Comments received on poems by Neville



Naturally
orchidee said:

Naturally I\'m liking this N. lol.

August 9th, 2022 11:06

Naturally
MendedFences27 said:

For sure, Nature is a product of \"oxygen and a splash of H2O,\" but then which came first?
A very astute take on the origin of Nature, at least as we know it.
It is, also. the basic requirements of life. So much in so few words... Poetry. - Phil A.

August 9th, 2022 08:30

Naturally
Doggerel Dave said:

Context is all, Nev: where and when? I\'m starting to feel decidedly chilly out here.....

August 9th, 2022 08:07

Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Goldfinch60 said:

A friend of mine has a an old classic car which was his fathers, he has put a plate on the back seat which says \"This is where I was conceived\"

Andy

August 4th, 2022 01:00

Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
Bella Shepard said:

Dear friend, I should have seen these words a couple of days ago. Here in my part of the world it seems like all hell is breaking lose, and I\'ve drawn inside myself, trying to find some peace. Your words are balm on a painful wound, and I thank you for this wonderful reminder, we are survivors.

August 3rd, 2022 12:49

Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
orchidee said:

Woof! Good write Neville. Don\'t say it, says Fido! Ohh, F F F and A B C, and a bit of X Y Z also, whatever! lol. I\'m rambling now? Where have I gone? In the country, or where?!

August 3rd, 2022 11:38

Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Bella Shepard said:

Ah, the good old back seat. It was free, available and you couldn\'t beat the ambiance. Where better to learn life\'s skills. I probably dates back to borrowing the chariot on Saturday night. Great fun!

August 3rd, 2022 08:25

Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Fay Slimm. said:

I remember those back seats in my Dad\'s little Austin - - -- - -- my Dad wrote and pinned Danger on ours when my boy friend borrowed it to take me out.................x

August 3rd, 2022 07:56

Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Doggerel Dave said:

Reality encapsulated in one short (long) sentence ....I felt sure I was on the right track....Thanks Nev.

August 3rd, 2022 07:51

Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Neville said:


even with full unequivocal mutual consent and a shared enthusiasm for the venture in point, there can be no guarantees that at no time in the future will there be any associated guilt or regret experienced by either or both parties .. but I do take your point you old dog .......................... Neville


August 3rd, 2022 07:41

Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet
Doggerel Dave said:

So long as there were no guilt or regrets.....Neville.

August 3rd, 2022 06:58

Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes we are still here so we are all survivors.

Andy

August 3rd, 2022 01:00

Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
dean langmuir said:

good write,take care

August 2nd, 2022 16:55

Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
MendedFences27 said:

Or as Mel Brooks (age 96) once said,
\"I get up in the morning. I read the newspaper Obits, if my names not there, I have breakfast.\" He\'s a survivor.
So, thanks for giving me a new classification for myself, and a new outlook on life. - Phil A.


August 2nd, 2022 14:44

Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
Doggerel Dave said:

Found by design. and yes, still here...neat, Neville - thanks.

August 2nd, 2022 08:08

Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
Fay Slimm. said:

I certainly not only admire your wise words but know without doubt you are that daily survivor mon ami - -as I try to be too - so here\'s smilin\' atcha this lovely mornin\'.............x

August 2nd, 2022 06:12

Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
L. B. Mek said:

I really enjoy poetry
where the voice, literally
jumps off the page and grabs the reader
to speak AT them directly, screaming
here
in this moment within this mirror
of ink, we\'re together
two sides, of a shared thought...
(a wonderful tool of poesy
I never get tired of;
for no other artistic medium, can make
such a bold reach for instantaneous
and intuitive, tangible connections)
just awesome! dear Poet

August 2nd, 2022 05:05

Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
Neil Higgins said:

I have awoken.I am a survivor.
Well thought out Nev,and so true.

August 2nd, 2022 03:46

Oh’ No .. Not Another Survivor
orchidee said:

You survived my singing? Who can?! lol.

August 2nd, 2022 01:45

Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words Neville.

Andy

August 2nd, 2022 01:04

Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
MendedFences27 said:

The sweet taste of love, when found, lingers. A great expression of lasting love, of \"angel tears\" \"drunk\" across time. Some great images hinted at and some exposed. A treat for my cloudy afternoon. - Phil A.

August 1st, 2022 14:58

Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Neil Higgins said:

North Somerset cider.Now your talking Nev.Cheers 🥳

August 1st, 2022 12:28

Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Fay Slimm. said:

Your imagery is as brill. as ever.........x

August 1st, 2022 06:56

Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Manny Jordan said:

Beautiful piece

August 1st, 2022 04:10

Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
\'of that nectar of life
your ink, drips
...ever sweet\'

August 1st, 2022 03:55

Whereupon His Tongue Did Serve to Please
Doggerel Dave said:

Aah! Cunnilingus at the right time in the right place can have it\'s own rewards....

August 1st, 2022 03:50

That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
MendedFences27 said:

Memories woven into a quilt of poetic
recollections; of \"cotton squares,\" \"501\'s,\" \"crosses,\" \'kisses,\" \"Sunday
mornings,\" \"Cohen, Dylan,\" \"a Dansette,\" and, Oh Yeah, that other thing. So well written, I need to save it. - Phil A.

July 31st, 2022 17:06

That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
Neil Higgins said:

501,Dylan,Danzette.You make me feel old Nev.Oh.Wait a minute….

July 31st, 2022 12:12

That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
Bella Shepard said:

Each line beautifully expressed! So often it is the little things in life that our brain tenderly stores away for us, that we may retrieve cherished memories and smile. I enjoyed every line.

July 31st, 2022 11:44

That Old Broken Dansette & Other Musings
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - what intimate memories of long gone relationships brought to this most readable romantic poem by your expert know-how - -- - the stiches on those patched 501\'s did it for me - - your take on making reality from musings is simply amazing mon ami.................x

July 31st, 2022 03:01



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