Comments received on poems by Neville
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville – I am in trouble here.. I need some guidance. I’ve tried to locate Esme’s magnum opus.
This I remember with absolute clarity – Her discovery, insight into the creation of the universe, nay multiverses while perched on the throne in the smallest room in the house, knickers absent from her ankles as she eschewed such a garment. Perfectly rounded material exploded from her haunches in quantity followed by an incredible fart which represented the dark matter yet to be fully accounted for…..
Any advice would be gratefully received.
September 8th, 2023 22:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville – I am in trouble here.. I need some guidance. I’ve tried to locate Esme’s magnum opus.
This I remember with absolute clarity – Her discovery, insight into the creation of the universe, nay multiverses while perched on the throne in the smallest room in the house, knickers absent from her ankles as she eschewed such a garment. Perfectly rounded material exploded from her haunches in quantity followed by an incredible fart which represented the dark matter yet to be fully accounted for…..
Any advice would be gratefully received.
September 8th, 2023 22:04
That Certain Something
Bella Shepard said:
Emotion flows freely and beautifully in this tribute to a beloved friend. Such a lovely write for I\'m sure a lovely man.
September 8th, 2023 14:45
Bella Shepard said:
Emotion flows freely and beautifully in this tribute to a beloved friend. Such a lovely write for I\'m sure a lovely man.
September 8th, 2023 14:45
That Certain Something
Pop64 said:
That certain something is something some are never lucky enough to have or experience. Quite a read.
September 8th, 2023 13:39
Pop64 said:
That certain something is something some are never lucky enough to have or experience. Quite a read.
September 8th, 2023 13:39
That Certain Something
Christina8 said:
This reflective piece took a romantic turn....Loved this!
September 8th, 2023 13:11
Christina8 said:
This reflective piece took a romantic turn....Loved this!
September 8th, 2023 13:11
That Certain Something
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know who, but was a great man from your description, and these are great words you\'ve penned in his honor. A great ode. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2023 11:20
MendedFences27 said:
Don\'t know who, but was a great man from your description, and these are great words you\'ve penned in his honor. A great ode. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2023 11:20
That Certain Something
LIZ said:
More intense Neville! Because, now, you know how rare it is, and can appreciate it more! So, yes, it\'s possible! That certain something.... I wonder, who he is. Enlighten me! 💜
September 8th, 2023 06:44
LIZ said:
More intense Neville! Because, now, you know how rare it is, and can appreciate it more! So, yes, it\'s possible! That certain something.... I wonder, who he is. Enlighten me! 💜
September 8th, 2023 06:44
That Certain Something
L. B. Mek said:
not sure if this is an elegy, but
you have me feeling
for a person I know nothing about
only, that he meant
something, to someone I care about
and sometimes, that\'s enough..
(such an aching mournful tone
to your words, Hyung)
September 8th, 2023 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
not sure if this is an elegy, but
you have me feeling
for a person I know nothing about
only, that he meant
something, to someone I care about
and sometimes, that\'s enough..
(such an aching mournful tone
to your words, Hyung)
September 8th, 2023 06:03
That Certain Something
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful Neville, I enjoyed this stroll through reflection very much. 💖
September 8th, 2023 05:57
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful Neville, I enjoyed this stroll through reflection very much. 💖
September 8th, 2023 05:57
That Certain Something
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing intense about KP and I, only that we spent some nights camping in separate tents (in-tents) Doh!
September 8th, 2023 04:19
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing intense about KP and I, only that we spent some nights camping in separate tents (in-tents) Doh!
