Comments received on poems by Neville
Sussing the Pot Plant
arqios said:
I do love the interplay of images, motions, nuances and interactions! You’re earning another like/fave combo N! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 1st, 2025 07:12
arqios said:
I do love the interplay of images, motions, nuances and interactions! You’re earning another like/fave combo N! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 1st, 2025 07:12
Sussing the Pot Plant
Doggerel Dave said:
You have a wife with a superfluity of empathy – now whatever you do don’t you be slipping on the new shiny spiral staircase and cause her further grief, Neville.......
February 1st, 2025 06:48
Doggerel Dave said:
You have a wife with a superfluity of empathy – now whatever you do don’t you be slipping on the new shiny spiral staircase and cause her further grief, Neville.......
February 1st, 2025 06:48
Sussing the Pot Plant
sorenbarrett said:
And so we all weep in our lonelyness. Separated by species, gender, social level and space we are all alone. As the plant behind a window, separated from fellow plants so we from our wives and families see them through the window of our eyes held back from joining them by technology (shiny spiral staircase), daily duties (washing of dishes) and understanding. How cunning the choice of a weeping fig. Very nice so rich in metaphor here Neville.
February 1st, 2025 05:43
sorenbarrett said:
And so we all weep in our lonelyness. Separated by species, gender, social level and space we are all alone. As the plant behind a window, separated from fellow plants so we from our wives and families see them through the window of our eyes held back from joining them by technology (shiny spiral staircase), daily duties (washing of dishes) and understanding. How cunning the choice of a weeping fig. Very nice so rich in metaphor here Neville.
February 1st, 2025 05:43
The Reason Why Colours Make Out
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Cool And Soothing
February 1st, 2025 05:08
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Cool And Soothing
February 1st, 2025 05:08
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
arqios said:
“Whatever you do, don’t look down,” as the off quoted saying goes! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 20:12
arqios said:
“Whatever you do, don’t look down,” as the off quoted saying goes! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 20:12
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Cheeky Missy said:
[If only I\'d not worked third shift Wednesday night, I might have commented in timely fashion on this characteristic beauty, but by the time I caught it I\'d no strength to pull off that, nor do more than observe.]
Dear flights of fancy! Oh, Icarus! Wax wings are only useful under certain circumstances, vaporizing in a heartbeat and the eye of Day. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
January 31st, 2025 17:43
Cheeky Missy said:
[If only I\'d not worked third shift Wednesday night, I might have commented in timely fashion on this characteristic beauty, but by the time I caught it I\'d no strength to pull off that, nor do more than observe.]
Dear flights of fancy! Oh, Icarus! Wax wings are only useful under certain circumstances, vaporizing in a heartbeat and the eye of Day. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
January 31st, 2025 17:43
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. A thought-provoking piece.
January 31st, 2025 08:30
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. A thought-provoking piece.
January 31st, 2025 08:30
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to your heart is so important Neville.
Andy
January 31st, 2025 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to your heart is so important Neville.
Andy
January 31st, 2025 02:45
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
NafisaSB said:
so touching and moving - hope you find closure soon take care -be safe and happy
January 31st, 2025 01:06
NafisaSB said:
so touching and moving - hope you find closure soon take care -be safe and happy
January 31st, 2025 01:06
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Dan Williams said:
Wow, short but so intense. I know loss is lessened by putting it into verse. Nice job.
January 30th, 2025 23:49
Dan Williams said:
Wow, short but so intense. I know loss is lessened by putting it into verse. Nice job.
January 30th, 2025 23:49
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
sorenbarrett said:
You got me thinking again. We often fall back in time to burn with past thoughts. If we only had listened to past warnings we might not have burned. Very nice Neville
January 30th, 2025 16:30
sorenbarrett said:
You got me thinking again. We often fall back in time to burn with past thoughts. If we only had listened to past warnings we might not have burned. Very nice Neville
January 30th, 2025 16:30
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you Neville enjoyed my late night read.
January 30th, 2025 16:27
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you Neville enjoyed my late night read.
January 30th, 2025 16:27
Taste
Cheeky Missy said:
Wowers! This is so superbly rendered with such eloquent imagery it\'s very nearly palpably delicious, and so evocative I could almost faint for sheer yearning, pining for whom or what I know not. Ah me! Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it. Intrigue flirts about its fringed border, tantalizing.
