Comments received on poems by Neville
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
orchidee said:
Godo write N. KP don\'t burn up, she melts with botox. I told her that\'s what would happen, then I said to her \'Oops, my dear, it alrwady has happened\'. lol.
August 8th, 2025 09:55
orchidee said:
Godo write N. KP don\'t burn up, she melts with botox. I told her that\'s what would happen, then I said to her \'Oops, my dear, it alrwady has happened\'. lol.
August 8th, 2025 09:55
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
arqios said:
Your poem carries a mournful wisdom, gently cautioning against hubris while also recognising the inevitable allure of flight. It\'s a quiet elegy for the dreamers, and a mirror for anyone who\'s tried to defy gravity long enough to understand what holds us down.
August 8th, 2025 08:08
arqios said:
Your poem carries a mournful wisdom, gently cautioning against hubris while also recognising the inevitable allure of flight. It\'s a quiet elegy for the dreamers, and a mirror for anyone who\'s tried to defy gravity long enough to understand what holds us down.
August 8th, 2025 08:08
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely nicely thought out write, being burned leaves an everlasting scar, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 05:42
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely nicely thought out write, being burned leaves an everlasting scar, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 05:42
Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
sorenbarrett said:
Those flight of fancy wings can get too close to the sun and wax does not stick well to skin in warm weather. Nicely penned my friend
August 8th, 2025 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Those flight of fancy wings can get too close to the sun and wax does not stick well to skin in warm weather. Nicely penned my friend
August 8th, 2025 04:06
Filling Gaps
orchidee said:
When KP goes there\'s gonna be a whole lotta space taken up with botox - acres of it as she melts away! lol. She will pollute the soil with it. I will encase her in.... an old tea chest. heehee.
August 6th, 2025 11:27
orchidee said:
When KP goes there\'s gonna be a whole lotta space taken up with botox - acres of it as she melts away! lol. She will pollute the soil with it. I will encase her in.... an old tea chest. heehee.
August 6th, 2025 11:27
Filling Gaps
Bella Shepard said:
This poem dear friend, tugs at the heart strings and brings a lump to the throat, it is so true. For it is the very feeling, when you live through it. Beautifully said!
August 6th, 2025 10:49
Bella Shepard said:
This poem dear friend, tugs at the heart strings and brings a lump to the throat, it is so true. For it is the very feeling, when you live through it. Beautifully said!
August 6th, 2025 10:49
Filling Gaps
Friendship said:
Your poem \'Filling Gaps\' beautifully captures the fleeting nature of human existence, illuminating the profound emotional resonance that lingers long after someone\'s departure, and poignantly reflects on the humble physical space individuals occupy in life, juxtaposed with the transformative emotional impact of their absence.
August 6th, 2025 07:49
Friendship said:
Your poem \'Filling Gaps\' beautifully captures the fleeting nature of human existence, illuminating the profound emotional resonance that lingers long after someone\'s departure, and poignantly reflects on the humble physical space individuals occupy in life, juxtaposed with the transformative emotional impact of their absence.
August 6th, 2025 07:49
Filling Gaps
Poetic Licence said:
It appears so simple that it is brilliant, I had never thought off it like that until now, so true, lovely write
August 6th, 2025 06:10
Poetic Licence said:
It appears so simple that it is brilliant, I had never thought off it like that until now, so true, lovely write
August 6th, 2025 06:10
Filling Gaps
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. The hole is always larger than the shovel.
August 6th, 2025 06:02
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. The hole is always larger than the shovel.
August 6th, 2025 06:02
Filling Gaps
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful play on words and concepts. The hole left is in some ways like removing a chest buried in dry sand it leaves a hole or impression that extends outward beyond the original boundaries of the box. Although not in the same form or as deep it leaves an impression far wider. Loved this one Neville
August 6th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful play on words and concepts. The hole left is in some ways like removing a chest buried in dry sand it leaves a hole or impression that extends outward beyond the original boundaries of the box. Although not in the same form or as deep it leaves an impression far wider. Loved this one Neville
August 6th, 2025 05:14
Yamatorige - Feathers of A Copper Pheasant
arqios said:
A most impressive avian!
August 5th, 2025 15:51
arqios said:
A most impressive avian!
August 5th, 2025 15:51
Yamatorige - Feathers of A Copper Pheasant
Cheeky Missy said:
Grand. Set me to researching what I\'ve hitherto been ignorant of, will you? Fascinating, indeed. This is a charming use of poetry. I do so LOVE it. Excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 5th, 2025 11:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Grand. Set me to researching what I\'ve hitherto been ignorant of, will you? Fascinating, indeed. This is a charming use of poetry. I do so LOVE it. Excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 5th, 2025 11:54
Yamatorige - Feathers of A Copper Pheasant
sorenbarrett said:
So often the title is requisite in understanding the poem. Here with the title\'s help the imagery of the poem paints a perfect picture where nature and symmetry become one. Very nicely worded this poem puts me there the setting painted. I have seen pheasants before but they have always been on the ground flushed out of bush with an explosion of wings making quite a distinctive sound. Most lovely Neville
August 5th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
So often the title is requisite in understanding the poem. Here with the title\'s help the imagery of the poem paints a perfect picture where nature and symmetry become one. Very nicely worded this poem puts me there the setting painted. I have seen pheasants before but they have always been on the ground flushed out of bush with an explosion of wings making quite a distinctive sound. Most lovely Neville
August 5th, 2025 04:27
Yamatorige - Feathers of A Copper Pheasant
Poetic Licence said:
Yamatorige one of Japan\'s most treasured and beautiful cultural possesions, and probably the most beautiful sword ever made, a lovely write, enjoyed
August 5th, 2025 02:59
Poetic Licence said:
Yamatorige one of Japan\'s most treasured and beautiful cultural possesions, and probably the most beautiful sword ever made, a lovely write, enjoyed
August 5th, 2025 02:59
Barely Touching
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my--!!! Your style tastefully pushing the limits of discretion, this tiny hymn from the deeper recesses of the boudoir at its most passionate moments is sultry indeed, until I feel like hiding myself lest I be caught in activities forbidden me. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a charged poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 4th, 2025 11:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my--!!! Your style tastefully pushing the limits of discretion, this tiny hymn from the deeper recesses of the boudoir at its most passionate moments is sultry indeed, until I feel like hiding myself lest I be caught in activities forbidden me. Superbly rendered with excellent imagery and a charged poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 4th, 2025 11:40
Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Neville. I was standing there looking at that Jug and Bowl. Good chat.
