilian as well as military) and the stupidity of the politicians and the military industrial complex which inflicted it all.
November 11th, 2024 15:18
Doggerel Dave said:
LEST WE FORGET all subsequent wars, the casualties on all sides, (both civilian as well as military) and the stupidity of the politicians and the military industrial complex which inflicted it all.
November 11th, 2024 15:18
Another November
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t knock that, Neville...and all the rest yesterday, today and tomorrow.....
November 11th, 2024 07:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t knock that, Neville...and all the rest yesterday, today and tomorrow.....
November 11th, 2024 07:58
Another November
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A beautiful tribute, my friend, to those who gave the ultimate sacrifice! Bravo! 👏🌹🖤❤️🖤
November 11th, 2024 07:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A beautiful tribute, my friend, to those who gave the ultimate sacrifice! Bravo! 👏🌹🖤❤️🖤
November 11th, 2024 07:51
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