Comments received on poems by Neville
Early Morning Rituals
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen with such ease not only a picture but a way of life that carries its pride from years gone by rightt through to modern day where family enters the tending to caught fish for sale So familiar here too mon ami those early morning rituals that I could smell the sea and the catch ..............x
July 22nd, 2022 15:53
Fay Slimm. said:
You pen with such ease not only a picture but a way of life that carries its pride from years gone by rightt through to modern day where family enters the tending to caught fish for sale So familiar here too mon ami those early morning rituals that I could smell the sea and the catch ..............x
July 22nd, 2022 15:53
What He Really, Really Wants
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
may the universe
add my volition
to your prayers, weight
dear Empathetic poet
and heed our, desperation
to save
the children, please
if only you grant us, some
semblance of mercy
just
go easy on the children
give them, ALL
of them
a grace period, experience
of existence
where pain\'s tearstains
and hunger\'s hollow eyes
doesn\'t make-up
their pitiful, warped view of life...
dear Universe
Please!
July 22nd, 2022 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
may the universe
add my volition
to your prayers, weight
dear Empathetic poet
and heed our, desperation
to save
the children, please
if only you grant us, some
semblance of mercy
just
go easy on the children
give them, ALL
of them
a grace period, experience
of existence
where pain\'s tearstains
and hunger\'s hollow eyes
doesn\'t make-up
their pitiful, warped view of life...
dear Universe
Please!
July 22nd, 2022 03:22
What He Really, Really Wants
Doggerel Dave said:
Too bloody true on both a macro and a micro level. Controlled by the State, controlled by the necessity to gain enough wherewithal to eat and provide shelter, controlled by the arbitrary directions of a political party in power…..got me going this morning, Nev.
Thanks for that one.
July 21st, 2022 18:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Too bloody true on both a macro and a micro level. Controlled by the State, controlled by the necessity to gain enough wherewithal to eat and provide shelter, controlled by the arbitrary directions of a political party in power…..got me going this morning, Nev.
Thanks for that one.
July 21st, 2022 18:28
What He Really, Really Wants
Fay Slimm. said:
You highlight the case of many a victim of controlled behaviour when over-run by those who think they know best for everyone. Much to ponder in this four liner our Nev.
July 21st, 2022 11:38
Fay Slimm. said:
You highlight the case of many a victim of controlled behaviour when over-run by those who think they know best for everyone. Much to ponder in this four liner our Nev.
July 21st, 2022 11:38
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
Bella Shepard said:
Scars that are exposed , painful but lingering, memories difficult to dislodge. Soul baring my friend.
July 20th, 2022 14:49
Bella Shepard said:
Scars that are exposed , painful but lingering, memories difficult to dislodge. Soul baring my friend.
July 20th, 2022 14:49
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
AlitaOpal said:
This brought me to a passage my mother read to me growing up..
Nothing in all creation is hidden from God. Everything is naked and exposed before his eyes, and he is the one to whom we are accountable.
Hebrews 4:13
Awesome write 🎈
July 20th, 2022 09:19
AlitaOpal said:
This brought me to a passage my mother read to me growing up..
Nothing in all creation is hidden from God. Everything is naked and exposed before his eyes, and he is the one to whom we are accountable.
Hebrews 4:13
Awesome write 🎈
July 20th, 2022 09:19
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
Doggerel Dave said:
A brief sketch of a much deeper truth there, only a hint of a whole complex relationship in less than congenial circumstances.
Provokes curiosity which I doubt you will satisfy, Neville.
July 20th, 2022 08:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A brief sketch of a much deeper truth there, only a hint of a whole complex relationship in less than congenial circumstances.
Provokes curiosity which I doubt you will satisfy, Neville.
July 20th, 2022 08:25
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
Fay Slimm. said:
Expertly penned this letter of longing and love that though seems forbidden still lives despite thrown stones. This little gem of a read goes into my list of faves for sure dear Nev..................x
July 20th, 2022 04:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Expertly penned this letter of longing and love that though seems forbidden still lives despite thrown stones. This little gem of a read goes into my list of faves for sure dear Nev..................x
July 20th, 2022 04:06
You Would Not Care to See me Naked .. Surely
orchidee said:
I might swoon! Fido will save me from falling. lol.
July 20th, 2022 02:59
orchidee said:
I might swoon! Fido will save me from falling. lol.
July 20th, 2022 02:59
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories happen and bring such strange thoughts to use for writing down.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories happen and bring such strange thoughts to use for writing down.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:14
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! From Elizabeth Barrett Browning to W.H. Auden in one fell swoop. Yes, memory has so many triggers. The trick is to prioritize.
