Comments received on poems by Neville
Advice on Avoiding Pedestals
2781 said:
Very true, but a do believe, at best, we all end up a bag of bones.
April 15th, 2024 01:37
2781 said:
Very true, but a do believe, at best, we all end up a bag of bones.
April 15th, 2024 01:37
Yesterday I Met a Monster
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Neville. I just do not understand why anybody will harm children. If I had my way I would hang by their spheroids from a bridge and let the crows have them!
Andy
April 15th, 2024 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Neville. I just do not understand why anybody will harm children. If I had my way I would hang by their spheroids from a bridge and let the crows have them!
Andy
April 15th, 2024 01:33
Yesterday I Met a Monster
Accidental Poet said:
As Teddy and Cassie have declared, you have been missed. The monsters are out there, and they will be dealt with in one fashion or another when their time comes. And may they get that what they give. Welcome back my friend. 👍
April 14th, 2024 17:52
Accidental Poet said:
As Teddy and Cassie have declared, you have been missed. The monsters are out there, and they will be dealt with in one fashion or another when their time comes. And may they get that what they give. Welcome back my friend. 👍
April 14th, 2024 17:52
Yesterday I Met a Monster
Cassie58 said:
His beard was braided. Yuk I thought and as I read further, I imagined the horror of having to listen to the sickening stuff he was coming out with. Children egging him on. Nothing but an evil pervert. Yes a monster in your presence. Every parent’s nightmare. Such a dark write Neville, but there seems to be such a great deal of darkness at present. What a pity he was let out after 25 years. Who let him out, I ask? Your reality. What an awful yesterday, but what a powerful piece of writing. Great to see you back.
April 14th, 2024 15:55
Cassie58 said:
His beard was braided. Yuk I thought and as I read further, I imagined the horror of having to listen to the sickening stuff he was coming out with. Children egging him on. Nothing but an evil pervert. Yes a monster in your presence. Every parent’s nightmare. Such a dark write Neville, but there seems to be such a great deal of darkness at present. What a pity he was let out after 25 years. Who let him out, I ask? Your reality. What an awful yesterday, but what a powerful piece of writing. Great to see you back.
April 14th, 2024 15:55
Yesterday I Met a Monster
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t such a heavy theme, I would say - ahh, so you met KP yesterday?!
I bet you knew I would say that. lol.
April 14th, 2024 10:28
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t such a heavy theme, I would say - ahh, so you met KP yesterday?!
I bet you knew I would say that. lol.
April 14th, 2024 10:28
Yesterday I Met a Monster
Parisab said:
Wow Neville, those are the days I wish we are out sick-Although another psychopath can be joining us at a holiday… Great to read your moving words again…
April 14th, 2024 09:32
Parisab said:
Wow Neville, those are the days I wish we are out sick-Although another psychopath can be joining us at a holiday… Great to read your moving words again…
April 14th, 2024 09:32
Yesterday I Met a Monster
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Neville, you\'ve been missed. This is really dark and having seen what happened in Sydney yesterday made this even darker, I guess any good psychology would know that we can only help those who want to be helped and those born pure evil unfortunately may never be able to change. An eye for an eye? With what is going on in the world right now, I\'m thinking I wish it could all be fairies and father Christmas but in reality it\'s all so terribly dark. 🌹
April 14th, 2024 09:23
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Neville, you\'ve been missed. This is really dark and having seen what happened in Sydney yesterday made this even darker, I guess any good psychology would know that we can only help those who want to be helped and those born pure evil unfortunately may never be able to change. An eye for an eye? With what is going on in the world right now, I\'m thinking I wish it could all be fairies and father Christmas but in reality it\'s all so terribly dark. 🌹
April 14th, 2024 09:23
Harbour Side
Cassie58 said:
What an incredibly sensual piece of poetry Neville, discovered here in your archives. Wonderfully written and not likely to be forgotten either. A masterpiece in a beautiful scenic setting.
March 25th, 2024 19:53
Cassie58 said:
What an incredibly sensual piece of poetry Neville, discovered here in your archives. Wonderfully written and not likely to be forgotten either. A masterpiece in a beautiful scenic setting.
March 25th, 2024 19:53
Silly Me
Bella Shepard said:
Hope springs eternal, and love will always try to find a way, though starry eyes may not see the warning signs along the road. A touching vulnerability here my friend, beautifully crafted.
March 15th, 2024 11:38
Bella Shepard said:
Hope springs eternal, and love will always try to find a way, though starry eyes may not see the warning signs along the road. A touching vulnerability here my friend, beautifully crafted.
March 15th, 2024 11:38
Silly Me
Cassie58 said:
Your poetic license is truly admirable Neville,. Have a gorgeous Sunday 💜
March 10th, 2024 00:43
Cassie58 said:
Your poetic license is truly admirable Neville,. Have a gorgeous Sunday 💜
March 10th, 2024 00:43
Silly Me
Cassie58 said:
Wishing wells aren’t just for children, they are for adults too. I know because I use them. So much longing and passion in this write. Besotted comes to mind and all to find that the wretch had banished you. Felt this one deeply. Silly though? No not at all. We’ve all been there. Great piece of poetry Neville.
March 8th, 2024 13:08
Cassie58 said:
Wishing wells aren’t just for children, they are for adults too. I know because I use them. So much longing and passion in this write. Besotted comes to mind and all to find that the wretch had banished you. Felt this one deeply. Silly though? No not at all. We’ve all been there. Great piece of poetry Neville.
