Comments received on poems by Neville



Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You
Bella Shepard said:

The sweet romance and simplicity of just being together. No words, just closeness, oneness. You have captured this beautifully my friend!

September 22nd, 2022 14:08

Just a Few of the Things I Don’t Like Without You
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - your fans will love this piece of fancy my friend. A tempting invite your pen makes with nightfall now autumn draws near. Warm as ever your words Nev. so shall I pack my best flannel nightie and come knocking your door........ or maybe just put this write right into my faves..............x

September 22nd, 2022 13:03

Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again
Bella Shepard said:

You portray the depth of love so beautifully. In all of its splendor and pain, it is truly a precious gift. You will definitely be missed dear friend. Safe travels.

September 12th, 2022 06:35

Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again
Doggerel Dave said:

I do hope your R&R (if that \'s what it be - though I fear it may not..) is safe this time...!
Like and can relate to your piece...despite the pain I\'d have it all again....but deliberate?

September 10th, 2022 19:52

Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again
Jerry Reynolds said:

Love the poem, Neville. Enjoy your holiday. In your note, however, I shudder at the word \"eventual\"

September 10th, 2022 13:48

Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again
shaa said:

I love this, very beautiful ❤️

September 10th, 2022 11:48

Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again
orchidee said:

I might swoon! lol.

September 10th, 2022 07:38

Oh\' To Be Your Slave Again
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh Nev. -the depth of this verse really hits home in that hearts who count hurt as sweet show love is forever - --- another gem for my faves. dear friend............x

September 10th, 2022 03:19

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
spilleronsheet said:

A very good one dear Neville…maybe he was lovestruck or blinded by his dreams…wonder what kept him amused…

September 10th, 2022 01:41

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Goldfinch60 said:

Memories are always there of people we have met Neville.

Andy

September 10th, 2022 00:38

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Bella Shepard said:

The jaundiced eyes may tell all when the mind does accept, \'tis easier to stare at the sun. An intuitive write my friend.

September 9th, 2022 13:24

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Jerry Reynolds said:

A lot to think about here, Neville.

September 9th, 2022 08:28

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Doggerel Dave said:

A prey to some ultimately addictive substance, or mystic?
Never managed to obtain a toxicology report then, Neville?
So why not give the poor old bugger the benefit of the doubt?
A gem of an enigmatic write.

September 9th, 2022 08:12

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Fay Slimm. said:

Met but never forgotten I guess is that unassuming small chap - -- within your memory his sun-blighted eyes no doubt take centre stage - - a portrait worthy of sharing which you penned so well dear friend.

September 9th, 2022 03:15

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
orchidee said:

I\'m a \'blue eyed boy\' of course, teachers pet, etc! lol. Pet? That must be Fido.

September 9th, 2022 02:24

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
Neville said:


I may be unassuming, but I assure you, I still have my baby blue eyes .. and of course, my hammer .. N :)

September 9th, 2022 02:22

Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming
jarcher54 said:

Self-portrait? I dunno but ya nailed me!

September 9th, 2022 02:15

On Being Too Gentle
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A fab poem on how men can be taught new ways and get surprised themselves instead of alarming. Sublime and subtle muse. Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

September 8th, 2022 13:24

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Bella Shepard said:

Yes, I can see a teeny bit of tongue and cheek, however subtle. But I would suggest just one at a time. Stay strong my friend, you\'re gonna need it.

September 6th, 2022 13:23

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Jerry Reynolds said:

Now that was fun coffee reading, Neville.

September 6th, 2022 08:49

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Fay Slimm. said:

When so politely asked I wonder just who would step forward for just a taste of that indiscretion - - an aunt or a grandma maybe..........x

September 6th, 2022 08:39

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
orchidee said:

Someone having fun? or not having \'any\'? Swoon! lol. Revive me Fido.

September 6th, 2022 06:33

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
dusk arising said:

Oh sisters and cousins, such a lot they have to answer for. Or is it me?

September 6th, 2022 05:08

Could You Maybe Ask Your Sister
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes, but in whose cheek would you really wish to come Neville, this weekend, if you really had the choice?
Erotica rules!!

September 6th, 2022 05:07

On Being Too Gentle
Bella Shepard said:

It sounds like you it just right, I\'d call it the \"Goldilocks Approach\". Very, very clever my friend!

September 5th, 2022 12:41

Potage du Femme
Bella Shepard said:

This sounds quite the taste treat. What I want to know is does this dish reheat well, or is it also good cold?

September 5th, 2022 12:35

On Being Too Gentle
SureshG said:

I regret it wasn’t me, for had I in my youth, while being rejected - lessons learnt would have played an important role.
Just as I am learning how to scribe a lasting piece.

September 5th, 2022 10:25

On Being Too Gentle
Doggerel Dave said:

A smooth change of pace portrayed in your piece; Improvisation the name of the game, Neville....ask and thou shalt receive....maybe 🙂

September 3rd, 2022 19:31

On Being Too Gentle
MendedFences27 said:

Sounds like this Dom is about to have a field day.
Well written, it exposes her hidden talents without actually calling them out.
\"On Being Too Gentle,\" I think he at least had the spirit to engage.
Oh, woe is he! - Phil A.

September 3rd, 2022 17:22

On Being Too Gentle
shaa said:

Couldn\'t be more clear 😅 oh how wrong they go. Brilliant!

September 3rd, 2022 07:05



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