Comments received on poems by Neville
Why Nothing Falls Together
orchidee said:
KP only shed tears cos she had run out of money for botox! lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:57
orchidee said:
KP only shed tears cos she had run out of money for botox! lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:57
With Only Nine Trees Left
orchidee said:
And KP\'s no help either. She\'s got 8 of those 9 trees in her garden! I\'m becoming nuttier than a............!
October 23rd, 2025 13:56
orchidee said:
And KP\'s no help either. She\'s got 8 of those 9 trees in her garden! I\'m becoming nuttier than a............!
October 23rd, 2025 13:56
With Only Nine Trees Left
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, mankind is destroying our world and so few in power seem to care.
Andy
October 23rd, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, mankind is destroying our world and so few in power seem to care.
Andy
October 23rd, 2025 01:26
With Only Nine Trees Left
sorenbarrett said:
Mother earth abused, used, left ravished and broken by its children. An error in evolution coming to a dead end. Maybe with time Gaea will spawn a better species to resurrect a dying earth. Nicely done my friend
October 22nd, 2025 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
Mother earth abused, used, left ravished and broken by its children. An error in evolution coming to a dead end. Maybe with time Gaea will spawn a better species to resurrect a dying earth. Nicely done my friend
October 22nd, 2025 08:30
Why Nothing Falls Together
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of fleeting time can bring so much emotion to us Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2025 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of fleeting time can bring so much emotion to us Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2025 01:11
Why Nothing Falls Together
jarcher54 said:
All I can say is, you made me cry. I can\'t even explain why. Poetry I guess...
October 22nd, 2025 00:01
jarcher54 said:
All I can say is, you made me cry. I can\'t even explain why. Poetry I guess...
October 22nd, 2025 00:01
Why Nothing Falls Together
Doggerel Dave said:
Fragmented memories recollected in tranquility well captured here - I know, I have them and they aren\'t so very different beyond minor particular details...Enjoyed, Neville.
October 21st, 2025 19:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Fragmented memories recollected in tranquility well captured here - I know, I have them and they aren\'t so very different beyond minor particular details...Enjoyed, Neville.
October 21st, 2025 19:44
Why Nothing Falls Together
orchidee said:
Of course, my life fell apart the day I married KP! lol. But you knew that - yes?
October 21st, 2025 14:05
orchidee said:
Of course, my life fell apart the day I married KP! lol. But you knew that - yes?
October 21st, 2025 14:05
Why Nothing Falls Together
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That phrase...“a union occurs somewhere between my memories, perceptions and our collective unconscious”...is stunning. You blur philosophy and emotion until they fuse. I loved every bit of this, my dear Neville! Well done and a fave, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 21st, 2025 07:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That phrase...“a union occurs somewhere between my memories, perceptions and our collective unconscious”...is stunning. You blur philosophy and emotion until they fuse. I loved every bit of this, my dear Neville! Well done and a fave, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 21st, 2025 07:22
Why Nothing Falls Together
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so charged with quiet feeling for any that have experienced it that it can not help but be poetic and a fave. Well written my friend
October 21st, 2025 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so charged with quiet feeling for any that have experienced it that it can not help but be poetic and a fave. Well written my friend
October 21st, 2025 06:56
With No Hint of An End
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful romantic words Neville, may they have some truth in them.
Andy
October 18th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful romantic words Neville, may they have some truth in them.
Andy
October 18th, 2025 01:48
With No Hint of An End
Doggerel Dave said:
Sweet nothings (them words - I\'ll have \'em, please!) pleasant afternoon, no hint of Sturm und Drang . Yet after the final line you are (your comments) getting rather cagey....
Enjoyed the trip though, Neville.
October 17th, 2025 17:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Sweet nothings (them words - I\'ll have \'em, please!) pleasant afternoon, no hint of Sturm und Drang . Yet after the final line you are (your comments) getting rather cagey....
Enjoyed the trip though, Neville.
