Comments received on poems by Neville
Fruit Salad Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville and so very true the way the weather is changing in the UK.
Andy
July 4th, 2023 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville and so very true the way the weather is changing in the UK.
Andy
July 4th, 2023 01:23
When One is No Longer
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that ghost may be with you in reality Neville and all will be wonderful.
Andy
July 4th, 2023 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that ghost may be with you in reality Neville and all will be wonderful.
Andy
July 4th, 2023 01:13
When One is No Longer
Parisab said:
I found the iteration of the word indeed very interesting in this piece-There is depth to the content in the simple and ‘care free’ wording-we do detach to survive the grief from loss-also the idol worshiping of humans, especially a woman, will lose their luster as the last seven lines eluded and we can become disengaged from the feelings we once had for the person-you are mastering the enigma of this piece-Of course I am commenting the implicit meaning-appealing work as always poet friend…
July 4th, 2023 01:08
Parisab said:
I found the iteration of the word indeed very interesting in this piece-There is depth to the content in the simple and ‘care free’ wording-we do detach to survive the grief from loss-also the idol worshiping of humans, especially a woman, will lose their luster as the last seven lines eluded and we can become disengaged from the feelings we once had for the person-you are mastering the enigma of this piece-Of course I am commenting the implicit meaning-appealing work as always poet friend…
July 4th, 2023 01:08
When One is No Longer
Caring dove said:
the ghost
of all those
women I have ever wanted .‘
Those are really sad lines ..
Sad writing but well expressed
July 4th, 2023 01:02
Caring dove said:
the ghost
of all those
women I have ever wanted .‘
Those are really sad lines ..
Sad writing but well expressed
July 4th, 2023 01:02
Fruit Salad Skies
Bella Shepard said:
Sounds like ambrosia to me! This wonderful poem tickles the taste buds as well as the imagination. A great write my friend!
July 3rd, 2023 12:21
Bella Shepard said:
Sounds like ambrosia to me! This wonderful poem tickles the taste buds as well as the imagination. A great write my friend!
July 3rd, 2023 12:21
Fruit Salad Skies
Christina8 said:
Very nice, I could taste all the flavors coming together....then I thought of my grandmothers fruit salad....twas to die for!
July 3rd, 2023 10:31
Christina8 said:
Very nice, I could taste all the flavors coming together....then I thought of my grandmothers fruit salad....twas to die for!
July 3rd, 2023 10:31
Fruit Salad Skies
Bobby O said:
And the cherry is elusive. True if many things that tease delight.
Nice write good read Mr. Neville
July 3rd, 2023 05:21
Bobby O said:
And the cherry is elusive. True if many things that tease delight.
Nice write good read Mr. Neville
July 3rd, 2023 05:21
Fruit Salad Skies
L. B. Mek said:
worded as deliciously vivid
as every fruity spoonful bite
is, to imagine..
Brilliant!
(guess what i\'ll be having for lunch
yeah..
steak! n chips with me mushy peas
..what!
.. what? did you think)
😁
(oh and of course a fruit salad for dessert
duh!)
😎
yeah I\'m a failed comedian
but so what, I own it!
🍻
(thanks for putting up with me)
hope you n yours have a great week Hyung!
July 3rd, 2023 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
worded as deliciously vivid
as every fruity spoonful bite
is, to imagine..
Brilliant!
(guess what i\'ll be having for lunch
yeah..
steak! n chips with me mushy peas
..what!
.. what? did you think)
😁
(oh and of course a fruit salad for dessert
duh!)
😎
yeah I\'m a failed comedian
but so what, I own it!
🍻
(thanks for putting up with me)
hope you n yours have a great week Hyung!
July 3rd, 2023 04:52
Fruit Salad Skies
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Greedy KP wants to eat it all! lol.
July 3rd, 2023 03:49
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Greedy KP wants to eat it all! lol.
July 3rd, 2023 03:49
Fruit Salad Skies
moonwriting said:
I enjoy how you can read this in whatever order you feel like and it will somehow form a new image.
July 3rd, 2023 03:04
moonwriting said:
I enjoy how you can read this in whatever order you feel like and it will somehow form a new image.
July 3rd, 2023 03:04
Fruit Salad Skies
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning imagery, Nev, I believe that the UK has become somewhat tropical in the past couple of summers, can you believe that here in Italy the weather has become very British. A cherry on top of the summer trifle I\'d say. A lovely poem. ❤️
July 3rd, 2023 02:51
Teddy.15 said:
Stunning imagery, Nev, I believe that the UK has become somewhat tropical in the past couple of summers, can you believe that here in Italy the weather has become very British. A cherry on top of the summer trifle I\'d say. A lovely poem. ❤️
July 3rd, 2023 02:51
When the Limelight Sucks
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sparrows can be the light of the world Neville, spreading their light to everybody.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Those sparrows can be the light of the world Neville, spreading their light to everybody.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:18
Father
Goldfinch60 said:
His love will always be with you Neville as mine is for me.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
His love will always be with you Neville as mine is for me.
Andy
July 3rd, 2023 02:12
Father
L. B. Mek said:
indeed they are, very rare
but one decent one in your life
can make up for a lifetime
of those accursed vultures..
(Brilliant!)
July 3rd, 2023 01:55
L. B. Mek said:
indeed they are, very rare
but one decent one in your life
can make up for a lifetime
of those accursed vultures..
(Brilliant!)
