Comments received on poems by Neville
Hidden in Sight
teardrop said:
I like this...alot. Short and yet, effective. Doesn\'t need to say more...the point is in the words you wrote.
December 6th, 2024 05:50
teardrop said:
I like this...alot. Short and yet, effective. Doesn\'t need to say more...the point is in the words you wrote.
December 6th, 2024 05:50
Hidden in Sight
sorenbarrett said:
Absolutely beautiful!! A lovely short that has more impact on the reader that is open to it. Like a piece of gold lying in the street, overlooked by many it glimmers in the sun for those whose eye is open to it.
December 6th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
Absolutely beautiful!! A lovely short that has more impact on the reader that is open to it. Like a piece of gold lying in the street, overlooked by many it glimmers in the sun for those whose eye is open to it.
December 6th, 2024 05:26
Hidden in Sight
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! 🤯 Obviously and intentionally open to interpretation and the discovery of oneself in the process. True of any prosaic or poetic collection of words, really. But wow! Profound! Love this. 🌹👏
December 6th, 2024 03:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! 🤯 Obviously and intentionally open to interpretation and the discovery of oneself in the process. True of any prosaic or poetic collection of words, really. But wow! Profound! Love this. 🌹👏
December 6th, 2024 03:15
Hidden in Sight
orchidee said:
I hardly get the true meaning(s) of cryptic-type poems. Doh!
December 6th, 2024 03:04
orchidee said:
I hardly get the true meaning(s) of cryptic-type poems. Doh!
December 6th, 2024 03:04
Watched
Goldfinch60 said:
Those distant images are worth while enhancing Neville.
Andy
December 6th, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Those distant images are worth while enhancing Neville.
Andy
December 6th, 2024 02:21
Watched
Doggerel Dave said:
Ornithologists should always obtain the best equipment they can afford. Twitching is big in Australia where sightings of rare species can cause massive attention...
December 5th, 2024 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Ornithologists should always obtain the best equipment they can afford. Twitching is big in Australia where sightings of rare species can cause massive attention...
December 5th, 2024 19:09
Watched
MendedFences27 said:
The beauty of a woman is a powerful attraction. So powerful, that we are tempted to watch even in-appropriately. Your poem tells of this attraction in a devilish but delightful way. - Phil A.
December 5th, 2024 13:40
MendedFences27 said:
The beauty of a woman is a powerful attraction. So powerful, that we are tempted to watch even in-appropriately. Your poem tells of this attraction in a devilish but delightful way. - Phil A.
December 5th, 2024 13:40
Watched
orchidee said:
If any try to voyeur KP they get a nasty shock, and may never recover from it! lol.
December 5th, 2024 08:32
orchidee said:
If any try to voyeur KP they get a nasty shock, and may never recover from it! lol.
December 5th, 2024 08:32
Watched
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, the voyeurs lament! When the tools 🔭 we have don\'t suffice! Enjoyed this one, Neville...as I do your poetry! Well done, friend!
December 5th, 2024 08:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, the voyeurs lament! When the tools 🔭 we have don\'t suffice! Enjoyed this one, Neville...as I do your poetry! Well done, friend!
December 5th, 2024 08:21
Watched
TobaniNataiella said:
Never have the right tool when we need it, Enjoyed the read
December 5th, 2024 07:43
TobaniNataiella said:
Never have the right tool when we need it, Enjoyed the read
December 5th, 2024 07:43
Watched
arqios said:
Voyeuristic longing amplified! And bettering one’s equipment indicates that even the most dedicated observers need the right tools to truly appreciate the finer details.
December 5th, 2024 06:54
arqios said:
Voyeuristic longing amplified! And bettering one’s equipment indicates that even the most dedicated observers need the right tools to truly appreciate the finer details.
December 5th, 2024 06:54
Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Cheeky Missy said:
Not planning none too covertly to kick the proverbial bucket any time prematurely in the near future, are we, Sir?! Madam Tussaud\'s could just as well suffice, couldn\'t she now, for thee? It\'s just that I\'m none too keen on dispensing with you any time soon, I guess. Excellently rendered with grand imagery in charming good humor with unusually haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 5th, 2024 02:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Not planning none too covertly to kick the proverbial bucket any time prematurely in the near future, are we, Sir?! Madam Tussaud\'s could just as well suffice, couldn\'t she now, for thee? It\'s just that I\'m none too keen on dispensing with you any time soon, I guess. Excellently rendered with grand imagery in charming good humor with unusually haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 5th, 2024 02:12
Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Goldfinch60 said:
You are not going to have your last shave yet Neville, life is too precious.