March 8th, 2024 13:08
Silly Me
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, but are we not young at heart? Those who persist are hard to resist. 😉👍
March 8th, 2024 08:42
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, but are we not young at heart? Those who persist are hard to resist. 😉👍
March 8th, 2024 08:42
Silly Me
Doggerel Dave said:
The unreachable enigma of some relationships, Neville....
March 8th, 2024 07:51
Doggerel Dave said:
The unreachable enigma of some relationships, Neville....
March 8th, 2024 07:51
The Difference in Our Similarities
Doggerel Dave said:
Sir I stand as an exception, not an unusual standing for me...(oh git orf yer soapbox yer cantankerous old git..)
It\'s not poetry per se, but yer content wot counts.....
March 8th, 2024 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Sir I stand as an exception, not an unusual standing for me...(oh git orf yer soapbox yer cantankerous old git..)
It\'s not poetry per se, but yer content wot counts.....
March 8th, 2024 07:06
Silly Me
Teddy.15 said:
I can see my relationship with my father in here, I love him but he was never any good as a dad. wow Neville this one is so very powerful and I just love the twist on the wishing well superb, love comes in so many forms and this is brilliantly written. 🌹 💜 🌹
March 8th, 2024 03:39
Teddy.15 said:
I can see my relationship with my father in here, I love him but he was never any good as a dad. wow Neville this one is so very powerful and I just love the twist on the wishing well superb, love comes in so many forms and this is brilliantly written. 🌹 💜 🌹
March 8th, 2024 03:39
Silly Me
Goldfinch60 said:
They can work for elders as well Neville but maybe you don\'t remember all the wishes you made.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 03:03
Goldfinch60 said:
They can work for elders as well Neville but maybe you don\'t remember all the wishes you made.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 03:03
Silly Me
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You will know I threw the letters K and P into a well - or a cess-pit! lol.
March 8th, 2024 02:47
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You will know I threw the letters K and P into a well - or a cess-pit! lol.
March 8th, 2024 02:47
The Difference in Our Similarities
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, those humans have a great deal for which to answer!
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville, those humans have a great deal for which to answer!
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:26
The Difference in Our Similarities
MendedFences27 said:
If all these fabled creatures were authors, they would be ruined by Hollywood. Yeti Jr. writes, \"My Life with Papa\" and gets $50 million from Universal.
Your poem is direct and to the point. Poetry is what binds us as we share our thoughts and experiences. Perhaps it is the glue for mankind, - Phil A.
March 7th, 2024 17:04
MendedFences27 said:
If all these fabled creatures were authors, they would be ruined by Hollywood. Yeti Jr. writes, \"My Life with Papa\" and gets $50 million from Universal.
Your poem is direct and to the point. Poetry is what binds us as we share our thoughts and experiences. Perhaps it is the glue for mankind, - Phil A.
March 7th, 2024 17:04
The Difference in Our Similarities
Bella Shepard said:
The beauty of poetry takes us to a different plane, away from the all too human foibles of life. That \"thing about poetry\" is unique, as is the poet that perceives it. Loved the write!
March 7th, 2024 15:26
Bella Shepard said:
The beauty of poetry takes us to a different plane, away from the all too human foibles of life. That \"thing about poetry\" is unique, as is the poet that perceives it. Loved the write!
March 7th, 2024 15:26
The Difference in Our Similarities
Cassie58 said:
Oh the power of poetry:) What strength it has to unite. A fun write Neville. Always celebrate the similarities. I can’t believe you are an old grouch. Those fears and contempt of almost everything human:)) That needs intervention :)) Hope your Thursday has been happy and productive my friend.
March 7th, 2024 13:04
Cassie58 said:
Oh the power of poetry:) What strength it has to unite. A fun write Neville. Always celebrate the similarities. I can’t believe you are an old grouch. Those fears and contempt of almost everything human:)) That needs intervention :)) Hope your Thursday has been happy and productive my friend.
March 7th, 2024 13:04
The Difference in Our Similarities
Cloie said:
This is such a fun and imaginative piece! I love how you\'ve brought together these mythical beings and yourself in such a lighthearted way. It\'s like a whimsical journey through the shared quirks and interests of the supernatural world. And the nod to poetry as the common thread among us adds a delightful twist! Great job capturing the playful side of storytelling.
March 7th, 2024 09:53
Cloie said:
This is such a fun and imaginative piece! I love how you\'ve brought together these mythical beings and yourself in such a lighthearted way. It\'s like a whimsical journey through the shared quirks and interests of the supernatural world. And the nod to poetry as the common thread among us adds a delightful twist! Great job capturing the playful side of storytelling.
March 7th, 2024 09:53
The Difference in Our Similarities
orchidee said:
After this my next poem has to be: The similarities in our differences. You knew it!
March 7th, 2024 08:57
orchidee said:
After this my next poem has to be: The similarities in our differences. You knew it!
March 7th, 2024 08:57
The Difference in Our Similarities
Accidental Poet said:
A very provocative write N, two thumbs up from me. 👍👍 If I may, I\'d like to add Angels to that list. Or at least to my own list. And I have to wonder, if all these beings could write poetry, how interesting that would be. 🤔
March 7th, 2024 07:12
Accidental Poet said:
A very provocative write N, two thumbs up from me. 👍👍 If I may, I\'d like to add Angels to that list. Or at least to my own list. And I have to wonder, if all these beings could write poetry, how interesting that would be. 🤔
March 7th, 2024 07:12
The Difference in Our Similarities
Tom C Dylan said:
A good write, Neville.. we do all have a thing for poetry. Spot on. :-)
March 7th, 2024 05:53
Tom C Dylan said:
A good write, Neville.. we do all have a thing for poetry. Spot on. :-)
March 7th, 2024 05:53
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