Comments received on poems by Neville
Recollecting Unusual Positions
orchidee said:
A fine write N. No, no need to bark, Fido, the title does not mean THAT - positions! But thanks for barking to warn me anyway, to save me from a possible swoon. lol.
August 14th, 2023 01:55
orchidee said:
A fine write N. No, no need to bark, Fido, the title does not mean THAT - positions! But thanks for barking to warn me anyway, to save me from a possible swoon. lol.
August 14th, 2023 01:55
Recollecting Unusual Positions
Bobby O said:
Not many things for me match the allure of the small of a women’s back. His visual thru that glass bottom perhaps represented the refraction of his life in the view if his own mind, the possible blur and magnification of the water as lens is allegorical and brings a tactile image of those last flicks for his eyes brings one to visit close. Your subject choice is always like a character within the pride you share. I love that. I’m not yet able to add that dimension to my lines. Major Nod to style !!
August 14th, 2023 01:37
Bobby O said:
Not many things for me match the allure of the small of a women’s back. His visual thru that glass bottom perhaps represented the refraction of his life in the view if his own mind, the possible blur and magnification of the water as lens is allegorical and brings a tactile image of those last flicks for his eyes brings one to visit close. Your subject choice is always like a character within the pride you share. I love that. I’m not yet able to add that dimension to my lines. Major Nod to style !!
August 14th, 2023 01:37
Yesterday’s Muse
Bella Shepard said:
She sounds a bit like a riddle, wrapped in a mystery, inside an enigma, as any good muse should be. You broaden my horizons my friend, and for that I have to thank you.
August 13th, 2023 15:22
Bella Shepard said:
She sounds a bit like a riddle, wrapped in a mystery, inside an enigma, as any good muse should be. You broaden my horizons my friend, and for that I have to thank you.
August 13th, 2023 15:22
Yesterday’s Muse
Kinsey Peterson said:
your poems are always so lovely. Thank you Neville
August 13th, 2023 13:34
Kinsey Peterson said:
your poems are always so lovely. Thank you Neville
August 13th, 2023 13:34
Yesterday’s Muse
Doggerel Dave said:
Here\'s to the \'Sixties!!.......and the Seventies..... and maybe their daughters linger on...... and granddau.......
August 13th, 2023 08:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Here\'s to the \'Sixties!!.......and the Seventies..... and maybe their daughters linger on...... and granddau.......
August 13th, 2023 08:38
Yesterday’s Muse
LIZ said:
First of all Neville, \"giving head, that is
and making bread\" is my line!!! 😝 Second, she seems to be all over the place....but, aren\'t we all in some way? 😆 Still...inspiration!
August 13th, 2023 04:38
LIZ said:
First of all Neville, \"giving head, that is
and making bread\" is my line!!! 😝 Second, she seems to be all over the place....but, aren\'t we all in some way? 😆 Still...inspiration!
August 13th, 2023 04:38
Yesterday’s Muse
Bobby O said:
Cry in’ and Lyin’ sounds like she now is in the circular file like the newspaper of Yesterday!
August 13th, 2023 04:33
Bobby O said:
Cry in’ and Lyin’ sounds like she now is in the circular file like the newspaper of Yesterday!
August 13th, 2023 04:33
Yesterday’s Muse
orchidee said:
I might swoon - giving head? Don\'t answer that. i.e. don\'t explain it to me in public! lol.
Fido says I should stick to making bread myself. lol.
So.... church is not just made up of little old ladies. 😁
August 13th, 2023 01:39
orchidee said:
I might swoon - giving head? Don\'t answer that. i.e. don\'t explain it to me in public! lol.
Fido says I should stick to making bread myself. lol.
So.... church is not just made up of little old ladies. 😁
August 13th, 2023 01:39
Mused
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes finding an ending can be more difficult than finding a beginning. We pray the muse sticks around long enough. And sometimes writing poetry can seem like a slow death. I\'ll end here because I can\'t think of anything else to write. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2023 18:49
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes finding an ending can be more difficult than finding a beginning. We pray the muse sticks around long enough. And sometimes writing poetry can seem like a slow death. I\'ll end here because I can\'t think of anything else to write. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2023 18:49
Mused
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, dear Nev, who can ever know when the Muse will intercede in the eleventh hour, isn\'t it always the way. Inspiration comes in the last place you look, because it\'s there you\'ve found it. Keep writing these gems, that we may admire their beauty. Take care my friend!
