Comments received on poems by Neville
Tiny Blue Moments
Doggerel Dave said:
Slow and steady wins the race, but a year? Couldn\'t you have notched up your frequent flyer points at faster rate than that?
Really enjoyed the detail here, and I\'m going to seek out a blue vein (and in this instance only I don\'t mean cheese) whenever I get the chance...if ever...
April 26th, 2026 18:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Slow and steady wins the race, but a year? Couldn\'t you have notched up your frequent flyer points at faster rate than that?
Really enjoyed the detail here, and I\'m going to seek out a blue vein (and in this instance only I don\'t mean cheese) whenever I get the chance...if ever...
April 26th, 2026 18:36
Tiny Blue Moments
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, there’s a quiet intimacy running through this…built out of small moments that refuse to stay small. That thread of blue carries everything…memory, longing, and what’s left unsaid. By the end, it feels less like reflection and more like something still unfolding. Great job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, there’s a quiet intimacy running through this…built out of small moments that refuse to stay small. That thread of blue carries everything…memory, longing, and what’s left unsaid. By the end, it feels less like reflection and more like something still unfolding. Great job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:16
Tiny Blue Moments
sorenbarrett said:
This journey starts before its beginning and yet has no ending it is an ongoing trip still underway. Nicely written my friend
April 26th, 2026 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
This journey starts before its beginning and yet has no ending it is an ongoing trip still underway. Nicely written my friend
April 26th, 2026 06:22
Tiny Blue Moments
arqios said:
Something shared, breathed in and threaded through so beautifully 🕊️🙏
April 26th, 2026 06:11
arqios said:
Something shared, breathed in and threaded through so beautifully 🕊️🙏
April 26th, 2026 06:11
For a Child
sorenbarrett said:
A soft promise in a poem that seems a pledge as well. Nicely done my friend. Sorry for the delayed response I have been traveling for the past two days with no internet access
April 8th, 2026 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
A soft promise in a poem that seems a pledge as well. Nicely done my friend. Sorry for the delayed response I have been traveling for the past two days with no internet access
April 8th, 2026 15:40
For a Child
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Then they will live forever !
Nice one
April 8th, 2026 15:35
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Then they will live forever !
Nice one
April 8th, 2026 15:35
For a Child
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem centers on the profound love and commitment a speaker feels for a child, likely a lost or unborn one. The poet expresses a deep sense of responsibility to live fully and meaningfully in honor of this child, acknowledging the fragility of life. Yet you encompass themes of love, memory, loss, and the desire for legacy, suggesting an emotional bond that transcends mortality.
April 8th, 2026 15:20
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem centers on the profound love and commitment a speaker feels for a child, likely a lost or unborn one. The poet expresses a deep sense of responsibility to live fully and meaningfully in honor of this child, acknowledging the fragility of life. Yet you encompass themes of love, memory, loss, and the desire for legacy, suggesting an emotional bond that transcends mortality.
April 8th, 2026 15:20
For a Child
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this really lands…that quiet vow to carry forward, especially in that promise to live those tomorrows on their behalf. It feels intimate and enduring without needing to name more. There’s something deeply moving in that. Beautiful write, my friend. And oooh. A new anthology in the works. Yesss!!! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this really lands…that quiet vow to carry forward, especially in that promise to live those tomorrows on their behalf. It feels intimate and enduring without needing to name more. There’s something deeply moving in that. Beautiful write, my friend. And oooh. A new anthology in the works. Yesss!!! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 08:14
For a Child
Katie B. said:
Wow! This is heavy and heart-felt. It is a testimony to the enduring power of love. May peace be with you.
April 8th, 2026 04:43
Katie B. said:
Wow! This is heavy and heart-felt. It is a testimony to the enduring power of love. May peace be with you.
April 8th, 2026 04:43
The Impact of Sudden Unexpected Realisation
NafisaSB said:
🤩 wow. The fragility of fleeting time is well documented
April 7th, 2026 03:24
NafisaSB said:
🤩 wow. The fragility of fleeting time is well documented
April 7th, 2026 03:24
If
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
...and, What if?
less said the better
Perfect mind thunkfulness Neville
April 6th, 2026 05:34
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
...and, What if?
less said the better
Perfect mind thunkfulness Neville
April 6th, 2026 05:34
The Impact of Sudden Unexpected Realisation
Goldfinch60 said:
Time will never stop Neville and it will bring so many things to us.
Andy
April 6th, 2026 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Time will never stop Neville and it will bring so many things to us.
