Comments received on poems by Neville
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
Poetic Licence said:
I have always tried to believe some mountains can be moved, i hope that will be case. Enjoyed the read poetically
January 23rd, 2025 05:42
Poetic Licence said:
I have always tried to believe some mountains can be moved, i hope that will be case. Enjoyed the read poetically
January 23rd, 2025 05:42
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical and metaphoric this poem poses the question of relativity. How big is big and how small is small. Where is the dividing line between infinity and zero in the physical world and between good and evil or love and hate in the moral and emotional. I have fallen into the pit of your poem and now ask if intentions enter into this in that the pebbles were given and the mountains were not. (or were they?) Very thought provoking Neville
January 23rd, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical and metaphoric this poem poses the question of relativity. How big is big and how small is small. Where is the dividing line between infinity and zero in the physical world and between good and evil or love and hate in the moral and emotional. I have fallen into the pit of your poem and now ask if intentions enter into this in that the pebbles were given and the mountains were not. (or were they?) Very thought provoking Neville
January 23rd, 2025 04:59
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
arqios said:
The splash is different indeed, and a lot of the time they don’t even need to try… the flick of their lashes send ripples, say to the tune of $40M or so… I hear it quite a small club… I guess I’m stuck with my small pile of pebbles here…much to squander about.
January 23rd, 2025 04:14
arqios said:
The splash is different indeed, and a lot of the time they don’t even need to try… the flick of their lashes send ripples, say to the tune of $40M or so… I hear it quite a small club… I guess I’m stuck with my small pile of pebbles here…much to squander about.
January 23rd, 2025 04:14
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
orchidee said:
Good write N. Saving ink on the dots \"..\" not \"...\" ? I thought 3 dots was an ellipsis. Well, it saves you the energy, typing up 2 dots each time instead of 3. I\'m using energy by talking rubbish here - a lot of hot air from me! lol.
January 23rd, 2025 03:38
orchidee said:
Good write N. Saving ink on the dots \"..\" not \"...\" ? I thought 3 dots was an ellipsis. Well, it saves you the energy, typing up 2 dots each time instead of 3. I\'m using energy by talking rubbish here - a lot of hot air from me! lol.
January 23rd, 2025 03:38
At the Very End of Darkness
NafisaSB said:
the circle always turns a full round, there is always light after darkness - we just have to wait patiently, as it may be already there, but unseen
lovely write
January 21st, 2025 10:23
NafisaSB said:
the circle always turns a full round, there is always light after darkness - we just have to wait patiently, as it may be already there, but unseen
lovely write
January 21st, 2025 10:23
Between Clouds
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Soothing And Transcendent
January 21st, 2025 06:43
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Neville
Soothing And Transcendent
January 21st, 2025 06:43
Sunday School Afternoons
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice Carefree Nostalgia Neville
January 20th, 2025 04:00
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice Carefree Nostalgia Neville
January 20th, 2025 04:00
Sunday School Afternoons
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful memories Neville.
Andy
January 20th, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful memories Neville.
Andy
January 20th, 2025 02:48
Sunday School Afternoons
Dan Williams said:
Ahh the lure and peace of Sundays. Picnics especially. \"Carefree\" covers it. Nice.
January 20th, 2025 01:18
Dan Williams said:
Ahh the lure and peace of Sundays. Picnics especially. \"Carefree\" covers it. Nice.
January 20th, 2025 01:18
Sunday School Afternoons
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sunday School was a staple in my life. My mom was a Sunday School teacher. Truthfully, I LOVED Sunday School. I guess it is a good thing because I was going regardless! 🤣This poem brought up many good memories, including sneaking into the choir room during fellowship to play on the piano. Good memories. Thank you for bringing them up for me, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 19th, 2025 16:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sunday School was a staple in my life. My mom was a Sunday School teacher. Truthfully, I LOVED Sunday School. I guess it is a good thing because I was going regardless! 🤣This poem brought up many good memories, including sneaking into the choir room during fellowship to play on the piano. Good memories. Thank you for bringing them up for me, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 19th, 2025 16:19
Sunday School Afternoons
Bella Shepard said:
I find that as life progresses, and as the brain becomes less cluttered with the hustle and bustle of life, wonderful memories are triggered by the senses and allowed to run free. Your stroll down memory lane is bursting with the simple pleasures and sensations of life that you treasure. Lucky you my friend, it is why your poetry is so rich in texture. Beautiful!
