Comments received on poems by Neville
How on Earth Did She do That
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah Nev. - - that She left her mark on someone methinks. An age-old talent for flirting I would say made her behave that way - -- - - -- - - well at least my dear friend she is almost immortalised by this extra-beguiling and well penned verse............x
October 20th, 2022 07:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah Nev. - - that She left her mark on someone methinks. An age-old talent for flirting I would say made her behave that way - -- - - -- - - well at least my dear friend she is almost immortalised by this extra-beguiling and well penned verse............x
October 20th, 2022 07:01
How on Earth Did She do That
Ninkasi said:
Quite a read that was and reading it all created a salt and pepper reaction in the mind. Drew a visual image gradually.
October 20th, 2022 05:51
Ninkasi said:
Quite a read that was and reading it all created a salt and pepper reaction in the mind. Drew a visual image gradually.
October 20th, 2022 05:51
How on Earth Did She do That
Doggerel Dave said:
Mystery, always mystery, but carnal relations could be imminent......
Worked for you, Nev?
October 20th, 2022 03:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Mystery, always mystery, but carnal relations could be imminent......
Worked for you, Nev?
October 20th, 2022 03:45
How on Earth Did She do That
arqios said:
Masters of communication once matriculating in the school of relationship arts has been successfully navigated. Some do take to that like a duck to water.
October 20th, 2022 03:29
arqios said:
Masters of communication once matriculating in the school of relationship arts has been successfully navigated. Some do take to that like a duck to water.
October 20th, 2022 03:29
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
Paul Bell said:
Putin\'s thumb along with his head should be amputated for the world\'s health.
October 19th, 2022 09:46
Paul Bell said:
Putin\'s thumb along with his head should be amputated for the world\'s health.
October 19th, 2022 09:46
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
Fay Slimm. said:
We may have grown accustomed to history repeating but not accepted that we become victims to belief that the spirit of hope has no future. - - - -- - -- well that\'s what i think mon ami despite that ominous thumb..........x
October 19th, 2022 04:27
Fay Slimm. said:
We may have grown accustomed to history repeating but not accepted that we become victims to belief that the spirit of hope has no future. - - - -- - -- well that\'s what i think mon ami despite that ominous thumb..........x
October 19th, 2022 04:27
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
arqios said:
And as the winter advances so shall the precedent of Napoleon and Aldolf\'s advances.
October 19th, 2022 03:26
arqios said:
And as the winter advances so shall the precedent of Napoleon and Aldolf\'s advances.
October 19th, 2022 03:26
Beneath Putin’s Thumb
Doggerel Dave said:
We have, Nev. Which in no way alters or modifies my contention that it need never have occurred at all.
(Best ignore - or this may once more end with a debate on the role of histo.....)
October 19th, 2022 03:23
Doggerel Dave said:
We have, Nev. Which in no way alters or modifies my contention that it need never have occurred at all.
(Best ignore - or this may once more end with a debate on the role of histo.....)
October 19th, 2022 03:23
Grandma Wears Denim
Goldfinch60 said:
Still in her youthful days Neville, that is great.
Andy
October 19th, 2022 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Still in her youthful days Neville, that is great.
Andy
October 19th, 2022 01:33
Grandma Wears Denim
arqios said:
Never caught any of my nan\'s in denim. It probably isn\'t as comfortable a garment to don at a certain age.
October 18th, 2022 07:45
arqios said:
Never caught any of my nan\'s in denim. It probably isn\'t as comfortable a garment to don at a certain age.
October 18th, 2022 07:45
Grandma Wears Denim
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Gal - forget \'mutton dressed as lamb\' - you are only as old as you feel: I\'m a bit of a Peter Pan meself, so p\'raps we could get together sometimes ..never thoughr the internet could.....
October 18th, 2022 07:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Gal - forget \'mutton dressed as lamb\' - you are only as old as you feel: I\'m a bit of a Peter Pan meself, so p\'raps we could get together sometimes ..never thoughr the internet could.....
October 18th, 2022 07:02
Grandma Wears Denim
Fay Slimm. said:
Whew - - what a gal -- Who wouldn\'t be proud of a Granny like that.........x
October 18th, 2022 05:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Whew - - what a gal -- Who wouldn\'t be proud of a Granny like that.........x
October 18th, 2022 05:59
With All My Fondest Regards
Fay Slimm. said:
No more respectful approach to end an acid affair than contained in these lines of gentle reminders that love means loyalty. Quite moving these fondest regards and Nev.
