Comments received on poems by Neville
Portrait of A Wild Garden
Doggerel Dave said:
Procrastination is my middle name......
Plus I have an abiding preference for an unmanicured garden.
Unblushingly confessional in tidy form, , , , ,
May 17th, 2024 20:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Procrastination is my middle name......
Plus I have an abiding preference for an unmanicured garden.
Unblushingly confessional in tidy form, , , , ,
May 17th, 2024 20:09
Portrait of A Wild Garden
Thomas W Case said:
They will do that. I could use some birds and bees. Good stuff.
May 17th, 2024 12:06
Thomas W Case said:
They will do that. I could use some birds and bees. Good stuff.
May 17th, 2024 12:06
A Man With a Bucket and No Hat
Doggerel Dave said:
Missed out on this one first time round.
I challenge the assumption that he is required to be only one of three things……
May 17th, 2024 01:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Missed out on this one first time round.
I challenge the assumption that he is required to be only one of three things……
May 17th, 2024 01:27
A Man With a Bucket and No Hat
Cassie58 said:
He is unprepared. He is no Boy Scout. The bucket is of no use if there is no water. A hat may have served him better. If he is lost in the desert, he is in trouble. He needs to be found and quick. Have read this one several times Neville. A search party is on the way.
May 16th, 2024 03:31
Cassie58 said:
He is unprepared. He is no Boy Scout. The bucket is of no use if there is no water. A hat may have served him better. If he is lost in the desert, he is in trouble. He needs to be found and quick. Have read this one several times Neville. A search party is on the way.
May 16th, 2024 03:31
A Man With a Bucket and No Hat
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. :-) I read that last line in a kind of John Cooper Clarke voice.
May 16th, 2024 02:10
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. :-) I read that last line in a kind of John Cooper Clarke voice.
May 16th, 2024 02:10
Watching Swifts
Cassie58 said:
Everything to like about this. Back in the light. Finger tips touching, scented summer garden looking at the swifts. I very much like the contrast here. The movement of the swifts in a sky canvas, while they are grounded. You took me there and shared pizza. Fab imagery Neville.
May 16th, 2024 02:02
Cassie58 said:
Everything to like about this. Back in the light. Finger tips touching, scented summer garden looking at the swifts. I very much like the contrast here. The movement of the swifts in a sky canvas, while they are grounded. You took me there and shared pizza. Fab imagery Neville.
May 16th, 2024 02:02
When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
Cassie58 said:
Nightmares can easily turn into reality. Dark, foreboding and scary. My adrenalin is pumping. Your lines are lyrical Neville. I was reminded of that old song the Eve of Destruction. The loss of freedom …..
May 16th, 2024 01:50
Cassie58 said:
Nightmares can easily turn into reality. Dark, foreboding and scary. My adrenalin is pumping. Your lines are lyrical Neville. I was reminded of that old song the Eve of Destruction. The loss of freedom …..
May 16th, 2024 01:50
A Man With a Bucket and No Hat
orchidee said:
I (of course) am a man with a hat and no bucket! lol.
May 16th, 2024 01:47
orchidee said:
I (of course) am a man with a hat and no bucket! lol.
May 16th, 2024 01:47
A Man With a Bucket and No Hat
Goldfinch60 said:
You must have a hat in the desert!!
Andy
May 16th, 2024 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
You must have a hat in the desert!!
Andy
May 16th, 2024 01:45
Watching Swifts
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville. I have actually touched a swift, they were nesting in the roof of a place I worked and two got jammed in the edge of the roof getting into their nest, I went up a ladder and freed them, a great honour.
Andy
May 16th, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville. I have actually touched a swift, they were nesting in the roof of a place I worked and two got jammed in the edge of the roof getting into their nest, I went up a ladder and freed them, a great honour.
Andy
May 16th, 2024 01:23
A Man With a Bucket and No Hat
jarcher54 said:
On the other hand, a bucket makes a very solid hat!
May 16th, 2024 01:22
jarcher54 said:
On the other hand, a bucket makes a very solid hat!
May 16th, 2024 01:22
Watching Swifts
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful poem dear Nev, reminds me of old times I\'ve passed in my own life. 🌹 Beautiful.
