Comments received on poems by Neville
On Being Too Gentle
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab poem on how men can be taught new ways and get surprised themselves instead of alarming. Sublime and subtle muse. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
September 8th, 2022 13:24
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab poem on how men can be taught new ways and get surprised themselves instead of alarming. Sublime and subtle muse. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
September 8th, 2022 13:24
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Bella Shepard said:
Yes, I can see a teeny bit of tongue and cheek, however subtle. But I would suggest just one at a time. Stay strong my friend, you\'re gonna need it.
September 6th, 2022 13:23
Bella Shepard said:
Yes, I can see a teeny bit of tongue and cheek, however subtle. But I would suggest just one at a time. Stay strong my friend, you\'re gonna need it.
September 6th, 2022 13:23
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Jerry Reynolds said:
Now that was fun coffee reading, Neville.
September 6th, 2022 08:49
Jerry Reynolds said:
Now that was fun coffee reading, Neville.
September 6th, 2022 08:49
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Fay Slimm. said:
When so politely asked I wonder just who would step forward for just a taste of that indiscretion - - an aunt or a grandma maybe..........x
September 6th, 2022 08:39
Fay Slimm. said:
When so politely asked I wonder just who would step forward for just a taste of that indiscretion - - an aunt or a grandma maybe..........x
September 6th, 2022 08:39
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
orchidee said:
Someone having fun? or not having \'any\'? Swoon! lol. Revive me Fido.
September 6th, 2022 06:33
orchidee said:
Someone having fun? or not having \'any\'? Swoon! lol. Revive me Fido.
September 6th, 2022 06:33
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
dusk arising said:
Oh sisters and cousins, such a lot they have to answer for. Or is it me?
September 6th, 2022 05:08
dusk arising said:
Oh sisters and cousins, such a lot they have to answer for. Or is it me?
September 6th, 2022 05:08
Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, but in whose cheek would you really wish to come Neville, this weekend, if you really had the choice?
Erotica rules!!
September 6th, 2022 05:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, but in whose cheek would you really wish to come Neville, this weekend, if you really had the choice?
Erotica rules!!
September 6th, 2022 05:07
On Being Too Gentle
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds like you it just right, I\'d call it the \"Goldilocks Approach\". Very, very clever my friend!
September 5th, 2022 12:41
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds like you it just right, I\'d call it the \"Goldilocks Approach\". Very, very clever my friend!
September 5th, 2022 12:41
Potage du Femme
Bella Shepard said:
This sounds quite the taste treat. What I want to know is does this dish reheat well, or is it also good cold?
September 5th, 2022 12:35
Bella Shepard said:
This sounds quite the taste treat. What I want to know is does this dish reheat well, or is it also good cold?
September 5th, 2022 12:35
On Being Too Gentle
SureshG said:
I regret it wasn’t me, for had I in my youth, while being rejected - lessons learnt would have played an important role.
Just as I am learning how to scribe a lasting piece.
September 5th, 2022 10:25
SureshG said:
I regret it wasn’t me, for had I in my youth, while being rejected - lessons learnt would have played an important role.
Just as I am learning how to scribe a lasting piece.
September 5th, 2022 10:25
On Being Too Gentle
Doggerel Dave said:
A smooth change of pace portrayed in your piece; Improvisation the name of the game, Neville....ask and thou shalt receive....maybe 🙂
September 3rd, 2022 19:31
Doggerel Dave said:
A smooth change of pace portrayed in your piece; Improvisation the name of the game, Neville....ask and thou shalt receive....maybe 🙂
September 3rd, 2022 19:31
On Being Too Gentle
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like this Dom is about to have a field day.
Well written, it exposes her hidden talents without actually calling them out.
\"On Being Too Gentle,\" I think he at least had the spirit to engage.
Oh, woe is he! - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2022 17:22
MendedFences27 said:
Sounds like this Dom is about to have a field day.
Well written, it exposes her hidden talents without actually calling them out.
\"On Being Too Gentle,\" I think he at least had the spirit to engage.
Oh, woe is he! - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2022 17:22
On Being Too Gentle
shaa said:
Couldn\'t be more clear 😅 oh how wrong they go. Brilliant!
September 3rd, 2022 07:05
shaa said:
Couldn\'t be more clear 😅 oh how wrong they go. Brilliant!
September 3rd, 2022 07:05
On Being Too Gentle
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - gentle approaches be blowed to this well versed lady - -- I am laughing aloud Nev at the cleverness you use to show her at the game - -once a seductress always the same eh ? - - brilliant piece of penning....................x
September 3rd, 2022 02:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - gentle approaches be blowed to this well versed lady - -- I am laughing aloud Nev at the cleverness you use to show her at the game - -once a seductress always the same eh ? - - brilliant piece of penning....................x
September 3rd, 2022 02:51
On Being Too Gentle
orchidee said:
What were the details of the \'error\'? Don\'t answer that, or I will swoon! Or at least, don\'t answer how she corrected the error. heehee.
September 3rd, 2022 01:49
orchidee said:
What were the details of the \'error\'? Don\'t answer that, or I will swoon! Or at least, don\'t answer how she corrected the error. heehee.
September 3rd, 2022 01:49
Potage du Femme
Goldfinch60 said:
Surely you must have some basil and saffron there as well Neville.
Andy
September 3rd, 2022 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Surely you must have some basil and saffron there as well Neville.
