Comments received on poems by Neville
Seriously Wronged
Teddy.15 said:
Seems not just women are gold diggers lol this was like a scene from pirates of the Caribbean modern times. The shoe on the other foot for a change if you will excuse my pun. 💖
July 12th, 2023 02:57
Teddy.15 said:
Seems not just women are gold diggers lol this was like a scene from pirates of the Caribbean modern times. The shoe on the other foot for a change if you will excuse my pun. 💖
July 12th, 2023 02:57
Seriously Wronged
orchidee said:
I have to always rub KP\'s palms with silver - now she wants gold! lol. She never stops, of course.
July 12th, 2023 02:12
orchidee said:
I have to always rub KP\'s palms with silver - now she wants gold! lol. She never stops, of course.
July 12th, 2023 02:12
Seriously Wronged
Caring dove said:
Being nice to someone who’s unkind . I guess some people can be too kind to those who do not treat them nicely
A good writing ))
July 12th, 2023 01:56
Caring dove said:
Being nice to someone who’s unkind . I guess some people can be too kind to those who do not treat them nicely
A good writing ))
July 12th, 2023 01:56
Man Eater
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It\'s always what you manage to say without saying it for me, personally... The truths scream silently, almost horrifically though, herein. Respect, brother.
July 11th, 2023 09:11
Garth Rakumakoe said:
It\'s always what you manage to say without saying it for me, personally... The truths scream silently, almost horrifically though, herein. Respect, brother.
July 11th, 2023 09:11
By Definition Only
arqios said:
That is the kindest and truest thought right there N!
July 11th, 2023 07:49
arqios said:
That is the kindest and truest thought right there N!
July 11th, 2023 07:49
By Definition Only
Teddy.15 said:
A beautifully composed poem and how very true the older we get the more we see the true colours as they really are and moreover accept this. Brilliant Nev. ❤️
July 11th, 2023 03:46
Teddy.15 said:
A beautifully composed poem and how very true the older we get the more we see the true colours as they really are and moreover accept this. Brilliant Nev. ❤️
July 11th, 2023 03:46
By Definition Only
Christina8 said:
Was that you I saw staring at me at my favorite restaurant? LOL it\'s really a beautiful short poem, yes, beauty is in the eye of the beholder...C x
July 11th, 2023 03:23
Christina8 said:
Was that you I saw staring at me at my favorite restaurant? LOL it\'s really a beautiful short poem, yes, beauty is in the eye of the beholder...C x
July 11th, 2023 03:23
Not Another Ending Surely
Goldfinch60 said:
That\'s love, it will always produce poetry from within us Neville.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That\'s love, it will always produce poetry from within us Neville.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:58
Man Eater
Goldfinch60 said:
My jungle has now got a smooth path into my future Neville, maybe yours will as well.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
My jungle has now got a smooth path into my future Neville, maybe yours will as well.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:56
By Definition Only
Goldfinch60 said:
We each see things in a different way in our lives Neville.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
We each see things in a different way in our lives Neville.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:44
By Definition Only
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP always see it her way, then HER WAY always becomes my way. Yep, never fails. Her motto is \'me, me, me\'! lol.
July 11th, 2023 01:30
orchidee said:
Good write N.
KP always see it her way, then HER WAY always becomes my way. Yep, never fails. Her motto is \'me, me, me\'! lol.
July 11th, 2023 01:30
By Definition Only
Caring dove said:
It can be, yeah .. the way we view it . And can have our own opinion / interpretation of things
A nice writing 🙂
July 11th, 2023 01:11
Caring dove said:
It can be, yeah .. the way we view it . And can have our own opinion / interpretation of things
A nice writing 🙂
July 11th, 2023 01:11
Man Eater
orchidee said:
I know no man-eaters. I\'m an egg-eater - the ones I\'ve just beaten! lol.
Fido says \'There, there, old Orchi, it\'s getting late in the day; ya brain\'s getting addled!\' No change there then. lol. Time for me Horlicks.
July 10th, 2023 14:33
orchidee said:
I know no man-eaters. I\'m an egg-eater - the ones I\'ve just beaten! lol.
Fido says \'There, there, old Orchi, it\'s getting late in the day; ya brain\'s getting addled!\' No change there then. lol. Time for me Horlicks.
July 10th, 2023 14:33
Man Eater
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, N! There certainly are some man eaters out there, aren\'t there? Great read....C
July 10th, 2023 09:26
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem, N! There certainly are some man eaters out there, aren\'t there? Great read....C
July 10th, 2023 09:26
Girl With a Blue Vase
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. this story is told in such a nice way .. flows with ease . And great way to end the poem ..
Liked the read ..
July 10th, 2023 03:56
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. this story is told in such a nice way .. flows with ease . And great way to end the poem ..
Liked the read ..
July 10th, 2023 03:56
Man Eater
L. B. Mek said:
sadness, in shrapnel
thickening our heartbeats
and deflated dreams
deceiving our appetites
for a love, replete
with our forever promises..
(still we must believe
dear Poet supreme
in-between our misses
exist glimpses of all
we can ever hope for..)
loving the wordless winks
a great read!
July 10th, 2023 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
sadness, in shrapnel
thickening our heartbeats
and deflated dreams
deceiving our appetites
for a love, replete
with our forever promises..
