Comments received on poems by Neville
Late Harvest in Progress
arqios said:
Ah, isn\'t that always the case in that set of circumstances. Young love can\'t be told what to do or how to feel 🕊️🙏
May 16th, 2026 06:51
arqios said:
Ah, isn\'t that always the case in that set of circumstances. Young love can\'t be told what to do or how to feel 🕊️🙏
May 16th, 2026 06:51
While These Words May Not Be Perfect
sorenbarrett said:
A most tender love poem Neville. Well composed it starts with the dawn and nature stirring that seems to mimic the stirring of the human form just before awakening. The thought left for the sleeping is dream like and passes like a dream while still lingering in the mind. Well done my friend a fave
May 15th, 2026 13:28
sorenbarrett said:
A most tender love poem Neville. Well composed it starts with the dawn and nature stirring that seems to mimic the stirring of the human form just before awakening. The thought left for the sleeping is dream like and passes like a dream while still lingering in the mind. Well done my friend a fave
May 15th, 2026 13:28
While These Words May Not Be Perfect
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this has such a gentle dawn-lit tenderness to it. Sleepy foreheads, birds beginning their songs, whispered love before sunrise…it all creates a beautiful portrait of affection rooted in ordinary devotion. Lovely piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this has such a gentle dawn-lit tenderness to it. Sleepy foreheads, birds beginning their songs, whispered love before sunrise…it all creates a beautiful portrait of affection rooted in ordinary devotion. Lovely piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:46
While These Words May Not Be Perfect
orchidee said:
Ohhh, I expect they are perfect! lol.
May 15th, 2026 09:30
orchidee said:
Ohhh, I expect they are perfect! lol.
May 15th, 2026 09:30
Irony
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh @#&$!...Neville...Nev...my dude...this is brilliant in its restraint. The irony lands without needing to overexplain itself, and that final phrasing leaves the whole thing balancing between revelation and deception at the same time. So clean and effective, my friend. Honestly, one of my absolute faves of yours. If I could get this framed...I would. Do I have permission? 🤣 Poet credited! Seriously...this is brilliant, mate. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛
You know when I drop murder on you, it\'s ALL LOVE. 💕
May 11th, 2026 11:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh @#&$!...Neville...Nev...my dude...this is brilliant in its restraint. The irony lands without needing to overexplain itself, and that final phrasing leaves the whole thing balancing between revelation and deception at the same time. So clean and effective, my friend. Honestly, one of my absolute faves of yours. If I could get this framed...I would. Do I have permission? 🤣 Poet credited! Seriously...this is brilliant, mate. Well done, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛
You know when I drop murder on you, it\'s ALL LOVE. 💕
May 11th, 2026 11:14
Irony
Doggerel Dave said:
Heavy holy books may contain slim slivers of truth occasionally, when here in three short lines is a simple truth which did not require all that binding. Please read \'binding\' in whichever way feels most appropriate.
Thanks Neville.
May 10th, 2026 16:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Heavy holy books may contain slim slivers of truth occasionally, when here in three short lines is a simple truth which did not require all that binding. Please read \'binding\' in whichever way feels most appropriate.
Thanks Neville.
May 10th, 2026 16:55
Irony
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever my friend the word play makes it all. A fave
May 10th, 2026 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever my friend the word play makes it all. A fave
May 10th, 2026 09:33
Even More Things Remembered
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of loved ones are so profound Neville.
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of loved ones are so profound Neville.
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:51
Even More Things Remembered
Doggerel Dave said:
One wonders what exactly happened to make the sofa so distressed...
All Other considerations aside, have you managed to retain the golden hair in a Victorian style locket or other place of safekeeping?
You have, as is your wont, created a relationship out of very few words, Neville - great verse.
May 9th, 2026 20:54
Doggerel Dave said:
One wonders what exactly happened to make the sofa so distressed...
All Other considerations aside, have you managed to retain the golden hair in a Victorian style locket or other place of safekeeping?
You have, as is your wont, created a relationship out of very few words, Neville - great verse.
May 9th, 2026 20:54
Even More Things Remembered
arqios said:
Now that just brough back memories of beach blonde hair between the ages of 15-19... carefree days. A Fave 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:56
arqios said:
Now that just brough back memories of beach blonde hair between the ages of 15-19... carefree days. A Fave 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:56
Even More Things Remembered
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this feels deeply intimate and achingly tender…the kind of memory poem where every object becomes emotionally charged simply because a person once touched it. There’s real longing living inside these details. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this feels deeply intimate and achingly tender…the kind of memory poem where every object becomes emotionally charged simply because a person once touched it. There’s real longing living inside these details. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 9th, 2026 15:56
Even More Things Remembered
Friendship said:
Beautifully written, you made me think of my mom.🌹
May 9th, 2026 08:35
Friendship said:
Beautifully written, you made me think of my mom.🌹
May 9th, 2026 08:35
Even More Things Remembered
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Neville simply beautiful and that is all I can say. A fave
May 9th, 2026 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful Neville simply beautiful and that is all I can say. A fave
May 9th, 2026 07:13
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Goldfinch60 said:
\"love, honour, loyalty and compassion\" seem to have been cast adrift in much of our world Neville.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
\"love, honour, loyalty and compassion\" seem to have been cast adrift in much of our world Neville.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:47
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re you, birth to death, rascal or gentleman, and beloved by whom know to cherish you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2026 19:24
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re you, birth to death, rascal or gentleman, and beloved by whom know to cherish you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2026 19:24
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Poetic Dan said:
Unpredictable pattern that\'s repeated I feel as time goes on I quickly question the real fact I know nothing other than the actions I take! It\'s all been burning for a long time and I am just the mold of this point in creation. Nature will always live on! Above or under the sea! I think I\'ve drifted far from my original thoughts as there are endless rabbit holes to explore nowadays.
