Comments received on poems by Neville
Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It\'s amazing how you use words to draw picture.... again and again.
August 29th, 2025 01:07
rebellion_in_sanity said:
It\'s amazing how you use words to draw picture.... again and again.
August 29th, 2025 01:07
Fake Nudes
Poetic Dan said:
The truth doesn\'t need many words, how comfortably can decay us quicker. At least we smell nice.
Nicely done mate
August 28th, 2025 19:40
Poetic Dan said:
The truth doesn\'t need many words, how comfortably can decay us quicker. At least we smell nice.
Nicely done mate
August 28th, 2025 19:40
Fake Nudes
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. I can relate. Can I add a full head of hair to my wish list please? :-) Nicely done. Cheers.
August 28th, 2025 08:37
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. I can relate. Can I add a full head of hair to my wish list please? :-) Nicely done. Cheers.
August 28th, 2025 08:37
Fake Nudes
Kevin Hulme said:
I used to lift Weights when younger.
Never forget the Sweat, Strain, Aches, Pulled Muscles. But eventually got them out the Box.
Good Write.
August 27th, 2025 12:24
Kevin Hulme said:
I used to lift Weights when younger.
Never forget the Sweat, Strain, Aches, Pulled Muscles. But eventually got them out the Box.
Good Write.
August 27th, 2025 12:24
Fake Nudes
Cassie58 said:
I think many of us would like to be a few pounds lighter as we reflect on the passing of time and the wear and tear we suffer with every day living. But hey if you are wearing oud, that is unmistakeable and is quite intoxicating. The fragrance drew me in. Hope all is improving in your world Neville. Have a great Wednesday.
August 27th, 2025 03:57
Cassie58 said:
I think many of us would like to be a few pounds lighter as we reflect on the passing of time and the wear and tear we suffer with every day living. But hey if you are wearing oud, that is unmistakeable and is quite intoxicating. The fragrance drew me in. Hope all is improving in your world Neville. Have a great Wednesday.
August 27th, 2025 03:57
All Items Numbered 204
NafisaSB said:
yes, some things are unforgettable - store them deep in the recesses of your memory and take out and relive them whenever you need some lifting up of the spirits
August 27th, 2025 00:14
NafisaSB said:
yes, some things are unforgettable - store them deep in the recesses of your memory and take out and relive them whenever you need some lifting up of the spirits
August 27th, 2025 00:14
Fake Nudes
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tell ya what - I\'ll supply the bandages, and if you could send over that almost finished bottle of oud by express post for me to sniff, I\'ll do the best I can.....
August 26th, 2025 20:38
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Tell ya what - I\'ll supply the bandages, and if you could send over that almost finished bottle of oud by express post for me to sniff, I\'ll do the best I can.....
August 26th, 2025 20:38
Fake Nudes
Cheeky Missy said:
Well aren\'t you a riot! Lemme see, with thy bandages on thou shalt look like the mummy from Dracula or the like, or correct me. I\'ll just hafta watch one of my all time favorite flicks The Wedding Date and imagine you\'re my beloved Dermot Mulroney, how\'s that? Excellently rendered with a tasteful smidgen of imagery, is that? and a tantalizing poignancy. Charming. Thank you for sharing.
August 26th, 2025 14:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Well aren\'t you a riot! Lemme see, with thy bandages on thou shalt look like the mummy from Dracula or the like, or correct me. I\'ll just hafta watch one of my all time favorite flicks The Wedding Date and imagine you\'re my beloved Dermot Mulroney, how\'s that? Excellently rendered with a tasteful smidgen of imagery, is that? and a tantalizing poignancy. Charming. Thank you for sharing.
August 26th, 2025 14:40
Fake Nudes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is raw and striking…brief but full of longing, memory, and vulnerability. Powerful in its sparseness. A wonderful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2025 14:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is raw and striking…brief but full of longing, memory, and vulnerability. Powerful in its sparseness. A wonderful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 26th, 2025 14:34
Fake Nudes
sorenbarrett said:
We all want to turn the clock back. A fun read my friend gives me nostalgia
August 26th, 2025 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
We all want to turn the clock back. A fun read my friend gives me nostalgia
August 26th, 2025 14:13
Madagascan Girls
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Again, you with a brush- another picture emerges. In beauty, perhaps with touch of nostalgia. Beautiful work 👏
August 26th, 2025 09:23
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Again, you with a brush- another picture emerges. In beauty, perhaps with touch of nostalgia. Beautiful work 👏
August 26th, 2025 09:23
All Items Numbered 204
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville and the older you get the more you forget.