July 19th, 2022 13:34
Bella Shepard said:
Wow! From Elizabeth Barrett Browning to W.H. Auden in one fell swoop. Yes, memory has so many triggers. The trick is to prioritize.
July 19th, 2022 13:34
It Only Takes One Little Thing
L. B. Mek said:
\'who let the dogs, out!\'
or, who\'s
\'outing themselves as the dogs
we all, are
warped
by that prism, of belated regret
grasping
at crude, objectification to ease
the ache
that\'s making it hard to breathe..\'
or
you know, its all just the heatwave
making us confess
our hellish thoughts...
lol
a great read! dear Poet supreme
July 19th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'who let the dogs, out!\'
or, who\'s
\'outing themselves as the dogs
we all, are
warped
by that prism, of belated regret
grasping
at crude, objectification to ease
the ache
that\'s making it hard to breathe..\'
or
you know, its all just the heatwave
making us confess
our hellish thoughts...
lol
a great read! dear Poet supreme
July 19th, 2022 05:39
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Fay Slimm. said:
Things of mere insignificance can jog back to memory such intimate moments ---- --- and who but thee can pen honesty better with word-art to show she\'s still in your heart.
July 19th, 2022 04:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Things of mere insignificance can jog back to memory such intimate moments ---- --- and who but thee can pen honesty better with word-art to show she\'s still in your heart.
July 19th, 2022 04:26
It Only Takes One Little Thing
Thekkinkkattil said:
I sympathisr with all of you Teddy. Here we are bothered about the rains. A good write teddy enjoyed reading it.
July 19th, 2022 03:37
Thekkinkkattil said:
I sympathisr with all of you Teddy. Here we are bothered about the rains. A good write teddy enjoyed reading it.
July 19th, 2022 03:37
It Only Takes One Little Thing
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido spotted the F. You\'ve started him off again! lol. As I say, no excitement for me. Fido chucks buckets of cold water over me at first sign of any friskiness - he would!
July 19th, 2022 01:59
orchidee said:
Woof! Fido spotted the F. You\'ve started him off again! lol. As I say, no excitement for me. Fido chucks buckets of cold water over me at first sign of any friskiness - he would!
July 19th, 2022 01:59
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Bella Shepard said:
Well, if it\'s for a friend I it\'s OK. So I guess this can both ways, physically and mentally. If it\'s physically, more power to you. If it\'s mentally, uh oh, you are really f....d. All blushes aside, a very provocative read.
July 18th, 2022 13:28
Bella Shepard said:
Well, if it\'s for a friend I it\'s OK. So I guess this can both ways, physically and mentally. If it\'s physically, more power to you. If it\'s mentally, uh oh, you are really f....d. All blushes aside, a very provocative read.
July 18th, 2022 13:28
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
orchidee said:
Woof, woof! You started Fido barking. Ohh, f, f, and f he says. Well, he don\'t actually say it! lol.
he says \'No excitement for you (meaning me) today\', he says, as he lays in the shade sipping drinks on a sun lounger!
July 18th, 2022 06:22
orchidee said:
Woof, woof! You started Fido barking. Ohh, f, f, and f he says. Well, he don\'t actually say it! lol.
he says \'No excitement for you (meaning me) today\', he says, as he lays in the shade sipping drinks on a sun lounger!
July 18th, 2022 06:22
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Paul Bell said:
A friend in need, is usually a friend who indeed is fucking someone else, but who might phone you for a loan just to really piss you off.
July 18th, 2022 05:31
Paul Bell said:
A friend in need, is usually a friend who indeed is fucking someone else, but who might phone you for a loan just to really piss you off.
July 18th, 2022 05:31
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Fay Slimm. said:
A raw read today Nev. The \"petite mort\" is still called making love in this quarter - - wow - it takes a true friend to ask such orgasmic questions and must say methinks a female never would need all and sundry revealed..................... x
July 18th, 2022 05:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A raw read today Nev. The \"petite mort\" is still called making love in this quarter - - wow - it takes a true friend to ask such orgasmic questions and must say methinks a female never would need all and sundry revealed..................... x
July 18th, 2022 05:16
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
L. B. Mek said:
that cherished rarity
of true friendship
is wasted, while consumed
in that fog of youthful lust;
some, choices
we can live with, but some
instinctive
surrenders, to intoxicating chemistry
thieve us
of a kin, that would have shared
everything with us, but for parents
if only
we had the strength, to fight off
alcoholic lust\'s, venomous whispers
and we kept our lines, uncrossed..
