Comments received on poems by Neville
A Very Temporary Arrangement
MendedFences27 said:
Yes, when you finally realize that she\'s not the one for you. That something is just not right. No matter what happens next, someone will be hurt. Unless she truly does \"understand\" and then maybe she is the one for you, - Phil A.
July 15th, 2023 19:06
MendedFences27 said:
Yes, when you finally realize that she\'s not the one for you. That something is just not right. No matter what happens next, someone will be hurt. Unless she truly does \"understand\" and then maybe she is the one for you, - Phil A.
July 15th, 2023 19:06
A Very Temporary Arrangement
Teddy.15 said:
Denying love lol so very clever my dear Nev. Love the thought of a lover pretending it\'s not true knowing that it\'s probably the greatest love of all ❤️
July 15th, 2023 16:58
Teddy.15 said:
Denying love lol so very clever my dear Nev. Love the thought of a lover pretending it\'s not true knowing that it\'s probably the greatest love of all ❤️
July 15th, 2023 16:58
A Very Temporary Arrangement
Bobby O said:
Without that slight fatalistic tinge and hue it’s exactly almost an Irving Berlin song
Tomato tomatoes
July 15th, 2023 12:47
Bobby O said:
Without that slight fatalistic tinge and hue it’s exactly almost an Irving Berlin song
Tomato tomatoes
July 15th, 2023 12:47
A Very Temporary Arrangement
Bobby O said:
Without that slight fatalistic tinge and hue it’s exactly almost an Irving Berlin song
Tomato tomatoes
July 15th, 2023 12:43
Bobby O said:
Without that slight fatalistic tinge and hue it’s exactly almost an Irving Berlin song
Tomato tomatoes
July 15th, 2023 12:43
As a Matter of Fact
L. B. Mek said:
erm, one less glass
try that out
and remember Shaggy
gave us our out
just sing \'It wasn\'t me\'
till some colour returns
to your face
and your mind is once gain
capable of grouping words...
(my 2 cents worth
if it helps
well, erm
there\'s actually more
I just ........t)
lol
have a great weekend Hyung
July 14th, 2023 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
erm, one less glass
try that out
and remember Shaggy
gave us our out
just sing \'It wasn\'t me\'
till some colour returns
to your face
and your mind is once gain
capable of grouping words...
(my 2 cents worth
if it helps
well, erm
there\'s actually more
I just ........t)
lol
have a great weekend Hyung
July 14th, 2023 04:04
When a Diet Does a Fat Lot of Good
L. B. Mek said:
so true Hyung, gotta find a way
to laugh about it
sadly, having experiencing it
close up
has changed my perspective
these days, I see anyone who survives an eating disorder
as a genuine hero
that vicious cycle of psychological
and physical, toxic self comparisons
is so hard to break
just like most debilitating addictions
25 years sober, is no guarantee
this is a war they have to fight
all their lives
only without diabetes injections
to support their weaknesses
one slip, and it all starts again
horrid, horrid plague for a person
to try and overcome
they\'re all heroes in my book
and those helping them
tantamount to saints
they both need so much empathetic stamina..
July 14th, 2023 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
so true Hyung, gotta find a way
to laugh about it
sadly, having experiencing it
close up
has changed my perspective
these days, I see anyone who survives an eating disorder
as a genuine hero
that vicious cycle of psychological
and physical, toxic self comparisons
is so hard to break
just like most debilitating addictions
25 years sober, is no guarantee
this is a war they have to fight
all their lives
only without diabetes injections
to support their weaknesses
one slip, and it all starts again
horrid, horrid plague for a person
to try and overcome
they\'re all heroes in my book
and those helping them
tantamount to saints
they both need so much empathetic stamina..
July 14th, 2023 03:59
Seriously Wronged
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t know, Hyung
lately
I\'ve been thinking these lady\'s
know exactly what they\'re doing
it\'s the fools
that fall for the thirsty silvers
while surrendering their ticket
to heaven on earth..
(stats on single men and ladies
is so off kilter
I gotta think there\'s some design
at play?
but what do I know, lol)
acute commentary and timely, a great shorty
July 14th, 2023 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t know, Hyung
lately
I\'ve been thinking these lady\'s
know exactly what they\'re doing
it\'s the fools
that fall for the thirsty silvers
while surrendering their ticket
to heaven on earth..
