Comments received on poems by Neville
Casual Ties
Goldfinch60 said:
Such truth in this Neville, for a wonderful life we need to commit.
Andy
November 25th, 2024 02:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Such truth in this Neville, for a wonderful life we need to commit.
Andy
November 25th, 2024 02:41
Team Building
rin said:
Even though it is a comment from a serious poster, it has a heart symbol. I wonder if it\'s meant to be a hieroglyph.
November 25th, 2024 02:15
rin said:
Even though it is a comment from a serious poster, it has a heart symbol. I wonder if it\'s meant to be a hieroglyph.
November 25th, 2024 02:15
Casual Ties
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How easy for loose ends to get tangled. Then trying to untangle the mess…as they say in Brooklyn: “Fuhgeddaboudit.” Also, how easy it is for any one of us to do. Excllent poem my friend. 🌹👏❤️
November 24th, 2024 15:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How easy for loose ends to get tangled. Then trying to untangle the mess…as they say in Brooklyn: “Fuhgeddaboudit.” Also, how easy it is for any one of us to do. Excllent poem my friend. 🌹👏❤️
November 24th, 2024 15:47
Casual Ties
Cheeky Missy said:
That reminds me of my line when I\'m too tired to do much of anything, I usually still quip, \"I still know how to sign my name!\" where the damning nature of that ability escapes good sense. Genesis 3 will suffice since one bite echoes through the centuries. Dang! Strikingly poignant with tastefully intriguing imagery, this is beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
November 24th, 2024 07:44
Cheeky Missy said:
That reminds me of my line when I\'m too tired to do much of anything, I usually still quip, \"I still know how to sign my name!\" where the damning nature of that ability escapes good sense. Genesis 3 will suffice since one bite echoes through the centuries. Dang! Strikingly poignant with tastefully intriguing imagery, this is beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
November 24th, 2024 07:44
Casual Ties
sorenbarrett said:
It is those casual relationships to which we give little thought that become a tangle of yarn, but it is impossible to find the ends too. Nicely written, Neville.
November 24th, 2024 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
It is those casual relationships to which we give little thought that become a tangle of yarn, but it is impossible to find the ends too. Nicely written, Neville.
November 24th, 2024 07:09
Casual Ties
arqios said:
Some people just won’t commit unless for a temporary link. Others keep you invisibly tethered unbeknownst to you for the longest time!
November 24th, 2024 06:21
arqios said:
Some people just won’t commit unless for a temporary link. Others keep you invisibly tethered unbeknownst to you for the longest time!
November 24th, 2024 06:21
Casual Ties
orchidee said:
Good write N. KP is more than loosely associated with botox. lol.
November 24th, 2024 03:16
orchidee said:
Good write N. KP is more than loosely associated with botox. lol.
November 24th, 2024 03:16
Kindness and Absent Friends
Goldfinch60 said:
Where has kindness gone in this world Neville?
So true, the wildlife has certainly decreased in our world.
Andy
November 24th, 2024 02:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Where has kindness gone in this world Neville?
So true, the wildlife has certainly decreased in our world.
Andy
November 24th, 2024 02:10
Kindness and Absent Friends
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, my friend. A sad write for a sad day.
November 23rd, 2024 18:54
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work, my friend. A sad write for a sad day.
November 23rd, 2024 18:54
Kindness and Absent Friends
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing much to contribute here, Neville - our seasons being all awry..... except, perhaps it would be kindness if, before your winter ends you could send a slice by express post over here, as I have a feeling we might need it.....
November 23rd, 2024 18:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing much to contribute here, Neville - our seasons being all awry..... except, perhaps it would be kindness if, before your winter ends you could send a slice by express post over here, as I have a feeling we might need it.....
November 23rd, 2024 18:36
Kindness and Absent Friends
Jerry Reynolds said:
Kindness is cheap and scarce.
Good write, Neville. Iwill take the two-fer.
November 23rd, 2024 11:33
Jerry Reynolds said:
Kindness is cheap and scarce.
Good write, Neville. Iwill take the two-fer.
November 23rd, 2024 11:33
Kindness and Absent Friends
Cheeky Missy said:
Dis merrily makes up for yesterday\'s lack in tendering one fer Friday and one fer Saturday. Many thanks. The selfish state of affairs would leave all out in the cold except the LORD\'s great mercies. Excellent reminder rendered tastefully in brevity with a fittingly haunting poignancy. And from cranberries to holly is it? ah, what a suggestion! I never considered that angle ere now. Charming and bittersweetly poignant with superb imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 23rd, 2024 08:49
Cheeky Missy said:
Dis merrily makes up for yesterday\'s lack in tendering one fer Friday and one fer Saturday. Many thanks. The selfish state of affairs would leave all out in the cold except the LORD\'s great mercies. Excellent reminder rendered tastefully in brevity with a fittingly haunting poignancy. And from cranberries to holly is it? ah, what a suggestion! I never considered that angle ere now. Charming and bittersweetly poignant with superb imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 23rd, 2024 08:49
Kindness and Absent Friends
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kindness seems to be in short supply, for sure and those poor li’l 🐿️ 🐿️ These poems ring true, hauntingly so, and fit the mood of approaching winter. 🥶 Well done, Neville! Love it! 🌹👏
November 23rd, 2024 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Kindness seems to be in short supply, for sure and those poor li’l 🐿️ 🐿️ These poems ring true, hauntingly so, and fit the mood of approaching winter. 🥶 Well done, Neville! Love it! 🌹👏
November 23rd, 2024 08:17
Kindness and Absent Friends
orchidee said:
I fed KP those berries - dunno if they were poisonous. lol.
