Comments received on poems by Neville
Sucker Punched
Christina8 said:
Ow, guess you\'ve learned a lesson there....very good write!
June 7th, 2024 09:28
Christina8 said:
Ow, guess you\'ve learned a lesson there....very good write!
June 7th, 2024 09:28
The Breaking In of A New Summers Day
Goldfinch60 said:
May each day be filled with love and harmony Neville.
Andy
June 7th, 2024 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
May each day be filled with love and harmony Neville.
Andy
June 7th, 2024 01:15
The Breaking In of A New Summers Day
Cassie58 said:
As night slides into a brand new day. You paint a canvas here of both shadow and light. I saw wet cobblestones and amber lights before the rising of the sun. I saw closed doors and tasted sea salt. You create a familiar ambience of a fishing town. So visual.
June 6th, 2024 11:20
Cassie58 said:
As night slides into a brand new day. You paint a canvas here of both shadow and light. I saw wet cobblestones and amber lights before the rising of the sun. I saw closed doors and tasted sea salt. You create a familiar ambience of a fishing town. So visual.
June 6th, 2024 11:20
The Breaking In of A New Summers Day
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. You paint this scene well. Great work.
June 6th, 2024 07:35
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. You paint this scene well. Great work.
June 6th, 2024 07:35
The Breaking In of A New Summers Day
Bobby O said:
My friend, I really really like this one. The juxtaposition , the Yin Yang of all , have a starring role. It seems that you say to us that if we just wait, we get to taste both , live for a time in each , and that’s ok , for the completeness defines an authentic world , no matter how we fall on any specific day. The spectral harrier that is without judgement , the night insists not only a shadow upon all but also demands to hand the baton to create next whether it’s our chance to claim joy or be in line waiting to be hanged the inevitability of next is the dynamic reward.
June 6th, 2024 05:05
Bobby O said:
My friend, I really really like this one. The juxtaposition , the Yin Yang of all , have a starring role. It seems that you say to us that if we just wait, we get to taste both , live for a time in each , and that’s ok , for the completeness defines an authentic world , no matter how we fall on any specific day. The spectral harrier that is without judgement , the night insists not only a shadow upon all but also demands to hand the baton to create next whether it’s our chance to claim joy or be in line waiting to be hanged the inevitability of next is the dynamic reward.
June 6th, 2024 05:05
The Breaking In of A New Summers Day
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
My poem goes - and then KP awoke to a new day - summer or whatever season - and asked for more money from me for botox! lol.
June 6th, 2024 01:50
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
My poem goes - and then KP awoke to a new day - summer or whatever season - and asked for more money from me for botox! lol.
June 6th, 2024 01:50
Excess Baggage
Goldfinch60 said:
That hold must be emptied and good things put in it Neville.
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
That hold must be emptied and good things put in it Neville.
Andy
June 6th, 2024 01:39
Excess Baggage
orchidee said:
You know the excess baggage KP has now - it\'s on her person. A word starting with B. Rhymes with \'clocks\'. lol.
June 5th, 2024 02:13
orchidee said:
You know the excess baggage KP has now - it\'s on her person. A word starting with B. Rhymes with \'clocks\'. lol.
June 5th, 2024 02:13
Excess Baggage
Doggerel Dave said:
You are going to have to book her in for a whole series of consultations, Doc.
June 5th, 2024 01:52
Doggerel Dave said:
You are going to have to book her in for a whole series of consultations, Doc.
June 5th, 2024 01:52
Excess Baggage
2781 said:
Lucky for me I didn\'t make the first comment-as usual I was off coarse.
June 5th, 2024 01:40
2781 said:
Lucky for me I didn\'t make the first comment-as usual I was off coarse.
June 5th, 2024 01:40
Excess Baggage
Alan R said:
Damn straight you describe the struggle really well, I read it in the context of a fresh trauma....
June 5th, 2024 01:18
Alan R said:
Damn straight you describe the struggle really well, I read it in the context of a fresh trauma....
June 5th, 2024 01:18
Holocaust
Doggerel Dave said:
Australia, \'\"a harmonious multicultural country\" has its moments of trauma when hostilities break out in other parts of the world. University campuses, given the Israel/Hamas Gaza war are not places anyone could be comfortable with.
As for your title and and the sadness embodied there..... History is full of lies which refuse to be refuted, not only truths.
