Comments received on poems by Neville
Trebrimar
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a beautiful spot. In Cornwall overlooking the sea. Very considerate of him to install a bench. Perhaps they still visit, in an unseen way.
It\'s sweltering here, and your poem made me travel to Cornwall, and it felt cooler, Thanks for that. - Phil A.
July 16th, 2024 12:10
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like a beautiful spot. In Cornwall overlooking the sea. Very considerate of him to install a bench. Perhaps they still visit, in an unseen way.
It\'s sweltering here, and your poem made me travel to Cornwall, and it felt cooler, Thanks for that. - Phil A.
July 16th, 2024 12:10
Trebrimar
Doggerel Dave said:
Google ducked out when it came to Trebrimar. Little matter...I\'ve encountered some interesting benches in odd places ....a bench way away in the Blue Mountains dedicated to someone I had some dealings with as an inpatient.... a long time ago...
July 16th, 2024 07:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Google ducked out when it came to Trebrimar. Little matter...I\'ve encountered some interesting benches in odd places ....a bench way away in the Blue Mountains dedicated to someone I had some dealings with as an inpatient.... a long time ago...
July 16th, 2024 07:36
What Else is A Metaphor
Doggerel Dave said:
Line one: I do, often.
Line Two: Now when I worked at Bletchley Park…. Sssh…
Line Three: Truth substitute.
Chuck a few more in and we could construct a cross(very)word, Neville.
July 15th, 2024 17:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Line one: I do, often.
Line Two: Now when I worked at Bletchley Park…. Sssh…
Line Three: Truth substitute.
Chuck a few more in and we could construct a cross(very)word, Neville.
July 15th, 2024 17:45
What Else is A Metaphor
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s for Mark Zuckerberg to get even richer. (Corny joke).
Three lines that say a lot, and one question without an answer. Good one. - Phil A.
July 15th, 2024 16:06
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s for Mark Zuckerberg to get even richer. (Corny joke).
Three lines that say a lot, and one question without an answer. Good one. - Phil A.
July 15th, 2024 16:06
What Else is A Metaphor
Tom Dylan said:
Very cryptic, mate, but has your usual style running through it. Nicely done, Neville.
July 15th, 2024 06:11
Tom Dylan said:
Very cryptic, mate, but has your usual style running through it. Nicely done, Neville.
July 15th, 2024 06:11
What Else is A Metaphor
orchidee said:
The vole is funny? Or that corny metaphor joke?!
July 15th, 2024 05:09
orchidee said:
The vole is funny? Or that corny metaphor joke?!
July 15th, 2024 05:09
What Else is A Metaphor
orchidee said:
I\'m a vole today - anagram of love. Another in those small critters category.
July 15th, 2024 03:31
orchidee said:
I\'m a vole today - anagram of love. Another in those small critters category.
July 15th, 2024 03:31
What Else is A Metaphor
orchidee said:
They ask me - Why did you meet-her- for - metaphor! (KP, that is). Not another corny joke from me. lol.
July 15th, 2024 03:30
orchidee said:
They ask me - Why did you meet-her- for - metaphor! (KP, that is). Not another corny joke from me. lol.
July 15th, 2024 03:30
Over Easy
Christina8 said:
An absolutely wonderful write, Neville.
I love that you asked the question as you were probably hungry for her either way....
July 14th, 2024 16:27
Christina8 said:
An absolutely wonderful write, Neville.
I love that you asked the question as you were probably hungry for her either way....
July 14th, 2024 16:27
Over Easy
Bella Shepard said:
Ooooo, You gave me a smile and then a chuckle. Such a witty double entendre, my complements to the chef.
July 14th, 2024 09:52
Bella Shepard said:
Ooooo, You gave me a smile and then a chuckle. Such a witty double entendre, my complements to the chef.
July 14th, 2024 09:52
The Way of Us
Cassie58 said:
In time we are a mote of dust, a pin prick in an ocean sky.
While we are here we are memory builders. If we are lucky some of those may remain after we have left this plane. A short poem which is brimful of wisdom and meaning.
July 14th, 2024 07:55
Cassie58 said:
In time we are a mote of dust, a pin prick in an ocean sky.
While we are here we are memory builders. If we are lucky some of those may remain after we have left this plane. A short poem which is brimful of wisdom and meaning.
July 14th, 2024 07:55
Over Easy
Doggerel Dave said:
Be prepared, that\'s the Girl Guide\'s marching song...
(Apologies to Tom Lehrer..)
July 14th, 2024 01:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Be prepared, that\'s the Girl Guide\'s marching song...
(Apologies to Tom Lehrer..)
July 14th, 2024 01:05
The Way of Us
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m a nothing speck in eternity or infinity. Unremembered, unremarkable. But I\'ve largely enjoyed this sliver of experience.
Thanks for this provocation, Neville.....
July 13th, 2024 17:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m a nothing speck in eternity or infinity. Unremembered, unremarkable. But I\'ve largely enjoyed this sliver of experience.
Thanks for this provocation, Neville.....
July 13th, 2024 17:17
The Way of Us
MendedFences27 said:
Someone\'s past, present, and future summed up in three lines. From full, to empty, to remembered. Insightful and wise. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
July 13th, 2024 15:37
MendedFences27 said:
Someone\'s past, present, and future summed up in three lines. From full, to empty, to remembered. Insightful and wise. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
July 13th, 2024 15:37
The Way of Us
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful words of wisdom N. Hindsight is always enlightening. 👍
July 13th, 2024 11:41
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful words of wisdom N. Hindsight is always enlightening. 👍
July 13th, 2024 11:41
The Way of Us
Christina8 said:
I liked this short write...memories are wonderful things too..
July 13th, 2024 11:31
Christina8 said:
I liked this short write...memories are wonderful things too..
July 13th, 2024 11:31
The Way of Us
Bella Shepard said:
The illusion of life is memory, without it we simply \"are\". This one hits a special spot, deeply felt. Great verse my friend!
July 13th, 2024 11:11
Bella Shepard said:
The illusion of life is memory, without it we simply \"are\". This one hits a special spot, deeply felt. Great verse my friend!
July 13th, 2024 11:11
For All Those Wearing Pink
Cassie58 said:
Very close to my heart. I count my blessings and am reminded of friends who weren’t so fortunate, and lost out to this awful disease. Your new anthology arrived from Amazon this morning. Yes, I have all eleven. Pleased to support such worthwhile charities Neville.
July 13th, 2024 10:34
Cassie58 said:
Very close to my heart. I count my blessings and am reminded of friends who weren’t so fortunate, and lost out to this awful disease. Your new anthology arrived from Amazon this morning. Yes, I have all eleven. Pleased to support such worthwhile charities Neville.
July 13th, 2024 10:34
The Way of Us
orchidee said:
How was it tomorrow? Eh? I\'m confused of what say it is. lol.
July 13th, 2024 10:23
orchidee said:
How was it tomorrow? Eh? I\'m confused of what say it is. lol.
July 13th, 2024 10:23
What Women Want
Doggerel Dave said:
Much poetry here Irrespective of gender is, in my not very humble opinion, deviant inasmuch as it avoids reality in all manner of ways. What after all is a metaphor other than an attempt to avoid, or make pretty, stark reality?
So take that, Sir!!!!!!!!!
July 12th, 2024 18:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Much poetry here Irrespective of gender is, in my not very humble opinion, deviant inasmuch as it avoids reality in all manner of ways. What after all is a metaphor other than an attempt to avoid, or make pretty, stark reality?
So take that, Sir!!!!!!!!!
July 12th, 2024 18:19
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