I hope they arrived via your poetic need for expression and not from experience my luverly friend..........x
October 17th, 2022 12:38
Fay Slimm. said:
No more respectful approach to end an acid affair than contained in these lines of gentle reminders that love means loyalty. Quite moving these fondest regards and Nev.
I hope they arrived via your poetic need for expression and not from experience my luverly friend..........x
October 17th, 2022 12:38
With All My Fondest Regards
sorenbarrett said:
Not limited to ex-lovers, this could easily be sent to many so called friends or even relatives that choose to fall out of relationships. Nicely done.
October 17th, 2022 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
Not limited to ex-lovers, this could easily be sent to many so called friends or even relatives that choose to fall out of relationships. Nicely done.
October 17th, 2022 11:24
With All My Fondest Regards
orchidee said:
I got back to ya quick. I didn\'t give ya a moment\'s peace! lol
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido, and gimme a bone!
October 17th, 2022 10:26
orchidee said:
I got back to ya quick. I didn\'t give ya a moment\'s peace! lol
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido, and gimme a bone!
October 17th, 2022 10:26
When Wild Honey is Not Always the Sweetest
Rocky Lagou said:
This is so lovely dear poet! I mean jeez I felt this experience as it was happening, and your godsent rhetoric and style just ties it all together. \"I shall focus entirely on / love songs, / our survival and poetry ..\" is actually such a beautiful line. Whilst your lover (I\'m assuming) is getting ready for what seems like a good time, you\'re already looking further to the \"survival\" of the relationship. This is wonderful!
October 17th, 2022 08:28
Rocky Lagou said:
This is so lovely dear poet! I mean jeez I felt this experience as it was happening, and your godsent rhetoric and style just ties it all together. \"I shall focus entirely on / love songs, / our survival and poetry ..\" is actually such a beautiful line. Whilst your lover (I\'m assuming) is getting ready for what seems like a good time, you\'re already looking further to the \"survival\" of the relationship. This is wonderful!
October 17th, 2022 08:28
With All My Fondest Regards
arqios said:
The moving on part of love\'s expression.
October 17th, 2022 04:59
arqios said:
The moving on part of love\'s expression.
October 17th, 2022 04:59
With All My Fondest Regards
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to look back from afar. Usually a million miles back. Sadly, communication is inbuilt now and there\'s no hiding place.
October 17th, 2022 04:42
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes you just have to look back from afar. Usually a million miles back. Sadly, communication is inbuilt now and there\'s no hiding place.
October 17th, 2022 04:42
With All My Fondest Regards
Doggerel Dave said:
Not (I dare to contradict) a love poem to be found here, and not sad in that context - refreshing. But tragically a message I wish I\'d sent to at least one of the friends/lovers who touched my life....but has....
Much appreciated, Neville.
October 17th, 2022 04:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Not (I dare to contradict) a love poem to be found here, and not sad in that context - refreshing. But tragically a message I wish I\'d sent to at least one of the friends/lovers who touched my life....but has....
Much appreciated, Neville.
October 17th, 2022 04:18
When Wild Honey is Not Always the Sweetest
Doggerel Dave said:
Your imagery rich lines sent me off in a number of different directions individually, Nev; but once more my pedestrian mind floundered in the depths...
Enjoyable trip as tourist, though.
October 16th, 2022 18:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Your imagery rich lines sent me off in a number of different directions individually, Nev; but once more my pedestrian mind floundered in the depths...
Enjoyable trip as tourist, though.
October 16th, 2022 18:01
When Wild Honey is Not Always the Sweetest
orchidee said:
KP will have to go. She is costing me too much! But I won\'t see her any less. I don\'t see her 99% in person anyway - only on TV, in papers, or doing \'porridge\'\'?
She gets away with things, with botox making her look like an old trout age 99, so they let her off (No offence to oldies).
October 16th, 2022 11:32
orchidee said:
KP will have to go. She is costing me too much! But I won\'t see her any less. I don\'t see her 99% in person anyway - only on TV, in papers, or doing \'porridge\'\'?
She gets away with things, with botox making her look like an old trout age 99, so they let her off (No offence to oldies).
