Comments received on poems by Neville
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
Doggerel Dave said:
Cool and enigmatic, Nev...enjoyed.
February 5th, 2023 20:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Cool and enigmatic, Nev...enjoyed.
February 5th, 2023 20:13
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
Fay Slimm. said:
A warm moment of weather talk before that vague smile in a lover\'s direction means she knows there is heat in the air despite any forecast of snow - -- and methinks t\'will grow even hotter when weather\'s forgotten...................x
February 5th, 2023 11:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A warm moment of weather talk before that vague smile in a lover\'s direction means she knows there is heat in the air despite any forecast of snow - -- and methinks t\'will grow even hotter when weather\'s forgotten...................x
February 5th, 2023 11:38
Let’s Talk About the Weather For Once
Christina8 said:
How am I the first to review this? lol Anyway, i love how you ended the poem \"smiling vaguely....\" lets not talk about the weather....it is horrible! LOL Beautiful poem, N!
February 5th, 2023 09:03
Christina8 said:
How am I the first to review this? lol Anyway, i love how you ended the poem \"smiling vaguely....\" lets not talk about the weather....it is horrible! LOL Beautiful poem, N!
February 5th, 2023 09:03
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope your eyes are blue Neville.
Andy
February 5th, 2023 05:53
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope your eyes are blue Neville.
Andy
February 5th, 2023 05:53
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
Doggerel Dave said:
Such smooth poetry, beautifully formed.....but why make a thing of wonder out of blatant discrimination?🙂
(The remainder of her idiosyncrasies I intend to ignore within the frame of this discussion).
February 4th, 2023 18:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Such smooth poetry, beautifully formed.....but why make a thing of wonder out of blatant discrimination?🙂
(The remainder of her idiosyncrasies I intend to ignore within the frame of this discussion).
February 4th, 2023 18:51
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
orchidee said:
Ohh, I don\'t care! I\'m gonna meet her, or one of your other lasses. Makes a break from KP - who I never see 99% of the time anyway. Well, not in person. On TV, in the papers, in jail (oops, she got away with something yet again) - yes!
I paid the jailer the bail money to keep her IN. heehee.
February 4th, 2023 10:10
orchidee said:
Ohh, I don\'t care! I\'m gonna meet her, or one of your other lasses. Makes a break from KP - who I never see 99% of the time anyway. Well, not in person. On TV, in the papers, in jail (oops, she got away with something yet again) - yes!
I paid the jailer the bail money to keep her IN. heehee.
February 4th, 2023 10:10
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
Christina8 said:
this is so descriptive. I just love it! I don\'t often favorite things but this is such a fine poem! You had me at the very beginning....blue eyes!
February 4th, 2023 08:17
Christina8 said:
this is so descriptive. I just love it! I don\'t often favorite things but this is such a fine poem! You had me at the very beginning....blue eyes!
February 4th, 2023 08:17
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:
An outstanding write -- your short-line technique of presenting intrigue in a few short lines is amazing - -this has to be one of your best and is now in my fave. list Sir N.............x
February 4th, 2023 04:06
Fay Slimm. said:
An outstanding write -- your short-line technique of presenting intrigue in a few short lines is amazing - -this has to be one of your best and is now in my fave. list Sir N.............x
February 4th, 2023 04:06
Her Thing About Blue Eyes
orchidee said:
If she pops round to see me, I will swoon. I\'m a blue eyed boy, ya know! lol. Will she know I am, if I wear shades?!
February 4th, 2023 03:30
orchidee said:
If she pops round to see me, I will swoon. I\'m a blue eyed boy, ya know! lol. Will she know I am, if I wear shades?!
February 4th, 2023 03:30
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville.
Andy
February 4th, 2023 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Neville.
Andy
February 4th, 2023 02:55
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
Kinsey Peterson said:
I would love nothing more than to see someone put your words to music. I feel as though they would make lovely songs.
February 3rd, 2023 09:43
Kinsey Peterson said:
I would love nothing more than to see someone put your words to music. I feel as though they would make lovely songs.
