Comments received on poems by Neville
Undeniably Piqued
Fay Slimm. said:
Hard to be strangled by one thought to be shy - -- am glad she appeared only in the lines of your vivid fancy for females who cling to sinking ships.....x
May 19th, 2023 13:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Hard to be strangled by one thought to be shy - -- am glad she appeared only in the lines of your vivid fancy for females who cling to sinking ships.....x
May 19th, 2023 13:42
Undeniably Piqued
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
The clinging vine tender in spring by fall you are struggling for air.
May 19th, 2023 08:00
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville.
The clinging vine tender in spring by fall you are struggling for air.
May 19th, 2023 08:00
Undeniably Piqued
Christina8 said:
Love this write...yes, there are some women that will refuse to let go.. hope this is not a true story. Fantastic work, N! x
May 19th, 2023 07:15
Christina8 said:
Love this write...yes, there are some women that will refuse to let go.. hope this is not a true story. Fantastic work, N! x
May 19th, 2023 07:15
Undeniably Piqued
orchidee said:
How come you know all these details about KP?! lol.
May 19th, 2023 04:02
orchidee said:
How come you know all these details about KP?! lol.
May 19th, 2023 04:02
Undeniably Piqued
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pandora\'
as our our Poetic, dreamed
ideal...
(another exemplar work
as legacy
of your poetic subtlety\'s
efficacy)
what variety you\'ve offered us this week, Hyung
thank you!
May 19th, 2023 03:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'Pandora\'
as our our Poetic, dreamed
ideal...
(another exemplar work
as legacy
of your poetic subtlety\'s
efficacy)
what variety you\'ve offered us this week, Hyung
thank you!
May 19th, 2023 03:13
Sans Echo’s
L. B. Mek said:
\'But those were the Rayban days\'
shades of mercy, granted
by societal restraint
and a willingness, to offer
a consideration
to alternate perspectives
back, when
Shakespeare\'s poetic genius
represented, an echo
of that greatness, humanity
still dared, to dream
and aspire towards, bravely
magnificently!
(love these worded prayer
and cry for a call to arms
for that we witness dissipating
within each, sensationalised
blinking bulleting of pseudo
relevance)
May 19th, 2023 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'But those were the Rayban days\'
shades of mercy, granted
by societal restraint
and a willingness, to offer
a consideration
to alternate perspectives
back, when
Shakespeare\'s poetic genius
represented, an echo
of that greatness, humanity
still dared, to dream
and aspire towards, bravely
magnificently!
(love these worded prayer
and cry for a call to arms
for that we witness dissipating
within each, sensationalised
blinking bulleting of pseudo
relevance)
May 19th, 2023 03:07
Sans Echo’s
Goldfinch60 said:
That is so right \'back in the day\' but in my lfe all was wonderful.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
That is so right \'back in the day\' but in my lfe all was wonderful.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 03:02
A Handful of Monsters
L. B. Mek said:
(so true wise Poet, thank you!)
soon, it will be a hard task
to find anyone, not exhibiting
narcissistic tendencies
in society, a legacy of modernity
consumed, by insular
mirage warped, selfhood fallacies
... far too, soon
for me to ink these words, without
sighing, a stunted mourning
for all that hope
humanity, once represented and
promised
oh how we love, to curate our own
cyclic, tragedies
May 19th, 2023 02:57
L. B. Mek said:
(so true wise Poet, thank you!)
soon, it will be a hard task
to find anyone, not exhibiting
narcissistic tendencies
in society, a legacy of modernity
consumed, by insular
mirage warped, selfhood fallacies
... far too, soon
for me to ink these words, without
sighing, a stunted mourning
for all that hope
humanity, once represented and
promised
oh how we love, to curate our own
cyclic, tragedies
May 19th, 2023 02:57
Celsius Rising
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(careful, as
in that volcano eruption
of instant
escapist, sensual gratification
is a promise
of lava, proximity decimation
if unprepared
we\'ll toil, in scolding consequence
best, maybe
to thread carefully, step carefully
never blind lunges
unless we are ready, to dissolve
that volcanic ash
as an ingredient, in our evolution\'s
fertilising experiences...)