January 30th, 2025 08:01
Cheeky Missy said:
Wowers! This is so superbly rendered with such eloquent imagery it\'s very nearly palpably delicious, and so evocative I could almost faint for sheer yearning, pining for whom or what I know not. Ah me! Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it. Intrigue flirts about its fringed border, tantalizing.
January 30th, 2025 08:01
In the Beginning of Our Forever
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
The Stars Sparkle In This One
Enjoyed It My Friend
January 30th, 2025 04:55
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
The Stars Sparkle In This One
Enjoyed It My Friend
January 30th, 2025 04:55
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Tom Dylan said:
A moving write, Neville. You really captured the emotion.
January 30th, 2025 04:02
Tom Dylan said:
A moving write, Neville. You really captured the emotion.
January 30th, 2025 04:02
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, in time all the good things will be remembered and the good things will fix that patch.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, in time all the good things will be remembered and the good things will fix that patch.
Andy
January 30th, 2025 02:25
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s rather a sacred beauty to this exquisite, pretty number, especially with such a subtly passionate note as THAT author\'s notice. How do you cover a gaping hole which is rather truly an empty shell left behind? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and such a painfully haunting poignancy, I almost hesitate to say anything. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 01:02
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s rather a sacred beauty to this exquisite, pretty number, especially with such a subtly passionate note as THAT author\'s notice. How do you cover a gaping hole which is rather truly an empty shell left behind? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and such a painfully haunting poignancy, I almost hesitate to say anything. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 01:02
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
arqios said:
That would be nice to see/read/experience- five or so poems covering each “stage” or face of grief. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:41
arqios said:
That would be nice to see/read/experience- five or so poems covering each “stage” or face of grief. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 29th, 2025 08:41
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone who has dealt with death and mourning often, and not just my own, this poem is spot on, my friend. A wonderful expression. We can indeed find ourselves angry and having a hard time forgiving someone for dying. A very natural and common feeling. Brilliant grief poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 29th, 2025 08:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone who has dealt with death and mourning often, and not just my own, this poem is spot on, my friend. A wonderful expression. We can indeed find ourselves angry and having a hard time forgiving someone for dying. A very natural and common feeling. Brilliant grief poem, my friend! 🌹👏
January 29th, 2025 08:25
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
NafisaSB said:
thought provoking and intense. hope the big mountains will turn to small pebbles as you stride ahead with confidence and positivity
January 29th, 2025 07:42
NafisaSB said:
thought provoking and intense. hope the big mountains will turn to small pebbles as you stride ahead with confidence and positivity
January 29th, 2025 07:42
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
sorenbarrett said:
Certainly you play with my mind. On the whole if I were to mend a whole hole. I wouldn\'t be too concerned with the dying but rather the dyeing of the patch. As for it being a mourning song written in the evening I would rather mourn in the morn. Ah Neville you know I have a weakness for such silly homophones and homographs simply loved this bit of humor.
January 29th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Certainly you play with my mind. On the whole if I were to mend a whole hole. I wouldn\'t be too concerned with the dying but rather the dyeing of the patch. As for it being a mourning song written in the evening I would rather mourn in the morn. Ah Neville you know I have a weakness for such silly homophones and homographs simply loved this bit of humor.
January 29th, 2025 04:45
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Poetic Licence said:
You sense a touch of anger that they have gone and left you, but get the overwhelming of the sense off loss of a loved one. Very touching and emotional write, Thank you Neville
January 29th, 2025 04:37
Poetic Licence said:
You sense a touch of anger that they have gone and left you, but get the overwhelming of the sense off loss of a loved one. Very touching and emotional write, Thank you Neville
January 29th, 2025 04:37
Taste
Goldfinch60 said:
That aftertaste is so wonderful in many things in our lives Neville.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
That aftertaste is so wonderful in many things in our lives Neville.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:43
Taste
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully enjoyed and savoured..Very detailed and much admired by this poet.
January 28th, 2025 14:25
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully enjoyed and savoured..Very detailed and much admired by this poet.
January 28th, 2025 14:25
Taste
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, Neville. This poem is like a fine wine! Truly savored and enjoyed! 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, Neville. This poem is like a fine wine! Truly savored and enjoyed! 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:16
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