Comments received on poems by Neville
Just a Series of What ifs And a Maybe
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
My dilemma of course is: \'Why did I, what if I never, perhaps I shouldn\'t have, married KP! lol.
Do shut up Orch, says Fido.
I might allow one whale to be culled. A beached whale. Oh, it was KP sun-bathing! heehee.
May 12th, 2023 10:59
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
My dilemma of course is: \'Why did I, what if I never, perhaps I shouldn\'t have, married KP! lol.
Do shut up Orch, says Fido.
I might allow one whale to be culled. A beached whale. Oh, it was KP sun-bathing! heehee.
May 12th, 2023 10:59
Just a Series of What ifs And a Maybe
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh YES my dear friend - -- such a wonderful world that would be and as load applause and a big SNAP comes from me I am sure you know I agree wholeheartedly to those final few lines...........x
May 12th, 2023 06:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh YES my dear friend - -- such a wonderful world that would be and as load applause and a big SNAP comes from me I am sure you know I agree wholeheartedly to those final few lines...........x
May 12th, 2023 06:04
Just a Series of What ifs And a Maybe
arqios said:
It\'s all we are saying.... have said... and will continue to say...
May 12th, 2023 06:00
arqios said:
It\'s all we are saying.... have said... and will continue to say...
May 12th, 2023 06:00
Livestock Holiday
L. B. Mek said:
lmao
such fun, a great read
\'cheesecloth dress\'
that\'s just...
well
anyway, I\'ll be \'borrowing\' that
lol
thank you for the chuckle Hyung
hope you have a FUN weekend!
May 12th, 2023 02:46
L. B. Mek said:
lmao
such fun, a great read
\'cheesecloth dress\'
that\'s just...
well
anyway, I\'ll be \'borrowing\' that
lol
thank you for the chuckle Hyung
hope you have a FUN weekend!
May 12th, 2023 02:46
Still Some Way to Go
L. B. Mek said:
read your words and couldn\'t help
relating to them in a selfishly
personal manner
hence my rant below, forgive me Hyung
(those dictators love to state
Poetry, should be read out loud
a must
I ask,
what if we\'ve worded poetic
what could never be spoken
tried to poetically, express
in-place of a yearning to caress
what then, dear \'know it all\'
must poetry exist to entertain
only
what if it\'s a note, a confession
inked
with that sincerity of scarlet ink
intended to reach, just one
whose forgiveness, can never
be attained
yet still, that need to word something
and explain, necessitates
the existence if these poetic words)
May 12th, 2023 02:42
L. B. Mek said:
read your words and couldn\'t help
relating to them in a selfishly
personal manner
hence my rant below, forgive me Hyung
(those dictators love to state
Poetry, should be read out loud
a must
I ask,
what if we\'ve worded poetic
what could never be spoken
tried to poetically, express
in-place of a yearning to caress
what then, dear \'know it all\'
must poetry exist to entertain
only
what if it\'s a note, a confession
inked
with that sincerity of scarlet ink
intended to reach, just one
whose forgiveness, can never
be attained
yet still, that need to word something
and explain, necessitates
the existence if these poetic words)
May 12th, 2023 02:42
Duplicity
L. B. Mek said:
yeah...
in the past, my partner left her phone with me
so I can help her get something fixed
every night, around 1 am
some fool, would call her number
and detail their encounters
I simply posted back her phone
never said a word to her after
years later, we met
she thought I had found someone else
and dumped her...
(perspective, warps
which end of that duplicity
we find, looking back at us)
or it may just be me n my horrid luck...
lol
(such a relatable write, Hyung)
May 12th, 2023 02:32
L. B. Mek said:
yeah...
in the past, my partner left her phone with me
so I can help her get something fixed
every night, around 1 am
some fool, would call her number
and detail their encounters
I simply posted back her phone
never said a word to her after
years later, we met
she thought I had found someone else
and dumped her...
(perspective, warps
which end of that duplicity
we find, looking back at us)
or it may just be me n my horrid luck...
lol
(such a relatable write, Hyung)
May 12th, 2023 02:32
Upon Recalling Youth and Poetry
L. B. Mek said:
\'What I try not
to remember
now though ..
Is just how many
times we
each failed to
notice time ..\'
my tenth read, and these lines still get me
so love this one Hyung
May 12th, 2023 02:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'What I try not
to remember
now though ..