August 12th, 2023 13:56
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, dear Nev, who can ever know when the Muse will intercede in the eleventh hour, isn\'t it always the way. Inspiration comes in the last place you look, because it\'s there you\'ve found it. Keep writing these gems, that we may admire their beauty. Take care my friend!
August 12th, 2023 13:56
Mused
LIZ said:
Ah nice! In the literary sense....that last verse, when you think you can\'t give anymore, inspiration takes over, and with one last breath, the poetic rhyme is complete! 💜
August 12th, 2023 03:27
LIZ said:
Ah nice! In the literary sense....that last verse, when you think you can\'t give anymore, inspiration takes over, and with one last breath, the poetic rhyme is complete! 💜
August 12th, 2023 03:27
Mused
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I muse over KP, but it\'s ghastly meditations! Pictures of trouts come to mind for some reason...... lol.
August 12th, 2023 02:06
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I muse over KP, but it\'s ghastly meditations! Pictures of trouts come to mind for some reason...... lol.
August 12th, 2023 02:06
Mused
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I\'m very amused let he or she run riot after all your muse is of course your bestest buddy! A fun read dear Nev, happy Saturday. 💖
August 12th, 2023 01:56
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I\'m very amused let he or she run riot after all your muse is of course your bestest buddy! A fun read dear Nev, happy Saturday. 💖
August 12th, 2023 01:56
Mused
Bobby O said:
I’m still wondering if the muse knew ahead or perhaps is qualified in an AI or maybe planned it all. Possible just preparing little by little so we won’t be let down. ??
August 12th, 2023 01:16
Bobby O said:
I’m still wondering if the muse knew ahead or perhaps is qualified in an AI or maybe planned it all. Possible just preparing little by little so we won’t be let down. ??
August 12th, 2023 01:16
A Moment of Enlightenment
Sunsetmet said:
This enlightened me with simplicity smile of lifted gravity Thanks so much
August 11th, 2023 15:11
Sunsetmet said:
This enlightened me with simplicity smile of lifted gravity Thanks so much
August 11th, 2023 15:11
A Thought For a Day
Christina8 said:
Hopefully every single day is special to many of us. Unfortunate to the ones suffering. Great thought for the day! x
August 11th, 2023 09:08
Christina8 said:
Hopefully every single day is special to many of us. Unfortunate to the ones suffering. Great thought for the day! x
August 11th, 2023 09:08
A Moment of Enlightenment
LIZ said:
Well, I do believe sometimes you have to sit still in order to create that state of consciousness, and start being guided by intuition. BUT, NOT 40 YEARS. LOL 🤣 Although it certainly feels that way. When that moment of enlightment happens, all bets are off. No wall means you can now create whatever you want. That\'s just how I look at it. Nice piece! 💜
August 11th, 2023 06:02
LIZ said:
Well, I do believe sometimes you have to sit still in order to create that state of consciousness, and start being guided by intuition. BUT, NOT 40 YEARS. LOL 🤣 Although it certainly feels that way. When that moment of enlightment happens, all bets are off. No wall means you can now create whatever you want. That\'s just how I look at it. Nice piece! 💜
August 11th, 2023 06:02
A Moment of Enlightenment
Teddy.15 said:
LOL ah but now the wall has come down. 🤗 🤣 💖
August 11th, 2023 03:14
Teddy.15 said:
LOL ah but now the wall has come down. 🤗 🤣 💖
August 11th, 2023 03:14
A Moment of Enlightenment
Doggerel Dave said:
Better late than never....I found Zen fun when I nibbled at it many moons ago, but moved on fairly quickly (probably says more about me than Zen...no not probably....)
August 11th, 2023 02:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Better late than never....I found Zen fun when I nibbled at it many moons ago, but moved on fairly quickly (probably says more about me than Zen...no not probably....)
