Comments received on poems by Neville
Man Eater
Goldfinch60 said:
My jungle has now got a smooth path into my future Neville, maybe yours will as well.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
My jungle has now got a smooth path into my future Neville, maybe yours will as well.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:56
By Definition Only
Goldfinch60 said:
We each see things in a different way in our lives Neville.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We each see things in a different way in our lives Neville.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:44
By Definition Only
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP always see it her way, then HER WAY always becomes my way. Yep, never fails. Her motto is \'me, me, me\'! lol.
July 11th, 2023 01:30
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP always see it her way, then HER WAY always becomes my way. Yep, never fails. Her motto is \'me, me, me\'! lol.
July 11th, 2023 01:30
By Definition Only
Caring dove said:
It can be, yeah .. the way we view it . And can have our own opinion / interpretation of things
A nice writing š
July 11th, 2023 01:11
Caring dove said:
It can be, yeah .. the way we view it . And can have our own opinion / interpretation of things
A nice writing š
July 11th, 2023 01:11
Man Eater
orchidee said:
I know no man-eaters. I\'m an egg-eater - the ones I\'ve just beaten! lol.
Fido says \'There, there, old Orchi, it\'s getting late in the day; ya brain\'s getting addled!\' No change there then. lol. Time for me Horlicks.
July 10th, 2023 14:33
orchidee said:
I know no man-eaters. I\'m an egg-eater - the ones I\'ve just beaten! lol.
Fido says \'There, there, old Orchi, it\'s getting late in the day; ya brain\'s getting addled!\' No change there then. lol. Time for me Horlicks.
July 10th, 2023 14:33
Man Eater
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, N! There certainly are some man eaters out there, aren\'t there? Great read....C
July 10th, 2023 09:26
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, N! There certainly are some man eaters out there, aren\'t there? Great read....C
July 10th, 2023 09:26
Girl With a Blue Vase
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. this story is told in such a nice way .. flows with ease . And great way to end the poem ..
Liked the read ..
July 10th, 2023 03:56
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. this story is told in such a nice way .. flows with ease . And great way to end the poem ..
Liked the read ..
July 10th, 2023 03:56
Man Eater
L. B. Mek said:
sadness, in shrapnel
thickening our heartbeats
and deflated dreams
deceiving our appetites
for a love, replete
with our forever promises..
(still we must believe
dear Poet supreme
in-between our misses
exist glimpses of all
we can ever hope for..)
loving the wordless winks
a great read!
July 10th, 2023 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
sadness, in shrapnel
thickening our heartbeats
and deflated dreams
deceiving our appetites
for a love, replete
with our forever promises..
(still we must believe
dear Poet supreme
in-between our misses
exist glimpses of all
we can ever hope for..)
loving the wordless winks
a great read!
July 10th, 2023 03:32
Not Another Ending Surely
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ll partake in that forgiveness
thank ye gladly, kind Poet
now, what\'s this poem about
\'antidotes to art\'s interpretive absurdities\'
was i close?
ballpark?
lol
July 10th, 2023 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ll partake in that forgiveness
thank ye gladly, kind Poet
now, what\'s this poem about
\'antidotes to art\'s interpretive absurdities\'
was i close?
ballpark?
lol
July 10th, 2023 03:24
Marmalade Fingers
L. B. Mek said:
wisdom of taste, tongue to lips
flavours dance
with the passing of time we realise
sweetness in a purr or a lick
we just have to be open minded
to what we\'re offered in life..
(loving the wordplay, Hyung
a fun read
still, just glad you didn\'t take it
to marmite\'s levels
that\'s just irreversibly divisive
even as metaphor)
lol
July 10th, 2023 03:19
L. B. Mek said:
wisdom of taste, tongue to lips
flavours dance
with the passing of time we realise
sweetness in a purr or a lick
we just have to be open minded
to what we\'re offered in life..