Is just how many
times we
each failed to
notice time ..\'
my tenth read, and these lines still get me
so love this one Hyung
May 12th, 2023 02:24
Livestock Holiday
orchidee said:
I thought it said cheese-log - them wood louse thingys! I won\'t squash them. It\'s part of me Save Snails crusade - don\'t step on them in damp weather. A complete digression there, to throw us off the theme of the poem. Doh!
May 11th, 2023 14:59
orchidee said:
I thought it said cheese-log - them wood louse thingys! I won\'t squash them. It\'s part of me Save Snails crusade - don\'t step on them in damp weather. A complete digression there, to throw us off the theme of the poem. Doh!
May 11th, 2023 14:59
Livestock Holiday
Fay Slimm. said:
Your personal comment after the poem creased me up even more than the tale of cheesecloth attire on a breathtaking female -- --only a mind like yours mon ami can conjour intrigue in nothing but a few lines. - - Great stuff................x
May 11th, 2023 02:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Your personal comment after the poem creased me up even more than the tale of cheesecloth attire on a breathtaking female -- --only a mind like yours mon ami can conjour intrigue in nothing but a few lines. - - Great stuff................x
May 11th, 2023 02:01
Livestock Holiday
orchidee said:
Yep, sounds like another adventure of KP and I!
May 11th, 2023 01:22
orchidee said:
Yep, sounds like another adventure of KP and I!
May 11th, 2023 01:22
Still Some Way to Go
Parisab said:
I see this as complete, you responded and chose the direction of your words and she was impacted with unintended consequence-great work about ambivalence, poet friend.
May 10th, 2023 14:10
Parisab said:
I see this as complete, you responded and chose the direction of your words and she was impacted with unintended consequence-great work about ambivalence, poet friend.
May 10th, 2023 14:10
Still Some Way to Go
Christina8 said:
\"A poem, uncompleted\"---Just adore that line when it comes to unrequited love, or an apology as you say. Great write, Neville! x
May 10th, 2023 10:35
Christina8 said:
\"A poem, uncompleted\"---Just adore that line when it comes to unrequited love, or an apology as you say. Great write, Neville! x
May 10th, 2023 10:35
Still Some Way to Go
arqios said:
The uncomplete-d sits there and can be returned to but that isn\'t always the easiest feat to accomplish. But Time it has been said is a great healer and when that time comes around a reconciliation restores and even lets soar. I pray for that for every uncomplete poem and every poet that they correspond to.
May 10th, 2023 08:36
arqios said:
The uncomplete-d sits there and can be returned to but that isn\'t always the easiest feat to accomplish. But Time it has been said is a great healer and when that time comes around a reconciliation restores and even lets soar. I pray for that for every uncomplete poem and every poet that they correspond to.
May 10th, 2023 08:36
Still Some Way to Go
MendedFences27 said:
Yes, that someone long ago that maybe could have been a muse, and never realizing that the opposite was also true.
As such, an \"incomplete poem,\" lingers in his mind. Loved this one. - Phil A.
May 10th, 2023 07:55
MendedFences27 said:
Yes, that someone long ago that maybe could have been a muse, and never realizing that the opposite was also true.
As such, an \"incomplete poem,\" lingers in his mind. Loved this one. - Phil A.
May 10th, 2023 07:55
Still Some Way to Go
Fay Slimm. said:
An unfinished poem needs a completion and you have scribed an arresting apology for love unspoken
- --I among others can no doubt relate to being shy or scared when time comes for outing - -- glad to have read this one my friend............x
May 10th, 2023 05:17
Fay Slimm. said:
An unfinished poem needs a completion and you have scribed an arresting apology for love unspoken
- --I among others can no doubt relate to being shy or scared when time comes for outing - -- glad to have read this one my friend............x
May 10th, 2023 05:17
Still Some Way to Go
orchidee said:
A good write N.
Ahh, all about me and KP! lol.
May 10th, 2023 02:13
orchidee said:
A good write N.
Ahh, all about me and KP! lol.
May 10th, 2023 02:13
Duplicity
Bella Shepard said:
Ouch! Why is it that the sound of the word \"duplicity\" seems somewhat benign, it rhymes beautifully with felicity and domesticity. And yet there is its sinister side that can bring volatility and hostility. It is a duplicitous word that you have done justice to dear friend. Good write!
