Comments received on poems by Neville
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I say\' Hi, Astrid, erm, KP!\' Not really. lol
Me two cats cry through their whiskers when they see her. They are scared of trouts. lol.
August 9th, 2023 02:11
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I say\' Hi, Astrid, erm, KP!\' Not really. lol
Me two cats cry through their whiskers when they see her. They are scared of trouts. lol.
August 9th, 2023 02:11
For Astrid Wren My Little Bird
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) so nicely expressed . 🙂
August 9th, 2023 02:10
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) so nicely expressed . 🙂
August 9th, 2023 02:10
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Parisab said:
She met your most vital need (for bread) I can’t begin to imagine the power of symbolism-“I saw her clearly edged” on the (church like) stained glass imagery-I see holy, maternal, and sensual represented by the same woman-This is one of my favorites of your body of work…
August 9th, 2023 00:38
Parisab said:
She met your most vital need (for bread) I can’t begin to imagine the power of symbolism-“I saw her clearly edged” on the (church like) stained glass imagery-I see holy, maternal, and sensual represented by the same woman-This is one of my favorites of your body of work…
August 9th, 2023 00:38
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s simplicity belies its complex layers of meaning, making it a touching exploration of human connection and the significance of seemingly ordinary .
August 8th, 2023 20:37
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The poem\'s simplicity belies its complex layers of meaning, making it a touching exploration of human connection and the significance of seemingly ordinary .
August 8th, 2023 20:37
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Christina8 said:
Nice double entendre!! Hungry indeed!x
August 8th, 2023 19:34
Christina8 said:
Nice double entendre!! Hungry indeed!x
August 8th, 2023 19:34
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Bella Shepard said:
Sounds like a recipe to tempt the taste buds, in more ways than one. Soft and gentle, it makes one sigh. Lovely dear friend!
August 8th, 2023 15:11
Bella Shepard said:
Sounds like a recipe to tempt the taste buds, in more ways than one. Soft and gentle, it makes one sigh. Lovely dear friend!
August 8th, 2023 15:11
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
MendedFences27 said:
You shouldn\'t fool around while baking, that\'s how you get Munchkins.
I felt there was a lightheartedness to this poem. It brought a smile to my face and brightened an otherwise rainy day. It also sparked my appetite. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2023 09:15
MendedFences27 said:
You shouldn\'t fool around while baking, that\'s how you get Munchkins.
I felt there was a lightheartedness to this poem. It brought a smile to my face and brightened an otherwise rainy day. It also sparked my appetite. - Phil A.
August 8th, 2023 09:15
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Sunsetmet said:
Lovely your writing lights me up it shines thanks
August 8th, 2023 09:13
Sunsetmet said:
Lovely your writing lights me up it shines thanks
August 8th, 2023 09:13
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Jerry Reynolds said:
You lusty devil.
Well written, Neville.
August 8th, 2023 08:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
You lusty devil.
Well written, Neville.
August 8th, 2023 08:20
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
orchidee said:
Yes, KP said she would like some flowers in her hair, so I tipped a bag of flour over her! lol. My nastiness to her never stops. Well, she deserves it. lol.
August 8th, 2023 01:49
orchidee said:
Yes, KP said she would like some flowers in her hair, so I tipped a bag of flour over her! lol. My nastiness to her never stops. Well, she deserves it. lol.
August 8th, 2023 01:49
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully described dear Nev, baked to perfection. 💖
August 8th, 2023 01:31
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully described dear Nev, baked to perfection. 💖
August 8th, 2023 01:31
The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair
LIZ said:
Well...this could be interpreted in so many ways. Probably just me lol...beautifully written!
August 8th, 2023 00:44
LIZ said:
Well...this could be interpreted in so many ways. Probably just me lol...beautifully written!
August 8th, 2023 00:44
She May Have Been a Doppelganger
orchidee said:
A quiz now - ooh!
The nearest person to KP\'s double is [fill in your answer].
Aww, why they put my name there?! lol.
August 7th, 2023 11:43
orchidee said:
A quiz now - ooh!
The nearest person to KP\'s double is [fill in your answer].
Aww, why they put my name there?! lol.
August 7th, 2023 11:43
She May Have Been a Doppelganger
Teddy.15 said:
LOL Albania has some of the most beautiful beaches in the world. 🤣 cheaper than anywhere in Italy this year, I do feel for the airport hold ups though! 💖
August 7th, 2023 06:16
Teddy.15 said:
LOL Albania has some of the most beautiful beaches in the world. 🤣 cheaper than anywhere in Italy this year, I do feel for the airport hold ups though! 💖
August 7th, 2023 06:16
She May Have Been a Doppelganger
Doggerel Dave said:
🤣🤣 Some things , as the years advance I relinquish with much relief.... airports and flying are top of that list....
Hilarious!
(But why Albania?)
(not you? - different queue?)
August 7th, 2023 02:07
Doggerel Dave said:
🤣🤣 Some things , as the years advance I relinquish with much relief.... airports and flying are top of that list....
Hilarious!
(But why Albania?)
(not you? - different queue?)
August 7th, 2023 02:07
She May Have Been a Doppelganger
orchidee said:
There can\'t possibly be a doppelganger for KP. Well, maybe - just look in the river for old trouts! lol.