(loving the wordplay, Hyung
a fun read
still, just glad you didn\'t take it
to marmite\'s levels
that\'s just irreversibly divisive
even as metaphor)
lol
July 10th, 2023 03:19
Man Eater
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Nev, you know that you and I are quite like joint souls when it comes to love, I knew this title would be powerful poetry, and also somewhat comical, my sister was and still is a man eater lol love can surely mess up a perfectly good head. Love these ones you remind me of myself and what once I went through ā¤ļø
July 10th, 2023 01:01
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Nev, you know that you and I are quite like joint souls when it comes to love, I knew this title would be powerful poetry, and also somewhat comical, my sister was and still is a man eater lol love can surely mess up a perfectly good head. Love these ones you remind me of myself and what once I went through ā¤ļø
July 10th, 2023 01:01
Not Another Ending Surely
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes when that stream of love seems dry, it\'s simply waiting for a good rain to replenish it. I Love the way you\'ve phrased this poem my friend.
July 9th, 2023 11:29
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes when that stream of love seems dry, it\'s simply waiting for a good rain to replenish it. I Love the way you\'ve phrased this poem my friend.
July 9th, 2023 11:29
Not Another Ending Surely
Bobby O said:
A second hand emotion ā¦like60 secs? No , more like Iām cuz the feeling reaching ceilings canāt hold it
Keep fresh w those Mamba moves.
July 9th, 2023 07:24
Bobby O said:
A second hand emotion ā¦like60 secs? No , more like Iām cuz the feeling reaching ceilings canāt hold it
Keep fresh w those Mamba moves.
July 9th, 2023 07:24
Not Another Ending Surely
arqios said:
Like BBQ on a skewer, poems on a theme often match other skewer on other grills... different days and different flavours. Perhaps there is something there in acquiring a new taste...
July 9th, 2023 05:26
arqios said:
Like BBQ on a skewer, poems on a theme often match other skewer on other grills... different days and different flavours. Perhaps there is something there in acquiring a new taste...
July 9th, 2023 05:26
Not Another Ending Surely
orchidee said:
I wish my marriage was a film, with a big notice when it finished: \'THE END\'. lol.
July 9th, 2023 04:48
orchidee said:
I wish my marriage was a film, with a big notice when it finished: \'THE END\'. lol.
July 9th, 2023 04:48
Not Another Ending Surely
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes endings bring new beginnings my dear Nev. ā¤ļø
July 9th, 2023 02:01
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes endings bring new beginnings my dear Nev. ā¤ļø
July 9th, 2023 02:01
Not Another Ending Surely
orchidee said:
There\'s no endings for me and KP. I\'m stuck in this marriage forever! lol.
July 9th, 2023 01:57
orchidee said:
There\'s no endings for me and KP. I\'m stuck in this marriage forever! lol.
July 9th, 2023 01:57
Marmalade Fingers
MendedFences27 said:
Make sure it\'s made with Seville oranges, much more tangy. More of a hot Spanish dance on your tongue. A wonderful breakfast treat. I never met-a-4 I didn\'t like. - Phil A
July 8th, 2023 22:08
MendedFences27 said:
Make sure it\'s made with Seville oranges, much more tangy. More of a hot Spanish dance on your tongue. A wonderful breakfast treat. I never met-a-4 I didn\'t like. - Phil A
July 8th, 2023 22:08
Marmalade Fingers
Doggerel Dave said:
My slowly grinding pedestrian brain could find no meta meaning here. For how could I temper my craving when the word āMarmaladeā is presented to me?
So I remain on the literal level and ask ā Any tips? (My current infatuation is with a product contained in a long narrow jar which should be extracted with a specially designed porcelain spoonā¦.)
July 8th, 2023 21:49
Doggerel Dave said:
My slowly grinding pedestrian brain could find no meta meaning here. For how could I temper my craving when the word āMarmaladeā is presented to me?
So I remain on the literal level and ask ā Any tips? (My current infatuation is with a product contained in a long narrow jar which should be extracted with a specially designed porcelain spoonā¦.)