Andy
September 3rd, 2022 01:26
On Being Too Gentle
dusk arising said:
Says it all. Oh how wrong we get it sometimes.
September 3rd, 2022 01:12
dusk arising said:
Says it all. Oh how wrong we get it sometimes.
September 3rd, 2022 01:12
Potage du Femme
orchidee said:
You know I\'m gonna say this - Fido won\'t let me have any potage! lol.
September 2nd, 2022 09:17
orchidee said:
You know I\'m gonna say this - Fido won\'t let me have any potage! lol.
September 2nd, 2022 09:17
Potage du Femme
Fay Slimm. said:
Tis my kina broth this slice after slice of salty potage with delectable taste - -- - -thanks for the spicy read mon ami..............x
September 2nd, 2022 08:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Tis my kina broth this slice after slice of salty potage with delectable taste - -- - -thanks for the spicy read mon ami..............x
September 2nd, 2022 08:57
Potage du Femme
Doggerel Dave said:
...and she did and I did and the energy passed through her to me.... Wish I had the poetic skill to give it the moment...
Thanks Nev for at least giving me the chance.....
September 2nd, 2022 05:26
Doggerel Dave said:
...and she did and I did and the energy passed through her to me.... Wish I had the poetic skill to give it the moment...
Thanks Nev for at least giving me the chance.....
September 2nd, 2022 05:26
Potage du Femme
Doggerel Dave said:
Talking cunnilingus here? \'Since between your legs is all the richness of a pollution free seashore, I\'ll give you all you want and then some...\'
I\'m sure she\'ll come across if I ask her...
September 2nd, 2022 04:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Talking cunnilingus here? \'Since between your legs is all the richness of a pollution free seashore, I\'ll give you all you want and then some...\'
I\'m sure she\'ll come across if I ask her...
September 2nd, 2022 04:22
Somewhere Between Lovers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true in many cases Neville but sometimes the true love can arise from these places.
Andy
September 2nd, 2022 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true in many cases Neville but sometimes the true love can arise from these places.
Andy
September 2nd, 2022 00:49
Somewhere Between Lovers
MendedFences27 said:
Her paper-thin veneer was finally shattered, and he voracious interior exposed. Her lovers felt like playthings and opted for a more meaningful connection. Love it seems comes in many layers, some deeper than others. We feel a sadness only for the loss of love and what will be her ongoing plight.
A well told scene of lost love told aslant of the actual occurrence. Sometimes, doing so is more difficult than relaying the actuality. A fine poem. I enjoyed it immensely. - Phil A.
September 1st, 2022 18:17
MendedFences27 said:
Her paper-thin veneer was finally shattered, and he voracious interior exposed. Her lovers felt like playthings and opted for a more meaningful connection. Love it seems comes in many layers, some deeper than others. We feel a sadness only for the loss of love and what will be her ongoing plight.
A well told scene of lost love told aslant of the actual occurrence. Sometimes, doing so is more difficult than relaying the actuality. A fine poem. I enjoyed it immensely. - Phil A.
September 1st, 2022 18:17
Somewhere Between Lovers
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the result of insatiable lust ends often in heart-wrenching sadness and for both genders too methinks --- you pen a picture deserving of pity dear Nev. - brings tears to the eyes does this haunt of a read.................x
September 1st, 2022 06:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the result of insatiable lust ends often in heart-wrenching sadness and for both genders too methinks --- you pen a picture deserving of pity dear Nev. - brings tears to the eyes does this haunt of a read.................x
September 1st, 2022 06:07
Somewhere Between Lovers
orchidee said:
Is she on the rubbish dump? Aww, send her to me - or will she be too much for me?!
And what am I on about?! Fido won\'t let me have any \'excitement\'. lol.
September 1st, 2022 05:18
orchidee said:
Is she on the rubbish dump? Aww, send her to me - or will she be too much for me?!
And what am I on about?! Fido won\'t let me have any \'excitement\'. lol.
September 1st, 2022 05:18
Looking Forward to Later
Christina8 said:
OOH Saucy! I like this a lot! The imagery is priceless. And THANK YOU sir!
September 1st, 2022 02:10
Christina8 said:
OOH Saucy! I like this a lot! The imagery is priceless. And THANK YOU sir!
September 1st, 2022 02:10
Looking Forward to Later
Goldfinch60 said:
Hopefully that love will overcome all Neville.
Andhy
September 1st, 2022 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Hopefully that love will overcome all Neville.
Andhy
September 1st, 2022 00:58
Looking Forward to Later
Bella Shepard said:
I think you raise a good point, the difference between making love and having sex. Does one necessarily lead to the other? One denotes connection while the other satisfaction. Now if you get both together, well you\'ve hit the jackpot.
August 31st, 2022 11:37
Bella Shepard said:
I think you raise a good point, the difference between making love and having sex. Does one necessarily lead to the other? One denotes connection while the other satisfaction. Now if you get both together, well you\'ve hit the jackpot.
August 31st, 2022 11:37
Looking Forward to Later
Doggerel Dave said:
No matter the route (care with spelling there), so long it worked out well in the end.
If kids in your neighbourhood are mouthing off like that, it’s time for a move, Neville.
August 31st, 2022 07:53
Doggerel Dave said:
No matter the route (care with spelling there), so long it worked out well in the end.
If kids in your neighbourhood are mouthing off like that, it’s time for a move, Neville.
August 31st, 2022 07:53
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