Comments received on poems by Neville
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Goldfinch60 said:
That litany is now all around you Neville.
Andy
August 18th, 2023 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That litany is now all around you Neville.
Andy
August 18th, 2023 02:13
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Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure if you were her agent or her acolyte......
However I feel you did cover her adequately in so very few words.........
August 18th, 2023 01:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure if you were her agent or her acolyte......
However I feel you did cover her adequately in so very few words.........
August 18th, 2023 01:00
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Bobby O said:
Suitably crossed and thus applause for this piece is suitable and a joy to relate. Real nice piece and salute to the reverent touch of phrase. Nice write.
August 18th, 2023 00:48
Bobby O said:
Suitably crossed and thus applause for this piece is suitable and a joy to relate. Real nice piece and salute to the reverent touch of phrase. Nice write.
August 18th, 2023 00:48
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jarcher54 said:
Don\'t forget... you may see her image on the back of a pancake when you flip it, or in the rust on an old screen door, or waving at you from a cloud as it passes by.
August 18th, 2023 00:42
jarcher54 said:
Don\'t forget... you may see her image on the back of a pancake when you flip it, or in the rust on an old screen door, or waving at you from a cloud as it passes by.
August 18th, 2023 00:42
Fear Silence Not
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines Neville
\"For it is long
empty like discarded
worm casts\"
Such a great image. I also loved the lines
\"Filled only with echo’s
and the laughter
of long ago moments ..
Still occasionally
carried before the tides
and the winds
of yesterday’s gone ..
All true my friend
August 17th, 2023 23:21
sorenbarrett said:
Great lines Neville
\"For it is long
empty like discarded
worm casts\"
Such a great image. I also loved the lines
\"Filled only with echo’s
and the laughter
of long ago moments ..
Still occasionally
carried before the tides
and the winds
of yesterday’s gone ..
All true my friend
August 17th, 2023 23:21
Fear Silence Not
Bella Shepard said:
In a world that grows increasingly noisy, we seem to have lost an appreciation for the value of silence. You speak beautifully of all that it holds for us in this poem, just loved it!
August 17th, 2023 11:08
Bella Shepard said:
In a world that grows increasingly noisy, we seem to have lost an appreciation for the value of silence. You speak beautifully of all that it holds for us in this poem, just loved it!
August 17th, 2023 11:08
Fear Silence Not
Doggerel Dave said:
I vote for that - the old transistor atop my fridge goes off the moment breakfast is over....
August 17th, 2023 05:01
Doggerel Dave said:
I vote for that - the old transistor atop my fridge goes off the moment breakfast is over....
August 17th, 2023 05:01
Fear Silence Not
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing )
I think silence is easy to sit with , if we are comfortable in ourselves and that which lives in our mind ( nice feelings /
August 17th, 2023 02:20
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing )
I think silence is easy to sit with , if we are comfortable in ourselves and that which lives in our mind ( nice feelings /
August 17th, 2023 02:20
Fear Silence Not
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, so much within yourself can be heard in silence.
Andy
https://youtu.be/yoAbXwr3qkg
August 17th, 2023 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, so much within yourself can be heard in silence.
Andy
https://youtu.be/yoAbXwr3qkg
August 17th, 2023 02:08
Fear Silence Not
LIZ said:
Ahhhh this is so beautiful, and true! Silence can be our best friend...if we\'re open, willing, and eager to explore! 💜
August 17th, 2023 02:07
LIZ said:
Ahhhh this is so beautiful, and true! Silence can be our best friend...if we\'re open, willing, and eager to explore! 💜
August 17th, 2023 02:07
Fear Silence Not
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I\'m gonna do a silent poem - there\'s no words to it, of course! lol.
August 17th, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I\'m gonna do a silent poem - there\'s no words to it, of course! lol.
August 17th, 2023 01:47
While Out Busy Partying
MendedFences27 said:
A scathing report of someone not worthy of a person like her. So sad.
Some people are not meant to be together. Too often it ends like this.
Enjoyed your poem. It was stark, and direct to the point. - Phil A.
August 16th, 2023 10:44
MendedFences27 said:
A scathing report of someone not worthy of a person like her. So sad.
Some people are not meant to be together. Too often it ends like this.
Enjoyed your poem. It was stark, and direct to the point. - Phil A.
August 16th, 2023 10:44
While Out Busy Partying
Doggerel Dave said:
When you gotta go.... Something, perhaps, to be said for being an autonomous independent human being not reliant on another\'s bullshit....
August 16th, 2023 07:47
Doggerel Dave said:
When you gotta go.... Something, perhaps, to be said for being an autonomous independent human being not reliant on another\'s bullshit....
August 16th, 2023 07:47
While Out Busy Partying
Christina8 said:
i like this write, N! I don\'t know what a spanner is but I do know what you were doing to her cousin! x
August 16th, 2023 07:32
Christina8 said:
i like this write, N! I don\'t know what a spanner is but I do know what you were doing to her cousin! x
August 16th, 2023 07:32
While Out Busy Partying
sorenbarrett said:
You sure it wasn\'t her sister? I think I know her. An amusing enjoyable read Neville.
