Comments received on poems by Neville
Something About Shells
Doggerel Dave said:
Mary Anning comes to mind.... Tongue twisters can be considered poetry....why not....?
With care - round here some seashells can contain (if they haven\'t vacated the premises) very antisocial (read poisonous) little buggers.....
September 6th, 2023 05:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Mary Anning comes to mind.... Tongue twisters can be considered poetry....why not....?
With care - round here some seashells can contain (if they haven\'t vacated the premises) very antisocial (read poisonous) little buggers.....
September 6th, 2023 05:55
Something About Shells
orchidee said:
And furthermore - I can\'t shay your title after a couple of gins! Shumthingsh about shellsh. Good acting from me, innit? lol.
September 6th, 2023 05:41
orchidee said:
And furthermore - I can\'t shay your title after a couple of gins! Shumthingsh about shellsh. Good acting from me, innit? lol.
September 6th, 2023 05:41
Something About Shells
LIZ said:
You took me there with you! I enjoy the way you describe memories/moments so much! \"with the call, the kiss and the mighty roar of the sea\" wow!!! Beautiful! 💜
September 6th, 2023 02:28
LIZ said:
You took me there with you! I enjoy the way you describe memories/moments so much! \"with the call, the kiss and the mighty roar of the sea\" wow!!! Beautiful! 💜
September 6th, 2023 02:28
Something About Shells
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Nev. Such emotion captured and sound too. 💖
September 6th, 2023 02:05
Teddy.15 said:
Just beautiful dear Nev. Such emotion captured and sound too. 💖
September 6th, 2023 02:05
Something About Shells
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Whenever I take up a shell and listen to it - melodious tones? Nope, all I hear is KP nagging in me \'shell-like\' (me ear)! lol.
September 6th, 2023 01:44
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Whenever I take up a shell and listen to it - melodious tones? Nope, all I hear is KP nagging in me \'shell-like\' (me ear)! lol.
September 6th, 2023 01:44
Me and My Long List of Things
Bella Shepard said:
Found myself wondering if I could sing this to the tune of \"My Favorite Things\". I\'m no Julie Andrews, but it didn\'t sound too bad. When you are fun, you are really fun. Loved this!
September 5th, 2023 13:53
Bella Shepard said:
Found myself wondering if I could sing this to the tune of \"My Favorite Things\". I\'m no Julie Andrews, but it didn\'t sound too bad. When you are fun, you are really fun. Loved this!
September 5th, 2023 13:53
Me and My Long List of Things
LIZ said:
UFFFFFFF OK, you listed a few of mine.
HONESTY being the biggest one!!! 💜
September 5th, 2023 02:40
LIZ said:
UFFFFFFF OK, you listed a few of mine.
HONESTY being the biggest one!!! 💜
September 5th, 2023 02:40
Me and My Long List of Things
Teddy.15 said:
I always knew you and I were so much alike. This list is mine. 💖
September 5th, 2023 02:21
Teddy.15 said:
I always knew you and I were so much alike. This list is mine. 💖
September 5th, 2023 02:21
Me and My Long List of Things
Doggerel Dave said:
What to do with this? OK, let’s go:
Of Yours I’ll admit to wristwatches, Cheese, birds, clocks, honesty, on time, justice, poetry.
Add mine: Bottles – not screw top - non vintage, old junk furniture (it’s the way I live), West German pottery, mazes and labyrinths, books (form plus content) scotch and vino ……………………….
You’ve started something now, amendments and additions to perhaps follow….
September 5th, 2023 01:57
Doggerel Dave said:
What to do with this? OK, let’s go:
Of Yours I’ll admit to wristwatches, Cheese, birds, clocks, honesty, on time, justice, poetry.
Add mine: Bottles – not screw top - non vintage, old junk furniture (it’s the way I live), West German pottery, mazes and labyrinths, books (form plus content) scotch and vino ……………………….
You’ve started something now, amendments and additions to perhaps follow….
September 5th, 2023 01:57
Me and My Long List of Things
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP has a list too. Here\'s the start of it:
Me
Me
Me......
