Comments received on poems by Neville
Lest We Should Ever Forget
Bella Shepard said:
Five very important words, for the shadows of the past are with us, and the rememberance of those who fought so bravely should be revered. It us up to us to strengthen generational memory in the hope that we can pass on the values that make us stronger together, that we may put destructive human folly to rest. Eloquent and profound my friend!
November 9th, 2025 11:41
Bella Shepard said:
Five very important words, for the shadows of the past are with us, and the rememberance of those who fought so bravely should be revered. It us up to us to strengthen generational memory in the hope that we can pass on the values that make us stronger together, that we may put destructive human folly to rest. Eloquent and profound my friend!
November 9th, 2025 11:41
Lest We Should Ever Forget
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. Great point to not forget.
November 9th, 2025 09:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. Great point to not forget.
November 9th, 2025 09:11
Lest We Should Ever Forget
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this poem offers a reverent and solemn picture to an irreverent and violent generation. One where a low cloud formation brings ideas that their online memory is running short. Tommies carved of metal bring to their mind heavy metal music now out of date. This poem sets different with our generation where defending one\'s nation and values was something honored and valued. Something that seems to be fading away. Great write my friend
November 9th, 2025 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this poem offers a reverent and solemn picture to an irreverent and violent generation. One where a low cloud formation brings ideas that their online memory is running short. Tommies carved of metal bring to their mind heavy metal music now out of date. This poem sets different with our generation where defending one\'s nation and values was something honored and valued. Something that seems to be fading away. Great write my friend
November 9th, 2025 08:03
With Only Nine Trees Left
arqios said:
This is really hard hitting. A raw, honest, timely and powerful expression. I love how you gave Gaea a voice and didn’t hold back on the urgency. It’s a tough truth, but you’ve captured it with such clarity. Thanks for sharing this with us. 🙏🕊️
November 8th, 2025 08:33
arqios said:
This is really hard hitting. A raw, honest, timely and powerful expression. I love how you gave Gaea a voice and didn’t hold back on the urgency. It’s a tough truth, but you’ve captured it with such clarity. Thanks for sharing this with us. 🙏🕊️
November 8th, 2025 08:33
Number Four Lipow Strasse
NafisaSB said:
this one is straight from the heart, and touches a chord..
well done indeed
November 4th, 2025 03:03
NafisaSB said:
this one is straight from the heart, and touches a chord..
well done indeed
November 4th, 2025 03:03
Number Four Lipow Strasse
Thomas W Case said:
Boom. You bring this to vivid life.
October 29th, 2025 20:53
Thomas W Case said:
Boom. You bring this to vivid life.
October 29th, 2025 20:53
Number Four Lipow Strasse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, my friend, this poem lingers like smoke from Café Alchemia...rich, weary, unshakably human. You’ve written not just of a place, but of the persistence of memory itself. Cheers! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2025 20:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, my friend, this poem lingers like smoke from Café Alchemia...rich, weary, unshakably human. You’ve written not just of a place, but of the persistence of memory itself. Cheers! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2025 20:34
Number Four Lipow Strasse
Doggerel Dave said:
Never been to Krakow, or for that matter Poland, Neville. My tour, curtesy of my screen and a comfortable seat was more than interesting; indeed you, a poetic tour advisor, really took me there. After a lengthy visit to the museum, Café Alchemia feels just the right place to linger in.....
When you have finished upstairs, perhaps you could join me? At the absolute very least I owe you a coffee after.....
October 29th, 2025 18:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Never been to Krakow, or for that matter Poland, Neville. My tour, curtesy of my screen and a comfortable seat was more than interesting; indeed you, a poetic tour advisor, really took me there. After a lengthy visit to the museum, Café Alchemia feels just the right place to linger in.....
When you have finished upstairs, perhaps you could join me? At the absolute very least I owe you a coffee after.....
October 29th, 2025 18:15
Number Four Lipow Strasse
sorenbarrett said:
This poem built in sentiment and welling feeling from beginning to end. The pacing and flow felt like climbing stairs in a tall building and with each floor an new sensation. As I reached the top I felt out of breath emotionally. Well done my friend. A fave
October 29th, 2025 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem built in sentiment and welling feeling from beginning to end. The pacing and flow felt like climbing stairs in a tall building and with each floor an new sensation. As I reached the top I felt out of breath emotionally. Well done my friend. A fave
October 29th, 2025 14:38
With Only Nine Trees Left
NafisaSB said:
you have nailed it so well, and i hope your call awakens the slumbering majority
October 29th, 2025 07:27
NafisaSB said:
you have nailed it so well, and i hope your call awakens the slumbering majority
October 29th, 2025 07:27
With Only Nine Trees Left
rhmn_7 said:
Yes, we have f\'up big time but nature will come back despite all I want to believe. Nicely written Neville!
October 26th, 2025 15:47
rhmn_7 said:
Yes, we have f\'up big time but nature will come back despite all I want to believe. Nicely written Neville!
October 26th, 2025 15:47
With Only Nine Trees Left
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem explores themes of environmental degradation and the profound sense of loss associated with the destruction of nature. It reflects on humanity\'s failure to protect the environment, emphasizing a feeling of despair regarding the future of the planet.