August 7th, 2023 02:03
orchidee said:
There can\'t possibly be a doppelganger for KP. Well, maybe - just look in the river for old trouts! lol.
August 7th, 2023 02:03
Silverback
Jerry Reynolds said:
I do identify with that. No hair but Grandpa indeed.
August 6th, 2023 14:47
Jerry Reynolds said:
I do identify with that. No hair but Grandpa indeed.
August 6th, 2023 14:47
Silverback
orchidee said:
I thought this was about KP\'s similarity to - silverback gorillas?! lol.
August 6th, 2023 12:32
orchidee said:
I thought this was about KP\'s similarity to - silverback gorillas?! lol.
August 6th, 2023 12:32
Silverback
LIZ said:
😆 BUT...silverback is the style these days! No? And...sir...preferably with beard! Lol
August 6th, 2023 07:24
LIZ said:
😆 BUT...silverback is the style these days! No? And...sir...preferably with beard! Lol
August 6th, 2023 07:24
Silverback
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I bet you are the most handsome granpappy out of all your mates! ❤️
August 6th, 2023 05:05
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I bet you are the most handsome granpappy out of all your mates! ❤️
August 6th, 2023 05:05
Silverback
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s said grey/white hairs are a sign of wisdom. KP has none of course. lol.
In our old ages, I will go \'silver\' and she will melt from botox.
August 6th, 2023 02:04
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
It\'s said grey/white hairs are a sign of wisdom. KP has none of course. lol.
In our old ages, I will go \'silver\' and she will melt from botox.
August 6th, 2023 02:04
When Absolutely Gone
Doggerel Dave said:
My record card is so mixed better it was shredded and the world move on.....
August 5th, 2023 18:28
Doggerel Dave said:
My record card is so mixed better it was shredded and the world move on.....
August 5th, 2023 18:28
When Absolutely Gone
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m feeling philosophical this morning and can\'t help but say (there will be opinions expressed on this) that love always comes with a price. Sometimes it\'s painful, sometimes bittersweet, and sometimes happiness, but always a price. The pain of separation, the bittersweetness of a temporary state of bliss followed by a breakup, or the happiness where he gives his love and she does likewise, a trade if you will, but nevertheless, a price.
OK, so I guess your poem struck a chord with me. Maybe we all seek the same thing. Well, needless to say I enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2023 11:04
MendedFences27 said:
I\'m feeling philosophical this morning and can\'t help but say (there will be opinions expressed on this) that love always comes with a price. Sometimes it\'s painful, sometimes bittersweet, and sometimes happiness, but always a price. The pain of separation, the bittersweetness of a temporary state of bliss followed by a breakup, or the happiness where he gives his love and she does likewise, a trade if you will, but nevertheless, a price.
OK, so I guess your poem struck a chord with me. Maybe we all seek the same thing. Well, needless to say I enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
August 5th, 2023 11:04
When Absolutely Gone
Christina8 said:
You make everyone you come in contact with feel incredible! You will certainly have that legacy...x
August 5th, 2023 07:44
Christina8 said:
You make everyone you come in contact with feel incredible! You will certainly have that legacy...x
August 5th, 2023 07:44
When Absolutely Gone
LIZ said:
\"For the love I gave away freely\" YES!! I want to be remembered by the love we shared, and the way we made each other feel (hopefully incredible)!! 💜
August 5th, 2023 05:33
LIZ said:
\"For the love I gave away freely\" YES!! I want to be remembered by the love we shared, and the way we made each other feel (hopefully incredible)!! 💜
August 5th, 2023 05:33
These Words Have Absolutely Nothing to Do With the Weather
Caring dove said:
‘ faulty umbrella ‘ makes me think maybe she hasn’t enough protection around her .. and that perhaps it ‘ rains on her too much.. she sounds a bit like a sad pained person maybe .. who isn’t in the sun enough lol
Great poem interesting words .. 🙂
August 5th, 2023 03:08
Caring dove said:
‘ faulty umbrella ‘ makes me think maybe she hasn’t enough protection around her .. and that perhaps it ‘ rains on her too much.. she sounds a bit like a sad pained person maybe .. who isn’t in the sun enough lol
Great poem interesting words .. 🙂
August 5th, 2023 03:08
When Absolutely Gone
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
When KP goes, she\'s gonna be stuffed as a trout on my mantlepiece - taxidermy. lol.
August 5th, 2023 02:29
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
When KP goes, she\'s gonna be stuffed as a trout on my mantlepiece - taxidermy. lol.
August 5th, 2023 02:29
Afterbirth
Parisab said:
Words flow while you seem all focused on your daughter with empathy all the way-no way to know exactly how she’ll feel from each moment of this miraculous challenge, but it seems like you are mastering the art of fatherhood…
August 5th, 2023 00:59
Parisab said:
Words flow while you seem all focused on your daughter with empathy all the way-no way to know exactly how she’ll feel from each moment of this miraculous challenge, but it seems like you are mastering the art of fatherhood…
August 5th, 2023 00:59
Afterbirth
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea why any woman would volunteer to do this.....
August 4th, 2023 18:56
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea why any woman would volunteer to do this.....
August 4th, 2023 18:56
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