Comments received on poems by Neville
Another Local Legend
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many heroes out there of whom we never hear Neville.
Andy
July 29th, 2023 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
There are many heroes out there of whom we never hear Neville.
Andy
July 29th, 2023 01:46
Another Local Legend
Bobby O said:
Damn. Thought the next treat was his power sublime but that train shifted all that to an irresistible urge to testify leading w his best cuz he deserved as one of yiu and then all mystique of him fills stories proud. Nice tome. I like the attach history , penetrates my insight and connect. Thanks
July 29th, 2023 01:09
Bobby O said:
Damn. Thought the next treat was his power sublime but that train shifted all that to an irresistible urge to testify leading w his best cuz he deserved as one of yiu and then all mystique of him fills stories proud. Nice tome. I like the attach history , penetrates my insight and connect. Thanks
July 29th, 2023 01:09
Mark Well the Purpose of Night
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing really like the words and the flow to this piece e of writing 🙂
July 28th, 2023 11:15
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing really like the words and the flow to this piece e of writing 🙂
July 28th, 2023 11:15
No More Fancy Restaurants
Bella Shepard said:
Those precious remnants that we must hold on to, bits and pieces of gold to us, love songs still travelling out into space. This plays the heart strings like a beautiful, unfinished symphony. Simple, elegant, brilliant! Fav!
July 28th, 2023 10:38
Bella Shepard said:
Those precious remnants that we must hold on to, bits and pieces of gold to us, love songs still travelling out into space. This plays the heart strings like a beautiful, unfinished symphony. Simple, elegant, brilliant! Fav!
July 28th, 2023 10:38
No More Fancy Restaurants
L. B. Mek said:
modernity breakups
are all centred
on who gets, which favourite
coffee place and restaurants
on weekends
all else, is soon forgot
(i keep lawyers on retainer
just for such breakups
make sure me gets those
restraining orders
I know, i know i got my priorities
straight
and your welcome for the tips..)
lol
have a great weekend Hyung
(try to limit yourself
to a thousand chubby cheek pinches
and a million blubbering, air blowing kisses
baby\'s gotta sleep sometime)
lol
July 28th, 2023 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
modernity breakups
are all centred
on who gets, which favourite
coffee place and restaurants
on weekends
all else, is soon forgot
(i keep lawyers on retainer
just for such breakups
make sure me gets those
restraining orders
I know, i know i got my priorities
straight
and your welcome for the tips..)
lol
have a great weekend Hyung
(try to limit yourself
to a thousand chubby cheek pinches
and a million blubbering, air blowing kisses
baby\'s gotta sleep sometime)
lol
July 28th, 2023 05:01
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
L. B. Mek said:
that turnstile of our life\'s connections
friendship\'s going from BFF\'s
to ghosted, in a day
we couple-up, meet another couple
try and keep it all together
for entertaining group dates
then years later we see them
at the mall and we walk by
because we\'re too embarrassed to admit
we\'ve forgotten each other\'s names..
lol
just one more reason
to treasure the people in our lives
in each moment
leave no room for regret, choose
our connections well
then share without restraint, prepared
to be burnt, knowing that\'s much better
than wishing we could have done different
after the fact, in those memory corridors
of too late
(I so relate Hyung
a great write, thank you!)
July 28th, 2023 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
that turnstile of our life\'s connections
friendship\'s going from BFF\'s
to ghosted, in a day
we couple-up, meet another couple
try and keep it all together
for entertaining group dates
then years later we see them
at the mall and we walk by
because we\'re too embarrassed to admit
we\'ve forgotten each other\'s names..
lol
just one more reason
to treasure the people in our lives
in each moment
leave no room for regret, choose
our connections well
then share without restraint, prepared
to be burnt, knowing that\'s much better
than wishing we could have done different
after the fact, in those memory corridors
of too late
(I so relate Hyung
a great write, thank you!)
July 28th, 2023 04:54
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, some rejections are brutal
I was scarred for life
when the first girl I approached
decided to elucidate
she rejected me, because i was
\'TOO\', ugly.... 🤢😌🤕
that T.k.o. still ahs be trying to beat
the eight count of life
words, do tend to sting a little deep
when coming from those
we thought we were connecting with
brutal..
lol
oh well, a good life lesson learnt early
(her name was Emma
we were around 8 or 9, back then
and yes sadly, I met her a decade or so
later
and she was still drop-dead gorgeous
and had a heart of gold, and no
she had no idea who i was...)
my life lesson...
aim lower
way lower
like, I helped out at the blind centre
for a while..
lol
July 28th, 2023 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, some rejections are brutal
I was scarred for life
when the first girl I approached
decided to elucidate
she rejected me, because i was
\'TOO\', ugly.... 🤢😌🤕
that T.k.o. still ahs be trying to beat
the eight count of life
words, do tend to sting a little deep
when coming from those
we thought we were connecting with
brutal..
lol
oh well, a good life lesson learnt early
(her name was Emma
we were around 8 or 9, back then
and yes sadly, I met her a decade or so
later
and she was still drop-dead gorgeous
and had a heart of gold, and no
she had no idea who i was...)
my life lesson...
aim lower
way lower
like, I helped out at the blind centre
for a while..
lol
July 28th, 2023 04:43
Just Because She Is ..
L. B. Mek said:
!! Precious !!
🍾🥂
(divinely beautiful, indeed!)
congrats to you and yours
dear cherished friend
July 28th, 2023 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
!! Precious !!