Andy
April 6th, 2026 01:17
The Impact of Sudden Unexpected Realisation
arqios said:
...that is does, N. Hope you\'re okay. We are right here with you. 🙏🕊️
April 5th, 2026 18:19
arqios said:
...that is does, N. Hope you\'re okay. We are right here with you. 🙏🕊️
April 5th, 2026 18:19
The Impact of Sudden Unexpected Realisation
Doggerel Dave said:
Recollections: thought appears unbidden.. new link forged to further memory and... Been there, so very familiar - different thoughts different links, same dynamic...yes, so very familiar...
April 5th, 2026 17:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Recollections: thought appears unbidden.. new link forged to further memory and... Been there, so very familiar - different thoughts different links, same dynamic...yes, so very familiar...
April 5th, 2026 17:23
The Impact of Sudden Unexpected Realisation
MendedFences27 said:
Those \"time drops\" will eventually move in to stay. With each one comes a memory. The history of one\'s life will be written in the creams and ointments applied to dull the pain or pills swallowed to keep the body whole. It tastes bittersweet, passionate memories and troublesome regrets. They call it life. Eventually time wins out and we all pay the price. Your poem definitely has an impact of time catching up with a fully lived life. - Phil A
April 5th, 2026 11:27
MendedFences27 said:
Those \"time drops\" will eventually move in to stay. With each one comes a memory. The history of one\'s life will be written in the creams and ointments applied to dull the pain or pills swallowed to keep the body whole. It tastes bittersweet, passionate memories and troublesome regrets. They call it life. Eventually time wins out and we all pay the price. Your poem definitely has an impact of time catching up with a fully lived life. - Phil A
April 5th, 2026 11:27
The Impact of Sudden Unexpected Realisation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, those “time drop visitations”…that image sticks. It gives time a physical presence, something that arrives and leaves a mark. That’s what anchors it. Beautifully done on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, those “time drop visitations”…that image sticks. It gives time a physical presence, something that arrives and leaves a mark. That’s what anchors it. Beautifully done on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 5th, 2026 10:40
The Impact of Sudden Unexpected Realisation
Thomas W Case said:
Time hits like a fist wrapped in memory—bitter, vivid, and unrelenting.
Your words carry the weight of both regret and quiet revelation.
April 5th, 2026 09:39
Thomas W Case said:
Time hits like a fist wrapped in memory—bitter, vivid, and unrelenting.
Your words carry the weight of both regret and quiet revelation.
April 5th, 2026 09:39
The Impact of Sudden Unexpected Realisation
sorenbarrett said:
This poem like a free association runs from one thing to the next flowing ever downward as water pulled by the gravity that draws it to its mother sea. Nice Neville
April 5th, 2026 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
This poem like a free association runs from one thing to the next flowing ever downward as water pulled by the gravity that draws it to its mother sea. Nice Neville
April 5th, 2026 07:13
The Principle of Sameness
arqios said:
The sameness is the thing often overlooked or totally ignored, to our detriment. 🕊️🙏
March 31st, 2026 16:00
arqios said:
The sameness is the thing often overlooked or totally ignored, to our detriment. 🕊️🙏
March 31st, 2026 16:00
The Principle of Sameness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet unease running through it that doesn’t let go. It feels watchful…like something just out of sight but never gone. That closing turn lands with a kind of weary knowing. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 31st, 2026 09:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet unease running through it that doesn’t let go. It feels watchful…like something just out of sight but never gone. That closing turn lands with a kind of weary knowing. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 31st, 2026 09:28
The Principle of Sameness
Thomas W Case said:
Fine work, my friend. Silent, sly, and patient—they move in the shadows while the world blinks.
A whisper can cut sharper than a scream when the same old dance repeats.
March 31st, 2026 07:34
Thomas W Case said:
Fine work, my friend. Silent, sly, and patient—they move in the shadows while the world blinks.
A whisper can cut sharper than a scream when the same old dance repeats.
March 31st, 2026 07:34
The Principle of Sameness
Goldfinch60 said:
That sameness arises on many occasions Neville.
Andy
March 31st, 2026 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
That sameness arises on many occasions Neville.
Andy
March 31st, 2026 01:40
The Principle of Sameness
Doggerel Dave said:
Precisely where the power lies. In many ways untouchable. Politicians are such clowns by comparison. The clowns at the circus, in fact. In a nutshell, Neville.
March 30th, 2026 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Precisely where the power lies. In many ways untouchable. Politicians are such clowns by comparison. The clowns at the circus, in fact. In a nutshell, Neville.
March 30th, 2026 18:10
The Principle of Sameness
sorenbarrett said:
They are always there but unseen. A lovely write that gives me deja vu feels.
March 30th, 2026 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
They are always there but unseen. A lovely write that gives me deja vu feels.
March 30th, 2026 15:17
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