Comments received on poems by Neville
My Grandfathers Hydrangeas
sorenbarrett said:
What is a bout grandfathers and hydrangeas? I remember well both of my grandfathers had them. My father never did although he loved gardening and had many other types of flowers. I sense a metaphor here as well and firing up with iron filings and cutting them back each year seems appropriate for growth in human terms as well. Loved it my friend
March 17th, 2026 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
What is a bout grandfathers and hydrangeas? I remember well both of my grandfathers had them. My father never did although he loved gardening and had many other types of flowers. I sense a metaphor here as well and firing up with iron filings and cutting them back each year seems appropriate for growth in human terms as well. Loved it my friend
March 17th, 2026 09:30
My Grandfathers Hydrangeas
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, that line about “fired up…full of ferrous iron filings” stuck with me…it turns something ordinary into something almost alchemical. Like tending the soil is also tending legacy. The repetition of the opening brings it back around like a season…like March always comes again. There’s something steady and grounding here. And, I love hydrangeas, so there\'s that. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, that line about “fired up…full of ferrous iron filings” stuck with me…it turns something ordinary into something almost alchemical. Like tending the soil is also tending legacy. The repetition of the opening brings it back around like a season…like March always comes again. There’s something steady and grounding here. And, I love hydrangeas, so there\'s that. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 17th, 2026 08:39
The Making of An Appetite
NafisaSB said:
Sentiments described so clearly - one can almost visualize it
March 16th, 2026 23:48
NafisaSB said:
Sentiments described so clearly - one can almost visualize it
March 16th, 2026 23:48
More Than Just A Contented Man
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, my friend. Excellent.
March 16th, 2026 10:07
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, my friend. Excellent.
March 16th, 2026 10:07
The Making of An Appetite
Thomas W Case said:
Raw sunlight, sweat, and hunger—this one’s got the pulse of a man remembering he’s still alive.
There’s grit and gratitude in that last line; desire here isn’t pretty, it’s honest, and that’s why it works.
March 15th, 2026 08:03
Thomas W Case said:
Raw sunlight, sweat, and hunger—this one’s got the pulse of a man remembering he’s still alive.
There’s grit and gratitude in that last line; desire here isn’t pretty, it’s honest, and that’s why it works.
March 15th, 2026 08:03
The Making of An Appetite
arqios said:
Appetite is important for many things that feed into an appetite for living! So good N 🙏🏻🕊️
March 15th, 2026 00:37
arqios said:
Appetite is important for many things that feed into an appetite for living! So good N 🙏🏻🕊️
March 15th, 2026 00:37
The Making of An Appetite
orchidee said:
Now you know I can\'t have figs cos........... Too Much Info to say why. But good write N.
March 14th, 2026 09:31
orchidee said:
Now you know I can\'t have figs cos........... Too Much Info to say why. But good write N.
March 14th, 2026 09:31
The Making of An Appetite
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, there’s a playful sensuality running through this…mirror reflections, sunlight on skin, and that sudden burst of appetite for life again. The imagery feels warm and vivid, but it’s the closing line that ties it together so well. Desire and vitality wrapped in a smile. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, there’s a playful sensuality running through this…mirror reflections, sunlight on skin, and that sudden burst of appetite for life again. The imagery feels warm and vivid, but it’s the closing line that ties it together so well. Desire and vitality wrapped in a smile. Well done, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:51
The Making of An Appetite
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem uses the metaphor of appetite, both literal and figurative, to express the speaker\'s feelings towards another person. It juxtaposes sensuality with the imagery of food, emphasizing the intensity of attraction and the transformative effect that love can have on a person\'s outlook.
March 14th, 2026 08:23
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem uses the metaphor of appetite, both literal and figurative, to express the speaker\'s feelings towards another person. It juxtaposes sensuality with the imagery of food, emphasizing the intensity of attraction and the transformative effect that love can have on a person\'s outlook.
March 14th, 2026 08:23
The Making of An Appetite
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely seductive and sensuous write with an image that seems most delicious to the point of being mouth watering. Well done my friend
March 14th, 2026 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
What a lovely seductive and sensuous write with an image that seems most delicious to the point of being mouth watering. Well done my friend
March 14th, 2026 06:53
The Making of An Appetite
Doggerel Dave said:
Jolly old mirror mirror on the ceiling,
You be reflective of the way I\'m feeling... Sorry Neville - there are times when an old rhymer just can\'t help himself...
March 14th, 2026 06:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Jolly old mirror mirror on the ceiling,
You be reflective of the way I\'m feeling... Sorry Neville - there are times when an old rhymer just can\'t help himself...
March 14th, 2026 06:04
More Than Just A Contented Man
Goldfinch60 said:
May your god go with you Neville.
Andy
March 14th, 2026 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May your god go with you Neville.
Andy
March 14th, 2026 02:28
More Than Just A Contented Man
orchidee said:
Sounds like some ones are having fun! What would I know, in me sheltered life?! heehee.
