Comments received on poems by Neville
The Joy of Silence
Alan R said:
It paints a picture of a slender lady with messy long hair in a white linen gown and smokey eyes… for some reason… beautiful!
December 27th, 2024 23:55
Alan R said:
It paints a picture of a slender lady with messy long hair in a white linen gown and smokey eyes… for some reason… beautiful!
December 27th, 2024 23:55
The Joy of Silence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Agree with what has been said about the pattern and flow to this poem, my friend. It is wonderful, each line carefully thought out, each word carefully placed. The stuff that makes free verse my home and go to form (despite all of my formal shenanigans 🤣 as I do like to play). Seriously, Neville, from the title through the poem, this had me all the way my friend. One of my faves of yours! 🌹👏 And that is saying a lot, because I love all of yours and I am not just blowing smoke 💨. Well done.
December 27th, 2024 17:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Agree with what has been said about the pattern and flow to this poem, my friend. It is wonderful, each line carefully thought out, each word carefully placed. The stuff that makes free verse my home and go to form (despite all of my formal shenanigans 🤣 as I do like to play). Seriously, Neville, from the title through the poem, this had me all the way my friend. One of my faves of yours! 🌹👏 And that is saying a lot, because I love all of yours and I am not just blowing smoke 💨. Well done.
December 27th, 2024 17:43
The Joy of Silence
Poetic Licence said:
You can activate your imagination with this one, softly written
December 27th, 2024 10:30
Poetic Licence said:
You can activate your imagination with this one, softly written
December 27th, 2024 10:30
The Joy of Silence
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely pattern and rhythm to this poem takes me down a thought as if drifting down a stream it pulls as a current that quietly draws me onward.
December 27th, 2024 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely pattern and rhythm to this poem takes me down a thought as if drifting down a stream it pulls as a current that quietly draws me onward.
December 27th, 2024 08:43
The Joy of Silence
arqios said:
How intimately interrelating. Almost felt up close and intruding. Much enjoyed.
December 27th, 2024 07:18
arqios said:
How intimately interrelating. Almost felt up close and intruding. Much enjoyed.
December 27th, 2024 07:18
Watched
Cheeky Missy said:
King David and Uriah\'s wifey, excepting she bathed on the rooftop after dark, according to the record. Erotic and seductive with a naughty poignancy, how beautifully rendered with excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2024 17:40
Cheeky Missy said:
King David and Uriah\'s wifey, excepting she bathed on the rooftop after dark, according to the record. Erotic and seductive with a naughty poignancy, how beautifully rendered with excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2024 17:40
Signs of The Times x5
NafisaSB said:
this is so philosophical, and sometimes so true it hurts
wishing better luck to the recipient in the coming year. .merry X\'mas and look forward to 2025 with hope and cheer
December 26th, 2024 02:18
NafisaSB said:
this is so philosophical, and sometimes so true it hurts
wishing better luck to the recipient in the coming year. .merry X\'mas and look forward to 2025 with hope and cheer
December 26th, 2024 02:18
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
jarcher54 said:
When you get serious you hit like a sledgehammer... wow
December 25th, 2024 23:22
jarcher54 said:
When you get serious you hit like a sledgehammer... wow
December 25th, 2024 23:22
Gitanes
Cheeky Missy said:
Argh. I am sorely tempted to include a fitting clip from National Lampoon\'s Vacation, but as it wouldn\'t be a link in this box, I\'ll spare you.
Oh, but how exquisite this delicious piece is! How expertly rendered with daintily perfect imagery and a subtly tantalizing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
December 25th, 2024 18:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Argh. I am sorely tempted to include a fitting clip from National Lampoon\'s Vacation, but as it wouldn\'t be a link in this box, I\'ll spare you.
Oh, but how exquisite this delicious piece is! How expertly rendered with daintily perfect imagery and a subtly tantalizing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
December 25th, 2024 18:43
When it All Seemed to Fit
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah me, forsooth. Twas a time when youth, the visionary, swore on dreams and saw further than the present, and in that reality what wasn\'t perfect, eh? But aka Goldfinch60 knows half of what my father did and there was NO disappointment. But enough of that. Expertly rendered in a tidy quatrain rhymed to specifications, with lovely imagery to boot and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing, Sir.
December 24th, 2024 18:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah me, forsooth. Twas a time when youth, the visionary, swore on dreams and saw further than the present, and in that reality what wasn\'t perfect, eh? But aka Goldfinch60 knows half of what my father did and there was NO disappointment. But enough of that. Expertly rendered in a tidy quatrain rhymed to specifications, with lovely imagery to boot and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing, Sir.
December 24th, 2024 18:45
When it All Seemed to Fit
Bella Shepard said:
You strike a chord for one who is well past the half way mark, those were the days my friend. What would we do without nostalgia?
December 24th, 2024 14:09
Bella Shepard said:
You strike a chord for one who is well past the half way mark, those were the days my friend. What would we do without nostalgia?
