Comments received on poems by Neville
Incidentally I Assure You
Paul Bell said:
Heroes only last for a day now.
Sir Galahad would have wondered why he bothered to put on all that shiny armour. Tomorrow it will be some other hero\'s turn.
July 26th, 2022 10:12
Paul Bell said:
Heroes only last for a day now.
Sir Galahad would have wondered why he bothered to put on all that shiny armour. Tomorrow it will be some other hero\'s turn.
July 26th, 2022 10:12
Incidentally I Assure You
Doggerel Dave said:
Nipples, nipples everywhere and never one to nibble..... Thanks for reminding me, Neville....
July 26th, 2022 07:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Nipples, nipples everywhere and never one to nibble..... Thanks for reminding me, Neville....
July 26th, 2022 07:43
Incidentally I Assure You
L. B. Mek said:
lol
\'But you do make me feel
like some
aroused, hardened nipple ..\'
ok, Hyung
I\'m borrowing these lines
as my epitaph
😎
(such a fun read
however tragic the theme
but then, that\'s you
and your mighty pen, flexing
at will...)
July 26th, 2022 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
lol
\'But you do make me feel
like some
aroused, hardened nipple ..\'
ok, Hyung
I\'m borrowing these lines
as my epitaph
😎
(such a fun read
however tragic the theme
but then, that\'s you
and your mighty pen, flexing
at will...)
July 26th, 2022 04:33
Incidentally I Assure You
Fay Slimm. said:
Strange the way time makes our exits from once-loved relationships never easier to accept - -- sad but true there are no heroics needed when beaten by new paramours. No winks but sighs from me after reading this Nev.....................x
July 26th, 2022 03:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Strange the way time makes our exits from once-loved relationships never easier to accept - -- sad but true there are no heroics needed when beaten by new paramours. No winks but sighs from me after reading this Nev.....................x
July 26th, 2022 03:40
Incidentally I Assure You
dusk arising said:
An air of being discarded by someone with whom one\'s heart wishes there were so much more.
A strange (to me) and bold piece of writing to play with my perception.
July 26th, 2022 02:49
dusk arising said:
An air of being discarded by someone with whom one\'s heart wishes there were so much more.
A strange (to me) and bold piece of writing to play with my perception.
July 26th, 2022 02:49
The Redundant Fist
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, I totally agree with what Fay has said.
Andy
July 26th, 2022 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, I totally agree with what Fay has said.
Andy
July 26th, 2022 00:40
The Redundant Fist
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, here you amplify the benefits of having social issues brought into our living rooms upon that screen we mock and abuse so often.
It has given us the conscience and awareness denied our forebears.
Yet sadly we stab, murder, rape and abuse. Have we become a society split down it\'s middle.
July 25th, 2022 12:30
dusk arising said:
Ah yes, here you amplify the benefits of having social issues brought into our living rooms upon that screen we mock and abuse so often.
It has given us the conscience and awareness denied our forebears.
Yet sadly we stab, murder, rape and abuse. Have we become a society split down it\'s middle.
July 25th, 2022 12:30
The Redundant Fist
Bella Shepard said:
Having grown up in an era of spankings and hand slapping I can definitely relate to this. The blow tells you that you did something wrong, but it doesn\'t explain the better way. And that feeling as your being turned over the knee, or the sting of a palm against your fingers is confusing for a child. I guess I think that words can often teach more than blows, especially when there is good thought behind them. Good write my friend!
July 25th, 2022 08:58
Bella Shepard said:
Having grown up in an era of spankings and hand slapping I can definitely relate to this. The blow tells you that you did something wrong, but it doesn\'t explain the better way. And that feeling as your being turned over the knee, or the sting of a palm against your fingers is confusing for a child. I guess I think that words can often teach more than blows, especially when there is good thought behind them. Good write my friend!
July 25th, 2022 08:58
The Redundant Fist
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot to think about here, Neville.
Good morning-read.
July 25th, 2022 08:56
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot to think about here, Neville.
Good morning-read.
July 25th, 2022 08:56
The Redundant Fist
Fay Slimm. said:
These words sum up the changes made in public opinion on ruling by fear yet seeing results in really undisciplined children makes you think doesn\'t it Nev . as to where went parental control.?.............x
July 25th, 2022 07:38
Fay Slimm. said:
These words sum up the changes made in public opinion on ruling by fear yet seeing results in really undisciplined children makes you think doesn\'t it Nev . as to where went parental control.?.............x
July 25th, 2022 07:38
Copywrite Pending
arqios said:
And for those whom these would still not do can leave with \'hike-yu\' bahaha
July 24th, 2022 19:58
arqios said:
And for those whom these would still not do can leave with \'hike-yu\' bahaha
July 24th, 2022 19:58
Copywrite Pending
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good explanation, Neville.
Love short-form poetry. I enjoy writing Haiku, Senryu, and Lunes. I am intrigued by this Mokhu and a Faikhu. A lot of the time I write FUQs, but I try and cleverly hide them in a Lune on the edge of a Senryu so the algorithms don’t reject them. But that is when I am addressing politics.
July 24th, 2022 13:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good explanation, Neville.
Love short-form poetry. I enjoy writing Haiku, Senryu, and Lunes. I am intrigued by this Mokhu and a Faikhu. A lot of the time I write FUQs, but I try and cleverly hide them in a Lune on the edge of a Senryu so the algorithms don’t reject them. But that is when I am addressing politics.
