Comments received on poems by Neville
Looking Forward to Later
orchidee said:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F even!
Woof! Not now says Fido! lol.
August 31st, 2022 07:18
orchidee said:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F even!
Woof! Not now says Fido! lol.
August 31st, 2022 07:18
Looking Forward to Later
Fay Slimm. said:
The first of your double-take gets my vote Nev. as despite this culture\'s modern approach to the sex-act it brings out in your final lines the difference in just coupling and that of mating with love. Know too what you mean by street-wise phrases that come from lots of youngsters today...............x
August 31st, 2022 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
The first of your double-take gets my vote Nev. as despite this culture\'s modern approach to the sex-act it brings out in your final lines the difference in just coupling and that of mating with love. Know too what you mean by street-wise phrases that come from lots of youngsters today...............x
August 31st, 2022 03:46
A Few Moments After
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be always there Neville.
Andy
August 31st, 2022 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be always there Neville.
Andy
August 31st, 2022 00:36
A Few Moments After
Bella Shepard said:
To me the beauty of the poem is that a simple gesture says it all. No need for words, a silence that fills the heart. Well penned dear friend!
August 30th, 2022 14:26
Bella Shepard said:
To me the beauty of the poem is that a simple gesture says it all. No need for words, a silence that fills the heart. Well penned dear friend!
August 30th, 2022 14:26
A Few Moments After
MendedFences27 said:
Is this the birthplace of erotic Emojis?
A lot is said here with but a few words, the rest is left to the reader\'s humanity. The scene is minimally painted and yet piques the readers imagination. And then it ends, and the remainder is in the mind of the reader. If poetry is saying the most with the least, this is poetry at its best. - Phil A.
August 30th, 2022 10:44
MendedFences27 said:
Is this the birthplace of erotic Emojis?
A lot is said here with but a few words, the rest is left to the reader\'s humanity. The scene is minimally painted and yet piques the readers imagination. And then it ends, and the remainder is in the mind of the reader. If poetry is saying the most with the least, this is poetry at its best. - Phil A.
August 30th, 2022 10:44
A Few Moments After
Doggerel Dave said:
Gritty stuff, Neville - wasn\'t the makings of a question mark unfinished, was it?
August 30th, 2022 06:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Gritty stuff, Neville - wasn\'t the makings of a question mark unfinished, was it?
August 30th, 2022 06:05
A Few Moments After
Fay Slimm. said:
Another warm glimpse into an intimate moment giving your poet\'s view of \"afterward glow\" - -- you know how to leave much unsaid but always so telling mon ami ................x
August 30th, 2022 03:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Another warm glimpse into an intimate moment giving your poet\'s view of \"afterward glow\" - -- you know how to leave much unsaid but always so telling mon ami ................x
August 30th, 2022 03:13
While Watching Swifts
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, swifts are like art in motion.
Andy
August 30th, 2022 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Neville, swifts are like art in motion.
Andy
August 30th, 2022 01:27
While Watching Swifts
orchidee said:
I had an experience of two halves - in a field, watching swifts go by, poetically, winging their way, etc - then I stepped in a pile of manure! Well, I was looking up. From the sublime to the ridiculous. lol.
August 30th, 2022 01:19
orchidee said:
I had an experience of two halves - in a field, watching swifts go by, poetically, winging their way, etc - then I stepped in a pile of manure! Well, I was looking up. From the sublime to the ridiculous. lol.
August 30th, 2022 01:19
While Watching Swifts
Doggerel Dave said:
For me it is impossible to express the wonder.
Glad you took up the challenge and succeeded, Neville
August 29th, 2022 19:51
Doggerel Dave said:
For me it is impossible to express the wonder.
Glad you took up the challenge and succeeded, Neville
August 29th, 2022 19:51
While Watching Swifts
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear friend, I think it\'s all three. I can see the urge in the artist to paint it, the longing of heart to absorb it and the need in the poet to capture it in words, which is exactly what you have done. I love the way you have traced the movement of the swifts, and the visual of color.
August 29th, 2022 13:52
Bella Shepard said:
Beautifully expressed dear friend, I think it\'s all three. I can see the urge in the artist to paint it, the longing of heart to absorb it and the need in the poet to capture it in words, which is exactly what you have done. I love the way you have traced the movement of the swifts, and the visual of color.
August 29th, 2022 13:52
Just a Few Recollections
Fay Slimm. said:
Old crumpled photos can bring instantly back those golden days when love understood and a heart saw freckles as golden gems. An evocative read mon ami.
