Comments received on poems by Neville
In a Moment of Poetry
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poetic moments are always so readable - I loved absorbing this bit reflective \"what if \".............x
March 27th, 2023 06:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poetic moments are always so readable - I loved absorbing this bit reflective \"what if \".............x
March 27th, 2023 06:40
In a Moment of Poetry
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(surrealist equity , in what we choose
to believe in
yet, Time unfurled to that fingertip of realised
serendipity
we adhere to fate\'s decree, as we cherish
that intuitive
poetic moment, which went-on to grace
our life
so wondrously, decadent...)
March 27th, 2023 03:18
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(surrealist equity , in what we choose
to believe in
yet, Time unfurled to that fingertip of realised
serendipity
we adhere to fate\'s decree, as we cherish
that intuitive
poetic moment, which went-on to grace
our life
so wondrously, decadent...)
March 27th, 2023 03:18
Upon the Very Cusp of Spring
L. B. Mek said:
our beloved blighty
sure is keeping us waiting this year, Hyung
is it still April showers
if it\'s been \'at it\', since
sombre, November...
lol
\'and that
single daffodil
this brand new year ..\'
wonderfully subtle musicality
in your rhyming scheme
(I read and learn)
March 27th, 2023 03:12
L. B. Mek said:
our beloved blighty
sure is keeping us waiting this year, Hyung
is it still April showers
if it\'s been \'at it\', since
sombre, November...
lol
\'and that
single daffodil
this brand new year ..\'
wonderfully subtle musicality
in your rhyming scheme
(I read and learn)
March 27th, 2023 03:12
No Reason Required
L. B. Mek said:
such a relatable theme, Hyung
loved your pacing and accessible wording
(Scars, we relate with
share, moments with
have a way of tainting our memories
so resplendently, vivid
yet inevitably, dipped in that regretful
...tint)
March 27th, 2023 03:07
L. B. Mek said:
such a relatable theme, Hyung
loved your pacing and accessible wording
(Scars, we relate with
share, moments with
have a way of tainting our memories
so resplendently, vivid
yet inevitably, dipped in that regretful
...tint)
March 27th, 2023 03:07
Storked
L. B. Mek said:
\'redundant, yet still they
stand tall,
majestic and proud ..\'
\'Now serving
to provide individual
residences
for our snow white
cegonhas\'
!!!Brilliant!!!
The Poet! is back
all is well then, all is well
March 27th, 2023 03:02
L. B. Mek said:
\'redundant, yet still they
stand tall,
majestic and proud ..\'
\'Now serving
to provide individual
residences
for our snow white
cegonhas\'
!!!Brilliant!!!
The Poet! is back
all is well then, all is well
March 27th, 2023 03:02
In a Moment of Poetry
orchidee said:
Good write N. KP will stop at nothing - says she can walk on water. Walk on a lake of botox, more like! lol.
But don\'t ya hate those who always say \'at this moment of time\'? Erm, \'basically\' they are annoying.
They\'ve got me at it now - repeating \'basically\' all the time!
March 27th, 2023 02:34
orchidee said:
Good write N. KP will stop at nothing - says she can walk on water. Walk on a lake of botox, more like! lol.
But don\'t ya hate those who always say \'at this moment of time\'? Erm, \'basically\' they are annoying.
They\'ve got me at it now - repeating \'basically\' all the time!
March 27th, 2023 02:34
Upon the Very Cusp of Spring
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one N - love shorties - they get to the point and don\'t waffle - now I\'m beginning to sound like Orchi.
March 26th, 2023 15:19
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one N - love shorties - they get to the point and don\'t waffle - now I\'m beginning to sound like Orchi.
March 26th, 2023 15:19
Upon the Very Cusp of Spring
Bella Shepard said:
Spring is so hopeful of new life, and the smile definitely smiles through. Thank you dear friend for these sweet words on such a beautiful Spring morn.
March 26th, 2023 10:19
Bella Shepard said:
Spring is so hopeful of new life, and the smile definitely smiles through. Thank you dear friend for these sweet words on such a beautiful Spring morn.
March 26th, 2023 10:19
Storked
Doggerel Dave said:
Abandoned and derelict , old industrial buildings? Your cegonhas have, it seems a similar function to our \'bin chickens\' or ibis Down Under.