October 17th, 2025 17:02
With No Hint of An End
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this reads like seafoam…each image drifting, circling, refusing an end. “Be light as green lacewings wings”...that’s poetry at its most tactile. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ In fact. 🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐦⬛ and I had to throw a crow in too! 🤷♂️🤣
October 17th, 2025 10:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this reads like seafoam…each image drifting, circling, refusing an end. “Be light as green lacewings wings”...that’s poetry at its most tactile. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ In fact. 🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐦⬛ and I had to throw a crow in too! 🤷♂️🤣
October 17th, 2025 10:55
With No Hint of An End
Poetic Licence said:
Wow that is simply a beautiful write, has such an intimate, tender and calming feel to it, a real pleasure to read
October 17th, 2025 09:55
Poetic Licence said:
Wow that is simply a beautiful write, has such an intimate, tender and calming feel to it, a real pleasure to read
October 17th, 2025 09:55
With No Hint of An End
arqios said:
Amazing how this poem loops back on itself, Neville. How the imagery of sea, wind, and harbour makes the intimacy feel timeless, like words and love circling forever with no beginning or end. It’s lush, sensual, and dreamlike. 🙏🕊️
October 17th, 2025 08:13
arqios said:
Amazing how this poem loops back on itself, Neville. How the imagery of sea, wind, and harbour makes the intimacy feel timeless, like words and love circling forever with no beginning or end. It’s lush, sensual, and dreamlike. 🙏🕊️
October 17th, 2025 08:13
With No Hint of An End
sorenbarrett said:
Romance tis grand and love grander still. As in the poem there is no beginning, middle or end to love that bounces within and out its shell nor are there words that do it justice. With any good fortune we will all live within that harbor of peace with the sea and the breezes on lacewings forever green and young for love has no age and with it time has no effect. A lovely poem Neville
October 17th, 2025 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
Romance tis grand and love grander still. As in the poem there is no beginning, middle or end to love that bounces within and out its shell nor are there words that do it justice. With any good fortune we will all live within that harbor of peace with the sea and the breezes on lacewings forever green and young for love has no age and with it time has no effect. A lovely poem Neville
October 17th, 2025 07:34
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
Neil Higgins said:
Neville.Great poem my friend.And,er,yes.I am back 😱
October 16th, 2025 05:58
Neil Higgins said:
Neville.Great poem my friend.And,er,yes.I am back 😱
October 16th, 2025 05:58
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is smart, intimate writing…wordplay and desire folding into one rhythm. You turn misunderstanding into connection, and that’s its own kind of poetry. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is smart, intimate writing…wordplay and desire folding into one rhythm. You turn misunderstanding into connection, and that’s its own kind of poetry. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:00
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a juxta like ya can beat an egg? And what am I on about? You\'re rambling again, says Fido to me! lol.
October 14th, 2025 01:59
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a juxta like ya can beat an egg? And what am I on about? You\'re rambling again, says Fido to me! lol.
October 14th, 2025 01:59
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
Doggerel Dave said:
Connotations mean a lot.......... cor, fergit poetry, that could almost be the start of a song.... did use the term \'almost\'....
Advice to get out more duly noted, Neville.....
October 13th, 2025 17:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Connotations mean a lot.......... cor, fergit poetry, that could almost be the start of a song.... did use the term \'almost\'....
Advice to get out more duly noted, Neville.....
October 13th, 2025 17:02
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a certain charm that speaks to the realities of life and how things as simple as a different word can create a wedge. Such a perfect title and term. Lovely my friend and a fave
October 13th, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a certain charm that speaks to the realities of life and how things as simple as a different word can create a wedge. Such a perfect title and term. Lovely my friend and a fave
October 13th, 2025 13:30
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
Friendship said:
Your poem illustrates how language and perception can create a distance between people, leading to misunderstandings and a sense of loss in translation.
October 13th, 2025 12:57
Friendship said:
Your poem illustrates how language and perception can create a distance between people, leading to misunderstandings and a sense of loss in translation.
October 13th, 2025 12:57
Sometimes She Just Cries
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I would love to know how you thought of “when she really means
don’t let go ..\"? Devastatingly simple yet conveying a wagon full payload. The magic touch of a magician
October 12th, 2025 06:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I would love to know how you thought of “when she really means
don’t let go ..\"? Devastatingly simple yet conveying a wagon full payload. The magic touch of a magician
October 12th, 2025 06:39
Sometimes She Just Cries
NafisaSB said:
Many a time a lady has been known to do just this🤐you have wrapped it up well
October 11th, 2025 03:50
NafisaSB said:
Many a time a lady has been known to do just this🤐you have wrapped it up well
October 11th, 2025 03:50
Sometimes She Just Cries
Poetic Licence said:
I think this hits a nerve for more people then they would care to admit, it certainly has many elements that i have encountered in a relationship coming from both sides. A write that makes you have a think and that is a good thing.
October 10th, 2025 13:35
Poetic Licence said:
I think this hits a nerve for more people then they would care to admit, it certainly has many elements that i have encountered in a relationship coming from both sides. A write that makes you have a think and that is a good thing.
October 10th, 2025 13:35
Breakfast in Krakow
Poetic Licence said:
Hi , Neville first to say i hope all is well with you?. i enjoyed the read, sitting in beautiful places surrounded by beautiful woman does trigger the memory to days gone by.
I have sat in Krakow and admired the views myself, especially the beautiful church, take care
October 10th, 2025 13:29
Poetic Licence said:
Hi , Neville first to say i hope all is well with you?. i enjoyed the read, sitting in beautiful places surrounded by beautiful woman does trigger the memory to days gone by.
I have sat in Krakow and admired the views myself, especially the beautiful church, take care
October 10th, 2025 13:29
Sometimes She Just Cries
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps Neville but not in my case.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps Neville but not in my case.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:48
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