(stats on single men and ladies
is so off kilter
I gotta think there\'s some design
at play?
but what do I know, lol)
acute commentary and timely, a great shorty
July 14th, 2023 03:50
By Definition Only
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(perception as a conduit to our volition
so often, we\'re pushed
to look the other way, acting ignorant
so we can avoid reprisals
living like we\'re on a rotary of fate
knowing eventually
we\'ll soon be facing life\'s heat
strife as all we scope
sunglasses at night, heads lowered
masked like we\'re thieving
each breath
but some, brave enough like you
dear Poet supreme
ink with passion to remind us, that
its never too late
to traverse life, staring down the bul sht
and seeing things for what they are
allowing our choices
to be more than automated outputs
for all the sht they cram
down our eyes and ears, every day
of this endless fight
we named, a life...)
July 14th, 2023 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(perception as a conduit to our volition
so often, we\'re pushed
to look the other way, acting ignorant
so we can avoid reprisals
living like we\'re on a rotary of fate
knowing eventually
we\'ll soon be facing life\'s heat
strife as all we scope
sunglasses at night, heads lowered
masked like we\'re thieving
each breath
but some, brave enough like you
dear Poet supreme
ink with passion to remind us, that
its never too late
to traverse life, staring down the bul sht
and seeing things for what they are
allowing our choices
to be more than automated outputs
for all the sht they cram
down our eyes and ears, every day
of this endless fight
we named, a life...)
July 14th, 2023 03:45
As a Matter of Fact
Bobby O said:
Idiomatically precise and the obvious not obviated. I look for your pieces and am always glad to discover cuz I then Discover.
July 14th, 2023 03:29
Bobby O said:
Idiomatically precise and the obvious not obviated. I look for your pieces and am always glad to discover cuz I then Discover.
July 14th, 2023 03:29
As a Matter of Fact
LIZ said:
At least you\'re honest about it! To the point! But....you do remember the important things right? 😁
July 14th, 2023 02:55
LIZ said:
At least you\'re honest about it! To the point! But....you do remember the important things right? 😁
July 14th, 2023 02:55
As a Matter of Fact
Teddy.15 said:
A poet wearing his heart on his sleeve it always works for me dearest Nev, not all men remember stuff that to the average women means so much. I have always loved so much your poetic heart. 💖
July 14th, 2023 02:02
Teddy.15 said:
A poet wearing his heart on his sleeve it always works for me dearest Nev, not all men remember stuff that to the average women means so much. I have always loved so much your poetic heart. 💖
July 14th, 2023 02:02
When a Diet Does a Fat Lot of Good
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Hesitate to engage with you on this topic, Neville as I’m sure you could run rings around me with respect to clinical expertise.
However, here’s my two penn\'orth:
Not talking anorexia here (far too complicated) but the other end of the eating disorder spectrum.
My POV is that of one who is diabetic, dependent on insulin.
Forget diets. They exist to fill column inches and sell glossy magazines. Straight advice to those who feel they need it: reduce each meal by a quarter a third or a half as necessary. This is a long-term discipline.
July 13th, 2023 19:14
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Hesitate to engage with you on this topic, Neville as I’m sure you could run rings around me with respect to clinical expertise.
However, here’s my two penn\'orth:
Not talking anorexia here (far too complicated) but the other end of the eating disorder spectrum.
My POV is that of one who is diabetic, dependent on insulin.
Forget diets. They exist to fill column inches and sell glossy magazines. Straight advice to those who feel they need it: reduce each meal by a quarter a third or a half as necessary. This is a long-term discipline.
July 13th, 2023 19:14
When a Diet Does a Fat Lot of Good
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Neville, there are so many reasons people have eating disorders you bring a great discussion. 💖
July 13th, 2023 11:04
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Neville, there are so many reasons people have eating disorders you bring a great discussion. 💖
July 13th, 2023 11:04
When a Diet Does a Fat Lot of Good
Poetic Dan said:
This is so true and in my house we struggle with it all! My wife has to lose it and I can never put it on and I have found over all these years many don\'t see both sides. Not much help to gain weight or people think I\'m lucky but if only then knew...
