Comments received on poems by Neville
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
Lauraš» said:
Dear Neville,
When I seeā¦
When I readā¦
About lemonsā¦
Or lemon treesā¦
I think of Capriā¦
Capriā¦
ā¦part of my dolce vita.ā£ļø
Lauraš»
June 27th, 2023 09:52
Lauraš» said:
Dear Neville,
When I seeā¦
When I readā¦
About lemonsā¦
Or lemon treesā¦
I think of Capriā¦
Capriā¦
ā¦part of my dolce vita.ā£ļø
Lauraš»
June 27th, 2023 09:52
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
Christina8 said:
Not much left to the imagination my friend, but very descriptive. I like it!
June 27th, 2023 02:17
Christina8 said:
Not much left to the imagination my friend, but very descriptive. I like it!
June 27th, 2023 02:17
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
Michael Edwards said:
I do enjoy a lemon dressing - or in this case undressing. Nice one Neville.
June 27th, 2023 01:49
Michael Edwards said:
I do enjoy a lemon dressing - or in this case undressing. Nice one Neville.
June 27th, 2023 01:49
When Thinking Upon a Lemon Tree
orchidee said:
That lemon tree made me swoon, with the goings-on underneath it. Or were ya in the tree top?! lol.
June 27th, 2023 01:46
orchidee said:
That lemon tree made me swoon, with the goings-on underneath it. Or were ya in the tree top?! lol.
June 27th, 2023 01:46
Just Desserts and No Pudding
Kinsey Peterson said:
i feel as though there is a story behind this that we are not seeing- i\'m curious what the love thinks about what occured :))
You know it\'s a good poem when someone wants to turn it into a story.
June 26th, 2023 14:14
Kinsey Peterson said:
i feel as though there is a story behind this that we are not seeing- i\'m curious what the love thinks about what occured :))
You know it\'s a good poem when someone wants to turn it into a story.
June 26th, 2023 14:14
Just Desserts and No Pudding
Teddy.15 said:
LOL there is a huge irony I get from your words, no winners in love that\'s for sure. ā¤ļø Sometimes just sour grapes. Wonderfully written.
June 26th, 2023 10:54
Teddy.15 said:
LOL there is a huge irony I get from your words, no winners in love that\'s for sure. ā¤ļø Sometimes just sour grapes. Wonderfully written.
June 26th, 2023 10:54
Just Desserts and No Pudding
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem....so descriptive and brings such fun times to mind.....Great one
June 26th, 2023 06:50
Christina8 said:
A wonderful poem....so descriptive and brings such fun times to mind.....Great one
June 26th, 2023 06:50
Just Desserts and No Pudding
L. B. Mek said:
just desserts, eh?
too much sweetness, as a curse
rotting our teeth and emboldening
our love handles..
lol
loving the wordplay, a great write Hyung
a fun read as well
(or maybe that\'s just me)
June 26th, 2023 03:02
L. B. Mek said:
just desserts, eh?
too much sweetness, as a curse
rotting our teeth and emboldening
our love handles..
lol
loving the wordplay, a great write Hyung
a fun read as well
(or maybe that\'s just me)
June 26th, 2023 03:02
Dembeās Dust
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(experiences enrich our perspectives
add depths to our empathy pools
we ink what we see, but
outsider eyes
rarely truly see
or want, to see
that song and dance of defiance
in those now, cagelss veins
spitting that rotten feeling
like a Maya Angelou, daring poem
forced to witness Time change
and yet generation after generation
is still
dusting that crimson soaked dirt
forced to rely
on the generosity of those
that resemble the very people
who crippled a continent
and raped its lands, so the west
can sit on those high seats
deigning to offer their charity
while ignoring the very blood
on those hands, they keep
so pristine and washed clean...)