December 24th, 2024 14:09
When it All Seemed to Fit
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, dear Neville! This is brilliant, concise and well-illuminated! I also concur with our good friend arqios! Here\'s to entanglement! 🤣 Season\'s Greetings to you my friend! 🧑🎄🎄
December 24th, 2024 09:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, dear Neville! This is brilliant, concise and well-illuminated! I also concur with our good friend arqios! Here\'s to entanglement! 🤣 Season\'s Greetings to you my friend! 🧑🎄🎄
December 24th, 2024 09:54
When it All Seemed to Fit
orchidee said:
Good wishes to you too N. Dovetailing for me and KP is just too swoony! I will spare you the details. lol. Entangled in botox I be.
December 24th, 2024 04:04
orchidee said:
Good wishes to you too N. Dovetailing for me and KP is just too swoony! I will spare you the details. lol. Entangled in botox I be.
December 24th, 2024 04:04
When it All Seemed to Fit
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Neville short, to the point and seasonal all rolled into one. Merry Christmas to you and yours
December 24th, 2024 03:25
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Neville short, to the point and seasonal all rolled into one. Merry Christmas to you and yours
December 24th, 2024 03:25
When it All Seemed to Fit
Michael Edwards said:
I know it well - the older you get the bigger get the ear lobes and belly whilst, as someone once put it, your d**k gets smaller.
December 24th, 2024 03:09
Michael Edwards said:
I know it well - the older you get the bigger get the ear lobes and belly whilst, as someone once put it, your d**k gets smaller.
December 24th, 2024 03:09
When it All Seemed to Fit
Goldfinch60 said:
We cn but hope it will all fit again Neville.
Andy
December 24th, 2024 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
We cn but hope it will all fit again Neville.
Andy
December 24th, 2024 03:02
Because It Felt Right at The Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Everything goes back in time Neville and putting them in the right place brings a relief to all.
Andy
December 24th, 2024 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Everything goes back in time Neville and putting them in the right place brings a relief to all.
Andy
December 24th, 2024 02:47
When it All Seemed to Fit
Poetic Licence said:
And may there be a time again, good read
December 24th, 2024 02:39
Poetic Licence said:
And may there be a time again, good read
December 24th, 2024 02:39
When it All Seemed to Fit
arqios said:
Lit and dovetailing! Now there’s a sight to behold, well… better to be entangled in than be a peeper tommer…
December 24th, 2024 02:28
arqios said:
Lit and dovetailing! Now there’s a sight to behold, well… better to be entangled in than be a peeper tommer…
December 24th, 2024 02:28
Because It Felt Right at The Time
Cheeky Missy said:
And thus we see the triumph of sheer feelings in the justification of all manner items under discussion, in this particular case, some religious edifice was the resting place for a copy of the Scriptures and a book of poetry. Nevermind whose ejaculations were codified in poetic form, they were laid to rest in some religious edifice. Fascinating and beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a haunting, tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 23rd, 2024 19:56
Cheeky Missy said:
And thus we see the triumph of sheer feelings in the justification of all manner items under discussion, in this particular case, some religious edifice was the resting place for a copy of the Scriptures and a book of poetry. Nevermind whose ejaculations were codified in poetic form, they were laid to rest in some religious edifice. Fascinating and beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a haunting, tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 23rd, 2024 19:56
Because It Felt Right at The Time
Bella Shepard said:
Some tributes that are very personal cannot be explained, just felt. Beautiful my friend!
December 23rd, 2024 17:35
Bella Shepard said:
Some tributes that are very personal cannot be explained, just felt. Beautiful my friend!
December 23rd, 2024 17:35
Because It Felt Right at The Time
Michael Edwards said:
Its something I could see myself doing - maybe because I\'m atheist and would have no use for them but maybe also becuase I respect thase that do and human nature requires us all to put back into society
December 23rd, 2024 16:49
Michael Edwards said:
Its something I could see myself doing - maybe because I\'m atheist and would have no use for them but maybe also becuase I respect thase that do and human nature requires us all to put back into society
December 23rd, 2024 16:49
Because It Felt Right at The Time
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Grief is a funny bedfellow and dictates we do things and go through rituals that don’t always make much sense, but often bring healing. Well done, friend, in expressing that! The late poet, and God, are smiling, imho! Well done, Neville! 🌹👏❤️🩹
December 23rd, 2024 09:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Grief is a funny bedfellow and dictates we do things and go through rituals that don’t always make much sense, but often bring healing. Well done, friend, in expressing that! The late poet, and God, are smiling, imho! Well done, Neville! 🌹👏❤️🩹
December 23rd, 2024 09:56
Because It Felt Right at The Time
sorenbarrett said:
All things return to their origin and no less here. In that cycle there is a sense of completion. Then in metaphor it becomes all of our old beliefs that we shed and return to its place of origin leaving them by the old symbols of faith. Deep and heavy the words covering this grave of thoughts Neville
December 23rd, 2024 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
All things return to their origin and no less here. In that cycle there is a sense of completion. Then in metaphor it becomes all of our old beliefs that we shed and return to its place of origin leaving them by the old symbols of faith. Deep and heavy the words covering this grave of thoughts Neville
December 23rd, 2024 04:07
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