Comments received on poems by Neville
Smeared With Affection
Christina8 said:
I love that your combined DNA will be strewn about the place.....such a better comparison than \"fucking\' I think. Very good poem you have here! x
July 31st, 2023 07:47
Christina8 said:
I love that your combined DNA will be strewn about the place.....such a better comparison than \"fucking\' I think. Very good poem you have here! x
July 31st, 2023 07:47
Smeared With Affection
Caring dove said:
Great writing neville .. especially like these lines
‘Your eyes, are my
spring my love
those that force me
to see
beyond the blues
and the greens
( that’s beautiful )
Pinned, albeit loosely
between these
poor clouded,
rose tinted lenses
A well written poem and just like teddy I read it a few times too
July 31st, 2023 04:47
Caring dove said:
Great writing neville .. especially like these lines
‘Your eyes, are my
spring my love
those that force me
to see
beyond the blues
and the greens
( that’s beautiful )
Pinned, albeit loosely
between these
poor clouded,
rose tinted lenses
A well written poem and just like teddy I read it a few times too
July 31st, 2023 04:47
Smeared With Affection
L. B. Mek said:
I grant my fears, wings
free my tears to swim and serenade
fate\'s rain-starved clouds and hills
Within your fingers, life granted me
peace and harmony
enough for poetic lies to assuage
My every ambition
dear You, I\'ve learnt from these craters you gifted
and emptiness, you tattooed deep
Beyond my lungs capacity to hope
and yet, in a glance or stutter
of our synergetic heartbeats, I pause
Once more ready to dive, lust first
loyalty, not far behind
energised by a glint of your relapsing
Eyes...
approaching you slowly, tenderly
dear universe, I promise
Afford me this one mercy and I\'ll
guarantee
never will I ever need to seek
Another opportunity to get things right
now that I\'m pulsing to a beat, of
wedding rings and crimson vows
Bled with pride!
July 31st, 2023 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
I grant my fears, wings
free my tears to swim and serenade
fate\'s rain-starved clouds and hills
Within your fingers, life granted me
peace and harmony
enough for poetic lies to assuage
My every ambition
dear You, I\'ve learnt from these craters you gifted
and emptiness, you tattooed deep
Beyond my lungs capacity to hope
and yet, in a glance or stutter
of our synergetic heartbeats, I pause
Once more ready to dive, lust first
loyalty, not far behind
energised by a glint of your relapsing
Eyes...
approaching you slowly, tenderly
dear universe, I promise
Afford me this one mercy and I\'ll
guarantee
never will I ever need to seek
Another opportunity to get things right
now that I\'m pulsing to a beat, of
wedding rings and crimson vows
Bled with pride!
July 31st, 2023 04:37
Smeared With Affection
LIZ said:
Ayyyy messy love connection! Fastened but not enough, covered in mixed emotions. Unravelling, wanting, hoping, losing, crying. I guess we\'re all in our feelings today! ❣️This is beautiful!
July 31st, 2023 04:30
LIZ said:
Ayyyy messy love connection! Fastened but not enough, covered in mixed emotions. Unravelling, wanting, hoping, losing, crying. I guess we\'re all in our feelings today! ❣️This is beautiful!
July 31st, 2023 04:30
Smeared With Affection
Teddy.15 said:
I read this one a few times
(bloody wonderful) 💓
July 31st, 2023 04:30
Teddy.15 said:
I read this one a few times
(bloody wonderful) 💓
July 31st, 2023 04:30
Smeared With Affection
orchidee said:
Oohhh, a kiss is but a meeting of molecules.... and that\'s all it is for KP and me. lol.
July 31st, 2023 04:27
orchidee said:
Oohhh, a kiss is but a meeting of molecules.... and that\'s all it is for KP and me. lol.
July 31st, 2023 04:27
Smeared With Affection
orchidee said:
DNA? Swoon!
Glad some one(s) having fun! 😁😎😯
July 31st, 2023 04:26
orchidee said:
DNA? Swoon!
Glad some one(s) having fun! 😁😎😯
July 31st, 2023 04:26
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just some kind
of foreplay perhaps ..\'
\'that I want
after all, is to make
you go ..
Uuh uuh uh,
aah aah ah ..
Oh yes, yes, yes yes ..
I so want you
to do that with me
time and time and again ..\'
\'Their love proved
unconventional ..
Yet it
remained
unconditional ..\'
!Brilliant!
(what a deftly dextrous Poet
you are my friend
Hope you and yours have a wonderful week)
July 31st, 2023 02:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'Just some kind
of foreplay perhaps ..\'
\'that I want
after all, is to make
you go ..
Uuh uuh uh,
aah aah ah ..
Oh yes, yes, yes yes ..
I so want you
to do that with me
time and time and again ..\'
\'Their love proved
unconventional ..
Yet it
remained
unconditional ..\'
!Brilliant!
