Comments received on poems by Neville
Reflection
arqios said:
Good to be reading you again, N! Much enjoyed. 👍🏻🕊️
Always, R
September 6th, 2026 06:43
arqios said:
Good to be reading you again, N! Much enjoyed. 👍🏻🕊️
Always, R
September 6th, 2026 06:43
Reflection
orchidee said:
Good write N. The mirror replied to KP \'You\'re looking more trout-like each day!\' lol.
September 6th, 2026 05:14
orchidee said:
Good write N. The mirror replied to KP \'You\'re looking more trout-like each day!\' lol.
September 6th, 2026 05:14
Reflection
sorenbarrett said:
It is those secondary thoughts bounced back phrases that rattle in the mind and are reflected back to another that provide opportunities at time. A fun read where the mirror uses the viewer as least as I see it. Nicely done Neville
September 6th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
It is those secondary thoughts bounced back phrases that rattle in the mind and are reflected back to another that provide opportunities at time. A fun read where the mirror uses the viewer as least as I see it. Nicely done Neville
September 6th, 2026 04:44
Angry River Song
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Neville, this is one hell of an elemental showdown. The mountain may have stature, but the river has patience…and that deeper contest between pride, endurance, and inevitable change gives this real bite. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Neville, this is one hell of an elemental showdown. The mountain may have stature, but the river has patience…and that deeper contest between pride, endurance, and inevitable change gives this real bite. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:08
Angry River Song
sorenbarrett said:
Persistence out does strength and size. And those canyons carved and eroded they too cut deep. A wonderful and most wise fable with great meaning my friend. A fave
September 5th, 2026 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Persistence out does strength and size. And those canyons carved and eroded they too cut deep. A wonderful and most wise fable with great meaning my friend. A fave
September 5th, 2026 12:14
Angry River Song
orchidee said:
Good write N. Since when was I perceptive?! lol.
September 5th, 2026 11:30
orchidee said:
Good write N. Since when was I perceptive?! lol.
September 5th, 2026 11:30
Angry River Song
Friendship said:
A strong poem, well written. Your poem contrasts the mountain\'s permanence and grandeur with the river\'s fluidity and dynamism, suggesting that pride and ego can be challenged and diminished by nature\'s relentless forces.
September 5th, 2026 10:31
Friendship said:
A strong poem, well written. Your poem contrasts the mountain\'s permanence and grandeur with the river\'s fluidity and dynamism, suggesting that pride and ego can be challenged and diminished by nature\'s relentless forces.
September 5th, 2026 10:31
Why Not Just Call Them Sundays
NafisaSB said:
wow- a great commentary on how Sunday came into being...!
September 4th, 2026 02:39
NafisaSB said:
wow- a great commentary on how Sunday came into being...!
September 4th, 2026 02:39
Streaming
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, what a quietly thoughtful piece. It carries such an easygoing voice while opening into something much larger…the endless movement of life itself. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 2nd, 2026 18:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, what a quietly thoughtful piece. It carries such an easygoing voice while opening into something much larger…the endless movement of life itself. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
September 2nd, 2026 18:03
Streaming
orchidee said:
It might have been me that said it....! lol. Good wite N.
September 2nd, 2026 02:28
orchidee said:
It might have been me that said it....! lol. Good wite N.
September 2nd, 2026 02:28
Streaming
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, I wrote about this as well a few years ago but staring with the clouds.
Andy
September 2nd, 2026 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, I wrote about this as well a few years ago but staring with the clouds.
Andy
September 2nd, 2026 01:07
Streaming
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Neville the first thing to mind now days was streaming off the net but I guess a net might be most useful when fishing. A lovely poem of recycling and nature is the best at that. Well done my friend
September 1st, 2026 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Neville the first thing to mind now days was streaming off the net but I guess a net might be most useful when fishing. A lovely poem of recycling and nature is the best at that. Well done my friend
September 1st, 2026 13:22
Why Not Just Call Them Sundays
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, I was gonna call it Sunday, but by the time I did, it was Monday! Doh! As you say, more cuckoo than a Bavarian cuckoo clock!
August 29th, 2026 11:44
orchidee said:
Good write N. Yes, I was gonna call it Sunday, but by the time I did, it was Monday! Doh! As you say, more cuckoo than a Bavarian cuckoo clock!
August 29th, 2026 11:44
Why Not Just Call Them Sundays
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich yarn - a mood piece I enjoyed very much, Neville.
August 29th, 2026 09:10
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich yarn - a mood piece I enjoyed very much, Neville.
August 29th, 2026 09:10
Why Not Just Call Them Sundays
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem intertwines themes of creation, spirituality, and human emotions, contrasting the grandeur of the cosmos with the personal and intimate aspects of human experience. The poet suggests that the universe\'s design is intentional and that there is an inherent connection between celestial bodies and human feelings.