March 13th, 2026 09:43
orchidee said:
Sounds like some ones are having fun! What would I know, in me sheltered life?! heehee.
March 13th, 2026 09:43
More Than Just A Contented Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this made me smile… sensual and cheeky, yet written with that unmistakable poetic touch. The sauna imagery and that ivy line really anchor the moment. I’ll certainly be purchasing Falling With Icarus & Other Words in Progress when it releases. Supporting Brain Tumour Research through poetry is a beautiful thing. God bless you, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 13th, 2026 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this made me smile… sensual and cheeky, yet written with that unmistakable poetic touch. The sauna imagery and that ivy line really anchor the moment. I’ll certainly be purchasing Falling With Icarus & Other Words in Progress when it releases. Supporting Brain Tumour Research through poetry is a beautiful thing. God bless you, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 13th, 2026 09:03
More Than Just A Contented Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Strategy: wait for possibly one more comment and then fill this space with \'As Above\' - that should cover it. But as the world keeps on turning, I\'m not quite sure when I will be in this spot once more... So if orchi can get away with \'good write\' I will - just this once... Good write Neville.
March 13th, 2026 08:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Strategy: wait for possibly one more comment and then fill this space with \'As Above\' - that should cover it. But as the world keeps on turning, I\'m not quite sure when I will be in this spot once more... So if orchi can get away with \'good write\' I will - just this once... Good write Neville.
March 13th, 2026 08:55
More Than Just A Contented Man
2781 said:
Are you fucking with the Lord?
If so, I think I understand.
March 13th, 2026 07:47
2781 said:
Are you fucking with the Lord?
If so, I think I understand.
March 13th, 2026 07:47
More Than Just A Contented Man
sorenbarrett said:
This seems an ode a call for one last fling before the curtain falls. It is a beautiful expression of passion and lust for life in recognition of its ending. A life almost complete lacking that one last sip of wine when one can say I have done it all and the last piece falls into the puzzle the picture complete. Lovely and a fave
March 13th, 2026 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
This seems an ode a call for one last fling before the curtain falls. It is a beautiful expression of passion and lust for life in recognition of its ending. A life almost complete lacking that one last sip of wine when one can say I have done it all and the last piece falls into the puzzle the picture complete. Lovely and a fave
March 13th, 2026 06:15
Defining Still
NafisaSB said:
one can visualize the predator waiting to strike on its prey - beautifully described
March 11th, 2026 00:59
NafisaSB said:
one can visualize the predator waiting to strike on its prey - beautifully described
March 11th, 2026 00:59
Defining Still
Thomas W Case said:
This has the calm, lethal patience of something wild and untouchable.
The tension builds slowly, like watching shadows wait for their moment.
March 10th, 2026 09:12
Thomas W Case said:
This has the calm, lethal patience of something wild and untouchable.
The tension builds slowly, like watching shadows wait for their moment.
March 10th, 2026 09:12
Aftertastes
Goldfinch60 said:
Tastes and smells can bring back such memories Neville, fine nostalgic words.
Andy
March 9th, 2026 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Tastes and smells can bring back such memories Neville, fine nostalgic words.
Andy
March 9th, 2026 02:49
Aftertastes
Doggerel Dave said:
Needed a new fridge if you were generating that amount of heat alongside. Enough tucker in good nick there for breakfast?
(A rich moment with all the trimmings, Neville 👍)
March 8th, 2026 16:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Needed a new fridge if you were generating that amount of heat alongside. Enough tucker in good nick there for breakfast?
(A rich moment with all the trimmings, Neville 👍)
March 8th, 2026 16:26
Aftertastes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, that detail of rakia and apricots stayed with me. The way taste becomes part of the memory gives the whole scene a warmth that feels very real. It’s a small moment, yet it carries a whole story within it. Nicely written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 8th, 2026 07:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, that detail of rakia and apricots stayed with me. The way taste becomes part of the memory gives the whole scene a warmth that feels very real. It’s a small moment, yet it carries a whole story within it. Nicely written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 8th, 2026 07:22
Aftertastes
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic it is the taste of a memory that is sweeter than any dream, it is under the rust of time that gold shines in contrast. A most lovely write Neville and a fave
March 8th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic it is the taste of a memory that is sweeter than any dream, it is under the rust of time that gold shines in contrast. A most lovely write Neville and a fave
March 8th, 2026 04:20
Defining Still
Goldfinch60 said:
I have seen bitterns, they are magnificent birds soren. Fine words.
Andy
March 7th, 2026 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
I have seen bitterns, they are magnificent birds soren. Fine words.
Andy
March 7th, 2026 02:55
Defining Still
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville, many words have been expended over time here and elsewhere in attempts to differentiate between animals and humans. There you have the essence...
(Not yer average bird of prey, BTW, when I looked.)
March 6th, 2026 17:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville, many words have been expended over time here and elsewhere in attempts to differentiate between animals and humans. There you have the essence...
(Not yer average bird of prey, BTW, when I looked.)
March 6th, 2026 17:26
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