Comments received on poems by Neville
What Didn’t We Find in the Attic
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many memories found when we explore our attics Neville.
Andy
October 8th, 2022 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many memories found when we explore our attics Neville.
Andy
October 8th, 2022 01:11
What Didn’t We Find in the Attic
Doggerel Dave said:
Not there (the bodies) \'cos there\'s no room for \'em... LOL. Selective flashes of recognition throughout, Neville - lead off to all manner of memories.
Thanks for that.
October 7th, 2022 20:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Not there (the bodies) \'cos there\'s no room for \'em... LOL. Selective flashes of recognition throughout, Neville - lead off to all manner of memories.
Thanks for that.
October 7th, 2022 20:22
What Didn’t We Find in the Attic
Fay Slimm. said:
What fun to find even half of these long-ago things in an attic - - your fertile mind thought up some almost forgotten mementos which I could relate to - - - re. those cigarette cards and always- kept milk teeth - - a really unique subject and a fab. read mon ami................x
October 7th, 2022 09:36
Fay Slimm. said:
What fun to find even half of these long-ago things in an attic - - your fertile mind thought up some almost forgotten mementos which I could relate to - - - re. those cigarette cards and always- kept milk teeth - - a really unique subject and a fab. read mon ami................x
October 7th, 2022 09:36
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
orchidee said:
Yep, reckon I\'ll meet her, but not get on the wrong side of her! lol.
October 6th, 2022 01:48
orchidee said:
Yep, reckon I\'ll meet her, but not get on the wrong side of her! lol.
October 6th, 2022 01:48
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I drag that last stanza completely out of context and make it mine, Nev?
October 6th, 2022 00:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I drag that last stanza completely out of context and make it mine, Nev?
October 6th, 2022 00:59
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
arqios said:
Fairer and gentler but equally able and capable. A little respect and prudence goes a long long way! At least the signal was there and the disclaimer. What more is needed to arrive at a suitable consensus?
October 5th, 2022 22:45
arqios said:
Fairer and gentler but equally able and capable. A little respect and prudence goes a long long way! At least the signal was there and the disclaimer. What more is needed to arrive at a suitable consensus?
October 5th, 2022 22:45
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
MendedFences27 said:
Look out mate, if provocation puts you in \"dangerous\" territory. Could be a rocky road ahead.
\"Excuse me, I love you,\" had me thinking this was to a whimsical love poem, but that thought ended with her declaration of self-reliance. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2022 16:26
MendedFences27 said:
Look out mate, if provocation puts you in \"dangerous\" territory. Could be a rocky road ahead.
\"Excuse me, I love you,\" had me thinking this was to a whimsical love poem, but that thought ended with her declaration of self-reliance. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2022 16:26
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
Bella Shepard said:
She sounds a woman of good sense, as well as beguiling. Best to lay the ground works up front, no surprises? But then a surprise here and there lends a little spice. So playfully and temptingly written my friend!
October 5th, 2022 12:16
Bella Shepard said:
She sounds a woman of good sense, as well as beguiling. Best to lay the ground works up front, no surprises? But then a surprise here and there lends a little spice. So playfully and temptingly written my friend!
October 5th, 2022 12:16
Excuse Me I Love You She Said
Fay Slimm. said:
What an alluring title mon ami - -- the lady was playing wisely with issues of future behaviour. and gentle or dangerous she knew the ropes before love moved in. Some readers will relate to these words - including me if I might say...........x
October 5th, 2022 11:25
Fay Slimm. said:
What an alluring title mon ami - -- the lady was playing wisely with issues of future behaviour. and gentle or dangerous she knew the ropes before love moved in. Some readers will relate to these words - including me if I might say...........x
October 5th, 2022 11:25
With Nothing More to Lose
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville.
Andy
October 5th, 2022 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Neville.
Andy
October 5th, 2022 01:36
With Nothing More to Lose
MendedFences27 said:
To begin it reads like a love poem with all the trappings: \"rainbows,\" \"waterfalls,\" \"stained glass,\" \"handkerchief,\" and her \"eyes.\' Then, it shifts to the tragedy that it becomes. Having read it several times one discovers that it is in fact a Love poem.
Well done, it drew me in and held me spellbound until the end. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2022 19:01
MendedFences27 said:
To begin it reads like a love poem with all the trappings: \"rainbows,\" \"waterfalls,\" \"stained glass,\" \"handkerchief,\" and her \"eyes.\' Then, it shifts to the tragedy that it becomes. Having read it several times one discovers that it is in fact a Love poem.
Well done, it drew me in and held me spellbound until the end. - Phil A.
October 4th, 2022 19:01
With Nothing More to Lose
Bella Shepard said:
The way you have used the imagery of color to bring this piece to life is extraordinary. Bittersweet, heartbreakingly beautiful. A true fav!
October 4th, 2022 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
The way you have used the imagery of color to bring this piece to life is extraordinary. Bittersweet, heartbreakingly beautiful. A true fav!