(what a deftly dextrous Poet
you are my friend
Hope you and yours have a wonderful week)
July 31st, 2023 02:44
Another Local Legend
L. B. Mek said:
\'later still
when he saw
something dark
in each
of them,\'
that ubiquitous
imbued cruelty in the human condition
unfurled so acutely pertinent
by your poetry\'s insightful ink..
I relate and so can only empathise
with those granted such accursed
ill-fate\'s...
(I read and learn
dear Poet supreme)
may he be granted a most triumphant peace
July 31st, 2023 02:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'later still
when he saw
something dark
in each
of them,\'
that ubiquitous
imbued cruelty in the human condition
unfurled so acutely pertinent
by your poetry\'s insightful ink..
I relate and so can only empathise
with those granted such accursed
ill-fate\'s...
(I read and learn
dear Poet supreme)
may he be granted a most triumphant peace
July 31st, 2023 02:37
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
Parisab said:
‘Part way
down and across
some hypothetical
empty page’
“Foreplay” words which I’m sure were proven to be effective…Even if she used her inside voice… LOL
July 30th, 2023 15:30
Parisab said:
‘Part way
down and across
some hypothetical
empty page’
“Foreplay” words which I’m sure were proven to be effective…Even if she used her inside voice… LOL
July 30th, 2023 15:30
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
Bella Shepard said:
I so love a man with a simple vocabulary, preferably one syllable, two or three letters tops. Now that\'s what I call foreplay, Whoo-hoo! lol
July 30th, 2023 15:06
Bella Shepard said:
I so love a man with a simple vocabulary, preferably one syllable, two or three letters tops. Now that\'s what I call foreplay, Whoo-hoo! lol
July 30th, 2023 15:06
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
Christina8 said:
Glad your muse inspired you today! Yes indeed who needs foreplay when we have poetry???
July 30th, 2023 08:11
Christina8 said:
Glad your muse inspired you today! Yes indeed who needs foreplay when we have poetry???
July 30th, 2023 08:11
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
Bobby O said:
I was thinking no ire like
yes yess Yes YEs YYYESSS!!
July 30th, 2023 03:45
Bobby O said:
I was thinking no ire like
yes yess Yes YEs YYYESSS!!
July 30th, 2023 03:45
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
Teddy.15 said:
Yep a happy meal moment lol 🤣 I\'m swooning with Mr o 🤣 lol
July 30th, 2023 03:12
Teddy.15 said:
Yep a happy meal moment lol 🤣 I\'m swooning with Mr o 🤣 lol
July 30th, 2023 03:12
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah, I\'d prefer the full meal with the trimmings....
July 30th, 2023 02:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah, I\'d prefer the full meal with the trimmings....
July 30th, 2023 02:14
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
orchidee said:
Now look - KP says urgh, arrgghh, uhh, yes, etc, when she\'s having botox treatment. She certainly don\'t say it in our marriage. lol.
July 30th, 2023 01:57
orchidee said:
Now look - KP says urgh, arrgghh, uhh, yes, etc, when she\'s having botox treatment. She certainly don\'t say it in our marriage. lol.
July 30th, 2023 01:57
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
LIZ said:
Isn\'t poetry foreplay though? Not always necessary....but oh so fun! ✨️ 😉
July 30th, 2023 01:33
LIZ said:
Isn\'t poetry foreplay though? Not always necessary....but oh so fun! ✨️ 😉
July 30th, 2023 01:33
Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
If that love works straight away foreplay is unrequired.
Andy
July 30th, 2023 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
If that love works straight away foreplay is unrequired.
Andy
July 30th, 2023 01:25
Another Local Legend
Beth K said:
Neville, thank you for honoring this unsung hero. Gave me goosebumps reading your poem ❤️
July 29th, 2023 19:52
Beth K said:
Neville, thank you for honoring this unsung hero. Gave me goosebumps reading your poem ❤️
July 29th, 2023 19:52
Another Local Legend
Bella Shepard said:
Dearest Nev, this one brings a lump to my throat, and tears to my eyes. Why do we label those who don\'t conform to the herd, or make us feel uncomfortable, as different. They often have the biggest hearts for they understand adversity. This is priceless my friend. A thousand fav\'s.
July 29th, 2023 15:16
Bella Shepard said:
Dearest Nev, this one brings a lump to my throat, and tears to my eyes. Why do we label those who don\'t conform to the herd, or make us feel uncomfortable, as different. They often have the biggest hearts for they understand adversity. This is priceless my friend. A thousand fav\'s.
July 29th, 2023 15:16
Another Local Legend
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Another Local Legend\" is a thought-provoking poem that touches upon themes of isolation, misunderstanding, and the complexities of human perception.
July 29th, 2023 12:11
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
\"Another Local Legend\" is a thought-provoking poem that touches upon themes of isolation, misunderstanding, and the complexities of human perception.
