Comments received on poems by Neville
When Last Seen She Was Holding on Tightly
Doggerel Dave said:
Oo arr Jim, she be knowing what t\'is all about - look, the evidence be in her arrrms...
If she goes with \'em she won\'t have much use for her attire...could I have it ? (You never know your luck in a big city come Saturday night....)
Definitely smelt the salt and fresh breeze there, Neville.
September 20th, 2023 00:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Oo arr Jim, she be knowing what t\'is all about - look, the evidence be in her arrrms...
If she goes with \'em she won\'t have much use for her attire...could I have it ? (You never know your luck in a big city come Saturday night....)
Definitely smelt the salt and fresh breeze there, Neville.
September 20th, 2023 00:33
Too Many Maybe’s
Christina8 said:
This is a cute little shortie. Perhaps I like it a lot!
September 19th, 2023 08:03
Christina8 said:
This is a cute little shortie. Perhaps I like it a lot!
September 19th, 2023 08:03
Too Many Maybe’s
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s this - a confessional?
You laying on a couch while another trickcyclist listens intently (or however youse do it........)
Worth a ponder, though.....
September 19th, 2023 04:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot\'s this - a confessional?
You laying on a couch while another trickcyclist listens intently (or however youse do it........)
Worth a ponder, though.....
September 19th, 2023 04:35
Too Many Maybe’s
LIZ said:
Perhaps.....the answer has always been right in front of your eyes!! 💜
September 19th, 2023 03:36
LIZ said:
Perhaps.....the answer has always been right in front of your eyes!! 💜
September 19th, 2023 03:36
Too Many Maybe’s
Bobby O said:
Like he could carry all that indecision but he had no chance to haul it.
September 19th, 2023 02:20
Bobby O said:
Like he could carry all that indecision but he had no chance to haul it.
September 19th, 2023 02:20
Too Many Maybe’s
orchidee said:
Maybe, perhaps, possibly, not sure, could be, hmm, bit doubtful, can\'t be certain, etc, blah, blah, that this is a good write N. Enough waffling from me!
September 19th, 2023 01:49
orchidee said:
Maybe, perhaps, possibly, not sure, could be, hmm, bit doubtful, can\'t be certain, etc, blah, blah, that this is a good write N. Enough waffling from me!
September 19th, 2023 01:49
Too Many Maybe’s
Teddy.15 said:
Perhaps in fact I am sure this is Beautiful. ❤️
September 19th, 2023 01:45
Teddy.15 said:
Perhaps in fact I am sure this is Beautiful. ❤️
September 19th, 2023 01:45
Mary
Bella Shepard said:
It seems the aftermath of tragedy, in which this mysterious Mary dwells. A quiet reflection and perhaps renewal of hope? You treat this with kind, gentle hands and mold it beautifully.
September 18th, 2023 14:39
Bella Shepard said:
It seems the aftermath of tragedy, in which this mysterious Mary dwells. A quiet reflection and perhaps renewal of hope? You treat this with kind, gentle hands and mold it beautifully.
September 18th, 2023 14:39
Mary
Neville said:
Thanks for taking time to consider these stacked words Phil your visits and ongoing encouragement are always welcome and appreciated .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 11:49
Neville said:
Thanks for taking time to consider these stacked words Phil your visits and ongoing encouragement are always welcome and appreciated .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 11:49
Mary
MendedFences27 said:
Mede me think of a recovering war-torn village or city church. Some can find belief in any form when survival is at stake. A very succinct presentation of images and leaving behind the question of faith.
\"an extra penny in the collection box\" - brings us all back down to Earth. Faith is what you make it. - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 11:34
MendedFences27 said:
Mede me think of a recovering war-torn village or city church. Some can find belief in any form when survival is at stake. A very succinct presentation of images and leaving behind the question of faith.
\"an extra penny in the collection box\" - brings us all back down to Earth. Faith is what you make it. - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 11:34
Mary
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m going for context (I\'m in a contextual mood today)... Wasn\'t (broken windows) just after the dissolution of the monasteries or something, was it........??
September 18th, 2023 04:56
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m going for context (I\'m in a contextual mood today)... Wasn\'t (broken windows) just after the dissolution of the monasteries or something, was it........??