September 8th, 2023 04:19
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
L. B. Mek said:
may she rest in peace
(i looked but sadly couldn\'t find any links to her work)
still, if she inspired and nourished
the burgeoning talents of my Poet supreme
than I imagine I would have loved reading her work
may you ever celebrate her memory with your ink, kind Poet
sorry for your loss, what a testing week its been for you
i\'m sorry Hyung
have a an extra glass or two, on me
🍻
hope you n yours have a peaceful weekend
September 8th, 2023 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
may she rest in peace
(i looked but sadly couldn\'t find any links to her work)
still, if she inspired and nourished
the burgeoning talents of my Poet supreme
than I imagine I would have loved reading her work
may you ever celebrate her memory with your ink, kind Poet
sorry for your loss, what a testing week its been for you
i\'m sorry Hyung
have a an extra glass or two, on me
🍻
hope you n yours have a peaceful weekend
September 8th, 2023 03:07
Something About Shells
L. B. Mek said:
as Beautiful! as a mesmeric seashell
(i read and learn, Hyung)
September 8th, 2023 02:58
L. B. Mek said:
as Beautiful! as a mesmeric seashell
(i read and learn, Hyung)
September 8th, 2023 02:58
Me and My Long List of Things
L. B. Mek said:
so gentle and intimate, Hyung
this little bird, will cherish these words
and the Poet, they showcase
September 8th, 2023 02:56
L. B. Mek said:
so gentle and intimate, Hyung
this little bird, will cherish these words
and the Poet, they showcase
September 8th, 2023 02:56
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
Bella Shepard said:
What a privilege to have known someone such as she, a true renaissance woman. A beautiful tribute! Now it is my task to find her and read.
September 7th, 2023 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
What a privilege to have known someone such as she, a true renaissance woman. A beautiful tribute! Now it is my task to find her and read.
September 7th, 2023 16:05
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
Doggerel Dave said:
Tributes and cigars - the wonder of it all....with emphasis on \'wonder\'....................................................................... Are mythologies not meant to entertain and please?
September 7th, 2023 15:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Tributes and cigars - the wonder of it all....with emphasis on \'wonder\'....................................................................... Are mythologies not meant to entertain and please?
September 7th, 2023 15:25
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Yep, I remember having a cigar with her, while discussing poetry! :)
September 7th, 2023 07:50
orchidee said:
A sensitive write N.
Yep, I remember having a cigar with her, while discussing poetry! :)
September 7th, 2023 07:50
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
Doggerel Dave said:
If only.... if only we could all have just a smattering of the talent Esme AKA Grace bestowed upon the world......... not quite there yet......
September 7th, 2023 06:30
Doggerel Dave said:
If only.... if only we could all have just a smattering of the talent Esme AKA Grace bestowed upon the world......... not quite there yet......
September 7th, 2023 06:30
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
LIZ said:
This is such a beautiful tribute, not only for someone you obviously admired, but to poetry! By doing this, you keep her memory alive! 💜
September 7th, 2023 04:39
LIZ said:
This is such a beautiful tribute, not only for someone you obviously admired, but to poetry! By doing this, you keep her memory alive! 💜
September 7th, 2023 04:39
Miss. Esme G. Cameron
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my dearest Nev, this is incredibly, incredibly sad to know, our dear Grace has past away. I\'m so deeply touched by this poem and incredibly sad. I\'m staring at this writing, not knowing really what to say, except for your beautiful heart that has written such a dedication for one of the most gracious ladies on my poetic side, she had everything humour knowledge kindness and a magnificent poetic pen she will be deeply missed , it was truly an honour to have known her. 💖
September 7th, 2023 03:00
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my dearest Nev, this is incredibly, incredibly sad to know, our dear Grace has past away. I\'m so deeply touched by this poem and incredibly sad. I\'m staring at this writing, not knowing really what to say, except for your beautiful heart that has written such a dedication for one of the most gracious ladies on my poetic side, she had everything humour knowledge kindness and a magnificent poetic pen she will be deeply missed , it was truly an honour to have known her. 💖
September 7th, 2023 03:00
Something About Shells
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have used shells and the ocean to describe this lovely memory. There is a fascination there like no other, and you have formed a pearl of a poem here. Beautifully done dear friend!
September 6th, 2023 14:36
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have used shells and the ocean to describe this lovely memory. There is a fascination there like no other, and you have formed a pearl of a poem here. Beautifully done dear friend!
September 6th, 2023 14:36
Something About Shells
Doggerel Dave said:
Mary Anning comes to mind.... Tongue twisters can be considered poetry....why not....?
With care - round here some seashells can contain (if they haven\'t vacated the premises) very antisocial (read poisonous) little buggers.....