August 11th, 2023 02:25
A Moment of Enlightenment
orchidee said:
I\'m omm\'ed and ahh\'ed over this - then said - Good write N.
August 11th, 2023 01:55
orchidee said:
I\'m omm\'ed and ahh\'ed over this - then said - Good write N.
August 11th, 2023 01:55
A Thought For a Day
LIZ said:
Yes, for someone, somewhere, always!! Love it!!! 💜
August 10th, 2023 18:40
LIZ said:
Yes, for someone, somewhere, always!! Love it!!! 💜
August 10th, 2023 18:40
A Thought For a Day
Parisab said:
So wise to partake in universal joy! Thanks for the reminder, poet friend…
August 10th, 2023 11:29
Parisab said:
So wise to partake in universal joy! Thanks for the reminder, poet friend…
August 10th, 2023 11:29
A Thought For a Day
orchidee said:
Since when did I have any special days after marrying KP?! lol.
August 10th, 2023 08:47
orchidee said:
Since when did I have any special days after marrying KP?! lol.
August 10th, 2023 08:47
A Thought For a Day
Teddy.15 said:
Should be the thought of the day. Yes wishing others well and being able to actually celebrate with them is simply a matter of reasonable behaviour although not all can do this. A wonderful thought 💖
August 10th, 2023 07:40
Teddy.15 said:
Should be the thought of the day. Yes wishing others well and being able to actually celebrate with them is simply a matter of reasonable behaviour although not all can do this. A wonderful thought 💖
August 10th, 2023 07:40
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Parisab said:
We can almost see you transform into a perfect image of a grandfather, gazing at your star’s big baby blue eyes. Thank you for these moving words!
August 10th, 2023 00:50
Parisab said:
We can almost see you transform into a perfect image of a grandfather, gazing at your star’s big baby blue eyes. Thank you for these moving words!
August 10th, 2023 00:50
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully and lovingly written, it would be impossible not to shed a tear of joy for you, which I happily did. God bless Astrid Wren, I know there will be no shortage of love for this little one. Enjoy every moment of being that proud Grandpa. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful event. Take care my friend.
August 9th, 2023 13:48
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully and lovingly written, it would be impossible not to shed a tear of joy for you, which I happily did. God bless Astrid Wren, I know there will be no shortage of love for this little one. Enjoy every moment of being that proud Grandpa. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful event. Take care my friend.
August 9th, 2023 13:48
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Christina8 said:
That was a very touching write for your new granddaughter. Cannot congratulate you enough, dear friend!
August 9th, 2023 08:36
Christina8 said:
That was a very touching write for your new granddaughter. Cannot congratulate you enough, dear friend!
August 9th, 2023 08:36
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Teddy.15 said:
So very touching, it\'s unconditional love, and it\'s just what you deserve, every day Astrid will grow and in a couple of months she will start giggling, that\'s when I fear I shall lose my poetry friend lol , Nev you just can\'t get enough of a new born I know I\'ve spent my life looking after them, so many stages and it\'s always different when we are a family member looking in as we can have all the fun and then go home! Even though knowing you it\'s hard too leave each day 🤗 enjoy this marvelous moment as you already know how fast they grow up. I know you are without doubt the best popps she could ever have. 💖
August 9th, 2023 04:10
Teddy.15 said:
So very touching, it\'s unconditional love, and it\'s just what you deserve, every day Astrid will grow and in a couple of months she will start giggling, that\'s when I fear I shall lose my poetry friend lol , Nev you just can\'t get enough of a new born I know I\'ve spent my life looking after them, so many stages and it\'s always different when we are a family member looking in as we can have all the fun and then go home! Even though knowing you it\'s hard too leave each day 🤗 enjoy this marvelous moment as you already know how fast they grow up. I know you are without doubt the best popps she could ever have. 💖
August 9th, 2023 04:10
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
LIZ said:
Awww so beautiful! And Astrid Wren is such a pretty name!!! Congrats!!! 💜
August 9th, 2023 02:27
LIZ said:
Awww so beautiful! And Astrid Wren is such a pretty name!!! Congrats!!! 💜
August 9th, 2023 02:27
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