Comments received on poems by Neville
Two Ants One Question
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It sure can... That\'s one sweet tooth you got there Poet! 🤟🏽
July 19th, 2023 14:20
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It sure can... That\'s one sweet tooth you got there Poet! 🤟🏽
July 19th, 2023 14:20
Two Ants One Question
Bella Shepard said:
Would it be trit to say \"short and sweet\"? It may be, but the image of two ants dancing in a sugar pot is the sweetest I can imagine. I\'d love it to be a waltz, but with all that suger it\'s probably a jitterbug. Now I\'m smiling in the sweetest way, thank you.
July 19th, 2023 12:43
Bella Shepard said:
Would it be trit to say \"short and sweet\"? It may be, but the image of two ants dancing in a sugar pot is the sweetest I can imagine. I\'d love it to be a waltz, but with all that suger it\'s probably a jitterbug. Now I\'m smiling in the sweetest way, thank you.
July 19th, 2023 12:43
Two Ants One Question
arqios said:
The sweetness is as big as the bowl and having someone to share it with is divine.
July 19th, 2023 06:40
arqios said:
The sweetness is as big as the bowl and having someone to share it with is divine.
July 19th, 2023 06:40
Two Ants One Question
Caring dove said:
Lol ) nice lighthearted writing .. maybe ants would like to dance .. yet all they can do is walk .. i imagine they might be nervous , being so small
July 19th, 2023 04:53
Caring dove said:
Lol ) nice lighthearted writing .. maybe ants would like to dance .. yet all they can do is walk .. i imagine they might be nervous , being so small
July 19th, 2023 04:53
Two Ants One Question
orchidee said:
I rescued a spider today - but that\'s not two ants!
July 19th, 2023 04:14
orchidee said:
I rescued a spider today - but that\'s not two ants!
July 19th, 2023 04:14
Two Ants One Question
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I got ants in me pants, married to KP. lol.
July 19th, 2023 01:49
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I got ants in me pants, married to KP. lol.
July 19th, 2023 01:49
Two Ants One Question
Poetic Dan said:
Sounds like overdose to me lol
Have a great day my friend
July 19th, 2023 01:28
Poetic Dan said:
Sounds like overdose to me lol
Have a great day my friend
July 19th, 2023 01:28
The Mess They Leave Behind
Goldfinch60 said:
There are no such things as accidents these days as all people want to do is blame somebody else and get money from them!
Andy
July 19th, 2023 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
There are no such things as accidents these days as all people want to do is blame somebody else and get money from them!
Andy
July 19th, 2023 01:23
The Mess They Leave Behind
MendedFences27 said:
Here, attempting suicide is a crime. She would have been prosecuted. Really, compensation?
Some people ought to be more aware
of the consequences of their actions.
Your poem highlights the results of today\'s \"It\'s all about me!\" attitude. How the hell does one peel a grape? Just another excellent piece of writing. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
July 18th, 2023 11:05
MendedFences27 said:
Here, attempting suicide is a crime. She would have been prosecuted. Really, compensation?
Some people ought to be more aware
of the consequences of their actions.
Your poem highlights the results of today\'s \"It\'s all about me!\" attitude. How the hell does one peel a grape? Just another excellent piece of writing. Enjoyed it. - Phil A.
July 18th, 2023 11:05
The Mess They Leave Behind
arqios said:
Wow that was intense. And many times truth has been proven stranger than fiction.
July 18th, 2023 07:14
arqios said:
Wow that was intense. And many times truth has been proven stranger than fiction.
July 18th, 2023 07:14
The Mess They Leave Behind
Caring dove said:
That’s really sad … (( has to be difficult to hear that type of news .
Some people are so depressed that they think there is no other option ..
I guess the guy should have stayed and not left her alone
July 18th, 2023 05:19
Caring dove said:
That’s really sad … (( has to be difficult to hear that type of news .
Some people are so depressed that they think there is no other option ..
I guess the guy should have stayed and not left her alone
July 18th, 2023 05:19
Clearly Departed
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, I am so fortunate that in my long life I have never seen anything like this happen. I am so grateful.
Andy
July 18th, 2023 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Neville, I am so fortunate that in my long life I have never seen anything like this happen. I am so grateful.
Andy
July 18th, 2023 00:23
Clearly Departed
MendedFences27 said:
A gruesome thing to witness. By penning this poem maybe some will take heed, or at least pay attention while playing.
Your poem is short and to the point. and graphic enough to leave a lasting impression. A good one. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2023 12:39
MendedFences27 said:
A gruesome thing to witness. By penning this poem maybe some will take heed, or at least pay attention while playing.