June 4th, 2024 20:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Australia, \'\"a harmonious multicultural country\" has its moments of trauma when hostilities break out in other parts of the world. University campuses, given the Israel/Hamas Gaza war are not places anyone could be comfortable with.
As for your title and and the sadness embodied there..... History is full of lies which refuse to be refuted, not only truths.
June 4th, 2024 20:43
Holocaust
orchidee said:
There\'s the chance of forgiveness for everyone, but who could possibly say the death penalty was not right for Nazi murderers? All evil ones day will come - sooner or later.
Old Testament times were harsh - a life for a life - or should that be \'fair\', not \'harsh\'?
Meanwhile KP says - a botox for a botox. She says not much else! lol.
June 4th, 2024 09:43
orchidee said:
There\'s the chance of forgiveness for everyone, but who could possibly say the death penalty was not right for Nazi murderers? All evil ones day will come - sooner or later.
Old Testament times were harsh - a life for a life - or should that be \'fair\', not \'harsh\'?
Meanwhile KP says - a botox for a botox. She says not much else! lol.
June 4th, 2024 09:43
Eleven and A Half Minutes
orchidee said:
Reminds more of that silent piece 4 mins 33 seconds.
You wish I wouldn\'t sing for 11 and half minutes each day? That would be a start to stop me singing! lol.
June 4th, 2024 01:36
orchidee said:
Reminds more of that silent piece 4 mins 33 seconds.
You wish I wouldn\'t sing for 11 and half minutes each day? That would be a start to stop me singing! lol.
June 4th, 2024 01:36
Eleven and A Half Minutes
Cassie58 said:
An outpouring of love and an apology for the silent years. And prayers too for healing. Sounds like a reconciliation.of lovers and the title must be of special significance. Love over conflict , satisfaction for the heart and soul. Words of adoration. Very nicely expressed Neville.
June 3rd, 2024 23:14
Cassie58 said:
An outpouring of love and an apology for the silent years. And prayers too for healing. Sounds like a reconciliation.of lovers and the title must be of special significance. Love over conflict , satisfaction for the heart and soul. Words of adoration. Very nicely expressed Neville.
June 3rd, 2024 23:14
Eleven and A Half Minutes
Doggerel Dave said:
So a memoir (with this dedication) is on its way, is it, Neville?
June 3rd, 2024 21:21
Doggerel Dave said:
So a memoir (with this dedication) is on its way, is it, Neville?
June 3rd, 2024 21:21
Eleven and A Half Minutes
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing like a man who comes straight to the point. 😉👍
June 3rd, 2024 16:52
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing like a man who comes straight to the point. 😉👍
June 3rd, 2024 16:52
Different Measures
Thomas W Case said:
You bring home the fact that our time is limited. Carpe Diem brother. Great work.
June 3rd, 2024 04:15
Thomas W Case said:
You bring home the fact that our time is limited. Carpe Diem brother. Great work.
June 3rd, 2024 04:15
Different Measures
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned N. Time, distance and love may well heal the heart, but none the less lonely. 🌹
June 3rd, 2024 03:12
Accidental Poet said:
Well penned N. Time, distance and love may well heal the heart, but none the less lonely. 🌹
June 3rd, 2024 03:12
Different Measures
Goldfinch60 said:
Times and distances are all relative Neville and in reality we can chose to be close,
Andy
June 3rd, 2024 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Times and distances are all relative Neville and in reality we can chose to be close,
Andy
June 3rd, 2024 01:55
Different Measures
Doggerel Dave said:
Time and distance are quite different in a Newtonian world, aren\'t they....But what of beyond? I\'m well on my way to personally find out.....perhaps!!!
June 2nd, 2024 17:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Time and distance are quite different in a Newtonian world, aren\'t they....But what of beyond? I\'m well on my way to personally find out.....perhaps!!!
June 2nd, 2024 17:52
Different Measures
MendedFences27 said:
All those \"different times\" and \"distant\" places become \"shams\" as we age and face the end of reality Very powerful words well-spoken and laden with wisdom.\" Loved it. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2024 16:02
MendedFences27 said:
All those \"different times\" and \"distant\" places become \"shams\" as we age and face the end of reality Very powerful words well-spoken and laden with wisdom.\" Loved it. - Phil A.
June 2nd, 2024 16:02
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