July 29th, 2023 12:11
Another Local Legend
Doggerel Dave said:
Pick holes in the narrative? Wouldn\'t dare..... Probably none - although would be interested in the fate of the campervan...
Intriguing tale though....
July 29th, 2023 07:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Pick holes in the narrative? Wouldn\'t dare..... Probably none - although would be interested in the fate of the campervan...
Intriguing tale though....
July 29th, 2023 07:28
Another Local Legend
Teddy.15 said:
Nev, you and I both know , A true super hero doesn\'t wear a cape. 💖 A fabulous write.
July 29th, 2023 03:07
Teddy.15 said:
Nev, you and I both know , A true super hero doesn\'t wear a cape. 💖 A fabulous write.
July 29th, 2023 03:07
Another Local Legend
orchidee said:
Good write N, I say, good write. Just call me \'Echo\'. lol.
July 29th, 2023 02:12
orchidee said:
Good write N, I say, good write. Just call me \'Echo\'. lol.
July 29th, 2023 02:12
Another Local Legend
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many heroes out there of whom we never hear Neville.
Andy
July 29th, 2023 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many heroes out there of whom we never hear Neville.
Andy
July 29th, 2023 01:46
Another Local Legend
Bobby O said:
Damn. Thought the next treat was his power sublime but that train shifted all that to an irresistible urge to testify leading w his best cuz he deserved as one of yiu and then all mystique of him fills stories proud. Nice tome. I like the attach history , penetrates my insight and connect. Thanks
July 29th, 2023 01:09
Bobby O said:
Damn. Thought the next treat was his power sublime but that train shifted all that to an irresistible urge to testify leading w his best cuz he deserved as one of yiu and then all mystique of him fills stories proud. Nice tome. I like the attach history , penetrates my insight and connect. Thanks
July 29th, 2023 01:09
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing really like the words and the flow to this piece e of writing 🙂
July 28th, 2023 11:15
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing really like the words and the flow to this piece e of writing 🙂
July 28th, 2023 11:15
No More Fancy Restaurants
Bella Shepard said:
Those precious remnants that we must hold on to, bits and pieces of gold to us, love songs still travelling out into space. This plays the heart strings like a beautiful, unfinished symphony. Simple, elegant, brilliant! Fav!
July 28th, 2023 10:38
Bella Shepard said:
Those precious remnants that we must hold on to, bits and pieces of gold to us, love songs still travelling out into space. This plays the heart strings like a beautiful, unfinished symphony. Simple, elegant, brilliant! Fav!
July 28th, 2023 10:38
No More Fancy Restaurants
L. B. Mek said:
modernity breakups
are all centred
on who gets, which favourite
coffee place and restaurants
on weekends
all else, is soon forgot
(i keep lawyers on retainer
just for such breakups
make sure me gets those
restraining orders
I know, i know i got my priorities
straight
and your welcome for the tips..)
lol
have a great weekend Hyung
(try to limit yourself
to a thousand chubby cheek pinches
and a million blubbering, air blowing kisses
baby\'s gotta sleep sometime)
lol
July 28th, 2023 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
modernity breakups
are all centred
on who gets, which favourite
coffee place and restaurants
on weekends
all else, is soon forgot
(i keep lawyers on retainer
just for such breakups
make sure me gets those
restraining orders
I know, i know i got my priorities
straight
and your welcome for the tips..)
lol
have a great weekend Hyung
(try to limit yourself
to a thousand chubby cheek pinches
and a million blubbering, air blowing kisses
baby\'s gotta sleep sometime)
lol
July 28th, 2023 05:01
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
L. B. Mek said:
that turnstile of our life\'s connections
friendship\'s going from BFF\'s
to ghosted, in a day
we couple-up, meet another couple
try and keep it all together
for entertaining group dates
then years later we see them
at the mall and we walk by
because we\'re too embarrassed to admit
we\'ve forgotten each other\'s names..
lol
just one more reason
to treasure the people in our lives
in each moment
leave no room for regret, choose
our connections well
then share without restraint, prepared
to be burnt, knowing that\'s much better
than wishing we could have done different
after the fact, in those memory corridors
of too late
(I so relate Hyung
a great write, thank you!)
July 28th, 2023 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
that turnstile of our life\'s connections
friendship\'s going from BFF\'s
to ghosted, in a day
we couple-up, meet another couple
try and keep it all together
for entertaining group dates
then years later we see them
at the mall and we walk by
because we\'re too embarrassed to admit
we\'ve forgotten each other\'s names..
lol
just one more reason
to treasure the people in our lives
in each moment
leave no room for regret, choose
our connections well
then share without restraint, prepared
to be burnt, knowing that\'s much better
than wishing we could have done different
after the fact, in those memory corridors
of too late
(I so relate Hyung
a great write, thank you!)
July 28th, 2023 04:54
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