July 8th, 2023 21:49
Marmalade Fingers
orchidee said:
That reminds me, we\'re out of jam here. Shall we try marmalade next? I will mix it with arsenic in KP\'s sandwich. heehee.
I\'m horrible to her, but killing her off is going too far!
July 8th, 2023 11:52
orchidee said:
That reminds me, we\'re out of jam here. Shall we try marmalade next? I will mix it with arsenic in KP\'s sandwich. heehee.
I\'m horrible to her, but killing her off is going too far!
July 8th, 2023 11:52
Marmalade Fingers
arqios said:
It\'s tangy sweetness transports me back to Mum\'s morning \'appointment\' at the kitchen table and of course ties back rather neatly to Paddington Bear.
July 8th, 2023 02:26
arqios said:
It\'s tangy sweetness transports me back to Mum\'s morning \'appointment\' at the kitchen table and of course ties back rather neatly to Paddington Bear.
July 8th, 2023 02:26
Marmalade Fingers
Teddy.15 said:
Orange marmalade is the best thing ever I always have it in my home. Neville such a sweet little poem ā¤ļø
July 8th, 2023 02:23
Teddy.15 said:
Orange marmalade is the best thing ever I always have it in my home. Neville such a sweet little poem ā¤ļø
July 8th, 2023 02:23
Marmalade Fingers
Christina8 said:
I\'ve never had marmalade, so I\'ll take your word for it....sounds yummy!! C
July 8th, 2023 02:05
Christina8 said:
I\'ve never had marmalade, so I\'ll take your word for it....sounds yummy!! C
July 8th, 2023 02:05
Just Another Random Recollection
Christina8 said:
Oh my goodness, you have me blushing.....wonderful write! x C
July 7th, 2023 15:34
Christina8 said:
Oh my goodness, you have me blushing.....wonderful write! x C
July 7th, 2023 15:34
Just Another Random Recollection
L. B. Mek said:
a world devoid of choice
in its zeal to appeal to mass
ideological hysteria
where our physical traits
are deemed more paramount
than our personality
skin colour and gender, traits
as that legacy of an accursed
Obama presidency
first black man in power, teaching us
its the rest if the world versus
the \'whites\', what the fck!?
great, we go from Luther\'s dream
of healing and oneness
to reversing and flaming the divisive
hate, and blaming it
all, on skin colour
once again...
a modernity
where demands for reparations
warped as an opportunity
for mass looting and crime
while in India, alone
in our degenerately progressive modernity
in this very day and minute
some 8 MILLION
are being enslaved
and worldwide
child trafficking is a 32 BILLION
industry
...
hark
a silence, that thunders
a sadness as witness
to modernity\'s self-absorbed
belligerence of untamed ignorance
hark,
behold, the demise
of humanity, in real time
a reactionary tweet
and obstinate swipe, at a time...
just fck you modernity!
I\'m so ashamed
that by date of birth alone
I\'m fated to be associated
by your deplorable legacy
just fck you! really
so fcking pathetic!!!
go ahead, build your space armies
align yourself with those ESG
financial deities
and in every choice you make, waste
what opportunity we\'re afforded
to fix this fck\'d-UP world
we inherited as broken
and will leave behind
as utterly, demolished
fck!
July 7th, 2023 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
a world devoid of choice
in its zeal to appeal to mass
ideological hysteria
where our physical traits
are deemed more paramount
than our personality
skin colour and gender, traits
as that legacy of an accursed
Obama presidency
first black man in power, teaching us
its the rest if the world versus
the \'whites\', what the fck!?
great, we go from Luther\'s dream
of healing and oneness
to reversing and flaming the divisive
hate, and blaming it
all, on skin colour
once again...
a modernity
where demands for reparations
warped as an opportunity
for mass looting and crime
while in India, alone
in our degenerately progressive modernity
in this very day and minute
some 8 MILLION
are being enslaved
and worldwide
child trafficking is a 32 BILLION
industry
...
hark
a silence, that thunders
a sadness as witness
to modernity\'s self-absorbed
belligerence of untamed ignorance
hark,
behold, the demise
of humanity, in real time
a reactionary tweet
and obstinate swipe, at a time...
just fck you modernity!
