Comments received on poems by Neville
Just Because She Is ..
Teddy.15 said:
Oh wow!!!!! She is gorgeous Nev. A huge congratulations even though you are far too young you will be an amazing popps so so so thrilled for you and your family ❤️❤️
July 28th, 2023 02:08
Teddy.15 said:
Oh wow!!!!! She is gorgeous Nev. A huge congratulations even though you are far too young you will be an amazing popps so so so thrilled for you and your family ❤️❤️
July 28th, 2023 02:08
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
Bella Shepard said:
There is something wonderfully mysterious about shadows. We love playing with them, but they are simply the play of light and dark. They can follow us or lead us, but the shadows of the past are always with us. What an extraordinay, contemplative write dear Nev.
July 27th, 2023 13:45
Bella Shepard said:
There is something wonderfully mysterious about shadows. We love playing with them, but they are simply the play of light and dark. They can follow us or lead us, but the shadows of the past are always with us. What an extraordinay, contemplative write dear Nev.
July 27th, 2023 13:45
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Teddy.15 said:
And what do they say dear Nev? Regret the things you\'ve done rather than the things you haven\'t. Oh so beautifully expressed darling friend. 💖
July 27th, 2023 10:04
Teddy.15 said:
And what do they say dear Nev? Regret the things you\'ve done rather than the things you haven\'t. Oh so beautifully expressed darling friend. 💖
July 27th, 2023 10:04
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
LIZ said:
Nice!! Shadows may not share secrets, but light will always yank them out! The truth lies out there....and will come back with a vengeance!! And what will happen then? 🤔
July 27th, 2023 04:12
LIZ said:
Nice!! Shadows may not share secrets, but light will always yank them out! The truth lies out there....and will come back with a vengeance!! And what will happen then? 🤔
July 27th, 2023 04:12
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
Teddy.15 said:
That is a serious bit of reflection dear Nev. 💖
July 27th, 2023 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
That is a serious bit of reflection dear Nev. 💖
July 27th, 2023 03:26
Just Because She Is ..
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Nev, I just adore when you write like this. 💓
July 27th, 2023 03:21
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Nev, I just adore when you write like this. 💓
July 27th, 2023 03:21
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
Neville said:
thank you S .. you n hymn are indeed an education .. 👍
July 27th, 2023 01:46
Neville said:
thank you S .. you n hymn are indeed an education .. 👍
July 27th, 2023 01:46
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
orchidee said:
Good write N.
A rather gloomy-sounding title to a hymn is \'Buried in shadows of the night\'.
July 27th, 2023 01:41
orchidee said:
Good write N.
A rather gloomy-sounding title to a hymn is \'Buried in shadows of the night\'.
July 27th, 2023 01:41
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Neil Higgins said:
Greetings Nev.Yes I\'m still alive 🤣 Been away from the site for a while,but will post the occasional poems now and again.
Keep up the fine (intriguing) words 😎
July 26th, 2023 17:55
Neil Higgins said:
Greetings Nev.Yes I\'m still alive 🤣 Been away from the site for a while,but will post the occasional poems now and again.
Keep up the fine (intriguing) words 😎
July 26th, 2023 17:55
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s always the \"what could have been\'s\" that seem to plague us most, because we\'ll never know what an opportunity might have brought, so we lament what never was. We are strange creatures, are we not? Love your insight into human nature, along with your style and grace. Great write my dear Nev!
July 26th, 2023 15:47
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s always the \"what could have been\'s\" that seem to plague us most, because we\'ll never know what an opportunity might have brought, so we lament what never was. We are strange creatures, are we not? Love your insight into human nature, along with your style and grace. Great write my dear Nev!
July 26th, 2023 15:47
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
orchidee said:
You and Liz on the gin? That glass! I don\'t even know how to include it in comments!😁
July 26th, 2023 14:57
orchidee said:
You and Liz on the gin? That glass! I don\'t even know how to include it in comments!😁
July 26th, 2023 14:57
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
LIZ said:
But...you ARE asking again. At least...\"suggesting\". You never know! 🙂
July 26th, 2023 02:40
LIZ said:
But...you ARE asking again. At least...\"suggesting\". You never know! 🙂
July 26th, 2023 02:40
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Parisab said:
Inventive to make the title be your first stanza-like the ambivalence in this poem-
July 26th, 2023 02:13
Parisab said:
Inventive to make the title be your first stanza-like the ambivalence in this poem-
July 26th, 2023 02:13
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, you never know it may happen.....
Andy
July 26th, 2023 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, you never know it may happen.....
Andy
July 26th, 2023 01:08
Just Because She Is ..