May 15th, 2024 12:56
Teddy.15 said:
A wonderful poem dear Nev, reminds me of old times I\'ve passed in my own life. 🌹 Beautiful.
May 15th, 2024 12:56
Watching Swifts
orchidee said:
Some seagulls attacked KP while we were out. I just laughed! lol.
May 15th, 2024 08:18
orchidee said:
Some seagulls attacked KP while we were out. I just laughed! lol.
May 15th, 2024 08:18
Watching Swifts
Tom Dylan said:
Just brilliant, mate. You really paint the scene so well. I can almost see the birds, and taste the pizza. :-)
May 15th, 2024 02:20
Tom Dylan said:
Just brilliant, mate. You really paint the scene so well. I can almost see the birds, and taste the pizza. :-)
May 15th, 2024 02:20
When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful rant Neville but evetually all will be well.
Andy
May 15th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful rant Neville but evetually all will be well.
Andy
May 15th, 2024 01:17
When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
Meera Mere said:
Don\'t know why it sounded so scary even though it\'s the reality.
Amazing poem Neville.
May 15th, 2024 00:33
Meera Mere said:
Don\'t know why it sounded so scary even though it\'s the reality.
Amazing poem Neville.
May 15th, 2024 00:33
When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Edgy.
May 14th, 2024 17:27
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Edgy.
May 14th, 2024 17:27
When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like a bad dream N.
May 14th, 2024 09:56
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like a bad dream N.
May 14th, 2024 09:56
A World That Was
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, there once was a time when you could trust your neighbor, not have to lock your doors, not get into an argument with someone because they misunderstood you, had a quality choice for president, wake up to morning news not about bombings and bloodshed. Seems the world is going to shit. Well penned N.
May 14th, 2024 09:26
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, there once was a time when you could trust your neighbor, not have to lock your doors, not get into an argument with someone because they misunderstood you, had a quality choice for president, wake up to morning news not about bombings and bloodshed. Seems the world is going to shit. Well penned N.
May 14th, 2024 09:26
When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
orchidee said:
Baa-woof. Or baa-hoowwwlll.
I\'m a wolf in sheep\'s clothing.
Or a sheep in wolf\'s clothing?
I could be anything, even mutant giant hamster, as some suppose from my pic! lol.
A wolf doesn\'t go \'woof\' does it? lol.
May 14th, 2024 07:18
orchidee said:
Baa-woof. Or baa-hoowwwlll.
I\'m a wolf in sheep\'s clothing.
Or a sheep in wolf\'s clothing?
I could be anything, even mutant giant hamster, as some suppose from my pic! lol.
A wolf doesn\'t go \'woof\' does it? lol.
May 14th, 2024 07:18
When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
Doggerel Dave said:
Poetic noir if ever I\'ve encountered it, Neville.
Don\'t give me much chance of a bedtime (coming very soon) with the prospect of sweet dreams, do you?
May 14th, 2024 07:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Poetic noir if ever I\'ve encountered it, Neville.
Don\'t give me much chance of a bedtime (coming very soon) with the prospect of sweet dreams, do you?
May 14th, 2024 07:00
When it All Boils Down to Bad Men and Fools
Teddy.15 said:
Wow I wouldn\'t want to be a sheep my dear Nev, how very dark and powerful. Superb emotion and kudos. 🌹
May 14th, 2024 04:57
Teddy.15 said:
Wow I wouldn\'t want to be a sheep my dear Nev, how very dark and powerful. Superb emotion and kudos. 🌹
May 14th, 2024 04:57
A World That Was
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville.
Yes there once was a time and I remember it well, such wonderful memories.
Andy
May 14th, 2024 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Neville.
Yes there once was a time and I remember it well, such wonderful memories.
Andy
May 14th, 2024 01:18
A World That Was
Cassie58 said:
This makes me pine for all things lost. Thankfully I have a memory. Will always thank my lucky stars, I was born in the right decade. We are moving too fast and furious. You are saying it as it is Neville.
May 13th, 2024 11:22
Cassie58 said:
This makes me pine for all things lost. Thankfully I have a memory. Will always thank my lucky stars, I was born in the right decade. We are moving too fast and furious. You are saying it as it is Neville.
May 13th, 2024 11:22
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