August 4th, 2025 07:49
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Neville. I was standing there looking at that Jug and Bowl. Good chat.
August 4th, 2025 07:49
Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Portrait of an Old Jug and Bowl\" is a testament to the timeless allure and exquisite craftsmanship of porcelain artifacts, masterfully juxtaposing their historical significance with their contemporary presence in a personal space, inspiring reflection on the passage of time, the artistry involved in their creation, and the way objects can retain their elegance while serving functional roles in modern life.
August 4th, 2025 07:44
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Portrait of an Old Jug and Bowl\" is a testament to the timeless allure and exquisite craftsmanship of porcelain artifacts, masterfully juxtaposing their historical significance with their contemporary presence in a personal space, inspiring reflection on the passage of time, the artistry involved in their creation, and the way objects can retain their elegance while serving functional roles in modern life.
August 4th, 2025 07:44
Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful description of a beautiful piece of japanese pottery which is clearly valued as it should be,a thing of beauty. The gold crane is sometimes used to cover a repair, but this sounds in perfect condition, I hope the cranes deliver what they represent happiness and longevity, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 05:31
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful description of a beautiful piece of japanese pottery which is clearly valued as it should be,a thing of beauty. The gold crane is sometimes used to cover a repair, but this sounds in perfect condition, I hope the cranes deliver what they represent happiness and longevity, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 05:31
Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl
sorenbarrett said:
Some works of art are fortunate enough to be appreciated by their owners to be kept in pristine condition through generations, passed down from one to the next. Valuable even in the beginning they grow in value with age, but they require a discerning eye and a careful hand in a culture that has appreciation for them. Stunning images Neville and yes some things do speak for themselves without the need of metaphor
August 4th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Some works of art are fortunate enough to be appreciated by their owners to be kept in pristine condition through generations, passed down from one to the next. Valuable even in the beginning they grow in value with age, but they require a discerning eye and a careful hand in a culture that has appreciation for them. Stunning images Neville and yes some things do speak for themselves without the need of metaphor
August 4th, 2025 03:54
Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
And now my next poem, \'Portrait of an old boot\' (or old trout). I will include a pic of KP with the poem. Heehee.
I\'m a naughty guinea pig rodent. She\'ll feed me lettuce. They can\'t have it, as it gives them the trots. But they can have cabbage and grass.
August 4th, 2025 02:30
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
And now my next poem, \'Portrait of an old boot\' (or old trout). I will include a pic of KP with the poem. Heehee.
I\'m a naughty guinea pig rodent. She\'ll feed me lettuce. They can\'t have it, as it gives them the trots. But they can have cabbage and grass.
August 4th, 2025 02:30
Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville showing that some things change for the better and many do not.
Andy
August 4th, 2025 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville showing that some things change for the better and many do not.
Andy
August 4th, 2025 01:53
Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a reason I left visual art for words, as you\'ve too capably proven herein, for while any rendering of the same would have been pretty, I never could have cherished it as much as I do this. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and an almost exquisite poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 4th, 2025 01:44
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a reason I left visual art for words, as you\'ve too capably proven herein, for while any rendering of the same would have been pretty, I never could have cherished it as much as I do this. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and an almost exquisite poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 4th, 2025 01:44
The Reason Why Colours Make Out
Cheeky Missy said:
Only you could render the gorgeous experience of daybreak with such quintessential twists it\'s practically become fit for mature individuals and none else. My la! You, oh you! How exquisitely you, how daintily rendered with excellent imagery and a passionate poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 3rd, 2025 20:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Only you could render the gorgeous experience of daybreak with such quintessential twists it\'s practically become fit for mature individuals and none else. My la! You, oh you! How exquisitely you, how daintily rendered with excellent imagery and a passionate poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
August 3rd, 2025 20:10
Madagascan Girls
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all unique Neville, fine words.
Andy
August 3rd, 2025 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all unique Neville, fine words.
Andy
August 3rd, 2025 01:53
Madagascan Girls
orchidee said:
KP\'s not from Madagascar. She\'s from Botox Country, wherever that is! lol.
August 2nd, 2025 13:35
orchidee said:
KP\'s not from Madagascar. She\'s from Botox Country, wherever that is! lol.
August 2nd, 2025 13:35
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