Comments received on poems by Neville
With Both Eyes Closed
L. B. Mek said:
(blind Hope, for those of us
who dream, eyes Wide shut!)
a lovely read & message Hyung
March 8th, 2023 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
(blind Hope, for those of us
who dream, eyes Wide shut!)
a lovely read & message Hyung
March 8th, 2023 03:07
In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye
L. B. Mek said:
I fear, Hyung
few
will realise the depths
of yearning, hidden
in this most, affecting
work, their loss..
thank you!
such a tender poem n wording of ache
\'the fifty shades of sincerity\'s, poetic angst\'
(in Time
aching, wondrous memories
all that we\'ll have left, while
it Takes
poetic bravery, to word our discontent
to this distortion of sensation;
our heart\'s, convinced
we\'re but days removed from
that idyllic, scene
until, an untimely mirror
reminds us, its all a past
we can hardly picture...)
March 8th, 2023 03:04
L. B. Mek said:
I fear, Hyung
few
will realise the depths
of yearning, hidden
in this most, affecting
work, their loss..
thank you!
such a tender poem n wording of ache
\'the fifty shades of sincerity\'s, poetic angst\'
(in Time
aching, wondrous memories
all that we\'ll have left, while
it Takes
poetic bravery, to word our discontent
to this distortion of sensation;
our heart\'s, convinced
we\'re but days removed from
that idyllic, scene
until, an untimely mirror
reminds us, its all a past
we can hardly picture...)
March 8th, 2023 03:04
With Both Eyes Closed
orchidee said:
I\'ve not got both eyes closed yet. I\'m still working out how to blink with one eye. Eh??
This is how I spend me \'sad\' life, on things like that! lol.
March 8th, 2023 02:52
orchidee said:
I\'ve not got both eyes closed yet. I\'m still working out how to blink with one eye. Eh??
This is how I spend me \'sad\' life, on things like that! lol.
March 8th, 2023 02:52
In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye
Fay Slimm. said:
Am glad the time it took to note the lilt in this lively ode giving me another view of crafted rhyming. Quietly insightful this piece of gentle erotica Nev.....x
March 7th, 2023 14:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Am glad the time it took to note the lilt in this lively ode giving me another view of crafted rhyming. Quietly insightful this piece of gentle erotica Nev.....x
March 7th, 2023 14:33
In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye
Doggerel Dave said:
In the time it takes to read your poem, I got me a good rhythm going....
Enjoyed, Nev.
March 7th, 2023 07:52
Doggerel Dave said:
In the time it takes to read your poem, I got me a good rhythm going....
Enjoyed, Nev.
March 7th, 2023 07:52
In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye
orchidee said:
Erm, if \'goodbye\' is the hardest word, I will say \'hello\' to ya! lol.
I\'ve swooned now - stanza 4. heehee.
March 7th, 2023 03:15
orchidee said:
Erm, if \'goodbye\' is the hardest word, I will say \'hello\' to ya! lol.
I\'ve swooned now - stanza 4. heehee.
March 7th, 2023 03:15
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - Nice to have me.... too late ; I\'ll start earlier next time....
March 6th, 2023 16:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep - Nice to have me.... too late ; I\'ll start earlier next time....
March 6th, 2023 16:41
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
Christina8 said:
Such an emotional write! Time goes by entirely too quickly, doesn\'t it? I think it is brilliant! Saved to my favs...C
March 6th, 2023 06:56
Christina8 said:
Such an emotional write! Time goes by entirely too quickly, doesn\'t it? I think it is brilliant! Saved to my favs...C
March 6th, 2023 06:56
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of appealing metaphor this verse of lament for more time than a blink when together - -- yes mon ami --- mem\'ries seem all that it leaves - - such an emotive read..................x
March 6th, 2023 04:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Full of appealing metaphor this verse of lament for more time than a blink when together - -- yes mon ami --- mem\'ries seem all that it leaves - - such an emotive read..................x
March 6th, 2023 04:54
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
L. B. Mek said:
deity or happenstance\'s chance
what ever designed our heart\'s
had too much trust, in us
since it forgot to include that turnstile
swing door, valves
for all those, who visit our life
convincing us
they\'ll be by our side, forevermore
but yet disappear, in but a blink...