May 19th, 2023 02:50
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(careful, as
in that volcano eruption
of instant
escapist, sensual gratification
is a promise
of lava, proximity decimation
if unprepared
we\'ll toil, in scolding consequence
best, maybe
to thread carefully, step carefully
never blind lunges
unless we are ready, to dissolve
that volcanic ash
as an ingredient, in our evolution\'s
fertilising experiences...)
May 19th, 2023 02:50
Sans Echo’s
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Sans Echo\'s\" is a captivating poem that offers a critical commentary on the societal values and a bygone cultural climate of era.
May 18th, 2023 15:20
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Sans Echo\'s\" is a captivating poem that offers a critical commentary on the societal values and a bygone cultural climate of era.
May 18th, 2023 15:20
Sans Echo’s
arqios said:
I could imagine lengthened and \'varnished\' lashes gluing themselves to the RayBan lenses... that would be ticklish.
May 18th, 2023 10:39
arqios said:
I could imagine lengthened and \'varnished\' lashes gluing themselves to the RayBan lenses... that would be ticklish.
May 18th, 2023 10:39
Sans Echo’s
MendedFences27 said:
One time, I dropped some \"acid\"....
and it burnt a hole in my bellbottoms.
I was busy at the time trying to \"foster grants\" to my college fund. Planned on attending UC - Santa Barbara, the best \"party school\" in America, but Nam got in the way, and I ended up in Montreal. Rented an old mini-van and drove with friends across to Aberta. That\'s when I heard \"Birds singing in the dark- Rainy dawn.\" Oh yeah, I stole that from Jack Kerouac. I don\'t know why, but who needs a reason. Live free or die!! - Phil A.
May 18th, 2023 08:29
MendedFences27 said:
One time, I dropped some \"acid\"....
and it burnt a hole in my bellbottoms.
I was busy at the time trying to \"foster grants\" to my college fund. Planned on attending UC - Santa Barbara, the best \"party school\" in America, but Nam got in the way, and I ended up in Montreal. Rented an old mini-van and drove with friends across to Aberta. That\'s when I heard \"Birds singing in the dark- Rainy dawn.\" Oh yeah, I stole that from Jack Kerouac. I don\'t know why, but who needs a reason. Live free or die!! - Phil A.
May 18th, 2023 08:29
Sans Echo’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Living it up on someone else\'s offer of getting high on acid was the rage but events can leave echoes - - for though heavy mascara has paled we still get throw backs looked at by those who have their personal reasons for hiding behind shades - -- Whoo ! -- am glad that\'s off my chest before today\'s chores .........x
May 18th, 2023 02:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Living it up on someone else\'s offer of getting high on acid was the rage but events can leave echoes - - for though heavy mascara has paled we still get throw backs looked at by those who have their personal reasons for hiding behind shades - -- Whoo ! -- am glad that\'s off my chest before today\'s chores .........x
May 18th, 2023 02:53
Sans Echo’s
orchidee said:
All I know from this, is that KP flutters her false eyelashes at me, but it don\'t get her very far.... lol.
I will never unravel the meaning of some poems. Doh!
May 18th, 2023 01:48
orchidee said:
All I know from this, is that KP flutters her false eyelashes at me, but it don\'t get her very far.... lol.
I will never unravel the meaning of some poems. Doh!
May 18th, 2023 01:48
A Handful of Monsters
MendedFences27 said:
True!! One solution to the problem is a world government, but I don\'t think we\'re ready for that yet. Maybe some sort of declaration of world democracy (with enforcement) may work until we are ready.
Your poem has started me to dreaming of the possibilities that would then follow. Global democracy (Enforced) would raise a lot of mistrust. We must also be well aware of the effects of AI. Anyways, thanks for bringing up this subject. My mind is now rambling. - Phil A.
May 17th, 2023 11:51
MendedFences27 said:
True!! One solution to the problem is a world government, but I don\'t think we\'re ready for that yet. Maybe some sort of declaration of world democracy (with enforcement) may work until we are ready.
Your poem has started me to dreaming of the possibilities that would then follow. Global democracy (Enforced) would raise a lot of mistrust. We must also be well aware of the effects of AI. Anyways, thanks for bringing up this subject. My mind is now rambling. - Phil A.