September 18th, 2023 04:56
Down in The Hold
Neville said:
I am near overcome with gratitude Mek thank you brother and then some .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 04:10
Neville said:
I am near overcome with gratitude Mek thank you brother and then some .. Neville
September 18th, 2023 04:10
When All Said and Done it’s All Over
Neville said:
External influences infiltrated my pen .. thanks again my friend 😎👍
September 18th, 2023 04:05
Neville said:
External influences infiltrated my pen .. thanks again my friend 😎👍
September 18th, 2023 04:05
Mary
Bobby O said:
Held fast tween
grey space
and golden rays ..
What a great way to paint an image. Just like King Kong, you got it goin on!
September 18th, 2023 03:16
Bobby O said:
Held fast tween
grey space
and golden rays ..
What a great way to paint an image. Just like King Kong, you got it goin on!
September 18th, 2023 03:16
Mary
L. B. Mek said:
wording!
a thousand people write the same story
but rarely
deliver it with the distilled brevity and eloquence
of a True poet, like you:
\'Held fast tween
grey space
and golden rays ..
Those that
yet survived
to shine
through broken
stained glass\'
Thank you! what Poetic treats you served this morning..
(hope you n yours have a peaceful week Hyung
my thoughts are with her 🙏)
September 18th, 2023 02:45
L. B. Mek said:
wording!
a thousand people write the same story
but rarely
deliver it with the distilled brevity and eloquence
of a True poet, like you:
\'Held fast tween
grey space
and golden rays ..
Those that
yet survived
to shine
through broken
stained glass\'
Thank you! what Poetic treats you served this morning..
(hope you n yours have a peaceful week Hyung
my thoughts are with her 🙏)
September 18th, 2023 02:45
Mary
LIZ said:
Ah Neville! I don\'t know whether this is derived from a personal memory or, just an observation. Regardless, it took me to church!! I don\'t know why. By the way, that\'s my mom\'s name! 💜
September 18th, 2023 02:40
LIZ said:
Ah Neville! I don\'t know whether this is derived from a personal memory or, just an observation. Regardless, it took me to church!! I don\'t know why. By the way, that\'s my mom\'s name! 💜
September 18th, 2023 02:40
Mary
Teddy.15 said:
If I\'m not mistaken it was also your mother\'s name dear Nev. A close look through a door which I very rarely enter personally but so very beautifully written. 💖
September 18th, 2023 02:33
Teddy.15 said:
If I\'m not mistaken it was also your mother\'s name dear Nev. A close look through a door which I very rarely enter personally but so very beautifully written. 💖
September 18th, 2023 02:33
When All Said and Done it’s All Over
L. B. Mek said:
its always heartbreakingly morose
when the most certain pillar in our life
crumbles, before our eyes
in that image, we witness a loss
we can never replace...
but
that\'s why, we can never take love for granted
I like the song
\'I\'m going to love you
like
I\'m going to lose you\'
because it love\'s truth
distilled
it\'s too late to wonder why, after
it\'s our now that matters
giving it all, in our very day
every conversation
every embrace and kiss
leaving nothing to chance
loving, in a way that will insure
come what may, we will have
no regrets..
(I assume this was inspired
by patients or other external influences
so i won\'t worry for you, Hyung)
a Great write!
September 18th, 2023 02:30
L. B. Mek said:
its always heartbreakingly morose
when the most certain pillar in our life
crumbles, before our eyes
in that image, we witness a loss
we can never replace...
but
that\'s why, we can never take love for granted
I like the song
\'I\'m going to love you
like
I\'m going to lose you\'
because it love\'s truth
distilled
it\'s too late to wonder why, after
it\'s our now that matters
giving it all, in our very day
every conversation
every embrace and kiss
leaving nothing to chance
loving, in a way that will insure
come what may, we will have
no regrets..
(I assume this was inspired
by patients or other external influences
so i won\'t worry for you, Hyung)
a Great write!
September 18th, 2023 02:30
Mary
Christina8 said:
A beautiful write full of imagery. Fascinating tale (or maybe this is true). Loved it!
September 18th, 2023 02:29
Christina8 said:
A beautiful write full of imagery. Fascinating tale (or maybe this is true). Loved it!
September 18th, 2023 02:29
Mary
orchidee said:
Dang it! An extra penny? Some places pass round TWO hats (collection plates) in the same service.