Anyway, enjoyed that. Keep sailing my friend
May 5th, 2026 14:50
Poetic Dan said:
Unpredictable pattern that\'s repeated I feel as time goes on I quickly question the real fact I know nothing other than the actions I take! It\'s all been burning for a long time and I am just the mold of this point in creation. Nature will always live on! Above or under the sea! I think I\'ve drifted far from my original thoughts as there are endless rabbit holes to explore nowadays.
Anyway, enjoyed that. Keep sailing my friend
May 5th, 2026 14:50
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, I’ve felt that kind of circling before…where things keep moving but nothing really settles. And then that shift into something bigger…something beyond just the self…hit close. You captured that tension well. Wonderfully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ in fact you get a whole murder of 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛
SIDE NOTE: Would you expect anything less from me other than a murder? Bwahahaha 😱 Just kidding of course, 🤣 but it does make me want to watch The Traitors or play Clue. Sigh. My apologies for this diversion.🤣 Great poem, mate!
May 5th, 2026 10:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, I’ve felt that kind of circling before…where things keep moving but nothing really settles. And then that shift into something bigger…something beyond just the self…hit close. You captured that tension well. Wonderfully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ in fact you get a whole murder of 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛
SIDE NOTE: Would you expect anything less from me other than a murder? Bwahahaha 😱 Just kidding of course, 🤣 but it does make me want to watch The Traitors or play Clue. Sigh. My apologies for this diversion.🤣 Great poem, mate!
May 5th, 2026 10:19
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a restless honesty here that feels lived-in, like someone watching their own mind from the edges and still telling the truth about it.
It drifts from the personal into the planetary in a way that feels heavy, grounded, and quietly human.
May 5th, 2026 07:36
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a restless honesty here that feels lived-in, like someone watching their own mind from the edges and still telling the truth about it.
It drifts from the personal into the planetary in a way that feels heavy, grounded, and quietly human.
May 5th, 2026 07:36
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Friendship said:
Well written, not sure if I got what you are saying. Your poem \"Four Quiet Seasons\" reflects on the cyclical nature of existence, comparing human behavior and the changing seasons to illustrate how individuals navigate life’s unpredictable journey. You seem to highlight the tension between nature’s resilience and humanity’s destructive tendencies, particularly driven by greed and a loss of empathy. You had me thinking about this poem.
May 5th, 2026 05:27
Friendship said:
Well written, not sure if I got what you are saying. Your poem \"Four Quiet Seasons\" reflects on the cyclical nature of existence, comparing human behavior and the changing seasons to illustrate how individuals navigate life’s unpredictable journey. You seem to highlight the tension between nature’s resilience and humanity’s destructive tendencies, particularly driven by greed and a loss of empathy. You had me thinking about this poem.
May 5th, 2026 05:27
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing to be challenged here, Neville, other than to remark that it is not ‘man’s’ or ‘us’ or ‘we’ but the increasing accumulation of wealth in fewer hands, the Mad Kings already referred to here and the self-serving acquiescence of enough interests to retain the status quo.
May 5th, 2026 04:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing to be challenged here, Neville, other than to remark that it is not ‘man’s’ or ‘us’ or ‘we’ but the increasing accumulation of wealth in fewer hands, the Mad Kings already referred to here and the self-serving acquiescence of enough interests to retain the status quo.
May 5th, 2026 04:42
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately seems tis true. Never the less tis also true that out there, there are a few good souls left. Good write Neville my friend
May 5th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately seems tis true. Never the less tis also true that out there, there are a few good souls left. Good write Neville my friend
May 5th, 2026 04:06
On a Road to Knossos
NafisaSB said:
you paint such a beautiful picture that one wants to visit it asap...a great write..
May 4th, 2026 23:47
NafisaSB said:
you paint such a beautiful picture that one wants to visit it asap...a great write..
May 4th, 2026 23:47
On a Road to Knossos
Poetic Dan said:
Been some time but glad to be taken into the unknown with your mind that glows.
May 3rd, 2026 01:12
Poetic Dan said:
Been some time but glad to be taken into the unknown with your mind that glows.
May 3rd, 2026 01:12
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