Comments received on poems by Neville
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s rather a sacred beauty to this exquisite, pretty number, especially with such a subtly passionate note as THAT author\'s notice. How do you cover a gaping hole which is rather truly an empty shell left behind? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and such a painfully haunting poignancy, I almost hesitate to say anything. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 01:02
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s rather a sacred beauty to this exquisite, pretty number, especially with such a subtly passionate note as THAT author\'s notice. How do you cover a gaping hole which is rather truly an empty shell left behind? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and such a painfully haunting poignancy, I almost hesitate to say anything. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 01:02
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Accidental Poet said:
It\'s not about good-bye, but more of smiling knowing you\'re in the presence of your loved ones. Excellent write N. 😉👍
January 29th, 2025 23:04
Accidental Poet said:
It\'s not about good-bye, but more of smiling knowing you\'re in the presence of your loved ones. Excellent write N. 😉👍
January 29th, 2025 23:04
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
arqios said:
That would be nice to see/read/experience- five or so poems covering each “stage” or face of grief. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:41
arqios said:
That would be nice to see/read/experience- five or so poems covering each “stage” or face of grief. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:41
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone who has dealt with death and mourning often, and not just my own, this poem is spot on, my friend. A wonderful expression. We can indeed find ourselves angry and having a hard time forgiving someone for dying. A very natural and common feeling. Brilliant grief poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 29th, 2025 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone who has dealt with death and mourning often, and not just my own, this poem is spot on, my friend. A wonderful expression. We can indeed find ourselves angry and having a hard time forgiving someone for dying. A very natural and common feeling. Brilliant grief poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 29th, 2025 08:25
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
NafisaSB said:
thought provoking and intense. hope the big mountains will turn to small pebbles as you stride ahead with confidence and positivity
January 29th, 2025 07:42
NafisaSB said:
thought provoking and intense. hope the big mountains will turn to small pebbles as you stride ahead with confidence and positivity
January 29th, 2025 07:42
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
sorenbarrett said:
Certainly you play with my mind. On the whole if I were to mend a whole hole. I wouldn\'t be too concerned with the dying but rather the dyeing of the patch. As for it being a mourning song written in the evening I would rather mourn in the morn. Ah Neville you know I have a weakness for such silly homophones and homographs simply loved this bit of humor.
January 29th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Certainly you play with my mind. On the whole if I were to mend a whole hole. I wouldn\'t be too concerned with the dying but rather the dyeing of the patch. As for it being a mourning song written in the evening I would rather mourn in the morn. Ah Neville you know I have a weakness for such silly homophones and homographs simply loved this bit of humor.
January 29th, 2025 04:45
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Poetic Licence said:
You sense a touch of anger that they have gone and left you, but get the overwhelming of the sense off loss of a loved one. Very touching and emotional write, Thank you Neville
January 29th, 2025 04:37
Poetic Licence said:
You sense a touch of anger that they have gone and left you, but get the overwhelming of the sense off loss of a loved one. Very touching and emotional write, Thank you Neville
January 29th, 2025 04:37
Taste
Goldfinch60 said:
That aftertaste is so wonderful in many things in our lives Neville.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
That aftertaste is so wonderful in many things in our lives Neville.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:43
Taste
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully enjoyed and savoured..Very detailed and much admired by this poet.
January 28th, 2025 14:25
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully enjoyed and savoured..Very detailed and much admired by this poet.
January 28th, 2025 14:25
Taste
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, Neville. This poem is like a fine wine! Truly savored and enjoyed! 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, Neville. This poem is like a fine wine! Truly savored and enjoyed! 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:16
Taste
arqios said:
Kinda like the term: spice of life! Nothing duller than a lack of variety, there is virtue in mixing it up a bit, be it scent or movement or style 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
Kinda like the term: spice of life! Nothing duller than a lack of variety, there is virtue in mixing it up a bit, be it scent or movement or style 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:24
Taste
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is more personal, but if you can get some sweetness from a bitter experience, that is a bonus, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:28
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is more personal, but if you can get some sweetness from a bitter experience, that is a bonus, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:28
Taste
sorenbarrett said:
I can taste it now. Where can I buy this? Oh well this may be private vintage not for sale. None the less it sounds very good. Bom apetite
January 28th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
I can taste it now. Where can I buy this? Oh well this may be private vintage not for sale. None the less it sounds very good. Bom apetite
January 28th, 2025 04:17
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
SJSangeetha said:
Deeply felt..Thank you for this poem..
January 27th, 2025 21:52
SJSangeetha said:
Deeply felt..Thank you for this poem..
January 27th, 2025 21:52
Love Seeds
Dan Williams said:
I certainly wish you well, you\'d be a better man than me. Good work here.
January 27th, 2025 00:52
Dan Williams said:
I certainly wish you well, you\'d be a better man than me. Good work here.
January 27th, 2025 00:52
Love Seeds
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Meanwhile with KP all I get is weeds. lol.
January 26th, 2025 07:00
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Meanwhile with KP all I get is weeds. lol.
January 26th, 2025 07:00
Love Seeds
Michael Edwards said:
A poetic gem - great write with a great message.
January 26th, 2025 06:59
Michael Edwards said:
A poetic gem - great write with a great message.
January 26th, 2025 06:59
Love Seeds
arqios said:
We all need a bit of tlc, and having some of that going around changes the works entire 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 26th, 2025 06:45
arqios said:
We all need a bit of tlc, and having some of that going around changes the works entire 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 26th, 2025 06:45
Love Seeds
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t have much of a green thumb. But seriously you have touched on an area much needed in relationships today and one much neglected that of trust. The metaphor is great in that trust like a plant grows slowly day to day dependent on its nurturance. It is much easier to though out a sick plant and get a new one but I find that the next will suffer the fate of the first. Trust is a two way street and both people are responsible for its growth. Great poem Neville
January 26th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t have much of a green thumb. But seriously you have touched on an area much needed in relationships today and one much neglected that of trust. The metaphor is great in that trust like a plant grows slowly day to day dependent on its nurturance. It is much easier to though out a sick plant and get a new one but I find that the next will suffer the fate of the first. Trust is a two way street and both people are responsible for its growth. Great poem Neville
January 26th, 2025 05:45
When Dressed to Kill
Goldfinch60 said:
You just cannot trust the looks o some people Neville.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
You just cannot trust the looks o some people Neville.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:55
When Dressed to Kill
Cheeky Missy said:
Why you hereby culled Intorable Cruelty immediately to mind I\'ll never know since the heroine is in a red number in that flick whence I mulled Pussy Galore\'s wishes and denouement by 007 as his manhood proved greater, and then I had to give up.
Excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing, mysterious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 24th, 2025 16:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Why you hereby culled Intorable Cruelty immediately to mind I\'ll never know since the heroine is in a red number in that flick whence I mulled Pussy Galore\'s wishes and denouement by 007 as his manhood proved greater, and then I had to give up.
Excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing, mysterious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 24th, 2025 16:42
When Dressed to Kill
Bella Shepard said:
A sad commentary on what sounds like a true narcissist. They can be superficially charming, but deadly, and you capture this in brilliant imagery. So well done!
January 24th, 2025 10:43
Bella Shepard said:
A sad commentary on what sounds like a true narcissist. They can be superficially charming, but deadly, and you capture this in brilliant imagery. So well done!
January 24th, 2025 10:43
When Dressed to Kill
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh....dangerous! The kind of person you desire, but then, if you get what you longed for, you wish you never had! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh....dangerous! The kind of person you desire, but then, if you get what you longed for, you wish you never had! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 09:12
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