June 26th, 2023 02:56
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(experiences enrich our perspectives
add depths to our empathy pools
we ink what we see, but
outsider eyes
rarely truly see
or want, to see
that song and dance of defiance
in those now, cagelss veins
spitting that rotten feeling
like a Maya Angelou, daring poem
forced to witness Time change
and yet generation after generation
is still
dusting that crimson soaked dirt
forced to rely
on the generosity of those
that resemble the very people
who crippled a continent
and raped its lands, so the west
can sit on those high seats
deigning to offer their charity
while ignoring the very blood
on those hands, they keep
so pristine and washed clean...)
June 26th, 2023 02:56
Little Flower
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(nature\'s beauty, cut short
by cruelty of life\'s poetry
or a heart, pricked by thorns
yet gentle as rose petals
poetic form as a caging
of reality\'s artistic chaos
syllables, handcuffed
so our creativity may soar
...free)
June 26th, 2023 02:45
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(nature\'s beauty, cut short
by cruelty of life\'s poetry
or a heart, pricked by thorns
yet gentle as rose petals
poetic form as a caging
of reality\'s artistic chaos
syllables, handcuffed
so our creativity may soar
...free)
June 26th, 2023 02:45
Just Desserts and No Pudding
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I \'tasted\' KP. Tasted like an old trout! Well, looked like one anyway. heehee.
June 26th, 2023 01:30
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I \'tasted\' KP. Tasted like an old trout! Well, looked like one anyway. heehee.
June 26th, 2023 01:30
At Least to the Moon and Back
Caring dove said:
Lovely gentle words ) I like your poem š nice mention of birds and nature in this
June 26th, 2023 01:22
Caring dove said:
Lovely gentle words ) I like your poem š nice mention of birds and nature in this
June 26th, 2023 01:22
Just Desserts and No Pudding
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is very much like that Neville, that ecstasy over every portion is so wonderful.
Andy
June 26th, 2023 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
True love is very much like that Neville, that ecstasy over every portion is so wonderful.
Andy
June 26th, 2023 01:01
Dembeās Dust
Lauraš» said:
Dear Neville,
Very interesting and informative. Your comments helped in understanding your well crafted poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura šš»
June 25th, 2023 10:33
Lauraš» said:
Dear Neville,
Very interesting and informative. Your comments helped in understanding your well crafted poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura šš»
June 25th, 2023 10:33
Dembeās Dust
Poetic Dan said:
The life you must of lived to find the words you do. To educate me while being taken on a trip of fact or imagination is always a wonderful inspiration!
Thank you buddy
June 25th, 2023 04:49
Poetic Dan said:
The life you must of lived to find the words you do. To educate me while being taken on a trip of fact or imagination is always a wonderful inspiration!
Thank you buddy
June 25th, 2023 04:49
Dembeās Dust
Bobby O said:
At first I was hoping it could be Dembe from the BLACKLIST but that was silly so I just read the peace and I liked the SHAke it has w that Sam Cooke let that night get away having his speak sorta like your poems speak. And there you go, even ALMOST next to Sam Cooke in a sentence might be pinnacle
Mere mortals arrive do Bring It In Home Tio means let me tell you bout a placeā¦
June 25th, 2023 03:54
Bobby O said:
At first I was hoping it could be Dembe from the BLACKLIST but that was silly so I just read the peace and I liked the SHAke it has w that Sam Cooke let that night get away having his speak sorta like your poems speak. And there you go, even ALMOST next to Sam Cooke in a sentence might be pinnacle
Mere mortals arrive do Bring It In Home Tio means let me tell you bout a placeā¦
June 25th, 2023 03:54
Little Flower
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that that flower brought joy to your world Neville.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that that flower brought joy to your world Neville.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:45
Dembeās Dust
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I wish KP would spend time in West Africa. I will buy her a one-way ticket! heehee.
She wouldn\'t help much though. She would only find out the botox clinic there. lol.
June 25th, 2023 01:31
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I wish KP would spend time in West Africa. I will buy her a one-way ticket! heehee.
She wouldn\'t help much though. She would only find out the botox clinic there. lol.