I\'m so ashamed
that by date of birth alone
I\'m fated to be associated
by your deplorable legacy
just fck you! really
so fcking pathetic!!!
go ahead, build your space armies
align yourself with those ESG
financial deities
and in every choice you make, waste
what opportunity we\'re afforded
to fix this fck\'d-UP world
we inherited as broken
and will leave behind
as utterly, demolished
fck!
July 7th, 2023 04:03
Strategic Untruths
L. B. Mek said:
factory built-in, manufactured
in every aspect of our life
from tissues for our seasonal
sneezes, allergic
to all the bulsht we\'re forced
to live with
and those flat packed, lies
we tire of deciphering, just
to get a glimpse of what
has already been done to us...
hear their trumpets
a new election year beckons
where we\'ll be drowned in
all the fake mud, they can manage
to sling at each other
while, hi-fiving each other
for another performance, keeping us
distracted from what crimes
they\'re really committing
still, it\'s all getting better
since years later, them cops
will get em good
for that \'one\' party they held
while, there is a deafening
silence
about the money they blatantly embezzled
or all those abuses of power
they get away with, every time!
(thank you! Hyung
for affording me an avenue
to let these words, off of my
overtly opinionated chest, lol)
an important write
July 7th, 2023 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
factory built-in, manufactured
in every aspect of our life
from tissues for our seasonal
sneezes, allergic
to all the bulsht we\'re forced
to live with
and those flat packed, lies
we tire of deciphering, just
to get a glimpse of what
has already been done to us...
hear their trumpets
a new election year beckons
where we\'ll be drowned in
all the fake mud, they can manage
to sling at each other
while, hi-fiving each other
for another performance, keeping us
distracted from what crimes
they\'re really committing
still, it\'s all getting better
since years later, them cops
will get em good
for that \'one\' party they held
while, there is a deafening
silence
about the money they blatantly embezzled
or all those abuses of power
they get away with, every time!
(thank you! Hyung
for affording me an avenue
to let these words, off of my
overtly opinionated chest, lol)
an important write
July 7th, 2023 03:39
No Rules for All
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(be it that red string of fate
or golden chains of chance
linking our ankles to paths
we were destined to share
with those, we eventually
come to realise
mean more to us, than those
we\'ve been conditioned
to think of as family
forcedly..
yet
once free, of our inherited
influences
it\'s so clear to see, we
get to choose, who we share
our life with
making the most of our
ephemeral lives, unapologetically)
July 7th, 2023 03:27
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(be it that red string of fate
or golden chains of chance
linking our ankles to paths
we were destined to share
with those, we eventually
come to realise
mean more to us, than those
we\'ve been conditioned
to think of as family
forcedly..
yet
once free, of our inherited
influences
it\'s so clear to see, we
get to choose, who we share
our life with
making the most of our
ephemeral lives, unapologetically)
July 7th, 2023 03:27
When One is No Longer
L. B. Mek said:
immersed in our woes and laments
we even manage to make the hurt
we dish out, all bout us...
fallible, cursed to view the world
through our biased eyes
and yet, some of us still struggle
to find a line
between what, we could have been
and what we may yet, become
thus, as hard as it may be
we peel back those duck-tapes
barricading our past mistakes
and boldly, excavate
the lessons we\'ve learnt, insuring
we\'re accountable
for the broken heart\'s we\'ve left
in our wake
July 7th, 2023 03:20
L. B. Mek said:
immersed in our woes and laments
we even manage to make the hurt
we dish out, all bout us...
fallible, cursed to view the world
through our biased eyes
and yet, some of us still struggle
to find a line
between what, we could have been
and what we may yet, become
thus, as hard as it may be
we peel back those duck-tapes
barricading our past mistakes
and boldly, excavate
the lessons we\'ve learnt, insuring
we\'re accountable
for the broken heart\'s we\'ve left
in our wake
July 7th, 2023 03:20
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