Should this old site be earmarked for conversion into another use, please ensure heavy hands don\'t give it the same treatment as Battersea Power Station......... please, Neville.
For me, a richly descriptive write.
March 26th, 2023 05:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Abandoned and derelict , old industrial buildings? Your cegonhas have, it seems a similar function to our \'bin chickens\' or ibis Down Under.
Should this old site be earmarked for conversion into another use, please ensure heavy hands don\'t give it the same treatment as Battersea Power Station......... please, Neville.
For me, a richly descriptive write.
March 26th, 2023 05:20
Upon the Very Cusp of Spring
Doggerel Dave said:
The relief shines through...perhaps, just maybe, spring followed be summer will be......
March 26th, 2023 04:41
Doggerel Dave said:
The relief shines through...perhaps, just maybe, spring followed be summer will be......
March 26th, 2023 04:41
Upon the Very Cusp of Spring
Fay Slimm. said:
Am smiling with you dear poet as Spring births this verse to first cusp of bright unfold. Loved the read.........x
March 26th, 2023 04:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Am smiling with you dear poet as Spring births this verse to first cusp of bright unfold. Loved the read.........x
March 26th, 2023 04:08
Upon the Very Cusp of Spring
orchidee said:
Ya can\'t beat a bit of cusping!
What am I on about. I dunno! lol.
March 26th, 2023 03:03
orchidee said:
Ya can\'t beat a bit of cusping!
What am I on about. I dunno! lol.
March 26th, 2023 03:03
No Reason Required
Goldfinch60 said:
A question that will always be with you Neville.
Andy
March 26th, 2023 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
A question that will always be with you Neville.
Andy
March 26th, 2023 01:29
No Reason Required
Bella Shepard said:
The tone of your poem is so soft and gentle, I can almost see the hint of a smile on your face as you pen this reminiscence. It\'s often those half forgotten memories that for some reason seem the sweetest. Lovely dear friend.
March 25th, 2023 17:08
Bella Shepard said:
The tone of your poem is so soft and gentle, I can almost see the hint of a smile on your face as you pen this reminiscence. It\'s often those half forgotten memories that for some reason seem the sweetest. Lovely dear friend.
March 25th, 2023 17:08
No Reason Required
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes we remember things we wish we could forget and other times we forget things we wish we could remember. Perhaps, those forgotten moments are best left un-discovered.
Your poem leaves the reader guessing, which indicates that it has accomplished stirring their imagination. Without description of person, place, or thing each can build their own scenery. Quite intriguing. - Phil A.
March 25th, 2023 15:14
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes we remember things we wish we could forget and other times we forget things we wish we could remember. Perhaps, those forgotten moments are best left un-discovered.
Your poem leaves the reader guessing, which indicates that it has accomplished stirring their imagination. Without description of person, place, or thing each can build their own scenery. Quite intriguing. - Phil A.
March 25th, 2023 15:14
No Reason Required
Fay Slimm. said:
Parting they say is always sweet sorrow - The vision you pen is so easy on the eye that I can almost see where her crescent scar is hiding.
March 25th, 2023 11:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Parting they say is always sweet sorrow - The vision you pen is so easy on the eye that I can almost see where her crescent scar is hiding.
March 25th, 2023 11:56
No Reason Required
orchidee said:
This is too much for me and KP. I mean, if I told you where she had a scar, I would swoon. And - have I seen it?! Woof, you can\'t tell anyone, says Fido. (it\'s a botox scar of course. lol).
March 25th, 2023 09:20
orchidee said:
This is too much for me and KP. I mean, if I told you where she had a scar, I would swoon. And - have I seen it?! Woof, you can\'t tell anyone, says Fido. (it\'s a botox scar of course. lol).