Andy
August 25th, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Neville and the older you get the more you forget.
Andy
August 25th, 2025 01:21
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Neville, reading this felt like being handed keepsakes...smells, textures, fragments of gold. You remind us that memory is in the details we usually pass by. So very true and a fave from me. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2025 18:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Neville, reading this felt like being handed keepsakes...smells, textures, fragments of gold. You remind us that memory is in the details we usually pass by. So very true and a fave from me. Loved this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 24th, 2025 18:28
All Items Numbered 204
orchidee said:
I thought the answer was always 42, as I read somewhere? Maybe the answer is 204? lol.
August 24th, 2025 12:04
orchidee said:
I thought the answer was always 42, as I read somewhere? Maybe the answer is 204? lol.
August 24th, 2025 12:04
All Items Numbered 204
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I kept on going back to \"the smells,
textures and taste
of already
cold ash, from well
spent fires\". Reading the poem was something like watching a painter casually making marks on tbe canvas..but in no time something emerges, quite unexpected perhaps, which makes one gasp.
August 24th, 2025 10:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I kept on going back to \"the smells,
textures and taste
of already
cold ash, from well
spent fires\". Reading the poem was something like watching a painter casually making marks on tbe canvas..but in no time something emerges, quite unexpected perhaps, which makes one gasp.
August 24th, 2025 10:16
All Items Numbered 204
Cheeky Missy said:
Tis, forsooth. Yet what half causes me to tremble is that my post for today, planned too long ago, yet has echoes here quite baldly. There\'s gold, fool\'s gold, and what is so far beyond gold that there\'s no comparison [see Proverbs 8 for starters] and how deliciously you\'ve woven the deceit in these seemingly innocuous lines, the allusion and reality winking at who may see. La dee! Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. I love, love, love it! Thank you for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 08:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Tis, forsooth. Yet what half causes me to tremble is that my post for today, planned too long ago, yet has echoes here quite baldly. There\'s gold, fool\'s gold, and what is so far beyond gold that there\'s no comparison [see Proverbs 8 for starters] and how deliciously you\'ve woven the deceit in these seemingly innocuous lines, the allusion and reality winking at who may see. La dee! Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. I love, love, love it! Thank you for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 08:43
All Items Numbered 204
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, Neville. I have so many of those. Sparks, I call them. Founders of many verses.
August 24th, 2025 08:04
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well said, Neville. I have so many of those. Sparks, I call them. Founders of many verses.
August 24th, 2025 08:04
All Items Numbered 204
sorenbarrett said:
Simple small natural treasures often overlooked and so well imaged in poets ink. I couldn\'t agree more my friend so many little things that may not be that little at all overlooked and forgotten. This poem a reminder that remembering little good things is what brings pleasure and meaning to life.
August 24th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Simple small natural treasures often overlooked and so well imaged in poets ink. I couldn\'t agree more my friend so many little things that may not be that little at all overlooked and forgotten. This poem a reminder that remembering little good things is what brings pleasure and meaning to life.
August 24th, 2025 04:30
Marching on Bone Spurs
NinjaGirl said:
Making decent folk proud... I like that line, and beautiful poem
August 24th, 2025 01:40
NinjaGirl said:
Making decent folk proud... I like that line, and beautiful poem
August 24th, 2025 01:40
Porlock
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming, very charming indeed. While rendered casually with a sense of simplicity as pure as the allusion to cotton, yet how inextricably you\'ve managed to lend a deeper notion somehow. Very lovely with excellent imagery and a peaceful poignancy haunting. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 23rd, 2025 22:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming, very charming indeed. While rendered casually with a sense of simplicity as pure as the allusion to cotton, yet how inextricably you\'ve managed to lend a deeper notion somehow. Very lovely with excellent imagery and a peaceful poignancy haunting. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 23rd, 2025 22:52
Porlock
arqios said:
I like the salt‑soft nostalgia in Porlock, like a postcard you can smell and hear. The images roll in as gently as the tide, of boats hauled over green hills, fields that taste of brine, and oyster shells clinking in invisible baskets. That quiet moment where “no sound” reigns except the larks and bees feels like the pause between breaths, when the whole world leans in to listen. And then the sails appear, cotton‑worn and weather‑beaten, catching either blessing or burden from the wind; as if Porlock itself lives in that delicate balance between calm and the next shift in weather.