Christina8 said:
Congratulations Neville! I bet shes already the light of your life.....C
July 25th, 2023 09:14
Christina8 said:
Congratulations Neville! I bet shes already the light of your life.....C
July 25th, 2023 09:14
Just Because She Is ..
sorenbarrett said:
In these four lines you have encapsulated the frustration of a poet with the language he/she is working with. How many times in writting have I found the word in another language much more fitting for either meaning or rhyme and at time there exists no word that I know that expresses the feeling and no simple metaphor either.
July 25th, 2023 06:03
sorenbarrett said:
In these four lines you have encapsulated the frustration of a poet with the language he/she is working with. How many times in writting have I found the word in another language much more fitting for either meaning or rhyme and at time there exists no word that I know that expresses the feeling and no simple metaphor either.
July 25th, 2023 06:03
Just Because She Is ..
Caring dove said:
Congratulations )) nice for you to have a grandkid .. and nice writing aswell
July 25th, 2023 03:49
Caring dove said:
Congratulations )) nice for you to have a grandkid .. and nice writing aswell
July 25th, 2023 03:49
Just Because She Is ..
LIZ said:
Mmmmm I still want to hear/read all the words 😉
July 25th, 2023 02:06
LIZ said:
Mmmmm I still want to hear/read all the words 😉
July 25th, 2023 02:06
Just Because She Is ..
orchidee said:
Ahh, a fine write N.
Meanwhile KP - she is.... words unrepeatable in polite company such as yours! lol.
July 25th, 2023 01:57
orchidee said:
Ahh, a fine write N.
Meanwhile KP - she is.... words unrepeatable in polite company such as yours! lol.
July 25th, 2023 01:57
Just Because She Is ..
Goldfinch60 said:
Hello Astrid, may your life be filled with joy and love.
Andy
July 25th, 2023 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Hello Astrid, may your life be filled with joy and love.
Andy
July 25th, 2023 01:16
As Yet Unfurnished
Bella Shepard said:
The thought of a secret room is so beguiling, where the fantasies of your heart are safe and await. Love it!
July 24th, 2023 14:50
Bella Shepard said:
The thought of a secret room is so beguiling, where the fantasies of your heart are safe and await. Love it!
July 24th, 2023 14:50
As Yet Unfurnished
Christina8 said:
I love the thought of a secret room...from your first book...Wonderful thoughts and fantasies listed here...C
July 24th, 2023 09:00
Christina8 said:
I love the thought of a secret room...from your first book...Wonderful thoughts and fantasies listed here...C
July 24th, 2023 09:00
As Yet Unfurnished
LIZ said:
I definitely have a secret room....filled with thoughts...moments, and black rose petals!! 🖤 Beautiful read!!
July 24th, 2023 04:31
LIZ said:
I definitely have a secret room....filled with thoughts...moments, and black rose petals!! 🖤 Beautiful read!!
July 24th, 2023 04:31
As Yet Unfurnished
L. B. Mek said:
erm, so Hyung
sometimes I just read your title and then
lose control of my fingers for a bit
inspired
to try and scribble a little poetic reply
since I so relate with your words
thank you!
(replete, with our youthful zeal
lust inspiring us to love without handbrakes
we were young
all we chased was a place
for us to embrace
and cuddle, all night
since, climbing out
of the toilet window to evade capture
got old, after one rainy weekend
so now
we trace Time, in a finger caress
with that ease of mind
yeah, it\'s a lot of money
when between us, we can barely
pay the rent
let alone the bills, but
the memories we made, in that
very first place, we both
got to call our own, even for just
a while, lasted us a lifetime
dear, first love..
and yes i still remember it all
like it was yesterday
wine n dining you on tuna sandwiches
and cheap strawberry wine
making your lips, taste
a little more sweet, with every sip
I remember it all
no regrets
just mementos I cherish, with pride
knowing how lucky I was
that it was you I got to share
those moments with)
July 24th, 2023 03:21
L. B. Mek said:
erm, so Hyung
sometimes I just read your title and then
lose control of my fingers for a bit
inspired
to try and scribble a little poetic reply
since I so relate with your words
thank you!
(replete, with our youthful zeal
lust inspiring us to love without handbrakes
we were young
all we chased was a place
for us to embrace
and cuddle, all night
since, climbing out
of the toilet window to evade capture
got old, after one rainy weekend
so now
we trace Time, in a finger caress
with that ease of mind
yeah, it\'s a lot of money
when between us, we can barely
pay the rent
let alone the bills, but
the memories we made, in that
very first place, we both
got to call our own, even for just
a while, lasted us a lifetime
dear, first love..
and yes i still remember it all
like it was yesterday
wine n dining you on tuna sandwiches
and cheap strawberry wine
making your lips, taste
a little more sweet, with every sip
I remember it all
no regrets
just mementos I cherish, with pride
knowing how lucky I was
that it was you I got to share
those moments with)
July 24th, 2023 03:21
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