October 24th, 2025 14:11
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem explores themes of environmental degradation and the profound sense of loss associated with the destruction of nature. It reflects on humanity\'s failure to protect the environment, emphasizing a feeling of despair regarding the future of the planet.
October 24th, 2025 14:11
With Only Nine Trees Left
rebellion_in_sanity said:
“Extraordinarily well screwed—so to speak. I find the injection of that one word quite… Extraordinary. Kindly pardon my simple mind. The theme is close to my heart, and I confess to a persistent pessimism. Fortunately—or unfortunately—the poem seemed to echo my bleak faith in our venerable leaders.
Why does the word venerable bring to mind venereal disease? Kindly pardon my poor English.
October 24th, 2025 09:32
rebellion_in_sanity said:
“Extraordinarily well screwed—so to speak. I find the injection of that one word quite… Extraordinary. Kindly pardon my simple mind. The theme is close to my heart, and I confess to a persistent pessimism. Fortunately—or unfortunately—the poem seemed to echo my bleak faith in our venerable leaders.
Why does the word venerable bring to mind venereal disease? Kindly pardon my poor English.
October 24th, 2025 09:32
With No Hint of An End
NafisaSB said:
romantic, lovely, and straight from the heart...enjoyed it
October 24th, 2025 01:12
NafisaSB said:
romantic, lovely, and straight from the heart...enjoyed it
October 24th, 2025 01:12
With Only Nine Trees Left
Poetic Licence said:
As sad as it is we proclaim to be an intelligent species, yet we put so much effort into destroying the very fabric of what gives us life. I hope nature finds a way to recover from our continued destruction of it, but that may well be in vein, hope you keeping well
October 23rd, 2025 19:27
Poetic Licence said:
As sad as it is we proclaim to be an intelligent species, yet we put so much effort into destroying the very fabric of what gives us life. I hope nature finds a way to recover from our continued destruction of it, but that may well be in vein, hope you keeping well
October 23rd, 2025 19:27
With Only Nine Trees Left
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, my friend… brutal truth beautifully spoken. “Only nine trees left” is both prophecy and elegy...a line that hums with despair and bitter humor. The world we failed still finds her voice in yours. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2025 18:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, my friend… brutal truth beautifully spoken. “Only nine trees left” is both prophecy and elegy...a line that hums with despair and bitter humor. The world we failed still finds her voice in yours. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2025 18:29
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
orchidee said:
How are the juxtas now?! Enough, cease this drivel of comments, Fido says to me. lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:59
orchidee said:
How are the juxtas now?! Enough, cease this drivel of comments, Fido says to me. lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:59
With No Hint of An End
orchidee said:
Is Ken Simm related to the Sim card in phones, etc? I talk some rubbish, if I say so myself! lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:58
orchidee said:
Is Ken Simm related to the Sim card in phones, etc? I talk some rubbish, if I say so myself! lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:58
Why Nothing Falls Together
orchidee said:
KP only shed tears cos she had run out of money for botox! lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:57
orchidee said:
KP only shed tears cos she had run out of money for botox! lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:57
With Only Nine Trees Left
orchidee said:
And KP\'s no help either. She\'s got 8 of those 9 trees in her garden! I\'m becoming nuttier than a............!
October 23rd, 2025 13:56
orchidee said:
And KP\'s no help either. She\'s got 8 of those 9 trees in her garden! I\'m becoming nuttier than a............!
October 23rd, 2025 13:56
With Only Nine Trees Left
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, mankind is destroying our world and so few in power seem to care.
Andy
October 23rd, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, mankind is destroying our world and so few in power seem to care.
Andy
October 23rd, 2025 01:26
With Only Nine Trees Left
sorenbarrett said:
Mother earth abused, used, left ravished and broken by its children. An error in evolution coming to a dead end. Maybe with time Gaea will spawn a better species to resurrect a dying earth. Nicely done my friend
October 22nd, 2025 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
Mother earth abused, used, left ravished and broken by its children. An error in evolution coming to a dead end. Maybe with time Gaea will spawn a better species to resurrect a dying earth. Nicely done my friend
October 22nd, 2025 08:30
Why Nothing Falls Together
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of fleeting time can bring so much emotion to us Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2025 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of fleeting time can bring so much emotion to us Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2025 01:11
Why Nothing Falls Together
jarcher54 said:
All I can say is, you made me cry. I can\'t even explain why. Poetry I guess...
October 22nd, 2025 00:01
jarcher54 said:
All I can say is, you made me cry. I can\'t even explain why. Poetry I guess...
October 22nd, 2025 00:01
Why Nothing Falls Together
Doggerel Dave said:
Fragmented memories recollected in tranquility well captured here - I know, I have them and they aren\'t so very different beyond minor particular details...Enjoyed, Neville.
October 21st, 2025 19:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Fragmented memories recollected in tranquility well captured here - I know, I have them and they aren\'t so very different beyond minor particular details...Enjoyed, Neville.
October 21st, 2025 19:44
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