tis why
my cherished friend, fool that I am
force you, to put up
with my overzealous ways
and cringe worthy words
for
life\'s bitter aftertaste, has thought me
to never take \'a tomorrow\'
for granted
(I read and learn, dear wise Poet)
March 6th, 2023 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
deity or happenstance\'s chance
what ever designed our heart\'s
had too much trust, in us
since it forgot to include that turnstile
swing door, valves
for all those, who visit our life
convincing us
they\'ll be by our side, forevermore
but yet disappear, in but a blink...
tis why
my cherished friend, fool that I am
force you, to put up
with my overzealous ways
and cringe worthy words
for
life\'s bitter aftertaste, has thought me
to never take \'a tomorrow\'
for granted
(I read and learn, dear wise Poet)
March 6th, 2023 04:16
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
L. B. Mek said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tiXBuoa5otQ
March 6th, 2023 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tiXBuoa5otQ
March 6th, 2023 04:08
Underdog Days
L. B. Mek said:
so happy you\'ve found yours Hyung
a most worthy dedication
such a sweet read
(it takes but one, to accept us
with all our fallible faults, bared naked
our ugly, mercifully acknowledged
forgiven and caressed
by a knowing gaze and an Aurora
smile...)
March 6th, 2023 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
so happy you\'ve found yours Hyung
a most worthy dedication
such a sweet read
(it takes but one, to accept us
with all our fallible faults, bared naked
our ugly, mercifully acknowledged
forgiven and caressed
by a knowing gaze and an Aurora
smile...)
March 6th, 2023 04:04
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
orchidee said:
Yes, two eyes - how can we blink with just one eye and not with the other eye?! Unless we only got one eye of course - call me Nelson.
I must know these things! lol.
March 6th, 2023 03:24
orchidee said:
Yes, two eyes - how can we blink with just one eye and not with the other eye?! Unless we only got one eye of course - call me Nelson.
I must know these things! lol.
March 6th, 2023 03:24
In Less Than the Blink of Two Eyes Perhaps
Goldfinch60 said:
May those two eyes remain open soon Neville.
Andy
March 6th, 2023 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May those two eyes remain open soon Neville.
Andy
March 6th, 2023 02:42
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
Fay Slimm. said:
There\'s something special about a meal with a lover and the flavour stays forever as does the scent of intimate perfume - -- writ to rouse mem\'ries is this bit of reflection - -- love it propitiously - - - and more............. x
March 5th, 2023 16:30
Fay Slimm. said:
There\'s something special about a meal with a lover and the flavour stays forever as does the scent of intimate perfume - -- writ to rouse mem\'ries is this bit of reflection - -- love it propitiously - - - and more............. x
March 5th, 2023 16:30
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
Christina8 said:
Oh i love the scent of bergamot!! Something so sexy about this write...the most powerful is the sense of smell, isn\'t it? But to remember one\'s taste is divine......love this!!
March 5th, 2023 10:14
Christina8 said:
Oh i love the scent of bergamot!! Something so sexy about this write...the most powerful is the sense of smell, isn\'t it? But to remember one\'s taste is divine......love this!!
March 5th, 2023 10:14
Underdog Days
Dove said:
Super Women with a cause
Miss Santa Claus
Deserves an applause
Finds a poet, A lover, Because...
Your probably sexy without flaws
March 5th, 2023 10:10
Dove said:
Super Women with a cause
Miss Santa Claus
Deserves an applause
Finds a poet, A lover, Because...
Your probably sexy without flaws
March 5th, 2023 10:10
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
Dove said:
Forget thy name, and remember the taste
of sweet rose petals caressing thine lips
The tongue may swallow in mortal haste
but a god, shall savor the flavor and not waste.... 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
March 5th, 2023 10:06
Dove said:
Forget thy name, and remember the taste
of sweet rose petals caressing thine lips
The tongue may swallow in mortal haste
but a god, shall savor the flavor and not waste.... 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
March 5th, 2023 10:06
Underdog Days
rhmn_7 said:
Just ask her then, I am sure there are enough reasons for her, for you..