August 23rd, 2025 17:59
arqios said:
I like the salt‑soft nostalgia in Porlock, like a postcard you can smell and hear. The images roll in as gently as the tide, of boats hauled over green hills, fields that taste of brine, and oyster shells clinking in invisible baskets. That quiet moment where “no sound” reigns except the larks and bees feels like the pause between breaths, when the whole world leans in to listen. And then the sails appear, cotton‑worn and weather‑beaten, catching either blessing or burden from the wind; as if Porlock itself lives in that delicate balance between calm and the next shift in weather.
August 23rd, 2025 17:59
Porlock
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this paints peace…the boats, the fields, the quiet broken only by larks and bees. It’s a scene I could stand in. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 23rd, 2025 16:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this paints peace…the boats, the fields, the quiet broken only by larks and bees. It’s a scene I could stand in. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 23rd, 2025 16:40
Porlock
sorenbarrett said:
Neville not to the name you name but to another I have been there. A beautiful portrayal of images that put my feet back in that sand and felt that wind against my cheek crossing those fields and hearing only the lark. Very nice my friend a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Neville not to the name you name but to another I have been there. A beautiful portrayal of images that put my feet back in that sand and felt that wind against my cheek crossing those fields and hearing only the lark. Very nice my friend a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:22
Porlock
Doggerel Dave said:
A locale evidently frequented by arguably the most noted of the romantic poets...so that\'s how Kubla Kahn got foreshortened.... I learn something new every day, but it takes a local to put me on the right track.
August 23rd, 2025 08:20
Doggerel Dave said:
A locale evidently frequented by arguably the most noted of the romantic poets...so that\'s how Kubla Kahn got foreshortened.... I learn something new every day, but it takes a local to put me on the right track.
August 23rd, 2025 08:20
Abattoir Gulls
Cheeky Missy said:
I remain baffled. Since the gulls specified remain like fixtures, permanently affixed, I\'m left with the ridiculous image of a baby\'s crib with an odd mobile. As that sounds inconceivable, I\'m guessing it\'s a grand metaphor? Either way, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 21st, 2025 12:20
Cheeky Missy said:
I remain baffled. Since the gulls specified remain like fixtures, permanently affixed, I\'m left with the ridiculous image of a baby\'s crib with an odd mobile. As that sounds inconceivable, I\'m guessing it\'s a grand metaphor? Either way, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 21st, 2025 12:20
A Taste of Nothing
Cheeky Missy said:
Alright, you\'ve got me. The conclusion should have enlightened me, but I remain baffled. I mean, I\'m free to read to my heart\'s content, and do, leaving comments where I like, whence the ending leaves me confused. But no matter. I dearly love how deliciously you\'ve rendered this pretty number with such imagery as gives its poignancy a leg to stand on, Napoleon couldn\'t have looked better. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 14:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Alright, you\'ve got me. The conclusion should have enlightened me, but I remain baffled. I mean, I\'m free to read to my heart\'s content, and do, leaving comments where I like, whence the ending leaves me confused. But no matter. I dearly love how deliciously you\'ve rendered this pretty number with such imagery as gives its poignancy a leg to stand on, Napoleon couldn\'t have looked better. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 14:09
Marching on Bone Spurs
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Can\'t agree more. But having said that, the question still lingers- would it have? Loved it!
August 20th, 2025 12:14
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Can\'t agree more. But having said that, the question still lingers- would it have? Loved it!
August 20th, 2025 12:14
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Cheeky Missy said:
Deja vu haunts both the title of this familiar pretty number and its meat, yet a casual search left me empty-handed. Guess it all depends on the dearth or lack thereof since certain indulgences seem to never lose their flavor until superseded. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you again for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 11:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Deja vu haunts both the title of this familiar pretty number and its meat, yet a casual search left me empty-handed. Guess it all depends on the dearth or lack thereof since certain indulgences seem to never lose their flavor until superseded. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you again for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 11:06
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