January 19th, 2025 10:54
Bella Shepard said:
I find that as life progresses, and as the brain becomes less cluttered with the hustle and bustle of life, wonderful memories are triggered by the senses and allowed to run free. Your stroll down memory lane is bursting with the simple pleasures and sensations of life that you treasure. Lucky you my friend, it is why your poetry is so rich in texture. Beautiful!
January 19th, 2025 10:54
Sunday School Afternoons
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah me! I swoon, I swoon! My la, how almost recklessly rendered seemingly with that carefree sense of such waltzing hours imbued, imagery to die for tricking out every single line whilst its inherent poignancy holds us so securely I must, perforce, swoon. I love it, I love it! Thank you very much for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 06:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah me! I swoon, I swoon! My la, how almost recklessly rendered seemingly with that carefree sense of such waltzing hours imbued, imagery to die for tricking out every single line whilst its inherent poignancy holds us so securely I must, perforce, swoon. I love it, I love it! Thank you very much for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 06:29
Sunday School Afternoons
arqios said:
We had those too and the Sunday School had a bottle green Urvan (Nissan) for the pick up’s and drop offs.
January 19th, 2025 05:34
arqios said:
We had those too and the Sunday School had a bottle green Urvan (Nissan) for the pick up’s and drop offs.
January 19th, 2025 05:34
Sunday School Afternoons
sorenbarrett said:
This poem captured the nostalgia of the past put in the perspective of the present. The imagry brought the poem to life stimulating those archetypal memories long burried and opened the oven door to the aroma of the past. Lovely Neville
January 19th, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
This poem captured the nostalgia of the past put in the perspective of the present. The imagry brought the poem to life stimulating those archetypal memories long burried and opened the oven door to the aroma of the past. Lovely Neville
January 19th, 2025 05:16
At The Risk of Reaching Out
Cheeky Missy said:
Persistence pays off in time, and this charming little number in tribute is so beautifully rendered to effect, with a haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much!
January 18th, 2025 21:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Persistence pays off in time, and this charming little number in tribute is so beautifully rendered to effect, with a haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much!
January 18th, 2025 21:53
At The Risk of Reaching Out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in brevity. Profound. So, at the risk of reaching out, I will say... well-done mate! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in brevity. Profound. So, at the risk of reaching out, I will say... well-done mate! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 11:21
At The Risk of Reaching Out
sorenbarrett said:
A truism spoken poetically in so few words. Lovely Neville
January 18th, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A truism spoken poetically in so few words. Lovely Neville
January 18th, 2025 05:31
At the Very End of Darkness
cellinic said:
Very deep and sincere, although quite reserved in terms of emotional side of the poem. best wishes,
January 18th, 2025 02:50
cellinic said:
Very deep and sincere, although quite reserved in terms of emotional side of the poem. best wishes,
January 18th, 2025 02:50
At the Very End of Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:
The porch light is always on for all in our house Neville.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
The porch light is always on for all in our house Neville.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:22
At the Very End of Darkness
Doggerel Dave said:
Having just come out of an six hour electricity blackout....🔆
January 17th, 2025 20:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Having just come out of an six hour electricity blackout....🔆
January 17th, 2025 20:24
At the Very End of Darkness
orchidee said:
Did an \'Idea\' light-bulb come on in your head when you thought to write this?!
January 17th, 2025 10:42
orchidee said:
Did an \'Idea\' light-bulb come on in your head when you thought to write this?!
January 17th, 2025 10:42
At the Very End of Darkness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The light within, waiting to be unleashed but blocked by circumstances. Still, no circumstance is too large to snuff that light or its inner potential. Or at least that is what I got out of it. A wonderful write, Neville! Faved, my friend! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The light within, waiting to be unleashed but blocked by circumstances. Still, no circumstance is too large to snuff that light or its inner potential. Or at least that is what I got out of it. A wonderful write, Neville! Faved, my friend! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:07
At the Very End of Darkness
arqios said:
There is a light within us waiting to be unleashed that is quite locked up by many a circumstance and situation. That’s the feel I got reading this.
January 17th, 2025 06:54
arqios said:
There is a light within us waiting to be unleashed that is quite locked up by many a circumstance and situation. That’s the feel I got reading this.
January 17th, 2025 06:54
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