August 29th, 2026 08:45
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem intertwines themes of creation, spirituality, and human emotions, contrasting the grandeur of the cosmos with the personal and intimate aspects of human experience. The poet suggests that the universe\'s design is intentional and that there is an inherent connection between celestial bodies and human feelings.
August 29th, 2026 08:45
Why Not Just Call Them Sundays
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a delightful reimagining of creation, Neville! The cosmic beauty carries genuine reverence, while the gentle humor gives God such warmth and personality. That closing turn brought it all home beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2026 07:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a delightful reimagining of creation, Neville! The cosmic beauty carries genuine reverence, while the gentle humor gives God such warmth and personality. That closing turn brought it all home beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 29th, 2026 07:59
Why Not Just Call Them Sundays
arqios said:
Our world can be explained through story, imagination and gentle humour; like a handmade universe, full of warmth, accidents, and purpose, ending with the creation of the day of rest. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 29th, 2026 06:23
arqios said:
Our world can be explained through story, imagination and gentle humour; like a handmade universe, full of warmth, accidents, and purpose, ending with the creation of the day of rest. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 29th, 2026 06:23
Why Not Just Call Them Sundays
sorenbarrett said:
Like all myths this one starts with the gods and with metaphoric brilliance paints a story that is easily understood by man. Poetically it shines with some great creativeness in the glue between night and day where the sun is no accident coming up each day on schedule and the moon is an accident sometimes appearing in the day. So poetically introduced. The stars as lanterns meant to be suns of their own blends modern celestial conceptions with ancient belief and the introduction of Eve and Adam was masterful that allowed the bringing in of the day of rest. How very Jewish and Christian of you my good friend. A most lovely story and a fave
August 29th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Like all myths this one starts with the gods and with metaphoric brilliance paints a story that is easily understood by man. Poetically it shines with some great creativeness in the glue between night and day where the sun is no accident coming up each day on schedule and the moon is an accident sometimes appearing in the day. So poetically introduced. The stars as lanterns meant to be suns of their own blends modern celestial conceptions with ancient belief and the introduction of Eve and Adam was masterful that allowed the bringing in of the day of rest. How very Jewish and Christian of you my good friend. A most lovely story and a fave
August 29th, 2026 04:01
The Damndest of Curses
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand, can identify, but I almost wish you hadn’t reminded me…
Nevertheless,
Thanks Neville.
August 22nd, 2026 02:37
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand, can identify, but I almost wish you hadn’t reminded me…
Nevertheless,
Thanks Neville.
August 22nd, 2026 02:37
The Damndest of Curses
arqios said:
Holding on to something precious after it has already begun slipping away reminds me of packed sand held tightly that it escapes through the gaps of the grasping hand. Such a strong poem here, N. 👍🏻🕊️😊
August 21st, 2026 20:17
arqios said:
Holding on to something precious after it has already begun slipping away reminds me of packed sand held tightly that it escapes through the gaps of the grasping hand. Such a strong poem here, N. 👍🏻🕊️😊
August 21st, 2026 20:17
The Damndest of Curses
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Neville...this carries such quiet desperation. The effort to preserve something precious only after it has begun slipping away is painfully human. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Damn, Neville...this carries such quiet desperation. The effort to preserve something precious only after it has begun slipping away is painfully human. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 21st, 2026 16:51
The Damndest of Curses
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this is wonderful the use of a run on sentence tying it to the next thought and the next works so well. I love the idea of memory loss causing the loss of all beautiful memories and its poetry. A fave
August 21st, 2026 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this is wonderful the use of a run on sentence tying it to the next thought and the next works so well. I love the idea of memory loss causing the loss of all beautiful memories and its poetry. A fave
August 21st, 2026 12:39
See Viewed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what caught me most is that balance between pose and ease. She feels completely aware of the picture she’s making without ever seeming stiff or manufactured. Nicely done, Neville. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what caught me most is that balance between pose and ease. She feels completely aware of the picture she’s making without ever seeming stiff or manufactured. Nicely done, Neville. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2026 19:55
See Viewed
sorenbarrett said:
A perfect picture a snapshot in words. Nicely formed Neville
August 13th, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
A perfect picture a snapshot in words. Nicely formed Neville
August 13th, 2026 13:03
Sometimes She Just Cries
Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet said:
Truth in a simply yet beautifully emerged
August 12th, 2026 14:29
Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet said:
Truth in a simply yet beautifully emerged
August 12th, 2026 14:29
Spring Cleaned
NafisaSB said:
A lovely way to bring in the fresh new season. Enjoyed the read👌💅
August 9th, 2026 13:33
NafisaSB said:
A lovely way to bring in the fresh new season. Enjoyed the read👌💅
August 9th, 2026 13:33
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