October 16th, 2022 11:32
When Wild Honey is Not Always the Sweetest
Fay Slimm. said:
Sweeter than honey those long-ago days Nev. - -- remembering when love was a song that could never die and this piece of poetry proves it with relatable imagery - - - it set me off recalling life on the cheap but oh what great times ....x
October 16th, 2022 10:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Sweeter than honey those long-ago days Nev. - -- remembering when love was a song that could never die and this piece of poetry proves it with relatable imagery - - - it set me off recalling life on the cheap but oh what great times ....x
October 16th, 2022 10:49
When Wild Honey is Not Always the Sweetest
arqios said:
Wow N, power title to start off with! As a child my older cousins and uncles took me wild honey ‘hunting.’ And yes, without the aid of bleached processed sugar it can have its specific type of sweetness that isn’t the sweetest type around. So glad to be experiencing this poem!
October 16th, 2022 08:20
arqios said:
Wow N, power title to start off with! As a child my older cousins and uncles took me wild honey ‘hunting.’ And yes, without the aid of bleached processed sugar it can have its specific type of sweetness that isn’t the sweetest type around. So glad to be experiencing this poem!
October 16th, 2022 08:20
The Science of Passing the Buck
orchidee said:
I\'m blustering on with another comment, in an upper crust fashion!
Oh, I say, old chap, a fine F poem if I F say so myself, and F well presented!
Woof, steady on says Fido. His ears are burning, and the air\'s turned blue! lol.
October 16th, 2022 02:03
orchidee said:
I\'m blustering on with another comment, in an upper crust fashion!
Oh, I say, old chap, a fine F poem if I F say so myself, and F well presented!
Woof, steady on says Fido. His ears are burning, and the air\'s turned blue! lol.
October 16th, 2022 02:03
The Science of Passing the Buck
Goldfinch60 said:
That litigation culture does not take to account the real feelings of the majority of people in our world, most just want to live in peace without those in power doing something different.
Andy
October 16th, 2022 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
That litigation culture does not take to account the real feelings of the majority of people in our world, most just want to live in peace without those in power doing something different.
Andy
October 16th, 2022 01:31
The Science of Passing the Buck
Doggerel Dave said:
Never witnessed you so angry here, Nev.... Antipathy totally justified in my certainly not humble opinion - tho\' where it comes from, what triggered it ....and I wouldn\'t blame it on Covid...
October 15th, 2022 20:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Never witnessed you so angry here, Nev.... Antipathy totally justified in my certainly not humble opinion - tho\' where it comes from, what triggered it ....and I wouldn\'t blame it on Covid...
October 15th, 2022 20:41
The Science of Passing the Buck
MendedFences27 said:
All it takes is one citizen to pass the buck to another, and then, because there is more than one citizen involved it ends up in the hands of some organization, who then passes it from the local to the regional to the national. They of course, pass it to the government starting with the local, who then pass it to the county, and they pass it to the state which, in turn, forward it to the federal. It then gets moved to the Congress which pass that buck to the president, where Harry Truman said, \"The buck stops here,\" as a measure of taking responsibility.
Your poem highlights this inane shirking and the preposterous excuses used to achieve it. Where does it all end? Only the originator of the pass has that answer, but he\'ll probably pass it on, to avoid a lawsuit. - Phil A.
October 15th, 2022 14:33
MendedFences27 said:
All it takes is one citizen to pass the buck to another, and then, because there is more than one citizen involved it ends up in the hands of some organization, who then passes it from the local to the regional to the national. They of course, pass it to the government starting with the local, who then pass it to the county, and they pass it to the state which, in turn, forward it to the federal. It then gets moved to the Congress which pass that buck to the president, where Harry Truman said, \"The buck stops here,\" as a measure of taking responsibility.
Your poem highlights this inane shirking and the preposterous excuses used to achieve it. Where does it all end? Only the originator of the pass has that answer, but he\'ll probably pass it on, to avoid a lawsuit. - Phil A.
October 15th, 2022 14:33
Upon Testing Positive
Fay Slimm. said:
You are too manly-strong to be under for long Nev. - - give that nasty covid a kick up the backside by resting a bit and methinks he will slink away before long - -- take care my dear friend.......x
October 15th, 2022 12:11
Fay Slimm. said:
You are too manly-strong to be under for long Nev. - - give that nasty covid a kick up the backside by resting a bit and methinks he will slink away before long - -- take care my dear friend.......x
October 15th, 2022 12:11
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