October 4th, 2022 13:40
With Nothing More to Lose
Fay Slimm. said:
A linguistic picture of heart-touching moments when tears tell more than one piece of a story through your expertise with the pen. Unmatched your ways with words my dear friend.
October 4th, 2022 09:27
Fay Slimm. said:
A linguistic picture of heart-touching moments when tears tell more than one piece of a story through your expertise with the pen. Unmatched your ways with words my dear friend.
October 4th, 2022 09:27
With Nothing More to Lose
arqios said:
Beauty and sadness all rolled up together. How could they co-exist and yet they do!
October 4th, 2022 05:43
arqios said:
Beauty and sadness all rolled up together. How could they co-exist and yet they do!
October 4th, 2022 05:43
The True Value of Dreaming
Rocky Lagou said:
Couldn\'t agree more with this.
Dreams are the flames that engulf us into action.
Thx dear poetic friend!
October 3rd, 2022 15:36
Rocky Lagou said:
Couldn\'t agree more with this.
Dreams are the flames that engulf us into action.
Thx dear poetic friend!
October 3rd, 2022 15:36
The True Value of Dreaming
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely writing ))
October 3rd, 2022 14:34
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely writing ))
October 3rd, 2022 14:34
The True Value of Dreaming
Christina8 said:
An accurate description of dream life.....I wish to dream during my waking hours....your last two lines are so true and wonderful!
October 3rd, 2022 14:10
Christina8 said:
An accurate description of dream life.....I wish to dream during my waking hours....your last two lines are so true and wonderful!
October 3rd, 2022 14:10
The True Value of Dreaming
Bella Shepard said:
The word \"unconditionally\" resonates for me. I think that dreaming, be it nocturnal or day, is our way of finding perspective in our lives, blending what we know and what we hope for into some kind of meaningful existence. Such well chosen words my friend. Truly a fav.
October 3rd, 2022 13:12
Bella Shepard said:
The word \"unconditionally\" resonates for me. I think that dreaming, be it nocturnal or day, is our way of finding perspective in our lives, blending what we know and what we hope for into some kind of meaningful existence. Such well chosen words my friend. Truly a fav.
October 3rd, 2022 13:12
The True Value of Dreaming
Fay Slimm. said:
Fraught with naughty wishes be my dreams mon ami - - --
but methinks that hope never dies.
Perfectly penned your value of dreaming...........x
October 3rd, 2022 07:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Fraught with naughty wishes be my dreams mon ami - - --
but methinks that hope never dies.
Perfectly penned your value of dreaming...........x
October 3rd, 2022 07:52
The True Value of Dreaming
Neville said:
I do so appreciate your disclosure DD a Freud of mine who was more of an expert in the field than me .. I\'m just Gestalting by the way, that you may be too Jung to remember, once said Roberto Assagioli has the answer .. Cheers
October 3rd, 2022 07:42
Neville said:
I do so appreciate your disclosure DD a Freud of mine who was more of an expert in the field than me .. I\'m just Gestalting by the way, that you may be too Jung to remember, once said Roberto Assagioli has the answer .. Cheers
October 3rd, 2022 07:42
The True Value of Dreaming
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m sure an essential truth is there fined down to a perfect definition, Nev - my (real) problem is that my dreams are truly so surreal that I am near certain no sense can be extracted from them.
October 3rd, 2022 07:21
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m sure an essential truth is there fined down to a perfect definition, Nev - my (real) problem is that my dreams are truly so surreal that I am near certain no sense can be extracted from them.
October 3rd, 2022 07:21
Inconsequential Wonderings
Doggerel Dave said:
An unanswered question if ever there was one, Nev. Close intimate human relationships are always unfinished, aren\'t they?
October 2nd, 2022 18:42
Doggerel Dave said:
An unanswered question if ever there was one, Nev. Close intimate human relationships are always unfinished, aren\'t they?
October 2nd, 2022 18:42
Inconsequential Wonderings
Bella Shepard said:
This one touches deeply. Are there truly degrees of love, a scale that measures it\'s depth? I think the human heart can only be truly quantified by the person within whom it beats. So poignantly written my dear friend!
October 2nd, 2022 11:04
Bella Shepard said:
This one touches deeply. Are there truly degrees of love, a scale that measures it\'s depth? I think the human heart can only be truly quantified by the person within whom it beats. So poignantly written my dear friend!
October 2nd, 2022 11:04
Inconsequential Wonderings
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate penning again mon ami and I think not inconsequential these clever questions for they will whet appetites for more of this oh so beguiling story..................x
October 2nd, 2022 08:04
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate penning again mon ami and I think not inconsequential these clever questions for they will whet appetites for more of this oh so beguiling story..................x
October 2nd, 2022 08:04
Looking Back Long, Hard and Slow
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2022 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Neville.
Andy
October 1st, 2022 01:50
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