February 3rd, 2023 09:43
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
Doggerel Dave said:
If the beams, the inglenook, the Aga (that woz the one I had in my days of plenty) range are there, don\'t chuck \'em out...(bible is a different matter) but bathe in the \'smiles and laughter,\' plus the \'joy, peace, love and hope\' for as long as it lasts..... I did enjoy the piece Nev, but fear I might be turning myself into an advice maiden - Dorothy Dix (Aust), UK - Edith Home if I remember....
February 3rd, 2023 07:03
Doggerel Dave said:
If the beams, the inglenook, the Aga (that woz the one I had in my days of plenty) range are there, don\'t chuck \'em out...(bible is a different matter) but bathe in the \'smiles and laughter,\' plus the \'joy, peace, love and hope\' for as long as it lasts..... I did enjoy the piece Nev, but fear I might be turning myself into an advice maiden - Dorothy Dix (Aust), UK - Edith Home if I remember....
February 3rd, 2023 07:03
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
arqios said:
Where the rubber hits the road
and that\'s where the skid marks are at.
February 3rd, 2023 06:25
arqios said:
Where the rubber hits the road
and that\'s where the skid marks are at.
February 3rd, 2023 06:25
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
Christina8 said:
Quite the positive write....smiles and laughter i think are what we all want. Excellent. Well done!
February 3rd, 2023 05:15
Christina8 said:
Quite the positive write....smiles and laughter i think are what we all want. Excellent. Well done!
February 3rd, 2023 05:15
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
Fay Slimm. said:
Smiles and laughter win every prize for lasting relationships and no doubt about it - and who would not take that \"double helping of joy, peace, love and hope\" - a positive write and inspiring read mon ami .....x
February 3rd, 2023 04:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Smiles and laughter win every prize for lasting relationships and no doubt about it - and who would not take that \"double helping of joy, peace, love and hope\" - a positive write and inspiring read mon ami .....x
February 3rd, 2023 04:12
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(it really doesn\'t take much
to put a smile on our face
or kind tones in our eyes
just a little openness, aside
a side serving of acceptance
and just like that
our slice of life, is that little bit
more sweet...)
February 3rd, 2023 04:05
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(it really doesn\'t take much
to put a smile on our face
or kind tones in our eyes
just a little openness, aside
a side serving of acceptance
and just like that
our slice of life, is that little bit
more sweet...)
February 3rd, 2023 04:05
Chasing the Carpet
L. B. Mek said:
we can word it as we may,
dear empathetic Hyung
\'chasing the carpet\'
\'chasing the bottom of a bottle\'
\'chase the escape
in a numbing, embrace..\'
and on...
pathetic, how some men out there
try to warp it in-to a gender fight
rather than, witnessing
a person, in need
a humane tragedy, unfolding..
I\'m ever astounded, at Gaia\'s
levels of tolerance
at a mere read of your words
my volcanic rage, is poised
to spew lava hate
February 3rd, 2023 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
we can word it as we may,
dear empathetic Hyung
\'chasing the carpet\'
\'chasing the bottom of a bottle\'
\'chase the escape
in a numbing, embrace..\'
and on...
pathetic, how some men out there
try to warp it in-to a gender fight
rather than, witnessing
a person, in need
a humane tragedy, unfolding..
I\'m ever astounded, at Gaia\'s
levels of tolerance
at a mere read of your words
my volcanic rage, is poised
to spew lava hate
February 3rd, 2023 04:02
Hello Again Marianne
L. B. Mek said:
\'I have lost a telephone
with your smell in it\'
(just a privilege
to read your memorable words
dear Poet supreme!)
love the unfolding reveal
a soundless beat
distilling subtlety\'s nuances
a line at a time..
February 3rd, 2023 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'I have lost a telephone
with your smell in it\'
(just a privilege
to read your memorable words
dear Poet supreme!)
love the unfolding reveal
a soundless beat
distilling subtlety\'s nuances
a line at a time..
February 3rd, 2023 03:53
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful Hyung
more vivid than a HD8k, vid...