Andy
December 5th, 2024 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
You are not going to have your last shave yet Neville, life is too precious.
Andy
December 5th, 2024 02:03
Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Jerry Reynolds said:
My sentements exactly, Neville.
December 4th, 2024 16:08
Jerry Reynolds said:
My sentements exactly, Neville.
December 4th, 2024 16:08
Shanty
Cassie58 said:
Hooray and up she rises, love a good sea shanty. You got one here Neville. A saucy sea shanty with plenty of salt. You’ve got a thumbs up for this one:)
December 4th, 2024 15:16
Cassie58 said:
Hooray and up she rises, love a good sea shanty. You got one here Neville. A saucy sea shanty with plenty of salt. You’ve got a thumbs up for this one:)
December 4th, 2024 15:16
Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Cassie58 said:
Oh my oh my how bloomin dark can you get 🙂. I knew about mirrors but not about razors. Only you dear Neville can come up with a poem like this 😀
December 4th, 2024 14:57
Cassie58 said:
Oh my oh my how bloomin dark can you get 🙂. I knew about mirrors but not about razors. Only you dear Neville can come up with a poem like this 😀
December 4th, 2024 14:57
Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As a guy who does a whole lot of shaving, completely bald on my head am I (because I am going to be bald on my terms 🤣 and bald is beautiful 🤣)...I have been to have my head shaved by someone else with a straight blade, which is what got me eventually shaving my own head. But when one does knick the head...oh...does the blood run! LOL! Anyway, that is neither here nor there, but I thoroughly enjoyed this poem as I do a good shave Well done, friend! 👏
December 4th, 2024 11:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As a guy who does a whole lot of shaving, completely bald on my head am I (because I am going to be bald on my terms 🤣 and bald is beautiful 🤣)...I have been to have my head shaved by someone else with a straight blade, which is what got me eventually shaving my own head. But when one does knick the head...oh...does the blood run! LOL! Anyway, that is neither here nor there, but I thoroughly enjoyed this poem as I do a good shave Well done, friend! 👏
December 4th, 2024 11:22
Close Shaves and Final Cuts
Doggerel Dave said:
Regarding the above: Involved in a tour of a morgue once. In passing the mortuary fridge room, noted on door some wag had marked:
“Rooms available: Cool in summer, Quiet Neighbors”
December 4th, 2024 06:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Regarding the above: Involved in a tour of a morgue once. In passing the mortuary fridge room, noted on door some wag had marked:
“Rooms available: Cool in summer, Quiet Neighbors”
December 4th, 2024 06:29
Close Shaves and Final Cuts
sorenbarrett said:
Neville. Now this is something that I hadn’t thought about. Since you have brought it up though, I want a straight razor shave and that it’s the most satisfying. I like the ending of this point maybe if I pretend to be dead I can get a free shave
December 4th, 2024 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
Neville. Now this is something that I hadn’t thought about. Since you have brought it up though, I want a straight razor shave and that it’s the most satisfying. I like the ending of this point maybe if I pretend to be dead I can get a free shave
December 4th, 2024 05:21
Close Shaves and Final Cuts
arqios said:
They used to put a mirror close to the nose just to check but a razor check would be good too!
December 4th, 2024 05:11
arqios said:
They used to put a mirror close to the nose just to check but a razor check would be good too!
December 4th, 2024 05:11
Close Shaves and Final Cuts
orchidee said:
KP knew I wanted to end it all with a razor, but she has bought me a battery-operated one without batteries. Doh! She insists I must stay to support her with money for botox. lol.
December 4th, 2024 03:07
orchidee said:
KP knew I wanted to end it all with a razor, but she has bought me a battery-operated one without batteries. Doh! She insists I must stay to support her with money for botox. lol.
December 4th, 2024 03:07
Shanty
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Neville, Mary and I sing in a Sea Shanty Group.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Neville, Mary and I sing in a Sea Shanty Group.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:55
Shanty
Doggerel Dave said:
Heave ho me hearties…. They heaved hard enough to pull your format out of shape…
Love their regular rhythms and can even sing, or rather roar along…
Spirit well captured, Neville. More whisky at the bar....👍
December 3rd, 2024 17:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Heave ho me hearties…. They heaved hard enough to pull your format out of shape…
Love their regular rhythms and can even sing, or rather roar along…
Spirit well captured, Neville. More whisky at the bar....👍
December 3rd, 2024 17:04
Shanty
orchidee said:
Seems some are having fun, but I\'m just swooning! lol.
December 3rd, 2024 10:00
orchidee said:
Seems some are having fun, but I\'m just swooning! lol.
December 3rd, 2024 10:00
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