June 25th, 2023 01:31
Dembeās Dust
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, times passed mean so much to us.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Neville, times passed mean so much to us.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:27
What is Wrong With This Tongue
Kinsey Peterson said:
I think I have made my point clear that you are a wonderful poet and each of your poems is a masterpiece- you do not need to keep proving it. ;)
June 24th, 2023 16:24
Kinsey Peterson said:
I think I have made my point clear that you are a wonderful poet and each of your poems is a masterpiece- you do not need to keep proving it. ;)
June 24th, 2023 16:24
What is it With Poetry
Kinsey Peterson said:
Poetry is a fascinating subject that has connected people across cultures, distance, and time. I\'m honored to be witnessing your impact on the art. :)
June 24th, 2023 16:21
Kinsey Peterson said:
Poetry is a fascinating subject that has connected people across cultures, distance, and time. I\'m honored to be witnessing your impact on the art. :)
June 24th, 2023 16:21
No Gardener Required
Kinsey Peterson said:
My face always lights up learning i have another of your wonderful works to read my friend. it means a lot that you continue to share them with the world. Beautiful work as always (:
June 24th, 2023 16:13
Kinsey Peterson said:
My face always lights up learning i have another of your wonderful works to read my friend. it means a lot that you continue to share them with the world. Beautiful work as always (:
June 24th, 2023 16:13
Little Flower
Kinsey Peterson said:
perhaps i am reading too far into this- but the poem could go two very different directions. you found a beautiful flower and became quite taken with it- or fleur can mean a blossom. and picking it ending a life before it truly began. the duality of poetry at its finest. is it beautiful or sorrowful? either way it is a fantastic write.
June 24th, 2023 15:44
Kinsey Peterson said:
perhaps i am reading too far into this- but the poem could go two very different directions. you found a beautiful flower and became quite taken with it- or fleur can mean a blossom. and picking it ending a life before it truly began. the duality of poetry at its finest. is it beautiful or sorrowful? either way it is a fantastic write.
June 24th, 2023 15:44
Little Flower
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Bit of French there - but not as in \'pardon my french!\' lol.
June 24th, 2023 07:55
orchidee said:
Good write N.
Bit of French there - but not as in \'pardon my french!\' lol.
June 24th, 2023 07:55
What is it With Poetry
Poetic Dan said:
Without it I\'d not have one of your books on shelve or found many other souls that showed me a reflection of self!
Poetry be that glue between me and you lol
Always a pleasure
June 24th, 2023 05:12
Poetic Dan said:
Without it I\'d not have one of your books on shelve or found many other souls that showed me a reflection of self!
Poetry be that glue between me and you lol
Always a pleasure
June 24th, 2023 05:12
Little Flower
Bobby O said:
That Shakespearean touch redeems Brevity Is the Soul of Wit but I hover mostly under Twainās exacting retort
āIf I had more time I would write a shorter letterā
Once again s pleasured Requite is mine as your energetic energy stimulates connection. Hope the best is yours as you Conquer , my friend.
June 24th, 2023 04:22
Bobby O said:
That Shakespearean touch redeems Brevity Is the Soul of Wit but I hover mostly under Twainās exacting retort
āIf I had more time I would write a shorter letterā
Once again s pleasured Requite is mine as your energetic energy stimulates connection. Hope the best is yours as you Conquer , my friend.
June 24th, 2023 04:22
What is it With Poetry
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Nev, so lovely to be able to come by and write something once more, you are of such poetic beauty that when people read your poems they relate deeply of course I can only really speak on behalf of myself but I truly mean it, your deep sense of truth that\'s spills out from beyond your poetic heart will always keep me coming back to read more. š¤
June 24th, 2023 03:56
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Nev, so lovely to be able to come by and write something once more, you are of such poetic beauty that when people read your poems they relate deeply of course I can only really speak on behalf of myself but I truly mean it, your deep sense of truth that\'s spills out from beyond your poetic heart will always keep me coming back to read more. š¤
June 24th, 2023 03:56
No Gardener Required
Goldfinch60 said:
That garden of life sometimes does not need pruning Neville, it grows into resounding beauty,
Andy
June 24th, 2023 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That garden of life sometimes does not need pruning Neville, it grows into resounding beauty,
Andy
June 24th, 2023 01:19
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