(Intimacy, need not be
panting, breathlessness
its intoxicating, to be entwined
arms and legs, nothing else
headache\'s, as opportunity
to express a more lasting
chemistry, sensuality
knowing, in your arms
beats a heart, you trust outright...)
February 3rd, 2023 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful Hyung
more vivid than a HD8k, vid...
(Intimacy, need not be
panting, breathlessness
its intoxicating, to be entwined
arms and legs, nothing else
headache\'s, as opportunity
to express a more lasting
chemistry, sensuality
knowing, in your arms
beats a heart, you trust outright...)
February 3rd, 2023 03:47
What We Do & What We Don’t Need Now
orchidee said:
I\'ll chuck KP in that holy brook! We\'ve a Brook of that very name in our town.
February 3rd, 2023 03:10
orchidee said:
I\'ll chuck KP in that holy brook! We\'ve a Brook of that very name in our town.
February 3rd, 2023 03:10
Chasing the Carpet
Bella Shepard said:
The sadness is that that anyone should become the slave of such a monster, where the brain trumps all in it\'s need to feed addiction. How little we realize that the brain has a mind of its own, inspite of us. A very powerful and pertinent write dear friend.
February 2nd, 2023 14:00
Bella Shepard said:
The sadness is that that anyone should become the slave of such a monster, where the brain trumps all in it\'s need to feed addiction. How little we realize that the brain has a mind of its own, inspite of us. A very powerful and pertinent write dear friend.
February 2nd, 2023 14:00
Chasing the Carpet
Doggerel Dave said:
You got me - I\'m glad there were early entrants to this column with more know than I have. Sounds sad, but you would have to convince me......Too hardened by having been told that a toke of maryj would have me flying out the window....🙂
February 2nd, 2023 07:50
Doggerel Dave said:
You got me - I\'m glad there were early entrants to this column with more know than I have. Sounds sad, but you would have to convince me......Too hardened by having been told that a toke of maryj would have me flying out the window....🙂
February 2nd, 2023 07:50
Chasing the Carpet
arqios said:
For a while there I was envisioning a flying carpet chase. But reality is, there is a deep sorrow underneath all these cases and lives.
February 2nd, 2023 04:44
arqios said:
For a while there I was envisioning a flying carpet chase. But reality is, there is a deep sorrow underneath all these cases and lives.
February 2nd, 2023 04:44
Chasing the Carpet
Christina8 said:
Wow. This is an epic piece for those addicted to crack and will search for
a piece so tiny as to cause bloody knees.....tragic!
February 2nd, 2023 03:24
Christina8 said:
Wow. This is an epic piece for those addicted to crack and will search for
a piece so tiny as to cause bloody knees.....tragic!
February 2nd, 2023 03:24
Chasing the Carpet
Fay Slimm. said:
The tragic addiction to drugs such as crack will reduce a poor human to less than a rabid animal and you pen it so vividly - - a shock of a read that happens on as your note says \"an increasingly frequent basis\" in your line of care.......x
February 2nd, 2023 03:07
Fay Slimm. said:
The tragic addiction to drugs such as crack will reduce a poor human to less than a rabid animal and you pen it so vividly - - a shock of a read that happens on as your note says \"an increasingly frequent basis\" in your line of care.......x
February 2nd, 2023 03:07
Chasing the Carpet
orchidee said:
OCD?
Ohh, KP never does any housework. She\'s too busy having Botox! lol.
February 2nd, 2023 02:55
orchidee said:
OCD?
Ohh, KP never does any housework. She\'s too busy having Botox! lol.
February 2nd, 2023 02:55
With Her Head Full of Feathers ..
Dove said:
Being a Dove, I love all feathered poems. Loved it. Beautiful
February 1st, 2023 12:30
Dove said:
Being a Dove, I love all feathered poems. Loved it. Beautiful
February 1st, 2023 12:30
Hello Again Marianne
Dove said:
Nice. I guess I\'m not familiar with the artist. But you always sway to the beat. Lol
February 1st, 2023 12:28
Dove said:
Nice. I guess I\'m not familiar with the artist. But you always sway to the beat. Lol
February 1st, 2023 12:28
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