May 9th, 2023 12:13
Bella Shepard said:
Ouch! Why is it that the sound of the word \"duplicity\" seems somewhat benign, it rhymes beautifully with felicity and domesticity. And yet there is its sinister side that can bring volatility and hostility. It is a duplicitous word that you have done justice to dear friend. Good write!
May 9th, 2023 12:13
Duplicity
MendedFences27 said:
And he replied, \"We were just having coffee.\" And she replied, \" Yes, but with a lot of sugar on the side.\"
And \'Duplicity\" rhymes with stupidity. Never revisit where you\'ve been with another.
This poem is aptly titled for the title itself is duplicitous. I can\'t imagine one caught this outright, would ever be allowed to stay. You have given fair warning to those that consider love to be a game. Your poem is one of the hard lessons of life. Its realistic presentation, her vengeful attitude, and his silence, show where the moral high point lies. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 9th, 2023 12:09
MendedFences27 said:
And he replied, \"We were just having coffee.\" And she replied, \" Yes, but with a lot of sugar on the side.\"
And \'Duplicity\" rhymes with stupidity. Never revisit where you\'ve been with another.
This poem is aptly titled for the title itself is duplicitous. I can\'t imagine one caught this outright, would ever be allowed to stay. You have given fair warning to those that consider love to be a game. Your poem is one of the hard lessons of life. Its realistic presentation, her vengeful attitude, and his silence, show where the moral high point lies. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 9th, 2023 12:09
Duplicity
Christina8 said:
I love it, don\'t know any other way to say it, I really like the title as well....x
May 9th, 2023 11:30
Christina8 said:
I love it, don\'t know any other way to say it, I really like the title as well....x
May 9th, 2023 11:30
Duplicity
arqios said:
Oh wow. Cheating\'s never fine. As for duplicity, that\'s best left to duplicating machines, but never replicating such sordid behaviours.
May 9th, 2023 07:19
arqios said:
Oh wow. Cheating\'s never fine. As for duplicity, that\'s best left to duplicating machines, but never replicating such sordid behaviours.
May 9th, 2023 07:19
Duplicity
Fay Slimm. said:
Wording the end of a failing affair couldn\'t be better penned dear Nev. - -- gentle but telling this outing of truth. - -- - methinks concealment stirs feelings too deep for more intimacy after discovering any
intention to mislead .......x
May 9th, 2023 07:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Wording the end of a failing affair couldn\'t be better penned dear Nev. - -- gentle but telling this outing of truth. - -- - methinks concealment stirs feelings too deep for more intimacy after discovering any
intention to mislead .......x
May 9th, 2023 07:05
Duplicity
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I always says to KP that I have a headache! lol.
May 9th, 2023 01:35
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I always says to KP that I have a headache! lol.
May 9th, 2023 01:35
Did You Ever Dare to Ask
MendedFences27 said:
Some might wonder, \" Why question a good thing?\" But without complete knowledge that thing can be misunderstood. Questioning, then. becomes important. Incomplete understanding can ruin a relationship.
A daring title, followed by the wisdom of a running question, leading to an obvious result. A most enjoyable poem and a bit of wisdom too. - Phil A.
May 8th, 2023 21:32
MendedFences27 said:
Some might wonder, \" Why question a good thing?\" But without complete knowledge that thing can be misunderstood. Questioning, then. becomes important. Incomplete understanding can ruin a relationship.
A daring title, followed by the wisdom of a running question, leading to an obvious result. A most enjoyable poem and a bit of wisdom too. - Phil A.
May 8th, 2023 21:32
Echoes Seldom Lie These Days
MendedFences27 said:
Besides the physical ties that bind there are the emotional and psychological ties as well. The fire never dies if there is fuel and an open chimney.
Your poem paints a picture of long-lasting love, and how rare it is in today\'s throw-away world. As for \"echoes\" and \"robin\'s eggs\" - What we say or speak is of major importance, and life has a full palette of blues. Loved this one. - Phil A.
May 8th, 2023 15:32
MendedFences27 said:
Besides the physical ties that bind there are the emotional and psychological ties as well. The fire never dies if there is fuel and an open chimney.