September 5th, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP has a list too. Here\'s the start of it:
Me
Me
Me......
September 5th, 2023 01:47
Non Figmental
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a write my friend. Is that ink indelible or non-indelible? I think I\'ll just have a little lie down after this, need some recovery time.
September 4th, 2023 13:53
Bella Shepard said:
Quite a write my friend. Is that ink indelible or non-indelible? I think I\'ll just have a little lie down after this, need some recovery time.
September 4th, 2023 13:53
Non Figmental
L. B. Mek said:
lmao
much better than my vertebrae ramblings
(so true Hyung
and please forgive my tendency to 🔞
my scribbles
it is not age, but maturity of thought
that I fear i need to warn readers of)
September 4th, 2023 04:47
L. B. Mek said:
lmao
much better than my vertebrae ramblings
(so true Hyung
and please forgive my tendency to 🔞
my scribbles
it is not age, but maturity of thought
that I fear i need to warn readers of)
September 4th, 2023 04:47
Dearth
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tho’ should we
by chance,
ever meet again
my love ..
I am sure I would
more than
just disappoint ..\'
as i read, recognise and relate
to the brave transparency in these choice words
how I fear, the truth they promise...
a dread, so many of my nightmares
have been sculpted out of..
(such great pacing, dear Poet
so blatantly subtle, so tentatively bold
such refined skill you showcase)
September 4th, 2023 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'Tho’ should we
by chance,
ever meet again
my love ..
I am sure I would
more than
just disappoint ..\'
as i read, recognise and relate
to the brave transparency in these choice words
how I fear, the truth they promise...
a dread, so many of my nightmares
have been sculpted out of..
(such great pacing, dear Poet
so blatantly subtle, so tentatively bold
such refined skill you showcase)
September 4th, 2023 04:43
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
L. B. Mek said:
\'All the way down
to that,
stricken lost soul
of yours ..
Where I might
just be permitted
to dispense
once and for all\'
\'To discard
the weight of my
longing
and to finally feel,
for once at least,\'
!!! BRILLIANT !!!
the Poet supreme
this is why, I am such a grateful fan
oh most talented friend of mind
(once more
I humbly bow to your Superior talent
Hyung!)
September 4th, 2023 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'All the way down
to that,
stricken lost soul
of yours ..
Where I might
just be permitted
to dispense
once and for all\'
\'To discard
the weight of my
longing
and to finally feel,
for once at least,\'
!!! BRILLIANT !!!
the Poet supreme
this is why, I am such a grateful fan
oh most talented friend of mind
(once more
I humbly bow to your Superior talent
Hyung!)
September 4th, 2023 04:38
Non Figmental
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot, yer put up yer shingle as a tattooist did yer,,,,,,?
Given up on the trickcyclist game??
September 4th, 2023 04:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot, yer put up yer shingle as a tattooist did yer,,,,,,?
Given up on the trickcyclist game??
September 4th, 2023 04:28
Non Figmental
LIZ said:
Mmmm this is how we\'re starting the week huh? I got you! Slowly......up and down...in whispers! My spine is screaming!!! You\'re speaking my language. 💜 By the way....I laughed way too hard at your author comment!! 😆
September 4th, 2023 02:33
LIZ said:
Mmmm this is how we\'re starting the week huh? I got you! Slowly......up and down...in whispers! My spine is screaming!!! You\'re speaking my language. 💜 By the way....I laughed way too hard at your author comment!! 😆
September 4th, 2023 02:33
Dearth
Goldfinch60 said:
Cleverly written Neville, it may be that that hunger may return for both of you.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Cleverly written Neville, it may be that that hunger may return for both of you.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 02:09
Non Figmental
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido spotted the F word. lol.
Pen before tongue - you\'ll get a mouthful of ink!
I dare not lick KP anywhere - I would taste botox. Bleeuurggh!
September 4th, 2023 02:00
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido spotted the F word. lol.
Pen before tongue - you\'ll get a mouthful of ink!
I dare not lick KP anywhere - I would taste botox. Bleeuurggh!
