Comments received on poems by Neville
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
sorenbarrett said:
You got me thinking again. We often fall back in time to burn with past thoughts. If we only had listened to past warnings we might not have burned. Very nice Neville
January 30th, 2025 16:30
sorenbarrett said:
You got me thinking again. We often fall back in time to burn with past thoughts. If we only had listened to past warnings we might not have burned. Very nice Neville
January 30th, 2025 16:30
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you Neville enjoyed my late night read.
January 30th, 2025 16:27
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you Neville enjoyed my late night read.
January 30th, 2025 16:27
Taste
Cheeky Missy said:
Wowers! This is so superbly rendered with such eloquent imagery it\'s very nearly palpably delicious, and so evocative I could almost faint for sheer yearning, pining for whom or what I know not. Ah me! Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it. Intrigue flirts about its fringed border, tantalizing.
January 30th, 2025 08:01
Cheeky Missy said:
Wowers! This is so superbly rendered with such eloquent imagery it\'s very nearly palpably delicious, and so evocative I could almost faint for sheer yearning, pining for whom or what I know not. Ah me! Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it. Intrigue flirts about its fringed border, tantalizing.
January 30th, 2025 08:01
In the Beginning of Our Forever
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
The Stars Sparkle In This One
Enjoyed It My Friend
January 30th, 2025 04:55
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
The Stars Sparkle In This One
Enjoyed It My Friend
January 30th, 2025 04:55
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Tom Dylan said:
A moving write, Neville. You really captured the emotion.
January 30th, 2025 04:02
Tom Dylan said:
A moving write, Neville. You really captured the emotion.
January 30th, 2025 04:02
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, in time all the good things will be remembered and the good things will fix that patch.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, in time all the good things will be remembered and the good things will fix that patch.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:25
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s rather a sacred beauty to this exquisite, pretty number, especially with such a subtly passionate note as THAT author\'s notice. How do you cover a gaping hole which is rather truly an empty shell left behind? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and such a painfully haunting poignancy, I almost hesitate to say anything. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 01:02
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s rather a sacred beauty to this exquisite, pretty number, especially with such a subtly passionate note as THAT author\'s notice. How do you cover a gaping hole which is rather truly an empty shell left behind? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and such a painfully haunting poignancy, I almost hesitate to say anything. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 01:02
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
arqios said:
That would be nice to see/read/experience- five or so poems covering each “stage” or face of grief. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:41
arqios said:
That would be nice to see/read/experience- five or so poems covering each “stage” or face of grief. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:41
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone who has dealt with death and mourning often, and not just my own, this poem is spot on, my friend. A wonderful expression. We can indeed find ourselves angry and having a hard time forgiving someone for dying. A very natural and common feeling. Brilliant grief poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 29th, 2025 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone who has dealt with death and mourning often, and not just my own, this poem is spot on, my friend. A wonderful expression. We can indeed find ourselves angry and having a hard time forgiving someone for dying. A very natural and common feeling. Brilliant grief poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 29th, 2025 08:25
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
NafisaSB said:
thought provoking and intense. hope the big mountains will turn to small pebbles as you stride ahead with confidence and positivity
January 29th, 2025 07:42
NafisaSB said:
thought provoking and intense. hope the big mountains will turn to small pebbles as you stride ahead with confidence and positivity
January 29th, 2025 07:42
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
sorenbarrett said:
Certainly you play with my mind. On the whole if I were to mend a whole hole. I wouldn\'t be too concerned with the dying but rather the dyeing of the patch. As for it being a mourning song written in the evening I would rather mourn in the morn. Ah Neville you know I have a weakness for such silly homophones and homographs simply loved this bit of humor.
January 29th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Certainly you play with my mind. On the whole if I were to mend a whole hole. I wouldn\'t be too concerned with the dying but rather the dyeing of the patch. As for it being a mourning song written in the evening I would rather mourn in the morn. Ah Neville you know I have a weakness for such silly homophones and homographs simply loved this bit of humor.
January 29th, 2025 04:45
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Poetic Licence said:
You sense a touch of anger that they have gone and left you, but get the overwhelming of the sense off loss of a loved one. Very touching and emotional write, Thank you Neville
January 29th, 2025 04:37
Poetic Licence said:
You sense a touch of anger that they have gone and left you, but get the overwhelming of the sense off loss of a loved one. Very touching and emotional write, Thank you Neville
January 29th, 2025 04:37
Taste
Goldfinch60 said:
That aftertaste is so wonderful in many things in our lives Neville.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
That aftertaste is so wonderful in many things in our lives Neville.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:43
Taste
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully enjoyed and savoured..Very detailed and much admired by this poet.
January 28th, 2025 14:25
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully enjoyed and savoured..Very detailed and much admired by this poet.
January 28th, 2025 14:25
Taste
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, Neville. This poem is like a fine wine! Truly savored and enjoyed! 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, Neville. This poem is like a fine wine! Truly savored and enjoyed! 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:16
Taste
arqios said:
Kinda like the term: spice of life! Nothing duller than a lack of variety, there is virtue in mixing it up a bit, be it scent or movement or style 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
Kinda like the term: spice of life! Nothing duller than a lack of variety, there is virtue in mixing it up a bit, be it scent or movement or style 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:24
Taste
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is more personal, but if you can get some sweetness from a bitter experience, that is a bonus, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:28
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is more personal, but if you can get some sweetness from a bitter experience, that is a bonus, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:28
Taste
sorenbarrett said:
I can taste it now. Where can I buy this? Oh well this may be private vintage not for sale. None the less it sounds very good. Bom apetite
January 28th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
I can taste it now. Where can I buy this? Oh well this may be private vintage not for sale. None the less it sounds very good. Bom apetite
January 28th, 2025 04:17
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
SJSangeetha said:
Deeply felt..Thank you for this poem..
January 27th, 2025 21:52
SJSangeetha said:
Deeply felt..Thank you for this poem..
January 27th, 2025 21:52
Love Seeds
Dan Williams said:
I certainly wish you well, you\'d be a better man than me. Good work here.
January 27th, 2025 00:52
Dan Williams said:
I certainly wish you well, you\'d be a better man than me. Good work here.
January 27th, 2025 00:52
Love Seeds
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Meanwhile with KP all I get is weeds. lol.
January 26th, 2025 07:00
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Meanwhile with KP all I get is weeds. lol.
January 26th, 2025 07:00
Love Seeds
Michael Edwards said:
A poetic gem - great write with a great message.
January 26th, 2025 06:59
Michael Edwards said:
A poetic gem - great write with a great message.
January 26th, 2025 06:59
Love Seeds
arqios said:
We all need a bit of tlc, and having some of that going around changes the works entire 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 26th, 2025 06:45
arqios said:
We all need a bit of tlc, and having some of that going around changes the works entire 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 26th, 2025 06:45
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