Comments received on poems by Neville
That Time of Year Again
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful image you paint of these beauriful creatures. The flight of a bird is breathtaking in every sense. I am greeted by a chorus of birdsong each morning as I walk, and never fail to see a cardinal perched atop a telephone pole, singing its heart out, just have to stop, listen and admire. The love of nature shines your words my friend.
May 28th, 2024 13:54
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful image you paint of these beauriful creatures. The flight of a bird is breathtaking in every sense. I am greeted by a chorus of birdsong each morning as I walk, and never fail to see a cardinal perched atop a telephone pole, singing its heart out, just have to stop, listen and admire. The love of nature shines your words my friend.
May 28th, 2024 13:54
That Time of Year Again
Doggerel Dave said:
My partner feeds the birds (I no longer wish to debate this – she does it!) As a result, my visits to her place are marked by a cacophony of bird calls: cockatoos, lorikeets, magpies and, yes, pigeons…. My point here is thanks for the reminder that they court and breed, that might account for their numbers….and the free feed of course….
May 28th, 2024 08:58
Doggerel Dave said:
My partner feeds the birds (I no longer wish to debate this – she does it!) As a result, my visits to her place are marked by a cacophony of bird calls: cockatoos, lorikeets, magpies and, yes, pigeons…. My point here is thanks for the reminder that they court and breed, that might account for their numbers….and the free feed of course….
May 28th, 2024 08:58
That Time of Year Again
Cassie58 said:
There is something mesmerizing about looking at birds in flight. The freedom of the skies. I love the movement you have put into this piece and I do believe these may be swifts in courtship Neville. You have created some fab imagery here.
May 28th, 2024 03:21
Cassie58 said:
There is something mesmerizing about looking at birds in flight. The freedom of the skies. I love the movement you have put into this piece and I do believe these may be swifts in courtship Neville. You have created some fab imagery here.
May 28th, 2024 03:21
That Time of Year Again
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I\'m The Birdman. Do we find them in pairs?! lol.
May 28th, 2024 01:47
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I\'m The Birdman. Do we find them in pairs?! lol.
May 28th, 2024 01:47
Impressions of A Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:
Some just see nothing
Or don\'t believe in our lives
But those who care do.
Andy
May 28th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Some just see nothing
Or don\'t believe in our lives
But those who care do.
Andy
May 28th, 2024 01:19
Impressions of A Senryu
Cassie58 said:
Your light continues to shine. You are far from invisible. Good morning. Happy Tuesday Neville.
May 27th, 2024 23:49
Cassie58 said:
Your light continues to shine. You are far from invisible. Good morning. Happy Tuesday Neville.
May 27th, 2024 23:49
Impressions of A Senryu
Thomas W Case said:
I see you and read you. Keep on going, brother.
May 27th, 2024 16:59
Thomas W Case said:
I see you and read you. Keep on going, brother.
May 27th, 2024 16:59
Impressions of A Senryu
MendedFences27 said:
Where were you? In a land of giants?
This caused be to wonder about being unnoticeable. Is it a good or bad thing.
I know these are hard to pen and have them make sense and offer a clear thought, loved this one -Phil A
May 27th, 2024 14:41
MendedFences27 said:
Where were you? In a land of giants?
This caused be to wonder about being unnoticeable. Is it a good or bad thing.
I know these are hard to pen and have them make sense and offer a clear thought, loved this one -Phil A
May 27th, 2024 14:41
Impressions of A Senryu
orchidee said:
I been invisible nearly, mucking about with blips on here today. KP\'s jinxed it, I bet! lol.
May 27th, 2024 14:39
orchidee said:
I been invisible nearly, mucking about with blips on here today. KP\'s jinxed it, I bet! lol.
May 27th, 2024 14:39
That Gift of A Feeling
Thomas W Case said:
love makes the world go round. You capture the rapture of love here.
May 26th, 2024 23:05
Thomas W Case said:
love makes the world go round. You capture the rapture of love here.
May 26th, 2024 23:05
That Gift of A Feeling
orchidee said:
And now a song from me \'Feelings, ohhh feelings,... trying to forget those feelings of love - no of trout!\' Morris Albert, 1975 song.
Fido says - Orchi, sometimes you\'re the most unfeeling wretch towards KP, you guinea-pig creature, you!\' lol.
May 26th, 2024 09:46
orchidee said:
And now a song from me \'Feelings, ohhh feelings,... trying to forget those feelings of love - no of trout!\' Morris Albert, 1975 song.
Fido says - Orchi, sometimes you\'re the most unfeeling wretch towards KP, you guinea-pig creature, you!\' lol.
May 26th, 2024 09:46
That Gift of A Feeling
Accidental Poet said:
Reminds me of someone very special as I\'m sure this was penned for someone just as special to you N. 🌹
May 26th, 2024 05:12
Accidental Poet said:
Reminds me of someone very special as I\'m sure this was penned for someone just as special to you N. 🌹
May 26th, 2024 05:12
That Gift of A Feeling
Bobby O said:
Dude , smooth, ….,WASNT it ?
On one read it skated by me as matter of fact but what if that last line was born of amazement ? It sets it up perfectly.
SMH
May 26th, 2024 05:11
Bobby O said:
Dude , smooth, ….,WASNT it ?
On one read it skated by me as matter of fact but what if that last line was born of amazement ? It sets it up perfectly.
SMH
May 26th, 2024 05:11
That Gift of A Feeling
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lovelorn words Neville, I hope it never stops.
Andy
May 26th, 2024 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful lovelorn words Neville, I hope it never stops.