August 28th, 2022 11:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Old crumpled photos can bring instantly back those golden days when love understood and a heart saw freckles as golden gems. An evocative read mon ami.
August 28th, 2022 11:12
Just a Few Recollections
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I cant recollect meeting her. And what\'s it got to do with me?! Do shut up Orchi. lol.
August 28th, 2022 07:17
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I cant recollect meeting her. And what\'s it got to do with me?! Do shut up Orchi. lol.
August 28th, 2022 07:17
Just a Few Recollections
Doggerel Dave said:
A memory without remorse, Neville - the very best kind when it involves someone so special.
August 28th, 2022 06:36
Doggerel Dave said:
A memory without remorse, Neville - the very best kind when it involves someone so special.
August 28th, 2022 06:36
Take Two Poles Josie
Aradhya said:
a beautiful and emotional read Neville. your mother seems to be a very special lady and even if she isn\'t here physically her memories and teachings are with you and she\'ll be so happy to learn how you treasure memories. excellent, my friend!
August 28th, 2022 02:24
Aradhya said:
a beautiful and emotional read Neville. your mother seems to be a very special lady and even if she isn\'t here physically her memories and teachings are with you and she\'ll be so happy to learn how you treasure memories. excellent, my friend!
August 28th, 2022 02:24
Take Two Poles Josie
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emeotive words Neville, your mother will always be with you.
Andy
August 28th, 2022 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emeotive words Neville, your mother will always be with you.
Andy
August 28th, 2022 01:19
Between Pauses
Bella Shepard said:
The heart, the great symbol of love and life. Listen to it; calming, steady, reassuring, the beat of love in one precious to you. Beautifully expressed!
August 27th, 2022 13:13
Bella Shepard said:
The heart, the great symbol of love and life. Listen to it; calming, steady, reassuring, the beat of love in one precious to you. Beautifully expressed!
August 27th, 2022 13:13
Take Two Poles Josie
Bella Shepard said:
You\'re mum sounds like a very special lady, who appreciated the sweetest sounds in life. You have captured this beautifully in a tender poem of love. She taught you well my friend.
August 27th, 2022 12:36
Bella Shepard said:
You\'re mum sounds like a very special lady, who appreciated the sweetest sounds in life. You have captured this beautifully in a tender poem of love. She taught you well my friend.
August 27th, 2022 12:36
Take Two Poles Josie
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure of this one, Nev (not an uncommon experience here..).
Josie, it seems was cajoled into hard dangerous work with sweet flattering talk... and then Mum gets the blame...
Alas, I\'ll never understand poets....
August 27th, 2022 07:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure of this one, Nev (not an uncommon experience here..).
Josie, it seems was cajoled into hard dangerous work with sweet flattering talk... and then Mum gets the blame...
Alas, I\'ll never understand poets....
August 27th, 2022 07:21
Take Two Poles Josie
Paul Bell said:
Great memories from your mum.
When I go to the football today, I\'ll be listening out for the pigeons.
August 27th, 2022 06:56
Paul Bell said:
Great memories from your mum.
When I go to the football today, I\'ll be listening out for the pigeons.
August 27th, 2022 06:56
Take Two Poles Josie
dusk arising said:
I dunno what theyre building on my chimney cowl but theres sure enough a lot of two poles been taken up there for scaffolding.
August 27th, 2022 05:05
dusk arising said:
I dunno what theyre building on my chimney cowl but theres sure enough a lot of two poles been taken up there for scaffolding.
August 27th, 2022 05:05
Take Two Poles Josie
Fay Slimm. said:
Thoughts of such unique perception are treasured as gems when we lose all but memory of loved ones - - thanks so much Nev.for sharing your dear mother\'s description of dove talk when courting - -- I too shall now be on the listen for \"take two poles Josie\" - - -- ....................x
August 27th, 2022 04:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Thoughts of such unique perception are treasured as gems when we lose all but memory of loved ones - - thanks so much Nev.for sharing your dear mother\'s description of dove talk when courting - -- I too shall now be on the listen for \"take two poles Josie\" - - -- ....................x
August 27th, 2022 04:50
Between Pauses
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville. I was at my wife\'s side when she passed her final breath.
Andy
August 27th, 2022 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Neville. I was at my wife\'s side when she passed her final breath.
Andy
August 27th, 2022 01:08
Between Pauses
Fay Slimm. said:
Strength builds between pauses and that\'s what is needed when hearts skip a beat - so romantic these telling words Nev.....................x
August 26th, 2022 06:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Strength builds between pauses and that\'s what is needed when hearts skip a beat - so romantic these telling words Nev.....................x
August 26th, 2022 06:19
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