🍾🥂
(divinely beautiful, indeed!)
congrats to you and yours
dear cherished friend
July 28th, 2023 04:39
No More Fancy Restaurants
LIZ said:
I think we\'re all feeling this one! But we can keep the memories alive! 💫
July 28th, 2023 02:56
LIZ said:
I think we\'re all feeling this one! But we can keep the memories alive! 💫
July 28th, 2023 02:56
No More Fancy Restaurants
Teddy.15 said:
A very talented lost soul. Nothing left to say, beautiful dearest Nev.
July 28th, 2023 02:11
Teddy.15 said:
A very talented lost soul. Nothing left to say, beautiful dearest Nev.
July 28th, 2023 02:11
Just Because She Is ..
Teddy.15 said:
Oh wow!!!!! She is gorgeous Nev. A huge congratulations even though you are far too young you will be an amazing popps so so so thrilled for you and your family ❤️❤️
July 28th, 2023 02:08
Teddy.15 said:
Oh wow!!!!! She is gorgeous Nev. A huge congratulations even though you are far too young you will be an amazing popps so so so thrilled for you and your family ❤️❤️
July 28th, 2023 02:08
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
Bella Shepard said:
There is something wonderfully mysterious about shadows. We love playing with them, but they are simply the play of light and dark. They can follow us or lead us, but the shadows of the past are always with us. What an extraordinay, contemplative write dear Nev.
July 27th, 2023 13:45
Bella Shepard said:
There is something wonderfully mysterious about shadows. We love playing with them, but they are simply the play of light and dark. They can follow us or lead us, but the shadows of the past are always with us. What an extraordinay, contemplative write dear Nev.
July 27th, 2023 13:45
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Teddy.15 said:
And what do they say dear Nev? Regret the things you\'ve done rather than the things you haven\'t. Oh so beautifully expressed darling friend. 💖
July 27th, 2023 10:04
Teddy.15 said:
And what do they say dear Nev? Regret the things you\'ve done rather than the things you haven\'t. Oh so beautifully expressed darling friend. 💖
July 27th, 2023 10:04
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
LIZ said:
Nice!! Shadows may not share secrets, but light will always yank them out! The truth lies out there....and will come back with a vengeance!! And what will happen then? 🤔
July 27th, 2023 04:12
LIZ said:
Nice!! Shadows may not share secrets, but light will always yank them out! The truth lies out there....and will come back with a vengeance!! And what will happen then? 🤔
July 27th, 2023 04:12
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
Teddy.15 said:
That is a serious bit of reflection dear Nev. 💖
July 27th, 2023 03:26
Teddy.15 said:
That is a serious bit of reflection dear Nev. 💖
July 27th, 2023 03:26
Just Because She Is ..
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Nev, I just adore when you write like this. 💓
July 27th, 2023 03:21
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Nev, I just adore when you write like this. 💓
July 27th, 2023 03:21
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
Neville said:
thank you S .. you n hymn are indeed an education .. 👍
July 27th, 2023 01:46
Neville said:
thank you S .. you n hymn are indeed an education .. 👍
July 27th, 2023 01:46
Shadows Don’t Share Secrets
orchidee said:
Good write N.
A rather gloomy-sounding title to a hymn is \'Buried in shadows of the night\'.
July 27th, 2023 01:41
orchidee said:
Good write N.
A rather gloomy-sounding title to a hymn is \'Buried in shadows of the night\'.
July 27th, 2023 01:41
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Neil Higgins said:
Greetings Nev.Yes I\'m still alive 🤣 Been away from the site for a while,but will post the occasional poems now and again.
Keep up the fine (intriguing) words 😎
July 26th, 2023 17:55
Neil Higgins said:
Greetings Nev.Yes I\'m still alive 🤣 Been away from the site for a while,but will post the occasional poems now and again.
Keep up the fine (intriguing) words 😎
July 26th, 2023 17:55
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s always the \"what could have been\'s\" that seem to plague us most, because we\'ll never know what an opportunity might have brought, so we lament what never was. We are strange creatures, are we not? Love your insight into human nature, along with your style and grace. Great write my dear Nev!
July 26th, 2023 15:47
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s always the \"what could have been\'s\" that seem to plague us most, because we\'ll never know what an opportunity might have brought, so we lament what never was. We are strange creatures, are we not? Love your insight into human nature, along with your style and grace. Great write my dear Nev!
July 26th, 2023 15:47
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
orchidee said:
You and Liz on the gin? That glass! I don\'t even know how to include it in comments!😁
July 26th, 2023 14:57
orchidee said:
You and Liz on the gin? That glass! I don\'t even know how to include it in comments!😁
July 26th, 2023 14:57
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
LIZ said:
But...you ARE asking again. At least...\"suggesting\". You never know! 🙂
July 26th, 2023 02:40
LIZ said:
But...you ARE asking again. At least...\"suggesting\". You never know! 🙂
July 26th, 2023 02:40
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Parisab said:
Inventive to make the title be your first stanza-like the ambivalence in this poem-
July 26th, 2023 02:13
Parisab said:
Inventive to make the title be your first stanza-like the ambivalence in this poem-
July 26th, 2023 02:13
I Think it Only Fair to Suggest
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, you never know it may happen.....
Andy
July 26th, 2023 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words Neville, you never know it may happen.....
Andy
July 26th, 2023 01:08
Just Because She Is ..
Christina8 said:
Congratulations Neville! I bet shes already the light of your life.....C
July 25th, 2023 09:14
Christina8 said:
Congratulations Neville! I bet shes already the light of your life.....C
July 25th, 2023 09:14
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