July 3rd, 2023 01:55
When the Limelight Sucks
L. B. Mek said:
humility\'s subtle ways
as my chosen lanes in life
it\'s ok if everyone soars above me
I\'ll wear the neck brace
as long as my feet remain grounded
and my ego, in-check...
(I read and learn, my wise friend)
love the imagery
(a timelessly in-season poetry, if you will)
lol
July 3rd, 2023 01:50
L. B. Mek said:
humility\'s subtle ways
as my chosen lanes in life
it\'s ok if everyone soars above me
I\'ll wear the neck brace
as long as my feet remain grounded
and my ego, in-check...
(I read and learn, my wise friend)
love the imagery
(a timelessly in-season poetry, if you will)
lol
July 3rd, 2023 01:50
Father
Bella Shepard said:
We all come into this world, equal at birth. It is what we go home to that makes all the difference. You are fortunate indeed dear friend, for a father who loved you and taught you well. He must have been a wonderful role model, for that goodness is there in all that you write, in the person that you are. I I\'m sure he is looking down and saying \"That\'s my boy, I\'m so proud\". God bless you both!
July 2nd, 2023 12:02
Bella Shepard said:
We all come into this world, equal at birth. It is what we go home to that makes all the difference. You are fortunate indeed dear friend, for a father who loved you and taught you well. He must have been a wonderful role model, for that goodness is there in all that you write, in the person that you are. I I\'m sure he is looking down and saying \"That\'s my boy, I\'m so proud\". God bless you both!
July 2nd, 2023 12:02
Father
Poetic Dan said:
As someone who has no true image, I see you just like this!
I could not say the same for my own father but hope I inspire some of this from my own child.
Thank you for sharing
Always a pleasure
July 2nd, 2023 11:45
Poetic Dan said:
As someone who has no true image, I see you just like this!
I could not say the same for my own father but hope I inspire some of this from my own child.
Thank you for sharing
Always a pleasure
July 2nd, 2023 11:45
Father
orchidee said:
Will ya admit it\'s a brilliant tile for me (maybe) next poem? Dunno how I would have thought of it without the title of your poem here. Doh!
July 2nd, 2023 04:07
orchidee said:
Will ya admit it\'s a brilliant tile for me (maybe) next poem? Dunno how I would have thought of it without the title of your poem here. Doh!
July 2nd, 2023 04:07
When the Limelight Sucks
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Birdlife and nature\'s limelight is how I read it. It shone different from that vantage point. An insightful read this was Nev. 🙏🏼
July 2nd, 2023 02:54
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Birdlife and nature\'s limelight is how I read it. It shone different from that vantage point. An insightful read this was Nev. 🙏🏼
July 2nd, 2023 02:54
Father
orchidee said:
Ohhh, you praise me too much - a fine poem about me! heehee.
You have inspired me with a fantastically original title for one of me next poems: \'Mother\'. lol.
July 2nd, 2023 02:17
orchidee said:
Ohhh, you praise me too much - a fine poem about me! heehee.
You have inspired me with a fantastically original title for one of me next poems: \'Mother\'. lol.
July 2nd, 2023 02:17
Father
Christina8 said:
truly beautiful....what else can I say? I am jealous of this awe inspiring man, cannot say my experience was the same.....C
July 2nd, 2023 01:59
Christina8 said:
truly beautiful....what else can I say? I am jealous of this awe inspiring man, cannot say my experience was the same.....C
July 2nd, 2023 01:59
When the Limelight Sucks
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so neat.
\'Got that right Neville; I like to travel incognito whenever possible...... get a smidgin of paranoia when the local café remembers my name.
Note to Teddy above: Nah - Kookas are good \'uns except that their laugh doesn\'t appear to be in response to my rapier wit, rather taking the piss. Lorikeets are much more delinquent...
July 1st, 2023 20:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh so neat.
\'Got that right Neville; I like to travel incognito whenever possible...... get a smidgin of paranoia when the local café remembers my name.
Note to Teddy above: Nah - Kookas are good \'uns except that their laugh doesn\'t appear to be in response to my rapier wit, rather taking the piss. Lorikeets are much more delinquent...
July 1st, 2023 20:17
When the Limelight Sucks
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I would never want to be a kookaburra, apparently they are very naughty. I do enjoy your love of birds dear Nev 🤗
July 1st, 2023 12:37
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I would never want to be a kookaburra, apparently they are very naughty. I do enjoy your love of birds dear Nev 🤗
July 1st, 2023 12:37
When the Limelight Sucks
Christina8 said:
I liked your authors note...that this was not entirely true. I bet you do love at least a hint of the limelight. Not a bad thing at all. I did enjoy your poem!
July 1st, 2023 07:42
Christina8 said:
I liked your authors note...that this was not entirely true. I bet you do love at least a hint of the limelight. Not a bad thing at all. I did enjoy your poem!
July 1st, 2023 07:42
When the Limelight Sucks
Caring dove said:
Nice writing )) I guess it can be difficult to have so much attention on you ..
Sparrows always look like friendly birds
July 1st, 2023 01:46
Caring dove said:
Nice writing )) I guess it can be difficult to have so much attention on you ..
Sparrows always look like friendly birds
July 1st, 2023 01:46
When the Limelight Sucks
Parisab said:
Are channeling Taylor Swift? I’m sure that she is lost cause for fame-or we’re talking about the other swift’s-either way I like the theme around the potency of the limelight
July 1st, 2023 01:04
Parisab said:
Are channeling Taylor Swift? I’m sure that she is lost cause for fame-or we’re talking about the other swift’s-either way I like the theme around the potency of the limelight
July 1st, 2023 01:04
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