August 16th, 2023 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
You sure it wasn\'t her sister? I think I know her. An amusing enjoyable read Neville.
August 16th, 2023 07:10
Let’s Play Sushi
Goldfinch60 said:
Good imaginative words Neville.
BTW I like sushi. LOL
Andy
August 16th, 2023 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good imaginative words Neville.
BTW I like sushi. LOL
Andy
August 16th, 2023 02:18
While Out Busy Partying
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You know I\'m gonna say - KP has no meat on her, but halfa ton of botox! lol. She wants to be put in prison now, is the latest story. Hooray, I say!
August 16th, 2023 02:08
orchidee said:
Good write N.
You know I\'m gonna say - KP has no meat on her, but halfa ton of botox! lol. She wants to be put in prison now, is the latest story. Hooray, I say!
August 16th, 2023 02:08
While Out Busy Partying
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong emotive words Neville.
Andy
August 16th, 2023 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong emotive words Neville.
Andy
August 16th, 2023 01:26
Let’s Play Sushi
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The mention of \"chilled rice wine\" and the playful interaction with \"lover\'s sushi\" create a sensual and intimate atmosphere.
August 15th, 2023 15:10
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The mention of \"chilled rice wine\" and the playful interaction with \"lover\'s sushi\" create a sensual and intimate atmosphere.
August 15th, 2023 15:10
Let’s Play Sushi
orchidee said:
I\'ll set those giant hamsters on her - so some think they are, in my pic! lol.
August 15th, 2023 07:21
orchidee said:
I\'ll set those giant hamsters on her - so some think they are, in my pic! lol.
August 15th, 2023 07:21
Let’s Play Sushi
orchidee said:
Good write N.
If KP\'s not a trout, she\'s some slithering reptile. \'You reptile, you\', I say to her! lol.
August 15th, 2023 02:41
orchidee said:
Good write N.
If KP\'s not a trout, she\'s some slithering reptile. \'You reptile, you\', I say to her! lol.
August 15th, 2023 02:41
Let’s Play Sushi
LIZ said:
Oh boy! I love the title! I could say so many things about this....but I\'ll be...sort of...good. I would normally say, I don\'t like sushi (raw meat)...and I\'m a bodybuilder so I wouldn\'t say it too loud...BUT, in this sense, I will always have my lover\'s sushi...but it will be slowly cooked 😉. AND, I would have black heels and a leopard print kimono. 🐆
August 15th, 2023 02:36
LIZ said:
Oh boy! I love the title! I could say so many things about this....but I\'ll be...sort of...good. I would normally say, I don\'t like sushi (raw meat)...and I\'m a bodybuilder so I wouldn\'t say it too loud...BUT, in this sense, I will always have my lover\'s sushi...but it will be slowly cooked 😉. AND, I would have black heels and a leopard print kimono. 🐆
August 15th, 2023 02:36
Let’s Play Sushi
Doggerel Dave said:
Not very keen on sushi..... still.....in certain given situations... I could conceivably make an effort.... and if a chase were on...then would it not be sporting to let her...
August 15th, 2023 01:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Not very keen on sushi..... still.....in certain given situations... I could conceivably make an effort.... and if a chase were on...then would it not be sporting to let her...
August 15th, 2023 01:28
Mused
Parisab said:
You have changed the old saying of it takes (three) to “tangoed” I like the interplay of the lover, the beloved, and the pen…enjoyably dramatic as always…
August 14th, 2023 23:03
Parisab said:
You have changed the old saying of it takes (three) to “tangoed” I like the interplay of the lover, the beloved, and the pen…enjoyably dramatic as always…
August 14th, 2023 23:03
Recollecting Unusual Positions
Sunsetmet said:
Memories stay together even one thing that you love to remember and that\'s natures way of telling us what we are feeling and knowing our time will be up
August 14th, 2023 17:16
Sunsetmet said:
Memories stay together even one thing that you love to remember and that\'s natures way of telling us what we are feeling and knowing our time will be up
August 14th, 2023 17:16
Recollecting Unusual Positions
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps he died happy with his memories of her? Not to say that it appears his life had been ruined by his loss of her. Either way it\'s a great tale of lost love and what it can do to men.
Drowning in a sea of woe, perhaps. This poem makes one want for the tale of their love. We do not know either of the characters depicted here. What are their other stories. Maybe a longer poem about these two? Enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
August 14th, 2023 11:34
MendedFences27 said:
Perhaps he died happy with his memories of her? Not to say that it appears his life had been ruined by his loss of her. Either way it\'s a great tale of lost love and what it can do to men.
Drowning in a sea of woe, perhaps. This poem makes one want for the tale of their love. We do not know either of the characters depicted here. What are their other stories. Maybe a longer poem about these two? Enjoyed this one. - Phil A.
August 14th, 2023 11:34
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