Comments received on poems by Neville



Bang Goes Another Theory
LIZ said:

Yes, I do get the magnitude of it, and how much discipline it takes. As always, your title is killer!! Nice!šŸ’œ

August 29th, 2023 06:42

Bang Goes Another Theory
orchidee said:

It\'s OK for some with their ampules - can ya beat them?
I\'m talking utter nonsense - no change there then, 99% of the time! lol.

August 29th, 2023 02:01

A Slice of Sky
Goldfinch60 said:

But Autumn, my favourite time of the year, comes first.

Andy

Enjoy yourself up t\'north.

August 25th, 2023 02:24

A Slice of Sky
L. B. Mek said:

indeed, my wise friend
we must cherish
that gifted nature aesthetic
in our now of verdant sublime
and rainbow winged skies...
as far too soon
it will be grey, brooding clouds
once again..
still variety, does add to flavour
in life

August 25th, 2023 01:29

Mused
L. B. Mek said:

probably the reason why dead poet\'s reign..
your Time will come, dear Poet supreme!
glad I get to say, i knew him before
they gave him his flowers, belatedly..
soar high my friend, till
you block out their sun
and force them
to acknowledge your humanitarian
legacy
and your poetry\'s, timeless poignancy

August 25th, 2023 01:25

A Moment of Enlightenment
L. B. Mek said:

lol
zen in, zen out
karate kid\'s got nothing
on a poet, sincere
(thanks for the chuckle)

August 25th, 2023 01:20

For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
L. B. Mek said:

i\'m smiling all teeth
my heart opened wide
what a delight
to share in a cherished friends
success..
you must be so proud Hyung
šŸ»

August 25th, 2023 01:18

Silverback
L. B. Mek said:

smile wide, let those gums shine bright
for this, is
a most deserved grandpa accolade
you\'ve earned my friend

August 25th, 2023 01:14

When Absolutely Gone
L. B. Mek said:

to some of us
you\'re remembered and cherished
for all these things
even as you live and breathe..
may you never change Hyung
thank you! for being you
dear Poet supreme

August 25th, 2023 01:11

A Slice of Sky
Bella Shepard said:

Exquisite imagery, color evokes such warm feelings, \"Silhouttes of gold eyed birds\" a sense of peace. Had to take a breath, and just sigh in contentment. Thank you!

August 24th, 2023 10:57

A Slice of Sky
Bobby O said:

A winter of discontent?
I liked as I do all, the poem

August 24th, 2023 03:15

A Slice of Sky
Christina8 said:

Oh, no reminders of winter please! LOL Our winters are so harsh. Beautiful description of the sky, I really enjoyed this piece!

August 24th, 2023 03:15

A Slice of Sky
LIZ said:

This is so beautiful! I can see all the pastel colors. I have an Amethys stone. It\'s violet/purple. AND, I read \"a slice\"....and I said, OF CAKE. Then, your first word is \"pastel\", which is cake in Spanish. I guess I need to go get me a piece of cake!! Loved it!!

August 24th, 2023 02:45

A Slice of Sky
Doggerel Dave said:

Not for me it ain\'t...Summer is on its way....
The prompt to make notes before this season presents itself, seems a reasonable proposition (thanks for that), if I can find an incombustible medium...

August 24th, 2023 02:15

A Slice of Sky
Neville said:



Hope so .. cheers šŸ‘

August 24th, 2023 01:51

A Slice of Sky
orchidee said:

Good write N,
We not started Autumn yet! lol.
This gives me a cue for a Christmas carol - in August! heehee.
Goldfinch/Andy will shoot me, for not waiting until December. šŸ˜

August 24th, 2023 01:47

Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ 
Goldfinch60 said:

Being that hostage sounds a wonderful place to be Neville.

Andy

August 24th, 2023 01:09

Colour Envy
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you for your words Neville, in my current life I am certainly \'blown away by beauty\'.

Andy

August 24th, 2023 00:57

Colour Envy
orchidee said:

What colour(s) do old trouts turn when they sunbathe?! lol. KP will melt - botox. lol. She\'s 45, don\'t ya know - so she says. Looks like 145.

August 23rd, 2023 04:58

Colour Envy
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ve just read the terms and conditions - cannot find the box to tick.....šŸ˜‡!!!

August 23rd, 2023 04:38

Colour Envy
LIZ said:

For those of us who are open correct? You\'re talking to my heart! One thing\'s for sure...\"all traces of any old and now
obsolete predecessor\" must be gone before moving to the next level! You need to teach me how you come up with your titles! Love it šŸ’œ

August 23rd, 2023 02:44

Colour Envy
orchidee said:

Good write N.

August 23rd, 2023 01:58

Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ 
Parisab said:

ā€˜Her night scented gardenā€™ captivated your memory with painstaking detailā€¦Youā€™re giving us directions to a destination so very personalā€¦

August 23rd, 2023 01:55

Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ 
Bella Shepard said:

Beautiful poem that stirs beautiful images. Such a wonderful allusion to treasured memories dear friend.

August 22nd, 2023 11:28

Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ 
MendedFences27 said:

If you wander into the orchard, don\'t go picking any apples.
Try to keep this floral arrangement well-watered and fed.
The metaphor teases the mind. It drives the illusion, or should I say allusion. This is a classic. - Phil A.

August 22nd, 2023 09:10

Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ 
orchidee said:

Now a terrible joke - just call me Ambi - Mr Dextrous. Or Bambi - I\'m a Guinea Pig Dude (GPD) as one poet says! Doh!

August 22nd, 2023 06:46

Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ 
orchidee said:

A flowery write N. I might swoon in one interpretation of it! lol.

August 22nd, 2023 06:42

Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ 
2781 said:

I am with Dave, ambiguous

August 22nd, 2023 02:45

Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ 
Bobby O said:

So, I asked Siri about secateurs and got nothing. I changed her accent in settings and then SIRI tells me Garden Shears. Gotta get me an Oxford I guess and then I see that Jasmine held you hostage but then I see flowers. Do I started again with a fresh Mi n d abd I really like it. BTW- I had Jasmine pictured like Halle Berry.

August 22nd, 2023 02:35

Once Upon Her Night Scented GardenĀ 
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m going to move aside and give other\'s room to let their imagination fly....as I\'m not sure I have the capacity, Neville.......

August 22nd, 2023 02:31



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