July 24th, 2022 13:12
Copywrite Pending
Bella Shepard said:
Question: Will there be a test on this Monday? If so, I definitely need to get my khu\'s straight, a lot to put in this old brain. The last one, however, I think I\'m familiar with. Kudos!
July 24th, 2022 10:50
Bella Shepard said:
Question: Will there be a test on this Monday? If so, I definitely need to get my khu\'s straight, a lot to put in this old brain. The last one, however, I think I\'m familiar with. Kudos!
July 24th, 2022 10:50
Copywrite Pending
Accidental Poet said:
All the same to me n, an excellent show of words whenever it comes from your pen. 😉
July 24th, 2022 08:57
Accidental Poet said:
All the same to me n, an excellent show of words whenever it comes from your pen. 😉
July 24th, 2022 08:57
Copywrite Pending
Doggerel Dave said:
Syllable numbers and form the same for Senryu, Mokhu, Faikhu and Copywrite, Neville....?
July 24th, 2022 06:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Syllable numbers and form the same for Senryu, Mokhu, Faikhu and Copywrite, Neville....?
July 24th, 2022 06:14
Early Morning Rituals Â
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful and simplistic days were the best days than the chaos we lived in…wish I could witness such peaceful co-existence lazing around corner watching the clouds playing with sun behind….
July 24th, 2022 04:56
spilleronsheet said:
A beautiful and simplistic days were the best days than the chaos we lived in…wish I could witness such peaceful co-existence lazing around corner watching the clouds playing with sun behind….
July 24th, 2022 04:56
Copywrite Pending
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhh….got to know a lot more…thanks dear Neville for briefly touching upon all and defining so crisply….
July 24th, 2022 04:52
spilleronsheet said:
Ohhhh….got to know a lot more…thanks dear Neville for briefly touching upon all and defining so crisply….
July 24th, 2022 04:52
Copywrite Pending
Dove said:
Faikhu.
think I may attempt
Though cherry blossoms may object
Bless their blemished buds
July 24th, 2022 01:37
Dove said:
Faikhu.
think I may attempt
Though cherry blossoms may object
Bless their blemished buds
July 24th, 2022 01:37
Copywrite Pending
orchidee said:
Ahh, I know now. A thought a Haiku was a sort of sneeze, as in \'Ahh-choo!\' Is that a type of poem too? An Ahkhu.
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido! lol.
July 24th, 2022 01:22
orchidee said:
Ahh, I know now. A thought a Haiku was a sort of sneeze, as in \'Ahh-choo!\' Is that a type of poem too? An Ahkhu.
Do shut up now Orchi, says Fido! lol.
July 24th, 2022 01:22
Mokhu #?
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -- Hic ! -- so mi amigo this is your take on penning the meaning of Mokhu adorned I might say with the usual exotic inuendoes - methinks if ya make mine a tequila I might join your un-rude drinkin\' interlude down below.................. x
July 23rd, 2022 13:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - -- Hic ! -- so mi amigo this is your take on penning the meaning of Mokhu adorned I might say with the usual exotic inuendoes - methinks if ya make mine a tequila I might join your un-rude drinkin\' interlude down below.................. x
July 23rd, 2022 13:17
Mokhu #?
orchidee said:
I might faint if it was rude.... lol. You know I\'m prone to swoons.
July 23rd, 2022 09:40
orchidee said:
I might faint if it was rude.... lol. You know I\'m prone to swoons.
July 23rd, 2022 09:40
Mokhu #?
Doggerel Dave said:
Google is a little ambivalent with respect to the title of your piece, Neville.
Given that, and your suggestion that it ain\'t rude, but forced to take into consideration Fay\'s commentary (Sorry Fay) I am very much afraid I shall have to draw my own conclusions..........
July 23rd, 2022 08:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Google is a little ambivalent with respect to the title of your piece, Neville.
Given that, and your suggestion that it ain\'t rude, but forced to take into consideration Fay\'s commentary (Sorry Fay) I am very much afraid I shall have to draw my own conclusions..........
July 23rd, 2022 08:06
What He Really, Really Wants
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words in many relationships Neville.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words in many relationships Neville.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:13
Early Morning Rituals Â
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Neville I was there with the fisher folk as your words described.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Neville I was there with the fisher folk as your words described.
Andy
July 23rd, 2022 00:04
Early Morning Rituals Â
Doggerel Dave said:
Preserved in aspic by your piece, a way of life which many, and I’m not exempt here, would be unaware of its continued survival. Yet a very long time ago (I was a kid, in fact) a visit to the coast….. You assure me (city boy) of its existence yet?
At the very least the write provokes a very vivid memory, Neville.
Thanks.
July 22nd, 2022 18:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Preserved in aspic by your piece, a way of life which many, and I’m not exempt here, would be unaware of its continued survival. Yet a very long time ago (I was a kid, in fact) a visit to the coast….. You assure me (city boy) of its existence yet?
At the very least the write provokes a very vivid memory, Neville.
Thanks.
July 22nd, 2022 18:17
Early Morning Rituals Â
Bella Shepard said:
The magic of morning, there\'s nothing else like it. The start of each day ,with cherished routines that give constancy and order to our lives. You have penned this so beautifully. Now I\'m thinking about my morning walk and the ritual of brewing my coffee, I can smell it even now. Thank you my friend!
July 22nd, 2022 16:46
Bella Shepard said:
The magic of morning, there\'s nothing else like it. The start of each day ,with cherished routines that give constancy and order to our lives. You have penned this so beautifully. Now I\'m thinking about my morning walk and the ritual of brewing my coffee, I can smell it even now. Thank you my friend!
July 22nd, 2022 16:46
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