(still we must believe
dear Poet supreme
in-between our misses
exist glimpses of all
we can ever hope for..)
loving the wordless winks
a great read!
July 10th, 2023 03:32
Not Another Ending Surely
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ll partake in that forgiveness
thank ye gladly, kind Poet
now, what\'s this poem about
\'antidotes to art\'s interpretive absurdities\'
was i close?
ballpark?
lol
July 10th, 2023 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ll partake in that forgiveness
thank ye gladly, kind Poet
now, what\'s this poem about
\'antidotes to art\'s interpretive absurdities\'
was i close?
ballpark?
lol
July 10th, 2023 03:24
Marmalade Fingers
L. B. Mek said:
wisdom of taste, tongue to lips
flavours dance
with the passing of time we realise
sweetness in a purr or a lick
we just have to be open minded
to what we\'re offered in life..
(loving the wordplay, Hyung
a fun read
still, just glad you didn\'t take it
to marmite\'s levels
that\'s just irreversibly divisive
even as metaphor)
lol
July 10th, 2023 03:19
L. B. Mek said:
wisdom of taste, tongue to lips
flavours dance
with the passing of time we realise
sweetness in a purr or a lick
we just have to be open minded
to what we\'re offered in life..
(loving the wordplay, Hyung
a fun read
still, just glad you didn\'t take it
to marmite\'s levels
that\'s just irreversibly divisive
even as metaphor)
lol
July 10th, 2023 03:19
Man Eater
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Nev, you know that you and I are quite like joint souls when it comes to love, I knew this title would be powerful poetry, and also somewhat comical, my sister was and still is a man eater lol love can surely mess up a perfectly good head. Love these ones you remind me of myself and what once I went through ❤️
July 10th, 2023 01:01
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Nev, you know that you and I are quite like joint souls when it comes to love, I knew this title would be powerful poetry, and also somewhat comical, my sister was and still is a man eater lol love can surely mess up a perfectly good head. Love these ones you remind me of myself and what once I went through ❤️
July 10th, 2023 01:01
Not Another Ending Surely
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes when that stream of love seems dry, it\'s simply waiting for a good rain to replenish it. I Love the way you\'ve phrased this poem my friend.
July 9th, 2023 11:29
Bella Shepard said:
Sometimes when that stream of love seems dry, it\'s simply waiting for a good rain to replenish it. I Love the way you\'ve phrased this poem my friend.
July 9th, 2023 11:29
Not Another Ending Surely
Bobby O said:
A second hand emotion …like60 secs? No , more like I’m cuz the feeling reaching ceilings can’t hold it
Keep fresh w those Mamba moves.
July 9th, 2023 07:24
Bobby O said:
A second hand emotion …like60 secs? No , more like I’m cuz the feeling reaching ceilings can’t hold it
Keep fresh w those Mamba moves.
July 9th, 2023 07:24
Not Another Ending Surely
arqios said:
Like BBQ on a skewer, poems on a theme often match other skewer on other grills... different days and different flavours. Perhaps there is something there in acquiring a new taste...
July 9th, 2023 05:26
arqios said:
Like BBQ on a skewer, poems on a theme often match other skewer on other grills... different days and different flavours. Perhaps there is something there in acquiring a new taste...
July 9th, 2023 05:26
Not Another Ending Surely
orchidee said:
I wish my marriage was a film, with a big notice when it finished: \'THE END\'. lol.
July 9th, 2023 04:48
orchidee said:
I wish my marriage was a film, with a big notice when it finished: \'THE END\'. lol.
July 9th, 2023 04:48
Not Another Ending Surely
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes endings bring new beginnings my dear Nev. ❤️
July 9th, 2023 02:01
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes endings bring new beginnings my dear Nev. ❤️
July 9th, 2023 02:01
Not Another Ending Surely
orchidee said:
There\'s no endings for me and KP. I\'m stuck in this marriage forever! lol.
July 9th, 2023 01:57
orchidee said:
There\'s no endings for me and KP. I\'m stuck in this marriage forever! lol.
July 9th, 2023 01:57
Marmalade Fingers
MendedFences27 said:
Make sure it\'s made with Seville oranges, much more tangy. More of a hot Spanish dance on your tongue. A wonderful breakfast treat. I never met-a-4 I didn\'t like. - Phil A
July 8th, 2023 22:08
MendedFences27 said:
Make sure it\'s made with Seville oranges, much more tangy. More of a hot Spanish dance on your tongue. A wonderful breakfast treat. I never met-a-4 I didn\'t like. - Phil A
July 8th, 2023 22:08
Marmalade Fingers
Doggerel Dave said:
My slowly grinding pedestrian brain could find no meta meaning here. For how could I temper my craving when the word ‘Marmalade’ is presented to me?
So I remain on the literal level and ask – Any tips? (My current infatuation is with a product contained in a long narrow jar which should be extracted with a specially designed porcelain spoon….)
July 8th, 2023 21:49
Doggerel Dave said:
My slowly grinding pedestrian brain could find no meta meaning here. For how could I temper my craving when the word ‘Marmalade’ is presented to me?
So I remain on the literal level and ask – Any tips? (My current infatuation is with a product contained in a long narrow jar which should be extracted with a specially designed porcelain spoon….)
July 8th, 2023 21:49
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