November 23rd, 2024 08:15
orchidee said:
I fed KP those berries - dunno if they were poisonous. lol.
November 23rd, 2024 08:15
Kindness and Absent Friends
sorenbarrett said:
Once again, I find the two poems somewhat related. It seems that even winter has a hard time being kind.
November 23rd, 2024 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
Once again, I find the two poems somewhat related. It seems that even winter has a hard time being kind.
November 23rd, 2024 08:14
Kindness and Absent Friends
arqios said:
What a punch 🥊! If the were edible berries that’s where you’d find me staining my garments and all! Chances are I’d have chosen white or something pastelly to boot!
November 23rd, 2024 06:38
arqios said:
What a punch 🥊! If the were edible berries that’s where you’d find me staining my garments and all! Chances are I’d have chosen white or something pastelly to boot!
November 23rd, 2024 06:38
Kindness and Absent Friends
Michael Edwards said:
Something melancholy about this write - a bit in touch with my mood this awful cold wet windy morning - enjoyed it none the less.
November 23rd, 2024 05:32
Michael Edwards said:
Something melancholy about this write - a bit in touch with my mood this awful cold wet windy morning - enjoyed it none the less.
November 23rd, 2024 05:32
Casual Ties and Other Loose Associations
Goldfinch60 said:
Your muse will return. I hope your Book sells well Neville.
Andy
November 23rd, 2024 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Your muse will return. I hope your Book sells well Neville.
Andy
November 23rd, 2024 02:17
Casual Ties and Other Loose Associations
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'m only interested, impoverished as my case is, IF you\'ll sign the copy. Elsewise, I\'m sorry, mine has never yet been published except online on forums as this, nor shall be til my carcase is long since beneath the sod, if at all. Many thanks for sharing.
November 22nd, 2024 17:40
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'m only interested, impoverished as my case is, IF you\'ll sign the copy. Elsewise, I\'m sorry, mine has never yet been published except online on forums as this, nor shall be til my carcase is long since beneath the sod, if at all. Many thanks for sharing.
November 22nd, 2024 17:40
Casual Ties and Other Loose Associations
Thomas W Case said:
Beat of luck, my friend.
November 22nd, 2024 15:21
Thomas W Case said:
Beat of luck, my friend.
November 22nd, 2024 15:21
Casual Ties and Other Loose Associations
Cassie58 said:
Hope you get lots of sales Neville to support your chosen charities. I’ll be ordering my copy over the weekend. Well done you, 12 books and hopefully more will follow.
November 22nd, 2024 14:51
Cassie58 said:
Hope you get lots of sales Neville to support your chosen charities. I’ll be ordering my copy over the weekend. Well done you, 12 books and hopefully more will follow.
November 22nd, 2024 14:51
Casual Ties and Other Loose Associations
Jerry Reynolds said:
I will look nto that, Neville.
November 22nd, 2024 11:51
Jerry Reynolds said:
I will look nto that, Neville.
November 22nd, 2024 11:51
Casual Ties and Other Loose Associations
arqios said:
Your Muse like Tinkerbell in a lantern has ensconced itself in this latest anthology. Or was it ant-ology 🐜 the study of ants.
November 22nd, 2024 08:56
arqios said:
Your Muse like Tinkerbell in a lantern has ensconced itself in this latest anthology. Or was it ant-ology 🐜 the study of ants.
November 22nd, 2024 08:56
Amaterasu
Goldfinch60 said:
May that radiance never leave her or you Neville.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
May that radiance never leave her or you Neville.
Andy
November 22nd, 2024 02:21
Amaterasu
Dan Williams said:
\"her halo shines brightest when I close my eyes\" indeed. Not sure why, maybe just dreams. Nice work.
November 22nd, 2024 00:06
Dan Williams said:
\"her halo shines brightest when I close my eyes\" indeed. Not sure why, maybe just dreams. Nice work.
November 22nd, 2024 00:06
Amaterasu
MendedFences27 said:
An ode to a Shinto Goddess of the Sun, and of womanly perfection. Your last line did it for me, expressing the power of her light. A wonderful poem. - Phil A.
November 21st, 2024 19:29
MendedFences27 said:
An ode to a Shinto Goddess of the Sun, and of womanly perfection. Your last line did it for me, expressing the power of her light. A wonderful poem. - Phil A.
November 21st, 2024 19:29
Amaterasu
Doggerel Dave said:
Close quarters, without an intervening veil or mist can be uncomfortable in my limited experience. In this instance the separate constituents form the perfect whole. Rounded smoothly for me, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 18:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Close quarters, without an intervening veil or mist can be uncomfortable in my limited experience. In this instance the separate constituents form the perfect whole. Rounded smoothly for me, Neville.
November 21st, 2024 18:52
Amaterasu
Cassie58 said:
Just lovely. Had to look this one up Neville. Her function to bring light to the world - the Shinto sun goddess. Reminds me of a beautiful sunset after a summer day and yet this has to be a romantic metaphor. Gorgeous poetry. .
November 21st, 2024 13:44
Cassie58 said:
Just lovely. Had to look this one up Neville. Her function to bring light to the world - the Shinto sun goddess. Reminds me of a beautiful sunset after a summer day and yet this has to be a romantic metaphor. Gorgeous poetry. .
November 21st, 2024 13:44
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