March 5th, 2023 08:38
rhmn_7 said:
Just ask her then, I am sure there are enough reasons for her, for you..
March 5th, 2023 08:38
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice to give me a warning, Nev.... You will get no competitioon for her favours from me...One man\'s olfactory delight is this man\'s allergic reaction.... 😇!!!
March 5th, 2023 06:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice to give me a warning, Nev.... You will get no competitioon for her favours from me...One man\'s olfactory delight is this man\'s allergic reaction.... 😇!!!
March 5th, 2023 06:03
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
orchidee said:
And - KP has a certain pong about her, a wafting aroma!
March 5th, 2023 03:07
orchidee said:
And - KP has a certain pong about her, a wafting aroma!
March 5th, 2023 03:07
Forget the Name Remember the Taste
orchidee said:
Bergamot - Earl Grey Tea. Bleeuurggh!
Taste like drinking perfume. Not that I\'ve ever drank perfume! lol.
Some perfumes only make Fido and I sneeze or come out in a rash. Where\'s the rash? Swoon, I can\'t say! lol.
March 5th, 2023 03:07
orchidee said:
Bergamot - Earl Grey Tea. Bleeuurggh!
Taste like drinking perfume. Not that I\'ve ever drank perfume! lol.
Some perfumes only make Fido and I sneeze or come out in a rash. Where\'s the rash? Swoon, I can\'t say! lol.
March 5th, 2023 03:07
Underdog Days
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - PERHAPS That very last word shows natural confusion as questions are raised on being labeled ---- hmmm -- loved then are victims and losers - -- keep up the convincing that she saw you differently that female lover of underdogs mon ami - poetic craft at its absolute best...............x
March 4th, 2023 17:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - PERHAPS That very last word shows natural confusion as questions are raised on being labeled ---- hmmm -- loved then are victims and losers - -- keep up the convincing that she saw you differently that female lover of underdogs mon ami - poetic craft at its absolute best...............x
March 4th, 2023 17:05
Underdog Days
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds to me, that in you, she found an oasis. Good for her, good for you, good write dear friend!
March 4th, 2023 13:39
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds to me, that in you, she found an oasis. Good for her, good for you, good write dear friend!
March 4th, 2023 13:39
Underdog Days
orchidee said:
Cooeee again! \'Underdog?\' says Fido. There\'s no such thing to him! lol.
You beaten that egg yet?!
March 4th, 2023 12:52
orchidee said:
Cooeee again! \'Underdog?\' says Fido. There\'s no such thing to him! lol.
You beaten that egg yet?!
March 4th, 2023 12:52
Underdog Days
Christina8 said:
I really like this write....reminds me a bit of myself, always rooting for the underdog. But alas, your poem is great and makes ya think....C
March 4th, 2023 07:38
Christina8 said:
I really like this write....reminds me a bit of myself, always rooting for the underdog. But alas, your poem is great and makes ya think....C
March 4th, 2023 07:38
Underdog Days
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely for some other odd reason, Nev...😇
I know you like and encourage frivolity down here in the comments space ..but I do note and admire the structure of the works you put up on MPS... though I\'m sure that in the end they have a wider audience who don\'t bugger about as happens here....
March 4th, 2023 04:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Definitely for some other odd reason, Nev...😇
I know you like and encourage frivolity down here in the comments space ..but I do note and admire the structure of the works you put up on MPS... though I\'m sure that in the end they have a wider audience who don\'t bugger about as happens here....
March 4th, 2023 04:03
Underdog Days
orchidee said:
Good write N. I wish KP had not chosen me, and that I had not said \'yes\' to her! Doh!
March 4th, 2023 03:28
orchidee said:
Good write N. I wish KP had not chosen me, and that I had not said \'yes\' to her! Doh!
March 4th, 2023 03:28
Underdog Days
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have oddities in ourselves that others latch onto Neville.
Andy
March 4th, 2023 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have oddities in ourselves that others latch onto Neville.
Andy
March 4th, 2023 02:50
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