Great writing my friend
July 13th, 2023 04:40
Poetic Dan said:
This is so true and in my house we struggle with it all! My wife has to lose it and I can never put it on and I have found over all these years many don\'t see both sides. Not much help to gain weight or people think I\'m lucky but if only then knew...
Great writing my friend
July 13th, 2023 04:40
When a Diet Does a Fat Lot of Good
orchidee said:
Yep, we gotta love our enemies too, in my \'spiritual\' themed poems - even KP. She\'s my enemy for sure. lol.
July 13th, 2023 02:01
orchidee said:
Yep, we gotta love our enemies too, in my \'spiritual\' themed poems - even KP. She\'s my enemy for sure. lol.
July 13th, 2023 02:01
When a Diet Does a Fat Lot of Good
orchidee said:
KP\'s got fat lately. She will go all baggy when she has fat-removing treatment! lol.
July 13th, 2023 01:44
orchidee said:
KP\'s got fat lately. She will go all baggy when she has fat-removing treatment! lol.
July 13th, 2023 01:44
When a Diet Does a Fat Lot of Good
Caring dove said:
I imagine they do . Yet there is help for them . I guess some people can struggle with their food when feeling certain ways .
July 13th, 2023 00:35
Caring dove said:
I imagine they do . Yet there is help for them . I guess some people can struggle with their food when feeling certain ways .
July 13th, 2023 00:35
Seriously Wronged
Bella Shepard said:
A lesson to be learned here dear friend. Sometimes we trust too much because we love and end up in disappointment, or with an empty bank acount.
July 12th, 2023 11:44
Bella Shepard said:
A lesson to be learned here dear friend. Sometimes we trust too much because we love and end up in disappointment, or with an empty bank acount.
July 12th, 2023 11:44
Seriously Wronged
Teddy.15 said:
Seems not just women are gold diggers lol this was like a scene from pirates of the Caribbean modern times. The shoe on the other foot for a change if you will excuse my pun. 💖
July 12th, 2023 02:57
Teddy.15 said:
Seems not just women are gold diggers lol this was like a scene from pirates of the Caribbean modern times. The shoe on the other foot for a change if you will excuse my pun. 💖
July 12th, 2023 02:57
Seriously Wronged
orchidee said:
I have to always rub KP\'s palms with silver - now she wants gold! lol. She never stops, of course.
July 12th, 2023 02:12
orchidee said:
I have to always rub KP\'s palms with silver - now she wants gold! lol. She never stops, of course.
July 12th, 2023 02:12
Seriously Wronged
Caring dove said:
Being nice to someone who’s unkind . I guess some people can be too kind to those who do not treat them nicely
A good writing ))
July 12th, 2023 01:56
Caring dove said:
Being nice to someone who’s unkind . I guess some people can be too kind to those who do not treat them nicely
A good writing ))
July 12th, 2023 01:56
Man Eater
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It\'s always what you manage to say without saying it for me, personally... The truths scream silently, almost horrifically though, herein. Respect, brother.
July 11th, 2023 09:11
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It\'s always what you manage to say without saying it for me, personally... The truths scream silently, almost horrifically though, herein. Respect, brother.
July 11th, 2023 09:11
By Definition Only
arqios said:
That is the kindest and truest thought right there N!
July 11th, 2023 07:49
arqios said:
That is the kindest and truest thought right there N!
July 11th, 2023 07:49
By Definition Only
Teddy.15 said:
A beautifully composed poem and how very true the older we get the more we see the true colours as they really are and moreover accept this. Brilliant Nev. ❤️
July 11th, 2023 03:46
Teddy.15 said:
A beautifully composed poem and how very true the older we get the more we see the true colours as they really are and moreover accept this. Brilliant Nev. ❤️
July 11th, 2023 03:46
By Definition Only
Christina8 said:
Was that you I saw staring at me at my favorite restaurant? LOL it\'s really a beautiful short poem, yes, beauty is in the eye of the beholder...C x
July 11th, 2023 03:23
Christina8 said:
Was that you I saw staring at me at my favorite restaurant? LOL it\'s really a beautiful short poem, yes, beauty is in the eye of the beholder...C x
July 11th, 2023 03:23
Not Another Ending Surely
Goldfinch60 said:
That\'s love, it will always produce poetry from within us Neville.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That\'s love, it will always produce poetry from within us Neville.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:58
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