Andy
May 26th, 2024 01:55
That Gift of A Feeling
Cassie58 said:
Romantic to the core. You have described here the unforgettable moments of falling in love. Now surely that is out of this world and borders on the heavenly. Those memories last a life time and do not fade. Have a very happy Sunday Neville, though I fear it is going to be wet and could spoil our bbq.
May 26th, 2024 01:36
Cassie58 said:
Romantic to the core. You have described here the unforgettable moments of falling in love. Now surely that is out of this world and borders on the heavenly. Those memories last a life time and do not fade. Have a very happy Sunday Neville, though I fear it is going to be wet and could spoil our bbq.
May 26th, 2024 01:36
That Gift of A Feeling
orchidee said:
If KP\'s not fully human but trout-like, neither is Waitrose. Why they not have any bog rolls in now? Of course, snobbish people like them never use the loo - it\'s too \'common\'!
May 26th, 2024 01:18
orchidee said:
If KP\'s not fully human but trout-like, neither is Waitrose. Why they not have any bog rolls in now? Of course, snobbish people like them never use the loo - it\'s too \'common\'!
May 26th, 2024 01:18
That Gift of A Feeling
orchidee said:
Good write N.
My poem begins:
And then KP touched me
A feeling of an old trout
And of something fishy going on....
May 26th, 2024 01:14
orchidee said:
Good write N.
My poem begins:
And then KP touched me
A feeling of an old trout
And of something fishy going on....
May 26th, 2024 01:14
The True Nature of Loss
Accidental Poet said:
Every now and then a smell can take me back to my youth and instantly a smile has adorned my face as does this work of poetic art. Well penned my poetic friend. 😎👍
May 25th, 2024 09:47
Accidental Poet said:
Every now and then a smell can take me back to my youth and instantly a smile has adorned my face as does this work of poetic art. Well penned my poetic friend. 😎👍
May 25th, 2024 09:47
The True Nature of Loss
Doggerel Dave said:
Olfactory sensations are for me some of the strongest memory prompts I experience. Do I have memory loss? Not when that scent wafts by......
Much truth in a few lines, Neville.
May 25th, 2024 07:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Olfactory sensations are for me some of the strongest memory prompts I experience. Do I have memory loss? Not when that scent wafts by......
Much truth in a few lines, Neville.
May 25th, 2024 07:51
The True Nature of Loss
Cassie58 said:
You never lose that sense of smell, taste or touch, that seems to remain, even though the memories themselves may fade with the passing of years. This poem is very much of the present Neville. Have a lovely weekend.
May 25th, 2024 02:43
Cassie58 said:
You never lose that sense of smell, taste or touch, that seems to remain, even though the memories themselves may fade with the passing of years. This poem is very much of the present Neville. Have a lovely weekend.
May 25th, 2024 02:43
The True Nature of Loss
Goldfinch60 said:
It is surprising what things can trigger memories Neville.
Andy
May 25th, 2024 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
It is surprising what things can trigger memories Neville.
Andy
May 25th, 2024 02:05
The True Nature of Loss
2781 said:
It could do my head in, thinking about what was, and what may have been.
May 25th, 2024 01:58
2781 said:
It could do my head in, thinking about what was, and what may have been.
May 25th, 2024 01:58
The True Nature of Loss
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Meanwhile, I never lose KP. She hangs around like a bad smell! lol.
May 25th, 2024 01:39
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Meanwhile, I never lose KP. She hangs around like a bad smell! lol.
May 25th, 2024 01:39
A Day Out in The Country
Thomas W Case said:
I live in a tourist town myself. Great writing. I relate.
May 23rd, 2024 17:45
Thomas W Case said:
I live in a tourist town myself. Great writing. I relate.
May 23rd, 2024 17:45
A Day Out in The Country
Poetic Dan said:
Sadly wealth can not get you common sense! Even when some try and get it of me they blame the dog and waste money.. fantastic write and with you all the way! The hardest part of living can be just understanding why others do what they do! So narrow minded we can only hope their DNA doesn\'t keep getting remastered... lol
Cheers mate
May 22nd, 2024 06:01
Poetic Dan said:
Sadly wealth can not get you common sense! Even when some try and get it of me they blame the dog and waste money.. fantastic write and with you all the way! The hardest part of living can be just understanding why others do what they do! So narrow minded we can only hope their DNA doesn\'t keep getting remastered... lol
Cheers mate
May 22nd, 2024 06:01
A Day Out in The Country
Neville said:
This dreadful what some folks allow.. thanks C .. I owe ya 😎🍒👍
May 22nd, 2024 03:53
Neville said:
This dreadful what some folks allow.. thanks C .. I owe ya 😎🍒👍
May 22nd, 2024 03:53
A Day Out in The Country
Christina8 said:
Thats really unfortunate that people would let their dogs loose like that! A really good write on an awful subject!
May 22nd, 2024 02:51
Christina8 said:
Thats really unfortunate that people would let their dogs loose like that! A really good write on an awful subject!
May 22nd, 2024 02:51
A Day Out in The Country
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so sad and disgusting that people let there dogs loose when lambs are around Neville.
Andy
May 22nd, 2024 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so sad and disgusting that people let there dogs loose when lambs are around Neville.
Andy
May 22nd, 2024 02:02
A Day Out in The Country
orchidee said:
Fido will bark if I don\'t tone down this comment. Tone down that word \'muck\', he says.
Yes, countryside all fine, then man comes along and \'mucks\' it up. Doh!
May 22nd, 2024 02:00
orchidee said:
Fido will bark if I don\'t tone down this comment. Tone down that word \'muck\', he says.
Yes, countryside all fine, then man comes along and \'mucks\' it up. Doh!
May 22nd, 2024 02:00
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