September 4th, 2023 02:00
Dearth
Bella Shepard said:
To speak the words of your poem is to feel the emotion. To \"wonder where did the sky all go\", captures the enormity of the loss, and the regret that it is irrevocable. The pathos of this verse, palpable. A strong write my friend.
September 3rd, 2023 13:27
Bella Shepard said:
To speak the words of your poem is to feel the emotion. To \"wonder where did the sky all go\", captures the enormity of the loss, and the regret that it is irrevocable. The pathos of this verse, palpable. A strong write my friend.
September 3rd, 2023 13:27
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem puts me in mind of the Van Morrison song \"Brown eyed girl\". Sweet, salted, carmel, melt in your mouth descriptive and delicious. You do honor to the brown eyed, and to your lady love. Verse to tempt the senses. Beautiful!
September 3rd, 2023 09:00
Bella Shepard said:
Your poem puts me in mind of the Van Morrison song \"Brown eyed girl\". Sweet, salted, carmel, melt in your mouth descriptive and delicious. You do honor to the brown eyed, and to your lady love. Verse to tempt the senses. Beautiful!
September 3rd, 2023 09:00
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 🤣 van Morrison would be proud, although I am a blue eyed gal, I too adore the brown eyes exotic and beautiful. Beautiful imagery dearest Nev. 💖
September 3rd, 2023 06:54
Teddy.15 said:
LOL 🤣 van Morrison would be proud, although I am a blue eyed gal, I too adore the brown eyes exotic and beautiful. Beautiful imagery dearest Nev. 💖
September 3rd, 2023 06:54
Dearth
LIZ said:
Staring at desire\'s scarcity peak has a way of doing that. I can feel the strength of your hunger...need. I\'m attracted to the urgency of your promise to satisfy; even though you were the one left without; and the willingness to go to great lengths to....please! 💜
September 3rd, 2023 04:31
LIZ said:
Staring at desire\'s scarcity peak has a way of doing that. I can feel the strength of your hunger...need. I\'m attracted to the urgency of your promise to satisfy; even though you were the one left without; and the willingness to go to great lengths to....please! 💜
September 3rd, 2023 04:31
On Returning to Gullworthy
Bella Shepard said:
This is a reminiscence so sweet, and so beautifully told. You\'ve taken a memory from its resting place, held it in your hands, and caressed it lovingly. Superb!
September 2nd, 2023 16:08
Bella Shepard said:
This is a reminiscence so sweet, and so beautifully told. You\'ve taken a memory from its resting place, held it in your hands, and caressed it lovingly. Superb!
September 2nd, 2023 16:08
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
orchidee said:
I wish to complain about the abundance of \'UFFF\' on \'ere - if I knew what it is?! heehee.
Now me next poem, not deep, but \'Shallow!\'😁
September 2nd, 2023 12:49
orchidee said:
I wish to complain about the abundance of \'UFFF\' on \'ere - if I knew what it is?! heehee.
Now me next poem, not deep, but \'Shallow!\'😁
September 2nd, 2023 12:49
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
LIZ said:
Well damn!! Stop playing with me Neville!! \"Oh’ but oh so very slow indeed.. Oh’ yes, I so want to feel myself melting and deeply ..All the way down to that, stricken lost soul of yours\"- Is there any other way? Took me to paradise! Closed my eyes for a moment! And...ummmm I have dark brown eyes. UFFFF! 💜 Deep....DEEP!
September 2nd, 2023 05:15
LIZ said:
Well damn!! Stop playing with me Neville!! \"Oh’ but oh so very slow indeed.. Oh’ yes, I so want to feel myself melting and deeply ..All the way down to that, stricken lost soul of yours\"- Is there any other way? Took me to paradise! Closed my eyes for a moment! And...ummmm I have dark brown eyes. UFFFF! 💜 Deep....DEEP!
September 2nd, 2023 05:15
Sweet Salted Caramel Eyes
Bobby O said:
To discard the weight of my longing
Next appropriate moment with your permission I may steal this word for word
I enjoy
September 2nd, 2023 03:20
Bobby O said:
To discard the weight of my longing
Next appropriate moment with your permission I may steal this word for word
I enjoy
September 2nd, 2023 03:20
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