I have a few
connections, lost
to nights of passion
although
I must admit, I regret nothing
just that:
\'I wonder if you ever think of me,
fucking you,
or you, fucking me, these days ..
After all,
that my friend, is precisely\'
\'the closest thing to heaven I have
ever been or
known to date ..\'
Brilliant!
(so unapologetically raw
and thus, reads
that much more sincere
for beings so)
while I rave, over your poetry\'s subtlety
this too, is a trait
of your poetic genius, I revel in
that ability
to say it like it is
unashamed but humbled
simultaneously..
(I read and learn
Hyung!)
July 18th, 2022 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
that cherished rarity
of true friendship
is wasted, while consumed
in that fog of youthful lust;
some, choices
we can live with, but some
instinctive
surrenders, to intoxicating chemistry
thieve us
of a kin, that would have shared
everything with us, but for parents
if only
we had the strength, to fight off
alcoholic lust\'s, venomous whispers
and we kept our lines, uncrossed..
I have a few
connections, lost
to nights of passion
although
I must admit, I regret nothing
just that:
\'I wonder if you ever think of me,
fucking you,
or you, fucking me, these days ..
After all,
that my friend, is precisely\'
\'the closest thing to heaven I have
ever been or
known to date ..\'
Brilliant!
(so unapologetically raw
and thus, reads
that much more sincere
for beings so)
while I rave, over your poetry\'s subtlety
this too, is a trait
of your poetic genius, I revel in
that ability
to say it like it is
unashamed but humbled
simultaneously..
(I read and learn
Hyung!)
July 18th, 2022 04:44
Just Asking on Behalf of a Friend
Doggerel Dave said:
Unlikely - I believe in confidentiality in such situations, Neville.
I do wonder, however occasionally but rarely if I exist in the memories of anyone at all...
July 18th, 2022 04:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Unlikely - I believe in confidentiality in such situations, Neville.
I do wonder, however occasionally but rarely if I exist in the memories of anyone at all...
July 18th, 2022 04:28
Etna
arqios said:
She was a prime example of the Socratic tenet: \"Know thyself!\" That provided her with promising pragmatism.
July 17th, 2022 23:01
arqios said:
She was a prime example of the Socratic tenet: \"Know thyself!\" That provided her with promising pragmatism.
July 17th, 2022 23:01
Once Upon a Downing Street
Dove said:
I wish the best for the Country.. All over the World there is such things .. You penned it so well.
Out I say…
July 17th, 2022 15:07
Dove said:
I wish the best for the Country.. All over the World there is such things .. You penned it so well.
Out I say…
July 17th, 2022 15:07
When the Shit First Hit the Fan
Bella Shepard said:
What was, was. What is, is. What will be, will be our responsibility. Choice and responsibility should go hand in hand, can we get it back? A very truthful and insightful write my friend.
July 17th, 2022 11:48
Bella Shepard said:
What was, was. What is, is. What will be, will be our responsibility. Choice and responsibility should go hand in hand, can we get it back? A very truthful and insightful write my friend.
July 17th, 2022 11:48
Once Upon a Downing Street
Bella Shepard said:
Do you think we can find a spot in that filthy gutter for an ex-president that I know? He and Boris seem to get along well, but then they\'re cut from the same cloth. Come to think of it, a vast number of them seem to appeal to the same tailor. Maybe this guy should start investigating who is clientele is. Great write my friend!
July 17th, 2022 11:21
Bella Shepard said:
Do you think we can find a spot in that filthy gutter for an ex-president that I know? He and Boris seem to get along well, but then they\'re cut from the same cloth. Come to think of it, a vast number of them seem to appeal to the same tailor. Maybe this guy should start investigating who is clientele is. Great write my friend!
July 17th, 2022 11:21
Once Upon a Downing Street
Paul Bell said:
Boris will be partying to those words. Actually, Boris could start a war in his last weeks and days in office. In saying that, the replacements don\'t inspire much either.
July 17th, 2022 07:44
Paul Bell said:
Boris will be partying to those words. Actually, Boris could start a war in his last weeks and days in office. In saying that, the replacements don\'t inspire much either.
July 17th, 2022 07:44
Once Upon a Downing Street
Fay Slimm. said:
YES WHOLLY AGREED -- - seemingly everywhere governmental care is non-existent and deserves no better -than being revealed and brought to public shame.............x
July 17th, 2022 07:42
Fay Slimm. said:
YES WHOLLY AGREED -- - seemingly everywhere governmental care is non-existent and deserves no better -than being revealed and brought to public shame.............x
July 17th, 2022 07:42
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