Your poem paints a picture of long-lasting love, and how rare it is in today\'s throw-away world. As for \"echoes\" and \"robin\'s eggs\" - What we say or speak is of major importance, and life has a full palette of blues. Loved this one. - Phil A.
May 8th, 2023 15:32
Upon Recalling Youth and Poetry
MendedFences27 said:
Youth is the sweetest time of life, often filled with romance, friends, food. drink. and music. Time itself, becomes irrelevant and only selfish needs prevail. Yet, as fodder for poetry, reminiscence of that time brings forth pages.
Your poem rings true to those times and those moments. It stirs the memories of your readers. Your chosen words give life to their forgotten memories. Thank you for posting this. It sparked a recall of many such happenings. - Phil A.
May 8th, 2023 15:14
MendedFences27 said:
Youth is the sweetest time of life, often filled with romance, friends, food. drink. and music. Time itself, becomes irrelevant and only selfish needs prevail. Yet, as fodder for poetry, reminiscence of that time brings forth pages.
Your poem rings true to those times and those moments. It stirs the memories of your readers. Your chosen words give life to their forgotten memories. Thank you for posting this. It sparked a recall of many such happenings. - Phil A.
May 8th, 2023 15:14
Did You Ever Dare to Ask
Christina8 said:
Love this sexy write.....so intimate and such a great memory (?) at the same time.....Wow, I\'m blushing!!
May 8th, 2023 11:39
Christina8 said:
Love this sexy write.....so intimate and such a great memory (?) at the same time.....Wow, I\'m blushing!!
May 8th, 2023 11:39
Did You Ever Dare to Ask
L. B. Mek said:
(it\'s scary to look closely
at our reflections
as in eyes, rest fragments
of reasoning to our deeds)
for some this will be a fun cheeky, read
for rest of us, it will be a sobering reminder
of those let down\'s and shameful escapes
we so ardently, repress
n forget..
but either way, there\'s no denying
this a great write, Hyung
thank you!
(you\'ve spoilt my poetic sweet tooth
rotten, today
treat yourself to a double, double
of your favourite)
Salut! mi Amigo
🍻
Hope you n yours, have a lovely
Sun-kissed week
May 8th, 2023 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
(it\'s scary to look closely
at our reflections
as in eyes, rest fragments
of reasoning to our deeds)
for some this will be a fun cheeky, read
for rest of us, it will be a sobering reminder
of those let down\'s and shameful escapes
we so ardently, repress
n forget..
but either way, there\'s no denying
this a great write, Hyung
thank you!
(you\'ve spoilt my poetic sweet tooth
rotten, today
treat yourself to a double, double
of your favourite)
Salut! mi Amigo
🍻
Hope you n yours, have a lovely
Sun-kissed week
May 8th, 2023 04:46
Just a Man With a Thing About Bees
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s simple, my fees
are extortionate ..
Then as he
gagged at the
thought of parting
with money,
a bee came along
with a bum
full of honey and
promptly
placed a sting
at the back of his
throat ..\'
love this, on so many levels
your insightful self-ridicule, witty
penetrating and fun
then that societal arrowed commentary
on that trending herd collective
exasperating, need
to sensationalise
(as news feed, indoctrinated)
that bombastic bastardisation
of every minutia blemish or imperfection
in nature or anything existential
just, so they can point a finger
and add to that concussive chorus
of belligerent, ignorance
lol
(Hyung
maybe you should compile
similarly, anecdotal
work place, satires or reflections
for your next collection;
arrowed poignancy, gift wrapped
in all-thing Poesy, funtastic!)
lol
a great read
May 8th, 2023 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'It’s simple, my fees
are extortionate ..
Then as he
gagged at the
thought of parting
with money,
a bee came along
with a bum
full of honey and
promptly
placed a sting
at the back of his
throat ..\'
love this, on so many levels
your insightful self-ridicule, witty
penetrating and fun
then that societal arrowed commentary
on that trending herd collective
exasperating, need
to sensationalise
(as news feed, indoctrinated)
that bombastic bastardisation
of every minutia blemish or imperfection
in nature or anything existential
just, so they can point a finger
and add to that concussive chorus
of belligerent, ignorance
lol
(Hyung
maybe you should compile
similarly, anecdotal
work place, satires or reflections
for your next collection;
arrowed poignancy, gift wrapped
in all-thing Poesy, funtastic!)
lol
a great read
May 8th, 2023 04:37
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