May 17th, 2023 11:51
A Handful of Monsters
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
… “sadly, it only
takes just one, to fuck all of us ..”
Only if we leave an open door for that “just one”!
Guilty…but only for a short period of time!
Laura 🌻
May 17th, 2023 08:51
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
… “sadly, it only
takes just one, to fuck all of us ..”
Only if we leave an open door for that “just one”!
Guilty…but only for a short period of time!
Laura 🌻
May 17th, 2023 08:51
A Handful of Monsters
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, it only takes one, but they all want to be that one. 🙄
May 17th, 2023 07:57
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, it only takes one, but they all want to be that one. 🙄
May 17th, 2023 07:57
A Handful of Monsters
Bobby O said:
In Chicago , certain guys would plan to take that one guy on a tour of a dark alley try to “influence” him to behave better.
May 17th, 2023 02:34
Bobby O said:
In Chicago , certain guys would plan to take that one guy on a tour of a dark alley try to “influence” him to behave better.
May 17th, 2023 02:34
A Handful of Monsters
orchidee said:
Yes, a bad apple in the bunch.
Same with nature, conservation, etc. Along come man (men/women) and f..... it all up (the F word, says Fido!).
KP gave me a bad apple literally. lol.
May 17th, 2023 01:51
orchidee said:
Yes, a bad apple in the bunch.
Same with nature, conservation, etc. Along come man (men/women) and f..... it all up (the F word, says Fido!).
KP gave me a bad apple literally. lol.
May 17th, 2023 01:51
Celsius Rising
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light shine and the shadow move onto a new life.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
May that light shine and the shadow move onto a new life.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:27
A Handful of Monsters
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Neville and so true, it only takes one to mess everything up.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Neville and so true, it only takes one to mess everything up.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:17
Celsius Rising
Bella Shepard said:
The cloak of invisibility can sometimes be a blessing, perhaps a bullit dodged? One never knows. Intriguing write dear friend, I guess I took a little interpretive license here.
May 16th, 2023 14:38
Bella Shepard said:
The cloak of invisibility can sometimes be a blessing, perhaps a bullit dodged? One never knows. Intriguing write dear friend, I guess I took a little interpretive license here.
May 16th, 2023 14:38
Celsius Rising
MendedFences27 said:
Somehow, I felt sorry for the yellow man of her artwork, short-lived from the heat of the experience. Yet. we know that it happens.
Your poem draws a picture of a romance that burned with an overpowering heat. The now, \"Invisible Man\" must gather the strength to move on, and avoid \"crayon\" artists. - Phil A.
May 16th, 2023 11:03
MendedFences27 said:
Somehow, I felt sorry for the yellow man of her artwork, short-lived from the heat of the experience. Yet. we know that it happens.
Your poem draws a picture of a romance that burned with an overpowering heat. The now, \"Invisible Man\" must gather the strength to move on, and avoid \"crayon\" artists. - Phil A.
May 16th, 2023 11:03
Celsius Rising
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Celsius Rising\" is a brief yet intriguing poem that captures the initial fascination and subsequent disillusionment experienced by the speaker towards an individual.
May 16th, 2023 10:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Celsius Rising\" is a brief yet intriguing poem that captures the initial fascination and subsequent disillusionment experienced by the speaker towards an individual.
May 16th, 2023 10:51
Celsius Rising
Fay Slimm. said:
Gurt stuff agen Nev. -Am feeling the boiling point of this short-lived affair - - Made my temperature rise to think of that golden haired Adonis being crayon portrayed in the sun before he made himself scarcer than scarce............x
May 16th, 2023 07:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Gurt stuff agen Nev. -Am feeling the boiling point of this short-lived affair - - Made my temperature rise to think of that golden haired Adonis being crayon portrayed in the sun before he made himself scarcer than scarce............x
May 16th, 2023 07:43
Celsius Rising
orchidee said:
The temperature never rises for KP and I. It\'s always sub-zero! heehee.
May 16th, 2023 05:17
orchidee said:
The temperature never rises for KP and I. It\'s always sub-zero! heehee.
May 16th, 2023 05:17
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