Comments received on poems by Neville



Repression and The Senegambia Highway Man
arqios said:

A distinct moment that comes back just as randomly as it happens, I’ve begun having those and must remember to document them as you have here. It’s a beautiful anecdotal piece. πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•ŠπŸ™πŸ»

February 4th, 2025 02:02

Echoes Dont Tell Lies 🀍
SJSangeetha said:

NEVILLE,

CAN I GET THE AMAZON LINK ..I LOVED THE TITLE OF YOUR BOOK.

February 4th, 2025 01:18

Repression and The Senegambia Highway Man
Poetic Licence said:

A fantastic piece of work with cleverly chosen and crafted words, clearly giving imagery to all feelings and emotions, and to top it off it is true and so very sad. I loved the Neville, great read

February 3rd, 2025 16:08

Repression and The Senegambia Highway Man
sorenbarrett said:

True or not it\'s a great metaphor just the same. Repression, denial, projection, displacement, regression, sublimation all seem to have a part in this story. Love the little lines fit such as the back of the old refigerator.. Several carefully chosen words helped the whole process such as totally blinded. Hardly thought about the guy again. Poetry is a wonderful sublimation I use it all the time. A great story Neville

February 3rd, 2025 15:35

Love Seeds
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Great metaphor and symbolism.

February 3rd, 2025 10:45

Sussing the Pot Plant
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, Neville. A really poignant piece.

February 3rd, 2025 09:27

Sussing the Pot Plant
Cheeky Missy said:

Aww, is that, erm, the reason you collected that particular variety of the species?...so that the female sex could indulge in its half favorite pastime?

February 2nd, 2025 12:43

Sussing the Pot Plant
Goldfinch60 said:

May that loneliness disappear and wondrous love reappear Neville.

Andy

February 2nd, 2025 02:51

Sussing the Pot Plant
Thomas W Case said:

You bring the scene to life. Powerful work.

February 1st, 2025 21:20

Sussing the Pot Plant
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

February 1st, 2025 17:25

Sussing the Pot Plant
orchidee said:

Good write N. KP wanted a pot plant, so I bought her one. It was \'the weed\' = pot! Dunno why she complained. I said to her: \'Well, you wanted a pot plant, dear!\' lol.

February 1st, 2025 12:01

Sussing the Pot Plant
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Just wow. A hauntingly and heartbreakingly beautiful poem. It is poignant as we all experience and go through loneliness and grief. We experience it for ourselves, and we observe others going through it. Of course, not everyone is open to those emotions in themselves, and, of course, that leads them to be pretty insensitive to others. You, my friend, are a sensitive observer who is open to the wellspring of emotions that grief and loneliness are and the process it takes to go through it. Well done. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

February 1st, 2025 08:55

Sussing the Pot Plant
arqios said:

I do love the interplay of images, motions, nuances and interactions! You’re earning another like/fave combo N! πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

February 1st, 2025 07:12

Sussing the Pot Plant
Doggerel Dave said:

You have a wife with a superfluity of empathy – now whatever you do don’t you be slipping on the new shiny spiral staircase and cause her further grief, Neville.......

February 1st, 2025 06:48

Sussing the Pot Plant
sorenbarrett said:

And so we all weep in our lonelyness. Separated by species, gender, social level and space we are all alone. As the plant behind a window, separated from fellow plants so we from our wives and families see them through the window of our eyes held back from joining them by technology (shiny spiral staircase), daily duties (washing of dishes) and understanding. How cunning the choice of a weeping fig. Very nice so rich in metaphor here Neville.

February 1st, 2025 05:43

The Reason Why Colours Make Out
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice One Neville
Cool And Soothing

February 1st, 2025 05:08

Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
arqios said:

β€œWhatever you do, don’t look down,” as the off quoted saying goes! πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 31st, 2025 20:12

Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Cheeky Missy said:

[If only I\'d not worked third shift Wednesday night, I might have commented in timely fashion on this characteristic beauty, but by the time I caught it I\'d no strength to pull off that, nor do more than observe.]
Dear flights of fancy! Oh, Icarus! Wax wings are only useful under certain circumstances, vaporizing in a heartbeat and the eye of Day. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing!

January 31st, 2025 17:43

Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Tom Dylan said:

Nicely done, Neville. A thought-provoking piece.

January 31st, 2025 08:30

Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Goldfinch60 said:

Listening to your heart is so important Neville.

Andy

January 31st, 2025 02:45

Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
NafisaSB said:

so touching and moving - hope you find closure soon take care -be safe and happy

January 31st, 2025 01:06

Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Dan Williams said:

Wow, short but so intense. I know loss is lessened by putting it into verse. Nice job.

January 30th, 2025 23:49

Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Nevilie

January 30th, 2025 20:33

Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant.

January 30th, 2025 19:34

Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
sorenbarrett said:

You got me thinking again. We often fall back in time to burn with past thoughts. If we only had listened to past warnings we might not have burned. Very nice Neville

January 30th, 2025 16:30

Remarking on A Flight of Fancy
Poetic Licence said:

Thank you Neville enjoyed my late night read.

January 30th, 2025 16:27

Taste
Cheeky Missy said:

Wowers! This is so superbly rendered with such eloquent imagery it\'s very nearly palpably delicious, and so evocative I could almost faint for sheer yearning, pining for whom or what I know not. Ah me! Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it. Intrigue flirts about its fringed border, tantalizing.

January 30th, 2025 08:01

In the Beginning of Our Forever
Reynaldo Casison said:

Nice One Neville
The Stars Sparkle In This One
Enjoyed It My Friend

January 30th, 2025 04:55

Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Tom Dylan said:

A moving write, Neville. You really captured the emotion.

January 30th, 2025 04:02

Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Neville, in time all the good things will be remembered and the good things will fix that patch.

Andy

January 30th, 2025 02:25



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