Comments received on poems by Neville



The Science of Passing the Buck
Paul Bell said:

A fall guy is always needed in every emergency, and the good thing with fall guy\'s is, they never realise till the handcuffs have clicked.

October 15th, 2022 11:00

The Science of Passing the Buck
orchidee said:

\"It wasn\'t me\'; \"I wasn\'t there, whatever it was!\" (heehee).

October 15th, 2022 09:08

The Science of Passing the Buck
Dove said:

Sorry, blame serves no purpose ! Get well, you be the one who protects others from the spread. Since it may be insidious, sometimes it’s too late

October 15th, 2022 08:52

Upon Testing Positive
Goldfinch60 said:

I sincerely hope that all gets better soon Neville.

Andy

October 15th, 2022 01:06

Upon Testing Positive
Lionel Mandrake said:

If you want to survive and get better, which I believe you will, detox and get no more boosters ....no matter what.

October 14th, 2022 20:18

Upon Testing Positive
MendedFences27 said:

Whoa. bad news that. Hope all goes well and you bounce back quick. - Phil A.

October 14th, 2022 16:53

Upon Testing Positive
orchidee said:

Yes, get well soon N.
If I had to have kissed a Manageress under Christmas mistletoe, I would never be well again! Doh! lol.

October 14th, 2022 12:09

Upon Testing Positive
Doggerel Dave said:

I ain’t no classical scholar Nev, so I had to resort to Prof G for a bit of a clue, an wot struck me woz wot dun her in woz in all probability childbirth.
I hope you don’t get too crook (Au inf),
Take care of yourself.

October 14th, 2022 05:38

Upon Testing Positive
arqios said:

Oh dear, get well soon Nev!

October 14th, 2022 04:01

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Goldfinch60 said:

I agree with what Fay has said.

Andy

October 14th, 2022 01:25

Why Not Just Call It a Day
orchidee said:

I never knew I betrayed ya! Or did I betray a certain gal?
OK, we\'ll call it a day - Goodnight! lol.

October 13th, 2022 08:35

A Few More Things Remembered
SureshG said:

ahhhh!!!!, that never fades from the memory glands with the passage of time.

October 13th, 2022 07:08

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Fay Slimm. said:

The she in this double would know where she stood right enough by these straightforward lines Nev. - -one betrayal can be coped with but twice - - well it needs the chop given - - -- honestly written and with such gentle reminders..........x

October 13th, 2022 05:30

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Doggerel Dave said:

Now there\'s plain speaki\'n for yer.
Like this one a lot, Nev.
Wouldn\'t care to share the content of that ultimatum, would you.....?
....Nah - a gentleman never tells, right?


October 13th, 2022 05:20

Why Not Just Call It a Day
Paul Bell said:

Yes, three good days is a honeymoon, after that it\'s all downhill.

October 13th, 2022 04:45

A Few More Things Remembered
Christina8 said:

A wonderful poem....so full of sensory images and smells. Spectacular!

October 12th, 2022 10:07

A Few More Things Remembered
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Your words have always had a life of their own, and their own personality, Neville. You speak not just through, but with your pieces as well. A beautiful work of art this is, like those rare flowers that just never lose their charm, sir. A definite favorite of mine.

October 12th, 2022 08:10

A Few More Things Remembered
Fay Slimm. said:

Your usage of word is simply stunning in this romantic memory of the way things were. - -- I love the final thought - that \"if love had a smell,
it would smell of my lady\" - -- -- such an appealing read Nev........................



October 11th, 2022 05:55

A Few More Things Remembered
Doggerel Dave said:

50i\'s did it for me, Nev - although never found any lady to attach embroidered flower patches to \'em... quite conceivably this could be seen in my circumstances as a positive.... where I worked...

October 11th, 2022 03:19

A Few More Things Remembered
orchidee said:

Good write N.

October 11th, 2022 01:58

A Few More Things Remembered
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving words Neville.

Andy

October 11th, 2022 01:31

Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
Goldfinch60 said:

Amazing words Neville, in this day and age it is happening more and more.
I have experienced close people trying to commit suicide but they spoke to me and all became better.

Andy

October 11th, 2022 01:05

Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
orchidee said:

Ahh, was the train on time that day? Doh!

October 10th, 2022 09:15

Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
arqios said:

Oh doubles. Sad it wasn\'t a tennis match or a café.

October 10th, 2022 07:52

Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
Doggerel Dave said:

Too much Nev. Not sure why. I pride myself in an awareness of the realities of people\'s lives, yet i find this disturbing....

October 10th, 2022 04:28

Not Just Any Old Day at the Office
Fay Slimm. said:

Nothing but experience could pen words that strike home so vividly this stark picture of very sudden and unexpected tragedy - -- a heart-wrenching read Nev. - -

October 10th, 2022 04:24

That Point Where We Each Begin
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Neville.

Andy

October 9th, 2022 01:45

That Point Where We Each Begin
Fay Slimm. said:

Strange that time when two never know where the \"me\" ends and the\"you\" begins - -- you scribe it briliantly in this piece of perception my dear friend and tis a fave with me for sure..............x

October 8th, 2022 09:00

That Point Where We Each Begin
Christina8 said:

I love this poem! So satisfying, laying \"like this\', isn\'t it? Wonderful visual. Excellent!!

October 8th, 2022 08:52

What Didn’t We Find in the Attic
SureshG said:

Thank God, or else the sirens will go off and the hand cuffs will shine with a lot of explaining to follow and if not well recalled could lead to undesired ride.
Just imagine all the history hidden in those objects that jar the sleeping memory glands, often leading to a smile, just as your words have done today.

October 8th, 2022 07:45



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