Comments received on poems by Neville
The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Bella Shepard said:
This poem requires words it is hard to find, to tell you how deeply moving it is. I sense a selfless man, who loved you unconditionally as you gazed into those eyes, a very special smile he tried to forge, just for you. I visited my father in the hospital on a Saturday morning, and that afternoon he died alone, in a hospital bed. I envy you those moments you had and cherish. God bless dear Nev.
February 26th, 2024 17:12
Bella Shepard said:
This poem requires words it is hard to find, to tell you how deeply moving it is. I sense a selfless man, who loved you unconditionally as you gazed into those eyes, a very special smile he tried to forge, just for you. I visited my father in the hospital on a Saturday morning, and that afternoon he died alone, in a hospital bed. I envy you those moments you had and cherish. God bless dear Nev.
February 26th, 2024 17:12
The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Teddy.15 said:
Very beautiful. Your last lines really powerful and speak by themselves 🌹
February 26th, 2024 15:19
Teddy.15 said:
Very beautiful. Your last lines really powerful and speak by themselves 🌹
February 26th, 2024 15:19
The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Accidental Poet said:
A very emotional write here N. Brings back my own memories of both my parents passing. 🫂
February 26th, 2024 09:53
Accidental Poet said:
A very emotional write here N. Brings back my own memories of both my parents passing. 🫂
February 26th, 2024 09:53
The Look on His Face That Said Everything
orchidee said:
Yes, a moving piece N.
Meanwhile - I wish KP would move - to the Moon permanently. lol.
February 26th, 2024 09:08
orchidee said:
Yes, a moving piece N.
Meanwhile - I wish KP would move - to the Moon permanently. lol.
February 26th, 2024 09:08
The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Tom C Dylan said:
A moving piece, Neville.
February 26th, 2024 08:10
Tom C Dylan said:
A moving piece, Neville.
February 26th, 2024 08:10
The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Cassie58 said:
Now you’ve gone and done it! Started the water works off in the company of rain on the window pane. This piece apart from being incredibly moving is also inspirational poetry. I feel sad for you too and you have me thinking about my own father and how much I miss him. Good morning my friend.
February 26th, 2024 06:29
Cassie58 said:
Now you’ve gone and done it! Started the water works off in the company of rain on the window pane. This piece apart from being incredibly moving is also inspirational poetry. I feel sad for you too and you have me thinking about my own father and how much I miss him. Good morning my friend.
February 26th, 2024 06:29
The Look on His Face That Said Everything
Doggerel Dave said:
Takes more than a clinician\'s view of the world to cope with....
A very pain filled piece, Neville.
February 26th, 2024 05:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Takes more than a clinician\'s view of the world to cope with....
A very pain filled piece, Neville.
February 26th, 2024 05:06
575
Goldfinch60 said:
I know you still are
Your words bring joy to us all
Just keep on looking
Andy
February 26th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I know you still are
Your words bring joy to us all
Just keep on looking
Andy
February 26th, 2024 02:23
575
Bella Shepard said:
\"I grieve, therefore I am\". We must have both sides to feel deeply, and to know what love truly is. Beautifully said in 3 perfect lines!
February 25th, 2024 18:01
Bella Shepard said:
\"I grieve, therefore I am\". We must have both sides to feel deeply, and to know what love truly is. Beautifully said in 3 perfect lines!
February 25th, 2024 18:01
Three Summers
Parisab said:
One is afraid that after three summers , they might fall. Love the title and the heat the poem gives off, poetic friend.
February 25th, 2024 11:32
Parisab said:
One is afraid that after three summers , they might fall. Love the title and the heat the poem gives off, poetic friend.
February 25th, 2024 11:32
575
Accidental Poet said:
An interesting scribble
Far removed from any quibble
A poet not in sight will belittle
Such fine poetry based on syllables 👍
February 25th, 2024 11:24
Accidental Poet said:
An interesting scribble
Far removed from any quibble
A poet not in sight will belittle
Such fine poetry based on syllables 👍
February 25th, 2024 11:24
575
Christina8 said:
Wonderful 5/7/5....Strikes me that you are writing about a wound, probably emotional. Very nice one!