March 25th, 2023 09:20
Storked
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Nev. The sight of white storks and their fat offspring makes compelling my first read of today .as is your perfectly penned scene of rooftop chimneys now used merely for nests -- an intriguing view of what skylines suggest to an experienced scribe. x
March 25th, 2023 04:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Nev. The sight of white storks and their fat offspring makes compelling my first read of today .as is your perfectly penned scene of rooftop chimneys now used merely for nests -- an intriguing view of what skylines suggest to an experienced scribe. x
March 25th, 2023 04:40
Storked
MendedFences27 said:
Rooftop chimneys and stork nests against a mountain backdrop is quite the sight. Storks nesting therein, being spoiled by urban refuse, the whole vision is one of economic re-use of existing infrastructure. A delightful read. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 20:43
MendedFences27 said:
Rooftop chimneys and stork nests against a mountain backdrop is quite the sight. Storks nesting therein, being spoiled by urban refuse, the whole vision is one of economic re-use of existing infrastructure. A delightful read. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 20:43
A Travelling Man
L. B. Mek said:
thought this a timely read, seeing how you\'re on your travels again my friend
lol
hope all is well Hyung
March 13th, 2023 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
thought this a timely read, seeing how you\'re on your travels again my friend
lol
hope all is well Hyung
March 13th, 2023 05:12
In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye
Dove said:
Love this one, course Im a sucker for rhymes.. Heartfelt sentiments,
for time passes so quickly
When I’m staring in your eyes
Just like a magician,
The minutes quickly go by
A quick caress and touch
Then it’s time to say goodbye
March 10th, 2023 09:41
Dove said:
Love this one, course Im a sucker for rhymes.. Heartfelt sentiments,
for time passes so quickly
When I’m staring in your eyes
Just like a magician,
The minutes quickly go by
A quick caress and touch
Then it’s time to say goodbye
March 10th, 2023 09:41
With Both Eyes Closed
Dove said:
Both eyes closed is when the mind doth indulge
Take in a whiff of imagination or desires…
Anyhow, I see your point .. Tis true
March 10th, 2023 09:32
Dove said:
Both eyes closed is when the mind doth indulge
Take in a whiff of imagination or desires…
Anyhow, I see your point .. Tis true
March 10th, 2023 09:32
Why Do I Love Thee
L. B. Mek said:
Elizabeth Browning is clapping loud
Poetic intimacy, worded so eloquent!
simply Beautiful, dear Poet supreme
March 10th, 2023 03:51
L. B. Mek said:
Elizabeth Browning is clapping loud
Poetic intimacy, worded so eloquent!
simply Beautiful, dear Poet supreme
March 10th, 2023 03:51
With Both Eyes Closed
Bella Shepard said:
Your words of wisdom are both comforting and so true dear friend. Thank you for this parting piece, and look forward to your return. Safe travels!
March 9th, 2023 13:41
Bella Shepard said:
Your words of wisdom are both comforting and so true dear friend. Thank you for this parting piece, and look forward to your return. Safe travels!
March 9th, 2023 13:41
With Both Eyes Closed
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem and I hope you have an awesome vacation!! Clearing the snow? Its like our seasons have switched!
March 8th, 2023 13:33
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem and I hope you have an awesome vacation!! Clearing the snow? Its like our seasons have switched!
March 8th, 2023 13:33
With Both Eyes Closed
Fay Slimm. said:
Closed eyes see more than we could imagine when all around groping in near insanity the world never sees simple wonders and awareness evolving - --- - - well that\'s how this intriguing message appears to me........x
March 8th, 2023 11:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Closed eyes see more than we could imagine when all around groping in near insanity the world never sees simple wonders and awareness evolving - --- - - well that\'s how this intriguing message appears to me........x
March 8th, 2023 11:07
With Both Eyes Closed
Doggerel Dave said:
Literal mind intrudes once more...Please elucidate the terminology for the less than sophisticated: i.e. define \'greater good\' and \'bettered\' in this context...
Enjoy the break, Nev - if you are close to snowbound, to beat a retreat seems strategic....
March 8th, 2023 08:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Literal mind intrudes once more...Please elucidate the terminology for the less than sophisticated: i.e. define \'greater good\' and \'bettered\' in this context...
Enjoy the break, Nev - if you are close to snowbound, to beat a retreat seems strategic....
March 8th, 2023 08:12
With Both Eyes Closed
Goldfinch60 said:
The greater good is for each individual to assess Neville.
Enjoy your break.
Andy
March 8th, 2023 03:45
Goldfinch60 said:
The greater good is for each individual to assess Neville.
Enjoy your break.
Andy
March 8th, 2023 03:45
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