September 6th, 2023 05:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Mary Anning comes to mind.... Tongue twisters can be considered poetry....why not....?
With care - round here some seashells can contain (if they haven\'t vacated the premises) very antisocial (read poisonous) little buggers.....
September 6th, 2023 05:55
Something About Shells
orchidee said:
And furthermore - I can\'t shay your title after a couple of gins! Shumthingsh about shellsh. Good acting from me, innit? lol.
September 6th, 2023 05:41
orchidee said:
And furthermore - I can\'t shay your title after a couple of gins! Shumthingsh about shellsh. Good acting from me, innit? lol.
September 6th, 2023 05:41
Something About Shells
LIZ said:
You took me there with you! I enjoy the way you describe memories/moments so much! \"with the call, the kiss and the mighty roar of the sea\" wow!!! Beautiful! 💜
September 6th, 2023 02:28
LIZ said:
You took me there with you! I enjoy the way you describe memories/moments so much! \"with the call, the kiss and the mighty roar of the sea\" wow!!! Beautiful! 💜
September 6th, 2023 02:28
Something About Shells
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Nev. Such emotion captured and sound too. 💖
September 6th, 2023 02:05
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Nev. Such emotion captured and sound too. 💖
September 6th, 2023 02:05
Something About Shells
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Whenever I take up a shell and listen to it - melodious tones? Nope, all I hear is KP nagging in me \'shell-like\' (me ear)! lol.
September 6th, 2023 01:44
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Whenever I take up a shell and listen to it - melodious tones? Nope, all I hear is KP nagging in me \'shell-like\' (me ear)! lol.
September 6th, 2023 01:44
Me and My Long List of Things
Bella Shepard said:
Found myself wondering if I could sing this to the tune of \"My Favorite Things\". I\'m no Julie Andrews, but it didn\'t sound too bad. When you are fun, you are really fun. Loved this!
September 5th, 2023 13:53
Bella Shepard said:
Found myself wondering if I could sing this to the tune of \"My Favorite Things\". I\'m no Julie Andrews, but it didn\'t sound too bad. When you are fun, you are really fun. Loved this!
September 5th, 2023 13:53
Me and My Long List of Things
LIZ said:
UFFFFFFF OK, you listed a few of mine.
HONESTY being the biggest one!!! 💜
September 5th, 2023 02:40
LIZ said:
UFFFFFFF OK, you listed a few of mine.
HONESTY being the biggest one!!! 💜
September 5th, 2023 02:40
Me and My Long List of Things
Teddy.15 said:
I always knew you and I were so much alike. This list is mine. 💖
September 5th, 2023 02:21
Teddy.15 said:
I always knew you and I were so much alike. This list is mine. 💖
September 5th, 2023 02:21
Me and My Long List of Things
Doggerel Dave said:
What to do with this? OK, let’s go:
Of Yours I’ll admit to wristwatches, Cheese, birds, clocks, honesty, on time, justice, poetry.
Add mine: Bottles – not screw top - non vintage, old junk furniture (it’s the way I live), West German pottery, mazes and labyrinths, books (form plus content) scotch and vino ……………………….
You’ve started something now, amendments and additions to perhaps follow….
September 5th, 2023 01:57
Doggerel Dave said:
What to do with this? OK, let’s go:
Of Yours I’ll admit to wristwatches, Cheese, birds, clocks, honesty, on time, justice, poetry.
Add mine: Bottles – not screw top - non vintage, old junk furniture (it’s the way I live), West German pottery, mazes and labyrinths, books (form plus content) scotch and vino ……………………….
You’ve started something now, amendments and additions to perhaps follow….
September 5th, 2023 01:57
Me and My Long List of Things
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP has a list too. Here\'s the start of it:
Me
Me
Me......
September 5th, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP has a list too. Here\'s the start of it:
Me
Me
Me......
September 5th, 2023 01:47
Non Figmental
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a write my friend. Is that ink indelible or non-indelible? I think I\'ll just have a little lie down after this, need some recovery time.
September 4th, 2023 13:53
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a write my friend. Is that ink indelible or non-indelible? I think I\'ll just have a little lie down after this, need some recovery time.
September 4th, 2023 13:53
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