Your poem is short and to the point. and graphic enough to leave a lasting impression. A good one. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2023 12:39
Clearly Departed
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve actually seen a few things over the weeks very disturbing. However you have another beautifully written piece here. Glad you were only the watcher dear Nev. ❤️
July 17th, 2023 05:05
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve actually seen a few things over the weeks very disturbing. However you have another beautifully written piece here. Glad you were only the watcher dear Nev. ❤️
July 17th, 2023 05:05
Clearly Departed
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'ve totalled a few cars in my past
a most shameful past
(hope you\'re ok my freind
always an unnerving thing to experience)
Hope you n yours have a good week, stay safe Hyung
July 17th, 2023 03:28
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I\'ve totalled a few cars in my past
a most shameful past
(hope you\'re ok my freind
always an unnerving thing to experience)
Hope you n yours have a good week, stay safe Hyung
July 17th, 2023 03:28
So Very Roughly Taken
L. B. Mek said:
all abusers and rapist\'s
should have the words
\'deserved it\' and a mini skirt
tattooed on their foreheads for life
so everyone can understand
how depraved and ignorant
that thought process, truly is!
(an important write Hyung
and yes, our gender has a long
way
to go, before we can begin
to comprehend the collective depths
of our generational crimes)
still, we who acknowledge
and wage a war, against
that societal monster we know too well
must believe in a better
and do what we can
hoping, somehow
it may accumulate to being enough
to offset what evil is committed
by the weak, spineless men of the world
July 17th, 2023 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
all abusers and rapist\'s
should have the words
\'deserved it\' and a mini skirt
tattooed on their foreheads for life
so everyone can understand
how depraved and ignorant
that thought process, truly is!
(an important write Hyung
and yes, our gender has a long
way
to go, before we can begin
to comprehend the collective depths
of our generational crimes)
still, we who acknowledge
and wage a war, against
that societal monster we know too well
must believe in a better
and do what we can
hoping, somehow
it may accumulate to being enough
to offset what evil is committed
by the weak, spineless men of the world
July 17th, 2023 03:24
A Very Temporary Arrangement
L. B. Mek said:
if love is falling deep
then be thankful for our fear
of falling
keeping us from being head over heels
for every person we\'re attracted to
theirs just not enough rope in the world
to pull ourselves
out of those pits we dig, time n again..
(far too many of us scarred by love will relate I think, Hyung)
wonderfully paced
July 17th, 2023 03:13
L. B. Mek said:
if love is falling deep
then be thankful for our fear
of falling
keeping us from being head over heels
for every person we\'re attracted to
theirs just not enough rope in the world
to pull ourselves
out of those pits we dig, time n again..
(far too many of us scarred by love will relate I think, Hyung)
wonderfully paced
July 17th, 2023 03:13
Clearly Departed
orchidee said:
I was gonna mow down KP, but she bounced up again, with all that botox! lol. That\'s going too far, says Fido.
July 17th, 2023 02:28
orchidee said:
I was gonna mow down KP, but she bounced up again, with all that botox! lol. That\'s going too far, says Fido.
July 17th, 2023 02:28
So Very Roughly Taken
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you dear Nev for tackling a subject that women have always struggled with in just about every imaginable place. Kudos my friend!
July 16th, 2023 14:34
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you dear Nev for tackling a subject that women have always struggled with in just about every imaginable place. Kudos my friend!
July 16th, 2023 14:34
So Very Roughly Taken
orchidee said:
is it a terrible thing, though I been diverted by cheesecloth.
Can ya beat cheese, like you can beat an egg? It\'s getting late in the day - causes me to utter more nonsense than usual! lol.
July 16th, 2023 14:26
orchidee said:
is it a terrible thing, though I been diverted by cheesecloth.
Can ya beat cheese, like you can beat an egg? It\'s getting late in the day - causes me to utter more nonsense than usual! lol.
July 16th, 2023 14:26
So Very Roughly Taken
Teddy.15 said:
No thrills at all here you say it like it is and unfortunately in your incredible line of work darling Nev, you see this all too often, it\'s people like you who are 100% selfless to take the time to help others and I can only speak as 1 woman but I say thank you a thousand times. 💓
July 16th, 2023 09:54
Teddy.15 said:
No thrills at all here you say it like it is and unfortunately in your incredible line of work darling Nev, you see this all too often, it\'s people like you who are 100% selfless to take the time to help others and I can only speak as 1 woman but I say thank you a thousand times. 💓
July 16th, 2023 09:54
So Very Roughly Taken
MendedFences27 said:
Those last four lines paint the picture.
We live in a troubled time, but this has gone on for centuries.
Short and concise and to the point, a piece of master craft. - Phil A.
July 16th, 2023 09:47
MendedFences27 said:
Those last four lines paint the picture.
We live in a troubled time, but this has gone on for centuries.
Short and concise and to the point, a piece of master craft. - Phil A.
July 16th, 2023 09:47
A Very Temporary Arrangement
orchidee said:
It\'s too late for me now - I married KP. Boo hoo! lol.
July 16th, 2023 02:04
orchidee said:
It\'s too late for me now - I married KP. Boo hoo! lol.
July 16th, 2023 02:04
So Very Roughly Taken
orchidee said:
I bought KP a cheesecloth - dress? Nope, a bit of material to put on wooden chopping board when chopping cheese! So the chopping board does not get damaged. I thought more about the chopping board than of her. lol.
July 16th, 2023 02:01
orchidee said:
I bought KP a cheesecloth - dress? Nope, a bit of material to put on wooden chopping board when chopping cheese! So the chopping board does not get damaged. I thought more about the chopping board than of her. lol.
July 16th, 2023 02:01
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