I reckon that\'s being silly - and greedy!
St Paul in the Bible is fair on financial giving. He does not say - give what you haven\'t got!
September 18th, 2023 02:25
orchidee said:
Dang it! An extra penny? Some places pass round TWO hats (collection plates) in the same service.
I reckon that\'s being silly - and greedy!
St Paul in the Bible is fair on financial giving. He does not say - give what you haven\'t got!
September 18th, 2023 02:25
Mary
Goldfinch60 said:
I already have my Mary Neville and she will always be there for me.
Andy
September 18th, 2023 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
I already have my Mary Neville and she will always be there for me.
Andy
September 18th, 2023 02:19
The Sound of Darkness
spilleronsheet said:
Over the years….we were the same….but still not the same…..so was our way with darkness….we feared the nights and nightmares….but who knew the same darkness became respite…to hide our wounds from ugly eyes….totally immersed in your poetry dear Neville…
September 17th, 2023 12:19
spilleronsheet said:
Over the years….we were the same….but still not the same…..so was our way with darkness….we feared the nights and nightmares….but who knew the same darkness became respite…to hide our wounds from ugly eyes….totally immersed in your poetry dear Neville…
September 17th, 2023 12:19
Down in The Hold
Bella Shepard said:
\"a single act of kindness\" is welcome at any stage, and if it gives some comfort, then perhaps some peace of mind. Beautifully written, your sailor\'s lament!
September 17th, 2023 11:34
Bella Shepard said:
\"a single act of kindness\" is welcome at any stage, and if it gives some comfort, then perhaps some peace of mind. Beautifully written, your sailor\'s lament!
September 17th, 2023 11:34
Down in The Hold
Parisab said:
Hemingwayesque in its quality and tone, and I mean it as a compliment-thanks as always for the treat
September 17th, 2023 10:18
Parisab said:
Hemingwayesque in its quality and tone, and I mean it as a compliment-thanks as always for the treat
September 17th, 2023 10:18
Down in The Hold
Dove said:
Was he Black Beard the Pirate, for they slashed his head off and shot him silly. Just kidding. Great Tale thy weaves. Of kindness, and doom. My heart doth sigh!💗❤💓👍
September 17th, 2023 06:44
Dove said:
Was he Black Beard the Pirate, for they slashed his head off and shot him silly. Just kidding. Great Tale thy weaves. Of kindness, and doom. My heart doth sigh!💗❤💓👍
September 17th, 2023 06:44
When All Said and Done it’s All Over
Parisab said:
Love lost can feel like an expected and unexpected ‘stab and kidney punch’ in one-to love and loss, I salute!
September 16th, 2023 20:28
Parisab said:
Love lost can feel like an expected and unexpected ‘stab and kidney punch’ in one-to love and loss, I salute!
September 16th, 2023 20:28
When All Said and Done it’s All Over
MendedFences27 said:
It can end as starkly as you have described it. I recall two acquaintances who simply went home to an empty house., completely empty, everything was gone not even a bed to sleep on. In your poem the pain of loss is transposed into physical pain, \"stab and a kidney punch.\" This conveys the pain nicely. I also noticed the tongue-in- cheek of \" I regret to inform you\"... clever. \"All said and done,\" a most intriguing poem. - Phil A.
September 16th, 2023 19:28
MendedFences27 said:
It can end as starkly as you have described it. I recall two acquaintances who simply went home to an empty house., completely empty, everything was gone not even a bed to sleep on. In your poem the pain of loss is transposed into physical pain, \"stab and a kidney punch.\" This conveys the pain nicely. I also noticed the tongue-in- cheek of \" I regret to inform you\"... clever. \"All said and done,\" a most intriguing poem. - Phil A.
September 16th, 2023 19:28
When All Said and Done it’s All Over
Doggerel Dave said:
Owwww (howl to the moon - in case you are tone deaf and couldn\'t recognise it.......)
🥹
September 16th, 2023 06:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Owwww (howl to the moon - in case you are tone deaf and couldn\'t recognise it.......)
🥹
September 16th, 2023 06:41
When All Said and Done it’s All Over
orchidee said:
Ahh good, words I say to KP every day! lol.
September 16th, 2023 04:26
orchidee said:
Ahh good, words I say to KP every day! lol.
September 16th, 2023 04:26
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