February 25th, 2024 10:14
Christina8 said:
Wonderful 5/7/5....Strikes me that you are writing about a wound, probably emotional. Very nice one!
February 25th, 2024 10:14
Three Summers
rhmn_7 said:
Maybe the next summer is already upon us, (hopefully).
February 25th, 2024 09:22
rhmn_7 said:
Maybe the next summer is already upon us, (hopefully).
February 25th, 2024 09:22
575
Cassie58 said:
A perfect 5/7/5 Neville. So few words, yet so much pain contained in them and in the spaces in between. A case of when less says more. I felt this one.
February 25th, 2024 06:58
Cassie58 said:
A perfect 5/7/5 Neville. So few words, yet so much pain contained in them and in the spaces in between. A case of when less says more. I felt this one.
February 25th, 2024 06:58
575
Doggerel Dave said:
Not good at numerology, Neville... after all, it took me a long time ...no some time... no a reasonable amount of time to place 69 into its correct place in the hierarchy of values.....
February 25th, 2024 04:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Not good at numerology, Neville... after all, it took me a long time ...no some time... no a reasonable amount of time to place 69 into its correct place in the hierarchy of values.....
February 25th, 2024 04:57
575
orchidee said:
I\'m afraid KP dared to look in all the mirrors in our house. She had 7,483 of them. They\'ve all cracked! lol.
February 25th, 2024 04:53
orchidee said:
I\'m afraid KP dared to look in all the mirrors in our house. She had 7,483 of them. They\'ve all cracked! lol.
February 25th, 2024 04:53
Three Summers
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame but I am sure you found a new life Neville.
Andy
February 25th, 2024 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame but I am sure you found a new life Neville.
Andy
February 25th, 2024 02:00
Oh’ But For One Moment More Deeply
Cassie58 said:
Who needs central heating on a cold February evening when you can have scorchio at MPS. Cooking on regulo 9 here Neville:)
February 24th, 2024 16:37
Cassie58 said:
Who needs central heating on a cold February evening when you can have scorchio at MPS. Cooking on regulo 9 here Neville:)
February 24th, 2024 16:37
Three Summers
Cassie58 said:
I am reminded of that old saying Neville, it’s better to have loved and lost than never loved at all. Three whole summers would have covered a lot of blue sky loving. A poignant poem of loss here. Sudden surprise endings are like a thunderbolt. They are the most painful sadly. Happy Saturday my friend.
February 24th, 2024 15:37
Cassie58 said:
I am reminded of that old saying Neville, it’s better to have loved and lost than never loved at all. Three whole summers would have covered a lot of blue sky loving. A poignant poem of loss here. Sudden surprise endings are like a thunderbolt. They are the most painful sadly. Happy Saturday my friend.
February 24th, 2024 15:37
Three Summers
orchidee said:
Do two swallows (a variation on \'one swallow\', I discovered) make a Summer?
If not, how many swallows do we need to see?! Or how many guinea pigs?! lol.
February 24th, 2024 13:35
orchidee said:
Do two swallows (a variation on \'one swallow\', I discovered) make a Summer?
If not, how many swallows do we need to see?! Or how many guinea pigs?! lol.
February 24th, 2024 13:35
Three Summers
Teddy.15 said:
Three whole summers are better than none my dear Nev. 🌹
February 24th, 2024 08:18
Teddy.15 said:
Three whole summers are better than none my dear Nev. 🌹
February 24th, 2024 08:18
Three Summers
Accidental Poet said:
Three\'s better than none, and it did lead to a great little poem. 😉👍
February 24th, 2024 07:56
Accidental Poet said:
Three\'s better than none, and it did lead to a great little poem. 😉👍
February 24th, 2024 07:56
Three Summers
Doggerel Dave said:
Them\'s the breaks, Mate...nothing lasts forever (despite all the rhubarb about diamonds.....)
February 24th, 2024 05:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Them\'s the breaks, Mate...nothing lasts forever (despite all the rhubarb about diamonds.....)
February 24th, 2024 05:11
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